RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - Creeperalpha - Mar. 25, 2019
can you accept my character?
name: Satoshi kimura (also known as Ten)
beyblade: Shivering Poltergeist
RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - Sir Saitama - Mar. 25, 2019
(Mar. 25, 2019 7:36 AM)Fusion core Wrote: (Mar. 25, 2019 7:17 AM)Sir Saitama Wrote: Thanks! I’m not too sure how I feel about someone wanting to kill Gingka and Paris, especially since this is in the Burst Universe, where we try to keep things a little friendly. Perhaps we could compromise and negotiate on things? Yes ! I give you the full freedom to do things as you want . You are the writer and the characters are in your hands . You can make modifications as you want . I just want the basic appearance , the basic personality , the name and the the basic looks to be the same . And i want his bey to be super strong and an attack type of fire and lightning element . The rest is upon you ! You are free to make your descisions . I ought to respect you for accepting my character request . I have full faith in you that you can understand and design my character even better than me and can make my character come alive . The fate of the characters MUST be in the writers hands . Thank you very much @[Sir Saitama] and best of luck for your upcoming episodes . 
Thanks for being so mature about this! I’ll add your character in later on, then! Thanks so much for the support, I really appreciate it.
RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - BurningSands - Mar. 25, 2019
(Mar. 25, 2019 7:36 AM)Fusion core Wrote: (Mar. 25, 2019 7:17 AM)Sir Saitama Wrote: Thanks! I’m not too sure how I feel about someone wanting to kill Gingka and Paris, especially since this is in the Burst Universe, where we try to keep things a little friendly. Perhaps we could compromise and negotiate on things? Yes ! I give you the full freedom to do things as you want . You are the writer and the characters are in your hands . You can make modifications as you want . I just want the basic appearance , the basic personality , the name and the the basic looks to be the same . And i want his bey to be super strong and an attack type of fire and lightning element . The rest is upon you ! You are free to make your descisions . I ought to respect you for accepting my character request . I have full faith in you that you can understand and design my character even better than me and can make my character come alive . The fate of the characters MUST be in the writers hands . Thank you very much @[Sir Saitama] and best of luck for your upcoming episodes .
Im crying of happiness because more people like you should definitely exist. Kudos for being so mature and friendly towards the writer clap clap
RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - Chessmaster Chi - Mar. 26, 2019
Great story! Thanks for sharing!
RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - Sir Saitama - Mar. 27, 2019
(Mar. 26, 2019 3:10 AM)Chessmaster Chi Wrote: Great story! Thanks for sharing!
Thanks! I really appreciate the support! The next chapter will be coming out soon!
RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - Creeperalpha - Mar. 28, 2019
can you still accept characters?
RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - klarac - Mar. 28, 2019
Keep writing dont give up!
RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - Sir Saitama - Mar. 29, 2019
(Mar. 28, 2019 9:32 PM)klarac Wrote: Keep writing dont give up!
Thanks! I haven’t given up though, just planning out the next few chapters and the overall direction of this story.
Chapter 7 - The BeyFestival! The Z5 Awaken!
Last time on Beyblade Burst Zero! Paris defeats Toko thanks to his training and earns himself a spot against Daniel Aziel! But only one can come out on top!
“Agh! Why isn’t this working?” Paris whined. Immortal Pegasus bumpily cycled around the stadium, crashing into Ultra Centurion and bursting.
Taiki and Charles stifled a laugh.
“It isn’t funny!” Paris snapped.
“Geez, no need to get worked up over Daniel! It’ll be a piece of cake!” Aiga patted him on the shoulder.
Paris still wasn’t convinced. The video of Havoc Daemon sinking its wings into a hundred other beys replayed in his head.
“Up for special training, then?” Toko held out his launcher.
Paris smirked, “You bet!”
All five bladers stood diagonally to each other, at one corner of the stadium.
“Three!”
“Two!”
“One!”
“Let it rip!”
Adamantine Theseus chased after Pegasus endlessly.
Taiki boomed, “Don’t let him get away! Adamantine Blade!”
Theseus’ avatar sliced in unison with its bey. One of its blades lit up as it tossed Pegasus into the air like a boomerang.
Fortunately, it slammed into the wall and launched off, leaving a vibrant blue trail.
“Supernova Shoot!” Paris thundered, his voice echoing.
Adamantine Theseus barely budged, thanks to its heavy weight. Then, that’s when it became a battle of smarts.
Immortal Pegasus jolted through the stadium, swiftly making its way across multiple times. With each lap, it gained speed, stamina and momentum.
Theseus blocked Pegasus from gaining anymore endurance.
“Not on my watch! Stop him, Theseus!” Taiki bellowed.
Although Adamantine Theseus was unable to be flung into the air, Pegasus drilled through it, shunting into the attack type.
Meanwhile, Cho-Z Achilles was eager to join the fight. It switched from defense to attack mode, and surged through the stadium.
“Hope this works,” Paris mumbled.
“What works?” Taiki asked.
“This!”
Pegasus left Theseus close to the edge of the arena, where Achilles pummeled through the attack type, bursting it.
“Gah!” Taiki widened his eyes in surprise. Then, Achilles pressed into Pegasus, knocking it back.
Flash Trident made its move. The stamina type was in its taller height, as it bolted into Pegasus.
“Now! Final Flash Sting!” Toko exclaimed.
Trident compressed its driver into its lower height, sinking its layer into Pegasus’ wings. An idea suddenly sparked into Paris’ head.
“All yours, Pegasus! Again, Supernova Shoot!”
Immortal Pegasus tilted sideways, preventing Trident from changing its height, whilst hurtling it into the centre of the stadium.
Pegasus finally let go, and used its Dead Gravity-like move.
“Take this! Immortal Stormbringer!” Paris’ lightning-shaped necklace glowed.
Flash Trident was constantly battered with a string of heavy attacks, as a ring formed around it.
The ring wrapped around the stamina type, constricting it until it shot into the air and burst.
Toko was left speechless. Centurion and Achilles made its way back into the centre of the stadium, driving their blades into Pegasus’ layer.
Eventually, Pegasus lost a click.
“Super Z Slash!” Aiga roared, as a whip formed around Achilles’ blades. Charles grinned, “Burst Strike!”
Centurion, like a wind-up toy, shot through Pegasus from the other direction. With both Achilles and Centurion clawing through the attack type, it exploded into three parts.
“N-not again!” Paris gulped. He quickly reassembled Pegasus together. Studying the battle, Ultra Centurion used its Omni Attack and burst Cho-Z Achilles, much to Aiga’s sorrow.
In defeat, Paris curled his fingers around Pegasus. Aiga, Charles, Taiki and Toko ran up to the boy.
“Y’know something special about you? You keep getting up after a loss!” Aiga said sympathetically.
The others nodded in unison.
“You’ve made me realise the importance of trying!” Taiki smiled cheerfully. “Thanks to you!”
Paris looked up at his friends.
“That’s not all! Without you, I would’ve never been able to learn that it’s not all about winning!”
Toko stepped in, and fixed his attention onto Flash Trident.
“Sometimes.. sometimes when Valt isn’t home, somebody’s gotta fill in his role for me. And I think you’ve done your part, Paris.”
Hearing those kind words almost melted Paris. He confidently stood up, and brushed himself off.
“You’re right! And thanks to you guys, and you too, Pegasus, I would’ve never made it this far!”
He triumphantly raised Pegasus to the sky. Suddenly, a figure appeared.
“Roan..” Paris muttered under his breath.
The others were thinking the exact same thing.
Roan wore black sneakers, dark blue jeans, curly brown hair and a neatly zipped up blue coat, without a single crease. He managed to pull off a simple look well.
He held five invitations in cream white paper, tied together with a red velvet ribbon.
"Hey,” Roan said. “The BeyFestival’s today, and I’d like to invite you all.”
Suddenly, Paris was bursting with joy.
“Really?” He pinched himself multiple times.
“Of course!” Roan smiled. “You guys are proving yourself as pretty strong.”
Before Paris could respond, Roan had already left. The invitations were thrown into the air. Catching one, in big bold letters, read:
‘The BeyFestival is now on! You’ve been formally invited by one of the Z5 to participate in the battles that will be taking place today!’
“Awesome!” Paris burst in excitement. “Can’t wait to meet the Z5!”
A few hours passed, and Paris found himself engulfed through a large crowd. He didn’t think the BeyFestival would be that busy.
Roan stood on the stage, completely demolishing another blader. Still, he showed chivalry.
“Who’s next?” He repeated. After the next dozen or so battles, Roan waved at the BeyClub.
“Ah! Glad you could make it today!”
He caught his bey, Smash Revenge, in his hand instantly. The BeyClub were speechless from what they were seeing - hundreds of stadiums spread across the ground, and the massive food court located at the front.
Taiki and Aiga happily bounced off to the food court, ready to binge on Beigoma’s best burgers. Meanwhile, Toko and Charles went off to battle on the beach.
Before Paris could join his friends, Roan quickly stopped him.
“Oh, and before you go,” he said, “Make sure you win that battle. Because I look forward to battling you.”
Paris give him a thumbs-up in response and found himself lost in the food court.
“Paris!” Aiga waved, as he sat down next to Taiki. The three chowed down on the mightiest cheeseburger you could’ve ever seen, and having a good time.
Twenty minutes later, Roan spoke into the microphone.
“Ladies and gentlemen, today I’d like to welcome you all to the BeyFestival!”
The crowd cheered in response.
“That’s great to hear! Now, I’d like to introduce you to the Z5!”
A yellow-haired bladed with a streak of red appeared.
“Free de La Hoya!” Roan announced.
“Lui Shirosagi!” He added.
“Shu Kurenai!” Roan introduced.
“Me of course!” He joked.
Paris knew these bladers. All three of them had a major impact on Valt’s beyblading career.
“That’s how he got to where he is today,” Toko said, running over.
“And, Suoh Goshuin!" Roan exclaimed excitedly. The four bladers came forward.
“Now, we five bladers are the Z5! The strongest in the world, underneath the champion, of course,” Roan smiled.
“I’d like to introduce my guests, the new Beigoma Academy BeyClub.”
Paris, Toko, Charles, Aiga and Taiki stood on stage.
“Well, how about a battle?” Roan offered. The five bladers held out their launchers, as Roan revealed Smash Revenge.
(Mar. 28, 2019 5:27 AM)Creeperalpha Wrote: can you still accept characters?
Yeah, I still accept characters. I’ll try to add your idea when I can.
RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - Sir Saitama - Mar. 30, 2019
Chapter 8 - Invincibility! Smash Revenge!
Last time on Beyblade Burst Zero! Paris and the gang are personally invited by Roan to participate in the BeyFestival! After meeting the Z5, the BeyClub decide to battle Roan!
Meet Smash Revenge!” Roan grinned.
With many ‘oohs’ and ‘aahs’ from the crowd, Paris held out Pegasus.
“This is Immortal Pegasus!” Paris introduced.
Roan quickly studied the attack type.
“You’ve got an interesting bey,” he complimented. “Can it take me down?”
Paris hoped so. He fixed his posture and prepared for battle.
“Ready, set!”
“Three!”
“Two!”
“One!”
“Let it rip!”
Flash Trident, in its taller mode, came crashing down onto Revenge.
“Take it down now Trident! Final Flash Sting!” Toko exclaimed.
Revenge’s incredible speed assisted it in dodging Trident’s attack.
“No!” Toko was taken by surprise as he and Paris exchanged looks.
“All yours Paris!” Toko yelled. “Go!”
Flash Trident extended its height, bouncing into the air as it grabbed onto Immortal Pegasus.
Pegasus was thrown into the air at an amazing speed.
“Thanks,” Paris smiled. “Now, Immortal Starblast Attack!”
Pegasus shot down, and landed onto Revenge’s layer.
“Impressive!” Roan said. “But I’m not in the Z5 for nothing!”
Smash Revenge tilted forward and shot, entering the middle of the stadium.
Eventually, Immortal Pegasus was thrown off, bouncing away.
“Now it’s my turn!” Taiki chuckled. “Adamantine Blade!”
