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RE: A spirited fighter.[CHARACTER REQUESTS AVAILABLE FOR A LIMITED TIME] - Kujikato - Mar. 05, 2011

heres the characters, their personalities can be evil instead, like Rez can be liked by all the bad guys

Name: Izuma Inzori
BeyBlade: starts with: Silent Ninja MSBSCH85 RHF/RS, final form is: Silent Samurai MKSCH85 WRHF/RWD

BeyBlade description:
Face: A shuriken in the middle, between two kantanas and the writing SAMURAI for Silent Samurai and NINJA for Silent Ninja (color: all decals black on silver background)
Silent: think of Lightning with the multi hit mode (renamed Rapid Strike mode) as thick shurikens, and upper mode (renamed Slice mode) as a kantana (color: un-painted)
Samurai: think of Kerbecs + L-Drago I with the 'rings' as shurikens and the dragon heads as kantanas (color; silver)
Ninja: same as Samurai except that the dragon heads are shaped like kunai (color: silver)
MKSCH85: Metal Kantana Spring Change Height 8.5mm – 11.0mm, same as MSBSCH85 except that the Shuriken Blade is changed with 4 kantanas (color: translucent silver for the plastic, un-painted metal for the “blades”)
MSBSCH85: Metal Shuriken Blade Spring Change Height 8.5mm-11mm, think of CH120 with an external shell resembling a shuriken made of metal, when lose, MSBSCH85 can bounce due to the spring within the core of MSBSCH85.
RHF/RS: Rubber Hole Flat / Rubber Sharp (can change during combat at Izuma’s command)
WRHF/RWD: Wide Rubber Hole Flat / Rubber Wide Defense (can change during combat at Izuma’s command (color: translucent silver for plastic, black for the rubber))
Super Attacks:
Level 1: “Silent death,” Silent Samurai disappears and hits opponent with a million kunai and shuriken and kantanas
Level 2: “100 Slices of The Samurais’’,” the Metal Shuriken shell on MSBSCH85 swells and smashes the opponent’s bey 100 times, on the 99th time, Silent Ninja halts and circles the stadium 10 times, cheating a black hurricane that flips the opposing bey out of the stadium with a insanely powerful smash from Silent Samurai.
Level 3: N/A
Level X: “Infinite Blade” Samurai appears and slices at the opponent’s bey with such speed and power that the opposing bey instantly stops and flies out of the stadium 10 meters away, breaking it in half. (Last resort, can only be used three times in a year!)
Team attack 1: “Hydro Kantana Blitz”: Team attack with Hydro Narwhale: Narwhale lifts Samurai, Samurai creates a kantana and Narwhale adds high pressure water jets to it, they attack together, while Samurai slices with the kantana, narwhale flips and uses water jets to grind the opponent’s clear wheel, and increase its spin velocity, causing the opponent’s bey to completely stop by Narwhale’s grind or get KOed by Samurai’s attack
Team attack 2: “Electric Kantana Dive”: Team attack with Electric Berserker: Berserker goes around Samurai as a shield while circling the stadium (like the moon is Berserker, earth is Samurai and the centre of the stadium id the sun) and then Samurai shoots up in the sky, descending with Samurai spinning a kantana charged with lightning and Berserker keeping the opponent bey in one spot by surrounding it with a electric fence
Team attack 3: “Magma Kantana Dive”: Team attack with Magma Saurian: Refer to “Electric Kantana Dive” team attack with Berserker’s parts replaced by Saurian
Team attack X: “Inzori Finale”: Team attack involving all the Team members: first, Narwhale soaks all the opponent beys, next Berserker zaps all of them, while the opponents are distracted by Narwhale and Berserkers team attack, then Narwhale fills the stadium with water at the same time, Saurian releases a flow of lava, trapping the opponent beys in Rock, allowing the entire team the time to do “Infinite Magma Hydro Electric Kantana Attack” without any opposition

