Beyblade burst: Titan (character contest) - Printable Version +- World Beyblade Organization by Fighting Spirits Inc. (https://worldbeyblade.org) +-- Forum: World Beyblade Organization (https://worldbeyblade.org/Forum-World-Beyblade-Organization) +--- Forum: Beyblade Communities (https://worldbeyblade.org/Forum-Beyblade-Communities) +--- Thread: Beyblade burst: Titan (character contest) (/Thread-Beyblade-burst-Titan-character-contest) |
[fan fiction] RE: Beyblade burst: Titan - LegendJustice - May. 15, 2021 (May. 15, 2021 8:48 PM)Strikegamerv6 Wrote:Ok thx for the advice(May. 15, 2021 8:21 PM)JJustice Wrote: Strikegamerv6 how do you like this chapter? RE: Beyblade burst: Titan - LegendJustice - May. 16, 2021 Chapter 5 part 3 previously in beyblade burst: Titan Jayden: I will JUSTICE JINX SWORD (Justice comes charging at the other bey but it send it back flying) Brent: hahahaha did I tell you it drains power Jayden mind: woah this dude is crazy and that bey I don’t even knows it’s name not to mention my stamina is so bad right now Justice: are you scared Jayden Jayden: huh is that you talking Justice Justice: yes it is now answer me are you scared Jayden: well YES I am scared what if you get destroyed I don’t want that to happen Justice: then do you want to win Jayden: YES I just don’t know how Justice: well all you have to do is believe now let’s win this Brent: I’m waiting (Unknown bey attacks Justice) Justice/Jayden: LETS WIN Brent: YES a worthy opponent to destroy BRATER Jayden: COUNTER THAT (Justice doges Braters attack) Brent: *Gasp* yes yes now WICKED TITAN BLAST (BRATER charges at Justice) Jayden mind: I-I don’t k-Know what t-to do Justice: Jayden remember we have to win you can’t let fear get to you Jayden mind: yes your right we have to win Jayden: JUSTICE JINX WHIP (Justice burst) Jayden: w-what Brent: it’s point less to stay here *leaves* Strikegamerv6 is this better? RE: Beyblade burst: Titan - UnseenBurst - May. 17, 2021 (May. 16, 2021 11:09 PM)JJustice Wrote: Chapter 5 part 3 Getting better try making the chapter focus on other things not just one battle, also make it so that one battle kinda has a point if you look at my chapters all the battles have a point, But other than that looks good RE: Beyblade burst: Titan character contest - LegendJustice - May. 17, 2021 (May. 17, 2021 2:20 AM)Strikegamerv6 Wrote:K thanks what do you think of the characters so far(May. 16, 2021 11:09 PM)JJustice Wrote: Chapter 5 part 3 RE: Beyblade burst: Titan - UnseenBurst - May. 17, 2021 There really good. Try showing more character growth RE: Beyblade burst: Titan (character contest) - LegendJustice - May. 17, 2021 (May. 17, 2021 3:39 PM)Strikegamerv6 Wrote: There really good. Try showing more character growth im having a charaector contest do you wanna join? RE: Beyblade burst: Titan (charactor contest) - UnseenBurst - May. 17, 2021 (May. 17, 2021 3:50 PM)JJustice Wrote:(May. 17, 2021 3:39 PM)Strikegamerv6 Wrote: There really good. Try showing more character growth Sure, But I thought my character was already in? RE: Beyblade burst: Titan (charactor contest) - LegendJustice - May. 17, 2021 (May. 17, 2021 4:06 PM)Strikegamerv6 Wrote:(May. 17, 2021 3:50 PM)JJustice Wrote: im having a charaector contest do you wanna join? ok what character are you going to enter with RE: Beyblade burst: Titan (charactor contest) - UnseenBurst - May. 17, 2021 Penoki Anderson RE: Beyblade burst: Titan (charactor contest) - LegendJustice - May. 17, 2021 ok i need a little more info RE: Beyblade burst: Titan (charactor contest) - UnseenBurst - May. 17, 2021 (May. 17, 2021 4:13 PM)JJustice Wrote: ok i need a little more info I will a bit later RE: Beyblade burst: Titan (charactor contest) - LegendJustice - May. 17, 2021 (May. 17, 2021 4:14 PM)Strikegamerv6 Wrote:(May. 17, 2021 4:13 PM)JJustice Wrote: ok i need a little more info ok im gonna get some more peaple ready RE: Beyblade burst: Titan (charactor contest) - USN - May. 17, 2021 Name: Bob Madal Bey: Bonzai Banana. He is Ghasem's little brother and has a fiery spirit. He wears a yellow cape, (Like a Banana) His bey has the flying gimmick. RE: Beyblade burst: Titan (charactor contest) - LegendJustice - May. 17, 2021 name: shun kazami bey: black system like and dislikes: he loves battling and dislikes evil people like Brent or Trent what hes like: hes very out going and loves battling but sometime he has a dark secret special moves: black overdive black sword and black whip ok ok let me right all these names down name: Runo kazami bey: attack render gender: female siblings: shun kazami what shes like: likes to stay inside and is very smart likes and dislikes: likes boys dislikes bully age:: 11 her and shun are twins shun is older by 1 hour preview for chapter 6 Damian its alright man Jayden: i-i lost *yells* I LOST Damian mind: wooah im sorry dude RE: Beyblade burst: Titan (charactor contest) - sushiroll1234 - May. 17, 2021 *character RE: Beyblade