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RE: Beyblade Burst: Diamond - DeltaZakuro - May. 20, 2020
Episode 44 - Seeking The Legends! Training For The Final Battle!
Episode 45 - Sapphire Vs Spryzen!
Episode 46 - Break The Limits! Diamond Strike!
Episode 47 - Lucifer Vs Dragon!
Episode 48 - United! Sapphire Vs Valtryek!
Episode 49 - Rescue Savannah! Entering The Phantom Temple!
Episode 50 - Sabarinth Vs Lance!
Episode 51 - Sacrifice! Part 1 and 2 (Finale)
RE: Beyblade Burst: Diamond - DeltaZakuro - May. 21, 2020
Episode 1: A Different Journey! Gem Sapphire! Summary
Sabarinth Yuya creates a Diamond Bey and challenges Valt Aoi... and his resonance with Sapphire starts to flare up.....
Episode 2: Bey Of Light! Revolon! Summary
Sabarinth makes his first rival...
Episode 3: Rivalry! Sabarinth Vs Reimi! Summary
After so many demands, Reimi reluctantly battles Sabarinth and catches a glimpse of his future...
RE: Beyblade Burst: Diamond - N12N12 - May. 21, 2020
*Subscribing to this thread*
RE: Beyblade Burst: Diamond - DeltaZakuro - May. 21, 2020
Episode 4: Valiant Warrior! Supreme Valtryek! Summary
Signing up in the Bey Alley, Sabarinth plows through the competition and gets the RARE opportunity to battle Valt....
Episode 5: Sabarinth Vs Valt! Summary
With Sapphires resonance beginning to awaken, Sabarinth starts his counter attack.....
Episode 6: Demon King! Hell Satomb! Summary
A certain blader comes to Japan and faces of with Sabarinth....
RE: Beyblade Burst: Diamond - DeltaZakuro - May. 22, 2020
Episode 1 will debut on Monday so be ready for an epic first episode
RE: Beyblade Burst: Diamond - GreenK9148 - May. 22, 2020
(May. 22, 2020 5:21 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: Episode 1 will debut on Monday so be ready for an epic first episode
Great! Can't wait for it!
RE: Beyblade Burst: Diamond - N12N12 - May. 22, 2020
(May. 22, 2020 5:28 PM)GreenK9148 Wrote:(May. 22, 2020 5:21 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: Episode 1 will debut on Monday so be ready for an epic first episode
Great! Can't wait for it!
Me neither.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Diamond - DeltaZakuro - May. 22, 2020
To keep everyone happy happy, a new episode of Hyper G dropped and maybe another on the way soon
RE: Beyblade Burst: Diamond - DeltaZakuro - May. 23, 2020
Bey Overview - Gem Sapphire Blitz Destroy' 1-Sapphire
Chip - Sapphire - features the face of a knight like warrior and has 4 teeth of tall height
Outer Core - Gem - Features 4 blades arranged similarly to Super
Disk Track - 1-Sapphire - has the same shape as Gem
User: Sabarinth Yuya
RE: Beyblade Burst: Diamond - N12N12 - May. 26, 2020
Mebe you could use some of Crazyaries custom beyblades?
RE: Beyblade Burst: Diamond - DeltaZakuro - May. 27, 2020
(May. 26, 2020 6:50 PM)N12N12 Wrote: Mebe you could use some of Crazyaries custom beyblades?I would but none of his beys look like the ones I had in mind
RE: Beyblade Burst: Diamond - sans the man - May. 27, 2020
good job i thank your story is going to be great
RE: Beyblade Burst: Diamond - DeltaZakuro - May. 27, 2020
With episode 1 and 2 coming out in about 24 to 36 hours, what are you most excited for in the coming series
RE: Beyblade Burst: Diamond - FreeFafnir64 - May. 27, 2020
All of it.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Diamond - N12N12 - May. 27, 2020
(May. 27, 2020 2:12 AM)DeltaZakuro Wrote:(May. 26, 2020 6:50 PM)N12N12 Wrote: Mebe you could use some of Crazyaries custom beyblades?I would but none of his beys look like the ones I had in mind
Mebe "evolve " them into what you wanted?
RE: Beyblade Burst: Diamond - DeltaZakuro - May. 28, 2020
Episode 1 - Different Journey! Gem Sapphire! Part 1: Sabarinths Memory
Sabarinth: LETS GO SAPPHIRE!!!!!
Narrator: This boy is named Sabarinth Yuya, who decided to leave home to conquer the blading world, it started when Sabarinth met Valt Aoi when he was just 4 years old and inspired him to create a Diamond Bey.....