Adamantine Theseus stabbed through Revenge, knocking it away. However, it made a solid recovery.
“All that for nothing?” Taiki gasped. “Well! Take on my Adamantine Barrage Fury!”
Theseus glowed, as it rushed through Revenge, breaking the sound barrier. Smash Revenge was unharmed.
“Revenge! Attack!” Roan called.
Smash Revenge dodged Theseus’ impending attack and pierced through it, bursting it.
“Agh! No way!” Taiki said in disbelief.
Revenge shifted its trajectory, going adjacent to Trident.
“It’s my time to shine! Flash Counter!”
Trident’s avatar appeared, a spearman wielding a trident.
“Go! Trident!” Toko bellowed.
Like a bullet, the stamina type struck through Revenge, knocking it into the wall.
“Yes!” Toko celebrated.
Smash Revenge rebounded off of the wall, driving itself into Trident.
“Smash Counter!” Roan shouted.
Trident immediately burst.
“No!” Toko fell to the floor.
Cho-Z Achilles lit up.
“Super Z Slash!” Aiga roared.
With a single flick, Smash Revenge was thrown into the air.
Roan was shocked.
“I certainly wasn’t expecting this! Now Revenge! Super Revenge Slash!”
Revenge made its way down to Achilles and retracted the burst stoppers. And then...
Cho-Z Achilles skyrocketed into the air and burst.
“I-Impossible!” Aiga widened his eyes.
Ultra Centurion jolted around the stadium.
“Ultra Revival!” Charles commanded. It shot with incredible speed, and drilled into Revenge’s layer.
Smash Revenge effortlessly tossed Centurion away, slamming it into the wall.
“Burst Strike!” Charles exclaimed once more.
Ultra Centurion left a vibrant trail of red behind as it made its way into Revenge.
“Burst him!” Roan called out.
And Smash Revenge did so. Ultra Centurion rolled back and hit the wall of the stadium, bursting upon impact.
The four fallen bladers glanced at Paris.
“Right! Supernova Shoot!” Paris said confidently. Immortal Pegasus pummeled through Revenge as if barely budged.
“It’s not moving!” Aiga pointed out.
Pegasus managed to capture Revenge in the center of the stadium.
“Immortal Stormbringer!” Paris exclaimed.
As dust and light expelled from the stadium, a ring formed around the bey.
The ring attempted to compress Revenge, however it was obvious that was a difficult task.
“Why isn’t it moving?” Paris grunted.
Toko pulled out his tablet. “It’s because of Revenge’s heavy weight!”
Paris yelled, “Go now, Pegasus! Take him down!”
Smash Revenge and Immortal Pegasus were swept into the air in unison.
“It’s going to be a ring out finish,” Charles observed.
“For who?” Taiki panicked.
Pegasus landed at Paris’ feet first. Smash Revenge landed back into the stadium, spinning unbalanced.
“You’re really strong,” Paris smiled as he picked up Pegasus.
“Wait! Where are you going?” Roan asked.
“You won fair and square,” Paris stated the obvious.
Roan laughed for quite a while. “Only one point. First to two wins. Plus, I want to battle you again.”
Aiga stepped in. “I’ll ref!”
“Ready, set!”
“Three!”
“Two!”
“One!”
“Let it rip!”
Pegasus’ five feathers lit up in unison.
“Supernova Shoot!” Paris commanded, as Immortal Pegasus shot through Smash Revenge.
Before Pegasus had room for seconds, Revenge’s layer lit up.
“Super Revenge Slash!” Roan exclaimed.
Within three seconds, Immortal Pegasus exploded into three parts.
Paris was left speechless.
“Good job!” He complimented Roan.
“You too. I look forward to battling you in the finals.”
Paris reached for Immortal Pegasus and assembled the bey together.
“You can count on it!” He smiled cheerfully.
The BeyClub left the BeyFestival.
“What a blast!” Paris said.
“That was pretty fun,” Taiki added. “Apart from losing,” Aiga folded his arms.
“Hey!” Paris said sternly. “It doesn’t matter whether you win or lose! Even though I lost against Roan, I had fun!”
Aiga giggled. “Oops, forgot. Guess the teacher can learn from the students.”
A few hours later, after the five parted ways, Paris turned on his favorite channel.
“And Daniel completes the 100 blader challenge!” Hanami announced. “Anything you’d like to say?”
Daniel grinned intimidatingly.
“I do. Paris Hagane, if you’re out there, you stand no chance at defeating me!”
RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - CheetoBlader - Mar. 31, 2019
(Mar. 29, 2019 9:20 PM)Sir Saitama Wrote: (Mar. 28, 2019 9:32 PM)klarac Wrote: Keep writing dont give up!
Thanks! I haven’t given up though, just planning out the next few chapters and the overall direction of this story.
Chapter 7 - The BeyFestival! The Z5 Awaken!
Last time on Beyblade Burst Zero! Paris defeats Toko thanks to his training and earns himself a spot against Daniel Aziel! But only one can come out on top!
“Agh! Why isn’t this working?” Paris whined. Immortal Pegasus bumpily cycled around the stadium, crashing into Ultra Centurion and bursting.
Taiki and Charles stifled a laugh.
“It isn’t funny!” Paris snapped.
“Geez, no need to get worked up over Daniel! It’ll be a piece of cake!” Aiga patted him on the shoulder.
Paris still wasn’t convinced. The video of Havoc Daemon sinking its wings into a hundred other beys replayed in his head.
“Up for special training, then?” Toko held out his launcher.
Paris smirked, “You bet!”
All five bladers stood diagonally to each other, at one corner of the stadium.
“Three!”
“Two!”
“One!”
“Let it rip!”
Adamantine Theseus chased after Pegasus endlessly.
Taiki boomed, “Don’t let him get away! Adamantine Blade!”
Theseus’ avatar sliced in unison with its bey. One of its blades lit up as it tossed Pegasus into the air like a boomerang.
Fortunately, it slammed into the wall and launched off, leaving a vibrant blue trail.
“Supernova Shoot!” Paris thundered, his voice echoing.
Adamantine Theseus barely budged, thanks to its heavy weight. Then, that’s when it became a battle of smarts.
Immortal Pegasus jolted through the stadium, swiftly making its way across multiple times. With each lap, it gained speed, stamina and momentum.
Theseus blocked Pegasus from gaining anymore endurance.
“Not on my watch! Stop him, Theseus!” Taiki bellowed.
Although Adamantine Theseus was unable to be flung into the air, Pegasus drilled through it, shunting into the attack type.
Meanwhile, Cho-Z Achilles was eager to join the fight. It switched from defense to attack mode, and surged through the stadium.
“Hope this works,” Paris mumbled.
“What works?” Taiki asked.
“This!”
Pegasus left Theseus close to the edge of the arena, where Achilles pummeled through the attack type, bursting it.
“Gah!” Taiki widened his eyes in surprise. Then, Achilles pressed into Pegasus, knocking it back.
Flash Trident made its move. The stamina type was in its taller height, as it bolted into Pegasus.
“Now! Final Flash Sting!” Toko exclaimed.
Trident compressed its driver into its lower height, sinking its layer into Pegasus’ wings. An idea suddenly sparked into Paris’ head.
“All yours, Pegasus! Again, Supernova Shoot!”
Immortal Pegasus tilted sideways, preventing Trident from changing its height, whilst hurtling it into the centre of the stadium.
Pegasus finally let go, and used its Dead Gravity-like move.
“Take this! Immortal Stormbringer!” Paris’ lightning-shaped necklace glowed.
Flash Trident was constantly battered with a string of heavy attacks, as a ring formed around it.
The ring wrapped around the stamina type, constricting it until it shot into the air and burst.
Toko was left speechless. Centurion and Achilles made its way back into the centre of the stadium, driving their blades into Pegasus’ layer.
Eventually, Pegasus lost a click.
“Super Z Slash!” Aiga roared, as a whip formed around Achilles’ blades. Charles grinned, “Burst Strike!”
Centurion, like a wind-up toy, shot through Pegasus from the other direction. With both Achilles and Centurion clawing through the attack type, it exploded into three parts.
“N-not again!” Paris gulped. He quickly reassembled Pegasus together. Studying the battle, Ultra Centurion used its Omni Attack and burst Cho-Z Achilles, much to Aiga’s sorrow.
In defeat, Paris curled his fingers around Pegasus. Aiga, Charles, Taiki and Toko ran up to the boy.
“Y’know something special about you? You keep getting up after a loss!” Aiga said sympathetically.
The others nodded in unison.
“You’ve made me realise the importance of trying!” Taiki smiled cheerfully. “Thanks to you!”
Paris looked up at his friends.
“That’s not all! Without you, I would’ve never been able to learn that it’s not all about winning!”
Toko stepped in, and fixed his attention onto Flash Trident.
“Sometimes.. sometimes when Valt isn’t home, somebody’s gotta fill in his role for me. And I think you’ve done your part, Paris.”
Hearing those kind words almost melted Paris. He confidently stood up, and brushed himself off.
“You’re right! And thanks to you guys, and you too, Pegasus, I would’ve never made it this far!”
He triumphantly raised Pegasus to the sky. Suddenly, a figure appeared.
“Roan..” Paris muttered under his breath.
The others were thinking the exact same thing.
Roan wore black sneakers, dark blue jeans, curly brown hair and a neatly zipped up blue coat, without a single crease. He managed to pull off a simple look well.
He held five invitations in cream white paper, tied together with a red velvet ribbon.
"Hey,” Roan said. “The BeyFestival’s today, and I’d like to invite you all.”
Suddenly, Paris was bursting with joy.
“Really?” He pinched himself multiple times.
“Of course!” Roan smiled. “You guys are proving yourself as pretty strong.”
Before Paris could respond, Roan had already left. The invitations were thrown into the air. Catching one, in big bold letters, read:
‘The BeyFestival is now on! You’ve been formally invited by one of the Z5 to participate in the battles that will be taking place today!’
“Awesome!” Paris burst in excitement. “Can’t wait to meet the Z5!”
A few hours passed, and Paris found himself engulfed through a large crowd. He didn’t think the BeyFestival would be that busy.
Roan stood on the stage, completely demolishing another blader. Still, he showed chivalry.
“Who’s next?” He repeated. After the next dozen or so battles, Roan waved at the BeyClub.
“Ah! Glad you could make it today!”
He caught his bey, Smash Revenge, in his hand instantly. The BeyClub were speechless from what they were seeing - hundreds of stadiums spread across the ground, and the massive food court located at the front.
Taiki and Aiga happily bounced off to the food court, ready to binge on Beigoma’s best burgers. Meanwhile, Toko and Charles went off to battle on the beach.
Before Paris could join his friends, Roan quickly stopped him.
“Oh, and before you go,” he said, “Make sure you win that battle. Because I look forward to battling you.”
Paris give him a thumbs-up in response and found himself lost in the food court.
“Paris!” Aiga waved, as he sat down next to Taiki. The three chowed down on the mightiest cheeseburger you could’ve ever seen, and having a good time.
Twenty minutes later, Roan spoke into the microphone.
“Ladies and gentlemen, today I’d like to welcome you all to the BeyFestival!”
The crowd cheered in response.
“That’s great to hear! Now, I’d like to introduce you to the Z5!”
A yellow-haired bladed with a streak of red appeared.
“Free de La Hoya!” Roan announced.
“Lui Shirosagi!” He added.
“Shu Kurenai!” Roan introduced.
“Me of course!” He joked.
Paris knew these bladers. All three of them had a major impact on Valt’s beyblading career.
“That’s how he got to where he is today,” Toko said, running over.
“And, Suoh Goshuin!" Roan exclaimed excitedly. The four bladers came forward.
“Now, we five bladers are the Z5! The strongest in the world, underneath the champion, of course,” Roan smiled.
“I’d like to introduce my guests, the new Beigoma Academy BeyClub.”
Paris, Toko, Charles, Aiga and Taiki stood on stage.
“Well, how about a battle?” Roan offered. The five bladers held out their launchers, as Roan revealed Smash Revenge.
