RE: Beyblade Burst: Ridge Storm - USN - Jun. 03, 2021
The number one piece of info is to look for ALL the answers. You must familiarize yourselves with each format and make sure you look through the ENTIRE organizer's guide.
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RE: Beyblade Burst: Ridge Storm - Lucha Burst - Jun. 03, 2021
I agree Please stop flooding my threads and others thread, just PM them
also in recent news, Some new characters will be releasing soon as part of RS, their beys will include the following beys: Deathscyther, Achilles, Ragnarok +1 mystery bey
Rikishi kiyama
Name: Rikishi Kiyama
Eye color: Blue
Age: 13
What they look like: Rikishi Kiyama is the cousin of Ranzo Kiyama, he has long messy blonde hair, he sports an orange T-shirt with an R on each sleeve, he sports similar pants to rantaro
(bey info)
Bey Name: Whirl Ragnarok
Layer name/description(speed mode): wind: the wind layer has three medium-sized blades with 3 holes in the middle of the blade, the holes pull air through the layer and push air against the stadium floor speeding up its speed and burst resistance. there are also 3 smaller blade's that are free moving to buffer the impacts of attacks
Layer name/description (energy mode): whirl: in whirl mode, the 3 medium size blades have a spring-loaded gimmick, when you attack them the springs compressed and then cause more counter-attack for Ragnarok
Chip name/description: Ragnarok: the Ragnarok chip features a small gold helmeted head on the top and a small orange head on the bottom, there are also three gold lightning bolts going through the middle section, these lightning bolts feature a blue streak in the middle.
Chassis name/description: S3: the stamina 3 chassis features a perfect circle metal disc in the middle and two smaller half circles that are free moving. when the bey spins the half circles move out creating high outward weight on the Beyblade.
Forge disc: name/description : Brake: the brake disc is a round metal disc with no holo portions, there are 6 small rubber extrusions on the disc
Driver name/description: Void: the void driver has a large round ball like driver tip with a large ring that sits just under the weight disc
(special moves)
List the special moves below (max cap of moves is 6)
1. Glide - when knocked out of the middle the bey glides on the void driver, the bey then rides the ring around the outside, until directed otherwise.
2. Ragnarok zone - Ragnarok will rush to the middle of the stadium and spin in a controlled wobble creating a very effective defense stance.
3. Omega smash - the bey smashes into the wall of the stadium 3 different times each time clicking one of the free moving wings into the bey layer, then the bey rushes into the middle hitting a barrage of attacks
Ares Akabane
(character info)
Name: Ares Akabane
Eye color: Dark red
Age: 12
What they look like: Ares has short orange hair with 3 red streaks on each side of his head, he wears a red hoodie with a giant AA on it, He also wears grey shorts and black knee pads, he also wheres red and black high tops, he can often be seen with a backpack that has a skateboard sticking out of it.
(bey info)
Bey Name: Collide Achilles
Layer name/description(speed mode): strike: the strike layer features 2 gold swords on a red base, the layer also features a metal ring on the middle of the bey. the layer also features several small jagged red and black contact points on the layer.
Layer name/description (energy mode): Collide: The collide layer features the two gold swords but now with a black middle that spreads out into red. the jagged contact points are covered with 4 large contact points
Chip name/description: Achilles V: Achilles features the signature Achilles helmet and a shield on the bottom... it also features two swords on the bottom instead of one, the shield, sword, and helmet accents are black and the main background is red with the rest being gold
Chassis name/description: 3B: the 3B chassis A.K.A the 3 Balance chassis is similar to 1B, the 3b chassis features 2 large metal swords and 6 smaller metal points on the chassis. the smaller points are covered in gold rubber while the 2 large swords are covered in red plastic like the rest of the chassis.
Forge disc: name/description: Shield: the shield disc features 4 large brackets similar to the ones on the 10 disc. it also features several small bumps that are free-spinning. the core disc also features several stars around the top of the disc.
Frame name/description(optional): Smash: the smash frame has 2 large points and 4 slightly smaller ones. there is a small free-spinning internal ring in the frame that creates extra spin. the frame is entirely a transparent red color
Driver name/description: Boost: The boost driver features a mode change gimmick exactly like Xtend and Xtend+, the tip on the driver is a lot wider than extend and xtend+, it also features a rubber chip instead of a plastic one.
(special moves)
List the special moves below (max cap of moves is 6)
1. Sword smash- the bey ramps up the side of the stadium wall, then "jumping" off the wall into the opponent
2.Sheild stance - when the bey takes the middle it can enter sheild stance, where it then tilts when it's hit.
Daxton Kurogami
(character info)
Name: Daxton Kurogami
Eye color: Purple
Age: 14
What they look like: he has long black hair with a purple headband, he wears a purple jacket with black sleeves. he also wears black colored jeans and short black boots.
(bey info)
Bey Name: VIle Deathscyther
Layer name/description(speed mode): Dim: the dim layer features a long purple blade on one half of the Beyblade and several bumps across the other side, the base of the bey is purple.
Layer name/description (energy mode): Vile: the vile layer features the longe blade on one side and instead of bumps it features six small wing-like blades, these blades have small metal chunks in the middle of them.
Chip name/description: Deathscyther: the deathscyther chip features a long sharp blade across one side and a face across the other, the blade is silver and the face is black with red eyes
Chassis name/description:B4: the B4 chassis A.K.A the balance 4 chassis features a round base with a reversible design. the chassis features a core the clicks into the layer and a layer that can be reversible so the heavy metal scythe can be on either side.
Forge disc: name/description: 0
Frame name/description(optional): Wall
Driver name/description: Ark: the ark Driver features a tall design and a sharp tip, the sharp tip is surrounded by rubber. the top of the driver features a wide balanced base
List the special moves below (max cap of moves is 6)
1. Final cut - the final cut features the bey shifting its weight so the scythe is downwards and it will rapidly smash into the bey with the scythe. the scythe will attack the top of the layer due to the positioning and tall driver.
Vanon Aoi
(character info)
Name: Vanon Aoi
Eye color: blue
Age: 13
What they look like: Vanon is on the shorter side and has short blue hair and blue eyes. he wears a red T-shirt and blue jeans. he also wears glasses.
