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RE: Beyblade Burst: Super Evolution - DeltaZakuro - May. 22, 2020
Episode 3 Summary
3A: Valtryek Vs Satomb!
Valt struggles to beat a newly powered up Silas, forcing him to change his strategy....
3B: Superior Speed! Ultimate Genesis Reboot!
Valt pulls out all the stops and awakens the depths of Valtryeks power.....
RE: Beyblade Burst: Super Evolution - DeltaZakuro - May. 23, 2020
Character Bio - Devala Hamazan
Devala is a blader and kidnapper that is partially associated with the mysterious disappearance of The Vanished Children, he fights with his bey, Hades Diabolicos 3Meteor Ultimate Reboot and is one of the 2 villains of Super Evolution
Gender: Male
Age: Unknown
Eye Color: Red
Hair Color: Black
Moves: Burning Strike, Hades Judgement, Burning Kill
Affiliation: The Snake Pit
Attire: Same thing as Ashtem but with some Red highlights and with no mask
Episode 4 Summary
4A: Clockwork! Alter Chronos!
The epic duo of Valt and Cuza reunite....
4B: Super Dragon! Drain Fafnir!
Free returns to challenge Valt for the Title Of World Champion.....
RE: Beyblade Burst: Super Evolution - DeltaZakuro - May. 23, 2020
Episode 5 Summary
5A: Training With Free!
Valt trains with Free and unexpectedly awakens the full power of Valtryek...
5B: On The Hunt! Krusher Doomscizor!
Daigo heads to Spain to give BC Sol some disturbing news...
Episode 1A: A Day In The Life Of A Champion!
Hanami: OK BOYS AND GIRLS!!!! THE SCORE IS NOW 2-2!!!! WHO WILL WIN???? WILL IT BE THE MOVIE STAR JOSHUA OR WILL IT BE THE WONDER BOY CHAMP VALT AOI!!!!!
Joshua: We finally get to have our rematch Valt....
Valt: Yep, its been a while....
Joshua: My adoring fans will back me up as i win and take the belt! RIGHT EVERYONE!!!!!
*literally every girl in the arena start fangirling the heck out*
Shu: *watches from America* defeat him Valt....
Raging Bulls Blader: Is that pathetic excuse for a Champion your friend HA.... What a joke...
*the blader turns to walk away until Shu grabs him by the shoulder and punches him the stomach so hard a bit of blood comes out of his mouth*
Raging Bulls Blader: *screams in pain*
Shu: Valt... You had better win....
Referee: Third Battle!!! READY SET!!!!
3 2 1 LET IT RIP!!!!!!
Jinnius claims the center and Valtryek speeds towards it
Valt: Rush Launch!!!!!
Joshua: AAAAAA-NOPE!!! CYCLONE WALL!!!!!!
Jinnius's ring raises and avoids the attacks
Hanami: Smart move on Joshuas part!!!!
Valt: NOT DONE YET!!!!! ULTIMATE GENESIS REBOOT!!!!!!
Valtryek speeds up
Valt: GO PARTNER!!!!!
Valtryeks avatar comes out
Joshua: GO JINNIUS!!!!
Jinnius avatar comes out
Valt: GENESIS WHIP!!!!!
Joshua: CYCLONE COUNTER!!!!!
*both beys clash and the shockwave blows them off their feet*
Jinnius bursts from the amount of force Genesis Whip released
Joshua: JINNIUS!!!!!
Referee: Strike Valtryek!!! Burst Finish, Valt Aoi is the winner!!!!
Hanami: AND THERE YOU HAVE IT!!! VALT AOI HAS SUCCESSFULLY DEFENDED HIS TITLE!!!!
Valt walks off stage and is INSTANTLY swarmed by pretty girls
Girl 1: VALT!!!! MY HUSBANDO!!!!!
Girl 2: CAN I GET YOUR AUTOGRAPH!!!!!
Valt: OH MY GOD!!!!!
*he hotfoots it out of El Astro and to BC Sol*
Girl 3: Where you going baby!?
The swarm of girls chase after him
Raul: *at the gate of BC Sol* hmmm good coffee... hmmm
Valt: RUN FOR IT OLD MAN!!!!!!!
Raul: *sees the mob of girls* OH MY GOD!!!!!
*they shut the gate behind them*
???: Since when do you have girls rooting for you???
Valt turns to see SHU at the gym entrance
Valt: No way... Impossible....
[~TO BE CONTINUED~]
RE: Beyblade Burst: Super Evolution - Suoh sadboii - May. 24, 2020
(May. 23, 2020 4:10 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: Episode 5 Summary
5A: Training With Free!
