RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) (S2 Bey Contest) - DeltaZakuro - Feb. 15, 2021
(Feb. 15, 2021 6:56 PM)sushiroll1234 Wrote: 👉👈can athena be one of the legends in beyblade burst galaxy?
unless i enter her myself, im not really comfortable with anyone using her.
RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) (S2 Bey Contest) - sushiroll1234 - Feb. 15, 2021
(Feb. 15, 2021 11:51 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: (Feb. 15, 2021 6:56 PM)sushiroll1234 Wrote: 👉👈can athena be one of the legends in beyblade burst galaxy?
unless i enter her myself, im not really comfortable with anyone using her.
k
RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) (S2 Bey Contest) - Ryuga's Son - Feb. 15, 2021
Pumped for the next chaps. All the chapters are really good
RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) (S2 Bey Contest) - 6Jupiter5 - Feb. 16, 2021
DeltaZakuro who won the character contest?
RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) (S2 Bey Contest) - DeltaZakuro - Feb. 16, 2021
(Feb. 16, 2021 2:56 AM)6Jupiter5 Wrote: DeltaZakuro who won the character contest?
I'll announce the winner tomorrow.
RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) (S2 Bey Contest) - DeltaZakuro - Feb. 17, 2021
Winner Of The Bey Contest is LJ-Blader and Smash Dragren Xtreme' 7A
RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) (S2 Bey Contest) - sushiroll1234 - Feb. 17, 2021
(Feb. 17, 2021 5:14 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: Winner Of The Bey Contest is LJ-Blader and Smash Dragren Xtreme' 7A
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RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - 6Jupiter5 - Feb. 17, 2021
(Feb. 17, 2021 6:04 PM)sushiroll1234 Wrote: (Feb. 17, 2021 5:14 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: Winner Of The Bey Contest is LJ-Blader and Smash Dragren Xtreme' 7A
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Basically sums up the feeling of losing.
RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - DeltaZakuro - Feb. 17, 2021
cmon guys there is no reason to be sad when you lose a bey contest like wtf?
RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - Valtryek Aoi - Feb. 17, 2021
(Feb. 17, 2021 6:48 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: cmon guys there is no reason to be sad when you lose a bey contest like wtf?
I can't say much since I did not enter one, but sometimes you win and sometimes you lose you guys. Please respect DeltaZakuro's opinion on the matter of HIS own fanfic. I know you can't stop how you feel, but it's already over. No need to share that on the thread.
RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - 6Jupiter5 - Feb. 17, 2021
(Feb. 17, 2021 6:51 PM)Valtryek Aoi Wrote: (Feb. 17, 2021 6:48 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: cmon guys there is no reason to be sad when you lose a bey contest like wtf?
I can't say much since I did not enter one, but sometimes you win and sometimes you lose you guys. Please respect DeltaZakuro's opinion on the matter of HIS own fanfic. I know you can't stop how you feel, but it's already over. No need to share that on the thread.
Are you referring to me? If so I was just memeing around. I really don’t care if I won or lost.
RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - Valtryek Aoi - Feb. 17, 2021
(Feb. 17, 2021 6:52 PM)6Jupiter5 Wrote: (Feb. 17, 2021 6:51 PM)Valtryek Aoi Wrote: I can't say much since I did not enter one, but sometimes you win and sometimes you lose you guys. Please respect DeltaZakuro's opinion on the matter of HIS own fanfic. I know you can't stop how you feel, but it's already over. No need to share that on the thread.
Are you referring to me? If so I was just memeing around. I really don’t care if I won or lost.
It's directed towards anyone who may be feeling salty, so not you.
RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - DeltaZakuro - Feb. 17, 2021
Chapter 25: Special Training! Defeat Xhaka! Summary
with a few days until The Legend League, Athena trains with Xhaka and searches for a way to counter Xcaliburs alignment!
Chapter 26: Getting Stronger! Adeona Unleashed! Summary
Adeonas flare reaches its fullest potential!
RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) (S2 Bey Contest) - LJ-Blader - Feb. 17, 2021
(Feb. 17, 2021 5:14 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: Winner Of The Bey Contest is LJ-Blader and Smash Dragren Xtreme' 7A
Yes! Thank you, and good job everyone.
RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - DeltaZakuro - Feb. 19, 2021
Chapter 27: Explosion! Exhibition Battle! Summary
The Legend League is here! To kick things off, 2 Battle Royales take place! 1 for Block A and 1 for Block B
Chapter 28: Clash! Explosive Battle!
The Block B Battle Royale starts! Lanes flare evolves as the 7 beys prepare to strike on the newly evolved Lucifer!
Chapter 29: Clash Of Fate! The Legend League!
the League finally starts and it begins with Block A! the first 2 battles is Aiga Vs Hikaru and Xhaka Vs Hyuga!
RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - DeltaZakuro - Feb. 20, 2021
Chapter 22
https://www.wattpad.com/1024454469-story-of-lanes-sister-athena-~beyblade-burst
RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - DeltaZakuro - Feb. 20, 2021
Chapter 16
Lui: Im looking for Lane... Since you're his sister im assuming you know where he is at?
Athena: Unfortunately I don't...
Lui: Oh well.. A shame to be honest. I was looking forward to battling with him.
Athena: You... actually want to battle my brother?!
Lui: *laughs* i want to see the same power he displayed at the qualifiers!
*Lane walks in, he stands in front of the stadium*
Lane: Lui Shirosagijo... You want to see my full power? I will give you so much more!
Lui: *laughs* oh im sure! Now bring it!!
3 2 1 GO SHOOT!!!
*Lucifer instantly claims the center, Longinus comes in at high speed*
Lane: No matter what you do, you will never defeat Lucifers barrier!!
Lui: I wouldn't be so sure..
*Longinus knocks away Lucifer in one attack, Lucifer wobbles as it tries to return to the center but is held at bay by Longinus*
Lane: Tch...
Lui: Destroy that barrier Longinus!!!
*Longinus pushes Lucifer away, pushing its barrier all the way back*
Lui: Hows that?!
*Athena looked on, her evil aura faintly glows. Meanwhile Lane was losing his mind, he tilts his head almost like a demon would.*
Lane: Dont test me!!! Break it Lucifer!!
Lui: You're delusional if you think you can defeat us!! Longinus!!
Lane: Variant Disaster!!
Lui: End him! Raging Upper!!!
*Lucifer and Longinus clash, a small crack forms in Lucifers ring. Lucifer was then blow into the air and burst!*
Lane: W-what?!
Lui: I thought you said you were gonna give me so much more, how weak!
*Lane falls to give knees in anger, Athena looks down at him but grabs her dress and leaves without a word*
~meanwhile Valt and Shu were talking about Athena and her possessed power~
Valt: So Athena is being dragged down into the darkness huh?
Shu: Seems that way.. I had a feeling this would happen, Athenas desire to bring Lane back has made her become stressed and that led to her falling in the darkness.
Valt: What are you going to do? The Legend League is just a few weeks away and we cant have her going off the rails when that time comes.
Shu: I get that, therefore I arranged for her to meet with Aiga.
Valt: Aiga? Why him?
Shu: Because Aiga has gone through the same thing Athena is going through, it only makes sense.
Valt: I see, i like your idea but do you think it will work? You know how hard it was to redeem Aiga so I think we could see a similar thing with her.
Shu: Maybe, we'll just have to wait and see. Its honestly so hard to believe...
Valt: What is?
Shu: That Athena has fallen under Lanes grasp.... Something needs to be done before it is too late.
~Valt looked at Shu concerned but stayed silent, they both knew something big was about to happen.~
[TO BE CONTINUED]
RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - Ryuga's Son - Feb. 21, 2021
(Feb. 20, 2021 9:46 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: Chapter 16
Lui: Im looking for Lane... Since you're his sister im assuming you know where he is at?
Athena: Unfortunately I don't...