BeyBlade Type: Attack/Defense
Spin Direction: Left
Character bio:
Gender: Male
Clothes: Black Armani Exchange T-Shirt with black GUESS jeans and a silver cloak with black flames (cloak is based on Minato from NARUTO) clothes all the time
Black hair, Chinese origin, oldest of 4 children
Caries twin Kantanas everywhere.
Team rank: Leader
Attitude: helpful and cool, he has to keep a critical eye on his twin sister, Sonai so that she doesn’t go out of control with her short temper, his classmates (except for Sonai) are jealous of him. When he promises something, you can guarantee that he will keep his promise unless it has anything to do with murder or theft. Keeps his younger brothers in line every day so that they don’t drive Sonai crazy.
Age: 17 years as of February 27, 2011

Name: Sonai Inzori
BeyBlade: begins with: Pre-HWS Narwhale CH120 PD, and ends with: Hydro Narwhale XDFCH110 EPWD/PD
Type: Stamina
BeyBlade description:
Face: For both Narwhales, two narwhales next to each other with a wave and the writing Narwhale on the bottom. (Color: the narwhales: sliver, the wave: light blue, the writing: silver, the background: medium dark blue)
Hydro: imagine the Pre-HWS Virgo except the lobes are wave like. (Un-colored)
(Metal wheel) Narwhale: 4 Narwhales in a circle with a wave pattern on the bottom
(Clear wheel) Narwhale: two Narwhales in a circle. (Translucent blue)
XDFCH110: eXtreme Down Force Change Height 11.0mm- 13.5mm, basically a CH110 with the external shell as a super wide DF that works in both spin directions. (Translucent blue)
EPWD/PD: Eternal Polish Wide Defense/Polish Defense, PD with a voice controlled shaft aligned in PD’s notches, wielding a free spinning PWD (Translucent blue)
Super Attacks:
Level 1: “ Hydro Turbo Boost”: Narwhale creates a water typhoon complimenting its team members spin or itself spin, thus increasing the bey affected by the water typhoon spin velocity.
Level 2: “Hydro Cannon”: Narwhale creates a huge water typhoon in the playing area and sends it at the opponent’s bey, sending it flying repeatedly so that Narwhale’s extreme stamina can be used to outlast the opponent’s bey.
Level 3: “Flying Hydro Narwhale Cannon”: Hydro Narwhale hovers in the air because on XDFCH110 and creates a water Narwhale to ram the opponent’s bey.
Level X: “Hydro Horn”: Narwhale appears and creates a high pressure water jet in the shape of a Narwhale’s horn and Stabs the opponent’s bey breaking it in half, or KOing in instantly
Team Attacks:
Team attack 1: “Hydro Kantana Blitz”: Team attack with Silent Samurai: Hydro Narwhale lifts Silent Samurai, Samurai creates a Kantana and Narwhale adds high pressure water jets to it, and then they attack together, while Samurai slices with the kantana, narwhale flips and uses Hydro to grind the opponent’s clear wheel, causing the opponent’s bey to completely stop by Narwhale’s grind or get KOed by Samurai’s attack
Team attack 2: “Hydro Shock”: Team attack with Electric Berserker: Team attack with Hydro Narwhale: First, Narwhale soaks the opposing beys with water, then Berserker zaps them, after that, Narwhale creates a water typhoon that Berserker charges with electricity
Team attack 3: “Rock Strike”: Team attack with Magma Saurian: Narwhale fills the stadium with at the same time, Saurian releases a flow of lava, trapping the opposing beys in rock, defenseless against a water/magma spear strike.