Valt trains with Free and unexpectedly awakens the full power of Valtryek...
5B: On The Hunt! Krusher Doomscizor!
Daigo heads to Spain to give BC Sol some disturbing news...
Episode 1A: A Day In The Life Of A Champion!
Hanami: OK BOYS AND GIRLS!!!! THE SCORE IS NOW 2-2!!!! WHO WILL WIN???? WILL IT BE THE MOVIE STAR JOSHUA OR WILL IT BE THE WONDER BOY CHAMP VALT AOI!!!!!
Joshua: We finally get to have our rematch Valt....
Valt: Yep, its been a while....
Joshua: My adoring fans will back me up as i win and take the belt! RIGHT EVERYONE!!!!!
*literally every girl in the arena start fangirling the heck out*
Shu: *watches from America* defeat him Valt....
Raging Bulls Blader: Is that pathetic excuse for a Champion your friend HA.... What a joke...
*the blader turns to walk away until Shu grabs him by the shoulder and punches him the stomach so hard a bit of blood comes out of his mouth*
Raging Bulls Blader: *screams in pain*
Shu: Valt... You had better win....
Referee: Third Battle!!! READY SET!!!!
3 2 1 LET IT RIP!!!!!!
Jinnius claims the center and Valtryek speeds towards it
Valt: Rush Launch!!!!!
Joshua: AAAAAA-NOPE!!! CYCLONE WALL!!!!!!
Jinnius's ring raises and avoids the attacks
Hanami: Smart move on Joshuas part!!!!
Valt: NOT DONE YET!!!!! ULTIMATE GENESIS REBOOT!!!!!!
Valtryek speeds up
Valt: GO PARTNER!!!!!
Valtryeks avatar comes out
Joshua: GO JINNIUS!!!!
Jinnius avatar comes out
Valt: GENESIS WHIP!!!!!
Joshua: CYCLONE COUNTER!!!!!
*both beys clash and the shockwave blows them off their feet*
Jinnius bursts from the amount of force Genesis Whip released
Joshua: JINNIUS!!!!!
Referee: Strike Valtryek!!! Burst Finish, Valt Aoi is the winner!!!!
Hanami: AND THERE YOU HAVE IT!!! VALT AOI HAS SUCCESSFULLY DEFENDED HIS TITLE!!!!
Valt walks off stage and is INSTANTLY swarmed by pretty girls
Girl 1: VALT!!!! MY HUSBANDO!!!!!
Girl 2: CAN I GET YOUR AUTOGRAPH!!!!!
Valt: OH MY GOD!!!!!
*he hotfoots it out of El Astro and to BC Sol*
Girl 3: Where you going baby!?
The swarm of girls chase after him
Raul: *at the gate of BC Sol* hmmm good coffee... hmmm
Valt: RUN FOR IT OLD MAN!!!!!!!
Raul: *sees the mob of girls* OH MY GOD!!!!!
*they shut the gate behind them*
???: Since when do you have girls rooting for you???
Valt turns to see SHU at the gym entrance
Valt: No way... Impossible....
[~TO BE CONTINUED~]
I get old Joseph vibes from Raul.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Super Evolution (Warning: Dont Read If You Are Afraid Of Blood) - DeltaZakuro - May. 24, 2020
Episode 1B - Shu Returns! Spryzen Requiem!
The mob of girls start knocking on the gate
Raul: Welp Valt has fan girls now.....
Shu: Valt.... Im joining BC Sol, The Raging Bulls are dead....
Valt: Dead??
Shu: Some went to The Snake Pit, those didnt go were brutally murdered.... By Ashtem!!!
Valt and Raul stand there, stunned by what Shu just said
Valt: Murdered....
The gate busts open and the fan girls pour in
Girl 1: VALT MY SENPAI!!!!!
Shu: What the-
Girl 2: *gasps* omg look ITS SHU KURENAI!!!!
Valt: Alright that's enough... Ill talk tomorrow...
The mob of girls: Awwww
Valt: Shu... Lets battle together!!!!
Girl 4: Can we watch please?
Valt: Fine but promise you will leave afterwards....
Shu: Lets do this.....
Raul: This will be interesting.....
3 2 1 LET IT RIP!!!!!
Shu: Claim the center Spryzen!!!!
Valt: GENESIS WHIP!!!!!
Valtryek blows Spryzen away But it recovers
Valt: What the- grrr VALTRYEK!!!!!
Valtryek avatar comes out
Shu: Something is wrong...
An image of Valt appears in his eye but the image transforms into a shadowy figure with crimson eyes and wavy hair
Shu: GO SPRYZEN!!!!