(Mar. 28, 2019 5:27 AM)Creeperalpha Wrote: can you still accept characters?
Yeah, I still accept characters. I’ll try to add your idea when I can.
Amazing! I think you’ve done the best with using Roan so far! 
(Mar. 30, 2019 10:49 PM)Sir Saitama Wrote: Chapter 8 - Invincibility! Smash Revenge!
Last time on Beyblade Burst Zero! Paris and the gang are personally invited by Roan to participate in the BeyFestival! After meeting the Z5, the BeyClub decide to battle Roan!
Meet Smash Revenge!” Roan grinned.
With many ‘oohs’ and ‘aahs’ from the crowd, Paris held out Pegasus.
“This is Immortal Pegasus!” Paris introduced.
Roan quickly studied the attack type.
“You’ve got an interesting bey,” he complimented. “Can it take me down?”
Paris hoped so. He fixed his posture and prepared for battle.
“Ready, set!”
“Three!”
“Two!”
“One!”
“Let it rip!”
Flash Trident, in its taller mode, came crashing down onto Revenge.
“Take it down now Trident! Final Flash Sting!” Toko exclaimed.
Revenge’s incredible speed assisted it in dodging Trident’s attack.
“No!” Toko was taken by surprise as he and Paris exchanged looks.
“All yours Paris!” Toko yelled. “Go!”
Flash Trident extended its height, bouncing into the air as it grabbed onto Immortal Pegasus.
Pegasus was thrown into the air at an amazing speed.
“Thanks,” Paris smiled. “Now, Immortal Starblast Attack!”
Pegasus shot down, and landed onto Revenge’s layer.
“Impressive!” Roan said. “But I’m not in the Z5 for nothing!”
Smash Revenge tilted forward and shot, entering the middle of the stadium.
Eventually, Immortal Pegasus was thrown off, bouncing away.
“Now it’s my turn!” Taiki chuckled. “Adamantine Blade!”
Adamantine Theseus stabbed through Revenge, knocking it away. However, it made a solid recovery.
“All that for nothing?” Taiki gasped. “Well! Take on my Adamantine Barrage Fury!”
Theseus glowed, as it rushed through Revenge, breaking the sound barrier. Smash Revenge was unharmed.
“Revenge! Attack!” Roan called.
Smash Revenge dodged Theseus’ impending attack and pierced through it, bursting it.
“Agh! No way!” Taiki said in disbelief.
Revenge shifted its trajectory, going adjacent to Trident.
“It’s my time to shine! Flash Counter!”
Trident’s avatar appeared, a spearman wielding a trident.
“Go! Trident!” Toko bellowed.
Like a bullet, the stamina type struck through Revenge, knocking it into the wall.
“Yes!” Toko celebrated.
Smash Revenge rebounded off of the wall, driving itself into Trident.
“Smash Counter!” Roan shouted.
Trident immediately burst.
“No!” Toko fell to the floor.
Cho-Z Achilles lit up.
“Super Z Slash!” Aiga roared.
With a single flick, Smash Revenge was thrown into the air.
Roan was shocked.
“I certainly wasn’t expecting this! Now Revenge! Super Revenge Slash!”
Revenge made its way down to Achilles and retracted the burst stoppers. And then...
Cho-Z Achilles skyrocketed into the air and burst.
“I-Impossible!” Aiga widened his eyes.
Ultra Centurion jolted around the stadium.
“Ultra Revival!” Charles commanded. It shot with incredible speed, and drilled into Revenge’s layer.
Smash Revenge effortlessly tossed Centurion away, slamming it into the wall.
“Burst Strike!” Charles exclaimed once more.
Ultra Centurion left a vibrant trail of red behind as it made its way into Revenge.
“Burst him!” Roan called out.
And Smash Revenge did so. Ultra Centurion rolled back and hit the wall of the stadium, bursting upon impact.
The four fallen bladers glanced at Paris.
“Right! Supernova Shoot!” Paris said confidently. Immortal Pegasus pummeled through Revenge as if barely budged.
“It’s not moving!” Aiga pointed out.
Pegasus managed to capture Revenge in the center of the stadium.
“Immortal Stormbringer!” Paris exclaimed.
As dust and light expelled from the stadium, a ring formed around the bey.
The ring attempted to compress Revenge, however it was obvious that was a difficult task.
“Why isn’t it moving?” Paris grunted.
Toko pulled out his tablet. “It’s because of Revenge’s heavy weight!”
Paris yelled, “Go now, Pegasus! Take him down!”
Smash Revenge and Immortal Pegasus were swept into the air in unison.
“It’s going to be a ring out finish,” Charles observed.
“For who?” Taiki panicked.
Pegasus landed at Paris’ feet first. Smash Revenge landed back into the stadium, spinning unbalanced.
“You’re really strong,” Paris smiled as he picked up Pegasus.
“Wait! Where are you going?” Roan asked.
“You won fair and square,” Paris stated the obvious.
Roan laughed for quite a while. “Only one point. First to two wins. Plus, I want to battle you again.”
Aiga stepped in. “I’ll ref!”
“Ready, set!”
“Three!”
“Two!”
“One!”
“Let it rip!”
Pegasus’ five feathers lit up in unison.
“Supernova Shoot!” Paris commanded, as Immortal Pegasus shot through Smash Revenge.
Before Pegasus had room for seconds, Revenge’s layer lit up.
“Super Revenge Slash!” Roan exclaimed.
Within three seconds, Immortal Pegasus exploded into three parts.
Paris was left speechless.
“Good job!” He complimented Roan.
“You too. I look forward to battling you in the finals.”
Paris reached for Immortal Pegasus and assembled the bey together.
“You can count on it!” He smiled cheerfully.
The BeyClub left the BeyFestival.
“What a blast!” Paris said.
“That was pretty fun,” Taiki added. “Apart from losing,” Aiga folded his arms.
“Hey!” Paris said sternly. “It doesn’t matter whether you win or lose! Even though I lost against Roan, I had fun!”
Aiga giggled. “Oops, forgot. Guess the teacher can learn from the students.”
A few hours later, after the five parted ways, Paris turned on his favorite channel.
“And Daniel completes the 100 blader challenge!” Hanami announced. “Anything you’d like to say?”
Daniel grinned intimidatingly.
“I do. Paris Hagane, if you’re out there, you stand no chance at defeating me!”
Great! I liked the Battle Royale!
RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - Sir Saitama - Mar. 31, 2019
(Mar. 31, 2019 2:14 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote: (Mar. 29, 2019 9:20 PM)Sir Saitama Wrote: Thanks! I haven’t given up though, just planning out the next few chapters and the overall direction of this story.
Chapter 7 - The BeyFestival! The Z5 Awaken!
Last time on Beyblade Burst Zero! Paris defeats Toko thanks to his training and earns himself a spot against Daniel Aziel! But only one can come out on top!
“Agh! Why isn’t this working?” Paris whined. Immortal Pegasus bumpily cycled around the stadium, crashing into Ultra Centurion and bursting.
Taiki and Charles stifled a laugh.
“It isn’t funny!” Paris snapped.
“Geez, no need to get worked up over Daniel! It’ll be a piece of cake!” Aiga patted him on the shoulder.
Paris still wasn’t convinced. The video of Havoc Daemon sinking its wings into a hundred other beys replayed in his head.
“Up for special training, then?” Toko held out his launcher.
Paris smirked, “You bet!”
All five bladers stood diagonally to each other, at one corner of the stadium.
“Three!”
“Two!”
“One!”
“Let it rip!”
Adamantine Theseus chased after Pegasus endlessly.
Taiki boomed, “Don’t let him get away! Adamantine Blade!”
Theseus’ avatar sliced in unison with its bey. One of its blades lit up as it tossed Pegasus into the air like a boomerang.
Fortunately, it slammed into the wall and launched off, leaving a vibrant blue trail.
“Supernova Shoot!” Paris thundered, his voice echoing.
Adamantine Theseus barely budged, thanks to its heavy weight. Then, that’s when it became a battle of smarts.
Immortal Pegasus jolted through the stadium, swiftly making its way across multiple times. With each lap, it gained speed, stamina and momentum.
Theseus blocked Pegasus from gaining anymore endurance.
“Not on my watch! Stop him, Theseus!” Taiki bellowed.
Although Adamantine Theseus was unable to be flung into the air, Pegasus drilled through it, shunting into the attack type.
Meanwhile, Cho-Z Achilles was eager to join the fight. It switched from defense to attack mode, and surged through the stadium.
“Hope this works,” Paris mumbled.
“What works?” Taiki asked.
“This!”
Pegasus left Theseus close to the edge of the arena, where Achilles pummeled through the attack type, bursting it.
“Gah!” Taiki widened his eyes in surprise. Then, Achilles pressed into Pegasus, knocking it back.
Flash Trident made its move. The stamina type was in its taller height, as it bolted into Pegasus.
“Now! Final Flash Sting!” Toko exclaimed.
Trident compressed its driver into its lower height, sinking its layer into Pegasus’ wings. An idea suddenly sparked into Paris’ head.
“All yours, Pegasus! Again, Supernova Shoot!”
Immortal Pegasus tilted sideways, preventing Trident from changing its height, whilst hurtling it into the centre of the stadium.
Pegasus finally let go, and used its Dead Gravity-like move.
“Take this! Immortal Stormbringer!” Paris’ lightning-shaped necklace glowed.
Flash Trident was constantly battered with a string of heavy attacks, as a ring formed around it.
The ring wrapped around the stamina type, constricting it until it shot into the air and burst.
Toko was left speechless. Centurion and Achilles made its way back into the centre of the stadium, driving their blades into Pegasus’ layer.
Eventually, Pegasus lost a click.
“Super Z Slash!” Aiga roared, as a whip formed around Achilles’ blades. Charles grinned, “Burst Strike!”
Centurion, like a wind-up toy, shot through Pegasus from the other direction. With both Achilles and Centurion clawing through the attack type, it exploded into three parts.
“N-not again!” Paris gulped. He quickly reassembled Pegasus together. Studying the battle, Ultra Centurion used its Omni Attack and burst Cho-Z Achilles, much to Aiga’s sorrow.
In defeat, Paris curled his fingers around Pegasus. Aiga, Charles, Taiki and Toko ran up to the boy.
“Y’know something special about you? You keep getting up after a loss!” Aiga said sympathetically.
The others nodded in unison.
“You’ve made me realise the importance of trying!” Taiki smiled cheerfully. “Thanks to you!”
Paris looked up at his friends.
“That’s not all! Without you, I would’ve never been able to learn that it’s not all about winning!”
Toko stepped in, and fixed his attention onto Flash Trident.
“Sometimes.. sometimes when Valt isn’t home, somebody’s gotta fill in his role for me. And I think you’ve done your part, Paris.”
Hearing those kind words almost melted Paris. He confidently stood up, and brushed himself off.
“You’re right! And thanks to you guys, and you too, Pegasus, I would’ve never made it this far!”
He triumphantly raised Pegasus to the sky. Suddenly, a figure appeared.
“Roan..” Paris muttered under his breath.
The others were thinking the exact same thing.
Roan wore black sneakers, dark blue jeans, curly brown hair and a neatly zipped up blue coat, without a single crease. He managed to pull off a simple look well.
He held five invitations in cream white paper, tied together with a red velvet ribbon.
"Hey,” Roan said. “The BeyFestival’s today, and I’d like to invite you all.”
Suddenly, Paris was bursting with joy.
“Really?” He pinched himself multiple times.
“Of course!” Roan smiled. “You guys are proving yourself as pretty strong.”
Before Paris could respond, Roan had already left. The invitations were thrown into the air. Catching one, in big bold letters, read:
‘The BeyFestival is now on! You’ve been formally invited by one of the Z5 to participate in the battles that will be taking place today!’
“Awesome!” Paris burst in excitement. “Can’t wait to meet the Z5!”
A few hours passed, and Paris found himself engulfed through a large crowd. He didn’t think the BeyFestival would be that busy.
Roan stood on the stage, completely demolishing another blader. Still, he showed chivalry.
