RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical and Beyblade Burst: DualBurst - beansworth - Jun. 03, 2022
Okay, this announcement needs to be made. So it's pretty obvious Mystical hasn't been worked on it a while, it was May when the last chapter came out. DualBurst is one of the reasons, Mystical wasn't getting worked on, but also school got in the way, with Keystones and so many other things. But now, with 2 full days, and 2 half days till my freshman is over. Mystical will be worked on way more over summer. So sorry to the people who came here to read Mystical, and may be angry or even pissed that chapters are coming out less and less. But I swear to work even harder on Mystical.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical and Beyblade Burst: DualBurst - beansworth - Jul. 01, 2022
I'M ALIVE, sorry for not posting at all. I honestly kinda forgot about my fanfics for like a week or two. But I'm back, and working. DualBurst Chapter 3, arrives!
Chapter 3: Born in the Flames, Hellfire Salamander! To BC Sol, we go!
Chapter 3: Born in Fire, Hellfire Salamander! Going to BC Sol
Akira stood there, he’d have the ability to decide whether or not, he’d have a rematch with Sumika.
Akira(Excited): “Let’s go, Sumika!”
Sumika smiled, and grabbed her DB Launcher, Akira doing the same, and they walked over to the stadium, both bladers ready.
Both(Excited): “3! 2! 1! Go Shoot!”
{Warlord Ares and Hellfire Salamander hit the stadium floor, Salamander took center, due to her Core Driver being in Stamina Mode. Ares as always went to the outer ridge and began speeding up.}
Akira(Confident): “Start this battle, the same, Ares! Volt Shoot!”
{Ares darted to the center, and began barraging Salamander, but these attacks were making no effect, as Salamander was a Left-Spinning Balance Type.}
Akira(Thoughts): “Since Salamander is a Left-Spinning Bey, I can’t go all rush, no brains. Her bey will definitely beat me if we have a battle of LAD, I’ll need to finish it now to win!”
Akira(Excited): “Go all in, Ares! Warlord Thrust!”
{Ares sped to the center, Warlord’s swords glowing blue, and hit Salamander into the stadium wall, ricocheting into the sky.}
Akira thought this was it, his victory achieved. Then Sumika called out,
Sumika(Confident): “This was your error, Akira! Blazing Petal Dance!”
{It seemed as if hundreds of flaming sakura petals fell with Salamander, as it crashed into Ares, and launched it out of the stadium.}
Akira(Surprised): “That’s Salamander’s power?”
Sumika smiled, and grabbed Salamander, grabbed the lock on Core, and changed it into Attack Setting.
Akira and Sumika walked to each other, shaking hands before walking back down to class.
As they re-entered their classroom, everyone began asking questions on why Sumika and Akira went to the roof alone, they reassuring told everyone, it was a Bey Battle.
Soon after everything, the day ended and Akira and Gouki were packing up, when Sumika ran over and said,
Sumika(Happy): “See ya, guys later!”
Both Gouki and Akira waved goodbye, and Gouki asked,
Gouki(Confused): “Weren’t you two just enemies, like days ago?”
Akira grabbed his bag, and turned to Gouki,
Akira(Happy): “We were, but she’s apologized for everything, I don’t 100% trust her yet. But, it’s good to have a friend back.”
Akira turned away, his white hair followed his head, Gouki looked at Akira’s hair, and remembered the past.
{Unknown Time, Shibuya. 2016}
Akira and Gouki ran threw Gouki’s backyard, Gouki’s brown hair flowing with the wind, whilst Akira’s black hair danced in the wind.
Around this time, is when the incident happened.
Akira and Gouki kept running, until they got to the park and began playing, soon nighttime would fall, and both boys went home.
On a normal day, nothing special would’ve happened, but today is when Akira would see something, he never should’ve, Akira walked into his house, and called out,
Akira(Curious): “Dad! Dad! Where are you?”
Akira’s Father(Muffled): “I’m in my room…”
Akira then walked over and asked,
Akira(Hungry): “Can you help me cook some ramen?”
Akira’s Father again muffled, from his room called,
Akira’s Father(Muffled): “I’ll be out soon.”
Akira began waiting, but soon nearly half an hour went by, and his father had yet to exit his room, so Akira walked over and opened his father’s door to see him, with another woman kissing.
Akira(Surprised): “Wait, where’s Mom!?”
Akira’s Father looked over, his eyes widened with fear, he threw the woman off him, and ran over, grabbing Akira.
Akira’s father(Pissed): “You saw NOTHING, Akira!”
Akira began nodding, while tears formed, Akira’s father tossed him into the wall, and Akira hit his back, and fell to his knees.
Akira’s Father re-entered the room, and for the next year, Akira kept this secret, never telling his naïve mother, about his father’s cheating. And soon Akira’s Father would hit Akira, every time he saw him with another woman, the stress of all these events, caused Akira’s slick black hair, to lose its pigment and turn white, also known as Marie Antoinette Syndrome.
Soon though Yuzuki would find out about her husband’s cheating and the two would divorce, she also learned of her husband’s beatings on Akira, and began court fights against him.
Akira during all of this would continue experiencing, Marie Antoinette Syndrome, although it’s no longer a problem, his hair is permanently white.
{Present Day, Shibuya. 14:45 PM}
Akira and Gouki walked down the street, the boys were talking about Beyblade, girls Gouki liked, and their classes, to only see when they got home, their families at Akira’s house.
Akira(Confused): “You know anything about this, Gouki?”
Gouki shrugged his shoulders, the boys entered Akira’s house, to see their families sitting at the table, island and counter, speaking with legends, Valt Aoi and Free De La Hoya.
Akira(Surprised): “Valt Aoi!? Free De La Hoya!? BC Sol’s top members, at my house!?”
Valt(Excited): “Yo! You’re Akira Kamado and Gouki Kazehaya, the bladers who use their own custom, DualBurst System right?”
Akira nodded, Free turned around and said,
Free(Calm): “Well if your who we’re looking for then….”
Akira(Surprised): “Well actually there’s also a old friend of mine, Sumika Hanabusa, who uses a DualBurst Bey as well.”
Free nodded, getting up, and going to find her, while Valt explained.
Valt(Excited): “After I watched you guy’s battle, I was so excited to meet the two boys who made their who Beyblade System, so I was going to ask you and of course, your parents, if you guys wanted to come to BC Sol?”
Akira and Gouki smiled, and said,
Both(Excited): “Of course, we’d want to come!”
Valt laughed and turned to the boy’s families, and asked
Valt(Calm): “Are you guys fine, with them coming to BC Sol?”
Yuzuki nodded, and Gouki’s parents agreed to let them go, so Akira and Gouki pack their important items, met up with Free and Sumika, and went to the airport.
Valt turned to the boys and said,
Valt(Calm): “You guys got through the easy part, now it’s the hard part, all three of you guys will have to battle some of our strongest bladers and beat them to get to stay at BC Sol. If you end up staying, we’ll enroll you at the local school, which does a lot of Beyblade teachings and battles.”
Akira, Gouki and Sumika, took all importance listening to Blading Legend, Valt Aoi. Soon, they’d get on a plane, and fly to Spain and go to BC Sol.
When they arrived, they entered BC Sol’s yard and saw a woman with long tied up dark pink hair, she was wearing a long dress, that was navy blue on the right, and pink on the left.
She turned to Valt and Free, and the trio.
???(Excited): “Valt! Free! You’ve both gotten back.”
Valt smiled, and Free waved his hand. The woman ran over and hugged Free, Valt turned to the trio, their faces, obvisouly saying, they had no clue who this woman was.
Valt(Surprised): “Do you, guys not know who she is?”
The trio shook their heads no, and Valt began telling them, about Kristina.
Valt: “So Kris, is the owner of BC Sol, she’s been running the team, for like ever. She’s really nice and helps everyone on the team, right now though, it’s been tough since Rashad, Illya and many others have left. Our team is losing a lot of members, but she’s doing her best to make sure BC Sol is still the best team around.”
Gouki(Surprised): “I have no clue, why so many people would leave BC Sol. It’s like the best team around!”
Then through one of the gym’s doors, three kids burst through. They seemed to be the same age as Akira, Gouki and Sumika. One had spikey black hair, somewhat like Takemichi Hanagaki’s. The shorter one had a beanie on, that covered most of his hair, but some green strands were sticking out of the bottom. Finally the last kid, had long light brown hair, she seemed to be an angel.
Everyone(Scared): “Eh!?”
Kris, then saw the three kids who burst through the door, and called,
Kris(Irritated): “Hiro, Chikashi, Angie! Come here, right now!”
Hiro, Chikashi and Angie all walked over to Kris, and Kris said,
Kris(Irritated): “I thought I told you all, no more messing around in the Bey Gym?”
Hiro(Guilty): “Kris, it’s my fault. I was being annoying and saying Angie’s favorite anime, wasn’t good. Don’t blame those two.”
Kris smiled, and said,
Kris(Happy): “Well I’m glad, you’re taking the blame for your actions. I’ll let you guys off the hook this time.”
The kids smiled, before seeing Akira’s trio, and Chikashi asked.
Chikashi(Confused): “Who’re these guys!?”
Valt pointed at Akira’s trio, and said,
Valt(Calm): “This is Akira Kamado, Gouki Kazehaya and Sumika Hanabusa, their all recruits from Japan. They all use that DualBurst System, you guys thought was amazing.”
Hiro, Chikashi and Angie’s eyes sparkled, and they ran over to the trio, and began asking questions, endlessly.
Finally, later on the trio was let go, and went to the Bey Gym. For introductions to the team.
Kris(Excited): “Alright, time for you, guys to meet the team members of BC Sol. Could you guys, please say your names and beys?”
Valt(Excited): “You all know me, and my bey is Ultimate Valkyrie.
Free(Calm): “I’d assume you know me too, I use Vanish Fafnir.”
Rantaro(Excited): “I’m Rantaro Kiyama, but you can call me Honcho for short. I use my DB Bey, Cyclone Ragnaruk.”
Sisco(Calm): “I’m Sisco Karlisle. I use my Superking Bey, Curse Satan.”
Hiro (Excited): “I’m Hiro Hanagaki, and I’m a fan of Valt and Shu. My DB Bey is Astral Valkyrie.”
Chikashi(Excited): “I’m Chikashi Gushiken, and I love Defense Type Beys. I use Chain Ragnaruk.”
Angie(Excited): “Hi, I’m Angie Smith, I love reading, but Romance Manga has to be my favorite. My DB Bey is Savior Perseus.”
Kris turned to Akira’s trio and said,
Kris(Excited): “Would you guys, tell us your names, and Beys now?”
Akira(Excited): “I’m Akira Kamado, and I use my DualBurst Bey, Warlord Ares.”
Gouki(Excited): “I’m Gouki Kazehaya, I like Griffins and Mythology, and I use my DualBurst Bey, Archer Griffin.”
Sumika(Excited): “I’m Sumika Hanabusa, I like salamanders, manga and drawing. My DualBurst Bey is Hellfire Salamander.”
Now with everyone introduced, Kris said,
Kris(Excited): “Good! Now since everyone’s been introduced to each other. It’s time to test your skills. Akira, Gouki and Sumika, prepare to face Hiro, Chikashi and Angie in battle.”
Hiro, Chikashi and Angie’s eyes sparkled, as they were excited to battle the bladers who created the DualBurst System.
Akira and Hiro walked over to the Bey Stadium, and handed each other, their beys for inspection.
Akira(Mind): “Alright, Hiro uses Astral Valkyrie2. His combo seems to be Giga and High Zephyr’ and his armor is 10.”
Akira and Hiro gave their beys back, and grabbed their launchers, and prepared to launch.
Both(Excited): “3! 2! 1! Go Shoot!”
{Warlord Ares and Astral Valkyrie hit the stadium floor, Astral Valkyrie spinning around the center, of the stadium, while Ares circled the outer ridge, Akira then called.}
Akira(Excited): “Our ever proud attack! Volt Shoot!”
{Ares burst of it’s Volt Driver, and began barraging Astral Valkyrie, it clicked Astral Valkyrie once. Then Ares went to the outer ridge, and prepared to attack again.}
???: “Now, Akira! Use all your power!”
Akira(Mind): “Wait, who was that!? I just heard a voice, behide me!”
Akira brushed the voice off for now, and called.
Akira(Excited): “Alright, go for the win! Warlord Thrust!”
{Warlord’s blades glew blue, and Ares darted to the center, hitting Astral Valkyrie into the air, and bursting it.}
Hiro(Surprised): “No way! He’s way more powerful than I thought!”
Gouki and Chikashi walked up to the stadium next, and prepared to battle, Gouki and Chikashi handed each other, their beys.
Gouki(Mind): “Alright, so Chikashi uses Chain Ragnaruk. His disc is Tapered, the Driver is Metal Orbit Metal. This armor is 10.”
Gouki and Chikashi gave each other, their beys back. And grabbed their launchers, preparing to battle.
Both(Excited): “3! 2! 1! Go Shoot!”
{Archer Griffin and Chain Ragnaruk hit the stadium floor, both beys went to the center and began battling.}
Gouki(Excited): “Take center, with Archer Zone!”