Spryzen avatar comes out
Shu: REQUIEM WHIP!!!!!
*Spryzen bursts through Valtryek like butter*
Valt: No... Valtryek....
The Fan Girls groan and head home
Shu: So did i pass?
[~TO BE CONTINUED~]
RE: Beyblade Burst: Super Evolution (Warning: Dont Read If You Are Afraid Of Blood) - daheavydl3 - May. 24, 2020
i love the vibe where Valt gets chased By HORDES OF BRICKING FANBOYS
RE: Beyblade Burst: Super Evolution (Warning: Dont Read If You Are Afraid Of Blood) - DeltaZakuro - May. 24, 2020
(May. 24, 2020 2:01 PM)daheavydl3 Wrote: i love the vibe where Valt gets chased By HORDES OF BRICKING FANBOYS
Not Fanboys, it was fan girls which to me makes it alot funnier
RE: Beyblade Burst: Super Evolution (Warning: Dont Read If You Are Afraid Of Blood) - MasterKurenai - May. 24, 2020
This was a nice chapter I would give it a 9.5 out of 10 because the only tiny thing I didn’t like was when Shu punched a raging bull blader in the stomach instead he could have punched him in the face because that would have been better
RE: Beyblade Burst: Super Evolution (Warning: Dont Read If You Are Afraid Of Blood) - FreeFafnir64 - May. 24, 2020
(May. 24, 2020 3:27 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote:(May. 24, 2020 2:01 PM)daheavydl3 Wrote: i love the vibe where Valt gets chased By HORDES OF BRICKING FANBOYS
Not Fanboys, it was fan girls which to me makes it alot funnier
I agree. That WAS hilarious.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Super Evolution - Kenzotuber KZ - May. 24, 2020
(May. 20, 2020 2:35 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: Being a Champion is not easy, especially for Valt who's fresh from bringing his childhood friend from the darkness of the snake pit, everything goes fine for BC Sol until children ranging from ages 11 - 15 start disappearing..... all trails leading to the Snake Pit....
That's a fact!
RE: Beyblade Burst: Super Evolution (Warning: Dont Read If You Are Afraid Of Blood) - g2_ - May. 24, 2020
(May. 24, 2020 3:27 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote:My man Valt is getting all the girls.(May. 24, 2020 2:01 PM)daheavydl3 Wrote: i love the vibe where Valt gets chased By HORDES OF BRICKING FANBOYS
Not Fanboys, it was fan girls which to me makes it alot funnier
RE: Beyblade Burst: Super Evolution (Warning: Dont Read If You Are Afraid Of Blood) - DeltaZakuro - May. 24, 2020
Episode 2A - Solid Defense! Kinetic Satomb!
Valt: That was awesome....
Kris comes into the Gym
Raul: Sounds like we have a new recruit.
Kris: Yes from this day forward, Shu Kurenai will be apart of BC Sol
Valt: Where is everyone?
Kris: Rantaro, Free, Silas, Cuza, Rickson and Sasha are out training in the forest
Cuza: We're Back!!!!!
Rantaro: Valt!!! We saw your battle, you won before the match even started!!!!!
Silas: Valt, lets batt-
Rantaro: No, im first!!!!
Sila: Rock Paper Scissors then
Valt: No no there's no need, Rantaro ill battle you after Silas...
Rantaro: You better win!
Silas: Lets do this!
Valt: Sure!!!
Raull: Ready Set!!!
3 2 1 LET IT RIP!!!!
*Satomb takes the center*
Valt: Rush Launch!!!!!
*Valtryek unleashes a flurry of attacks*
Silas: Attacks like those wont affect Satomb....
Valt: We're not done!!!! ULTIMATE GENESIS REBOOT!!!!!
*Valtryek speeds up but immediately starts to slow down*
Valt: Ultimate Genesis Reboot failed?!
Free: It's over...
Cuza: This all one sided!!!!
Silas: GO FOR IT!!! CYCLONE LOOP!!!!!
*Satomb tilts on one of its rollers and speeds toward Valtryek!!!
Valt: FINISH THIS! ULTIMATE FLASH LAUNCH!!!!!!!
*Valtryek catches the rim of the stadium and speeds up like a bullet*
Rantaro: LOOK AT IT GO!!!!!!!
Silas: BUT HOW!!!!
Valt: END THIS GENESIS WHIP!!!!!
*Satomb gets knocked into the air and bursts*
Silas: NOOO!!!!!!!
Valt: WE WON!!!!!
Rantaro: Alright Valt, Le-
Shu: Battle me Rantaro.....
Rantaro: Shu.....