“Who’s next?” He repeated. After the next dozen or so battles, Roan waved at the BeyClub.
“Ah! Glad you could make it today!”
He caught his bey, Smash Revenge, in his hand instantly. The BeyClub were speechless from what they were seeing - hundreds of stadiums spread across the ground, and the massive food court located at the front.
Taiki and Aiga happily bounced off to the food court, ready to binge on Beigoma’s best burgers. Meanwhile, Toko and Charles went off to battle on the beach.
Before Paris could join his friends, Roan quickly stopped him.
“Oh, and before you go,” he said, “Make sure you win that battle. Because I look forward to battling you.”
Paris give him a thumbs-up in response and found himself lost in the food court.
“Paris!” Aiga waved, as he sat down next to Taiki. The three chowed down on the mightiest cheeseburger you could’ve ever seen, and having a good time.
Twenty minutes later, Roan spoke into the microphone.
“Ladies and gentlemen, today I’d like to welcome you all to the BeyFestival!”
The crowd cheered in response.
“That’s great to hear! Now, I’d like to introduce you to the Z5!”
A yellow-haired bladed with a streak of red appeared.
“Free de La Hoya!” Roan announced.
“Lui Shirosagi!” He added.
“Shu Kurenai!” Roan introduced.
“Me of course!” He joked.
Paris knew these bladers. All three of them had a major impact on Valt’s beyblading career.
“That’s how he got to where he is today,” Toko said, running over.
“And, Suoh Goshuin!" Roan exclaimed excitedly. The four bladers came forward.
“Now, we five bladers are the Z5! The strongest in the world, underneath the champion, of course,” Roan smiled.
“I’d like to introduce my guests, the new Beigoma Academy BeyClub.”
Paris, Toko, Charles, Aiga and Taiki stood on stage.
“Well, how about a battle?” Roan offered. The five bladers held out their launchers, as Roan revealed Smash Revenge.
Yeah, I still accept characters. I’ll try to add your idea when I can.
Amazing! I think you’ve done the best with using Roan so far! ;)
(Mar. 30, 2019 10:49 PM)Sir Saitama Wrote: Chapter 8 - Invincibility! Smash Revenge!
Last time on Beyblade Burst Zero! Paris and the gang are personally invited by Roan to participate in the BeyFestival! After meeting the Z5, the BeyClub decide to battle Roan!
Meet Smash Revenge!” Roan grinned.
With many ‘oohs’ and ‘aahs’ from the crowd, Paris held out Pegasus.
“This is Immortal Pegasus!” Paris introduced.
Roan quickly studied the attack type.
“You’ve got an interesting bey,” he complimented. “Can it take me down?”
Paris hoped so. He fixed his posture and prepared for battle.
“Ready, set!”
“Three!”
“Two!”
“One!”
“Let it rip!”
Flash Trident, in its taller mode, came crashing down onto Revenge.
“Take it down now Trident! Final Flash Sting!” Toko exclaimed.
Revenge’s incredible speed assisted it in dodging Trident’s attack.
“No!” Toko was taken by surprise as he and Paris exchanged looks.
“All yours Paris!” Toko yelled. “Go!”
Flash Trident extended its height, bouncing into the air as it grabbed onto Immortal Pegasus.
Pegasus was thrown into the air at an amazing speed.
“Thanks,” Paris smiled. “Now, Immortal Starblast Attack!”
Pegasus shot down, and landed onto Revenge’s layer.
“Impressive!” Roan said. “But I’m not in the Z5 for nothing!”
Smash Revenge tilted forward and shot, entering the middle of the stadium.
Eventually, Immortal Pegasus was thrown off, bouncing away.
“Now it’s my turn!” Taiki chuckled. “Adamantine Blade!”
Adamantine Theseus stabbed through Revenge, knocking it away. However, it made a solid recovery.
“All that for nothing?” Taiki gasped. “Well! Take on my Adamantine Barrage Fury!”
Theseus glowed, as it rushed through Revenge, breaking the sound barrier. Smash Revenge was unharmed.
“Revenge! Attack!” Roan called.
Smash Revenge dodged Theseus’ impending attack and pierced through it, bursting it.
“Agh! No way!” Taiki said in disbelief.
Revenge shifted its trajectory, going adjacent to Trident.
“It’s my time to shine! Flash Counter!”
Trident’s avatar appeared, a spearman wielding a trident.
“Go! Trident!” Toko bellowed.
Like a bullet, the stamina type struck through Revenge, knocking it into the wall.
“Yes!” Toko celebrated.
Smash Revenge rebounded off of the wall, driving itself into Trident.
“Smash Counter!” Roan shouted.
Trident immediately burst.
“No!” Toko fell to the floor.
Cho-Z Achilles lit up.
“Super Z Slash!” Aiga roared.
With a single flick, Smash Revenge was thrown into the air.
Roan was shocked.
“I certainly wasn’t expecting this! Now Revenge! Super Revenge Slash!”
Revenge made its way down to Achilles and retracted the burst stoppers. And then...
Cho-Z Achilles skyrocketed into the air and burst.
“I-Impossible!” Aiga widened his eyes.
Ultra Centurion jolted around the stadium.
“Ultra Revival!” Charles commanded. It shot with incredible speed, and drilled into Revenge’s layer.
Smash Revenge effortlessly tossed Centurion away, slamming it into the wall.
“Burst Strike!” Charles exclaimed once more.
Ultra Centurion left a vibrant trail of red behind as it made its way into Revenge.
“Burst him!” Roan called out.
And Smash Revenge did so. Ultra Centurion rolled back and hit the wall of the stadium, bursting upon impact.
The four fallen bladers glanced at Paris.
“Right! Supernova Shoot!” Paris said confidently. Immortal Pegasus pummeled through Revenge as if barely budged.
“It’s not moving!” Aiga pointed out.
Pegasus managed to capture Revenge in the center of the stadium.
“Immortal Stormbringer!” Paris exclaimed.
As dust and light expelled from the stadium, a ring formed around the bey.
The ring attempted to compress Revenge, however it was obvious that was a difficult task.
“Why isn’t it moving?” Paris grunted.
Toko pulled out his tablet. “It’s because of Revenge’s heavy weight!”
Paris yelled, “Go now, Pegasus! Take him down!”
Smash Revenge and Immortal Pegasus were swept into the air in unison.
“It’s going to be a ring out finish,” Charles observed.
“For who?” Taiki panicked.
Pegasus landed at Paris’ feet first. Smash Revenge landed back into the stadium, spinning unbalanced.
“You’re really strong,” Paris smiled as he picked up Pegasus.
“Wait! Where are you going?” Roan asked.
“You won fair and square,” Paris stated the obvious.
Roan laughed for quite a while. “Only one point. First to two wins. Plus, I want to battle you again.”
Aiga stepped in. “I’ll ref!”
“Ready, set!”
“Three!”
“Two!”
“One!”
“Let it rip!”
Pegasus’ five feathers lit up in unison.
“Supernova Shoot!” Paris commanded, as Immortal Pegasus shot through Smash Revenge.
Before Pegasus had room for seconds, Revenge’s layer lit up.
“Super Revenge Slash!” Roan exclaimed.
Within three seconds, Immortal Pegasus exploded into three parts.
Paris was left speechless.
“Good job!” He complimented Roan.
“You too. I look forward to battling you in the finals.”
Paris reached for Immortal Pegasus and assembled the bey together.
“You can count on it!” He smiled cheerfully.
The BeyClub left the BeyFestival.
“What a blast!” Paris said.
“That was pretty fun,” Taiki added. “Apart from losing,” Aiga folded his arms.
“Hey!” Paris said sternly. “It doesn’t matter whether you win or lose! Even though I lost against Roan, I had fun!”
Aiga giggled. “Oops, forgot. Guess the teacher can learn from the students.”
A few hours later, after the five parted ways, Paris turned on his favorite channel.
“And Daniel completes the 100 blader challenge!” Hanami announced. “Anything you’d like to say?”
Daniel grinned intimidatingly.
“I do. Paris Hagane, if you’re out there, you stand no chance at defeating me!”
Great! I liked the Battle Royale!
(Mar. 31, 2019 2:14 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote: (Mar. 29, 2019 9:20 PM)Sir Saitama Wrote: Thanks! I haven’t given up though, just planning out the next few chapters and the overall direction of this story.
Chapter 7 - The BeyFestival! The Z5 Awaken!
Last time on Beyblade Burst Zero! Paris defeats Toko thanks to his training and earns himself a spot against Daniel Aziel! But only one can come out on top!
“Agh! Why isn’t this working?” Paris whined. Immortal Pegasus bumpily cycled around the stadium, crashing into Ultra Centurion and bursting.
Taiki and Charles stifled a laugh.
“It isn’t funny!” Paris snapped.
“Geez, no need to get worked up over Daniel! It’ll be a piece of cake!” Aiga patted him on the shoulder.
Paris still wasn’t convinced. The video of Havoc Daemon sinking its wings into a hundred other beys replayed in his head.
“Up for special training, then?” Toko held out his launcher.
Paris smirked, “You bet!”
All five bladers stood diagonally to each other, at one corner of the stadium.
“Three!”
“Two!”
“One!”
“Let it rip!”
Adamantine Theseus chased after Pegasus endlessly.
Taiki boomed, “Don’t let him get away! Adamantine Blade!”
Theseus’ avatar sliced in unison with its bey. One of its blades lit up as it tossed Pegasus into the air like a boomerang.
Fortunately, it slammed into the wall and launched off, leaving a vibrant blue trail.
“Supernova Shoot!” Paris thundered, his voice echoing.
Adamantine Theseus barely budged, thanks to its heavy weight. Then, that’s when it became a battle of smarts.
Immortal Pegasus jolted through the stadium, swiftly making its way across multiple times. With each lap, it gained speed, stamina and momentum.
Theseus blocked Pegasus from gaining anymore endurance.
“Not on my watch! Stop him, Theseus!” Taiki bellowed.
Although Adamantine Theseus was unable to be flung into the air, Pegasus drilled through it, shunting into the attack type.
Meanwhile, Cho-Z Achilles was eager to join the fight. It switched from defense to attack mode, and surged through the stadium.
“Hope this works,” Paris mumbled.
“What works?” Taiki asked.
“This!”
Pegasus left Theseus close to the edge of the arena, where Achilles pummeled through the attack type, bursting it.
“Gah!” Taiki widened his eyes in surprise. Then, Achilles pressed into Pegasus, knocking it back.
Flash Trident made its move. The stamina type was in its taller height, as it bolted into Pegasus.
“Now! Final Flash Sting!” Toko exclaimed.
Trident compressed its driver into its lower height, sinking its layer into Pegasus’ wings. An idea suddenly sparked into Paris’ head.
“All yours, Pegasus! Again, Supernova Shoot!”
Immortal Pegasus tilted sideways, preventing Trident from changing its height, whilst hurtling it into the centre of the stadium.
Pegasus finally let go, and used its Dead Gravity-like move.
“Take this! Immortal Stormbringer!” Paris’ lightning-shaped necklace glowed.
Flash Trident was constantly battered with a string of heavy attacks, as a ring formed around it.
The ring wrapped around the stamina type, constricting it until it shot into the air and burst.
Toko was left speechless. Centurion and Achilles made its way back into the centre of the stadium, driving their blades into Pegasus’ layer.
Eventually, Pegasus lost a click.
“Super Z Slash!” Aiga roared, as a whip formed around Achilles’ blades. Charles grinned, “Burst Strike!”
Centurion, like a wind-up toy, shot through Pegasus from the other direction. With both Achilles and Centurion clawing through the attack type, it exploded into three parts.
“N-not again!” Paris gulped. He quickly reassembled Pegasus together. Studying the battle, Ultra Centurion used its Omni Attack and burst Cho-Z Achilles, much to Aiga’s sorrow.
In defeat, Paris curled his fingers around Pegasus. Aiga, Charles, Taiki and Toko ran up to the boy.
“Y’know something special about you? You keep getting up after a loss!” Aiga said sympathetically.
The others nodded in unison.
