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RE: Beyblade Burst: Burst Ultimate (Fan-Story) - TitanDragon - Aug. 09, 2022
(Aug. 09, 2022 11:33 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote:(Aug. 08, 2022 3:59 PM)TitanDragon Wrote: Do you have Gatling Dragon’s moves picked out yet?
Yes. Same for Xiphoid and Zest, Knight is now being worked on.
Dragon: Gatling Bound, Dragon Shoot, Gatling Snap
Xcalibur: Xiphoid Impact (Unaligned), Ultimate Impact (Sword extended and Disk aligned)
Achilles: Zest Slash, Zest Defense, Zest Upper, Zest Smash, Zest Buster, Zest Flash
Knight: Coming soon
What is Gatling Snap
RE: Beyblade Burst: Burst Ultimate (Fan-Story) - DeltaZakuro - Aug. 10, 2022
(Aug. 09, 2022 11:49 PM)TitanDragon Wrote:(Aug. 09, 2022 11:33 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: Yes. Same for Xiphoid and Zest, Knight is now being worked on.
Dragon: Gatling Bound, Dragon Shoot, Gatling Snap
Xcalibur: Xiphoid Impact (Unaligned), Ultimate Impact (Sword extended and Disk aligned)
Achilles: Zest Slash, Zest Defense, Zest Upper, Zest Smash, Zest Buster, Zest Flash
Knight: Coming soon
What is Gatling Snap
Basically Dragons equivalent to Deathscyther's Double Strike.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Burst Ultimate (Fan-Story) - TitanDragon - Aug. 10, 2022
(Aug. 10, 2022 4:05 AM)DeltaZakuro Wrote:(Aug. 09, 2022 11:49 PM)TitanDragon Wrote: What is Gatling Snap
Basically Dragons equivalent to Deathscyther's Double Strike.
Ideas for Wind Knight moves
Wind Launch-Knight Flyer-Mega Knight Blow
RE: Beyblade Burst: Burst Ultimate (Fan-Story) - Dragon Blader Z - Aug. 12, 2022
(Apr. 18, 2022 2:40 AM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: So this has been on my list for a little while now and since there is no anime for Beyblade Burst: Burst Ultimate, i have decided to go the extra mile and write my own. Story Of Lanes Sister will finish this month as of this post being made and Angels and Star Ignition are currently on hold for a while until i find out better ideas for those stories, but without further ado, here is Beyblade Burst: BU.Good names for beys, and indeed, you are a fanfic writer on this website
Set directly after the events of Dynamite Battle, 5 pieces of a mysterious Star Fragment fall from the skies and it lands in different locations across the blading district of Japan and evolves a bladers bey.. One of these bladers being Bell Daikokuten and his Dangerous Belial which then evolves into Divine Belial, the apparent Ultimate Demon King Bey! With more legends rising up to the challenge with their new beys, the new age of Burst Ultimate is here!
Original Release Date was August 2022, new Release date is April 18th, 2022Spoiler (Click to View)
Season 2?
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RE: Beyblade Burst: Burst Ultimate (Fan-Story) - DeltaZakuro - Aug. 13, 2022
Ladies and Gentlemen, it's back!
Beyblade Burst BU Episode 10: Counterattack! Belial's Resolve!!
https://www.wattpad.com/1225427978-beyblade-burst-bu-burst-ultimate-episode-10
RE: Beyblade Burst: Burst Ultimate (Fan-Story) - TitanDragon - Aug. 13, 2022
Who owns Midnight Corvus
RE: Beyblade Burst: Burst Ultimate (Fan-Story) - DeltaZakuro - Aug. 13, 2022
(Aug. 13, 2022 4:12 PM)TitanDragon Wrote: Who owns Midnight Corvus
Midnight Corvus is not a bey in this story.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Burst Ultimate (Fan-Story) - TitanDragon - Aug. 13, 2022
(Aug. 13, 2022 5:36 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote:(Aug. 13, 2022 4:12 PM)TitanDragon Wrote: Who owns Midnight Corvus
Midnight Corvus is not a bey in this story.