[~TO BE CONTINUED~]
RE: Beyblade Burst: Super Evolution (Warning: Dont Read If You Are Afraid Of Blood) - Nitrogenic - May. 24, 2020
Will you create new moves for these peeps? Also I hope you can add Norman or Kurtz into the story, they are my faves. Great episode!
RE: Beyblade Burst: Super Evolution (Warning: Dont Read If You Are Afraid Of Blood) - MasterKurenai - May. 24, 2020
If Norman was to comeback maybe he would get His bey repaired and this chapter is awesome
RE: Beyblade Burst: Super Evolution (Warning: Dont Read If You Are Afraid Of Blood) - DeltaZakuro - May. 24, 2020
(May. 24, 2020 8:23 PM)Nitrogenic Wrote: Will you create new moves for these peeps? Also I hope you can add Norman or Kurtz into the story, they are my faves. Great episode!
Norman will be a pretty relevant character in the Snake Pit Arc (yes he is coming back), im not sure on Kurtz yet
Episode 2B - From The Flames! Berserk Roktavor
WARNING: THIS EPISODE CONTAINS MINOR HORROR AND MINOR BLOOD, READ AT YOUR OWN RISK
Shu: I never battled against Berserk Roktavor before....
Rantaro: LETS DO THIS!!!!
Free: I wonder who will win....
Valt: AWWW I WANNA BATTLE TOO!!!!
Raul: Ready Set!!!!
3 2 1 LET IT RIP!!!!!!
*Roktavors wings come out and takes the center*
Shu: GO REQUIEM SPIN!!!!!
*Spryzen absorbs Roktavors power*
Rantaro: THAT WONT WORK ON US!!!!!!
Shu: Grrr..... REQUIEM WHIP!!!!!
*Spryzen attacks over and over again but they do very little to affect it*
Rantaro: *bites through his lolipop* BRING ON THE STORM!!!!! ROKTAVOR TORNADO!!!!!!!
Shu: SHOOT!!! HE HAS A NEW MOVE!!!!
Rantaro: PULL IT IN!!!!
*Spryzen gets pulled into the tornado and flies out of the stadium*
Shu: *visible shock*
Raul: Ring Out finish!!! Roktavor wins!!!!!
Shu: You've gotten a lot better now, its kinda frightening now that I think about it....
Rantaro: You didn't do too bad yourself....
Valt: IM HUNGRY!!! LETS SEE WHAT ANGE HAS GOT COOKING!!!!
Everyone: ALRIGHT!!!!!
*meanwhile, in Mexico*
Gold Eye: Lord Ashtem, Blader A413 has lost again, what is her punishment!!
Ashtem: Kill her.... She has lost all chances....
Gold Eye: Yes, My Lord....
*Gold Eye walks toward Blader A413 with a machete in hand*
Blader A413: Wait!!! WHAT ARE DOING?! STOP!!!!!! NOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!
*Gold Eye slashes across her chest and stabs her repeatedly, all she could do was scream in terror and pain*
Blader A413: h-help..... m-me.... please...
*the little girls real name was Sakura Samagishi, and died in the cold and dark snake pit*
*the onlookers gasp and back away, others started to cry*
Ashtem: HAHAHAHA WHO WILL STOP US NOW!!!!
[~TO BE CONTINUED~]
RE: Beyblade Burst: Super Evolution (Warning: Dont Read If You Are Afraid Of Blood) - daheavydl3 - May. 25, 2020
(May. 24, 2020 3:27 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote:(May. 24, 2020 2:01 PM)daheavydl3 Wrote: i love the vibe where Valt gets chased By HORDES OF BRICKING FANBOYS
Not Fanboys, it was fan girls which to me makes it alot funnier
oh yeah fan girls sorry
RE: Beyblade Burst: Super Evolution (Warning: Dont Read If You Are Afraid Of Blood) - CheetoBlader - May. 25, 2020
Valt, you can’t battle every single time! Contain your excitement just a bit! Lol
RE: Beyblade Burst: Super Evolution (Warning: Dont Read If You Are Afraid Of Blood) - FreeFafnir64 - May. 25, 2020
Ashtem is so cold blooded man.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Super Evolution (Warning: Dont Read If You Are Afraid Of Blood) - MasterKurenai - May. 25, 2020
Man he doesn’t have mercy maybe one day Shu will go with back to the Snake Pit and kill everyone there
RE: Beyblade Burst: Super Evolution (Warning: Dont Read If You Are Afraid Of Blood) - DeltaZakuro - May. 25, 2020
Episode 3 will come out this afternoon but here is a sneak peek at the coming arcs
Arc 2 - The Return - Valt becomes aware of the ongoing disappearances of children who dont leave a single trace... until a member of the snake pit shows up to BC Sol's front door.... Episode 8 - 10
Arc 3 - Dark Memories - Valt and his companions travel to The Snake Pit, and get a rather disturbing surprise..... Episode 11 -18
Arc 4 - Last Stand - Valt and Shu prepare for a fateful showdown.... Episode 19 - 26
Episode 3A - Valtryek Vs Satomb!
