Total control (now accepting character requests!) [OMG over 1,000 views!]

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RE: Total control (now accepting character requests!) [beyblade story] - Infinity Lazer - Dec. 07, 2013

awesome DK oh and character name Infinity Beyblade Infinity Orion B: D

RE: Total control (now accepting character requests!) [beyblade story] - DRAGON KING - Dec. 09, 2013

Ok, y'all all be in the next chapter. Sorry for the lack of new chapters, I will be writing more.

RE: Total control (now accepting character requests!) [beyblade story] - RagerBlade - Dec. 10, 2013

The stories heating up! Can't wait for the next chapter!

RE: Total control (now accepting character requests!) [beyblade story] - DRAGON KING - Dec. 13, 2013

Finally a new chapter is up! I hope u guys still read this !

@ Infinity lazer I will do ur character in the next chapter or chapter after that.

RE: Total control (now accepting character requests!) [beyblade story] - â˜…WindStarEliteâ˜… - Dec. 13, 2013

I really like this so far its getting good and starting to show rising action Can't wait to see the Climax

RE: Total control (now accepting character requests!) [beyblade story] - Ryukiba - Dec. 13, 2013

I'm loving this story so far! Keep it up! Grin

RE: Total control (now accepting character requests!) [beyblade story] - Resonated_ - Dec. 14, 2013

This story seems pretty good.
I guess I'll make a character.
Name: Joseph Thomas
Bey: Revizer GolemC105B
Gender: Male
Personality Confused

adistic, not exactly nice but a fair person.
Alignment: Chaotic Neutral
Other info: Owns a pirate ship (A crew of about 25), fights with a standard rapier and flintlock pistol.
Appearance: Dark brown skin, brown eyes, semi-long pitch black hair that slightly covers his left eye,wears puffy white shirt under a grey vest, blue jeans, and black boots.

RE: Total control (now accepting character requests!) [beyblade story] - DRAGON KING - Dec. 14, 2013

Sorry I can't use that character, maybe u could choose another?

RE: Total control (now accepting character requests!) [beyblade story] - DRAGON KING - Dec. 16, 2013

The next chapter is in the OP!

RE: Total control (now accepting character requests!) [beyblade story] - Airus - Dec. 17, 2013

I like how you used my character, but one thing you could improve is the strength of my character? My single special move is Bandit Crusher. Can't wait for the next chapter!

RE: Total control (now accepting character requests!) [beyblade story] - DRAGON KING - Dec. 17, 2013

Well, they had just got the beys and hadn't mastered them yet Smile

RE: Total control (now accepting character requests!) [beyblade story] - â˜…WindStarEliteâ˜… - Dec. 17, 2013

I like the new chapter very interesting and excitement everywhere

RE: Total control (now accepting character requests!) [beyblade story] - Ryukiba - Dec. 17, 2013

ugh! My chracter's kinda girly! Tongue_out

to be honest i love mud! Ha!XD

RE: Total control (now accepting character requests!) [beyblade story] - DRAGON KING - Dec. 17, 2013

Ryukiba Ok i'll fix that in the next chapter XD

EDIT: we're getting close to 1,000 views! I gotta keep this story alive!

RE: Total control (now accepting character requests!) [beyblade story] - DRAGON KING - Dec. 18, 2013

Sorry for the double post, but the OP is updated with the next chapter!

Spoiler: the next chapters are gonna be heated up to max awesomeness!!!!!

RE: Total control (now accepting character requests!) [beyblade story] - Themeeny7 - Dec. 18, 2013

Bey name: Ultimate Meteo L-Drago Assault BD145 LRF

Character name: Morgan Asylum

Character Gender: Female

Personality: Although she's loving, caring, and sweet on the inside; her evil Ryuuga-ish ego causes her to have no sympathy and act like a total jerk. She will help if it is truly necessary.

Bio: The most beautiful woman to ever hold a beyblade, Morgan is a 15 year old beyblade genius whose origins, family, and FORMERLY her bey was unknown. She will battle anything, and if she wanted to her L-Drago could eat the whole universe in a single bite, and enjoys battling every trainer she can find.

Alignment(Such as good evil neutral): She is evil and everyone thinks she is evil, but in the name of good.

