RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - Ryuga's Son - Dec. 12, 2020
NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
A MFB FAN!!!!!!!!!
I feel so sad...............
6Jupiter5 I feel so sad for u. I am sorry for your loss......its something that cannot be healed.............Hope u and ur family have a good life, and u live in harmony
Pichaku Sensei, hope u will be happy in the journeys ahead waiting for u
RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - DeltaZakuro - Dec. 13, 2020
Will try to get a preview out tomorrow
RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - SacredXcalibur - Dec. 13, 2020
Goodbye Pikachu Sensei... You were a Legend. : '(
RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - DeltaZakuro - Dec. 14, 2020
Apologies for no preview yesterday, wasn't feeling all that well. New Chapter will be finished tomorrow.
RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - Eclipse Force - Dec. 14, 2020
(Dec. 14, 2020 4:14 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: Apologies for no preview yesterday, wasn't feeling all that well. New Chapter will be finished tomorrow.
Don't push yourself, take as many breaks as you want too.
RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - DeltaZakuro - Dec. 15, 2020
Chapter 10
(This Chapter is in honor and memory of Pikachu Sensei, who recently passed away in a hit and run accident. RIP....)
~it had been many hours and Athena STILL hadnt stopped training, in the distance Free De La Hoya was watching her with a somewhat interested face, he heads towards her~
~Athena was sweating buckets as she continued to ignore her exhaustion~
Athena: One more time...
~Adeona flew out of the stadium, however someone catches it! It was Free!~
Athena: Huh?! F-Free?!?
Free: This belong to you? *tossing the bey to her*
Athena: You're Free De La Hoya right?
Free: Yeah, who's asking?
Athena: My name is Athena Valhalla!
Free: Valhalla....? You know I lost to someone with that last name..
Athena: I know... I was there when it happened.. I can assure you im nothing like my brother.
Free: Shu Kurenai said the same thing...
*he holds up Mirage Fafnir*
Free: I want to see if that's true!
Athena: So that's the legendary Mirage Fafnir.
Free: Sure is. Now lets begin...
3 2 1 GO SHOOT!!!
*Fafnir was spinning extremely slowly as Adeona speeds toward it*
Athena: Attack!!!
*Adeonas attack causes Fafnirs spin to increase*
Athena: Tch.. Keep going!!!
*all of Adeonas attacks were fueling Fafnirs stamina, making it spin faster*
Free: That all you got?
Athena: Take him down!!
*Adeona lands a number of devastating attacks, sending Fafnir reeling*
Free: Now we're talking...
~Athenas hair turned from Purple to White, her eyes glowed purple as her Flare burned bright~
Free: That aura.. Ive seen it somewhere before...
Athena: Destroy!!!
~Athenas eyes took on an evil glow~
Free: That's- That's the same darkness i felt back then...
~Athena was lost in her darkness, she was completely unaware of her actions~
Athena: GO!! GUIDE SLASH!!!
Free: Fafnir!!!
*Fafnirs avatar comes out*
Free: Now!!! Mirage Claw!!!
~Fafnir and Adeona clash and Adeona bursts shortly after, the explosion that followed blew Athena clean off her feet~
~Athenas hair and eyes return to normal as she stared down at Adeona which had burst into pieces~
Free: Looks like I wasted my time..
~Free had left and Athena picks up her bey and leaves too, as she was leaving GT Arena someone stands in her way, it was Shu Kurenai~
Athena: Shu?! What are you doing here!?
Shu: I heard you were on a severe losing streak so I came to give you some special training...
Athena: Special Training?
~Shu smiled as Athena wondered what kind of "Special Training" Shu had up his sleeve~
~Meanwhile Free had entered Lanes factory, Lane was sitting on a crate while feeding Harry~
Lane: *not looking away from Harry* What do you want Free De La Hoya?
Free: Nothing much, ive come here to give you a warning...
Lane: A warning?
Free: If I end up battling you in the Legend League, i will not be showing mercy...
Lane: Will you now? You didn't forget what happened last time did you?
~Frees eyes narrowed as the words "Destroy It, Uranus!!" echoed in his mind, Free knew exactly what Lane was talking about~
Lane: not showing any mercy huh? Im looking forward to it..
~Free turned and left, meanwhile Athena and Shu were talking~
Shu: So you lost to Free?
Athena: Yeah, its crazy how strong he is...
Shu: He has always been a tough one to beat..
