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RE: Ray Unicorno D125CS Article Attempt - Ultra - Jan. 08, 2011 Yeah with the combo thing I say use MF-H Earth Bull GB145CS since the track is better. I definatly think more testing is needed before this is posted since CS probably has destabiliser use but it hasn't been tested at all really. Here's my go at the overall section: All of the parts of this have some use although Ray and CS are much more useful than D125. Ray is a good attack wheel but it performs much better against defence combos using WB rather than combos using rubber defence bottoms such as RS, CS and RSF. CS however has more use with good use in defence and attack types as well as a possible use in destabilisers. Despite all of the parts are being outclassed it still a good blade to purchase but there are better options available. RE: Ray Unicorno D125CS Article Attempt - ShadowPegasis - Jan. 08, 2011 Thanks Ultrablader, I added it. (Jan. 08, 2011 3:49 PM)Daegor42 Wrote:(Jul. 07, 2010 3:45 AM)ShadowPegasis Wrote: One in-explainable, yet interesting aspect about CS, is that the Korean version from SonoKong, is a tad bit more suited for Attack, where as the Japanese version from Takara-Tomy, is just a little bit more suited for Defense.This whole sentence is full of comma splices. This sentence also seem fallacious and colloquial to me. Perhaps you should take a crack at this, as I don't know what "fallacious" and "colloquial" mean. RE: Ray Unicorno D125CS Article Attempt - Daegor42 - Jan. 08, 2011 (Jan. 08, 2011 7:30 PM)ShadowPegasis Wrote: Perhaps you should take a crack at this, as I don't know what "fallacious" and "colloquial" mean. Filled with falsehoods and casual language respectively. Honestly, if I "fix" all of your mistakes, it's basically me writing the whole article. RE: Ray Unicorno D125CS Article Attempt - ShadowPegasis - Jan. 08, 2011 I meant just that section. I've already fixed everything else except that. EDIT: Or perhaps I should just take that section off, since it has not been proven entirely yet? RE: Ray Unicorno D125CS Article Attempt - Daegor42 - Jan. 08, 2011 (Jan. 08, 2011 7:35 PM)ShadowPegasis Wrote: I meant just that section. I've already fixed everything else except that. I know what you meant. I don't really like the whole bottom section. I honestly feel like it needs to be completely overhauled, especially since it's the most important part of Ray Unicorno. RE: Ray Unicorno D125CS Article Attempt - ShadowPegasis - Jan. 08, 2011 Okay, I highlighted and backspaced the complete bottom section and typed a revised version. RE: Ray Unicorno D125CS Article Attempt - ShadowPegasis - Jan. 09, 2011 Anyone else think anything should be added/removed/edited? RE: Ray Unicorno D125CS Article Attempt - ShadowPegasis - Jan. 11, 2011 Alright, made some minor changes to the draft by fixing spelling mistakes. Is there anything else that needs to be done? RE: Ray Unicorno D125CS Article Attempt - Ray Joker - Jan. 11, 2011 (Jul. 07, 2010 3:45 AM)ShadowPegasis Wrote: Track: Defense 125 I think you should define that it has a plastic ring. (Jul. 07, 2010 3:45 AM)ShadowPegasis Wrote: Use in Defense customization: 1: You didn't add an "if". 2: Change to "is". (Jul. 07, 2010 3:45 AM)ShadowPegasis Wrote: Bottom: Coat Sharp 1: I don't think you need the "CS for Short". 2: It doesn't make sense to me. 3: Grammar (Jul. 07, 2010 3:45 AM)ShadowPegasis Wrote: Overall: 1: Not needed 2: Needs comma 3: Needs comma 4: Doesn't make sense. 