(bey info)
Bey Name: Hero Valkryie
Layer name/description(speed mode): Gallant: the gallant mode has 3 large blades like every valkyrie, behind each blade is rubber in the shape of an E. the rubber is what and the bey is gold with blue accents
Layer name/description (energy mode): Hero: the hero mode has the 3 large blades still But instead of rubber there are 3 smaller blades that are spring-loaded, thus making the bye 6 bladed, the bey is gold and the accents are blue
Chip name/description: Valkyrie X: valkyrie X features the signature helmet but in white color with a blue band instead of red. the base is gold
Chassis name/description: 3a: the 3a is similar to the 2A chassis, there are 3 large blades on the chassis, these blades match up with the wings on the layer, on the outside of these large blades is coated with soft rubber. the chassis also features 3 small metal blades covered by plastic. the plastic is gold and the rubber is white
Forge disc: name/description: Blitz
Driver name/description: God': the god dash driver features a metal tip covered in thick rubber, the driver also features a spring-loaded ring a bit above the bottom of the driver
(special moves)
List the special moves below (max cap of moves is 6)
1. Destroy: spinning around the outer edge of the arena the bey will smash down into the other bey.
2. Sky destroy: the bey will soar up in the air by ramping up the side of the stadium, the bey then does a backflip of sorts and lands on the other side of the stadium slamming into the opponent.
3.Assault: the assault move will make the bey hit a barrage of attacks hitting close-range strikes again and again.
Next two episodes
Episode 3: Cyclone Knight! the rising blader!
Episode 4: Let the world championships begin
(Jun. 03, 2021 6:04 PM)JJustice Wrote: (Jun. 03, 2021 6:00 PM)Lucha Burst Wrote: seriously, I need more characters... I'll create more by myself if no one adds any
Name: Kurin Lopez
Bey: Cyclone Knight
Siblings: he is the younger brother of Kit Lopez
Personality: h has a but of a temper but he has a soft spot
Looks: he wears red jacket with a black T-shirt and white and has free eyes and wears a kit's hat but back words and has brown hair
Moves: Cyclone sense and Cyclone guard
is cyclone Knight a stamina type like air knight?
RE: Beyblade Burst: Ridge Storm - LegendJustice - Jun. 04, 2021
(Jun. 03, 2021 9:25 PM)Lucha Burst Wrote: I agree Please stop flooding my threads and others thread, just PM them
also in recent news, Some new characters will be releasing soon as part of RS, their beys will include the following beys: Deathscyther, Achilles, Ragnarok +1 mystery bey
Rikishi kiyama
Name: Rikishi Kiyama
Eye color: Blue
Age: 13
What they look like: Rikishi Kiyama is the cousin of Ranzo Kiyama, he has long messy blonde hair, he sports an orange T-shirt with an R on each sleeve, he sports similar pants to rantaro
(bey info)
Bey Name: Whirl Ragnarok
Layer name/description(speed mode): wind: the wind layer has three medium-sized blades with 3 holes in the middle of the blade, the holes pull air through the layer and push air against the stadium floor speeding up its speed and burst resistance. there are also 3 smaller blade's that are free moving to buffer the impacts of attacks
Layer name/description (energy mode): whirl: in whirl mode, the 3 medium size blades have a spring-loaded gimmick, when you attack them the springs compressed and then cause more counter-attack for Ragnarok
Chip name/description: Ragnarok: the Ragnarok chip features a small gold helmeted head on the top and a small orange head on the bottom, there are also three gold lightning bolts going through the middle section, these lightning bolts feature a blue streak in the middle.
Chassis name/description: S3: the stamina 3 chassis features a perfect circle metal disc in the middle and two smaller half circles that are free moving. when the bey spins the half circles move out creating high outward weight on the Beyblade.
Forge disc: name/description : Brake: the brake disc is a round metal disc with no holo portions, there are 6 small rubber extrusions on the disc
Driver name/description: Void: the void driver has a large round ball like driver tip with a large ring that sits just under the weight disc
(special moves)
List the special moves below (max cap of moves is 6)
1. Glide - when knocked out of the middle the bey glides on the void driver, the bey then rides the ring around the outside, until directed otherwise.
2. Ragnarok zone - Ragnarok will rush to the middle of the stadium and spin in a controlled wobble creating a very effective defense stance.
3. Omega smash - the bey smashes into the wall of the stadium 3 different times each time clicking one of the free moving wings into the bey layer, then the bey rushes into the middle hitting a barrage of attacks
Ares Akabane
(character info)
Name: Ares Akabane
Eye color: Dark red
Age: 12
What they look like: Ares has short orange hair with 3 red streaks on each side of his head, he wears a red hoodie with a giant AA on it, He also wears grey shorts and black knee pads, he also wheres red and black high tops, he can often be seen with a backpack that has a skateboard sticking out of it.
(bey info)
Bey Name: Collide Achilles
Layer name/description(speed mode): strike: the strike layer features 2 gold swords on a red base, the layer also features a metal ring on the middle of the bey. the layer also features several small jagged red and black contact points on the layer.
Layer name/description (energy mode): Collide: The collide layer features the two gold swords but now with a black middle that spreads out into red. the jagged contact points are covered with 4 large contact points
Chip name/description: Achilles V: Achilles features the signature Achilles helmet and a shield on the bottom... it also features two swords on the bottom instead of one, the shield, sword, and helmet accents are black and the main background is red with the rest being gold
Chassis name/description: 3B: the 3B chassis A.K.A the 3 Balance chassis is similar to 1B, the 3b chassis features 2 large metal swords and 6 smaller metal points on the chassis. the smaller points are covered in gold rubber while the 2 large swords are covered in red plastic like the rest of the chassis.
Forge disc: name/description: Shield: the shield disc features 4 large brackets similar to the ones on the 10 disc. it also features several small bumps that are free-spinning. the core disc also features several stars around the top of the disc.
Frame name/description(optional): Smash: the smash frame has 2 large points and 4 slightly smaller ones. there is a small free-spinning internal ring in the frame that creates extra spin. the frame is entirely a transparent red color
Driver name/description: Boost: The boost driver features a mode change gimmick exactly like Xtend and Xtend+, the tip on the driver is a lot wider than extend and xtend+, it also features a rubber chip instead of a plastic one.