“You’ve made me realise the importance of trying!” Taiki smiled cheerfully. “Thanks to you!”
Paris looked up at his friends.
“That’s not all! Without you, I would’ve never been able to learn that it’s not all about winning!”
Toko stepped in, and fixed his attention onto Flash Trident.
“Sometimes.. sometimes when Valt isn’t home, somebody’s gotta fill in his role for me. And I think you’ve done your part, Paris.”
Hearing those kind words almost melted Paris. He confidently stood up, and brushed himself off.
“You’re right! And thanks to you guys, and you too, Pegasus, I would’ve never made it this far!”
He triumphantly raised Pegasus to the sky. Suddenly, a figure appeared.
“Roan..” Paris muttered under his breath.
The others were thinking the exact same thing.
Roan wore black sneakers, dark blue jeans, curly brown hair and a neatly zipped up blue coat, without a single crease. He managed to pull off a simple look well.
He held five invitations in cream white paper, tied together with a red velvet ribbon.
"Hey,” Roan said. “The BeyFestival’s today, and I’d like to invite you all.”
Suddenly, Paris was bursting with joy.
“Really?” He pinched himself multiple times.
“Of course!” Roan smiled. “You guys are proving yourself as pretty strong.”
Before Paris could respond, Roan had already left. The invitations were thrown into the air. Catching one, in big bold letters, read:
‘The BeyFestival is now on! You’ve been formally invited by one of the Z5 to participate in the battles that will be taking place today!’
“Awesome!” Paris burst in excitement. “Can’t wait to meet the Z5!”
A few hours passed, and Paris found himself engulfed through a large crowd. He didn’t think the BeyFestival would be that busy.
Roan stood on the stage, completely demolishing another blader. Still, he showed chivalry.
“Who’s next?” He repeated. After the next dozen or so battles, Roan waved at the BeyClub.
“Ah! Glad you could make it today!”
He caught his bey, Smash Revenge, in his hand instantly. The BeyClub were speechless from what they were seeing - hundreds of stadiums spread across the ground, and the massive food court located at the front.
Taiki and Aiga happily bounced off to the food court, ready to binge on Beigoma’s best burgers. Meanwhile, Toko and Charles went off to battle on the beach.
Before Paris could join his friends, Roan quickly stopped him.
“Oh, and before you go,” he said, “Make sure you win that battle. Because I look forward to battling you.”
Paris give him a thumbs-up in response and found himself lost in the food court.
“Paris!” Aiga waved, as he sat down next to Taiki. The three chowed down on the mightiest cheeseburger you could’ve ever seen, and having a good time.
Twenty minutes later, Roan spoke into the microphone.
“Ladies and gentlemen, today I’d like to welcome you all to the BeyFestival!”
The crowd cheered in response.
“That’s great to hear! Now, I’d like to introduce you to the Z5!”
A yellow-haired bladed with a streak of red appeared.
“Free de La Hoya!” Roan announced.
“Lui Shirosagi!” He added.
“Shu Kurenai!” Roan introduced.
“Me of course!” He joked.
Paris knew these bladers. All three of them had a major impact on Valt’s beyblading career.
“That’s how he got to where he is today,” Toko said, running over.
“And, Suoh Goshuin!" Roan exclaimed excitedly. The four bladers came forward.
“Now, we five bladers are the Z5! The strongest in the world, underneath the champion, of course,” Roan smiled.
“I’d like to introduce my guests, the new Beigoma Academy BeyClub.”
Paris, Toko, Charles, Aiga and Taiki stood on stage.
“Well, how about a battle?” Roan offered. The five bladers held out their launchers, as Roan revealed Smash Revenge.
Yeah, I still accept characters. I’ll try to add your idea when I can.
Amazing! I think you’ve done the best with using Roan so far! ;)
(Mar. 30, 2019 10:49 PM)Sir Saitama Wrote: Chapter 8 - Invincibility! Smash Revenge!
Last time on Beyblade Burst Zero! Paris and the gang are personally invited by Roan to participate in the BeyFestival! After meeting the Z5, the BeyClub decide to battle Roan!
Meet Smash Revenge!” Roan grinned.
With many ‘oohs’ and ‘aahs’ from the crowd, Paris held out Pegasus.
“This is Immortal Pegasus!” Paris introduced.
Roan quickly studied the attack type.
“You’ve got an interesting bey,” he complimented. “Can it take me down?”
Paris hoped so. He fixed his posture and prepared for battle.
“Ready, set!”
“Three!”
“Two!”
“One!”
“Let it rip!”
Flash Trident, in its taller mode, came crashing down onto Revenge.
“Take it down now Trident! Final Flash Sting!” Toko exclaimed.
Revenge’s incredible speed assisted it in dodging Trident’s attack.
“No!” Toko was taken by surprise as he and Paris exchanged looks.
“All yours Paris!” Toko yelled. “Go!”
Flash Trident extended its height, bouncing into the air as it grabbed onto Immortal Pegasus.
Pegasus was thrown into the air at an amazing speed.
“Thanks,” Paris smiled. “Now, Immortal Starblast Attack!”
Pegasus shot down, and landed onto Revenge’s layer.
“Impressive!” Roan said. “But I’m not in the Z5 for nothing!”
Smash Revenge tilted forward and shot, entering the middle of the stadium.
Eventually, Immortal Pegasus was thrown off, bouncing away.
“Now it’s my turn!” Taiki chuckled. “Adamantine Blade!”
Adamantine Theseus stabbed through Revenge, knocking it away. However, it made a solid recovery.
“All that for nothing?” Taiki gasped. “Well! Take on my Adamantine Barrage Fury!”
Theseus glowed, as it rushed through Revenge, breaking the sound barrier. Smash Revenge was unharmed.
“Revenge! Attack!” Roan called.
Smash Revenge dodged Theseus’ impending attack and pierced through it, bursting it.
“Agh! No way!” Taiki said in disbelief.
Revenge shifted its trajectory, going adjacent to Trident.
“It’s my time to shine! Flash Counter!”
Trident’s avatar appeared, a spearman wielding a trident.
“Go! Trident!” Toko bellowed.
Like a bullet, the stamina type struck through Revenge, knocking it into the wall.
“Yes!” Toko celebrated.
Smash Revenge rebounded off of the wall, driving itself into Trident.
“Smash Counter!” Roan shouted.
Trident immediately burst.
“No!” Toko fell to the floor.
Cho-Z Achilles lit up.
“Super Z Slash!” Aiga roared.
With a single flick, Smash Revenge was thrown into the air.
Roan was shocked.
“I certainly wasn’t expecting this! Now Revenge! Super Revenge Slash!”
Revenge made its way down to Achilles and retracted the burst stoppers. And then...
Cho-Z Achilles skyrocketed into the air and burst.
“I-Impossible!” Aiga widened his eyes.
Ultra Centurion jolted around the stadium.
“Ultra Revival!” Charles commanded. It shot with incredible speed, and drilled into Revenge’s layer.
Smash Revenge effortlessly tossed Centurion away, slamming it into the wall.
“Burst Strike!” Charles exclaimed once more.
Ultra Centurion left a vibrant trail of red behind as it made its way into Revenge.
“Burst him!” Roan called out.
And Smash Revenge did so. Ultra Centurion rolled back and hit the wall of the stadium, bursting upon impact.
The four fallen bladers glanced at Paris.
“Right! Supernova Shoot!” Paris said confidently. Immortal Pegasus pummeled through Revenge as if barely budged.
“It’s not moving!” Aiga pointed out.
Pegasus managed to capture Revenge in the center of the stadium.
“Immortal Stormbringer!” Paris exclaimed.
As dust and light expelled from the stadium, a ring formed around the bey.
The ring attempted to compress Revenge, however it was obvious that was a difficult task.
“Why isn’t it moving?” Paris grunted.
Toko pulled out his tablet. “It’s because of Revenge’s heavy weight!”
Paris yelled, “Go now, Pegasus! Take him down!”
Smash Revenge and Immortal Pegasus were swept into the air in unison.
“It’s going to be a ring out finish,” Charles observed.
“For who?” Taiki panicked.
Pegasus landed at Paris’ feet first. Smash Revenge landed back into the stadium, spinning unbalanced.
“You’re really strong,” Paris smiled as he picked up Pegasus.
“Wait! Where are you going?” Roan asked.
“You won fair and square,” Paris stated the obvious.
Roan laughed for quite a while. “Only one point. First to two wins. Plus, I want to battle you again.”
Aiga stepped in. “I’ll ref!”
“Ready, set!”
“Three!”
“Two!”
“One!”
“Let it rip!”
Pegasus’ five feathers lit up in unison.
“Supernova Shoot!” Paris commanded, as Immortal Pegasus shot through Smash Revenge.
Before Pegasus had room for seconds, Revenge’s layer lit up.
“Super Revenge Slash!” Roan exclaimed.
Within three seconds, Immortal Pegasus exploded into three parts.
Paris was left speechless.
“Good job!” He complimented Roan.
“You too. I look forward to battling you in the finals.”
Paris reached for Immortal Pegasus and assembled the bey together.
“You can count on it!” He smiled cheerfully.
The BeyClub left the BeyFestival.
“What a blast!” Paris said.
“That was pretty fun,” Taiki added. “Apart from losing,” Aiga folded his arms.
“Hey!” Paris said sternly. “It doesn’t matter whether you win or lose! Even though I lost against Roan, I had fun!”
Aiga giggled. “Oops, forgot. Guess the teacher can learn from the students.”
A few hours later, after the five parted ways, Paris turned on his favorite channel.
“And Daniel completes the 100 blader challenge!” Hanami announced. “Anything you’d like to say?”
Daniel grinned intimidatingly.
“I do. Paris Hagane, if you’re out there, you stand no chance at defeating me!”
Great! I liked the Battle Royale! Thanks! I really appreciate the support! :)
RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - Mr tyros - Mar. 31, 2019
Will you accept my chartars amber Duo with Duo Artemis and al duo with Duo apollos
RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - Sir Saitama - Mar. 31, 2019
Chapter 8 - Demolition! Havoc Daemon!
Last time on Beyblade Burst Zero! Paris and the crew hold a Battle Royale against Roan! Paris manages to hold his own but ultimately loses!
“You stand no chance at defeating me!” Daniel’s voice echoed in Paris’ head.
Immortal Pegasus was thrown out of the stadium by Ultra Centurion.
“You okay?” Charles asked.
Paris nodded, unzoned.
Toko, Jamie and Nika were watching amongst the sidelines. The blue-haired boy held out his tablet.
“Havoc Daemon’s an Attack Type,” he said. “We’ve got our fair share of attack types here.”
Toko gently placed his device on the seat and leapt.
“Where are you going?” Nika questioned.
“To help Paris,” he replied.
Paris wasn’t doing so good himself.
“No, not like that! To beat Daniel, you’re gonna need to use attack back at him!” Aiga snapped.
Taiki and Toko joined the group, holding out their launchers. Aiga set Achilles into Attack Mode.
“Ready, set!” Jamie exclaimed.
“Three!”
“Two!”
“One!”
“Let it rip!”
Ultra Centurion and Cho-Z Achilles from either side stung Pegasus, knocking it back.
“H-hold on Pegasus! Supernova Shoot!” Paris cried.
Immortal Pegasus surged through the stadium, slashing right through Flash Trident.
The Stamina Type exploded instantly.
“Look at Pegasus go!” Jamie noticed.
The two balance types came crashing from either side.
“Go! Super Z Slash!” Aiga commanded.
“Use your Burst Strike!” Charles added.
With a major explosion, Pegasus was thrown into the air. Then...
The attack-type bey plummeted to the stadium floor, given a drastic boost of power.
“Go! Full power!” Paris called out.
Adamantine Theseus appeared.
“Not on my watch! Adamantine Blade!” Taiki boomed.
Theseus’ blades lit up in unison. With a devastating swipe, Pegasus seemed unharmed.
“Finish him!” Paris shouted. Immortal Pegasus drilled through Theseus, bursting it.
“That makes two bursts,” Nika gasped.