*Flashback begins*
Sabarinth: Please mom!!! Let me go to Japan to compete in the Bey Alley and the prize money will be more than enough to cover Savannahs hospital bill!!!!
Mom: Your sister is doing fine with her cancer treatment, you have nothing to worry about.
Sabarinth: Then how come she isn't getting better!!
*he storms off into the room where his Sis is, nearly in tears*
Savannah: BROTHER!!!!
*she outstretches her arms for a hug*
*they hug for about a minute until Savannah reaches into his pocket and grabs Sapphire*
Sabarinth: Hey wa-
Savannah: Its so cool.... Did you make this??
Sabarinth: Uh yeah....
Savannah: Is it true that Beys have souls of their own, like as if they're living inside the bey?
Sabarinth: Yeah, i suppose so.... Look you should really be getting some sle-
Savannah: Are you really leaving? Are you really heading across the country?? *she gets in the bed*
Sabarinth: Im sorry Savannah, but I am...
Savannah: Because you want to save my life?
Sabarinth: Yes.. *he begins to cry some*
Savannah: When are you leaving?
Sabarinth: T-tomorrow....
Savannah: Here... There's room in the bed for one more... Like when you would comfort me when I was scared or sad...
*Sabarinth gets in the bed and embraces his little sister against his chest as tears fall from his eyes*
Sabarinth: I love you Savannah, just know whatever I do in Japan.... is for you...
Savannah: Sabarinth..... *she starts to cry too*
*the two eventually fall fast asleep*
*Flashback ends*
Sabarinth: There it is Sapphire.... Beyblade City, Japan.... *inhales* WE'RE HERE!!!!!!!
[~TO BE CONTINUED~]
RE: Beyblade Burst: Diamond - CheetoBlader - May. 28, 2020
That was unexpected, and a little depressing, but heartwarming! I like the path the story is on so far! Can’t wait for chapter two!
RE: Beyblade Burst: Diamond (Progress: Ongoing) - daheavydl3 - May. 28, 2020
(May. 28, 2020 3:23 AM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: Episode 1 - Different Journey! Gem Sapphire! Part 1: Sabarinths Memory
Sabarinth: LETS GO SAPPHIRE!!!!!
Narrator: This boy is named Sabarinth Yuya, who decided to leave home to conquer the blading world, it started when Sabarinth met Valt Aoi when he was just 4 years old and inspired him to create a Diamond Bey.....
*Flashback begins*
Sabarinth: Please mom!!! Let me go to Japan to compete in the Bey Alley and the prize money will be more than enough to cover Savannahs hospital bill!!!!
Mom: Your sister is doing fine with her cancer treatment, you have nothing to worry about.
Sabarinth: Then how come she isn't getting better!!
*he storms off into the room where his Sis is, nearly in tears*
Savannah: BROTHER!!!!
*she outstretches her arms for a hug*
*they hug for about a minute until Savannah reaches into his pocket and grabs Sapphire*
Sabarinth: Hey wa-
Savannah: Its so cool.... Did you make this??
Sabarinth: Uh yeah....
Savannah: Is it true that Beys have souls of their own, like as if they're living inside the bey?
Sabarinth: Yeah, i suppose so.... Look you should really be getting some sle-
Savannah: Are you really leaving? Are you really heading across the country?? *she gets in the bed*
Sabarinth: Im sorry Savannah, but I am...
Savannah: Because you want to save my life?
Sabarinth: Yes.. *he begins to cry some*
Savannah: When are you leaving?
Sabarinth: T-tomorrow....
Savannah: Here... There's room in the bed for one more... Like when you would comfort me when I was scared or sad...
*Sabarinth gets in the bed and embraces his little sister against his chest as tears fall from his eyes*
Sabarinth: I love you Savannah, just know whatever I do in Japan.... is for you...
Savannah: Sabarinth..... *she starts to cry too*
*the two eventually fall fast asleep*
*Flashback ends*
Sabarinth: There it is Sapphire.... Beyblade City, Japan.... *inhales* WE'RE HERE!!!!!!!
[~TO BE CONTINUED~]
W-W-W-WHATS WITH THIS TEARS!!!!!!!?????????