(special moves)
List the special moves below (max cap of moves is 6)
1. Sword smash- the bey ramps up the side of the stadium wall, then "jumping" off the wall into the opponent
2.Sheild stance - when the bey takes the middle it can enter sheild stance, where it then tilts when it's hit.
Daxton Kurogami
(character info)
Name: Daxton Kurogami
Eye color: Purple
Age: 14
What they look like: he has long black hair with a purple headband, he wears a purple jacket with black sleeves. he also wears black colored jeans and short black boots.
(bey info)
Bey Name: VIle Deathscyther
Layer name/description(speed mode): Dim: the dim layer features a long purple blade on one half of the Beyblade and several bumps across the other side, the base of the bey is purple.
Layer name/description (energy mode): Vile: the vile layer features the longe blade on one side and instead of bumps it features six small wing-like blades, these blades have small metal chunks in the middle of them.
Chip name/description: Deathscyther: the deathscyther chip features a long sharp blade across one side and a face across the other, the blade is silver and the face is black with red eyes
Chassis name/description:B4: the B4 chassis A.K.A the balance 4 chassis features a round base with a reversible design. the chassis features a core the clicks into the layer and a layer that can be reversible so the heavy metal scythe can be on either side.
Forge disc: name/description: 0
Frame name/description(optional): Wall
Driver name/description: Ark: the ark Driver features a tall design and a sharp tip, the sharp tip is surrounded by rubber. the top of the driver features a wide balanced base
List the special moves below (max cap of moves is 6)
1. Final cut - the final cut features the bey shifting its weight so the scythe is downwards and it will rapidly smash into the bey with the scythe. the scythe will attack the top of the layer due to the positioning and tall driver.
Vanon Aoi
(character info)
Name: Vanon Aoi
Eye color: blue
Age: 13
What they look like: Vanon is on the shorter side and has short blue hair and blue eyes. he wears a red T-shirt and blue jeans. he also wears glasses.
(bey info)
Bey Name: Hero Valkryie
Layer name/description(speed mode): Gallant: the gallant mode has 3 large blades like every valkyrie, behind each blade is rubber in the shape of an E. the rubber is what and the bey is gold with blue accents
Layer name/description (energy mode): Hero: the hero mode has the 3 large blades still But instead of rubber there are 3 smaller blades that are spring-loaded, thus making the bye 6 bladed, the bey is gold and the accents are blue
Chip name/description: Valkyrie X: valkyrie X features the signature helmet but in white color with a blue band instead of red. the base is gold
Chassis name/description: 3a: the 3a is similar to the 2A chassis, there are 3 large blades on the chassis, these blades match up with the wings on the layer, on the outside of these large blades is coated with soft rubber. the chassis also features 3 small metal blades covered by plastic. the plastic is gold and the rubber is white
Forge disc: name/description: Blitz
Driver name/description: God': the god dash driver features a metal tip covered in thick rubber, the driver also features a spring-loaded ring a bit above the bottom of the driver
(special moves)
List the special moves below (max cap of moves is 6)
1. Destroy: spinning around the outer edge of the arena the bey will smash down into the other bey.
2. Sky destroy: the bey will soar up in the air by ramping up the side of the stadium, the bey then does a backflip of sorts and lands on the other side of the stadium slamming into the opponent.
3.Assault: the assault move will make the bey hit a barrage of attacks hitting close-range strikes again and again.
Next two episodes
Episode 3: Cyclone Knight! the rising blader!
Episode 4: Let the world championships begin
(Jun. 03, 2021 6:04 PM)JJustice Wrote: Name: Kurin Lopez
Bey: Cyclone Knight
Siblings: he is the younger brother of Kit Lopez
Personality: h has a but of a temper but he has a soft spot
Looks: he wears red jacket with a black T-shirt and white and has free eyes and wears a kit's hat but back words and has brown hair
Moves: Cyclone sense and Cyclone guard
is cyclone Knight a stamina type like air knight? Yup
RE: Beyblade Burst: Ridge Storm - Lucha Burst - Jun. 04, 2021
Episode 3: Cyclone Knight! the rising blader!
Dax would be seen in a class with a few other students
Dax: "ugh this math sucks... I just want to battle"
Kurin: "hey... Dax"
Dax: "Huh? what do you want Kurin"
Kurin: "I got my RS Bey this morning"
Dax: "Oh, cool"
Kurin: "You wanna Battle after school?"
Dax: "Hell yeah, Me and Inferno dragon will be waiting for you"
Teacher: "Dax whats the answer to the question I just asked"
Dax: "uhh.. what was the question?"
Teacher: "the question was 45+5x= 95, what is x"
Dax: "umm... ten?"
Teacher: "yes, Maybe pay attention next time"
The school bell would ring
Dax: "Yes finally!" he said as he ran out of class
Teacher: "wait for your homework!" the teacher said but Dax was already gone
Kurin would walk out of the classroom after grabbing his homework.
Kurin: "Dax?" he said as he pushed the outside door open
Dax: "Hey Kurin... over here." he said as he would stand next to the newly installed Ridge Storm stadium at the school
Kuri: "oh there you are" he would pull Cyclone Knight and his launcher out, clicking them together "ready?"
Dax: "yup" He pulled his launcher out and up to shoulder level "you gonna enter the world tournament with that bey?"
Kurin pulling his launcher Up "yes, Why?"
Dax: "because You'll have to beat me to become world champion"
Kurin: "oh cool... 3"
Dax: "2"
Kurin: "1"
Kurin & Dax: "Let it rip"
Kurin: "Cyclone Knight take the middle"
Dax: "inferno Drago don't let cyclone Knight take the middle
The two beys would clash in the middle
Dax in his head "my attacks are weakened.. air knight has a very round design... there's only 4 point my attacks can't grip"
Dax: "Inferno Dragon, Final Burn"
Inferno dragon would race around the outside and smash into Cyclone Knight
Dax: "keep pushing him dragon"
Kurin: "cyclone guard... Don't let him push you"
Cyclone would tilt down slightly creating a defensive stance
Dragon would push him slowly out of the middle
Dax: "Push harder dragon"
dragon would veer back and race back with more speed and power knocking Cycloneknight back
Kurin: "HOLD YOU GROUND CYCLONE KNIGHT"
Dragon would push him back into the rubber ring on the stadium
Dax: "Special move, final calling"
Dragon jumped up on the stadium wall racing around faster and faster before jumping off wildly at cyclone Knight
Kurin: "Dodge it Cyclone Knight"
Cyclone Knight would move slightly before Inferno dragon would smash into him... the movement made it a head-on collision, Inferno dragon would rush past Cyclone Knight as he burst
Dax: "Yes!!!"
