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RE: Beyblade burst: Titan (character contest) - UnseenBurst - May. 19, 2021

Try making your chapter have something it focuses on

RE: Beyblade burst: Titan (character contest) - USN - May. 19, 2021

(May. 19, 2021  9:24 PM)JJustice Wrote: Chapter 7
Treasure

Jayden: aww man
Damian: what are you frowning for we have legends coming to a tournament
Jayden: well you know that shun kazami who is coming to the tournament
Damian: yeah
Jayden: his dad is rich he definitely has a strong bey
Damian: hmmm okay
Jayden: well my moms calling me *ends face time*
Jayden: hey a
USN your character is coming soon I’m still thinking of a role for him
And strikegamerv6 hope you like this chapter
Here's my challenge to make this better. I want each chapter to be at least 50 lines (Double the current amount.) and I want you to double check your grammar and punctuation.

RE: Beyblade burst: Titan (character contest) - LegendJustice - May. 19, 2021

(May. 19, 2021  10:00 PM)USN Wrote:
(May. 19, 2021  9:24 PM)JJustice Wrote: Chapter 7
Treasure

Jayden: aww man
Damian: what are you frowning for we have legends coming to a tournament
Jayden: well you know that shun kazami who is coming to the tournament
Damian: yeah
Jayden: his dad is rich he definitely has a strong bey
Damian: hmmm okay
Jayden: well my moms calling me *ends face time*
Jayden: hey a
USN your character is coming soon I’m still thinking of a role for him
And strikegamerv6 hope you like this chapter
Here's my challenge to make this better. I want each chapter to be at least 50 lines (Double the current amount.) and I want you to double check your grammar and punctuation.

Challenge accepted.
*enables bad boy mode*
Alright guys I found this realy cool webriste where I can create my character so I’m here is what I tested it on blob:https://charactercreator.org/43e73b75-f367-4417-ae37-016384763700
(May. 19, 2021  10:04 PM)JJustice Wrote:
(May. 19, 2021  10:00 PM)USN Wrote: Here's my challenge to make this better. I want each chapter to be at least 50 lines (Double the current amount.) and I want you to double check your grammar and punctuation.

Challenge accepted.
*enables bad boy mode*
Chapter 8 preview

Penoki: hmmm this tournament is getting extremely good.
Penoki: alright wait I forgot where I am ok let’s see oh I’m in a ware house.
Penoki: hmmm me and perceus will win this any way.
Alright so and won else wanna join the characters contest