Team attack X: “Inzori Finale”: Team attack involving all the Team members: first, Narwhale soaks all the opponent beys, next Berserker zaps all of them, while the opponents are distracted by Narwhale and Berserkers team attack, then Narwhale fills the stadium with water at the same time, Saurian releases a flow of lava, trapping the opponent beys in Rock, allowing the entire team the time to do “Infinite Magma Hydro Electric Kantana Attack” without any opposition
Spin Direction: L/R
Character bio:
Gender: Female
Clothes: wears basically the same as all the Inzori except that her cloak is blue with silver flames.
Caries a special Touch Screen Repair Computer, TSRC, and tools for bey repairs
Rank in Team: repairer. (Technician)
Black hair, Chinese origin, and 2nd oldest of 4 children
Attitude: very reckless, and has a short temper, her twin brother, Izuma, does all that he can do to make sure she doesn’t go out of control with her rage and short temper doesn’t get the worst of her, her classmates (except for Izuma) are jealous of her. When she promises something, you can guarantee that she will keep her promise unless it has anything to do with murder or theft. She can get very angry with her 2 younger brothers, she respects Inzori as the greatest beyblader of all time
She is Izuma’s twin sister
Age: 17 as of February 27, 2011
Name: Hatachi Inzori
BeyBlade: begins with: Static Zerker LB135 ELRF final form: Electric Berserker BXBCH135 EMCLRF
Beyblade type: Attack
BeyBlade Discription:
Face: A sword with electricity coming out of it and the writing BERSERKER or ZERKER on the bottom. (Color: the sword: Silver, everything else: yellow on a black background)
Electric: Looks like a metal wheel with 4 lengthened protrusions in the shape of thunderbolts. (Slightly overhangs the track like Rock does (color: silver))
Static: same as Electric but it only has 3 protrusions
Berserker: 4 very large swords in a circle. (Color: translucent light yellow)
Zerker: 3 swords in a circle. (Color: translucent dark yellow)
BXBCH135: Bending eXtreme Blades Change Height 13.5mm – 16.0mm, basically a CH___ with 4 large Blades that can bend at Hatachi’s command during battle.
LB135: Lightning Blade 13.5mm, 3 lightning like blades facing outward.
ELRF: Eternal Left Rubber Flat, a free spinning RF.
EMCLRF: Eternal Metal Coated Left Rubber Flat, combine Metal Flat, Rubber Flat, and Eternal___ and CS, a free spinning LRF with a Metal Coat around it. (The metal coat is raised by 2mm from the Left Rubber Flat)
Super attacks:
Level 1: “Static Shield”: a shield of electricity that causes the opponent’s bey to gain static electricity and stick to other unwanted friction causing things.
Level 2: “Lightning Horn Ramp”: a Horn with a smooth slope made of electricity rams the opponent bey and “slopes” it out of the stadium if it hits.
Level 3: “Electric Blade Typhoon”: a electric typhoon with electric Berserker Blades popping out every where to hit the opposing bey.
Level X: “Electric Berserker Blade”: Electric Berserker’s version of Samurai’s Infinite Blade except that the sword is made of electricity.
Team attacks:
Team attack 1: “Hydro Shock”: Team attack with Hydro Narwhale: First, Narwhale soaks the opposing beys with water, then Berserker zaps them, after that, Narwhale creates a water typhoon that Berserker charges with electricity.
Team attack 2: “Lightning Kantana Dive”: Team attack with Silent Samurai: Berserker goes around Samurai as a shield while circling the stadium (like the moon is Berserker, earth is Samurai and the centre of the stadium id the sun) and then Samurai shoots up in the sky, descending with Samurai spinning a kantana charged with lightning and Berserker keeping the opponent bey in one spot by surrounding it with a electric fence.