Kurin: "Don't expect such an easy win during the world tournament... I lost on purpose, I learned your moves and techniques... I'll be the next world champion!"
Dax: "Don't expect the same fight like this one... I change up my fights every battle... I will become world champion"
Kurin: "we'll have to see who wins the world championship... but I will defeat you eventually"
Episode 4 will start the world championships...
RE: Beyblade Burst: Ridge Storm - LegendJustice - Jun. 04, 2021
(Jun. 04, 2021 3:41 AM)Lucha Burst Wrote: Episode 3: Cyclone Knight! the rising blader!
Dax would be seen in a class with a few other students
Dax: "ugh this math sucks... I just want to battle"
Kurin: "hey... Dax"
Dax: "Huh? what do you want Kurin"
Kurin: "I got my RS Bey this morning"
Dax: "Oh, cool"
Kurin: "You wanna Battle after school?"
Dax: "Hell yeah, Me and Inferno dragon will be waiting for you"
Teacher: "Dax whats the answer to the question I just asked"
Dax: "uhh.. what was the question?"
Teacher: "the question was 45+5x= 95, what is x"
Dax: "umm... ten?"
Teacher: "yes, Maybe pay attention next time"
The school bell would ring
Dax: "Yes finally!" he said as he ran out of class
Teacher: "wait for your homework!" the teacher said but Dax was already gone
Kurin would walk out of the classroom after grabbing his homework.
Kurin: "Dax?" he said as he pushed the outside door open
Dax: "Hey Kurin... over here." he said as he would stand next to the newly installed Ridge Storm stadium at the school
Kuri: "oh there you are" he would pull Cyclone Knight and his launcher out, clicking them together "ready?"
Dax: "yup" He pulled his launcher out and up to shoulder level "you gonna enter the world tournament with that bey?"
Kurin pulling his launcher Up "yes, Why?"
Dax: "because You'll have to beat me to become world champion"
Kurin: "oh cool... 3"
Dax: "2"
Kurin: "1"
Kurin & Dax: "Let it rip"
Kurin: "Cyclone Knight take the middle"
Dax: "inferno Drago don't let cyclone Knight take the middle
The two beys would clash in the middle
Dax in his head "my attacks are weakened.. air knight has a very round design... there's only 4 point my attacks can't grip"
Dax: "Inferno Dragon, Final Burn"
Inferno dragon would race around the outside and smash into Cyclone Knight
Dax: "keep pushing him dragon"
Kurin: "cyclone guard... Don't let him push you"
Cyclone would tilt down slightly creating a defensive stance
Dragon would push him slowly out of the middle
Dax: "Push harder dragon"
dragon would veer back and race back with more speed and power knocking Cycloneknight back
Kurin: "HOLD YOU GROUND CYCLONE KNIGHT"
Dragon would push him back into the rubber ring on the stadium
Dax: "Special move, final calling"
Dragon jumped up on the stadium wall racing around faster and faster before jumping off wildly at cyclone Knight
Kurin: "Dodge it Cyclone Knight"
Cyclone Knight would move slightly before Inferno dragon would smash into him... the movement made it a head-on collision, Inferno dragon would rush past Cyclone Knight as he burst
Dax: "Yes!!!"
Kurin: "Don't expect such an easy win during the world tournament... I lost on purpose, I learned your moves and techniques... I'll be the next world champion!"
Dax: "Don't expect the same fight like this one... I change up my fights every battle... I will become world champion"
Kurin: "we'll have to see who wins the world championship... but I will defeat you eventually"
Episode 4 will start the world championships...
Grammar that s the only thing you need to fix beside that nice chapter 👍
RE: Beyblade Burst: Ridge Storm - Lucha Burst - Jun. 04, 2021
(Jun. 04, 2021 4:02 AM)JJustice Wrote: (Jun. 04, 2021 3:41 AM)Lucha Burst Wrote: Episode 3: Cyclone Knight! the rising blader!
Dax would be seen in a class with a few other students
Dax: "ugh this math sucks... I just want to battle"
Kurin: "hey... Dax"
Dax: "Huh? what do you want Kurin"
Kurin: "I got my RS Bey this morning"
Dax: "Oh, cool"
Kurin: "You wanna Battle after school?"
Dax: "Hell yeah, Me and Inferno dragon will be waiting for you"
Teacher: "Dax whats the answer to the question I just asked"
Dax: "uhh.. what was the question?"
Teacher: "the question was 45+5x= 95, what is x"
Dax: "umm... ten?"
Teacher: "yes, Maybe pay attention next time"
The school bell would ring
Dax: "Yes finally!" he said as he ran out of class
Teacher: "wait for your homework!" the teacher said but Dax was already gone
Kurin would walk out of the classroom after grabbing his homework.
Kurin: "Dax?" he said as he pushed the outside door open
Dax: "Hey Kurin... over here." he said as he would stand next to the newly installed Ridge Storm stadium at the school
Kuri: "oh there you are" he would pull Cyclone Knight and his launcher out, clicking them together "ready?"
Dax: "yup" He pulled his launcher out and up to shoulder level "you gonna enter the world tournament with that bey?"
Kurin pulling his launcher Up "yes, Why?"