{Archer Griffin hit Chain Ragnaruk away, into the far stadium wall. It hit the stadium floor, a few times before, regaining balance, and rushing toward the center, where Griffin was.}
Chikashi(Confident): “Don’t give up! We’ll reclaim center!”
{Chain Ragnaruk began clashing with Griffin, and it seemed that, Chain Ragnaruk would win, then Gouki smirked.}
Chikashi(Confused): “Wait!? Why are you smirking, Gouki?”
Gouki stomped his right foot, to the ground and called,
Gouki(Confident): “You’ve entered Griffin’s area, it’s time! Archer Arrow!”
{Griffin hit Chain Ragnaruk with it’s rubber wing, and launched Chain Raganruk into the far stadium wall, bursting it.}
Gouki laughed, as he walked away for Sumika to battle against Angie.
Sumika and Angie traded beys for inspection, Sumika looked over Angie’s Savior Perseus.
Sumika(Mind): “Okay, so Sumika uses Savior Perseus. I’ve never seen this DB Core, she must’ve made Perseus. Her disc is Giga, and her Driver is Bearing’, but the spring seems to be weaker then a normal dash driver’s spring. And her armor is 3, this bey must have amazing stamina. I’ll go with 5 bladed Hellfire, and I’ll set Core to Attack Mode.”
Both bladers put their beys onto their DB Launchers, and called out,
Both(Confident): “3! 2! 1! Go Shoot!”
{Hellfire Salamander and Savior Perseus, hit the stadium floor and Perseus took the center, while Salamander blitzed around the outer ridge.}
Angie(Confident): “You won’t be taking Perseus down! Bearing Drive!”
Sumika snapped her right index finger, and called,
Sumika(Confident): “My Salamander will definitely burst your Savior Perseus, so prepare for Hellfire Slash!”
{Salamander soon darted to the center, it’s blades seemed almost to be on fire, as it slammed into Perseus.}
{Perseus was launched, into the far stadium wall, and bounced off the wall. Perseus had lost 2 clicks, and began to spin towards the center again.}
Sumika(Confused): “I thought I would’ve burst Perseus?”
Angie smiled, and explained,
Angie(Excited): “My Perseus isn’t that easy to burst, because my Perseus’ Core has strong locks, that combined with my Bearing’ Driver makes the bey have strong locks.”
Sumika frowned, and snapped her fingers again, calling out,
Sumika(Annoyed): “Again, Salamander! Hellfire Slash!”
{Salamander rushed to the outer ridge once again, and followed the same attack pattern as before. This time though, Angie and Perseus knew what was coming.}
Angie(Confident): “Now, Perseus. Awaken!”
{Perseus’ avatar awakened, and swung his sword, while floating.}
Angie(Confident): “Alright, go all in with Savior Slash!”
{The three main blades, and rubber nubs on Savior glew gold, as Perseus slammed into Salamander, bursting it.}
Sumika(Confused): “What the!?”
Valt, walked over after observing the matches, and announced.
Valt(Confident): “After you all battle, I can see your skills are good, but you all need to practice. I’m happy to say, you three are welcomed to BC Sol.”
Akira, Gouki and Sumika all smiled, and thanked Valt. Hiro and his gang, showed the trio to their rooms. They all entered their rooms, and began to unpack.
{BC Sol’s Gym}
{Valt, Free, Sisco, Rantaro and Kris entered the gym, Kris was holding a tablet.}
Kris(Calm): “Alright everyone, as you know, Akira and Gouki created the DualBurst System. The System seems to be more powerful and heavier than your DB Beys,”
Sisco(Annoyed): “Hey, not everyone has DB Beys, Kris.”
Kris(Calm): “Sorry, Sisco. Continuing on, with this I’d only assume younger bladers, and more will begin to use the DualBurst System. I’d like you, four to keep an eye out, and see if any new villain appears. To remind, you all. First was Ashtem and the Snake Pit, then Phi and his path of Chaos, then Arthur and Gwyn. Most recently was Lane, and his corrupt flare, and finally, our former teammate Rashad Goodman.”
Valt and Free remembered Rashad’s reign, until Bell defeated him with Dangerous Belial.
Valt(Concerned): “I think I speak for me and Free, when I say this. We will do everything in our power to make sure, no villain tries to take over the blading world, Kris.”
Kris smiled, and thanked the legends.
Everyone exited the gym, and in Akira’s room, everyone was sitting and talking with each other.
Hiro(Curious): “Hey Akira, I have a question for you.”
Akira turned to Hiro, and replied.
Akira(Happy): “Shoot your question, Hiro.”
Hiro(Curious): “What is the meaning of Beyblade to you? And do you feel that winning is superior then having fun?”
Akira(Serious): “Well to me, the meaning of blading is to have fun while battling with our friends and rivals. Beyblade should be something we all can enjoy. And I think that fun is better in battles then always winning.”
Hiro(Confused): “But don’t you want to win?”
Akira(Serious): “I mean, who doesn’t want to win? But sometimes losing helps you more then winning.”
Hiro(Calm): “Okay. Thanks for sharing.”
Everyone kept talking, and soon went to their rooms, and everyone but one person went to sleep.
Hiro walked to his window, and looked outside on the dark sky, over looking the forest. The moon, dimly lit the forest roof.
Hiro(Confused): “Winning should be everything in Beyblade. It seems that Akira doesn’t think the same as me.”
Hiro turned from his window, as his eyes glew purple, he lied in his bed, and fell asleep.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical and Beyblade Burst: DualBurst - MasterofDerp - Jul. 01, 2022
This is great! Awesome work. Quick question, which episode do you think Brandt’s gonna first appear in?
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical and Beyblade Burst: DualBurst - beansworth - Jul. 01, 2022
(Jul. 01, 2022 7:55 PM)MasterofDerp Wrote: This is great! Awesome work. Quick question, which episode do you think Brandt’s gonna first appear in? I don't know exactly, but it'll be a little longer compared to Unseen's and Anime Blader's as yours is a villain. Right now, don't quote me on this, but I think it could be 7 or 8.
Mystical Chapter 38! We've basically hit the half way point, till Chapter 65! This chapter as always was edited by the one and only, @Hollowmind8
Chapter 37: The Triplets drama! Obito’s Past unraveled!
{4 years ago….Tokyo, Japan. A Blading Room in a Highschool.}
[Obito ran down the hall, the triplets all followed him. They were running to the local beyblading club.]
Obito(Excited): “I was first! That means I can pick who I’ll battle!”
{Annie, Lilia and Cleo all caught up}
Annie(Happy): “Well, that was our bet. Who’re ya gonna battle?”
[Obito pointed to Annie]
Obito: “You.”
[Annie smiled, and the two ran over to a BeyStadium.]
Cleo (panting): "You know, if you just wanted to battle Annie you could have just said so."
[Obito pulled his Astral Belial2. Legacy. Iron’ -6, and his Custom BeyLauncher LR. Annie pulled out her Dynamite Valkyrie2. Tapered. Zone’+Z-0 +F Gear and her Custom LR BeyLauncher]
Annie(Excited): “Let’s go!”
{Both bladers launched their beys, and battled for a long time, in fact, they would battle everyday after school until their final year of Secondary School, when Obito’s father, Madara, his mother, Terra, and his cousin, Shisui, all came to meet him on the last day.}
[Annie and Obito exited their school, and were talking about the newest battles.]
Obito(Excited): “I can’t believe Bell evolved Belial again! Now he has Divine Belial, and he’s began challenging all the legends again!”
Annie(Excited): “I know, right! Although, Valt’ll still beat him.”
[Obito chuckled, and then saw his parents]
Obito(Confused): “Mom, Dad? Why is Shisui here?”
[Shisui smiled]
Shisui(Excited): “I came to battle you!”
[Obito was confused]
Madara: “Shisui saw your battles on T.V and asked to come and battle you. Hello Annie."
Annie(Confused): "Hi Obito's mother and father and... Shisui. (Why did his parents brought him here just for a bey battle?)"
[Obito smiled]
Obito(Excited): “Then let’s go, Shisui!”
[Shisui and Obito ran to the nearest stadium, with Annie tagging along. Shisui showed off his bey: Divine Perseus. Almight+V+S Gears.]
[Shisui and Obito launched their beys will all their power, and battled with each other, and Annie joined in not long after.]
[However, after Obito said goodbye, that would be the last thing he would say to Annie for 4 years.]
[Obito was told later that night that his family would be moving to America, and he’d live there until Van Aoi met him and brought him back to Japan.]
{Present Day}
Obito(Cold): “You saw my face?”
[As Obito said this, Annie backed away. Obito got up, his eyes piercing through the mask and into Annie’s soul.]
[Annie shivered, Cloe also shivered but Lilia remained unfazed]
{awkward silence}
[Obito then simply turned around and re-entered the cafeteria. Both Annie and Cloe were shocked, but relieved]
Lilia: "Coward"
Cloe(annoyed): "What now? You wanted him to punch Annie?"
Lilia: "I just want to have a justification to punch his face"
Annie(Concerned): "Let's just... go"
{The would all start walking back to their dorms, with Cloe and Lilia arguing friendly while Annie would look behind to where Obito were.]
[Obito entered the cafeteria, then felt a sharp pain through his head and walked back to his room. He threw the door open, and ripped his mask off. He was sweating, and had a major pain surging throughout his head. Obito fell to the floor, gripping the sides of his head, it felt as if his foggy mind began to de-fog, the truth revaling.]
{Sometime Ago}
[Obito opened his eyes, his right side was covered in bandages. Obito’s parents sat crying]
Obito(In Pain): “Mom…Dad? Why are you guys crying?”
[Obito’s parents looked up and saw Obito, finally awake. Both of them ran over to Obito and hugged him, both crying.]
Obito(Confused): “Wait, where…where is Shisui?”
[Madara looked down to his son]
Madara(Grief): “Son….I need you to remember what happened.”
[Obito’s mind then clicked, and the past month flashed into his head.]
{1 Month Before this scene. 12 AM. San Deigo, California.}
[Obito’s family and Shisui had just left Comic Con, everyone had wanted to go as they all had different interests in what Comic Con had to offer.]
Shisui(Excited): “That was the coolest thing ever!”
Obito(Excited): “Yeah, I loved every part of it!”
[Madara chuckled]
Madara(Excited): “Well, we can do this again next year. How does that sound, boys?”
[Both boys cheered, and loved the idea]
Terra(Confused): “Hey Honey? Has that car been following us? It seems like it has for a while now.”
[Madara looked back quickly and saw the car behind them, it was a very new Ford Mustang. Then the Mustang sped up too]
Madara(Irritated): “Lemme try something.”
{Right when, they saw that a car from the right pulled out. Terra saw the car and turned, calling to Obito.
Terra(Scared): “Obito, Shisui! Get down, that car is going to…..
{
The truck rammed into Madara’s car. It rammed right into the right side, where Shisui and Terra sat. The Mustang slowed down and the driver got out. He smiled and called]
???: “Oi, nice job! You killed those Japanese Scum.”
{The truck driver gave the Mustang Driver a thumbs-up, and the two drove away. Luttle detail could be seen from the flashback, but Obito was being protected by Shisui, costing himself}
[Obito’s memory then stopped and he began crying.]
{Months later, Obito was finally allowed to leave. He entered High School and everyone questioned him for his scars that all lead to his eye. Some kids said he looked like a freak, other kids said he looked cool, and others said he looked like a certain japanese media character. Obito didn’t care what any of them thought though. He didn't recover from the trauma yet}
{Present Day}
{Obito pulled himself onto his bed and gripped his head as hard as possible. Bt his past, his memories, all came flooding back.
His cousin, Shisui’s sacrifice, his relationship with the triplets, his parents, everything hit him all at once. In truth, Obito needed that mask to keep him "okay".}
[Annie knocked on Obito’s door]
Annie(Concerned): “Hey, Obito... I saw that you ran back to your room clutching your head. Are you okay?”
[Obito heard Annie. He debated mentally on what to do and decided to put his mask back and open the door. He kept one arm around his stomach and a slight difficulty on breathing]
Obito: "What is it?"
Annie(Concerned): “Firstly I want to say sorry whatever makes you hate me and my sisters. Secondly, are you okay?”
Obito(Emotionless): "No, not much. I should be the one to say sorry to be honest"
[Annie was caught off guard]
Obito(Emotionless): "We really were good friends, so I’m sorry for what I’ve done, Annie.”
Annie(Sincere): “Oh, uhh... It’s okay, Obito. I know it must have been hard after... What happened to... Shisui.”
[Obito was also caught off guard]
Obito(Surprised): "How do you know?"
Annie(Serious): "I have your mother on my social media, it was to see what was going on with you and... Keep in touch. But when it happened... I just..."
[Annie teared up. Both continued standing there for some minutes without saying anything]
Annie: "I... I think I should be going now... See you later"
[Annie walked away to her dorm and Obito shut the door and curled up on his bed]
{Yacht’s Deck.}
[Keith stood out on the deck, and launched Kratos again.]
{Keith’s current goal was to activate the Burst Stopper within Kratos’ Core. He had launched Kratos 30 times, but still didn’t activate the Stopper.}
[Keith picked up Mythical Kratos and began talking.]
Keith(Concerned): “What am I doing wrong, Kratos? I thought we were the perfect team.”
