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RE: The World Spins like a Bey [Bey Story] - RowDog - Jun. 18, 2011
1. I wouldn't think of a tower to be 105, I was thinking more 240!
2. A tower doesn't sound like an attack type.
RE: The World Spins like a Bey [Bey Story] - Ninja Crab - Jun. 18, 2011
ok i'll change it to stamina
RE: The World Spins like a Bey [Bey Story] - RowDog - Jun. 18, 2011
Ha, I was thinking defence with an attack type quality that you'll see when you read it.
Chapter 4 out!
When I first thought of this story I just thought the title was a cool concept. Then I though "Carp! how the hell am I going to get that title into the story?" Well here it is.
"We are the World Spinners"
RE: The World Spins like a Bey [Bey Story] - SpiffyStu - Jun. 19, 2011
(Jun. 07, 2011 10:03 AM)RowDog Wrote: I also need mammoths blader and his/her details. That bey can go in the Arctic team.Blader name: Matthew Breakal. ( But everyone calls him matty B).
Blader details: He is 17 and was rased in an orphanage. When he was 13 he ran away from the orphanage and lived with a couple of his friends in the Arctic. He has a very serious nature and is an unbelievable defence blader.
Special move: Avalanche stampede.
RE: The World Spins like a Bey [Bey Story] - Ninja Crab - Jun. 20, 2011
(Jun. 16, 2011 8:14 PM)BillyBlast Wrote: THIS IS A AWESOME STORY its awesome i added backround music while reading if anyone cares like the original beyblade adding Music This is truly awesome if anyone cares heres the Music http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SPBrmgDpi2I
OK why does everybody have the Hoobastank song out of control? was it only just discovered i known this song for 3 years!
RE: The World Spins like a Bey [Bey Story] - faissaloo - Jun. 21, 2011
nice story and I have a character for you:
Country Character is from: Algeria
Name:faissal
gender:boy
Age:10
Personality: a bit strange and
Bey : metal wheel:Green clear wheel:Fox spin track:eeg145(eternal engine gear 145 more info )
performance tip:MQ2(metal quake [version 2)
Bey Type: stamina
Special Move: hunt(engine gear kicks in and blade jumps landing on opponent causing damage to the face bolt)
Physical Description:
eeg145:eeg145(eternal engine gear ) because it is about time, it is eternal because it can be solar powered with the part that attaches to the performance tip being motorized, I want it to be 145 so it is not completely unbeatable.
MQ2 looks like this:[Image: Capture-1.png]
fox looks like it has two foxes ears poking out
and green looks very round with two small blades and also this wheel is very thick.
RE: The World Spins like a Bey [Bey Story] - BeyScorcher - Jun. 21, 2011
Nice story dude, this is cool. Gj.
RE: The World Spins like a Bey [Bey Story] - Septentrione - Jun. 26, 2011
(Jun. 07, 2011 11:00 AM)XwailingX Wrote: Hey great story, great detail and extensive storyline...
Anyway, can I give a character?
From: Greece, but nationality: Filipino
Name and Gender: Kyle Saavedra
courge Castor DF145EWDFace Motif: Castor,a scarred face with 3 swords in the background. Castor is the other half of the Gemini twins. The other being Pollux
Clear Wheel: Castor, Has a rugged square-like perimeter. Colored Black with white decals.There are 4 blades along the border of the Castor Clear Wheel.
Metal Wheel: Scourge, Has two semi-circular sides with 3 bumps on each side and it has 2 Larger Bumps like in the Mercury Metal
Bey Type: Stamina
Special Moves: Scourge's Conviction,Ancient Storm
Scourge's Conviction: Castor will be covered in a sharp aura and then hits the other bey with blinding speed. Castor goes uncontrollable after the attack
Ancient Storm: Castor makes a storm that will slash the other bey multiple times
Personality: Hardworking, Humble, Passionate about his goals,dependable,even though he's Filipino,he speaks great English
Physical Desc.: Has Black hair,Dark Brown eyes, Tanned complexion but not very brown,wears a Blue T-Shirt and white Camo pants. Wears sandals.
Yep that's about it
RE: The World Spins like a Bey [Bey Story] - TenshouTsubasa - Jun. 26, 2011
Ok,I think you should not accept character requests(if you don't have enough characters,ignore it.).
Once you start Character Requests,Those members just keep on sending requests like shotguns,
shooting every story like mad.(Some character requests I have seen for many times.)
Please,if you want your character enter someone's story, please make some new characters or it will make readers sick.