Team attack 3: “Lava/Lightning Trap Grind”: Team attack with Magma Saurian: (possibly the silliest tag-team attack ever) Saurian makes a wall of lava in the shape of [and Berserker creates a wall that looks like], then they trap the opposing beys in between the two walls like this[], then make the wall look like ll, thus creating friction to halt the trapped beys to a complete stop
Team attack X: “Inzori Finale”: Team attack involving all the Team members: first, Narwhale soaks all the opponent beys, next Berserker zaps all of them, while the opponents are distracted by Narwhale and Berserkers team attack, then Narwhale fills the stadium with water at the same time, Saurian releases a flow of lava, trapping the opponent beys in Rock, allowing the entire team the time to do “Infinite Magma Hydro Electric Kantana Attack” without any opposition
Spin direction: Left
Character bio:
Gender: male
Clothes: wears basically the same as all the Inzori except that his cloak is black with yellow thunderbolts, and wears repair goggles.
Black hair, Chinese origin, and 3rd of 4 children
Carries a special touch screen analyzer computer that can scan beys and create strategies according to the opponent’s bey parts and battle strategies for each of the team’s members
Team rank: Tactician
Attitude: a Bey strategist, caring and intelligent.
Age: 14 years old as of March 8, 2011
Name: Rez Inzori
Beyblade: first bey: Inferno Dino BD145 RS ___ final bey: Magma Saurian XGBCH160 RDS
BeyBlade Description:
Face: A T-Red head blowing Flame and the writing DINO on the bottom for Inferno Dino/A T-Rex head with Magma trickling down the side and the writing SAURIAN on the bottom for Magma Saurian. (Color: Brown T-Rex head, red flames/magma, & gold DINO/SAURIAN)
Inferno: the Hasbro Pre-HWS HWS version of SGTO (red and brown)
Magma: Metal version of Heat with rubber in the gaps. (Rubber: red, metal: un-colored)
Dino: a T-Rex in a circle (the T-Rex: brown, the background or other plastic: red)
Saurian: ripples of lava in a circle. (Color: translucent red)
BD145: Hell Kerbecs’ Track. (Translucent red)
XGBCH160: eXtreme Gravity Bowl Change Height 16.0mm – 18.5mm, cross of CH___ and GB145, 4 metal balls on the shell of CH___, the plastic is arranged in a 4 pronged star.
RS: Rubber Sharp. (Color: translucent red, rubber: red)
RDS: Rubber Defense Sharp, a DS made of rubber (Color: red rubber and translucent red for the plastic parts)
Super attacks:
Level 1: “Lava Shield”: Saurian creates a wall of Lava around it to protect it from attacks.
Level 2: “Lava Wipeout”: Saurian creates a wave of lava to cover its opponents.
Level X: “Volcano Grave”: Saurian suddenly starts circling the stadium and creates a miniature un-erupted volcano in the middle of the stadium, then when the opponent’s bey is in the volcano’s crater, the volcano explodes, sending the opponent’s bey flying.
Team attacks:
Team attack 1: Magma Kantana Strike: Team attack with Silent Samurai: Refer to “Electric Kantana Dive” team attack with Berserker’s parts replaced by Saurian
Team attack 2: “Lava/Lightning Trap Grind” (possibly the silliest tag-team attack ever) : Team attack with Electric Berserker: Saurian makes a wall of lava in the shape of [and Berserker creates a wall that looks like], then they trap the opposing beys in between the two walls like this[], then make the wall look like ll, thus creating friction to halt the trapped beys to a complete stop