RE: Beyblade Burst: Diamond (Progress: Ongoing) - CheetoBlader - May. 28, 2020
I just noticed that the 1st chapter was in absolutely no way related to the summary of it lol
RE: Beyblade Burst: Diamond (Progress: Ongoing) - DeltaZakuro - May. 28, 2020
(May. 28, 2020 2:21 PM)CheetoBlader Wrote: I just noticed that the 1st chapter was in absolutely no way related to the summary of it lol
Yeah I decided change it up a little bit, give Sabarinth a heart breaking back story and give him more to strive for
RE: Beyblade Burst: Diamond (Progress: Ongoing) - N12N12 - May. 28, 2020
i dont like onions
RE: Beyblade Burst: Diamond (Progress: Ongoing) - DeltaZakuro - May. 28, 2020
Episode 1 - Different Journey! Gem Sapphire! Part 2: Arrival In Beyblade City
*Sabarinth climbs down the mountain and trips and goes rolling down the mountain*
Sabarinth: WHY MEEE!!!!!
*Sabarinth grabs hold of a tree and regains his balance*
Sabarinth: That was so close....
*he takes out a picture of Savannah*
Sabarinth: Hang tight Savannah, you'll be free of Cancer in no time...
*all that stands between him and Beyblade City is a snowy forest*
Sabarinth: Sapphire... I made you so i could enjoy blading with my sister.....
Narrator: Sabarinth and Savannah used to live with an abusive family who later put them up for adoption, a more loving family came about a month later and took them in, Sabarinth and Savannah both love the color blue, Sabarinth made Gem Sapphire out of a REAL diamond he found on the ground, and Savannah would've made one too if her health didnt do a complete 180.....
Sabarinth: Sapphire.... We're nearly there.....
*Sabarinth walks through the ankle high snow and sits at a nearby tree to take a quick rest*
Sabarinth: About 2 more miles straight and we'll be in Beyblade City....
About 20 minutes pass and Sabarinth exits the forest...
Sabarinth: Here we are.... We are in Beyblade City.....
*he sees signs leading to The Bey Alley*
Sabarinth: Let's follow those signs.
*the signs lead him to a registration desk, with a middle aged woman sitting behind it*
Registration Lady: Can i help you?
Sabarinth: Yes, id like to sign up for The Bey Alley..
Registration Lady: Ok just place your Bey-Logger on the scanner.
*The scanner beeps for a second and goes DING*
Registration Lady: Alright you're all clear, good luck!!!!
*he runs inside and is instantly jumped by thieves*
Thief 1: Awesome looking bey you have there!!!
Thief 2: If we win we get to keep it!!!
Sabarinth: im not here for you guys, im here to win prize money to save my sister...
Thief 1: WE DONT CARE!!! BATTLE US OR WE'RE TAKING YOUR BEY REGARDLESS!!!!!!
Sabarinth: Fine, but be warned.... im a lot stronger than I look.....
Thief 2: Yeah yeah whatever!!!
3 2 1 LET IT RIP!!!!!
*all the beys land in the stadium*
Thief 1: Attack!!! GET IN THERE!!!!
Thief 2: GO!!!!
*Both beys charge after Sapphire*
Sabarinth: Tear them to pieces.....
Sapphire blasts both beys into the ceiling
Thief 1/2: NOOO!!!!
Sabarinth: Later guys!!!!
*he runs into the main arena*
[~TO BE CONTINUED~]
(May. 28, 2020 7:35 PM)N12N12 Wrote: i dont like onions
Don't worry, the next few episodes wont be such tear jerkers, but they will go in depth of Sabarinth and Savannahs rather insane history
Episode 2 - Bey Of Light! Revolon!
Blader DJ: Sabarinth has crawled from the bottom of D Tier to 8th Place on B Tier, quite impressive!!!!
Sabarinth: ALRIGHT THAT MONEY IS AS GOOD AS MINE!!!!
???: If you want money, then you'll have to go through me first....
Blader DJ: Wait, A NEW CHALLENGER HAS COME ON STAGE!!!!
Sabarinth: Hey who are you?!
Reimi: Im Reimi Harla, this is my bey, Spirit Revolon!!!!
Blader DJ: Spirit Revolon is a Diamond Bey, just like Sapphire but a stamina type!!!
Sabarinth: A stamina type?!
Reimi: Im gonna blow you away Sabarinth.... Just you wait....
*She walks away*
Blader DJ: SWEET MOMS HOME COOKING!!!! REIMI HARLA HAS THROWN DOWN THE GAUNTLET!!!! SABARINTH VS REIMI, YOU DON'T WANNA MISS THIS FOLKS!!!
[Later that day]
Sabarinth: Hey Reimi!!!!
Reimi: What do you want?!