[Kratos pulled Keith into his domain.]
Kratos(Sincere): “Hey, Keith. I see your beginning to doubt our strength,”
Keith(Sad): “Yeah, I thought since we upgraded to the Mythological System, our power would be doubled. But, we’re still not that strong.”
[Kratos then swung his axe, and the force felt like a huge gust of wind. Keith looked up, and Kratos was back to looking like his avatar before evolving.]
[Keith then remembered everything up until here, his battles, battling Van, battling legends, and most importantly all the friends and rivals he made.]
Keith(Realization): “I don’t need to be stronger, we’re already super strong, Kratos!”
Kratos(Blank): "Well, I was going to make a speech about something else but..."
[Keith giggled, and fist-bumped Kratos. Both laughed a little. Keith exited the mindspace. And once again saw, Mythical Kratos.]
[Keith swung his launcher up, and put Kratos on. His eyes gleaming with determination.]
{Obito’s Room corridor}
[Hours has passed, and Obito had already fallen asleep] [Annie was at his door]
Annie(Happy): “I’m glad that we met back up, Obito.”
[Annie then exited Obito’s room door and was returning to her room. When he arrived, she saw Van on the phone.]
Van(Calm): “Yes sir, I understand. I’ll meet up with you, soon. Van out.”
[Annie quickly entered her room before Van turned around.]
Annie(Surprised): "That, was a close call"
[The next morning, the Yacht would arrive at BC Sol, and the team battles would begin.]
Now Obito's past is finally completed, and the Yacht Battles are in full swing!
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical and Beyblade Burst: DualBurst - DJCAT8608 - Jul. 05, 2022
Replying to let y’all know I’m not dead, also great chapter!
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical and Beyblade Burst: DualBurst - Carma___bigbang - Jul. 12, 2022
Amazing 🤩 I am back
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical and Beyblade Burst: DualBurst - DJCAT8608 - Aug. 17, 2022
activity on my account should return to near full capacity as I am back at school
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical and Beyblade Burst: DualBurst - MasterofDerp - Aug. 17, 2022
Yo Beansworth, is Dualburst still happening?
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical and Beyblade Burst: DualBurst - DJCAT8608 - Aug. 18, 2022
*me waiting for more Mythical to come out*
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical and Beyblade Burst: DualBurst - DJCAT8608 - Aug. 30, 2022
bumping this
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical and Beyblade Burst: DualBurst - beansworth - Aug. 31, 2022
Story Updates: Important Please Read!!
Mythical: As of the Battle Royale Cruise Arc, I found writing Mythical to be harder and forced more then fun, so I have changed up the arcs, and now the story will be entering the War Arc, sorry that some character will not be debuting, but I had bitten off more then I could ever chew with Mythical, I'll mention some of the cut characters in a spoiler. The major difference is that I'll be skipping some chapters, sorry about this, but Mythical has become more of a chore, then a fun series to write, although this is starting to change after beginning to write the War Arc.
DualBurst: As of right now, DualBurst is my preferred series, I do still like Mythical but Mythical feels like a mess, with a still uncompleted storyline and plot. DualBurst, I still have plans for, and I have some kind of idea for a plot and storyline. DualBurst feels like a new start to me, and I plan to continue to write Fanfictions, but I'll need either a break or some sort of clue to write them. Currently DualBurst doesn't have any changes, it is staying the same.
Chapter Updates:
Mythical Chapters: BIG UPDATE!
Chapter 38: Arrival! Declared!
Chapter 39: Preparing! Legendary Training
Chapter 40: Valhalla's Team!
Chapter 41: It Begins! Valhalla VS Requiem!
Chapter 42: 2-on-2's! His Thoughts
Chapter 43: 1-on-1's! The Final Burst!
Chapter 44: Championship Match! Father VS Son!
Chapter 45: Father VS Son: Part 2!
Chapter 46: The New Champion! Keith's Final Launch!?
Chapter 47: Everything Led Up to This! Mythical Battle!
Chapter 48: Mythical Battle: Part 2!
Chapter 49: Mythical Battle: Part 3!
Chapter 50(Finale): The Future!
DualBurst
Chapter 4: The Dragon's Den! Angelic Beat!
Chapter 5: Harmonic Feather! Akira's Upgrade!
Chapter 6: Ares VS Angel! Griffin VS Drake!
Chapter 7: Ultra Upgrade! Ultra Reboot!
Chapter 8: The Golden Dragon! Hiro
Chapter 9: My Hero
Character Cuts from Mythical
Since I bit off more, then I could chew, I will be cutting these characters from Mythical. Sorry in advance.
DJ (DJCat's OC)
Brooklyn
Valac
A few more, I think but I can't remember which ones off the top of my head.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical and Beyblade Burst: DualBurst - DJCAT8608 - Sep. 01, 2022
*thumbs up*
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical and Beyblade Burst: DualBurst - beansworth - Sep. 06, 2022
Back at it! DualBurst Chapter 4 is out! Percy and Valac will make their debuts soon, whilst Brandt has a little ways to go yet.
Chapter 4: The Dragon's Den! Angelic Beat!
Chapter 4: The Dragon’s Den! Angelic Beat!
The next morning, at the port.
Random Lady: “I can’t believe he’d do that to you!”
Random Lady(2): “That boy, he….he....”
Officer(Confused): “Madam, you’re telling me, that this boy kicked your husband, because he was bad-mouthing the waiteress?”
Random Lady(2): “Yes, you idiot! He ran up, and kicked my husband! He was telling the waitress that his steak wasn’t cooked right!”
Officer(Confused): “And how, was this cooked wrong?”
Random Lady(2): “It wasn’t the perfect temperature, he asked for!”
Officer(Tired): “Yeah, that’s honestly fine for what the kid did, to you snobs. I’m going on break.”
Random Lady(2): “What!?”
{BC Sol’s Gym}
“Go Shoot!”
{Warlord Ares, Archer Griffin and Hellfire Salamander hit the stadium floor, Griffin took the center while Ares and Salamander sped around the outer ridge.}
Akira(Confident): “We’ll start this battle! Now, Volt Shoot!”
Sumika(Confident): “I’ll take you down, Akira! Salamander, Hellfire Drive!”
{Both beys began hitting the other, at extreme speeds and force. Both beys hit once more, and we’re spinning as fast and began nearing Griffin.}
Gouki(Bored): “These past 5 battles, have been nothing but me winning, with the only stamina left over.”
Then the gym’s doors burst open, the trio, Hiro, Chikashi and Angie all looked over, as a kid with black hair, that was somewhat spikey, towards the bottom, a black hoodie, white shorts and black slides, came through the door.
???(Serious): “I’m Dai Uchiha! I’m come to fight Akira Kamado!”
Akira looked at this boy, who seemed to be near his age, confused as to why he was searching for him.
Dai grabbed something from his pocket, and pulled out a Beyblade.
Dai(Confident): “This is my Beyblade, Terror Drake Jaw+Bleed Sawblade-Misery.”
Akira, Gouki and Sumika then realized what type of bey it was. It was one of their DualBurst Beys.
Dai then pulled his launcher from his holder, and walked to the stadium, calling out,
Dai(Battle-Ready): “Akira Kamado, come here and fight me!”
Akira stood there, pondering whether or not, he should fight this random guy, who just ran into their gym.
Then some of BC Sol’s security ran through the door and called.
Officer 1(Out of Breath): “Hey! You’re not supposed to be in here, without an appointment with Kristina!”
Officer 2(Out of Breath): “We have to escort you, off of the property!”
Dai turned to them, and called,
Dai(Angry): “My appointment is with Akira Kamado, blader of your team!”
Akira walked forward, and said to security.
Akira(Confident): “I’ll get Dai out of the gym, and then everything should be back to normal.”
Dai turned to Akira, and smiled, his teeth bright and shiny.
Dai and Akira walked over to the stadium, and pulled their launchers up, putting their beys onto their launchers.
Gouki walked over, and took his place as the referee.
Gouki: “This will be a first to two match! Now, get set!”
Everyone: “3!”
Akira began to copy Valt’s 1st shoot style from DB, as Dai releases the pressure in his knees, looking like he was crouching,
Everyone: “2!”
Akira began to spin slower, and get ready to launch. Dai took his right hand and grabbed his string launcher’s ripcord.
Everyone: “1!”
Akira stomped his right foot, and grabbed his string. Dai lowered his back further, gripping the string harder.
Both: “Go Shoot!!”
Dai and Akira pulled their strings with as much force as possible.
{Terror Drake and Warlord Ares hit the stadium floor, both zooming around the outer ridge, and preforming flower patterns.}
Akira(Surprised): “So, it’s an attack match!”
Dai(Confident): “I’m betting that, my Terror Drake will burst your Warlord Ares.”
{Drake then went to the edge, and Sawblade’s plate began scraping against the ridge.}
Akira(Confident): “You’re bey is losing spin by doing that, do you actually blade?”
Dai smirked, and called.
Dai(Confident): “My Driver: Sawblade, has a semi-flat soft rubber tip, allowing for high speed, hard hitting attacks. It also has a sawblade-like plate similar to Destroy, that free spins, and keeps my bey from getting out much.”
Akira, released that Sawblade seemed to be like his Volt Driver, except it should have more LAD then Ares.
Akira(Nervous): “I guess, I’ve gotta try harder. Volt Shoot!”
{Ares sped up on it’s Volt Driver’s rubber, and dashed over towards Drake, which was staying near the edge of the stadium. Ares then hit Drake, and Drake began colliding between the edge’s nub and Ares.}
Akira(Confident): “Let’s go!”
Dai smiled, and called,
Dai(Confident): “Now’s the time! Drake, counter back with Bleeding Razor!”
{Drake’s Neo Frame hit Ares, into the ground and made Ares begin to scrape. The Neo Frame has six uneven blades, that cut into the opposing bey.}
Akira: “Gasp!?”
Dai smiled, as Drake moved from it’s position and sped around the outer ridge, as Ares began scraping and wobbling towards the center.
Dai(Confident): “Now, Drake! Terror Upper!”
{Drake hit Ares into the sky, with one of it’s three wings, Ares flew into the sky, and burst in front of Akira.}
Akira’s eyes began trembling, his hands shaking. Dai smirked and called,
Dai(Victorious): “I’m the victor!”
Akira grabbed Ares’ part, and put Ares back together, looking at the opposing blader, Dai Uchiha.
Gouki looked at Dai’s disc, he could tell it was similar to Akira’s disc: Strike but had a frame on it, like his disc Turbine. Gouki, then realized that Dai had used the Neo Disc, and created a frame to attach onto it.
Dai saw Gouki, eyeing up his Terror Drake’s disc, and said,
Dai(Smug): “Oh, you want to know about this?”
Gouki nodded, and Dai pointed his right pointer finger up, and swung it. He replied,
Dai(Smug): “You’ll have to beat me, in a battle to be told about my disc.”
Gouki then pulled out Griffin, and said.
Gouki(Confident): “Well, guess I’ll know the answer pretty soon. My Archer Griffin has amazing stamina.”
Akira walked over to the stadium, and acted as the referee. Whilst Gouki and Dai walked over, and put their beys onto their launchers.
Everyone: “3!”
Dai began performing his shoot style, whilst Gouki pulled his left hand, with his launcher in and pointed to towards his opponent.
Everyone: “2!”
Gouki pulled his right hand back, like pulling an arrow back in a bow.
Everyone: “1!”
Gouki then snapped, and grabbed his string, looking to the stadium and slid his left foot to the side, gripping the string harder, calling.
Both: “Go Shoot!”
{Terror Drake and Archer Griffin hit the stadium floor, Griffin easily took center, whilst Drake rushed around the outer ridge.}
Gouki smiled, and called,
Gouki(Confident): “Now, we’ll keep this zone as our’s! Archer Zone!”
{As Griffin seemed to spin perfectly, Drake began slowing down, and shot towards the center, as Dai called.}
Dai(Confident): “Drake’s the ultimate attack type, with high speeds and strong attacks! Sawblade Shoot!”
{Drake, began barraging Griffin as it performed a flower pattern, hitting Griffin. With every hit on Griffin, Drake lost more and more spin, and soon Drake drift on the free-spinning plate on Sawblade.}
Dai(Confident): “Now, hit it with everything! Drake!”
{Drake’s avatar awakened, the dragon roared and smashed the ground under it, with it’s claws.}
Dai(Confident): “Now, Drake! Terror Upper!”
{All the wings on the Terror Ring, glew as Drake kicked back up, and went to the center. As Drake closed in, Gouki called.}
Gouki(Confident): “We’ll use our strength, and burst Drake! Awaken, Griffin!”
{Griffin’s avatar awakened, the Griffin called and the Archer riding the Griffin pulled his bow back, and shot the arrow.}
Gouki(Confident): “Now, hit back with Archer Arrow!”
{Both Griffin and Drake’s special moves hit each other, and created a bright white burst of light, both bladers couldn’t tell who won. Then Drake and Griffin flew out of the stadium. Griffin bursting, in mid air.}
Dai smirked once again, as he seemed to unbeatable. Then, almost as a angel’s saving grace, Angie walked in and called out.
Angie(Excited): “Hey guys! I just created my own DualBurst Bey!”