Team attack 3: Rock Strike: Team attack with Hydro Narwhale: Narwhale fills the stadium with at the same time, Saurian releases a flow of lava, trapping the opposing beys in rock, defenseless against a water/magma spear strike.
Team attack X: “Inzori Finale”: Team attack involving all the Team members: first, Narwhale soaks all the opponent beys, next Berserker zaps all of them, while the opponents are distracted by Narwhale and Berserkers team attack, then Narwhale fills the stadium with water at the same time, Saurian releases a flow of lava, trapping the opponent beys in Rock, allowing the entire team the time to do “Infinite Magma Hydro Electric Kantana Attack” without any opposition
Character bio:
Gender: male
Clothes: wears basically the same as all the Inzori except that his cloak is silver with red flames.
Black hair, Chinese origin, and the youngest of 4 children
Team rank: Attack absorber (the shield)
Attitude: very humorous, liked by everyone.

RE: A spirited fighter.[CHARACTER REQUESTS AVAILABLE FOR A LIMITED TIME] - Korinzu - Mar. 05, 2011

MMM...long, but I'll accept the ninja one but not the rest, I HAVE THE BAD GUYS SORTED OUT, NARWHAL, why a narwhal? Oh well I do want to make Excalibur, we all have our likes. Narwhals narwhals swimming in the ocean causing a commotion cause they are so awesome, la la la la.....also no school for mr.ninja. Sorry for not accepting the rest...

RE: A spirited fighter.[CHARACTER REQUESTS AVAILABLE FOR A LIMITED TIME] - Sniper - Mar. 05, 2011

OMGGGGG THE BATTLE IS SO AWESOME!!

RE: A spirited fighter.[CHARACTER REQUESTS AVAILABLE FOR A LIMITED TIME] - Kujikato - Mar. 05, 2011

is ok i dont mind, the narwhale? you should see me boered i make up even crazier names like Fried Porkchop 100000 EXWS

RE: A spirited fighter.[CHARACTER REQUESTS AVAILABLE FOR A LIMITED TIME] - Dual - Mar. 05, 2011

This story is awesome! if you need more characters i'll try and come up with a few. I hope you'll like them.

RE: A spirited fighter. - Korinzu - Mar. 05, 2011

A NOTE TO ALL READERS.

I have the beyblades sorted for the psychics, I just need characters. Anyone may post a request, but no beyblade. I will pick the best 12 and will keep you updated on character numbers remaining. I will post soon what beyblades there are but to keep you thinking heres three.

Ray Gasher 145 RSF

Poison Libra 135 ES

Nightmare Bull W105 MF

This has been a message from Korinzu, Thank you.

RE: A spirited fighter. - Synth - Mar. 06, 2011

so can i have again a character request,this time for the physics?

RE: A spirited fighter. - Korinzu - Mar. 06, 2011

Yes, anyone may post as many as they want.
Virgo was thrashing Libra. "Errrgh, go special move, Cybernetic Shockwave!!" Tenji shouted. A giant green light emenated from Libra. A computer network appeared on the ground.

Chapter 11: Akio's other soul. Final part.

"Whats this, Virgo is going into sand!" Haze cried. "Yes my Libras ES sends shockwaves and everything turns to sand!" Tenji said. And virgo started to be pushed back. "Noooo!" Haze said, "wait if the spiked part of coated sharp is in the sand then...the rubber will still go!" Vulcan Virgo raced around and up into the air. "Special move! Upbeat!" Haze called. A spirit of a girl holding a guitar came out and the spirit took an aim at Libra. Virgo flew through the sky and through the green light. An explosion occured. As the smoke cleared Virgo was wobbling wildly. "Libra attack!!" Tenji said, but when he looked round in dismay he realised that Libra had stopped. "How?!"Tenji said frustrated. Virgo stopped spinning and Haze picked it up. "Try again, another time psychic," Haze said and walked off.

In Akio and Chika's battle Akio was winning the battle. "Ok go special move, Beafowl Colours Of Beauty!" Chika said. A peacock spirit emerged from Midnight Beafowl and the midnight wheel started to glow different colours and it attacked Burn Bull. Bull was being pushed to the edge of the stadium. "The attack power has increased so much!!" Akio said "but it can't stop this, Burning Bull Counter Thrust!!" Bull turned round and flung Beafowl out if the stadium. "Oh," Chika said as she watched Beafowl fly out of the stadium. "Hmm, that was fun!" Chika said as she picked up Beafowl. She ran over to Akio. "Thanks for playing with me," she said, "you should be waking up now." She gave Akio a hug. "Bye till later," she whispered to him...