burst: Titan (charactor contest) - LegendJustice - May. 17, 2021 ok thanks (burns with anger inside because of and idiot mistake* RE: Beyblade burst: Titan (charactor contest) - UnseenBurst - May. 17, 2021 Name: Penoki Anderson Bey Name: Aqua Perceus Giga Diminsion' Gender: Male Age: 14 Personality: Loves battling! And he is very caring in battle he is one of the nicest people around. He loves pulling little pranks!! But he always makes sure everyone is ok with it. Bey Gimick: Rubber Defense blades and Metal attacking blades!! RE: Beyblade burst: Titan (charactor contest) - sushiroll1234 - May. 17, 2021 (May. 17, 2021 5:00 PM)JJustice Wrote: ok thanks (burns with anger inside because of and idiot mistake* np RE: Beyblade burst: Titan (character contest) - LegendJustice - May. 17, 2021 ok thanks is his bey name perceus or Diminsion RE: Beyblade burst: Titan (character contest) - UnseenBurst - May. 17, 2021 Perseus is the bey and dimension dash is the driver and Giga is the disk RE: Beyblade burst: Titan (character contest) - LegendJustice - May. 17, 2021 ok so here is who we have so far we have Penoki anderson with perceus - strikegamerv6 we have bob mandal with bannah - USN we have runo and shun kazami with there beys black system and attack render - JJustice since you guys are waiting here is some music https://www.google.com/search?rlz=1CAUHHJ_enUS954&q=Tony+Rodini+Journey+into+Tomorrow&stick=H4sIAAAAAAAAAIWRy2sTURTGM6lt02kryVRQg0iaVewm88i8RGhBfNIi1oC4GjOPO5N53XnlcbMo4sKtRaEuBUFw4V-goEXdWMSFhS4URNSNq27FhTXF5s64cnd_95zvnu9-pzBena2bdYZxeFPpBkLEHlYNpLot3ah4nbitbRH_1kesdnlFZqzGiF3FVCyn64wY2H2T5xV6xBbqRY7M4X7bYXyERAv3JwM55Bh-i5jZ55jmEzvqZss2x7 here i how the tournament will work its first to 3 points if you and your oppent both get 3 point at the same time is a draw and you both move on to the next round like here mank: attack attack manks bey attack at other bey mank has 2 points and his oppent has 2 point so if both beys burst they each get a point i twisted it a little bit RE: Beyblade burst: Titan (character contest) - LegendJustice - May. 18, 2021 Chapter 6 Lost Jayden: i-i lost. Damian: it was only one lost calm down . Jayden* gets up* Damian mind: huh what is he doing. Jayden: LET IT RIP. Damian mind: thats Jayden hmm Drako has cracks from Brent trying to destroy him. Damian: *heads to workshop* i need to fix this *an hour later* there no more cracks. Damian mind: woah he is still training *smiles. Jayden *picks up justice* i'm going inside. Damian: Ok i'm headin home its getting dark. (leaves and heads to his house ) Damian: hey dad Dad: whats good bro Damian: Ok don't ever try using bro talk got that Dad: oh ok bro Damian: *roles eyes* Damian: *grabs Ipad* Damian: * face times Jayden* come on pick up (Jayden accepts the face time) Jayden: hey Damian: hey man your pretty chill i mean after loosing to brent Jayden: yeah... Damian mind: I SHOUD NOT HAVE SAID THAT Jayden: well did you check the bey news Damian: no what about it Jayden: is shows the peaple going to the tournament we have some kid named shun kazami and runo kazami and some one name bob manedal and penoki anderson and a-a Legend Damian: REALY WELL READ Jayden: we have uh Xander Shakedera Wakiya Murasaki Lui Shirosagi Drum Koryu Delta Zakuro Sisco Karlisle and Rantaro kiyama Damian: wow im so pumbed To be Continued RE: Beyblade burst: Titan (character contest) - UnseenBurst - May. 18, 2021 (May. 18, 2021 3:50 PM)JJustice Wrote: Chapter 6 Ok your getting way better just grammar mistakes and try making everything a bit slower take your time don't rush RE: Beyblade burst: Titan (character contest) - LegendJustice - May. 18, 2021 (May. 18, 2021 4:47 PM)Strikegamerv6 Wrote:ok thx(May. 18, 2021 3:50 PM)JJustice Wrote: Chapter 6 CitrusNinja3 can you change this to your creation forum RE: Beyblade burst: Titan (character contest) - LegendJustice - May. 19, 2021 Chapter 7 Treasure Jayden: aww man Damian: what are you frowning for we have legends coming to a tournament Jayden: well you know that shun kazami who is coming to the tournament Damian: yeah Jayden: his dad is rich he definitely has a strong bey Damian: hmmm okay Jayden: well my moms calling me *ends face time* Jayden: hey are you calling me mom? Mom: you know that tournament your going to Jayden mind: wow she actually cares about my tournament wow Mom: well I'm sorry if I have not been supportive Jayden: it’s okay mom *hugs mom* Mom: anyway can you past the sugar Jayden: sure *hands sugar* Jayden: ok I’m going up stairs Mom: ok Jayden: *use stairs* (Walks over to his room) Jayden: *grabs Justice from the counter* we have to train to be the best (Meanwhile Penoki: PERCEUS Perceus: now let us win Penoki/perceus: AQUA WHIP ???: no how did you burst my bey Penoki: just build a bond with you bey well I gotta go catch you on the flip side USN your character is coming soon I’m still thinking of a role for him And strikegamerv6 hope you like this chapter |