Achilles and Centurion once again came running from either direction, however the attack type managed to intercept the two beys.
Nevertheless, Achilles changed its trajectory, advancing into Pegasus.
“Go now Achilles!” Aiga roared.
“Centurion!” Charles thundered.
The three beys collided in unison, as Pegasus split into three parts. Centurion and Achilles were still intact.
“That makes me feel much better about losing to you,” Charles said.
Jamie waved her hand to her brother and Aiga.
“Two points for a Burst Finish.”
“Hey, I won that!” Aiga bickered.
“No! I did!” Charles disagreed.
Whilst Aiga and Charles were arguing, Paris took Inmortal Pegasus.
“Let’s do our best today against Daemon.”
Two hours later, the BeyClub had arrived at the tournament building.
“Ladies and gentlemen! I welcome you to a highly anticipated match between Daniel Aziel and Paris Hagane!”
The crowd cheered.
“A crowd favourite, and our underdog, Paris Hagane!”
Paris emerged from a door, with several flashing lights fixed on him.
“And the Dragon Master will be his opponent! Hold your applause for Daniel Aziel!”
Daniel proceeded toward the stadium, stomping fiercely.
“Hope you heard what I said yesterday,” Daniel chuckled, “Never in a million years can you beat me!”
Paris clenched his fists. He felt as if his face were on fire. Roan watched from an overhead gallery, smiling at the amber-haired boy.
“Alright,” Paris closed his eyes. “We can do this.”
Daniel presented Havoc Daemon. It had a diamond shaped layer with a spring-loaded wing on each side.
A horned, dragon-like face was staring into Paris’ soul. The disc was 13, and the driver was called Demolish.
Demolish consisted of a hexagon-shaped spring loaded rubber flat. The tip was red, whilst the majority of the driver was black.
Paris pictured Immortal Pegasus being split in half by Havoc Daemon. He quickly snapped out of it.
“Ready, set!”
“Three!”
“Two!”
“One!”
“Let it rip!”
Immortal Pegasus shot right through Havoc Daemon, who charged around the outer line on the stadium.
“Let’s do this Pegasus! Supernova Shoot!”
Pegasus’ avatar appeared, as Immortal Pegasus jolted.
“Havoc Daemon. Dodge him,” Daniel said, boredly. Pegasus instead slammed into the wall, losing a quarter of its endurance.
Paris was persistent as ever.
“Now Pegasus! Immortal Stormbringer!”
Daemon was caught inside the vortex.
“That all you got? You’re in for disappointment,” Daniel blurted.
Havoc Daemon beamed through, breaking Pegasus’ barrier.
“Finish him!” Daniel roared. “Rebound Uppercut!”
Daemon’s spring-loaded wings fired Immortal Pegasus into the wall. Havoc Daemon was in hot pursuit, as it ruthlessly slashed Pegasus upward, bursting it immediately.
RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - BurningSands - Mar. 31, 2019
OH NO PEGASUS
RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - Sir Saitama - Apr. 01, 2019
Chapter 9 - Going All Out! Immortal Slash!
Last time on Beyblade Burst Zero! Daniel and Paris face off in the Semi-Finals! After holding his own, Daniel gets the first two points!
“Two points to Havoc Daemon for a Burst Finish,” the referee declared. The BeyClub trembled with fear from the sidelines.
The entire building transformed into an empty, white abyss. A white winged-horse made an obvious galloping sound.
“Pegasus? Is that you?” Paris called out.
Surely enough, it was. The divine horse sparkled, almost camouflaging in the blank landscape. Pegasus didn’t say anything, however.
A bubble hovered above the amber-haired boy’s head. Inside, Paris’ debuting battle with Valt repeated.
Then, another bubble appeared.
“That’s my battle with Aiga!” Paris exclaimed excitedly.
He spotted his battle with Taiki, Toko and Charles.
“What’s this for?” Although Paris enjoyed the memories, he didn’t understand.
“Do you see how far you’ve made it?” Pegasus asked.
“You’ve battled and trained with the same mindset as Valt Aoi. You’re getting stronger by the second,” Pegasus added.
Paris searched through his pockets and pulled out Immortal Pegasus, glancing down at it.
“Alright! We can do it!”
Just then, the landscape dissolved. Pegasus was no longer in front of him, and instead was Daniel.
“Ready for round two? Because I’m ready to demolish you!”
The referee started.
“Ready, set!”
“Three!”
“Two!”
“One!”
“Let it rip!”
Immortal Pegasus swung its feathers into Havoc Daemon, scraping the stadium floor.
“What?” Daniel grit his teeth.
Pegasus spun smoothly, as Daemon swiftly recovered.
“Alright! Let’s do this- Supernova Shoot!”
The attack type performed its usual, shooting right through Havoc Daemon.
“What an amateur move!” Daniel snarled. “Say goodnight. Rebirth Dive!”
Just then, Havoc Daemon moved itself into the wall, self-flinging itself into the air.
“Is he forfeiting?” Aiga questioned.
Daemon still spun perfectly, although it took a critical hit from the wall.
Paris recalled Daniel’s launch. It was fairly similar to Lui’s. Daniel leapt into the air and danced like a tornado, firing Daemon down.
Thanks to Rebirth Dive, Havoc Daemon jolted down from the exact same angle, as if it were relaunched.
With intense speed, Immortal Pegasus snaked around the outer rim of the stadium, but Daemon sank its fangs, tossing the attack type out of the stadium...
Or so everyone thought. Pegasus hit the edge of the stadium wall and shot upward, then spiralled downward, almost replicating Daniel’s move.
“Immortal Starblast Attack!” Paris boomed. With such amazing speed, Immortal Pegasus blasted through Daemon, knocking both beys back.
“Paris is putting up a good fight!” Toko exclaimed from the sidelines. The two attack types orbited around each other, dealing minimal attacks.
Daniel clenched his fists.
“Grrr! That’s enough!” He pointed daringly toward Paris. “I’ve trained with the best! Lui Shirasagi and my brother, Gabriel! And I’m not throwing it away!”
Paris pictured Daniel climbing a mountain whilst Lui stood on top, bawling in laughter.
“I’m not giving up either!” Paris exclaimed. “Go! Immortal Stormbringer!”
Pegasus flashed around the outer area of the stadium, boosting its endurance and speed drastically. It returned to the middle of the stadium, and constricted Daemon.
“You can do it!” Roan yelled from the side. He folded his arms as he’d usually do, but he was absorbed by the battle.
Havoc Daemon levitated, and returned to the stadium’s surface. Something felt off...
Toko fidgeted with his tablet. “Look! Havoc Daemon is retracting into the Demolish driver!”
Toko was right; Daemon pushed into its driver.
“Copycat of Free much?” Taiki whispered.
“Arghhhh! Now!” Daniel’s eyes glowed a merciless red. “Demolish Break!”
Paris knew this was the endgame. Immortal Pegasus trembled in fear in perfect sync with Paris, shaking uncontrollably.
Paris’ two weeks worth of experience, training and battles went into his final attack.
“Haaaah! Immortal Slash!” Paris shouted, his voice echoing through the hall.
Daniel’s eyes widened. The BeyClub was just as surprised. One of Pegasus’ three feathers lit up, and beamed through Daemon.
Both beys flung into the air and burst in unison. The six parts littered the stadium floor.
“Simultaneous Burst Finish! No points!” The referee announced.
“Wow, would you look at that! The second round ends in an intense tie! What will happen next?” Hanami said in his microphone.
Daniel silently picked up Daemon and reassembled it, the same with Paris.
Daniel growled, “So, you’re slowly proving yourself as strong! I don’t care! I will put you in your place! And the funny thing is... I haven’t used my full power!”
RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - PersonPerson - Apr. 01, 2019
*Intense Clapping*
RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - Sir Saitama - Apr. 04, 2019
Chapter 10 - The Winner’s Coronation! Pegasus vs Daemon!
Last time on Beyblade. Burst Zero! The clash between Paris and Daniel continues, as they battle it out! With the support of Pegasus, they discover their true potential!
“You mean to tell me.. this whole time, you haven’t been trying?” Paris felt as if Daniel launched Daemon into his stomach.
Another laugh broke out from the boy with red spiky hair.
“You think I’d seriously use my full power on someone like you?”
Paris tensely wrapped his fingers around Pegasus.
Daniel briefly glanced at Roan, “That’s what bladers like him are for.”
The referee pointed to the stadium.
“Ready, set!”
“Three!”
“Two!”
“One!”
“Let it rip!”
Immortal Pegasus warped through the outer ring of the stadium, outclassing Havoc Daemon in speed.
“What?” Daniel grit his teeth.
Immortal Pegasus made a sudden stop, and charged right through Havoc Daemon, the two attack types clashing.
Light and wind shot through the stadium as Pegasus couldn’t withstand the intensity. It slid into the stadium wall and rebounded off, with miraculous speed.
“Go now Pegasus! Show ‘em our Supernova Shoot!”
Immortal Pegasus glowed, racing through the stadium.
Pegasus’ speed was too much for Daemon as the dark bey was flung into the air.
Daniel didn’t display a single hint of perturbation, because he grinned menacingly.
“Rebirth Dive!” His voice echoed through the stadium, as Havoc Daemon arrowed downward, arriving onto the stadium’s surface.
Daemon blasted through Immortal Pegasus, its spring loaded wings gripping on.
“You survived round one. Let’s see if you can take round two!” Daniel boomed.
Immortal Pegasus was thrown into the stadium wall and back into the air by Daemon.
“You can do it, Pegasus! Immortal Starblast Attack!”
Pegasus performed the usual. It rained down onto Daemon, who steadily spun the other way.
“Starblast Attack didn’t bring Daemon into the air?” Aiga widened his eyes.
Daniel clenched his fists, the veins appearing throughout his skin.
“Why don’t you take on this? Demolish Break!” he snapped.
As Pegasus rode around the arena in a flower-pattern, Daemon retracted into its driver, Demolish, thus giving it a surge of speed.
Like lightning, too fast to be seen, Havoc Daemon jolted around the stadium, aligning perfectly with the ring that snaked through the stadium.
“Haaaah!” Daniel roared, as Daemon crashed heavily into Immortal Pegasus. Pegasus was trying its best not to fling into the wall.
Paris said confidently, “Immortal Slash!” Pegasus’ feathers lit up, as it whipped through Daemon, both beys getting knocked back.
Daemon and Pegasus had little to no stamina left. Paris thought of a risky move - one that would get Pegasus to Burst, or one that would snag themselves a point.
Paris hoped it was the latter. Immortal Pegasus’ feathers lit up again.
“Take him down! Immortal Slash!”
The crowd were shocked. Especially Daniel. Pegasus used its special move once more, and managed to throw Havoc Daemon out of the stadium, landing at Daniel’s feet.
“One point to Immortal Pegasus for an Over Finish! The score is now 2-1!” The referee announced.
Daniel gasped, then frowned.
“So what if you’re a worthy opponent? I’ll destroy you nonetheless!”
Paris was the definition of excitement. He leapt into the air, and smiled cheerfully.
“Ready, set!”
“Three!”
“Two!”
“One!”
“Let it rip!”
Havoc Daemon glowed up immediately.
“I’ll put everything I have into this attack! Rebound Uppercut!”
Its four spring loaded wings uppercutted Immortal Pegasus into the air, slamming it into the stadium wall.
Havoc Daemon pursued Pegasus, flipping it up, rocketing the opposing attack type into the air.
With one click gone, Immortal Pegasus made a solid recovery.
“Now! Immortal Starblast Attack!” Paris exclaimed.
Pegasus beamed onto Havoc Daemon, knocking both beys back.
“Crush him, Daemon! Demolish Break!”
Daemon retracted onto its Demolish driver, flashing around the arena.
Then, Pegasus lit up its feathers.
“Immortal Slash!”
Both beys drilled into each other, pressing endlessly. With three clicks gone from the two attack types, they suddenly burst.
“Simultaneous Burst Finish! No points!” The referee declared.
The next few battles were just the same, Pegasus using Immortal Slash and Daemon with Demolish Break.