Dax: "because You'll have to beat me to become world champion"
Kurin: "oh cool... 3"
Dax: "2"
Kurin: "1"
Kurin & Dax: "Let it rip"
Kurin: "Cyclone Knight take the middle"
Dax: "inferno Drago don't let cyclone Knight take the middle
The two beys would clash in the middle
Dax in his head "my attacks are weakened.. air knight has a very round design... there's only 4 point my attacks can't grip"
Dax: "Inferno Dragon, Final Burn"
Inferno dragon would race around the outside and smash into Cyclone Knight
Dax: "keep pushing him dragon"
Kurin: "cyclone guard... Don't let him push you"
Cyclone would tilt down slightly creating a defensive stance
Dragon would push him slowly out of the middle
Dax: "Push harder dragon"
dragon would veer back and race back with more speed and power knocking Cycloneknight back
Kurin: "HOLD YOU GROUND CYCLONE KNIGHT"
Dragon would push him back into the rubber ring on the stadium
Dax: "Special move, final calling"
Dragon jumped up on the stadium wall racing around faster and faster before jumping off wildly at cyclone Knight
Kurin: "Dodge it Cyclone Knight"
Cyclone Knight would move slightly before Inferno dragon would smash into him... the movement made it a head-on collision, Inferno dragon would rush past Cyclone Knight as he burst
Dax: "Yes!!!"
Kurin: "Don't expect such an easy win during the world tournament... I lost on purpose, I learned your moves and techniques... I'll be the next world champion!"
Dax: "Don't expect the same fight like this one... I change up my fights every battle... I will become world champion"
Kurin: "we'll have to see who wins the world championship... but I will defeat you eventually"
Episode 4 will start the world championships...
Grammar that s the only thing you need to fix beside that nice chapter 👍 I'll work on that I've been using Grammarly and it seems to not know how Beyblade works lol, I'll work on it
RE: Beyblade Burst: Ridge Storm - LegendJustice - Jun. 04, 2021
(Jun. 04, 2021 4:14 AM)Lucha Burst Wrote: (Jun. 04, 2021 4:02 AM)JJustice Wrote: Grammar that s the only thing you need to fix beside that nice chapter 👍 I'll work on that I've been using Grammarly and it seems to not know how Beyblade works lol, I'll work on it Note to self I need to get granmerly again
RE: Beyblade Burst: Ridge Storm - Lucha Burst - Jun. 04, 2021
tournament bracket: https://brackethq.com/b/0woq/ "the top 8 bladers across the world were chosen for this rounament"
Episode 4: Let the world championships begin
Announcer: Ladies and gentlemen it is my honor to welcome you to the world championship Tournament, The Tournament has been Divided into 2 BLocks. In block 1 we have Rikishi Kiyami vs The Legend Shu Kurenai and Ares AKabane vs Dax Koryu. In block 2 we have Vanon Aoi vs Delta Akane and Free De La Hoya vs Kurin Lopez! the bladers that will fight over the course of the next few days have been chosen from around the world as the strongest 8 bladers. Now Let the battles begin!
Rikishi: My Ragnarok will crush everyone here!
Shu Kurenai in his head: "I must win this to make it on to the finals and face the winner of block two."
Announcer: "Bladers ready your launchers."
Rikishi: "3"
Shu: "2"
Rikishi: "1"
Rikishi & Shu: Let It rip.
Rikishi: "Ragnarok, take the middle, Rognarok Zone."
Ragnarok would race to the middle and enter his defensive stance.
Shu: "Special move, Axe Smash!"
Spriggan would race into the middle of the stadium smashing into Ragnarok. Ragnarok would slide back slightly
Rikishi: "Regain the middle Ragnarok."
Ragnarok would Rush into the middle of the stadium with most of its stamina intact.
Shu: "Again Spriggan, Axe Smash... Send him flying."
Spriggan would rush into the middle of the stadium smashing into Ragnarok, Ragnarok would be sent flying to the stadium wall.
Rikishi: " Two can play that game, Ragnarok Omega Smash."
Ragnarok would smash into the walls locking in the wings.
Shu: "counter-attack Spriggan, Infamy crash."
Announcer: "what's this? Shu's using a new move."
Spriggan would meet Ragnarok in the middle and barrage each other with attacks. the recoil pushed them apart finally.
Rikishi: "One More blow Ragnarok."
Spriggan would wobble around the stadium with low stamina as Ragnarok smashed into it causing it to stop spinning and slam into the stadium wall.
Referee: One point Whirl Ragnarok.
Shu in his head: I have to burst him early to have a chance of winning this.
Rikishi: "Don't just stand there ready your launcher."
shu pulled up his launcher.
Shu: "3"
Rikishi: "2"
Shu: "1"
Shu & rikishi: "Let it rip."
Shu: "Special move, Infamy Crash."
Rikishi: "whaaa-"
Spriiggan would slam into Ragnarok before it could reach the middle.
Rikishi: "Counter-Attack Omega smash."
Ragnarok would smash into the walls locking the wings, but spriggans barrage of attacks continued.
Shu: "End it spriggan, Axe Smash."
Rikishi: "Counterattack, barrage him with attacks."
Before Ragnarok could barrage Spriggan, Spirggan smashed into Ragnarok with great force.
Rikishi: "Fight back Ragnarok."
Before Ragnarok could counter-attack spriggan burst It.
Referee: 2 Points smash spriggan.
Shu: "I got the victory in the bag."
Rikishi: "not yet you don't" he said as he prepared to launch.
Shu would switch his bey to speed mode from energy mode.
Rikishi: "3"
Shu: "2"
RIkishi: "1"
Shu& Rikishi: "let it rip."
Rikishi: "Ragnarok, special move glide."
Ragnarok floated around the outer part of the stadium.
Shu: "Spriggan take the middle."
spriggan would assume control of the middle.
Rikishi: "Special move, Omega smash.. you won't win by those tactics."
shu cracked a small smile.
Ragnarok would smash into the stadium walls locking the wings and creating an aggressive attack type layer, he then slammed into spriggan again and again. spriggan remained unaffected.
Shu: "This mode resembles a defense mode unless you hit hard enough to fully depress the springs in the bumpers nothing affects spriggan."
Rikishi: "we'll have to see about that, Ragnarok, send him flying.. hit as hard as you can."
Ragnarok would smash into spriggan hitting one of the bumpers... the recoil and the Springs back force sent Ragnarok flying out of the stadium.
referee: 1 point Smash Spriggan... The winner is Shu Kurenai.
announcer: wowie what a match but the winner is Shu Kurenai and he moves on to the next round, and rikishi and ragnaork were sent packing.