Lui: Oh well.. A shame to be honest. I was looking forward to battling with him.
Athena: You... actually want to battle my brother?!
Lui: *laughs* i want to see the same power he displayed at the qualifiers!
*Lane walks in, he stands in front of the stadium*
Lane: Lui Shirosagijo... You want to see my full power? I will give you so much more!
Lui: *laughs* oh im sure! Now bring it!!
3 2 1 GO SHOOT!!!
*Lucifer instantly claims the center, Longinus comes in at high speed*
Lane: No matter what you do, you will never defeat Lucifers barrier!!
Lui: I wouldn't be so sure..
*Longinus knocks away Lucifer in one attack, Lucifer wobbles as it tries to return to the center but is held at bay by Longinus*
Lane: Tch...
Lui: Destroy that barrier Longinus!!!
*Longinus pushes Lucifer away, pushing its barrier all the way back*
Lui: Hows that?!
*Athena looked on, her evil aura faintly glows. Meanwhile Lane was losing his mind, he tilts his head almost like a demon would.*
Lane: Dont test me!!! Break it Lucifer!!
Lui: You're delusional if you think you can defeat us!! Longinus!!
Lane: Variant Disaster!!
Lui: End him! Raging Upper!!!
*Lucifer and Longinus clash, a small crack forms in Lucifers ring. Lucifer was then blow into the air and burst!*
Lane: W-what?!
Lui: I thought you said you were gonna give me so much more, how weak!
*Lane falls to give knees in anger, Athena looks down at him but grabs her dress and leaves without a word*
~meanwhile Valt and Shu were talking about Athena and her possessed power~
Valt: So Athena is being dragged down into the darkness huh?
Shu: Seems that way.. I had a feeling this would happen, Athenas desire to bring Lane back has made her become stressed and that led to her falling in the darkness.
Valt: What are you going to do? The Legend League is just a few weeks away and we cant have her going off the rails when that time comes.
Shu: I get that, therefore I arranged for her to meet with Aiga.
Valt: Aiga? Why him?
Shu: Because Aiga has gone through the same thing Athena is going through, it only makes sense.
Valt: I see, i like your idea but do you think it will work? You know how hard it was to redeem Aiga so I think we could see a similar thing with her.
Shu: Maybe, we'll just have to wait and see. Its honestly so hard to believe...
Valt: What is?
Shu: That Athena has fallen under Lanes grasp.... Something needs to be done before it is too late.
~Valt looked at Shu concerned but stayed silent, they both knew something big was about to happen.~
[TO BE CONTINUED]
This is really good!
RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - DeltaZakuro - Feb. 21, 2021
Chapter 17: Rising Darkness! Athena Goes Wild!
~Athena met up with Valt who wanted to battle against her again, Athena got there and was ready. Darkness filled her eyes as the 2 bladers took their positions.~
Valt: Ive been waiting for this!
Demon Athena: So have I!
3 2 1 GO SHOOT!!!
*Adeona and Valkyrie land in the stadium, the 2 beys clash and a small surge of pain ravages Athenas insides*
Demon Athena: *yelps in pain* t-this is nothing... Im not giving up!!
Valt: Go! Rush Shoot!!
*Valkyrie launches a devastating attack that sends Adeona flying, Adeona falls back down and enters its dark form*
Valt: T-thats-
Demon Athena: Now go!
*Adeona and Valkyrie clash side by side, not even giving an inch*
~Athena growls as the darkness spilled out of her, she then remembered all the terrible things Lane did. That made her snap! She moaned in pain as bursts of pain cuts across her body and her eyes glowed a purple glow! She was becoming a monster far worse than Lane! Adeonas beautiful blue and purple color scheme transforms into a evil black!~
Demon Athena: *roars* DESTROY IT!!!
Valt: Force it back! Rise Valkyrie!!!
Demon Athena: I'll end you!!!
*Adeona and Valkyrie trade blows, each and every attack was damaging Valkyrie!*
Valt: Stop This!!!!