5: Needs comma 6: Grammar 7: Needs comma 8: Needs comma RE: Ray Unicorno D125CS Article Attempt - ShadowPegasis - Jan. 11, 2011 Fixed, thanks Joker. RE: Ray Unicorno D125CS Article Attempt - Ultra - Jan. 11, 2011 You should copy the Ray section from Ray Joker's Ray gil article cause they should be the same and his is done already. RE: Ray Unicorno D125CS Article Attempt - Ray Joker - Jan. 11, 2011 Actually, I think we combined ours, but I didn't get to use his version, as he edited it differently. RE: Ray Unicorno D125CS Article Attempt - ShadowPegasis - Jan. 11, 2011 (Jan. 11, 2011 9:56 AM)Ultrablader Wrote: You should copy the Ray section from Ray Joker's Ray gil article cause they should be the same and his is done already. I initially copied from him, than Daegor suggested an overhaul of the Ray section. We both did so, and I used his version and edited it. Than he used that edited version, but after that, I made a few more edits. He should actually be using the Ray from this article, but I think that whichever article gets published first (his Ray Gil or my Ray Unicorn), we use the Ray section from there. RE: Ray Unicorno D125CS Article Attempt - Ray Joker - Jan. 11, 2011 Aheh, I didn't get enough time to copy and paste because I'm using my phone. RE: Ray Unicorno D125CS Article Attempt - ShadowPegasis - Jan. 11, 2011 Ah, I see. Well, if everyone thinks the article is good enough, I'll PM this to Kei. There will now be a poll at the top asking whether or not you think the article is BeyWiki material. RE: Ray Unicorno D125CS Article Attempt - Ultra - Jan. 11, 2011 (Jan. 11, 2011 10:09 PM)ShadowPegasis Wrote:(Jan. 11, 2011 9:56 AM)Ultrablader Wrote: You should copy the Ray section from Ray Joker's Ray gil article cause they should be the same and his is done already. His is more complete and detailed than yours though.... So why would he use yours? RE: Ray Unicorno D125CS Article Attempt - ShadowPegasis - Jan. 11, 2011 Hmm, point taken. Fixed. RE: Ray Unicorno D125CS Article Attempt - Dan - Jan. 11, 2011 Okay, I don't get why you all get the idea that you need like 30321 CS' because a single CS lasts a long time defensively. Also, SonoKong CS' are more reactive/attack heavy than TT's. 'Even though Ray and CS are outclassed, this Bey is still a great purchase, therefore every Blader should own multiples of this Beyblade.' You are referring to RS outclassing CS, I presume? RE: Ray Unicorno D125CS Article Attempt - ShadowPegasis - Jan. 11, 2011 (Jan. 11, 2011 11:16 PM)Dan Wrote: Okay, I don't get why you all get the idea that you need like 30321 CS' because a single CS lasts a long time defensively. Also, SonoKong CS' are more reactive/attack heavy than TT's. I'll fix this in a moment, as I'm busy with homework. EDIT: I'm just gonna keep this, as I wasn't talking about having multiples because of it's Defense purposes, but rather because of it's Attack purposes. (Jan. 11, 2011 11:16 PM)Dan Wrote: 'Even though Ray and CS are outclassed, this Bey is still a great purchase, therefore every Blader should own multiples of this Beyblade.' Yes. RE: Ray Unicorno D125CS Article Attempt - Dan - Jan. 14, 2011 Even then, still no need for more than 2. I think 1 is enough anyway.. RE: Ray Unicorno D125CS Article Attempt - ShadowPegasis - Jan. 14, 2011 Alright, fixed. RE: Ray Unicorno D125CS Article Attempt - ShadowPegasis - Jan. 27, 2011 Are there any more things in the article that require edits or overhauls. RE: Ray Unicorno D125CS Article Attempt - Ultra - Jan. 27, 2011 Ray has destabiliser use. Also mention how the molds perform differently I guess. RE: Ray Unicorno D125CS Article Attempt - ShadowPegasis - Jan. 27, 2011 (Jan. 27, 2011 9:22 AM)Ultrablader Wrote: Ray has destabiliser use. (Jan. 16, 2011 2:20 AM)Kei Wrote: I'd like there to be some more testing with Ray as a destabilizer before we add it in to the article. The results we have thus far conflict with each other. (Jan. 27, 2011 9:22 AM)Ultrablader Wrote: Also mention how the molds perform differently I guess. The difference between how they perform is negligible though. RE: Ray Unicorno D125CS Article Attempt - Ultra - Jan. 27, 2011 To you have both mold though? If so then it should be said that the performance difference is like nothing. |