Everyone turned to her, and she realized that she had come at a bad time, and waved her hands, she began blushing from embarrassment.
Angie(Embarrassed): “Sorry, I’m assuming this is a bad time?”
Akira turned to her, replying,
Akira(Confused): “Well, kinda. Me and Gouki just both lost to this Dai guy, who wanted to battle with his DualBurst Bey, Terror Drake.”
Angie’s face brightened up, and she said,
Angie(Excited): “Wait, I could battle him with my bey.”
Akira thought about that, and replied.
Akira(Sincere): “You know, that’s not such a bad idea, Angie!”
Angie then pulled out bey, and showed it to Akira, it was one of the most beautiful beys, Akira had ever seen.
Angie(Excited): “This is my bey, Harmony Angel. The Angel Core has a angel, in the middle holding a orb with the Avatar Core within it. The Harmony Ring has four blades, two of them being wings, and the other two are slick wings, that slide off attacks. The Feather Dual Drive and Turbine disc are the same as Gouki’s Griffin’s. But my Driver is different. The Levitate Driver, has a massive POM tip, akin to Yielding’s tip, but it free-spins allowing for my bey to have great stamina and mobility.”
Akira had a feeling, that Angie and her bey would have the chance to beat Dai and his Drake.
Whilst this was going on, the wife of the man had left the restrurant, with her friend and husband, as they walked down the alleyway, a teenager with medium-ish length blonde hair, walked forward. They had a white suit on, as they walked forward, their shoes were clanging against the ground.
???: “You look distressed, do you need help, madam?”
Random Lady 2(Distressed): “And if I was?”
???: “I’d like to help, as this city’s blading team, I’m set out to help everyone.”
The ladies and the man looked to each other, thinking whether or not to trust this boy.
The boy then appeared next to them, and he spoke, as they dealt with the sudden appearance of him.
???: “I assure you, that my team is trust worthy. I, Naki Fukushu, will fix your problems.”
Naki, then turned around and exited the alleyway, his full appearance could now be seen. He had blonde hair that reached to about half way of his neck, under the blonde hair he had some brown hair, this would only make someone assume that he either died his hair blonde, or brown. He had a white suit on, and brown shoes, dress shoes actually.
Naki then turned back to the women, and man, asking.
Naki(Questioning): “So, who upset you, madam?”
Random Lady 2: “This boy with black hair, it looks so rough and un-combed!”
Random Lady 1: “He was also wearing a hoodie; red shorts and I think white or black shoes! High tops, to be exact!”
Naki put his thumb onto his pointer finger’s knuckle, cracking his knuckle.
Naki(Serious): “I’ll end that man’s blading career.”
Naki then began running, his goal to find the black haired boy, or as we would know him, Dai Uchiha.
Back at BC Sol’s gym, Angie and Dai both stood at the bey stadium, ready to battle.
Dai(Bored): “You know after fighting two boys, I’m not too thrilled to battle some girl. I bet you don’t even launch properly.”
Angie(Irritated): “Oh, you’re a lady-hating pig, huh?”
Dai smiled, and gave a snarky thumbs-up, irritating Angie more.
She grabbed her launcher, Harmony Angel and put Angel onto her launcher.
Dai put Drake onto his launcher, and prepared to do his launch style.
Akira walked over to the stadium, acting as the referee.
Everyone: “3!”
Dai prepared his shoot, while Angie lifted her hands above her head, holding her launcher to the highest point, she could, and holding her right arm, was her left hand.
Everyone: “2!”
Dai continued, while Angie pulled her right arm down, the one in which held her launcher, she pushed her left leg as far as she could, putting her launcher near the ground.
Everyone: “1!”
Dai finished his shoot style, Angie seemed to sprout angel wings, as she pushed her left leg behind her, and pushed herself forward.
Both: “Go Shoot!”
After Angie shot Angel, she pushed off her left foot, and jumped into the air, twirling like a ballerina.
{Harmony Angel and Terror Drake hit the stadium floor, Angel took center quickly, whilst Drake rushed around the outer ridge. Soon, Drake tilted a bit, and Drake began to perform a flower pattern.}
Dai(Bored): “Let’s finish this quickly, Sawblade Shoot!”
{Drake began it’s flower pattern and hit Angel multiple times, but it seemed as-if, no attack did much to Angel.}
Dai(Confused): “My Drake, should’ve made your dumb bey click by now!”
Angie snapped, and smirked at Dai.
Angie(Confident): “My Angel Core has three powerful locks, and it has a hidden rubber burst slower, within the lock’s center.”
Dai, Akira and Gouki were all surprised by Angie’s new bey, although Gouki wondered why she had already abandoned her Savior Perseus, as the Savior Blade wasn’t even awakened yet.
Dai(Irritated): “Guess this battle, I actually have to try!? Fine, then! Awaken, Drake!”
{Drake’s avater awakened, the dragon swung it’s claws through the air, and roared, as it smashed it claws into the ground.}
As Dai called to his Drake, the aura around him seemed to overflow with his energy, and his eyes brightened.
Akira(Confused): “What’s this energy!? Gouki?”
Gouki(Confused): “I think I’ve heard about this. It’s a natural blading, phenomenon known as the Sync. This state is reserved for bladers that have strong connections with their bey. I think Valt’s used this state, in the recent years, especially after his championship match with Bell and his Perfect Divine Belial!”
As the battle raged on, Dai’s enjoyment quickly, increased and in a matter of milli-seconds, Dai smile went from small and shy to huge and proud.
Dai laughed loudly, as he called,
Dai(Excited): “This is amazing, this feeling! Drake, you feeling this!”
As Dai said that, he was pulled into the Mindscape, and saw Drake in front of him.
Dai(Confused): “Drake!? Where’s the battle, and why’re you a huge dragon?”
Drake roared, and Dai covered his ears, then he looked as Drake began speaking.
Drake(Excited): “It’s good to have a talk. I’ve been with you, for a while right?”
Dai smiled, replying,
Dai(Happy): “Yeah! You’ve been through three systems now, first Razor Drake, our Superking Bey. Lance Drake, our DB Bey and now Terror Drake!”
Drake smiled, and pulled it’s right arm up, and picked Dai up.
Dai(Surprised): “What’s this for, Drake?”
Drake(Excited): “I’m counting on you, to make us the most powerful team!”
Dai smiled, and replied,
Dai(Confident): “How can I do that. When we already are!”
Dai exited the mindscape, as Drake chuckled and he called,
Dai(Sync): “We’re already to go! Now, Terror Upper!”
{The wings on the Terror Blade, glew dark black and blood red, as Drake shot towards the center. There would only be a few seconds, until Angel was hit with Terror Upper.}
Angie smirked, and called,
Angie(Confident): “This battle is ours! It’s time for, Harmonic Beat!”
This chapter is now completed, and I have a little gift.
Who I would want to voice DualBurst characters: Part 1: Japan
Akira: Natsuki Hanae(Notable Roles: Tanjiro Kamado, Ken Kaneki, etc...)
Dai: Ayuma Murase(Notable Roles: Luck Voltia, etc...)
Angie: Fairouz Ai(Notable Roles: Jolyne Cujoh, Power, etc...)
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical and Beyblade Burst: DualBurst - DJCAT8608 - Sep. 07, 2022
that's cool, sadly my voice is carp so I can't voice stuff well
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical and Beyblade Burst: DualBurst - beansworth - Sep. 13, 2022
Mythical! Mythical! Chapter 38, is finally here. Let's do this!
Chapter 38: BC Arrival! Valt’s Team!
As the morning sun rose, the Battle Royale Yacht, began slowing down, before docking in Spain.
Obito got up, and rubbed his eyes, looking into the mirror, and remembered the night before.
Obito then looked at his outift. A long black cloak, with black boots. Obito threw the outfit onto the floor and grabbed his ripped blue jeans, white socks, black sneakers, and brown and gold belt. Finally, he grabbed his black shirt and jacket. He then looked in the mirror, again, and saw himself in a new light.
He then exited his room, to see Annie and the other triplets waiting for him.
Cleo(Excited): “Obito! Morning!”
Lilia(with arms crossed and looking to the side): “I guess it is not so bad to have you back.”
Obito(Sincere): “Thanks for helping me last night, Annie.”
Annie(Happy): “Yeah, it was my pleasure.”
Obito then walked with the Triplets to the deck, to see that the Yacht had docked.
Obito(Realization): “Oh yeah! I forgot we were even coming to BC Sol.”
Shu(Calm): “Well, your not completely correct. We actually are going to let you guys explore Spain today, instead of just BC Sol.”
Cleo(Excited): "Really?!"
Obito and the Triplets exited the Yacht. By now, most of the crew at left.
As Obito and the Triplets walked down the streets, eventually coming near the the beach.
Lilia(Curious): “Wonder where most of the crew went?”
Obito looked down at the beach.
Obito: “Found them.”
Everyone looked and could see two boys running.
War and Barry were running down the beach, both boys seemed to be the same speed.
War(Tired): “Give up, Barry! You will lose!”
Barry(Tired): “Nah! You’d better prepare to lose, War!”
As the boys ran down the beach, Keith lied on the beach, his swimwear equipped. He was waiting until Irene came back from changing. As he waited, Obito walked down and greeted Keith.
Obito: “Hello, Keith.”
Obito extended his hand for a handshake. Keith backed off a little and got up.
Keith(On Edge): “Hey, Obito.”
Obito(sighs): “Have fun.”
Keith(Confused): “Alright then?”
Obito then turned around and walked away from Keith.
This entire experience, for Keith, was very confusing and he just brushed it off.
As the Battle Cruise Bladers had fun. The Legends had a meeting.
Valt, Shu, Free, Rantaro, Lui, Aiga, Drum, Hikaru, Hyuga, Bell, Rashad, and many others all walked onto the Battle Cruiseship, and sat around a table in the cafeteria.
Valt sat at the head of the table, as he is the #1 Blader in the world.
Valt(Concerned): “This meeting has been called to discuss two concerns right now in the Blading World.”
Shu: “As you all may know, Valt’s son, Van, has taken control of Dark Sync and has formed a new blading team. He could possibly become the strongest blader in the world.”
Rantaro(Concerned): “This has happened before with Shu, Phi, Gwyn and Arthur, Lane, Rashad, etc. What makes it any different?”
Rashad turned to Rantaro, calling out,
Rashad(Irritated): “Hey! I didn’t use any Dark resonance with my bey!”
Shu(Irritated): “Rashad! You should know better then to call out, especially during a important meeting like this. Remember, you’ve just recently been allowed to join this council.”
Valt(Calm): “It’s fine, Shu. The difference here is that what worked for them didn't work here."
Silence
Aiga: "Anyways, what is your other concern?"
Valt: "Oh yeah, I'm just concerned as for who will take over the Legend Stasis after we all retire from blading.”
Lui smirked, cackling, before saying.
Lui(Amused): “Valt, you're serious? It’s pretty obvious!”
Valt smiled, as he looked out the window, to the beach, Keith and his friends all running into the water.
Valt(Proud): “Yeah, I know who will be the next legends.”
As Valt said that, Keith ran forward, Irene in front of him, her face blooming with a smile. Baki ran forward aswell, his face consumed with joy. Lucy’s smile was something to see, as she didn’t smile much before until she had meet Keith, Irene and Baki. But out of all of the bladers, Keith’s face was brightened, his smile, beaming from ear to ear.
Valt then turned back, and said.
Valt(Happy): “It’s been fun blading for this long, but It’s time for the next generation to take off.”
Shu smiled, and looked down, opening his wallet to see his family in a photo, everyone smiling. His daughter, Lucy, was still at her happiest, his twins were both excited and young. Finally, his wife, Rosaline, was enjoyed, at her perfect life.
Valt, looked at his family photo aswell. Van was still there, and happy, his daughter Tsugumi was just born and in, Shasa’s arms. Shasa in this picture, was the happiest, she had ever been, this fact was also true for Valt.
Valt had to wonder, why everything got messed up. When everyone heard a man’s voice, and felt a presence, they never had before.
???: “Hello, Legendary Bladers. Valt Aoi, Shu Kurenai, you’re long search has come to an end.”
Valt and Shu both looked over to see the man.
Valt and Shu(Angry): “Cutthroat!”
Cutthroat began clapping slowly, as the Legends all realized who this man was. He was the new Alexander Giltem(Theodore Glass), he had created a new Requiem project.
Sisco(laughs): "Cut Throat? Really?"
Behind, Cutthroat, stood a figure who wore a hood and cloak. All the Legends became tensed up, and were ready for anything.
Aiga(serious): "This is not the time Sisco"
Valt(Angry): “Why are you here? How did you hide all these years?”
Cutthroat: “I really don’t have time for all this, so I’ll just leave you with one bit of knowledge. Van didn’t become corrupt alone.”
Cutthroat and his student, per say, walked away and then it hit Valt.
Valt(Angry): “You were the one who did this, Cutthroat!”
Cutthroat smirked as he walked away.
Van walked by and saw him.
Van(Confused): “Master? Why are you, here?”
Cutthroat(Surprised): “Oh, Van. Good to see you, my friend. How’s your Valkyrie?”
Van pulled Calamity Valkyrie from his holder, and showed Cutthroat.