Shu: "Dax koryu.. you better win your match, I'm expecting to see you in the next round."
Dax would be seen watching a Tv at home, he would grin at Shu's words.
@"JJustice" @"Strikegamerv6" chapter 4 is out if you wanna rate it
RE: Beyblade Burst: Ridge Storm - UnseenBurst - Jun. 04, 2021
(Jun. 04, 2021 4:29 AM)Lucha Burst Wrote: tournament bracket: https://brackethq.com/b/0woq/ "the top 8 bladers across the world were chosen for this rounament"
Episode 4: Let the world championships begin
Announcer: Ladies and gentlemen it is my honor to welcome you to the world championship Tournament, The Tournament has been Divided into 2 BLocks. In block 1 we have Rikishi Kiyami vs The Legend Shu Kurenai and Ares AKabane vs Dax Koryu. In block 2 we have Vanon Aoi vs Delta Akane and Free De La Hoya vs Kurin Lopez! the bladers that will fight over the course of the next few days have been chosen from around the world as the strongest 8 bladers. Now Let the battles begin!
Rikishi: My Ragnarok will crush everyone here!
Shu Kurenai in his head: "I must win this to make it on to the finals and face the winner of block two."
Announcer: "Bladers ready your launchers."
Rikishi: "3"
Shu: "2"
Rikishi: "1"
Rikishi & Shu: Let It rip.
Rikishi: "Ragnarok, take the middle, Rognarok Zone."
Ragnarok would race to the middle and enter his defensive stance.
Shu: "Special move, Axe Smash!"
Spriggan would race into the middle of the stadium smashing into Ragnarok. Ragnarok would slide back slightly
Rikishi: "Regain the middle Ragnarok."
Ragnarok would Rush into the middle of the stadium with most of its stamina intact.
Shu: "Again Spriggan, Axe Smash... Send him flying."
Spriggan would rush into the middle of the stadium smashing into Ragnarok, Ragnarok would be sent flying to the stadium wall.
Rikishi: " Two can play that game, Ragnarok Omega Smash."
Ragnarok would smash into the walls locking in the wings.
Shu: "counter-attack Spriggan, Infamy crash."
Announcer: "what's this? Shu's using a new move."
Spriggan would meet Ragnarok in the middle and barrage each other with attacks. the recoil pushed them apart finally.
Rikishi: "One More blow Ragnarok."
Spriggan would wobble around the stadium with low stamina as Ragnarok smashed into it causing it to stop spinning and slam into the stadium wall.
Referee: One point Whirl Ragnarok.
Shu in his head: I have to burst him early to have a chance of winning this.
Rikishi: "Don't just stand there ready your launcher."
shu pulled up his launcher.
Shu: "3"
Rikishi: "2"
Shu: "1"
Shu & rikishi: "Let it rip."
Shu: "Special move, Infamy Crash."
Rikishi: "whaaa-"
Spriiggan would slam into Ragnarok before it could reach the middle.
Rikishi: "Counter-Attack Omega smash."
Ragnarok would smash into the walls locking the wings, but spriggans barrage of attacks continued.
Shu: "End it spriggan, Axe Smash."
Rikishi: "Counterattack, barrage him with attacks."
Before Ragnarok could barrage Spriggan, Spirggan smashed into Ragnarok with great force.
Rikishi: "Fight back Ragnarok."
Before Ragnarok could counter-attack spriggan burst It.
Referee: 2 Points smash spriggan.
Shu: "I got the victory in the bag."
Rikishi: "not yet you don't" he said as he prepared to launch.
Shu would switch his bey to speed mode from energy mode.
Rikishi: "3"
Shu: "2"
RIkishi: "1"
Shu& Rikishi: "let it rip."
Rikishi: "Ragnarok, special move glide."
Ragnarok floated around the outer part of the stadium.
Shu: "Spriggan take the middle."
spriggan would assume control of the middle.
Rikishi: "Special move, Omega smash.. you won't win by those tactics."
shu cracked a small smile.
Ragnarok would smash into the stadium walls locking the wings and creating an aggressive attack type layer, he then slammed into spriggan again and again. spriggan remained unaffected.
Shu: "This mode resembles a defense mode unless you hit hard enough to fully depress the springs in the bumpers nothing affects spriggan."
Rikishi: "we'll have to see about that, Ragnarok, send him flying.. hit as hard as you can."
Ragnarok would smash into spriggan hitting one of the bumpers... the recoil and the Springs back force sent Ragnarok flying out of the stadium.
referee: 1 point Smash Spriggan... The winner is Shu Kurenai.
announcer: wowie what a match but the winner is Shu Kurenai and he moves on to the next round, and rikishi and ragnaork were sent packing.
Shu: "Dax koryu.. you better win your match, I'm expecting to see you in the next round."
Dax would be seen watching a Tv at home, he would grin at Shu's words.
@"JJustice" @"Strikegamerv6" chapter 4 is out if you wanna rate it
I will rate it later today
RE: Beyblade Burst: Ridge Storm - LegendJustice - Jun. 04, 2021
(Jun. 04, 2021 4:29 AM)Lucha Burst Wrote: tournament bracket: https://brackethq.com/b/0woq/ "the top 8 bladers across the world were chosen for this rounament"
Episode 4: Let the world championships begin
Announcer: Ladies and gentlemen it is my honor to welcome you to the world championship Tournament, The Tournament has been Divided into 2 BLocks. In block 1 we have Rikishi Kiyami vs The Legend Shu Kurenai and Ares AKabane vs Dax Koryu. In block 2 we have Vanon Aoi vs Delta Akane and Free De La Hoya vs Kurin Lopez! the bladers that will fight over the course of the next few days have been chosen from around the world as the strongest 8 bladers. Now Let the battles begin!
Rikishi: My Ragnarok will crush everyone here!
Shu Kurenai in his head: "I must win this to make it on to the finals and face the winner of block two."
Announcer: "Bladers ready your launchers."
Rikishi: "3"
Shu: "2"
Rikishi: "1"
Rikishi & Shu: Let It rip.