Extra Info: She doesn't like public battles, she often stealths her way into places and challenges trainers in a stealthy way.

You can decide the rest

RE: Total control (now accepting character requests!) [beyblade story] - â˜…WindStarEliteâ˜… - Dec. 18, 2013

(Dec. 18, 2013 4:54 AM)Themeeny7 Wrote: Bey name: Ultimate Meteo L-Drago Assault BD145 LRF

Character name: Morgan Asylum

Character Gender: Female

Personality: Although she's loving, caring, and sweet on the inside; her evil Ryuuga-ish ego causes her to have no sympathy and act like a total jerk. She will help if it is truly necessary.

Bio: The most beautiful woman to ever hold a beyblade, Morgan is a 15 year old beyblade genius whose origins, family, and FORMERLY her bey was unknown. She will battle anything, and if she wanted to her L-Drago could eat the whole universe in a single bite, and enjoys battling every trainer she can find.

Alignment(Such as good evil neutral): She is evil and everyone thinks she is evil, but in the name of good.

Extra Info: She doesn't like public battles, she often stealths her way into places and challenges trainers in a stealthy way.

You can decide the rest

Btw you said Trainer instead of blazer I'll bold it so you know where-Themeeny// Amazing chapter 2 your doing good I promise to. Upload some chapters over the break I've been busy And gotta memorize an 45 page script in two weeks -DK

RE: Total control (now accepting character requests!) [beyblade story] - DRAGON KING - Dec. 18, 2013

Thanks! I will try to upload as much as I can! I can't wait to read the next chapter of ur story!

EDIT: BTW it was chapter 3. Smile

RE: Total control (now accepting character requests!) [beyblade story] - â˜…WindStarEliteâ˜… - Dec. 18, 2013

Sorry I mistaken it for 2 I was looking at the two in part 2 lol And I'll post chapter ? Idk I forgot I believe 8 in ny story Saturday Its gonna be A big bang 3 pages long.

RE: Total control (now accepting character requests!) [beyblade story] - Airus - Dec. 26, 2013

(Dec. 17, 2013 1:11 AM)DRAGON KING Wrote: Well, they had just got the beys and hadn't mastered them yet

OK! Also in the characters can you capitalize the J in Jake and the T in Tyoka?
Thanks in advance

RE: Total control (now accepting character requests!) [beyblade story] - DRAGON KING - Dec. 26, 2013

(Dec. 26, 2013 9:06 PM)Crax686 Wrote:
(Dec. 17, 2013 1:11 AM)DRAGON KING Wrote: Well, they had just got the beys and hadn't mastered them yet
OK! Also in the characters can you capitalize the J in Jake and the T in Tyoka?
Thanks in advance

i could try to remember, but don't get mad if I forget to capitalize it XD

RE: Total control (now accepting character requests!) [beyblade story] - Airus - Dec. 26, 2013

And also Bandit Ifrit was made using the Ifrit wheel Zyro lost on a training journey he never came back from and the latest model of the Bandit wheel and Dark Night Horuseus for Tyoka was found in Africa when Nile had dropped Horuseus when he had a heart attack.
It doesn't matter, me and MinecraftAdict didn't explain that, just letting you know.

RE: Total control (now accepting character requests!) [beyblade story] - Infinity Lazer - Dec. 27, 2013

uhh which chapter am I in? cna't read it al now gtg so uh just tell me Grin

and Infinity his personality a combination of CHris and Ryuga mysterious boastful and powerful Grin

and always take=ing out suprises in battle Grin

RE: Total control (now accepting character requests!) [beyblade story] - DRAGON KING - Dec. 27, 2013

(Dec. 27, 2013 4:15 AM)Infinity Lazer Wrote: uhh which chapter am I in? cna't read it al now gtg so uh just tell me and Infinity his personality a combination of CHris and Ryuga mysterious boastful and powerful and always take=ing out suprises in battle

Ur already in the latest chapter, he is the guy that works for onyx. Please guys, stop changing/adding more to characters after I already introduced them XD

RE: Total control (now accepting character requests!) [beyblade story] - Bularieleone - Dec. 27, 2013

Is it too late to make requests for characters?