Van(Serious): “I’ve evolved Fallen Valkyrie. It was destroyed by my father and his bey, Holy Valkyrie. I even created my own system, the Mythological System: a Sub System of the Mythical System.”
Cutthroat, smiled while replying, devilishly.
Cutthroat(Proud): “Good my friend, as you should’ve. Now, why don't you call to Valkyrie? I think it's time.”
Van looked forward, his eyes shimmered with the sun.
Cutthroat had already left, but his final sentence repeated to Van.
Van’s irises became red, and his sclera became black, as he said.
Van(Corrupt): “The Ultimate Calamity.”
Van then began walking onto the Yacht, as everyone began returning home. Valt turned, and saw Van walking forward.
Valt(Happy): “Hey, son. Let’s tal….”
Van cut Valt off, his actions prepared, as he called.
Van(Determined): “Valt Aoi! Keith Shadis! I declare a war! Requiem’s best versus Valhalla’s best, tomorrow!”
Everyone was surprised by Van’s sudden declaration.
Van(Determined): “Consider this to be a Declaration of War!”
Keith ran forward, and onto the ship. His face filled with confusion.
Keith(Confused): “What are you saying!? We’re in the middle of the Yacht Battle Royale, we can’t just end it rig….”
Van(Determined): “I couldn’t care less for what is happening. The challenge was made.”
Keith gripped his fist, and grit his teeth. He looked Van in the eye, before he would’ve felt fear looking into Van’s eyes, but now, his determination was superior.
Valt walked over, and placed a hand on Keith’s shoulder, and said.
Valt(Concerned): “As much, as I’d rather not say this. I think we need to do this.”
Keith looked at Valt, and shouted,
Keith(Irritated): “Valt, you can’t be serious!? This is the dumbest request ever!”
Shu walked up
Shu(Concerned): “Keith, I agree with you but. I think Valt’s choice is the better one here. You get your team together, and decide on the picks for this.”
Keith couldn’t believe what the top two blader’s in the world were saying. But, he had to accept this.
Van spoke up once more.
Van(Determined): “And finally, after the war. I will have a Championship Match with Valt.”
This sudden declaration shocked everyone. Valt walked forward.
Valt(Determined): “Fine then, Van. We’ll do what you want.”
Van smiled, the rest of his team was confused by the sudden declaration, but they followed him anyway. Keith stood there, confused by everything.
Shu walked over to Keith, and telling him,
Shu(Calm): “Keith, you’ll need to pick your 5 best bladers for this team battle.”
Keith clapped the sides of his head twice, and shook his head, regaining his focus.
Keith(Focused): “Got it, Shu!”
Keith then called everyone from Valhalla, on the Battle Cruise to meet up. Keith and Baki stood in front of the entire team, and began speaking.
Baki(Calm): “To decide what bladers are the best, we will having a tournament. Everyone, but Keith, will enter.”
War, Lucy, Baki, Irene, Barry, Kaede and Izuku all stood there, although Kaede and Izuku weren’t part of Valhalla, Keith had invited them to participate in the tournament.
{Van’s Room}
Van sat on his head, whilst Daishi and Obito stood, and Gemma and Payne were on a call.
Van(Determined): “Alright, we need to prepare. We’ll be having a war with Valhalla. Our team will be comprised of 5 bladers: Me, Obito, Gemma, Payne and Daishi. The entire war requires 5 wins to win, the battle format is three 2-on-2 matches, which then transfer into three 1-on-1 matches. And after the war, I’ll be battling my father to take the champion title.”
Obito rubbed his chin, and asked,
Obito(Calm): “Shouldn’t we use some sort of new stadium, or use a older one?”
Van nodded, and replied,
Van(Calm): “You’re right there, Obito. I was thinking using the Dropdown Orbit Stadium. It’s the best stadium for something like this.”
Obito nodded, turning to the laptop screen, and thinking.
Obito(Mind): “This is it, a huge battle between Valhalla and Requiem. Although...”
A image of the Triplets flashed into Obito’s head, and he raised his right hand to grip his head.
Obito(Confused): “What are these feelings. Annie, Lilia and Cleo. All of you are important to me and you helped me find myself once again. You wouldn't like this...”
Van(Confused): “Obito..? You're there?”
Obito shook out of it, and turned to Van, replying,
Obito(Embarrassed): “Sorry, I was thinking how to win with Omega Orion.”
Van smiled, and pat Obito’s back,
Van(Happy): “That’s the right thinking, Zen’in! Now for the strategies...”
Obito had a small smile appear on his face.
{Yacht’s Deck.}
Keith stood in front of the Dropdown Orbit stadium, his find flowing with thoughts.
Keith(Mind): “I can’t believe Van would do that, I knew he doesn't care but a Champion Match between them after this?"
Keith looked down at his bey, Kratos.
Keith(Mind): "I'll have to do something, but what?"
Baki, Irene, Barry, War and Lucy all walked onto the deck. Baki called to his friend.
Baki(Smiling): “I knew you’d be here trying to solve everything alone, Keith.”
Baki walked over and raised his right hand up. Keith raised his right hand, and the boys shook hands.
Baki smiled, and said,
Baki(Happy): “Hey, as Valhalla’s Vice-Captain, you can give me some of the pressure.”
Irene walked forward and hugged Keith,
Irene(Sincere): “I know you’re always trying your hardest, Keith. Sometimes lay out your stress to me. If you need a hug, I’m here. You can trust me, Keith, not as your girlfriend, but as Irene Mao!”
Keith stood there, his two best friends, who would’ve helped with anything telling him that they would take on the pain with him. His face began to lighten, and tears rolled down his face.
Keith(Crying): “You guys….”
Keith hugged both Irene and Baki, both surprised by Keith’s sudden movement.
War walked over to Keith, and said,
War(Sincere): “Keith, I know we started on rough terms. I mean, I worked for Van for a month or so, but you accepted me. I want to repay you for that, so let me help you out for this!”
Keith looked up, his face couldn’t hide the tears, as he said,
Keith(Crying): “War….”
Lucy walked up, her face would be slightly hidden my her piece of clothing.
Lucy(Sincere): “Keith, during our training with Aiga, I began to see the fun in blading, and because you helped me I was able to meet all these great people and enjoy blading.”
Keith looked to Lucy, his tears still streaming down,
Keith(Crying): “Lucy…..”
Barry was the final one, he walked forward.
Barry(Sincere): “Keith, since you gave me a place on Valhalla, I’ve felt like I’ve truly found my joy in blading, it’s when I’m battling you guys.”
Keith then took a deep breath, and cried,
Keith(Crying): “You guys…..you’re all the best! Thank you, thank you!!”
Everyone stood there, seeing Keith like this reminded them that everyone had a certain breaking point.
War sniffled, and said,
War(Sad): “Come on man, if you keep crying….*sniffle* I’ll cry too!”
Keith laughed and War called him out,
War(Confused): “You were sad a second ago, now you’re laughing man!??”
Everyone began laughing. It was good for them all to do this.
Shu and Valt walked to them, both of them knowing everything and said,
Valt(Happy): “I’m glad to see you all hanging like this again. Sorry to break the moment, but we have to know who your team is going to be.”
Keith had to think hard to everyone and who would make his five person team.
Keith(Mind): “Everyone, I can’t bring you all into this one. There’s just so many people. Baki, Irene, Barry, War, Neusa, Percy, Kaede, Izuku, Samson, Lucy, Yuito, Shane, all of you.”
As he thought about this, Keith seemed to enter his own dimension, he had too many friends to choose from.
Keith(Mind): “Everyone… Baki, he’s my vice-captain, he’s the best defense blader I know. Irene, she’s my girlfriend, she’s a talented blader with a lot to achieve yet. War, he’s an ex-enemy, his cooperative skills are the best, going out of the way to help everyone. Barry, he’s a young new blader, but he’s got the skills to be a legend one day. Everyone, I need to pick.”
Keith thought harder, he needed a good balance to battle Van’s Requiem. They had Van and his Calamity Valkyrie, an attack type Bey. Obito, and his Omega Orion, also an attack type Bey. Daishi, and his Wither and Void Diabolos, the only balance type Bey. Gemma, and his Elite Gladius, the only stamina type Bey. Kai and his Forge Vulcan, another attack type Bey. Finally, there’s Payne and his Everburn Phoenix, the only defense type Bey.
Keith then came up with the perfect team,
“I need to be in there as the Team Leader, so I can fight back against any bey with my balance type Mythical Kratos. I’ll need an absolute defense, Baki’s always been our shield and he will continue to shield whilst being super powerful himself. I’ll need another all around, and as much as I’d like to have Irene on, I think Lucy is the superior balance with her Mischievous Loki. Two more spots, we’ll need all out attackers so I’m thinking…..War….Izuku….Barry……all of them have excellent attack type beys. War’s Immortal Warrior, Izuku’s Ravage Iapetus and finally Barry’s Revolution Bellerophon. I need to pick….”
Keith looked up to Shu and Valt and finally, said his answer.
Keith(Calm): “Valhalla’s War Team will be myself, Baki, Lucy, War and Barry. I feel this is the best team to face up against Van’s Requiem.”
Everyone nodded, knowing even if they didn’t help Keith, they could cheer him on from the sidelines.
Valt smiled, and replied,
Valt(Happy): “Me and the other legends are counting on you to beat Requiem and Van! You have our support!”
Keith(Sincere): “I’m grateful for having the legends on my side, but could I ask one favor?”
Valt(Curious): “What is it?”
{A few hours later, Van and his team arrived home and went to his mansion to discuss the plans. Once he arrived he saw an old face, Kai, the owner of Forge Vulcan, one of the hardest hitting beys he’d even seen. It reminded him of Xcalibur, with it’s lining up and one-hit mode.}
Kai(Angry): “How come you three got to go on the Yacht!? I wanted to battle more!”
Van walked up
Van(Excited): “Even though you couldn’t join the Yacht, you can join my Requiem War Team!”
Kai(Surprised): “What’s that!?”
Everyone entered the mansion, and walked to Van’s training room. Van, Obito, Kai, Gemma, Payne and Daishi all stood by the stadium, six bladers, five slots for the team.
Van(Calm): “There’s six of us, but I can only bring five... Hmm...”
Daishi(Cold): “Take me off. I’m the newest member, and don’t deserve a spot.”
Van turned.
Van(Calm): “You have skill though-…"
Kai(Calm): “Take me off. I’m not one of your great friends.”
Van(Irritated): “Friendship is not the bigge-..."
Gemma(Calm): “Van, you shoul-….”
Obito put his hand over Gemma’s mouth, allowing Van to speak.
Van(sighs): “My team consists of me, Obito, Daishi, Gemma and Kai. I believe us new bladers stand a chance against the Valhalla."
Payne walked over, and put his hand on Van’s shoulder.
Payne(Calm): “Fair enough. I’ll cheer you guys on from the crowd then.”
Van nodded. Gemma was trying to get Obito's hand out of his mouth.
Van: "You can let it go now, Obito."
The war would now be taking place a day from tomorrow, allowing everyone one day of training. The teams would have to make perfect use of the time, but Keith and Valhalla were already on the move.
Everyone stood at the stadium, preparing to launch.
Everyone: “3!”
{Everyone prepared their shoot styles.}
Everyone: “2! 1!”
Everyone: “Go Shoot!”
{Mythical Kratos, Dynamic Bahamut, Eruption Ifrit, Immortal Warrior, Mischievous Loki, Revolution Bellerophon, Omen Kerbeus and Ravage Iapetus all hit the stadium floor. All the beys spun around the top floor.}
Keith(Excited): “Let’s go all out, Mythical Shoot!”
Barry(Excited): “You’re not going to be the only one who’s going all out! Xtreme Shoot!”
Izuku laughed, his battle spirit increasing,
Izuku(Battle-Ready): “Alright, guess I’ve got to go all out, as well! Ravage Shoot!”
War smirked, him also having an attack type(although Kratos isn’t an attack type, it’s in attack mode though.)
War(Excited): “Guess, all the attack types need to battle! Forceful Shoot!”
{The four beys all began barraging each other, Bahamut, Kerbeus, Ifrit and Loki were the only beys not in battle.}
Keith smirked, his power quickly increasing as he called out,
Keith(Excited): “Let’s over take this battle, God Sync!”
{Keith and Kratos entered their sync. Their battle aura increased hugely and Kratos’ avatar awakened. He swung his axe and called out.}
Kratos(Excited): “Let’s go, Keith!”
Keith(Sync): “Right!”
{Kratos went to the edge of the stadium, whilst Warrior, Bellerophon and Iapetus kept barraging each other.}
Keith(Sync): “Now! Mythical Axe!”
{The axes on Mythical glew red and gold, as Kratos darted towards the center, the only one who truly noticed was Barry.}
Barry(Nervous): “Quickly, Bellerophon! Dart away with Xtreme Flash!”
{The Xtreme Driver got another burst of energy, and ran away. Both War and Izuku looked over and saw Kratos too late. As Kratos slammed into Iapetus and Warrior. It didn’t even take any recoil, as it burst Warrior and Iapetus.}
Izuku and War(Surprised): “What!?”