Sabarinth: Let us have a fun battle tomorrow....
Reimi: Fun?
Sabarinth: Yes, BeyBattles are meant to be fun!!
Reimi: Lets battle.. Right now!!!
Sabarinth: Lets save our strength for tomorrow Reimi....
Reimi: Sure!!
[~The next day~]
Blader DJ: THE DAY IS HERE!!!! 2 DIAMOND BLADERS WILL FACE OFF IN A EPIC SHOWDOWN!!!!
*the 2 bladers walk up to the stadium*
Reimi: Like you said, let's have fun!!
Sabarinth: yeah....
Referee: Ready Set!!!!
3 2 1 LET IT RIP!!!!!!!
*Revolon takes the center and Sapphire unleashes a barrage of Attacks*
Reimi: That's it!! HOLD DOWN THE CENTER!!!!
Sabarinth: That stamina is incredible!!! Its not even slowing down....
Reimi: BLOW EM OUT!!!! SPIRIT WIND!!!!!
*Sapphire gets blown away by the wind*
Referee: Spirit Revolon!! Ring Out Finish!!! The score is 1-0!!!
Sabarinth: No way... Its strong....
Reimi: We are just beginning....
{~TO BE CONTINUED~}
RE: Beyblade Burst: Diamond (Current Progress: Ongoing) - daheavydl3 - May. 29, 2020
(May. 28, 2020 6:44 AM)daheavydl3 Wrote:(May. 28, 2020 3:23 AM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: Episode 1 - Different Journey! Gem Sapphire! Part 1: Sabarinths Memory
Sabarinth: LETS GO SAPPHIRE!!!!!
Narrator: This boy is named Sabarinth Yuya, who decided to leave home to conquer the blading world, it started when Sabarinth met Valt Aoi when he was just 4 years old and inspired him to create a Diamond Bey.....
*Flashback begins*
Sabarinth: Please mom!!! Let me go to Japan to compete in the Bey Alley and the prize money will be more than enough to cover Savannahs hospital bill!!!!
Mom: Your sister is doing fine with her cancer treatment, you have nothing to worry about.
Sabarinth: Then how come she isn't getting better!!
*he storms off into the room where his Sis is, nearly in tears*
Savannah: BROTHER!!!!
*she outstretches her arms for a hug*
*they hug for about a minute until Savannah reaches into his pocket and grabs Sapphire*
Sabarinth: Hey wa-
Savannah: Its so cool.... Did you make this??
Sabarinth: Uh yeah....
Savannah: Is it true that Beys have souls of their own, like as if they're living inside the bey?
Sabarinth: Yeah, i suppose so.... Look you should really be getting some sle-
Savannah: Are you really leaving? Are you really heading across the country?? *she gets in the bed*
Sabarinth: Im sorry Savannah, but I am...
Savannah: Because you want to save my life?
Sabarinth: Yes.. *he begins to cry some*
Savannah: When are you leaving?
Sabarinth: T-tomorrow....
Savannah: Here... There's room in the bed for one more... Like when you would comfort me when I was scared or sad...
*Sabarinth gets in the bed and embraces his little sister against his chest as tears fall from his eyes*
Sabarinth: I love you Savannah, just know whatever I do in Japan.... is for you...
Savannah: Sabarinth..... *she starts to cry too*
*the two eventually fall fast asleep*
*Flashback ends*
Sabarinth: There it is Sapphire.... Beyblade City, Japan.... *inhales* WE'RE HERE!!!!!!!
[~TO BE CONTINUED~]
W-W-W-WHATS WITH THIS TEARS!!!!!!!?????????
HOLY MOLEY!!!! HOW DID THIS HAVE ALOT OF LIKES??????
RE: Beyblade Burst: Diamond (Current Progress: Ongoing) - DeltaZakuro - May. 29, 2020
Episode 3 - Rivalry! Sabarinth Vs Reimi!
Blader DJ: Revolon has taken the first point!!!! Can Sabarinth make a comeback?!
Sabarinth: Its stamina is out of this world...
Reimi: Ill finish this!!!
Sabarinth: Sapphire..... Talk to me.... What should I do??...
*Sabarinth gets pulled into a blue void with Diamonds hanging in the air for miles*
Sabarinth: What is this place?
???: With me...
Sabarinth: You're....
Sapphire: That's right, i am Sapphire....
Sabarinth: Its You.... My sister was right!!
Sapphire: Ah yes, Savannah, she is doing great so far....
Sabarinth: How do you know?