Rikishi: "Ragnarok, take the middle, Rognarok Zone."
Ragnarok would race to the middle and enter his defensive stance.
Shu: "Special move, Axe Smash!"
Spriggan would race into the middle of the stadium smashing into Ragnarok. Ragnarok would slide back slightly
Rikishi: "Regain the middle Ragnarok."
Ragnarok would Rush into the middle of the stadium with most of its stamina intact.
Shu: "Again Spriggan, Axe Smash... Send him flying."
Spriggan would rush into the middle of the stadium smashing into Ragnarok, Ragnarok would be sent flying to the stadium wall.
Rikishi: " Two can play that game, Ragnarok Omega Smash."
Ragnarok would smash into the walls locking in the wings.
Shu: "counter-attack Spriggan, Infamy crash."
Announcer: "what's this? Shu's using a new move."
Spriggan would meet Ragnarok in the middle and barrage each other with attacks. the recoil pushed them apart finally.
Rikishi: "One More blow Ragnarok."
Spriggan would wobble around the stadium with low stamina as Ragnarok smashed into it causing it to stop spinning and slam into the stadium wall.
Referee: One point Whirl Ragnarok.
Shu in his head: I have to burst him early to have a chance of winning this.
Rikishi: "Don't just stand there ready your launcher."
shu pulled up his launcher.
Shu: "3"
Rikishi: "2"
Shu: "1"
Shu & rikishi: "Let it rip."
Shu: "Special move, Infamy Crash."
Rikishi: "whaaa-"
Spriiggan would slam into Ragnarok before it could reach the middle.
Rikishi: "Counter-Attack Omega smash."
Ragnarok would smash into the walls locking the wings, but spriggans barrage of attacks continued.
Shu: "End it spriggan, Axe Smash."
Rikishi: "Counterattack, barrage him with attacks."
Before Ragnarok could barrage Spriggan, Spirggan smashed into Ragnarok with great force.
Rikishi: "Fight back Ragnarok."
Before Ragnarok could counter-attack spriggan burst It.
Referee: 2 Points smash spriggan.
Shu: "I got the victory in the bag."
Rikishi: "not yet you don't" he said as he prepared to launch.
Shu would switch his bey to speed mode from energy mode.
Rikishi: "3"
Shu: "2"
RIkishi: "1"
Shu& Rikishi: "let it rip."
Rikishi: "Ragnarok, special move glide."
Ragnarok floated around the outer part of the stadium.
Shu: "Spriggan take the middle."
spriggan would assume control of the middle.
Rikishi: "Special move, Omega smash.. you won't win by those tactics."
shu cracked a small smile.
Ragnarok would smash into the stadium walls locking the wings and creating an aggressive attack type layer, he then slammed into spriggan again and again. spriggan remained unaffected.
Shu: "This mode resembles a defense mode unless you hit hard enough to fully depress the springs in the bumpers nothing affects spriggan."
Rikishi: "we'll have to see about that, Ragnarok, send him flying.. hit as hard as you can."
Ragnarok would smash into spriggan hitting one of the bumpers... the recoil and the Springs back force sent Ragnarok flying out of the stadium.
referee: 1 point Smash Spriggan... The winner is Shu Kurenai.
announcer: wowie what a match but the winner is Shu Kurenai and he moves on to the next round, and rikishi and ragnaork were sent packing.
Shu: "Dax koryu.. you better win your match, I'm expecting to see you in the next round."
Dax would be seen watching a Tv at home, he would grin at Shu's words.
@"JJustice" @"Strikegamerv6" chapter 4 is out if you wanna rate it DUDE this is amazing your grammar is on point and I don't know What to say but there was something wrong with akabane in the sentence but this is good
RE: Beyblade Burst: Ridge Storm - UnseenBurst - Jun. 04, 2021
Plot: 2/5. Still just focuses on the one battle (Also it seems Highly unlikely for a stamina type to use an attacking move sure counter strikes are good but no all-out attacks).
Dialogue: 2/5. I mean I guess there is kinda some dialogue but it feels like we don't touch the personalities that much feel like they're talking just for the sake of talking.
Characterization: 1/5. Ok Shu is not that weak to lose even a point to a noob and why is there a world tournament is this like another dimension or into the future also where is Valt if there's a world tournament shouldn't Valt be in there and there is no point for Shu to be in a world tournament since he is already #2 in the world (Srry if I sound harsh)
Grammar: 4/5 Only saw a couple of mistake like "Ragnarok"
Battle: 1/5 Ngl felt super rushed.
10/25 You've gotten better but you still have some work to do (Not trying to be mean just my feedback)
Next time try making a plot or an obstacle or something like that
RE: Beyblade Burst: Ridge Storm - Lucha Burst - Jun. 04, 2021
(Jun. 04, 2021 5:01 PM)Strikegamerv6 Wrote: Plot: 2/5. Still just focuses on the one battle (Also it seems Highly unlikely for a stamina type to use an attacking move sure counter strikes are good but no all-out attacks).
Dialogue: 2/5. I mean I guess there is kinda some dialogue but it feels like we don't touch the personalities that much feel like they're talking just for the sake of talking.
Characterization: 1/5. Ok Shu is not that weak to lose even a point to a noob and why is there a world tournament is this like another dimension or into the future also where is Valt if there's a world tournament shouldn't Valt be in there and there is no point for Shu to be in a world tournament since he is already #2 in the world (sorry if I sound harsh)
Grammar: 4/5 Only saw a couple of mistake like "Ragnarok"
Battle: 1/5 Ngl felt super rushed.
10/25 You've gotten better but you still have some work to do (Not trying to be mean just my feedback)
Next time try making a plot or an obstacle or something like that valts not in it because I didn't want to use too many characters from the anime
2. Shu can enter a tournament even if he's number 2
3. the characters In this are supposed to be the top bladers in the world
4. what am I supposed to do, focus on 4 battles at once? the one battle thing,that confuses me
5. The basis of RS is set in another "dimension" per say. this would be like the original burst, so characters like Valt aren't in this world
also were just getting into it were only 4 chapters in... there's not gonna be a huge amount of action or story
also the battles will be longer depending on the bladers in them, for example, the free vs Kurin battle will be much longer
RE: Beyblade Burst: Ridge Storm - SacredXcalibur - Jun. 05, 2021
Can I rate it?