{As Kratos hit the far war, it lost all it’s speed and lost a huge chunk of stamina. Keith knew that his bey would’ve lost that stamina, but Bellerophon was near and Keith knew he’d lose in a fight against Bellerophon.}
{Suddenly, Loki slammed into Bellerophon nearly launching it out of the stadium.}
Barry(Surprised): “What the!?”
Lucy(Confident): “In that attack battle, you all forgot about us!”
{As Lucy said this, Ifrit darted over and hit Bellerophon, putting Bellerophon into a pincer attack between them.}
Keith looked and saw why he didn’t see Bahamut or Kerbeus, as they had fallen down, and were fighting for the center of the bottom stadium.
{As Bellerophon was being crushed between Loki and Ifrit, Bellerophon had lost two clicks, and two more would spell Bellerophon’s defeat.}
Lucy(Confident): “Loki! Let’s do this, Mischievous Spear!”
Irene(Confident): “Ifrit, all our power! Erupting Claws!”
{Ifrit’s rubber and Loki’s metal weighted spear, both slammed into Bellerophon, bursting Bellerophon.}
Barry(Defeated): “What!? I was really thinking, I would’ve won.”
{Keith, Lucy and Irene were the only ones, on the upper stadium, Loki and Ifrit still had most of their stamina, whilst Kratos was running low on stamina.}
{Kratos, then stopped spinning. Only Ifrit, Loki, Bahamut and Kerbeus were in the battle.}
Lucy(Confident): “Alright, then Irene! Let’s battle this out!”
Irene(Confident): “I’ll take you down, Lucy!”
{Ifrit and Loki collided, the force of the two was overpowering.}
Meanwhile:
Kerbeus and Bahamut were grinding against each other, trying to get the center.
Kaede(bored): "Defense types, right?"
Baki(bored): "Yeah..."
So, um this is a late post, I might make a new post tomorrow, or something, idk. I'm tired.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical and Beyblade Burst: DualBurst - PikaBeyblade - Sep. 14, 2022
You’re not gonna cut Barry right? Also I ain’t dead
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical and Beyblade Burst: DualBurst - beansworth - Sep. 15, 2022
(Sep. 14, 2022 11:50 PM)PikaBeyblade Wrote: You’re not gonna cut Barry right? Also I ain’t dead No, Barry was in from the early parts, he was just in the last chapter, I think.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical and Beyblade Burst: DualBurst - PikaBeyblade - Sep. 15, 2022
Thanks bro
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical and Beyblade Burst: DualBurst - beansworth - Sep. 16, 2022
Alright so, post I wanted to make. Mythical will soon be entering it's second to last, and final arc. These are the War Arc and the Finale Arc. The War consists of Chapters: 40-43 and the Finale Arc consists of Chapters: 44-50. I wanted to let everyone know, that these last chapters, I will do everything I can to make these the best chapters of Mythical. And Chapter Finale(50) will most likely be the longest chapter, as I want to fit in. Title Match, Conclusion, Epilogue and preview for Beyblade Burst: Mythic Burst, being the sequel to loved Beyblade Burst: Mythical. No questions or answers will be provided about Mythic Burst, yet. Keep your speculations going, I'll explain it soon.
I wanted to use this paragraph to thank everyone, who has read, helped, made an OC for Mythical, you've all helped me make Mythical, and give me the will to keep up the work, sorry for the pings, I'm about to give, but I find this to be the most respectful way to thank you all. UnseenBurst SpeedySuomi PikaBeyblade Carma___bigbang MasterofDerp DJCAT8608 Scorponok if I forgot anyone major, I'm really sorry, these are the ones that I can think of, off the top of my head. Unseen was my inspiration to make Mythical and honestly start writing Beyblade Fanfictions, he also gave me tons of advice, so special thanks and shout out to you Unseen, Speedy gave me my first advice and was a inspiration to word harder on chapters and gave one, my personal favorite OCs to write, Pika without a doubt was one of my favorite people on this thread, and he gave me Barry his OC, which honestly is probably my favorite OC I included, Carma gave me my first OC and always seemed like he was here, and reading Mythical, War is an unforgettable OC. MasterofDerp is a newer view, but still is a big one to bring up, he makes some of the most detailed beys ever, so probs to you. DJCAT was a surprise and a welcome one at that, always felt fresh talking to them for a while. Scorponok was also a fresh one to talk to, really cool having him here.
The only person I didn't mention, was the most helpful one, that being @Hollowmind8 he helped me so much with Mythical, without his help, I think Mythical would've never gotten as good as it is. So, this is a thanks to his help with editing, and checking over my chapters from like 17 till now, he deserves a special thanks for that, making really good beys, when I couldn't think of any and needed help. He is truly the MVP of Mythical, which is why I'm making a special thanks to him.
Thanks to everyone for just checking out Mythical, it gave me the will to make this. I'll continue to write fanfic, and try my best from now on.
TL: DR: Mythical is nearing it's end, thanks to everyone for everything. Hollowmind is an MVP
RE: (Beansworth's Fanfics)Beyblade Burst: Mythical and Beyblade Burst: DualBurst - UnseenBurst - Sep. 16, 2022
(Sep. 16, 2022 2:40 AM)beansworth Wrote: Alright so, post I wanted to make. Mythical will soon be entering it's second to last, and final arc. These are the War Arc and the Finale Arc. The War consists of Chapters: 40-43 and the Finale Arc consists of Chapters: 44-50. I wanted to let everyone know, that these last chapters, I will do everything I can to make these the best chapters of Mythical. And Chapter Finale(50) will most likely be the longest chapter, as I want to fit in. Title Match, Conclusion, Epilogue and preview for Beyblade Burst: Mythic Burst, being the sequel to loved Beyblade Burst: Mythical. No questions or answers will be provided about Mythic Burst, yet. Keep your speculations going, I'll explain it soon.
I wanted to use this paragraph to thank everyone, who has read, helped, made an OC for Mythical, you've all helped me make Mythical, and give me the will to keep up the work, sorry for the pings, I'm about to give, but I find this to be the most respectful way to thank you all. UnseenBurst SpeedySuomi PikaBeyblade Carma___bigbang MasterofDerp DJCAT8608 Scorponok if I forgot anyone major, I'm really sorry, these are the ones that I can think of, off the top of my head. Unseen was my inspiration to make Mythical and honestly start writing Beyblade Fanfictions, he also gave me tons of advice, so special thanks and shout out to you Unseen, Speedy gave me my first advice and was a inspiration to word harder on chapters and gave one, my personal favorite OCs to write, Pika without a doubt was one of my favorite people on this thread, and he gave me Barry his OC, which honestly is probably my favorite OC I included, Carma gave me my first OC and always seemed like he was here, and reading Mythical, War is an unforgettable OC. MasterofDerp is a newer view, but still is a big one to bring up, he makes some of the most detailed beys ever, so probs to you. DJCAT was a surprise and a welcome one at that, always felt fresh talking to them for a while. Scorponok was also a fresh one to talk to, really cool having him here.
The only person I didn't mention, was the most helpful one, that being @Hollowmind8 he helped me so much with Mythical, without his help, I think Mythical would've never gotten as good as it is. So, this is a thanks to his help with editing, and checking over my chapters from like 17 till now, he deserves a special thanks for that, making really good beys, when I couldn't think of any and needed help. He is truly the MVP of Mythical, which is why I'm making a special thanks to him.
Thanks to everyone for just checking out Mythical, it gave me the will to make this. I'll continue to write fanfic, and try my best from now on.
TL: DR: Mythical is nearing it's end, thanks to everyone for everything. Hollowmind is an MVP
No problem man, it’s cool to see your Fanfiction grow and near towards its end. I’ve been sticking around in the shadows and your Fanfictions are really good and I’m really impressed. I wish you luck finishing it off
RE: (Beansworth's Fanfics)Beyblade Burst: Mythical and Beyblade Burst: DualBurst - beansworth - Sep. 16, 2022
(Sep. 16, 2022 3:56 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: (Sep. 16, 2022 2:40 AM)beansworth Wrote:
Alright so, post I wanted to make. Mythical will soon be entering it's second to last, and final arc. These are the War Arc and the Finale Arc. The War consists of Chapters: 40-43 and the Finale Arc consists of Chapters: 44-50. I wanted to let everyone know, that these last chapters, I will do everything I can to make these the best chapters of Mythical. And Chapter Finale(50) will most likely be the longest chapter, as I want to fit in. Title Match, Conclusion, Epilogue and preview for Beyblade Burst: Mythic Burst, being the sequel to loved Beyblade Burst: Mythical. No questions or answers will be provided about Mythic Burst, yet. Keep your speculations going, I'll explain it soon.
I wanted to use this paragraph to thank everyone, who has read, helped, made an OC for Mythical, you've all helped me make Mythical, and give me the will to keep up the work, sorry for the pings, I'm about to give, but I find this to be the most respectful way to thank you all. UnseenBurst SpeedySuomi PikaBeyblade Carma___bigbang MasterofDerp DJCAT8608 Scorponok if I forgot anyone major, I'm really sorry, these are the ones that I can think of, off the top of my head. Unseen was my inspiration to make Mythical and honestly start writing Beyblade Fanfictions, he also gave me tons of advice, so special thanks and shout out to you Unseen, Speedy gave me my first advice and was a inspiration to word harder on chapters and gave one, my personal favorite OCs to write, Pika without a doubt was one of my favorite people on this thread, and he gave me Barry his OC, which honestly is probably my favorite OC I included, Carma gave me my first OC and always seemed like he was here, and reading Mythical, War is an unforgettable OC. MasterofDerp is a newer view, but still is a big one to bring up, he makes some of the most detailed beys ever, so probs to you. DJCAT was a surprise and a welcome one at that, always felt fresh talking to them for a while. Scorponok was also a fresh one to talk to, really cool having him here.
The only person I didn't mention, was the most helpful one, that being @Hollowmind8 he helped me so much with Mythical, without his help, I think Mythical would've never gotten as good as it is. So, this is a thanks to his help with editing, and checking over my chapters from like 17 till now, he deserves a special thanks for that, making really good beys, when I couldn't think of any and needed help. He is truly the MVP of Mythical, which is why I'm making a special thanks to him.
Thanks to everyone for just checking out Mythical, it gave me the will to make this. I'll continue to write fanfic, and try my best from now on.
TL: DR: Mythical is nearing it's end, thanks to everyone for everything. Hollowmind is an MVP
No problem man, it’s cool to see your Fanfiction grow and near towards its end. I’ve been sticking around in the shadows and your Fanfictions are really good and I’m really impressed. I wish you luck finishing it off Thanks, currently I'm working on Chapter 40.
RE: (Beansworth's Fanfics)Beyblade Burst: Mythical and Beyblade Burst: DualBurst - beansworth - Sep. 17, 2022
Chapter 39: Preparing for Battle! Legendary Training!
This is nearing it's finale! 11 chapters left! Also the story has hit 300+ pages on Word, so that's cool I guess. The war has begun, and Valhalla and Requiem will have to go all out, with 200%! Old wounds will open, physically and mentally. What will Van do, after a major setback. This all will be found out, as the War progresses!
Chapter 39: Preparations! Legendary Training!
{Loki and Ifrit continued colliding, whilst Bahamut and Kerbeus continued their dual. Yhe TPA blades on Omen were helping absorb the attacks from Bahamut. This battle was slow, but that soon changed as Bahamut hit the outer ring of Atomic and moved farther away.}
Baki(Confident): “Alright, now! Bahamut, let’s crush the opponent with Dynamic Crush!”
{Bahamut hit the outer ring of Atomic and rushed into the center, hitting Kerbeus and forcing it out of the stadium for an Over Finish.}
Baki(Confident): “Alright, that’s how we do it!”
Kaede(Surprised): “Huh?”
{Now, only Loki, Ifrit and Bahamut remained. Bahamut regained center, as Loki and Ifrit battled on the upper layer. It was hard to tell which beys was winning, as Loki had metal weighted spears, whilst Ifrit had it’s rubber claws. Then, almost as a sign, Loki hit Ifrit harder then before and sent it crash course towards the drop.}
Lucy(Confident): “That’s the end of Ifrit!”
Irene(Surprised): “Adapt and change! We’ll win this, Eruption Crush!”
{Ifrit fell down the center drop, and straight onto Bahamut, bursting it}
Baki gasped, as most of the time he’d win their battles.
{Loki began spinning around the upper layer, while Ifrit spun around the lower layer. Although Ifrit was now losing stamina, Loki still had most it’s stamina.}
It would seem that Loki would be the victor, and to solidify her win, Lucy called,
Lucy(Confident): “We’ll make sure we win! Loki, go for Ruin Spear!”
{Loki went to drop and fell down, nearly straight hitting Ifrit with it’s tip, bursting it!}
Irene(Surprised): “What!? I thought, me and Ifrit would’ve won!”
As everyone talked, clapping could be heard behind them, as the legends walked out. Valt spoke up,
Valt(Excited): “That was some nice blading, you guys! I think you really stand a chance against Van!”
Keith turned to Valt, and said,
Keith(Surprised): “Valt!? T-thanks, for the compliment.”
Valt smiled, and replied,
Valt(Confident): “I was thinking that us, legends, should help you all out.”
Everyone gasped, as the legends were saying about helping these new bladers to beat Requiem.