Athena: I will still find a way to beat him!!!
~Athena stared off at the sunset, her bey glowed in her hand~
Athena: Adeona... I'll make you even stronger..
~Shu looked at her in worry, he knew something big was about to happen~
[TO BE CONTINUED]
Next Chapter: Burning Bright! Growing Flare!
RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - DeltaZakuro - Dec. 16, 2020
Next chapter is gonna be a bit of a filler but im still gonna try and make it awesome.
Next chapter is called Burning Bright! Growing Flare!
We're seeing a tag team battle in this chapter.
RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - PeppzieCola - Dec. 16, 2020
(Dec. 16, 2020 5:09 AM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: Next chapter is gonna be a bit of a filler but im still gonna try and make it awesome.
Next chapter is called Burning Bright! Growing Flare!
We're seeing a tag team battle in this chapter.
Great Chapter Delta, I love that you put "In Memory of Pikachu Sensei"
RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - DeltaZakuro - Dec. 20, 2020
I'll have the latest chapter here tomorrow.
RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - Darkus/Flasher - Dec. 29, 2020
Is this Fan-Fiction on Hiatus?
RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - DeltaZakuro - Dec. 29, 2020
(Dec. 29, 2020 12:59 AM)Darkus/Flasher Wrote: Is this Fan-Fiction on Hiatus?
For now. Im still recovering from Christmas and i want to start Infinity Warriors before I release another Chapter of this story.
RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - DeltaZakuro - Jan. 11, 2021
End Lucifer En 2D Description (this is replacing LcA as Lanes evo)
Ring: End - a thicker Variant with burst stoppers akin to World
Chip: Lucifer2 - pretty much irl Lucifer2 (so unoriginal i know)
Chassis: 1D
Disk: Hurricane
Driver: Endless' - pretty much CrazyAries tip on his Golden Aurora
Special Moves: End Wall, End Press, End Disaster
RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - 6Jupiter5 - Jan. 11, 2021
(Jan. 11, 2021 3:15 AM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: End Lucifer En 2D Description (this is replacing LcA as Lanes evo)
Ring: End - a thicker Variant with burst stoppers akin to World
Chip: Lucifer2 - pretty irl Lucifer2 (so unoriginal i know)
Chassis: 2D - b a r r i e r
Driver: Enigma - imagine a free spin Metal WD but as a burst driver.
Finally, we got the barrier. However, Enigma irl would have to be average height to be good as WD works well on tracks like 130 or 125.
RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - Master_chanter0 - Jan. 11, 2021
(Jan. 11, 2021 3:15 AM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: End Lucifer En 2D Description (this is replacing LcA as Lanes evo)
Ring: End - a thicker Variant with burst stoppers akin to World
Chip: Lucifer2 - pretty irl Lucifer2 (so unoriginal i know)
Chassis: 2D - b a r r i e r
Driver: Enigma - imagine a free spin Metal WD but as a burst driver.
So the tip is basically EWD metal?
RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - DeltaZakuro - Jan. 11, 2021
(Jan. 11, 2021 5:14 PM)Master_chanter0 Wrote: (Jan. 11, 2021 3:15 AM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: End Lucifer En 2D Description (this is replacing LcA as Lanes evo)
Ring: End - a thicker Variant with burst stoppers akin to World
Chip: Lucifer2 - pretty irl Lucifer2 (so unoriginal i know)
Chassis: 2D - b a r r i e r
Driver: Enigma - imagine a free spin Metal WD but as a burst driver.
So the tip is basically EWD metal?
yes.
RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - DeltaZakuro - Jan. 16, 2021
If you want to read C11 go to Wattpad to read it. Im not posting fillers/unimportant chapters to WBO.
RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - DeltaZakuro - Jan. 17, 2021
Easy access to Chapter 11
https://www.wattpad.com/996188240-story-of-lanes-sister-athena-~beyblade-burst
RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - DeltaZakuro - Jan. 19, 2021
Chapter 12: The Fiery Majestic Crimson Flames! World Spriggan!
~Shu and Athena leave Valts home, Athena fell behind as she reflected on her losses~
Shu: Athena.. Dont let your losses get the best of you, learn from those losses and understand what you did wrong and i can almost guarantee you will be a lot stronger.
~Athena lifts her head and looked at Shu, inspired by his words she dashes in front of him and holds out Adeona~
Athena: Battle me!