Akio opened his eyes. In front of him sat Ryutaro and Atsune. "Oh you're awake," Atsune said. "We were starting to worry," Ryutaro said. "It's good to see you're back to normal," Akio said to Ryutaro. A door opened. "Ah Akio I need to talk to you," Aquios said. Akio got out of bed and put his favourite shirt on. He walked out as Haze walked in. "I defeated a psychic!" Haze said excitedly. "What did he look like?" Ryutaro asked him. "Well he wore some kind of lab coat thing and he had black hair," Haze described. "An afro, by any chance?" Atsune said and giggled. "Actually yes he...wait how did you know!!" Haze said angrily. He turned round and there he was, Tenji. Atsune bawled out laughing. "What the!?" Haze said, "did you follow me!?" "Um, a little," Tenji said, " I am not really a psychic, I don't even know what a psychic is!" Haze frowned. "I just wanted to become a Rebel!" Tenji shouted. "If you can defeat me in a battle, then you may join," Ryutaro said. "Ok that is your challenge," Haze said. "The battle will be tomorrow," Ryutaro said.

Aquios and Akio sat down in the study room. "Akio I studied your dream pattern and there was something wierd, is there something wrong?" Aquios said. "Well there was this person, and she was said something about being half my soul," Akio said taking deep breaths every few words. "Ah, this was going to happen sometime, the chosen one may look after one soul that Seth takes. This person is close, I asume," Aquios said. "Yes," Akio said, "and I want to get her out of me." "I devised a machine that takes a soul out of someone, but it needs to be charged by something that has been in your dream," Aquios said. Akio looked at his beyblade...

RE: A spirited fighter. - Sniper - Mar. 06, 2011

THAT WAS SOOO AWESOME!! dude you are soooo awesome at this

RE: A spirited fighter. - Korinzu - Mar. 07, 2011

Thank you kid sniper!Joyful_2
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At the river Ryutaro and Tenji stood. Ryutaro put his beyblade on his launcher grip. Tenji did so also. Atsune was there to judge the match. "Three, two, one, let it riiiip!"

Chapter 12: Tenji's approval

Thermal Pisces and Cyber Libra smashed into eachother. Meanwhile Akio and Aquios were working...

"Akio can you pass me that?" Aquios asked. "This?" Akio said. "Yep, thanks." Aquios put the finishing touches on the machine. "Ok Akio I want you to put this oxygen mask on and step in this glass tube," Aquios said, "the tank will fill up with water." Akio put on the mask and stepped in. Aquios pushed the switch. The machine started to whirr. Water elevated Akio in the tank. Aquios walked to the machine and put Burn Bull in the gap, specially made for a beyblade.

Pisces and Libra kept attacking eachother and doing equal amount of damage. "Go special move, Distortion Drive!" Ryutaro said. A star-shaped light appeared on the ground. Libra attacked Pisces but went straight through Pisces. "Well,if a normal attack can't get through maybe a special move can!" Tenji planned out. A computer network appeared on the ground overlapping the star. A green light spirralled up. Pisces started to wildly flew through the air and the pieces started to tremble. "The shockwaves from Libra are affecting the pieces on Pisces and if this keeps up, Pisces will explode!!" Atsune cried.

A figure appeared in the tank adjacent to Akio's. It was Chika! Suddenly, an explosion blew the door off the hall. A ninja entered. Aquios pulled out Sunrise and Moonlight and ripped them down the hall. "Who are you!?" Aquios shouted. "I am Izuma!" he said, "now go Silent Ninja!" Silent Ninja knocked Sunrise and Moonlight in midair. "Akio get Chika out of here!!!" Aquios shouted as he started to panic. Akio smashed the glass and picked up Chika and ran, he ran for his and Chika's life...

RE: A spirited fighter. - Kujikato - Mar. 07, 2011

nice chapter, i like the intro of my character

RE: A spirited fighter. - Korinzu - Mar. 07, 2011

I cant move on without evil characters, I'll need em soon and everyone should post something! I should be able to get a chapter or two before I need at least one.
Akio ran through the HQ. He pulled out his beyblade and the computer scanned it as he burst through the door. He ran into another alley and placed Chika down. She started to open her eyes. "Akio?" she said.

Chapter 13: Tenji's approval. Part two

"Yes its me," Akio said, "your in the real world." "Really?" Chika said. She was still tired Akio could clearly see. "Akio," Chika said, "your bleeding." Blood dripped from Akio's face, right arm and legs. His clothes were wet and covered in blood. Akio stood up. "It doesn't matter, I only barely got you out alive, I had to smash the glass to get out," Akio explained.