Keith nodded and grabbed Kratos, his Dash Launcher and smiled. Valt smiled back, and everyone began battling.
The battle selected were, Keith VS Valt, Baki VS Lui, Irene VS Aiga, Lucy VS Shu, War VS Xhaka, and more battles.
Keith and Valt walked up to the basic stadium, no gimmicks only pure blading power. Both bladers lifted their launchers and put their beys on.
Valt(Excited): “I want you to go all out, Keith! Let loose!”
Keith(Excited): “I’ll go all out and I’ll finally beat you, Valt!”
Both: “3! 2! 1! Go Shoot!”
{Holy Valkyrie and Mythical Kratos hit the stadium floor. Kratos was in it’s Balance Mode and had a steady defense circling the center, while Holy Valkyrie was speeding around the outer ridge, until Valt called}
Valt(Excited): “All out! Holy Shoot!”
{Valkyrie began barraging Kratos at what seemed to be near-light speed.}
Keith gulped, he knew Valt was an amazing blader, so he’d have to step up.
Keith(Nervous): “Counter it, Kratos! Mythical Counter!”
{The rubber on Mythical hit some of the plastic on Holy, countering and sending Holy into the far wall. But once Holy Valkyrie hit the far wall, the spring within the Valkyrie Core compressed and send it right back at Kratos.}
Valt(Excited): “Alright, all out! Holy Sync and Holy Bound!”
{Valkyrie slammed into Kratos, bursting it. Keith would’ve normally been surprised, but Valt was the strongest blader, so he smiled and said.}
Keith(Happy): “Nice job, Valt! It seems like you really do deserve the #1 Blader Title.”
Both bladers grabbed their beys and put them back onto their launchers.
Both: “3! 2! 1! Go Shoot!”
{Holy Valkyrie and Mythical Kratos hit the stadium floor, Kratos once again in Balance Mode. Valkyrie sped up and went to the outer ridge, speeding around it at near light-speed. Kratos went to the center and circled the middle.}
Valt(Excited): “Alright, let’s start it! Holy Shoot!”
{Valkyrie sped up, and began barraging Kratos, this battle was so far, a copy and paste of the previous battle.}
{This time, Kratos hit the rubber on it’s Balance Setting’s tip and sped out of the attacks from Valkyrie.}
Valt(Surprised): “Huh!? I see, you’re going to go all out!”
Keith smirked, and called,
Keith(Confident): “Time to go all out! Kratos, awaken!”
{Kratos’ avatar awakened, he grabbed his axes and swung them, as he called out.}
Kratos(Confident): “Keith, let’s go!”
Keith(Confident): “All in! God Sync!”
{Keith and Kratos’ sync awakened into True Sync, something Izuku had awakened about a week before.}
Keith(Sync): “Let’s go! Mythical Axe!”
Valt smiled, seeing Keith go all out first reminded him of himself but also showed him the blading world was in good hands.
Valt(Confident): “Alright Keith, you’ve shown me your strength, so I’ll show you mine! True Holy Sword!”
{Valkyrie and Kratos collided at huge speeds and maximum power, the battle could be anyone’s. Even if, Valt was the Champion, Keith was one of the strongest bladers of the new generation.}
A burst of light shot into the sky from the stadium’s middle, sending Kratos and Valkyrie into the air. Kratos burst, but this didn’t mean nothing, as Valkyrie burst a second later.
Valt’s eyes widened with shock.
Valt(mind): "If he can be this close, then he's going to do it!"
Keith’s eyes also widened in shock, he had just beaten Valt Aoi (Well, he didn’t by the rulebook). His strength and training truly had payed off.
Kratos and Valkyie parts hit the floor, Valt saying,
Valt(Sincere): “Keith, that display of power, was incredible! I think you’ll win in your battle with Requiem.”
Keith smiled, as he felt that he could truly win.
{Van’s Mansion}
Everyone: “3! 2! 1! Go Shoot!”
{Calamity Valkyrie, Omega Orion, Wither Diabolos, Elite Gladius, Forge Vulcan and Everburn Phoenix hit the stadium floor. Phoenix and Gladius going to the center and battling for it while Orion, Valkyrie, Diabolos and Vulcan rushed around the outer ridge.}
Diabolos and Orion started spiraling to the center.
Daishi(Cold): “Wither Shoot!”
Obito(Calm): “Orion, Omega Shoot!”
{Both Orion and Diabolos began barraging both Phoenix and Gladius. As those beys battled, Vulcan and Valkyrie had their own battle.}
{Then as Diabolos hit Phoenix, it’s Everburn Armor flew off, and hit the stadium floor spinning.}
Payne(Excited): “My, my! You’ve stripped Phoenix off it’s feathers!”
{Vulcan hit Valkyrie, slamming it into the floor. Valkyrie was then hit once again across the stadium. Once Valkyrie hit the floor, Rush’s plastic tip retracted and the rubber star hit the stadium floor, giving Calamity Valkyrie a boost of speed and strength.}
Van(Confident): “Now, Calamity Sword!”
{Valkyrie rushed towards Vulcan, slamming it’s rubber sword against Vulcan, sending it out of the stadium flying.}
Kai(Surprised): “That much power?”
{Valkyrie then quickly began it’s spiral towards the center, hitting both Wither and Void out of it’s way while hitting the Everburn Armor.}
{The Everburn Armor shot towards Phoenix, the armor colliding with the Everburn Blade, as Payne called}
Payne(Excited): “Now! Everburn Cannon!”
{Phoenix shot it’s armor, it flew straight into Orion, clicking it once.}
Obito(Surprised): “So, your defense type can do more than hog the center?”
Payne grit his teeth.
Payne(Angry): “Your snarky remarks are so annoying! Sometimes, you need to shut the hell up!”
{Phoenix darted towards Orion, hitting and forcing it against the wall. The two beys were colliding, and sparks seemed to fly.}
Payne(Angry): “Phoenix, were going to shut the snarky carp up for good, Everburning Sync!”
Obito(Snarky): “You think? Maybe we’ll keep the loser quiet! Omega Sync!”
{Both Obito and Payne entered their syncs and duked it out on the wall. Meanwhile, Diabolos, Valkyrie and Gladius had a three-way clash.}
Daishi(Cold): “End it, Wither Upper!”
{As Diabolos went back to continue it’s shoot, it’s blades glowed a black and red color. Van called.}
Van(Confident): “We’ll win, Dark Sync and Calamity Sword!”
{Both Diabolos and Valkyrie hit Gladius, these attacks proving too much for Gladius’ parry blades, bursting it.}
Gemma(Disappointed): “I might aswell be a filler by this point.”
{Valkyrie and Diabolos, turned and began barraging each other. Valkyrie hit Diabolos’ up in the air. Daishi called, as Diabolos split.}
Daishi(Cold): “Now! Cannon Break!”
{The mini-bey came off and hit the Below Disc’s slanted blade, allowing for the power to shoot at Valkyrie. Now, Diabolos’ Cannon Driver’s ball-like tip made it take a more defensive mode.}
{As the mini-bey began barraging Valkyrie, Diabolos now could take center, and it did. Then Valkyrie started spiraling towards the center, as Van called.}
Van(Sync): “This is over, Calamity Shatter!”
{Just like Fallen Shatter and Dead Gravity, Calamity Valkyrie began speeding around in a circle, slowing closing in on Diabolos, this also made the mini-bey of Diabolos start hitting Diabolos, damaging itself.}
Daishi(Nervous): “We’ll survive this, Diabolos! Wither Counter!”
{Wither began to counter some of the attack from it’s mini-bey, then Valkyrie hit Diabolos with it’s rubber and burst it.}
Daishi(Frustrated): “Uugh...”
{Just as Daishi said that, Phoenix’s parts flew from the stadium. Orion had burst Phoenix from it’s own pressure and the wall. It was now Obito vs Van.}
Gemma(Calm): “Couldn’t say I didn’t see this coming.”
{Orion and Valkyrie began barraging each other, little did either blader know that their beys were running low on stamina. Then after what was maybe the 18th hit, both beys went to the outer ridge and began spinning way slower and wobble. Valkyrie began scraping first, but due to how Rush was designed the part that was scraping was somewhat smooth, then Orion began scraping and it wasn’t good for Orion. Orion then stopped spinning, giving Van the win.}
Van(Calm): “As always, but everyone did well too. We’ll use 100% tomorrow against Valhalla.”
Everyone nodded, and returned to their rooms in Van's mansion. As Van fell asleep, a nightmare consumed him.
{Van’s Nightmare}
Van stepped out of his room, this was after he had beaten Payne and Prominence Phoenix, and had began to make plans to take over the blading world.
Van walked down the street, as he did, he saw a boy with black hair talking to a girl and giving her a pair of earrings.
Van(Mind): “This dream… that must be Obito.”
As Van kept walking, he walked by an old mansion and entered it.
Van(Mind): “This is my mansion.”
Van exited his mansion, and once he left, he walked through the forest. Before too long, he heard a voice.
???: “Hello, you’re Van Aoi? Am I correct?”
Van turned around, he was surprised, confused and most of all scared. It was a man with full cloak.
Van(Scared): “If I was?”
???: “I’ve been looking for you. You’ve been using a form of dark resonance correct?”
Van(Confused): “Yeah, what about it?”
???: “I’ve wanted someone to help me with this project. I can help you achieve mastery of blading, and become the champion and beat Valt.”
Van thought about his father, he’d been using all his time for Tsugumi. Van grit his teeth and clenched his fists.
Van(Angry): “I’ll do whatever to beat Valt.”
The man in the mask smiled, and Van followed him.
Van(curious): "Who are you, by the way?"
???: "You can call me Cutthroat, or your friend if you're confortable with it."
This eventually let Van to meet Gemma (Cutthroat’s assistant), Obito through files, Daishi through files and physical search, and Payne through research. Once the Mythical System was created, Van took the files and him and Cutthroat created Fallen Valkyrie, what should’ve been the strongest bey. Obviously, it wasn’t as Holy Valkyrie shattered it.
Then Van entered a shadow realm, and saw Valt, Shasa, Tsugumi, Cutthroat, Obito, Gemma, Payne, Daishi, Kai and Keith.
Van(Confused): “Why are you all here?”
Van knew this was never part of his dream before, in fact his dreams were always memories. Van didn’t care though. He grit his teeth and rushed at not Valt, Shasa or Tsugumi, but Keith. He punched Keith, but this was just a silhouette.
Keith(Emotionless): “You’re a bad son, you don’t know what blading is.”
Van jumped forward, and kicked Keith’s head.
Keith appeared behind him, whispering
Keith(Whisper): “You’ll amount to nothing, Van.”
Van punched the shadow again, once again Keith disappeared and reappeared. Van was already tired of this, he turned to his master and “friends” saying.
Van(Angry): “Stop them! Do it!”
All of them disappeared though, and instead Keith’s team and friends appeared. Van ran and began attacking them all, nothing happened. The shadows would disappear, reappear, taunt Van, Van attacks, repeat.
Van stood there, defeated. His own thoughts, weren’t safe. His body began to change, his arms had cuts appear, he looked at the cuts were from his Title Match with Valt, they then bled and Van tried to cover them, but nothing happened.
Then Cutthroat appeared behind Van, and covered his eyes, only a few words were uttered,
Van? Cutthroat?: “You’re not even his son.”
Big things, big things. New ship soon, some people could've caught on a while, if you did feel free to post in a SPOILER the ship. I'll make a post soon to do some quick explaining of Mythic Burst, the sequel to Mythical.
RE: (Beansworth's Fanfics)Beyblade Burst: Mythical and Beyblade Burst: DualBurst - beansworth - Sep. 18, 2022
So. Mythic Burst post time. There's a bit to talk about so let's get started.
Storyline: 4 years after the finale of Mythical, Keith and the gang(Most OCs will NOT be included.) have be battling and exploring the Blading World. Although soon they, hear of a new project made by Cutthroat, who has created Requiem. Van is there, with his own new team of bladers, Keith has to fight back, but Mythical Kratos won't be strong enough. This gives Keith, the inspiration to make Chaos Kratos and the Constellation System.
Constellation System:
Avatar Core: This part is most similar to a DB Core, featuring the Avatar pictured on the main part, with an outer ring that has a small design. This part is basically just a DB Core.
Constellation Blade: The Constellation Blade is similar to Superking Rings and DB Blades, as this part features the main contact points of the Bey. Most Constellation Blades feature a gimmick.
Gears: This system features 4 different weights, each has benefits and downfalls. Only one is used per bey.
OWD Gear(Stamina): The OWD Gear puts most it's weight to the outer ends, to increase stamina.
IWD Gear(Defense): The IWD Gear puts most it's weight to the inside, to increase defense.
Balance Gear(Balance): The Balance Gear puts all it's weight in a balanced manor.
Unbalance Gear(Attack): The Unbalance Gear has it's weight unbalanced, increases attack.
Star Disc: These discs are meant to be used with star armors, as you can put frames onto them, but they are designed like Chassis from Sparking.
Star Armor: Star Armors are similar to GT Discs, and Hasbro's Chassis Disc. Each armor has a different design, some of these even have gimmicks.
Driver: Same as always.