There’s a list where it says antagonist next to its combo
1. Divine Belial.Nx.Ad-3 (Bell)
2. Arrow Griffin.Ov.HEt-6 (Gigi Ishikawa) (NEW)
3. Midnight Corvus.Gg.Tc-8 (Main Antagonist) (NEW)
4. Cyclone Ragnaruk.Gg.Nv-6 (Ranzo)
5. Roar Bahamut.Gg.Mm-10 (Basara)
6. Greatest Raphael.Ov.HXt+’ (Rashad)
7. Magma Ifrit.Cq.J+Wv-G03 (Ilya)
8. Ultimate Valkyrie.Lg.V’-9 (Valt)
9. Astral Spriggan.Ov.Qt-0 (Shu)
10. Vanish Fafnir.Tp.Kc-3 (Free)
11. Guilty Longinus.Kr.MDs-2 (Lui)
12. Prominence Phoenix.Tp.MUn-10 (Phenomeno)
13. Chain Kerbeus.??.??-6 (Ken)
14. ??? Xcalibur.??.??-? (Xhaka)
15. ??? Achilles.??.??-?? (Aiga)
16. Gatling Dragon.??.??-? (Drum)
RE: Beyblade Burst: Burst Ultimate (Fan-Story) - DeltaZakuro - Aug. 13, 2022
(Aug. 13, 2022 6:30 PM)TitanDragon Wrote:(Aug. 13, 2022 5:36 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: Midnight Corvus is not a bey in this story.
There’s a list where it says antagonist next to its combo
That has been changed.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Burst Ultimate (Fan-Story) - TitanDragon - Aug. 13, 2022
(Aug. 13, 2022 6:31 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote:(Aug. 13, 2022 6:30 PM)TitanDragon Wrote: There’s a list where it says antagonist next to its combo
That has been changed.
Ohh
RE: Beyblade Burst: Burst Ultimate (Fan-Story) - DeltaZakuro - Aug. 14, 2022
Beyblade Burst BU Episode 11: Explosive Struggle! Battle Royale!!
https://www.wattpad.com/1257159633-beyblade-burst-bu-burst-ultimate-episode-11
RE: Beyblade Burst: Burst Ultimate (Fan-Story) - TitanDragon - Aug. 14, 2022
Why didn’t you make a move like Gatling Break
RE: Beyblade Burst: Burst Ultimate (Fan-Story) - Dragon Blader Z - Aug. 14, 2022
(Aug. 14, 2022 2:49 PM)TitanDragon Wrote: Why didn’t you make a move like Gatling Break
I completely feel the same
RE: Beyblade Burst: Burst Ultimate (Fan-Story) - DeltaZakuro - Aug. 14, 2022
(Aug. 14, 2022 2:49 PM)TitanDragon Wrote: Why didn’t you make a move like Gatling Break
Because i want to create something that's more unique than simply reuse a concept like Gatling Break. Besides, that move is for when Dragon is awakened and Gatling doesn't really have any sort of awakening as far as im aware.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Burst Ultimate (Fan-Story) - DeltaZakuro - Aug. 16, 2022
Episodes 13-20
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Episode 13: Rainbow! D-Gear!!
Episode 14: The Demon Kings Assault! D-Gears Barrage!!!!
Episode 15: Explosive Sword! Xiphoid Xcalibur!!
Episode 16: Aligned Point! Ultimate Impact!!
Episode 17: Swinging Slash! The Secrets Of Xcalibur!!
Episode 18: The Demon Kings Ultimate Strike!
Episode 19: Across The World! To The High Stage!!
Episode 20: Ultimate Super Z! Zest Achilles!!
RE: Beyblade Burst: Burst Ultimate (Fan-Story) - DeltaZakuro - Aug. 19, 2022
Beyblade Burst BU Episode 12: GT! Gatling Dragon!!
https://www.wattpad.com/1258595133-beyblade-burst-bu-burst-ultimate-episode-12-gt
RE: Beyblade Burst: Burst Ultimate (Fan-Story) - TitanDragon - Aug. 20, 2022
(Aug. 19, 2022 11:55 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: Beyblade Burst BU Episode 12: GT! Gatling Dragon!!
https://www.wattpad.com/1258595133-beyblade-burst-bu-burst-ultimate-episode-12-gt
Why destroy Kerbeus so early in the season? You just had Regnar/ Raphael break already
RE: Beyblade Burst: Burst Ultimate (Fan-Story) - DeltaZakuro - Aug. 20, 2022
Episode 14 will be renamed to "The Demon Kings Assault! D-Gears Barrage!!"