Sapphire: Im always watching over her, in fact i watch over you both like an angel....
Sabarinth: Thanks.... I really appreciate that!!
Sapphire: Now, lets win this!!!!
Sabarinth: Right!!!
*Sapphire disappears*
Referee: Ready Set!!!
3 2 1 LET IT RIP!!!
*Revolon takes the center an Sapphire unleashes its barrage*
Reimi: Using the same strategy are we? It useless.... SPIRIT WIND!!!!
*Revolons tornado begins pushing Sapphire away*
Sabarinth: Hold on!!!!!
Reimi: Victory is mine!!!!
Sabarinth: Is it??
Reimi: Huh....
Sabarinth: I let you push me away because I too have a trump card!!!!
Reimi then sees a shadowy figure loom over Sabarinth....
Reimi: No... It cant be him.....
Sabarinth: *his Aura activates* AHHHH!!!! SAPPHIRE!!!!!!!
*Sapphires avatar comes out*
Reimi: Grrrr....
Sabarinth: Next you'll say "how is it still going"!!!!
Reimi: How is it still going!!! Wait WHAT!!!!
Sabarinth: PUSH THROUGH!!!!! DESTROY COUNTER!!!!!
*Sapphire pushes through the tornado and bursts through Revolon*
Reimi: WHAAT!!!!
Referee: Gem Sapphire!!! Burst Finish!!!! With a final score of 1-2, Sabarinth Yuya wins!!!!
Sabarinth: ALRIGHT WE DID IT!!!!!
*meanwhile at home*
Mom: You've got a letter from Sabarinth!
Savannah: From Sabarinth....
Dear Savannah, today marks my first win in the Bey Alley, my opponent was rather difficult, but you know me i still won. Anyway I hope you're feeling a lot better today, oh god i hope so, i cant rest easy tonight without knowing whether or not you're dead or alive. Im currently ranked 5th in the tournament so far, if i make it to number 1 and beat whoever i got to beat, ill be home with the prize money, i love you Savannah, i hope you are alive and well...
Your Loving Brother, Sabarinth
Savannah: Mom!
Mom: Yes, honey?
Savannah: I wanna go to Japan, and watch his battles!!!
Mom: I was thinking the same thing, we can go...
Savannah: YAAYYY!!!!
{~TO BE CONTINUED~}
Ages
Sabarinth - 15
Savannah - 9
Valt - 24
Silas - 28 (Estimate)
Rantaro - 24
Reimi - 15
Lucerian - 14
Len - 18
Finn - 13
Luna - 14
Serena - 16
Gwyn - 21 (Estimate)
Xen - 14
Aelen - 19
Dante - 20
Aiger - 22
RE: Beyblade Burst: Diamond (Current Progress: Ongoing) - DeltaZakuro - May. 30, 2020
Episode 4 - Valiant Warrior! Supreme Valtryek!
*Few hours after their match, Sabarinth and Reimi become great friends and they have lunch together*
Reimi: Why are you really here?
Sabarinth: Im here to win the money so i can help fund a cure for my sister.
Reimi: What does she have?
Sabarinth: Lung Cancer....
Reimi: Dude... That sucks!....
???: You're Sabarinth Yuya right?
Sabarinth: Yes, who's asking?
Valt: Im Valt Aoi, you most likely don't remember me because we last met 10 years ago.
Sabarinth: I kinda remember.... How's Savannah doing?
Valt: I don't know, You tell me...
*he moves and Sabarinths mom and Savannah walk forward*
Sabarinth: Am i dreaming!!!
Savannah: BROTHER!!!!
*she runs up to him and wraps her arms around Sabarinths neck*
Sabarinth: Savannah.... Did you really come to watch my battles?
Savannah: *nods yes*
Reimi: Sabarinth, your sister truely is one of a kind....
*Reimi pats Savannahs head*
Valt: Reimi... Sabarinth... This is my Diamond Bey, Supreme Valtryek!!!
Reimi: Ill go first!!!
They all head inside the Bey Alley Lobby
Savannah: This is going to be awesome!!!
Valt: Let's do this!!
Reimi: Ill finish this in one blow!
3 2 1 LET IT RIP!!!!!!
*Revolon takes the center*
Reimi: Alright center is ours!!!
Valt: POWER THROUGH IT!!!! SUPREME SWORD!!!!!
*Valtryek clashes with Revolon and bolts of lightning fly everywhere*
*Revolon bursts*
Reimi: What was that power?......
Sabarinth: H-he's strong......
{~TO BE CONTINUED~}