*Valt and the rest of BC Sol are in the cafeteria, Valt slurps down an entire plate of spaghetti*
Silas: Talk about a bottomless pit.... *munches on cheese burger*
Rantaro: Thats Valt for you...
Sasha: That doesn't stop him tho!
Cuza: Yeah, he didnt become the champion for no reason....
Rickson: Agreed!
Valt: ALRIGHT!!! Time to battle!!!!!!
Cuza: Already?!
Valt: Yeah!! I want to get stronger, so i must train every day!
Silas: Alright!! Valt Aoi, i challenge you to a battle!!!
Valt: Alright!!! Lets go!!!
*the 2 head to a stadium*
Valt: Lets go Valtryek...
Silas: Lets go Valt!!!
3 2 1 LET IT RIP!!!!
*Satomb claims the center*
Silas: Well well well, a free center for me!!!
Valt: Chase it down Valtryek!!!!
Silas: GOO ROLLER DEFENSE!!
*Satomb repels all of Valtryeks attacks*
Silas: Is this all you've got?...
Valt: SLICE THROUGH IT!!!! GENESIS WHIP!!!!!
Silas: TAKE THIS!!! ULTIMATE ROLLER DRIFT!!!!
*Satomb dodges attack and Valtryek heads toward a wall*
Valt: Wait What?!
*Valtryek bursts upon impact*
Valt: No way... Impossible....
Silas: Im 4 parallel universes ahead of you Valt.....
[~TO BE CONTINUED~]
RE: Beyblade Burst: Super Evolution (Warning: Dont Read If You Are Afraid Of Blood) - DeltaZakuro - May. 27, 2020
No new episode today, my motivation is kinda gone but 2 FULL episodes will debut tomorrow in order to hopefully make up for my lack of motivation
RE: Beyblade Burst: Super Evolution (Warning: Dont Read If You Are Afraid Of Blood) - CheetoBlader - May. 27, 2020
(May. 27, 2020 2:08 AM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: No new episode today, my motivation is kinda gone but 2 FULL episodes will debut tomorrow in order to hopefully make up for my lack of motivationJust like my motivation to do school work lmao
RE: Beyblade Burst: Super Evolution (Warning: Dont Read If You Are Afraid Of Blood) - DeltaZakuro - May. 27, 2020
If this series does good ill continue the bloody series into Turbo and Rise and MAYBE Sparking, in fact here are some concept titles
- Beyblade Burst: Turbodrive (Season 2)
Main Character - Aiger Akabane
- Beyblade Burst: Rising Stars (Season 3)
Main Character - Dante Koryu
- Beyblade Burst: Sparking Heroes (Season 4)
Main Character - Hikaru and Hyuga Asahi
RE: Beyblade Burst: Super Evolution (Warning: Dont Read If You Are Afraid Of Blood) - DeltaZakuro - May. 27, 2020
Episode 3B will be out shortly but in the meantime, here are all beys for TurboDrive
Turbo Achilles 00 Dm
Turbo Valtryek Z Ev
Turbo Spryzen 0W Zt'
Crash Roktavor 11R Wd
Emperor Forneus 0 Yr
Heat Salamander 12 Op
Brutal Luinor 13 Jl
Archer Hercules 13 Et
Crimson Nightmare 10T Ul
Dread Phoenix 10 Fr
Dread Hades 11T Z'
Breaker Xcalius 1'D Sw
Geist Fafnir 8'P Ab
Vise Leopard 12L Ds
Air Knight 12E Et
Hazard Kerbeus 7 At
RE: Beyblade Burst: Super Evolution (Warning: Dont Read If You Are Afraid Of Blood) - DeltaZakuro - May. 28, 2020
Beyblade Burst: Rising Stars Beys
Imperial/Master Dragon Ig'
Shapeshift Loki 8'R Tr'
Sword Valtryek Bl Pw
Bushin Ashindra Hr Kp
Master Devolos Gn (will be changed if its not called "Master")
Eclipse Genesis Hy
Dusk Balkesh 7W Om
Wizard Fafnir Rt Rs
Zone Luinor Dr Sp'
Prime Apocalypse 0D Ul'
Judgement Joker 00T Tr
Union Achilles Cn Xt+
Lord Spryzen Bl Dm'?