OCs: So about OCs from Mythical to spice things up, I will be allowing three to return as main cast from Mythical, while I'll take about maybe 4-5 new ones. It'll be a contest to the end of September(Maybe more time if needed) The current contest will have two winners.
OC Contest: So for Mythic Burst, I need nearly all original new OCs to add. I'll need one good guy and one Requiem member. Remember this is for Mythic Burst, so read the system above to then make your new OC beys.
(Sep. 18, 2022 7:00 PM)beansworth Wrote:
So. Mythic Burst post time. There's a bit to talk about so let's get started.
Storyline: 4 years after the finale of Mythical, Keith and the gang(Most OCs will NOT be included.) have be battling and exploring the Blading World. Although soon they, hear of a new project made by Cutthroat, who has created Requiem. Van is there, with his own new team of bladers, Keith has to fight back, but Mythical Kratos won't be strong enough. This gives Keith, the inspiration to make Chaos Kratos and the Constellation System.
Constellation System:
Avatar Core: This part is most similar to a DB Core, featuring the Avatar pictured on the main part, with an outer ring that has a small design. This part is basically just a DB Core.
Constellation Blade: The Constellation Blade is similar to Superking Rings and DB Blades, as this part features the main contact points of the Bey. Most Constellation Blades feature a gimmick.
Gears: This system features 4 different weights, each has benefits and downfalls. Only one is used per bey.
OWD Gear(Stamina): The OWD Gear puts most it's weight to the outer ends, to increase stamina.
IWD Gear(Defense): The IWD Gear puts most it's weight to the inside, to increase defense.
Balance Gear(Balance): The Balance Gear puts all it's weight in a balanced manor.
Unbalance Gear(Attack): The Unbalance Gear has it's weight unbalanced, increases attack.
Star Disc: These discs are meant to be used with star armors, as you can put frames onto them, but they are designed like Chassis from Sparking.
Star Armor: Star Armors are similar to GT Discs, and Hasbro's Chassis Disc. Each armor has a different design, some of these even have gimmicks.
Driver: Same as always.
OCs: So about OCs from Mythical to spice things up, I will be allowing three to return as main cast from Mythical, while I'll take about maybe 4-5 new ones. It'll be a contest to the end of September(Maybe more time if needed) The current contest will have two winners.
OC Contest: So for Mythic Burst, I need nearly all original new OCs to add. I'll need one good guy and one Requiem member. Remember this is for Mythic Burst, so read the system above to then make your new OC beys. This is just a quick post about the system, and little info for the story and the OC Contest. I'll make a more detailed post, later maybe after or during Mythical's finale.
RE: (Beansworth's Fanfics)Beyblade Burst: Mythical and Beyblade Burst: DualBurst - Acqueli - Sep. 19, 2022
(Sep. 18, 2022 7:00 PM)beansworth Wrote: So. Mythic Burst post time. There's a bit to talk about so let's get started.
Storyline: 4 years after the finale of Mythical, Keith and the gang(Most OCs will NOT be included.) have be battling and exploring the Blading World. Although soon they, hear of a new project made by Cutthroat, who has created Requiem. Van is there, with his own new team of bladers, Keith has to fight back, but Mythical Kratos won't be strong enough. This gives Keith, the inspiration to make Chaos Kratos and the Constellation System.
Constellation System:
Avatar Core: This part is most similar to a DB Core, featuring the Avatar pictured on the main part, with an outer ring that has a small design. This part is basically just a DB Core.
Constellation Blade: The Constellation Blade is similar to Superking Rings and DB Blades, as this part features the main contact points of the Bey. Most Constellation Blades feature a gimmick.
Gears: This system features 4 different weights, each has benefits and downfalls. Only one is used per bey.
OWD Gear(Stamina): The OWD Gear puts most it's weight to the outer ends, to increase stamina.
IWD Gear(Defense): The IWD Gear puts most it's weight to the inside, to increase defense.
Balance Gear(Balance): The Balance Gear puts all it's weight in a balanced manor.
Unbalance Gear(Attack): The Unbalance Gear has it's weight unbalanced, increases attack.
Star Disc: These discs are meant to be used with star armors, as you can put frames onto them, but they are designed like Chassis from Sparking.
Star Armor: Star Armors are similar to GT Discs, and Hasbro's Chassis Disc. Each armor has a different design, some of these even have gimmicks.
Driver: Same as always.
OCs: So about OCs from Mythical to spice things up, I will be allowing three to return as main cast from Mythical, while I'll take about maybe 4-5 new ones. It'll be a contest to the end of September(Maybe more time if needed) The current contest will have two winners.
OC Contest: So for Mythic Burst, I need nearly all original new OCs to add. I'll need one good guy and one Requiem member. Remember this is for Mythic Burst, so read the system above to then make your new OC beys.
(Sep. 18, 2022 7:00 PM)beansworth Wrote:
So. Mythic Burst post time. There's a bit to talk about so let's get started.
Storyline: 4 years after the finale of Mythical, Keith and the gang(Most OCs will NOT be included.) have be battling and exploring the Blading World. Although soon they, hear of a new project made by Cutthroat, who has created Requiem. Van is there, with his own new team of bladers, Keith has to fight back, but Mythical Kratos won't be strong enough. This gives Keith, the inspiration to make Chaos Kratos and the Constellation System.
Constellation System:
Avatar Core: This part is most similar to a DB Core, featuring the Avatar pictured on the main part, with an outer ring that has a small design. This part is basically just a DB Core.
Constellation Blade: The Constellation Blade is similar to Superking Rings and DB Blades, as this part features the main contact points of the Bey. Most Constellation Blades feature a gimmick.
Gears: This system features 4 different weights, each has benefits and downfalls. Only one is used per bey.
OWD Gear(Stamina): The OWD Gear puts most it's weight to the outer ends, to increase stamina.
IWD Gear(Defense): The IWD Gear puts most it's weight to the inside, to increase defense.
Balance Gear(Balance): The Balance Gear puts all it's weight in a balanced manor.
Unbalance Gear(Attack): The Unbalance Gear has it's weight unbalanced, increases attack.
Star Disc: These discs are meant to be used with star armors, as you can put frames onto them, but they are designed like Chassis from Sparking.
Star Armor: Star Armors are similar to GT Discs, and Hasbro's Chassis Disc. Each armor has a different design, some of these even have gimmicks.
Driver: Same as always.
OCs: So about OCs from Mythical to spice things up, I will be allowing three to return as main cast from Mythical, while I'll take about maybe 4-5 new ones. It'll be a contest to the end of September(Maybe more time if needed) The current contest will have two winners.
OC Contest: So for Mythic Burst, I need nearly all original new OCs to add. I'll need one good guy and one Requiem member. Remember this is for Mythic Burst, so read the system above to then make your new OC beys. This is just a quick post about the system, and little info for the story and the OC Contest. I'll make a more detailed post, later maybe after or during Mythical's finale.
Here's my oc I hope you enjoy it (sorry if some of these categories are not needed I just copied what I thought would be important for a character based off the anime.)
Name: Henry Uber
Gender: Male
Height: 5'8"
Appearance: Has red hair that covers the left side of his face with the back of his hair going to his shoulders and has purple eyes with pale skin.
Resonance appearance: Henry's eyes glow purple and his hair starts to levitate in the air and a purple aura surrounds him.
Backstory: Henry's parents passed away a long time ago causing Henry to live by himself and learn how to cook, clean, and mature very quickly. Eventually Henry met Yara who became his best friend and introduced him to the world of blading. But one day Yara got in a car accident causing damage to his spine and ending his blading career. A day after the crash Henry came to the hospital Yara was staying at. When he was at the hospital Yara made Henry promise that he would complete his dream of becoming the best blader in the world and gave Henry his bey Devour Hydra. Now Henry battles doing everything he can to win to honor his promise to Yara and become the number one blader in the world. Henry's personality is kind, sensitive, somewhat smart when it comes to beyblade strategy, and he likes to battle, be with friends, and cook.
Avatar Core: Hydra (A right spin black core that has three purple dragon heads with red eyes.)
Constellation Blade: Devour (A black right spin attack type blade similar to a bey like Valkyrie with three purple rubber attack points. The blade also consists of three little red metal blades that hit the opponents bey before the big rubber blade does.)
Unbalanced Gear
Star Armor: Path (A silver disc that consists of 6 jagged points that are designed to spin clockwise similarly to Legacy.)
Driver: A black Ultimate Reboot with purple rubber.)
Special Moves:
Devour Slash: The purple rubber on Hydra glows and Hydra attacks its opponent with a giant attack that causes massive damage.
Devour Spin: If Hydra is facing an opposite spin opponent and is losing spin, Hydra can use the rubber on Devour to gain spin like Fafnir.
Ultimate Devour Reboot: Using Ultimate Reboot, Hydra gains a lot of speed and charges at its opponent.
Flower Dash: Henry angles his launcher at a ninety degree angle causing Hydra to attack the opponent in a flower pattern like Valt's famous Rush Shoot.
RE: (Beansworth's Fanfics)Beyblade Burst: Mythical and Beyblade Burst: DualBurst - Yagami - Sep. 19, 2022
(Sep. 19, 2022 12:02 AM)Acqueli Wrote: (Sep. 18, 2022 7:00 PM)beansworth Wrote: So. Mythic Burst post time. There's a bit to talk about so let's get started.
Storyline: 4 years after the finale of Mythical, Keith and the gang(Most OCs will NOT be included.) have be battling and exploring the Blading World. Although soon they, hear of a new project made by Cutthroat, who has created Requiem. Van is there, with his own new team of bladers, Keith has to fight back, but Mythical Kratos won't be strong enough. This gives Keith, the inspiration to make Chaos Kratos and the Constellation System.
Constellation System:
Avatar Core: This part is most similar to a DB Core, featuring the Avatar pictured on the main part, with an outer ring that has a small design. This part is basically just a DB Core.
Constellation Blade: The Constellation Blade is similar to Superking Rings and DB Blades, as this part features the main contact points of the Bey. Most Constellation Blades feature a gimmick.
Gears: This system features 4 different weights, each has benefits and downfalls. Only one is used per bey.
OWD Gear(Stamina): The OWD Gear puts most it's weight to the outer ends, to increase stamina.
IWD Gear(Defense): The IWD Gear puts most it's weight to the inside, to increase defense.
Balance Gear(Balance): The Balance Gear puts all it's weight in a balanced manor.
Unbalance Gear(Attack): The Unbalance Gear has it's weight unbalanced, increases attack.
Star Disc: These discs are meant to be used with star armors, as you can put frames onto them, but they are designed like Chassis from Sparking.
Star Armor: Star Armors are similar to GT Discs, and Hasbro's Chassis Disc. Each armor has a different design, some of these even have gimmicks.
Driver: Same as always.
OCs: So about OCs from Mythical to spice things up, I will be allowing three to return as main cast from Mythical, while I'll take about maybe 4-5 new ones. It'll be a contest to the end of September(Maybe more time if needed) The current contest will have two winners.
OC Contest: So for Mythic Burst, I need nearly all original new OCs to add. I'll need one good guy and one Requiem member. Remember this is for Mythic Burst, so read the system above to then make your new OC beys.
This is just a quick post about the system, and little info for the story and the OC Contest. I'll make a more detailed post, later maybe after or during Mythical's finale.
Here's my oc I hope you enjoy it (sorry if some of these categories are not needed I just copied what I thought would be important for a character based off the anime.)
Name: Henry Uber
Gender: Male
Height: 5'8"
Appearance: Has red hair that covers the left side of his face with the back of his hair going to his shoulders and has purple eyes with pale skin.
Resonance appearance: Henry's eyes glow purple and his hair starts to levitate in the air and a purple aura surrounds him.
Backstory: Henry's parents passed away a long time ago causing Henry to live by himself and learn how to cook, clean, and mature very quickly. Eventually Henry met Yara who became his best friend and introduced him to the world of blading. But one day Yara got in a car accident causing damage to his spine and ending his blading career. A day after the crash Henry came to the hospital Yara was staying at. When he was at the hospital Yara made Henry promise that he would complete his dream of becoming the best blader in the world and gave Henry his bey Devour Hydra. Now Henry battles doing everything he can to win to honor his promise to Yara and become the number one blader in the world.
Avatar Core: Hydra (A right spin black core that has three purple dragon heads with red eyes.)
Constellation Blade: (A black right spin attack type blade similar to a bey like Valkyrie with three purple rubber attack points. The blade also consists of three little red metal blades that hit the opponents bey before the big rubber blade does.)
Unbalanced Gear
Star Armor: Path (A silver disc that consists of 6 jagged points that are designed to spin clockwise similarly to Legacy.)
Driver: A black Ultimate Reboot with purple rubber.)
Special Moves:
Devour Slash: The purple rubber on Hydra glows and Hydra attacks its opponent with a giant attack that causes massive damage.
Devour Spin: If Hydra is facing an opposite spin opponent and is losing spin, Hydra can use the rubber on Devour to gain spin like Fafnir.
Ultimate Devour Reboot: Using Ultimate Reboot, Hydra gains a lot of speed and charges at its opponent.
Flower Dash: Henry angles his launcher at a ninety degree angle causing Hydra to attack the opponent in a flower pattern like Valt's famous Rush Shoot.
Hey if it's okay can I use your structure for your oc for mine since he didn't add like a template
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