Atsune was shouting at Tenji to stop, but he couldn't hear her. Thermal Pisces started to crack and the fusion wheel started to break. Tenji looked as a piece of Thermal fell on the ground. "Stop!!!!" Tenji shouted and Libra stopped. Pisces fell on the ground and the facebolt crumbled and the pieces fell apart. "Im really,really sorry," Tenji said as Ryutaro picked up what was left of his bey. "Its ok, I know someone in town who is really good at fixing beyblades," Ryutaro said, "Madoka Amano."

Akio and Chika walked along the street and Chika looked at Akio. "Akio you're really pale, are you sure you're okay?" Akio said nothing and stopped. "Akio?" she repeated. Akio fell backwards and landed on the ground. "Akio!!" Chika screamed, "Akio,Akio, someone help!" A small boy ran around the corner. He was short and had green hair. He was followed by another ginger haired short person. "We'll help," the ginger one said. "Yeah!" the green haired one said. They ran over to Akio and they hoisted him onto their backs. They ran to a place called the B-Pit. They ran down the stairs and a girl sat at a desk. "Madoka!" the green haired boy said. "What is it Kenta-aaaah!?" Madoka said, "get him to the bed!" And Kenta and the ginger haired kid carried him in. Madoka grabbed some bandages and wrapped them round Akio. "Yuu, I want you to look over Akio for a minute," Madoka said, "Kenta, look after the customers." Madoka sat down with Chika. "He's lost a lot of blood, he may not make it, but he might," Madoka said. Chika hoped for the best...

RE: A spirited fighter. - LeoneLione - Mar. 07, 2011

Name: Sengai Hatigo
Bey: Fang Leone F145FD
Appearance: Long brown hair that goes down and stops at the end of his neck, Green vest, Black jeans, white shoes
Personality: Like Kyoya's but a bit more friendly. Rival of Akio (Its like the rivalry of Jinga and Kyoya)
Special move: Wild Fang Smash

For the Wild Fang Smash Leone goes under the bey to hit him in the air then he jumps over his opponent who is still in the air and his spin track and performance tip work together to form a tornado on the tip of the tip and Leone hits his opponent with the tornado.
Btw F145 is the 145 but with four fangs sticking out and FD stands for Fang Defense witch is WB Just with design on the part that attaches to the spin track

RE: A spirited fighter. - Korinzu - Mar. 07, 2011

Oh Ok I'll put him in the next chapter, as Ryutaro leaves.

RE: A spirited fighter. - Kujikato - Mar. 07, 2011

lil, will it be me vs him soon? the lion vs the ninja now that sounds cool

RE: A spirited fighter. - Sniper - Mar. 07, 2011

that battle was dangerously awesome

RE: A spirited fighter. - Korinzu - Mar. 07, 2011

Thanks people @ Dracov I was actually thinking about that before but that may be later in the story.

RE: A spirited fighter. - Synth - Mar. 08, 2011

What could happen to aquios?anyways heres a character for the physics:

name:Rei
beyUnhappyjust pick one on your ideas)
looks:has a red jacket,black pants,wears a black t-shirt,and gloves
personality:he was a good guy,but when physics attacked him,he became evil and joined their side.

RE: A spirited fighter.[CHARACTER REQUESTS AVAILABLE FOR A LIMITED TIME] - Synth - Mar. 08, 2011

(Mar. 03, 2011  5:40 AM)Kyoya_Lion Wrote: Cyberpegasis98: i'm sorry if any of my moves are like yours but my theme is wind and that was the best i could do, i am open to alternative suggestion though

it's ok,I dont care if its the same,it could give korinzu some ideas,like the ultimate wind battle,right?