Aiga, Toko, Taiki and Charles were all held to their seats. Even Roan never heard of such a move.
“Tenth battle!” The referee said.
“Twentieth battle!”
“Fiftieth battle!”
“Seventieth battle!”
Paris was exhausted from seventy-four battles. He wiped sweat from his face.
“Seventy-fifth battle!” The referee was clearly out of breath from announcing seventy five battles.
“Ready, set!”
“Three!”
“Two!”
“One!”
“Let it rip!”
Daniel howled in pain. His brother, Gabriel, leapt out of his seat and proceeded toward the stadium.
Both Pegasus and Daemon were flung into the air and burst.
“Stop! Stop the battle!” Gabriel shouted.
His brother looked much like Daniel. He picked up the three pieces to Havoc Daemon.
“Daniel Aziel forfeits the battle!” Gabriel announced.
Daniel turned to Gabriel.
“W-what?”
It was clear that Gabriel and Daniel respected each other greatly.
Gabriel led Daniel off the stage and just like that, the battle ended..
“I’ll get you next time, Paris,” Daniel growled.
RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - CheetoBlader - Apr. 05, 2019
(Apr. 04, 2019 10:29 PM)Sir Saitama Wrote: Chapter 10 - The Winner’s Coronation! Pegasus vs Daemon!
Last time on Beyblade. Burst Zero! The clash between Paris and Daniel continues, as they battle it out! With the support of Pegasus, they discover their true potential!
“You mean to tell me.. this whole time, you haven’t been trying?” Paris felt as if Daniel launched Daemon into his stomach.
Another laugh broke out from the boy with red spiky hair.
“You think I’d seriously use my full power on someone like you?”
Paris tensely wrapped his fingers around Pegasus.
Daniel briefly glanced at Roan, “That’s what bladers like him are for.”
The referee pointed to the stadium.
“Ready, set!”
“Three!”
“Two!”
“One!”
“Let it rip!”
Immortal Pegasus warped through the outer ring of the stadium, outclassing Havoc Daemon in speed.
“What?” Daniel grit his teeth.
Immortal Pegasus made a sudden stop, and charged right through Havoc Daemon, the two attack types clashing.
Light and wind shot through the stadium as Pegasus couldn’t withstand the intensity. It slid into the stadium wall and rebounded off, with miraculous speed.
“Go now Pegasus! Show ‘em our Supernova Shoot!”
Immortal Pegasus glowed, racing through the stadium.
Pegasus’ speed was too much for Daemon as the dark bey was flung into the air.
Daniel didn’t display a single hint of perturbation, because he grinned menacingly.
“Rebirth Dive!” His voice echoed through the stadium, as Havoc Daemon arrowed downward, arriving onto the stadium’s surface.
Daemon blasted through Immortal Pegasus, its spring loaded wings gripping on.
“You survived round one. Let’s see if you can take round two!” Daniel boomed.
Immortal Pegasus was thrown into the stadium wall and back into the air by Daemon.
“You can do it, Pegasus! Immortal Starblast Attack!”
Pegasus performed the usual. It rained down onto Daemon, who steadily spun the other way.
“Starblast Attack didn’t bring Daemon into the air?” Aiga widened his eyes.
Daniel clenched his fists, the veins appearing throughout his skin.
“Why don’t you take on this? Demolish Break!” he snapped.
As Pegasus rode around the arena in a flower-pattern, Daemon retracted into its driver, Demolish, thus giving it a surge of speed.
Like lightning, too fast to be seen, Havoc Daemon jolted around the stadium, aligning perfectly with the ring that snaked through the stadium.
“Haaaah!” Daniel roared, as Daemon crashed heavily into Immortal Pegasus. Pegasus was trying its best not to fling into the wall.
Paris said confidently, “Immortal Slash!” Pegasus’ feathers lit up, as it whipped through Daemon, both beys getting knocked back.
Daemon and Pegasus had little to no stamina left. Paris thought of a risky move - one that would get Pegasus to Burst, or one that would snag themselves a point.
Paris hoped it was the latter. Immortal Pegasus’ feathers lit up again.
“Take him down! Immortal Slash!”
The crowd were shocked. Especially Daniel. Pegasus used its special move once more, and managed to throw Havoc Daemon out of the stadium, landing at Daniel’s feet.
“One point to Immortal Pegasus for an Over Finish! The score is now 2-1!” The referee announced.
Daniel gasped, then frowned.
“So what if you’re a worthy opponent? I’ll destroy you nonetheless!”
Paris was the definition of excitement. He leapt into the air, and smiled cheerfully.
“Ready, set!”
“Three!”
“Two!”
“One!”
“Let it rip!”
Havoc Daemon glowed up immediately.
“I’ll put everything I have into this attack! Rebound Uppercut!”
Its four spring loaded wings uppercutted Immortal Pegasus into the air, slamming it into the stadium wall.
Havoc Daemon pursued Pegasus, flipping it up, rocketing the opposing attack type into the air.
With one click gone, Immortal Pegasus made a solid recovery.
“Now! Immortal Starblast Attack!” Paris exclaimed.
Pegasus beamed onto Havoc Daemon, knocking both beys back.
“Crush him, Daemon! Demolish Break!”
Daemon retracted onto its Demolish driver, flashing around the arena.
Then, Pegasus lit up its feathers.
“Immortal Slash!”
Both beys drilled into each other, pressing endlessly. With three clicks gone from the two attack types, they suddenly burst.
“Simultaneous Burst Finish! No points!” The referee declared.
The next few battles were just the same, Pegasus using Immortal Slash and Daemon with Demolish Break.
Aiga, Toko, Taiki and Charles were all held to their seats. Even Roan never heard of such a move.
“Tenth battle!” The referee said.
“Twentieth battle!”
“Fiftieth battle!”
“Seventieth battle!”
Paris was exhausted from seventy-four battles. He wiped sweat from his face.
“Seventy-fifth battle!” The referee was clearly out of breath from announcing seventy five battles.
“Ready, set!”
“Three!”
“Two!”
“One!”
“Let it rip!”
Daniel howled in pain. His brother, Gabriel, leapt out of his seat and proceeded toward the stadium.
Both Pegasus and Daemon were flung into the air and burst.
“Stop! Stop the battle!” Gabriel shouted.
His brother looked much like Daniel. He picked up the three pieces to Havoc Daemon.
“Daniel Aziel forfeits the battle!” Gabriel announced.
Daniel turned to Gabriel.
“W-what?”
It was clear that Gabriel and Daniel respected each other greatly.
Gabriel led Daniel off the stage and just like that, the battle ended..
“I’ll get you next time, Paris,” Daniel growled.
I like how the battle was like Valt VS Free in BEYBLADE Burst God/Evolution! 
RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - Sir Saitama - Apr. 05, 2019
(Apr. 05, 2019 12:38 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote: (Apr. 04, 2019 10:29 PM)Sir Saitama Wrote: Chapter 10 - The Winner’s Coronation! Pegasus vs Daemon!
Last time on Beyblade. Burst Zero! The clash between Paris and Daniel continues, as they battle it out! With the support of Pegasus, they discover their true potential!
“You mean to tell me.. this whole time, you haven’t been trying?” Paris felt as if Daniel launched Daemon into his stomach.
Another laugh broke out from the boy with red spiky hair.
“You think I’d seriously use my full power on someone like you?”
Paris tensely wrapped his fingers around Pegasus.
Daniel briefly glanced at Roan, “That’s what bladers like him are for.”
The referee pointed to the stadium.
“Ready, set!”
“Three!”
“Two!”
“One!”
“Let it rip!”
Immortal Pegasus warped through the outer ring of the stadium, outclassing Havoc Daemon in speed.
“What?” Daniel grit his teeth.
Immortal Pegasus made a sudden stop, and charged right through Havoc Daemon, the two attack types clashing.
Light and wind shot through the stadium as Pegasus couldn’t withstand the intensity. It slid into the stadium wall and rebounded off, with miraculous speed.
“Go now Pegasus! Show ‘em our Supernova Shoot!”
Immortal Pegasus glowed, racing through the stadium.
Pegasus’ speed was too much for Daemon as the dark bey was flung into the air.
Daniel didn’t display a single hint of perturbation, because he grinned menacingly.
“Rebirth Dive!” His voice echoed through the stadium, as Havoc Daemon arrowed downward, arriving onto the stadium’s surface.
Daemon blasted through Immortal Pegasus, its spring loaded wings gripping on.
“You survived round one. Let’s see if you can take round two!” Daniel boomed.
Immortal Pegasus was thrown into the stadium wall and back into the air by Daemon.
“You can do it, Pegasus! Immortal Starblast Attack!”
Pegasus performed the usual. It rained down onto Daemon, who steadily spun the other way.
“Starblast Attack didn’t bring Daemon into the air?” Aiga widened his eyes.
Daniel clenched his fists, the veins appearing throughout his skin.
“Why don’t you take on this? Demolish Break!” he snapped.
As Pegasus rode around the arena in a flower-pattern, Daemon retracted into its driver, Demolish, thus giving it a surge of speed.
Like lightning, too fast to be seen, Havoc Daemon jolted around the stadium, aligning perfectly with the ring that snaked through the stadium.
“Haaaah!” Daniel roared, as Daemon crashed heavily into Immortal Pegasus. Pegasus was trying its best not to fling into the wall.
Paris said confidently, “Immortal Slash!” Pegasus’ feathers lit up, as it whipped through Daemon, both beys getting knocked back.
Daemon and Pegasus had little to no stamina left. Paris thought of a risky move - one that would get Pegasus to Burst, or one that would snag themselves a point.
Paris hoped it was the latter. Immortal Pegasus’ feathers lit up again.
“Take him down! Immortal Slash!”
The crowd were shocked. Especially Daniel. Pegasus used its special move once more, and managed to throw Havoc Daemon out of the stadium, landing at Daniel’s feet.
“One point to Immortal Pegasus for an Over Finish! The score is now 2-1!” The referee announced.
Daniel gasped, then frowned.
“So what if you’re a worthy opponent? I’ll destroy you nonetheless!”
Paris was the definition of excitement. He leapt into the air, and smiled cheerfully.
“Ready, set!”
“Three!”
“Two!”
“One!”
“Let it rip!”
Havoc Daemon glowed up immediately.
“I’ll put everything I have into this attack! Rebound Uppercut!”
Its four spring loaded wings uppercutted Immortal Pegasus into the air, slamming it into the stadium wall.
Havoc Daemon pursued Pegasus, flipping it up, rocketing the opposing attack type into the air.
With one click gone, Immortal Pegasus made a solid recovery.
“Now! Immortal Starblast Attack!” Paris exclaimed.
Pegasus beamed onto Havoc Daemon, knocking both beys back.
“Crush him, Daemon! Demolish Break!”
Daemon retracted onto its Demolish driver, flashing around the arena.
Then, Pegasus lit up its feathers.
“Immortal Slash!”
Both beys drilled into each other, pressing endlessly. With three clicks gone from the two attack types, they suddenly burst.
“Simultaneous Burst Finish! No points!” The referee declared.
The next few battles were just the same, Pegasus using Immortal Slash and Daemon with Demolish Break.
Aiga, Toko, Taiki and Charles were all held to their seats. Even Roan never heard of such a move.
“Tenth battle!” The referee said.
“Twentieth battle!”
“Fiftieth battle!”
“Seventieth battle!”
Paris was exhausted from seventy-four battles. He wiped sweat from his face.
“Seventy-fifth battle!” The referee was clearly out of breath from announcing seventy five battles.
“Ready, set!”
“Three!”
“Two!”
“One!”
“Let it rip!”
Daniel howled in pain. His brother, Gabriel, leapt out of his seat and proceeded toward the stadium.
Both Pegasus and Daemon were flung into the air and burst.
“Stop! Stop the battle!” Gabriel shouted.
His brother looked much like Daniel. He picked up the three pieces to Havoc Daemon.
“Daniel Aziel forfeits the battle!” Gabriel announced.
Daniel turned to Gabriel.
“W-what?”