~Athena just laughed like a maniac~
~boths beys come in for a final attack~
Valt: Brave Sword!!!!
Demon Athena: Guide Slash!!!
*both beys clash as an explosion of Blue and Black erupt from the stadium, Adeonas attack sends a crack straight through Valkyrie and the last attack shatters Valkyrie into pieces!!*
Valt: N-no way...
~Athenas darkness grows as she picks up her bey, Valkyrie was in pieces.~
~Later at Sunset, Aiga Akaba approaches Lanes abandoned factory. He goes inside and Lane was already standing at the stadium~
Lane: So you came...
Aiga: Lane Valhalla..
Lane: Finally decided to face me after all this time, especially after i destroyed your friend Ranjiro!
Aiga: Kinda why im here. Im taking revenge for him, Free and everybody else you've humiliated! Another reason I'm here is for Athena, your sister has become the same monster you have become. Once ive defeated you, im going after her next!
Lane: Heh, you do whatever you want with her.
Aiga: What?!
Lane: You think I care about what happens to her? She means nothing to me!
Aiga: Athena is doing everything she can to save you! Do you not care about that?!
Lane: I told her I didnt need saving.. If I have to break her to get her to leave me alone then I will do exactly that!
Aiga: *gets ready to launch* guess its useless trying to talk sense into you.. I'll blow you away with my Infinite Sword!
3 2 1 GO SHOOT!!!
*Lucifer takes the center, Achilles launches a wave of Attacks on the barrier~
Aiga: Blow it away!
Lane: You wont do no such thing!!!
Aiga: We wont back down!!! This is for Ranjiro!!! And Free and Athena!!!!
*Achilles breaks the barrier effortlessly, Lucifer still persists*
Lane: You will regret this....
~Lane roared as the belts covering his body snapped and flew off, Lucifer enters its evil form~
Lane: Rise and burn, Lucifer!!!
Aiga: *hair breaks free from his hair tie* ACHILLES!!!!
Lane: Take on our flare!!! Variant Armageddon!!!
Aiga: Its over!!! Infinite Sword!!!
*both beys clash and Lucifer bursts instantly*
Lane: NO!!! Not Again!!!!
~Aiga picks up his bey and leaves, not having anything left to say to Lane. The next day, Athena heads to GT Arena to train but is stopped by Aiga~
Athena: A-Aiga?!
Aiga: We need to talk.
[TO BE CONTINUED]
RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - CheetoBlader - Feb. 21, 2021
Alright cool so instead of accepting that it’s a normal sibling thing of annoying each other he wants to kill Athena. Sounds legit
RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - DeltaZakuro - Feb. 21, 2021
(Feb. 21, 2021 3:15 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote: Alright cool so instead of accepting that it’s a normal sibling thing of annoying each other he wants to kill Athena. Sounds legit
It only gets worse from there.
RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - 6Jupiter5 - Feb. 21, 2021
(Feb. 21, 2021 3:15 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote: Alright cool so instead of accepting that it’s a normal sibling thing of annoying each other he wants to kill Athena. Sounds legit
Happens to me all the time. Just the average healthy relationship between siblings.
RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - Pixi - Feb. 21, 2021
(Feb. 21, 2021 3:57 AM)6Jupiter5 Wrote: (Feb. 21, 2021 3:15 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote: Alright cool so instead of accepting that it’s a normal sibling thing of annoying each other he wants to kill Athena. Sounds legit
Happens to me all the time. Just the average healthy relationship between siblings.
why did i laugh
RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - daheavydl3 - Feb. 21, 2021
(Feb. 21, 2021 2:42 PM)Pixi Wrote: (Feb. 21, 2021 3:57 AM)6Jupiter5 Wrote: Happens to me all the time. Just the average healthy relationship between siblings.
why did i laugh
You'll get used to it
RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - PinkRose - Feb. 21, 2021
(Feb. 21, 2021 3:15 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote: Alright cool so instead of accepting that it’s a normal sibling thing of annoying each other he wants to kill Athena. Sounds legit
I can attest to that actually.
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