RE: A spirited fighter. - aafiiq - Mar. 08, 2011

Name:Afiq Norman
BeyEeearth Bull T125 WD(Defense)
Appearance:Black short spikey hair,wears a grey Equalizer shirt,green camo cargo pants(he puts his bey on the right knee pocket and his white launcher grip with a black rubber grip together with a a light launcher 2 on it and a bey pointer), skate shoes,most of the time with a bag
Personality:he is a 15 year old.He usually prepare everything that is why he wears cargo pants and a bag to put his tools.he usually attacks without a plan and overpowering his opponent.he gets angry easily if his friends were picked or somebody do not understand him.he has 15600 in his beypointer.he easily gets into fights
Special move:Chaotic core

Earth Bull go spin around the opponents bey and will push the bey to the middle of the stadium which it will then have the opponent to hit Earth Bull and make it really angry an will just keep hitting the opponents bey,usually ring out

RE: A spirited fighter. - aafiiq - Mar. 08, 2011

Evil Character
Name:Benny
BeyConfusedtorm Escolpio 84 WF
Appeareance:Black Hair,Wears a Dark red leather jacket with a black shirt inside and black skinny jeans
Personality:Chill,always strict,he wants to be the 'Beyblade Master' as he wants to be respected and control bladers
Special move:Master Control(Keep attacking the opponent and make it look helpless and make it its servant)

RE: A spirited fighter. - LeoneLione - Mar. 09, 2011

Sooner in the book you should get him to go to battle bladers were he fights Jinga and all the other dudes...
EDIT: Sorry, typo...

RE: A spirited fighter. - Korinzu - Mar. 09, 2011

(Mar. 09, 2011  3:56 PM)LeoneLione Wrote: Sooner in the book you should get him to go to battle bladders were he fights Jinga and all the other dudes...

Battle Bladders? Lol. I will after he defeats Seth.

RE: A spirited fighter. - Synth - Mar. 09, 2011

(Mar. 09, 2011  5:14 PM)Korinzu Wrote:
(Mar. 09, 2011  3:56 PM)LeoneLione Wrote: Sooner in the book you should get him to go to battle bladders were he fights Jinga and all the other dudes...

Battle Bladders? Lol. I will after he defeats Seth.

HahaHhahhahaha!lol that was funny.

When is the next chaptarrrrrrrrrrrr!!!!!!!!T

RE: A spirited fighter.[CHARACTER REQUESTS AVAILABLE FOR A LIMITED TIME] - Korinzu - Mar. 09, 2011

I want everyone to know I'm not accepting any more character requests for good guys.
I will accept Gale now though.
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Akio started to dream again. Madoka and Chika were talking when Chika's eyes went cloudy. "Chika! Are you Ok?" Madoka said. "Yes just don't move me," Chika said.

Chapter 14: Nightmare.

Akio looked around. He was in his dream again. Chika was there. "Chika?!" Akio said shocked. "Part of my soul is still in you," Chika said. Someone was there other than them two. "Who are you!!" Akio shouted. "Hahaha..my name is Oika, I am your evil part and one of the psychics," he said, his voice was hoarse. "What are you here for!" Chika said. "I am here for a beyblade battle," Oika said.

Aquios was defending the HQ. "Go Sunrise!" Aquios called. And Sunrise attacked. Silent Ninja dodged and attacked Moonlight. Sunrise then turned round and attacked Ninja. "This isn't going well," Izuma said. He threw a smoke bomb and fled in the process. "I need to upgrade my beyblade to beat Aquios, as that was Seth's orders," he thought to himself. Aquios picked up his beyblades as the sprinklers and fire alarms went off. "How did I let him go..." Aquios said grimly.

"Three, two, one, let it riiiip!" they both said. The beyblades went into the stadium. "Is that... Nightmare Bull W105 MF..." Akio said. "Go!!!" a roaring shout came out of Oika. "Whaaa?!" Akio and Chika said. Nightmare Bull smashed into Burn Bull and Bull flew through the air and out of sight.

Akio woke up and in his hand lay a severly damaged Burn Bull. Beside him was a familiar face, Sengai.