~Shu stared at Athena a little surprised but his surprise changed to a smile, he agrees and they head to the bey stadium in the park~
Athena: I'll defeat you!
Shu: *changing 2B to Defense Mode* let's see you try.
~from a distance, Lane was watching, He held Lucifer in his hand in hopes that either one of them would get him fired up~
3 2 1 GO SHOOT!!!
*Spriggan takes the center as Adeona attempts to cut it off*
Athena: Blow it back!!
*Spriggan blocks all the attacks and climbs the stadium*
Shu: World Counter Break!
*Spriggan accelerates and bursts Adeona in record time*
Athena: N-no way..
Lane: *whispers* what a failure...
Shu: One more time?
Athena: Sure!
*Shu then changed to Left Spin Attack*
3 2 1 GO SHOOT!!!
*Spriggan and Adeona land in the Stadium*
Athena: Go!!
*Adeona attacks and deals some damage to Spriggan*
Shu: That wont be enough! World Counter Break!
*Spriggan blows Adeona away, knocking it in the Speed Cradle*
Athena: This is only the beginning! Adeona!!
*Adeonas avatar comes out*
Athena: Do it! Guide Slash!!
*Adeona flys out of the speed cradle and dives toward Spriggan*
Shu: Spriggan!!
*Spriggans avatar comes out*
Shu: End this battle with World Slash!!
~Athena snapped! Her hair turns a snowy white and her eyes glow a bright purple as her white flare activates, it was so much bigger this time which shocked both Shu and Lane!~
*Adeona and Spriggan collide and Adeona bursts, the explosion that followed blows Athena off her feet, Athena fainted*
~when Athena woke up she was in Lanes abandoned factory, she was laying down on a crate, sitting next to her was Lane~
Athena: H-how did I get here?
Lane: I brought you here.
Athena: *surprised* what for?
Lane: *getting off the crate and walks over to the stadium* to battle.
Athena: *walks over to the stadium* if you insist..
Lane: *thinks* your flare has grown, lets see how it compares to mine.
Athena: *Aura activates* i'll take you down here and now!!
Lane: *aura activates* yes... Let me see more of your rage! Lucifer is just itching to break you!!
Athena: I wont let you!!
~the two stared at each other as a very explosive battle was about to take place!~
[TO BE CONTINUED]
Next Episode: Flare Collision! Rematch With Lane!
RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - 6Jupiter5 - Jan. 19, 2021
What happened in episode 39?
RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - DeltaZakuro - Jan. 19, 2021
(Jan. 19, 2021 4:52 AM)6Jupiter5 Wrote: What happened in episode 39?
What?
RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - 6Jupiter5 - Jan. 19, 2021
(Jan. 19, 2021 5:00 AM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: (Jan. 19, 2021 4:52 AM)6Jupiter5 Wrote: What happened in episode 39?
What?
I know it’s a little bit too late, but I can’t remember what happened in that episode and I couldn’t find it. To remind you it was Aiga and Drum vs Athena and Valt.
RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - DeltaZakuro - Jan. 19, 2021
(Jan. 19, 2021 5:07 AM)6Jupiter5 Wrote: (Jan. 19, 2021 5:00 AM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: What?
I know it’s a little bit too late, but I can’t remember what happened in that episode and I couldn’t find it. To remind you it was Aiga and Drum vs Athena and Valt.
I know.
RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - DeltaZakuro - Jan. 19, 2021
Chapter 13 Teaser
In an attempt to beat Lucifer, Athena reaches out and tries to teach Lane "the fun in blading"! Will her words of love reach him or will she fail once more?
RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - 6Jupiter5 - Jan. 19, 2021
(Jan. 19, 2021 11:30 PM) Wrote: Chapter 13 Teaser
In an attempt to beat Lucifer, Athena reaches out and tries to teach Lane "the fun in blading"! Will her words of love reach him or will she fail once more?
Personally I think she’s going to fail, but we’ll see.
RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - SpeedySuomi - Jan. 20, 2021
(Jan. 19, 2021 11:39 PM)6Jupiter5 Wrote: [quote pid='1719225' dateline='1611095412']
Chapter 13 Teaser
In an attempt to beat Lucifer, Athena reaches out and tries to teach Lane "the fun in blading"! Will her words of love reach him or will she fail once more?
Personally I think she’s going to fail, but we’ll see.
[/quote]
She's prolly gonna end up like Ranjiro when he attempted to fight Lean.
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