RE: The World Spins like a Bey [Bey Story] - Iakou - Jun. 30, 2011
Heh, you should totally use this song for your story, i was just finding songs to use in my story when i found this and thought it would be perfect for you http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=049mfd8bPdE&feature=related
RE: The World Spins like a Bey [Bey Story] - Ninja Crab - Jul. 03, 2011
When is the next chapter? XD
RE: The World Spins like a Bey [Bey Story] - Minho - Jul. 18, 2011
whens chapter 5?
RE: The World Spins like a Bey [Bey Story] - comeaujk - Jul. 18, 2011
character request
Country:Not on a team but one of the best unknown bladers in USA
Name:Unknown when first met but they learn his name is John Jones
Bey:Metal Fox GB145 WDS
WDS is Wide Defence with a sharp tip and made of metal
Bey type
erfect Balance of Stamina and DefencePersonality
hy Unless they dont know my true identityPhysical:red hair has a mullet Sweatpants and sleeveless tee and Nikes when not hiding when i am hiding i wear a trench coat over that and a black ski mask and hat
RE: The World Spins like a Bey [Bey Story] - comeaujk - Jul. 18, 2011
character request
Country:Not on a team but one of the best unknown bladers in USA
Name:Unknown when first met but they learn his name is John Jones
Bey:Metal Fox GB145 WDS
WDS is Wide Defence with a sharp tip and made of metal
Bey type
erfect Balance of Stamina and DefencePersonality
hy Unless they dont know my true identityPhysical:red hair has a mullet Sweatpants and sleeveless tee and Nikes when not hiding when i am hiding i wear a trench coat over that and a black ski mask and hat
RE: The World Spins like a Bey [Bey Story] - GHOST-monkey - Jul. 24, 2011
Awsome make another chapter plz!!!
RE: The World Spins like a Bey [Bey Story] - benkei17 - Jul. 24, 2011
awesome book
keep it up
RE: The World Spins like a Bey [Bey Story] - Shwamoffy - Jul. 25, 2011
Character request.
I really don't care about the details or how you fit him in but you need a character called Oakley Shpilkus.
(Nice story by the way.
)
RE: The World Spins like a Bey [Bey Story] - Ω Gravy - Jul. 26, 2011
Character request.
Country: Madagascar.
Name: Tyler Anderson.
Bey: Slash Fossa SW105 WS (SW105=swipe wing 105. A spin track like 2 WA130 put together. WS=wicked speed. A flat performance tip that travels at insane speed.
Personality: Tyler is extremely competitive and hates losing! He's around 14 (The rest you can figger out).
Appearance: Tyler is about 5 foot with a pretty tank build. He has blue contacts but his eyes are actually brown. He has white hair that is spiked out in all directions and always wears jeans and a T with a rude slogan.
RE: The World Spins like a Bey [Bey Story] - Shwamoffy - Jul. 26, 2011
OAKLEY SHPILKUS!!!
RE: The World Spins like a Bey [Bey Story] - Shwamoffy - Jul. 28, 2011
Oakley Shpilkus should have twin brothers named Dafty and Banjo Shpilkus. They should be the Aussie team!
RE: The World Spins like a Bey [Bey Story] - RowDog - Jul. 28, 2011
Sorry, already have a complete Aussie team not to mention none of your characters have really aussie names (let alone real names or at least ones I haven't heard of). And don't SPAM the thread with that name.
Sorry guys for the really, really, really, really long wait. I have put in a deadline even though I really don't like the deadline and probably will tend to break it due to the overwhelming amount of popularity. I hope to get the next chapter up today and if not it will be up tomorrow but I have had a few other things I had to do before this story.
RE: The World Spins like a Bey [Bey Story] - Aqua Roxas - Jul. 29, 2011
doesnt matter take your time by the way great story
RE: The World Spins like a Bey [Bey Story] - Ω Gravy - Jul. 30, 2011
listen to aqua roxas, but don't be too long.(Ω Gravy is losing patients).
RE: The World Spins like a Bey [Bey Story] - RowDog - Jul. 30, 2011
Chapter Five is up YIPEE! Thanks for bearing with me guys, it can take a while. Now enjoy the pizza.
RE: The World Spins like a Bey [Bey Story] - JCx06 - Jul. 30, 2011
hah nice work bro
during the blade acer move you shouldn't really kinda say that they were steel, cuz in the anime, it's more of the beast inside doing it than the actual physical bey.
good work, keep it up