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RE: Beywheelz story (Check post #35 on the second page!) - anti Ray - Aug. 19, 2012
Cool story! I'm not just saying this cuz i'm your sister, its actually good XD Keep it up!
RE: Beywheelz story (Check post #35 on the second page!) - Dual - Aug. 19, 2012
Thanks! Chapter 16 is up as promised!
RE: Beywheelz story (Check post #35 on the second page!) - Dual - Aug. 27, 2012
Chapter 18 is up! Wait...so is chapter 17! Oops XD
RE: Beywheelz story (Check post #35 on the second page!) - Katsuya - Aug. 30, 2012
Ryan becoming soft lmao. Keep up the good work!
RE: Beywheelz story (Check post #35 on the second page!) - Dual - Sep. 08, 2012
Sorry for the lack of chapters lately. All i have is my xyboard (for all you who dont know, its like an i pad). And i dont type on it because it is hard and the story will turn out bad with tons of mistakes.
RE: Beywheelz story (Check post #35 on the second page!) - kaihiwatari5673 - Sep. 08, 2012
Perfect story!!!
RE: Beywheelz story (Check post #35 on the second page!) - Dual - Sep. 08, 2012
Thanks! Still cant make any new chapters but the characters are still taking questions.
RE: Beywheelz story (Check post #35 on the second page!) - Dual - Sep. 10, 2012
Chapter 19 is finally up! Sorry its kinda short. Chapter 20 might be up as early as...half an hour!
RE: Beywheelz story (Check post #35 on the second page!) - Dual - Sep. 12, 2012
Okay, so its not half an hour but chapter 20 is up!
RE: Beywheelz story (Check post #35 on the second page!) - Driger Kai - Sep. 16, 2012
I just started reading this, here's what I have to say:
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RE: Beywheelz story (Check post #35 on the second page!) - Dual - Sep. 16, 2012
Thanks! To be honest, i thought this story would turn out terrible and no one would like it. Now i am happy to announce this story will have a sequel!
RE: Beywheelz story (Check post #35 on the second page!) - Driger Kai - Sep. 16, 2012
I'm now on chapter 20! EPIC!!! Also, you should make the character charts more detailed, like their design, and good stuff like that. Dang... Since you haven't been writing, I'll just read it again.
RE: Beywheelz story (Check post #35 on the second page!) - Dual - Oct. 01, 2012
Chapter 21 is up! I just had to add that tfs reference in there.
RE: Beywheelz story (Check post #35 on the second page!) - Driger Kai - Oct. 01, 2012
Nice! I liked the Froot Loops thing. Keep it bro! I cant believe how dumb I was for voting the second....
RE: Beywheelz story (Check post #35 on the second page!) - Dual - Oct. 01, 2012
Thanks! If all works out, I should have chapter 22 up by tomorrow. Just a side note, this is gonna be a very long story. They havent even finished the city championships and if the Neo-Knights keep winning, there will probably 70+ chapters! Ok maybe im over exaggerating but i'll try to speed things up.
RE: Beywheelz story (Check post #35 on the second page!) - Dual - Oct. 01, 2012
Chapter 22 is up!
RE: Beywheelz story (Check post #35 on the second page!) - blade2113 - Oct. 03, 2012
Better then regular beywheelz show you should go on air
RE: Beywheelz story (Check post #35 on the second page!) - Dual - Oct. 03, 2012
Haha that would me nice
Chapter 23 should be up after school.
RE: Beywheelz story (Check post #35 on the second page!) - Dual - Oct. 15, 2012
Ok so not exactly after school...but heres chapter 23!
RE: Beywheelz story (Check post #35 on the second page!) - Driger Kai - Oct. 15, 2012
Its going pretty good! Keep it up!
RE: Beywheelz story (Check post #35 on the second page!) - Dual - Oct. 15, 2012
Thanks! If you have any suggestions, please tell me!
RE: Beywheelz story (Check post #35 on the second page!) - bladeshredder02 - Oct. 15, 2012
When i started reading it i was confused i mean dude how did he get in the tournament really i would never do that.
RE: Beywheelz story (Check post #35 on the second page!) - Dual - Oct. 15, 2012
What are you talking about? There was a qualifying tournament that everyone is invited to. He won. So he qualified for cities. Not that complicated. And I wouldn't be so quick to criticize if I were you. The only story I have seen of yours was about 5 sentences and got closed. And please read the whole story or at least a decent amount of it before voting. You shouldn't judge a book by its cover (or, as the case may be, its first chapter).
RE: Beywheelz story (Check post #35 on the second page!) - Dual - Oct. 15, 2012
Chapter 24 is up! Sorry its a bit short.
RE: Beywheelz story (Check post #35 on the second page!) - Dual - Oct. 18, 2012
Chapter 25 is up! Sorry for the abrupt ending but I had to go somewhere and couldn't save the story.