It was clear that Gabriel and Daniel respected each other greatly.
Gabriel led Daniel off the stage and just like that, the battle ended..
“I’ll get you next time, Paris,” Daniel growled.
I like how the battle was like Valt VS Free in BEYBLADE Burst God/Evolution!
Thanks so much! It really was a great episode.
RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - Sir Saitama - Apr. 08, 2019
Chapter 11 - Burn! Torch Ragnaruk!
Last time on Beyblade Burst Zero! Paris holds his own against Daniel after seventy-five battles, and surprisingly, the dragon blader forfeits!
Paris leaned against the railing that curved around Beigoma Academy’s rooftop. His blue jacket and orange shirt rippled in the wind.
The afternoon breeze was soothing, much to Paris’ liking, after the exhausting morning he encountered.
“Oh, come on!” Taiki screamed in frustration. “Why can’t I beat you?”
The Crimson Nova retorted, “Because you can’t!”
Whilst those two bickered, Paris chuckled slightly. Charles walked over to him with a bottle of water.
“Here, I figured you’d need it.”
“Thanks.” Paris chugged more than half of the bottle, and sighed.
“Hm?” Charles raised an eyebrow. “What’s wrong?”
Although Paris would’ve liked to say nothing, Charles was a good listener.
“Just today’s battle. It was really unexpected,” Paris informed.
Charles nodded. “I expect the unexpected. Sort of my precept now.”
Paris shrugged. “I guess, but still. I technically didn’t beat him.”
Charles stood up. “Paris. I understand you’re shocked, and so am I. You’ve only been blading for two weeks, so you’re more than likely to meet aliens, possessed people and people who shout too much.”
“What?” Taiki yelled.
Paris giggled at the thought of that. It never really occurred to him that these things happened.
“Gee, I sound like a teacher,” Charles said.
“Mhm,” Paris agreed, “But it’s nice having someone to talk to. I appreciate it.”
Meanwhile, Toko had managed to rocket Theseus out of the stadium. The attack type bounced along the tiles of the rooftop, eventually exiting through the stairwell.
“Ahh! No!” Taiki shouted, as he bolted after his bey.
The sound of clinking stopped. Stopped by something.. or worse.. someone.
Taiki backed away in fear as they hid behind Paris.
“Why am I your guard?” Paris scowled.
Suddenly, the person who held Theseus walked up the stairs.
“Hahaha! You should’ve seen your faces! Priceless!” The voice laughed, as he handed Taiki his Adamantine Theseus.
Toko’s face immediately lit up as soon as he recognized the figure.
“R-R-Ryota?”
“That’s right! Ryota Kurogami!”
Oddly, on one of his hands were a puppet, probably for ventriloquism.
“Who’s Ryota?” Aiga asked.
“I’m Daigo’s brother. Rantaro sadly quit Beyblade, so he handed me his Blaze Ragnaruk.”
Taiki stifled a laugh. “So your bey is Blaze Ragnaruk?”
“Nope! Torch Ragnaruk!” Ryota smiled.
Ryota recounted on how Rantaro had entrusted him with Torch Ragnaruk. He sort of looked up to him as a mentor almost as much as Ken or Daigo.
“So, Paris,” Ryota cleared his voice, “You’re up against Roan tomorrow?”
Paris nodded. “It’s gonna be hard.”
“Don’t say that!” Ryota snapped. “It’s gonna be a tough one, yeah, but you’re gonna have heaps of fun!”
Paris smiled. “You’re right. Thanks.”
“I like this new guy,” Taiki added.
“Welcome to the BeyClub,” Aiga introduced everyone.
“Thanks guys!” Somebody was talking, with a brash voice. It wasn’t Ryota, but instead, his puppets.
Inside one of the puppet’s mouths was a bey. Ryota grabbed it and revealed it to the BeyClub.
“This is Torch Ragnaruk,” he said. Torch Ragnaruk had the usual Ragnaruk design, however there were two large curves on its layer with a slit with two rugged plastic wings on each one.
On the side of the layer were two extra metal wings, stabilising the bey.
The disc was 21, which was triangular shaped and had 7 protrusions on each side.
The frame, Armor, had an eight bladed free-spinning ring, whilst the driver, Propeller, was a mix of Revolve and Flugel, except the spikes were able to move.
“Cool!” Paris exclaimed. “And this is Immortal Pegasus. Let’s battle!”
Toko said, “Uh, Paris, if you can’t beat the BeyClub all at once, then you have zero chance against Roan.”
Paris nodded. “Okay, then. How about you Ryota?”
“I’ll sit this one out,” he replied.
The five bladers stood around the colossal stadium and prepared their launchers.
“Ready, set!” Ryota hosted.
“Three!”
“Two!”
“One!”
“Let it rip!”
All four beys charged at Immortal Pegasus at once, flinging it into the air. Fortunately, Pegasus gilded downward.
“My turn! Immortal Starblast Attack!” Paris exclaimed, as Pegasus’ avatar shot a beam of lightning from its horn.
Immortal Pegasus landed on the stadium’s surface, shifting its weight in front.
“Again! Supernova Shoot!” Paris shouted, as Pegasus charged through all four beys, dust covering the entire arena.
As soon as the dust cleared, the entire BeyClub was in utter shock.
“What?” They cried in unison, as Paris leapt into the air in joy.
All four beys had come apart, immediately burst.
Ryota shot Paris a thumbs up as he hopped off the bench.
“Nice job,” Ryota praised. “But you’re gonna have to take me down!”
Paris smiled, “You’re on!” Even after seventy-five battles, a battle royale and another challenge, he’d barely broken a sweat.
Ryota held his launcher out. “Torch Ragnaruk will take you down!”
“Ready, set!”
“Three!”
“Two!”
“One!”
“Let it rip!”
Torch Ragnaruk held its ground in the center, as Pegasus came rushing.
“Immortal Slash!” Paris commanded, as Ragnaruk was thrown into the air, landing at Ryota’s feet.
“One point for an Over Finish,” Aiga announced.
Ryota smiled. “Gotta hand it to you, that was impressive. Keep it up in your battle and you’ll win for sure!”
Paris liked hearing the word ‘win.’
“Sure thing!” He said, preparing for round two.
“Ready, set!”
“Three!”
“Two!”
“One!”
“Let it rip!”
The start of the second battle was a repeat of the first. Pegasus dived in, one of its three feathers glowing.
“Immortal Slash!”
Immortal Pegasus charged at high speeds, and before it could obliterate Ragnaruk, Ryota shouted:
“Go! Torch Hurricane!”
A vortex formed around Ragnaruk as Pegasus was thrown off tracks. It slammed into the stadium’s walls, being drained of stamina.
Then, like a black hole, Ragnaruk drew Pegasus closer and closer to the vortex.
“No! Hold on Pegasus!” Paris commanded. But it was clearly too late.
Pegasus entered Ragnaruk’s maelstrom and shot into the air, landing at Paris’ feet.
“One point for an Over Finish,” Aiga announced. “The score’s 1-1.”
Then the third round came along.
“Let it rip!” The two bladers cried in unison, as this time, Paris wasn’t holding back.
“Supernova Shoot!” Paris immediately shouted, as the winged-horse beamed through Ragnaruk, knocking it back.
Paris wiped a trickle of sweat from his forehead. “That’s not everything I have! Immortal Slash!”
Paris put his full power into this final attack. Pegasus rode over to Ragnaruk and before it could deal its attack, Ryota shouted:
“End this! True Ragnaruk Storm!”
Ragnaruk’s vortex returned, however instead of retreating to the middle of the stadium, it charged right through Pegasus, tilting on its Propeller driver.
“Go!” Ryota and Paris shouted in unison, as Pegasus and Ragnaruk collided, dust and light expelling from the stadium.
After the dust had cleared, Immortal Pegasus lay lifeless on the stadium’s floor. Ragnaruk remained spinning smoothly.
“One point to Torch Ragnaruk for a Spin Finish. The score is 2-1!” Aiga exclaimed.
“Ryota wins the battle,” Charles added.
“Oh man!” Paris fell to the floor with his hands over his head.
A few hours later, everyone had gathered at their favourite building.
“Ladies and gentlemen! We welcome you to a battle that’s going to break many records! In our red corner, we have Roan Jamieson!” Hanami announced.
Roan entered from one door. He proudly waved to the crowd.
“And in the blue corner, we have Paris Hagane!” Hanami shouted.
Paris took multiple deep breaths and gulped.
“I’m ready,” he said, as Roan and Paris both stood parallel to each other on either end of the stadium.
Sorry for the late post guys! I’m wondering if anybody would like a list of beys?
RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - Dt20000 - Apr. 08, 2019
Sure, and it’s not late if you look at my chapter schedule
RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - BurningSands - Apr. 09, 2019
OH GODS
im so happy that Ryota appeared. Wished he was in Turbo instead of Ranjiro
RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - CheetoBlader - Apr. 09, 2019
Ryota! YAY! Also sure!
RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - MrBlade - Apr. 09, 2019
Character Name: Hiryu Roku (Fun Fact: Roku means Six in Japanese :p )
HIryu is a smart, mysterious and powerful blader who uses the left-spinning Balance-Type bey Hex Hydra 10Expand Destroy'. A bey with 6 blades that can either go out for Attack Mode, or go in for Defense/Stamina Mode.
Bey: Hex Hydra 10Expand Destroy' (Balance-Type)
Moves:
Hexa Blast - Hydra maintains the center as a hexagon shape is created around Hydra but mainly the opponent bey. If the opponent bey comes in contact with the hexagon walls, it will be pushed around. At the same time, the walls of the hexagon will close in until it reaches near Hex Hydra where the opponent bey is attacked and causing it to burst. (This move is basically a mix of Dead Hades' Dead Gravity as the wall is created around, and Flame Libra's Inferno Blast since the bey is forced closer to Hydra.
Hex Destruction - Hydra's Blades go in Attack Mode as Hydra throws a barrage of attacks at the opponent, also because of the Destroy' Driver could cause the opponent's bey to destabilize.
Hex Guard - Hydra's Blades go in Defense/Stamina Mode as it defends itself from coming attacks and makes sure it stays up.
Hex Drive - normally used in Defense/Stamina Mode, Hydra glides around the stadium gaining more/maintaining Stamina.
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RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - Sir Saitama - Apr. 09, 2019
(Apr. 09, 2019 1:38 AM)MrBlade Wrote: Character Name: Hiryu Roku (Fun Fact: Roku means Six in Japanese :p )
HIryu is a smart, mysterious and powerful blader who uses the left-spinning Balance-Type bey Hex Hydra 10Expand Destroy'. A bey with 6 blades that can either go out for Attack Mode, or go in for Defense/Stamina Mode.
Bey: Hex Hydra 10Expand Destroy' (Balance-Type)
Moves:
Hexa Blast - Hydra maintains the center as a hexagon shape is created around Hydra but mainly the opponent bey. If the opponent bey comes in contact with the hexagon walls, it will be pushed around. At the same time, the walls of the hexagon will close in until it reaches near Hex Hydra where the opponent bey is attacked and causing it to burst. (This move is basically a mix of Dead Hades' Dead Gravity as the wall is created around, and Flame Libra's Inferno Blast since the bey is forced closer to Hydra.
Hex Destruction - Hydra's Blades go in Attack Mode as Hydra throws a barrage of attacks at the opponent, also because of the Destroy' Driver could cause the opponent's bey to destabilize.
Hex Guard - Hydra's Blades go in Defense/Stamina Mode as it defends itself from coming attacks and makes sure it stays up.
Hex Drive - normally used in Defense/Stamina Mode, Hydra glides around the stadium gaining more/maintaining Stamina.
pls add me
Alright, I’ll add you into the story. :Welcome aboard!
List of Beys: Immortal Pegasus 00’ Galaxy Omega
Adamantine Theseus 50 Crown Ultimate Reboot’
Ultra Centurion Penta Five Revival
Flash Trident 0 Barrier Dome
Havoc Daemon 13 Demolish
Smash Revenge ?? ??
Torch Ragnaruk 21 Armor Propeller
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