RE: Beyblade Burst: Ridge Storm - Lucha Burst - Jun. 05, 2021
(Jun. 05, 2021 2:36 AM)SacredXcalibur Wrote: Can I rate it?
Go ahead rate it
RE: Beyblade Burst: Ridge Storm - SacredXcalibur - Jun. 05, 2021
(Jun. 05, 2021 2:54 AM)Lucha Burst Wrote: (Jun. 05, 2021 2:36 AM)SacredXcalibur Wrote: Can I rate it?
Go ahead rate it
Give me a few minutes.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Ridge Storm - Lucha Burst - Jun. 07, 2021
Next few episodes:
Episode 5: Achilles vs Dragon... The ultimate showdown!
Episode 6: Diabolos Vs valkyrie, the Ultimate attack battle
Episode 7: The Infinite battle, Cyclone knight vs Steal Fafnir.
Episode 5: Achilles vs Dragon... The ultimate showdown!
Announcer: Welcome Back to the World Championships. In the bracket today we have Dax Koryu and inferno Dragon vs Ares Akabane and collision Achilles. Before We start this match we would like to confirm the rumors that the man, the myth, the legend himself is in the building tonight, Yes it's true ladies and gentleman Shu Kurenai Himself has shown up to watch this battle.
Dax would be seen backstage: "What... Shu Kurenai Is here? He must be trying to figure out my battle techniques. Not happening tonight."
Announcer: "Now Ladies and gentleman, Get ready for the owner of Collision Achilles, the Brother of Aiger Akabane... Ares Akabane."
Ares would walk out to the stadium smiling "Don't cheer too loud, It's only me" he would say with a grin.
Announcer: "Now put your hands together, for the prodigy blader Dax Koryu"
Dax Would walk out with a determined look on his face not saying a word.
Dax would put his bey in speed mode and lock it into the launcher "Get ready to lose" he said to Ares.
Ares: "As if," he said as he switched Achilles to speed mode.
Ares: "3"
Dax: "2"
Ares: "1"
Dax&Ares: "let it rip"
Dax: "Barrage Achilles With attacks"
Ares: "Achilles, special move Sword smash."
Dragon would race towards Achilles as Achilles ramped up the wall and slammed back down against dragon.
Dax: "Your good but not good enough."
Dragon and Achilles would be knocked back and both circle the arena.
Ares: Again Achilles, Sword smash.
Dax: "Dragon Dodge it."
Achilles would do the move again but Dragon would move out of the way.
Dax: "Now dragon, FInal Burn."
Dragon raced around the outside of the stadium and would smash into Achilles.
Ares: "Nice try, but that won't work, Achilles barrage Dragon with attacks."
Achilles struck the dragon again and again.
Dax: "Dragon end this final calling!"
Dragon would push Achilles into the rubber ring where from there it jumped up to the stadium wall and raced around it before dragon would finally jump down onto Achilles.
Ares: "Hold your ground Achilles."
Dragon would push down on Achilles more and more until Achilles went flying out of the stadium.
ref: "1 point Inferno Dragon."
Ares: "That was pure luck."
Dax: "Yeah right, that was pure skill and you know it."
Dax would switch the driver to Rage mode as well as Switch the layer to energy mode and clicked the chassis into defense mode. he would then clicking it into his launcher "ready?"
Ares would click his bey into his launcher "Yeah... I'm ready... Ready to beat you."
Dax: "Whatever... 3."
Ares: "2"
Dax: "1"
Dax & Ares: "Let it rip."
Dax: "Rage Zone."
Dragon would tilt forward and claim the center rotating around and around on the outside of the rubber tip in a defensive pattern.
Ares: "Achilles, Kock Dragon out of this stadium.
Achilles would race around the stadium smashing into Achilles, Dragon remained unaffected.
Dax: attack as hard as you want nothing affects Achilles in defense mode. the rubber holds a strong grip on this stadium."
Ares: "Achilles, Sword smash."
Achilles would smash into dragon, with dragon's defensive pattern Achilles would hit Dragons chassis, Knocking it into Attack mode.
Dax would Grin. "well know I gotta do something."
Ares: "Achilles, Sheild stance."
Achilles raced to the middle and would sit there spinning.
Dax: "Dragon, run up the wall."
Dragon would run up the wall and fall back down knocking the driver into super mode giving Dragon a speed boost.
Dax: "Dragon end it all final burn."
dragon would race around the outside before smashing down into Achilles, bursting right through Achilles.
Ref: 2 points Inferno Dragon, Your winner Is Dax Koryu.
Announcer: Can you believe that Dax koryu Just burst the opponent with one blow, WHat a powerful bla-
Shu would be shown in the walkway "Let it rip."
Spriggan would land in the arena and barrage dragon with attacks.
Dax: "what's your problem?"
Shu: "Get your head in the game, You're in a Battle."
Dax: "are you challenging me?"
Shu: "Now I'm battling you."
Dax: "WHatever, Dragon End this, FInal Burn."
dragon would race around the stadium and smash into spriggan.
Shu: "Axe Smash."
Spriggan would smash into Dax causing the weak spinning bey to burst.
Shu: "Burst that easy and I'll go to the finals."
an enraged Dax would pick up his bey "My bey already had a battle and you enter like your the king... of course, my bey was weak."
Shu would walk out with his spriggan.
Dax: "Where are you going? You started something, now finish it!!!"
Announcer: "wow.. what just happened..."
RE: Beyblade Burst: Ridge Storm - Lucha Burst - Jun. 10, 2021
RIdge Storm will Be ending as of right now I Won't have a computer to write it. Around August I should be able to return to writing. This will probably be the end of the ridge storm entirely. There will be a replacement.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Ridge Storm - LegendJustice - Jun. 10, 2021
(Jun. 10, 2021 1:32 AM)Lucha Burst Wrote: RIdge Storm will Be ending as of right now I Won't have a computer to write it. Around August I should be able to return to writing. This will probably be the end of the ridge storm entirely. There will be a replacement.
Just use other devices😀 but I get it
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