World Beyblade Organization by Fighting Spirits Inc.
Metal Fight Beyblade: Heroes of our Time - Printable Version

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RE: Metal Fight Beyblade: Heroes of our Time - TITAN - May. 07, 2011

EPIC!!!!
(May. 07, 2011  10:32 PM)Ink. Wrote:
(May. 07, 2011  10:27 PM)Dan Wrote: Pretty heavy narcotics, eh Finisher?
Lmao, so many people dying off like nothing. McFrown would probably have not used such a idiotic bey, might as well have been a light-wheel.

Their Beys get upgraded. I AM making up some wheels. Because I'm nice, McFrown will have Slasher Cancer 145WD and YOU'LL get Maximum L Drago CH120XF.

I also had to kill two people really fast so I could get to the whole Frankenstein part of the story... you two will be like the three stooges... except there's two of you. McFrown will constantly piss you off while you act all bloodthirsty and cold. Grin

Like 2 Akatsuki in Naruto!


RE: Metal Fight Beyblade: Heroes of our Time - GaleForce - May. 08, 2011

That is nice... Wish I could write like this...


RE: Metal Fight Beyblade: Heroes of our Time - DragoonTalon - May. 08, 2011

You really had to change just ONE word in Dan's bey?


RE: Metal Fight Beyblade: Heroes of our Time - Ga' - May. 08, 2011

Why not? Smug But I really love this story, it's amazing!


RE: Metal Fight Beyblade: Heroes of our Time - DragoonTalon - May. 08, 2011

It sounds like it could of been: Maxmuim Meteor, DIE MURDER DIE VERSION!


RE: Metal Fight Beyblade: Heroes of our Time - Slee - May. 08, 2011

Very interesting story you got there so far. It's very neat how you incorporate members into the story like that. I would ask to be in it, But that would just be too selfish of me huh? Anyways, keep those blocks-o-text coming. I'm looking forward to the next one.


RE: Metal Fight Beyblade: Heroes of our Time - TITAN - May. 08, 2011

You should put Blitz in (and maybe me?)


RE: Metal Fight Beyblade: Heroes of our Time - NoodooSoup - May. 08, 2011

(May. 08, 2011  11:11 PM)Titan Blader Wrote: You should put Blitz in (and maybe me?)

Congratulations, your chances of being in the story has been reduced to 0%!

Seriously, if I remember, in his comic, he said if you ask, you won't be in it. But, nice try though.


RE: Metal Fight Beyblade: Heroes of our Time - TITAN - May. 08, 2011

It was really a joke. Not the part about Blitz. He is #1 in Beypoints.


RE: Metal Fight Beyblade: Heroes of our Time - NoodooSoup - May. 08, 2011

(May. 08, 2011  11:50 PM)Titan Blader Wrote: It was really a joke. Not the part about Blitz. He is #1 in Beypoints.

Regardless, the suggestion was still mentioned. So now, it might be... 10%


RE: Metal Fight Beyblade: Heroes of our Time - TITAN - May. 08, 2011

Why is it that every bad guy has LDrago but McFrown?


RE: Metal Fight Beyblade: Heroes of our Time - DragoonTalon - May. 09, 2011

Because L Drago has evill written all over it... now that I think about it, if a new beyblade series comes out, the dragon left spin bey will belong to the main bad guy or the rival...


RE: Metal Fight Beyblade: Heroes of our Time - Terra Blazer - May. 09, 2011

(May. 09, 2011  12:03 AM)FinisherLDrago Wrote: Because L Drago has evill written all over it... now that I think about it, if a new beyblade series comes out, the dragon left spin bey will belong to the main bad guy or the rival...

that's not what he asked. reworded to make more sense: " why is Mc Frown the only villain without an L-drago bey?" I do not know, titan blader


RE: Metal Fight Beyblade: Heroes of our Time - ƛnubis - May. 09, 2011

Great story it would be fun to be in. I like how DrigerGT has a 6x Duturon launcher. If I was in it it would be smart to take the numbers out.


RE: Metal Fight Beyblade: Heroes of our Time - Dan - May. 09, 2011

(May. 08, 2011  11:57 PM)Titan Blader Wrote: Why is it that every bad guy has LDrago but McFrown?

Bluezee and I have 'signature' combinations, coincidentally both LDrago series beys. McFrown is all over the place, with no determined combination. Therefore he was given a random bey.


RE: Metal Fight Beyblade: Heroes of our Time - TITAN - May. 09, 2011

I get it now. Thanks!


RE: Metal Fight Beyblade: Heroes of our Time - Half Nail - May. 09, 2011

Diamond, Dan and Ink are the only ones I think will have made up wheels so far. I'm not telling what they are... unless you're willing to pay. Smile


RE: Metal Fight Beyblade: Heroes of our Time - TITAN - May. 09, 2011

I will pay my soul. But really, I want to know.


RE: Metal Fight Beyblade: Heroes of our Time - Half Nail - May. 09, 2011

(May. 09, 2011  1:24 AM)Titan Blader Wrote: I will pay my soul. But really, I want to know.

Ah fine. I'll PM you the wheels.

I also want to point out that if there's anything wrong with my stories, tell me, and I'll edit them.


RE: Metal Fight Beyblade: Heroes of our Time - lord Wolfblade - May. 09, 2011

just read through, and i love it, it is a interesting story. keep it up (i hope that i can be in it some time)


RE: Metal Fight Beyblade: Heroes of our Time - iXus - May. 09, 2011

Something I read:

Bluezee's in the Beyblade Chinese Mafia?

lolwut

I think that needs some editing, heh. And I could probably fit in as Diamond's bodyguard (don't take my word for it)


RE: Metal Fight Beyblade: Heroes of our Time - DragoonTalon - May. 09, 2011

I'm predicting Brad will have MF Libra CH120RF, Kai-V will have ___ Virgo _____. (Note, if you want to find out why I said Virgo, read Ink's WBO comic.)


RE: Metal Fight Beyblade: Heroes of our Time - Sparta - May. 12, 2011

Haha, I love how all of the major WBO members are being used. This is nice, good fluency...look more in depth into your characters. Also, be sure to describe some things. What did __ look like? Was it big, small? Did it smell of goat cheese? Etc, etc.


RE: Metal Fight Beyblade: Heroes of our Time - Ga' - May. 13, 2011

......Did it smell of goat cheese? Wut!? But I can't wait for the next part, Ink!


RE: Metal Fight Beyblade: Heroes of our Time - Vamasco_ - May. 13, 2011

Your story is so exciting ;D .
I was almost crying when Deikailo lost to Bluezee . The part I love the most is the members of the WBO appering in the story !
Can't wait for chapter 4 Grin .
Awesome work ! Please keep up the awesome job !