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RE: {STORY}In Time (Beyblade Version) Chap 11 added, and taking Character Request - EarthEagle2813 - Aug. 20, 2012
That dog officially scares me
RE: {STORY}In Time (Beyblade Version) Chap 11 added, and taking Character Request - ElementalDude97 - Aug. 21, 2012
cool my characters bey is a new and improve pegasus(Star Light Pegasus!!!)
RE: {STORY}In Time (Beyblade Version) Chap 11 added, and taking Character Request - wingedpegasus - Aug. 21, 2012
Epic story!I saw the movie In Time too!
RE: {STORY}In Time (Beyblade Version) Chapter 13 added, and taking Character Request - ElementalDude97 - Aug. 22, 2012
you should make the chapters longer!you always leave me more curious than before!
RE: {STORY}In Time (Beyblade Version) Chapter 13 added, and taking Character Request - BeatFox - Aug. 22, 2012
im glad to read chapter 13
RE: {STORY}In Time (Beyblade Version) Chapter 14 added, and taking Character Request - BeatFox - Aug. 22, 2012
SPOILER ALERT i did not see that comin, soko is dead
RE: {STORY}In Time (Beyblade Version) Chapter 14 added, and taking Character Request - EarthEagle2813 - Aug. 22, 2012
Poor Soko
RE: {STORY}In Time (Beyblade Version) Chapter 14 added, and taking Character Request - BeatFox - Aug. 22, 2012
This is story is great but to the people reading it do you ithink its the best story out right now
i do
RE: {STORY}In Time (Beyblade Version) Chapter 15 added, and taking Character Request - MasterBlader-X - Aug. 23, 2012
Thanks BeatFox, and if my story is not the best i'm okay with that. I just like righting stories people like.
RE: {STORY}In Time (Beyblade Version) Chapter 15 added, and taking Character Request - Phantom #2 - Aug. 23, 2012
nice story
Anyways i have a character request
Name:Marcus
Bey:Burn Bull 90EWD
Age :11
How I look: Yellow-Spiky Hair,White hoodie,Yellow t-shirt,white shorts,white cap,gray shoes and kinda short
Special move:Red horn uppercut,Burning Stampede,Flaming Horn Strike
How i act :Annoying,cheerful,determined
RE: {STORY}In Time (Beyblade Version) Chapter 15 added, and taking Character Request - MasterBlader-X - Aug. 23, 2012
I really like this character request for some reason?
RE: {STORY}In Time (Beyblade Version) Chapter 15 added, and taking Character Request - BeatFox - Aug. 23, 2012
i promised i wouldnt cry
RE: {STORY}In Time (Beyblade Version) Chapter 15 added, and taking Character Request - MasterBlader-X - Aug. 23, 2012
I know. It is sad
RE: {STORY}In Time (Beyblade Version) Chapter 15 added, and taking Character Request - ElementalDude97 - Aug. 23, 2012
Why you killed Soko for...
RE: {STORY}In Time (Beyblade Version) Chapter 15 added, and taking Character Request - MasterBlader-X - Aug. 24, 2012
Because it got far into the story and a main character didn't die yet. Plus when i created Soko I already had it in my mind to kill him. Oh and every night i'll right a chapter.
RE: {STORY}In Time (Beyblade Version) Chapter 15 added, and taking Character Request - ElementalDude97 - Aug. 24, 2012
(Aug. 24, 2012 1:15 AM)MasterBlader-X Wrote: Because it got far into the story and a main character didn't die yet. Plus when i created Soko I already had it in my mind to kill him. Oh and every night i'll right a chapter.
Oh!ok cool make a new chap
this story is epic so far!!!
RE: {STORY}In Time (Beyblade Version) Chapter 15 added, and taking Character Request - MasterBlader-X - Aug. 24, 2012
I will later
RE: {STORY}In Time (Beyblade Version) Chapter 15 added, and taking Character Request - Phantom #2 - Aug. 24, 2012
(Aug. 23, 2012 11:21 AM)Phantom #2 Wrote: nice storyOops just for got a detail:
Anyways i have a character request
Name:Marcus
Bey:Burn Bull 90EWD
Age :11
How I look: Yellow-Spiky Hair,White hoodie,Yellow t-shirt,white shorts,white cap,gray shoes and kinda short
Special move:Red horn uppercut,Burning Stampede,Flaming Horn Strike
How i act :Annoying,cheerful,determined
Red horn uppercut:hits the bey at the spintrack
Burning Stampede:bull charges at the opponent and will make an explosion
Flaming horn strike:Bull's beast will come out with fiery horns and charging at the bey and it is faster than burning stampede but the damage is lower
Edit:Brown Yellow-Spiky Hair
RE: {STORY}In Time (Beyblade Version) Chapter 16 added, and taking Character Request - ElementalDude97 - Aug. 24, 2012
This chapter is one of my favorites!Karuo is grand Leone!just epic!
RE: {STORY}In Time (Beyblade Version) Chapter 16 added, and taking Character Request - MasterBlader-X - Aug. 24, 2012
Just wait till Will unleash Karuo's true power. Now that's a chapter i can't wait to write.
RE: {STORY}In Time (Beyblade Version) Chapter 16 added, and taking Character Request - ElementalDude97 - Aug. 24, 2012
(Aug. 24, 2012 6:24 AM)MasterBlader-X Wrote: Just wait till Will unleash Karuo's true power. Now that's a chapter i can't wait to write.
Awesome!!!!tomorrow I will do mines too!
RE: {STORY}In Time (Beyblade Version) Chapter 16 added, and taking Character Request - MasterBlader-X - Aug. 24, 2012
Should I name the chapters? I was thinking of it, but i'll let the readers decided.
RE: {STORY}In Time (Beyblade Version) Chapter 16 added, and taking Character Request - BeatFox - Aug. 24, 2012
u have made so many chapters i dont think its that important now that u name chapters
RE: {STORY}In Time (Beyblade Version) Chapter 16 added, and taking Character Request - MasterBlader-X - Aug. 24, 2012
I kinda think it should. You no to help the new readers get a hint on what they're about to read.
RE: {STORY}In Time (Beyblade Version) Chapter 16 added, and taking Character Request - BeatFox - Aug. 24, 2012
yeah i agree with that