RE: Beyblade Burst: Burst Ultimate (Fan-Story) - MasterofDerp - Aug. 21, 2022
(Aug. 20, 2022 12:06 PM)TitanDragon Wrote:I was about to ask the same question.(Aug. 19, 2022 11:55 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: Beyblade Burst BU Episode 12: GT! Gatling Dragon!!
https://www.wattpad.com/1258595133-beyblade-burst-bu-burst-ultimate-episode-12-gt
Why destroy Kerbeus so early in the season? You just had Regnar/ Raphael break already
Delta, while I am enjoying the fanfic overall, you have a severe overbreaking beys problem. And you’re playing the bey breaking card way too early, even if it’s just partial breaks.
It’s really killing the mood. First Raphael randomly shatters and Kerbeus gets destroyed like 4 episodes after being introduced? You have to play your cards right. You broke Kerbeus and Raphael way too early.
I’d hold off on the breaking for a while. Maybe until episode 24-26 or so. Beys breaking usually are extremely substantial moments or effects of a late season rampage like Phi and Shu’s in Cho-Z and God respectively.
5/10 for this chapter. Started off strong with Drum but Kerbeus breaking really took me out of it.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Burst Ultimate (Fan-Story) - DeltaZakuro - Aug. 22, 2022
Beyblade Burst BU Episode 13: Rainbow! D-Gear!!
https://www.wattpad.com/1260696419-beyblade-burst-bu-burst-ultimate-episode-13
RE: Beyblade Burst: Burst Ultimate (Fan-Story) - DeltaZakuro - Aug. 24, 2022
Royal Cassiel Updated Description: Royal Cassiel.Illegal.Metal Bearing Drift-8 + Some BU Beys for Season 2
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Royal Blade {R}
A Right Spin BU Blade with a shape that features a Round underlayer with 6 spikes, 3 spikes on both sides on top and 2 small singular spikes on the top and bottom of the Blade. The gimmick of the blade is that the 2 shields between the spikes can extend outward on a strong shoot (The sections are activated like the Cho-Z/Turbo Awakening System) and this initiates a "Ultimate Shield Mode" and when not a strong shoot, the spiked sections are exposed, creating a more aggressive, and jagged perimeter called "Ultimate Strike Mode". The colors of the blade are Purple with the spiked sections being black with red and blue highlights, the shield parts are gold colored
Cassiel Core {CS}
A Horizontal Right Spin BU Core with a Cassiel Motif, The Archangel of Saturn. The motifs depiction upon the core resembles that of the Valkyrie1 DB Core but instead of the 6 gold stripes, it has silver wings that are tipped with Gold at the ends, the cores gimmick is that it has a rubber lock followed with 7 teeth of medium height. The core is Purple with Blue highlights and Gold on the outer frame.
8 Armor
An Armor that has 8 points of weight, 4 on each side. The Armors design features small little spikes that protrude out to the side. The armor is very heavy and focuses all weight to the outside, giving the combo insane OWD! It is also the heaviest armor, surpassing 0 and 9 by 2 grams
Illegal Disk {Il}
Metal Bearing Drift Driver {MBD}
Owner: Chiyoh Rei
Special Moves: Royal Crown, Sword, Royal Shield, Royal Breaker
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Some BU Beys for Season 2
Devastation Belial3.Vs.Rp-2 (Divine Belial Evolution)
Enchanted Raphael.Gr.Zn'-10
Horror Deathscyther.Kr.Vn-2
Warning Diabolos.Qn-8
RE: Beyblade Burst: Burst Ultimate (Fan-Story) - DeltaZakuro - Aug. 25, 2022
Season 2 Belial and Raphael Evolution
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RE: Beyblade Burst: Burst Ultimate (Fan-Story) - DeltaZakuro - Aug. 27, 2022
Beyblade Burst BU Episode 14: The Demon Kings Assault! D-Gear's Barrage!!
https://www.wattpad.com/1261484445-beyblade-burst-bu-burst-ultimate-episode-14-the
RE: Beyblade Burst: Burst Ultimate (Fan-Story) - TitanDragon - Aug. 27, 2022
Are Divine Slicer and Divine Slasher different moves?
RE: Beyblade Burst: Burst Ultimate (Fan-Story) - DeltaZakuro - Aug. 27, 2022
Beyblade Burst BU Episode 15: Explosive Sword! Xiphoid Xcalibur!!
https://www.wattpad.com/1263065260-beyblade-burst-bu-burst-ultimate-episode-15