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RE: group story - Xtend+ - Apr. 09, 2020
:0 wowowow ok!!
RE: group story - heroalexander05 - Apr. 10, 2020
chapter 10 is out
After celebrating the loss of Ryuga and grieving the loss of Gin, Zac and Damion spit up and followed their own paths. Zac stayed in his town and would eventually start the world's best beyclub. Damion went on a training journey to defeat the top five bladers in the world and become the best, but would never complete it.
Zac woke up to an explosion. It had been exactly one year after Ryuga disappeared and he was not in the mood until he heard a scream that sounded like Damion’s. He got outside just in time to see burst apocalypse shatter but he could not see who caused it. Then Damion saw Zac and said two words, RUN AWAY!
ok the next story is almost complete and it is a total game changer with lots of past characters from the anime
RE: group story - Xtend+ - Apr. 21, 2020
Woah! Im scared if its Takashi.
RE: group story - heroalexander05 - Apr. 21, 2020
(Apr. 21, 2020 3:06 AM)Xtend+ Wrote: Woah! Im scared if its Takashi.
he is in the 21st chapter but if you want i could switch beys and characters but it would just be a little more confusing
RE: group story - Xtend+ - Apr. 21, 2020
Nah its ok.
RE: group story - FreeFafnir64 - Apr. 21, 2020
This is awesome! Beys break almost every episode! It's insane!
RE: group story - Xtend+ - Apr. 21, 2020
rip Burst Apocalypse
didn't even last a day out there.
RE: group story - heroalexander05 - Apr. 21, 2020
chapter 11 is finally out
Zac fell to the ground, horrified by what happened. Suddenly a white flash flew right at him, giving him a minor cut on his arm. He looked around and saw someone he never expected to see, lui shirosagi, and his bey, god luinor. Lui told Zac how Ryuga was his mentor and how he gave him his first bey, lost luinor. Lui said he would beat up master pegasus so badly he would never be able to pick up a beyblade again.
Zac just laughed and told Lui that there was no one in the world that he would lose to and then he suddenly heard a huge explosion. When he turned around the newly built part of the city was in flames and they were spreading toward Zac and Lui. Right before the flames engulfed Zac they all got sucked into one tiny spot and created a supernova-like explosion. Zac had to cover his eyes and when the light was gone he saw Lui wearing sunglasses. Then Zac turned around when he heard something behind him. He was surprised at who he saw. It was Phi, and the flames were his beyblade, god phoenix.
Zac told Lui even if Phi was helping him, Zac would never lose to anyone. Lui just told Zac that they were going to find out how powerful he really was and took out his launcher, which was much bigger than any other launcher Zac had seen, and told Phi and Zac to do the same. A few seconds later all three beyblades were in the stadium and the battle had begun.
Zac realized that if he did not get rid of god phoenix first he would lose. So master pegasus hit phoenix and the armor came flying off. Then god luinor hit god phoenix and it burst. Zac was wondering why Lui did that until the energy layer of phoenix came down and went into the hole in the center of god luinors energy layer.
Lui told Zac when the two energy layers are combined it would be just like the beyblades Ryuga told him about, how they never burst and how they were much more heavy than ones that burst. Zac then realized that phoenix’s energy layer was all metal and barely had time to dodge before the newly formed beyblade, metal luinor, went crashing into the wall, creating a ravine between the burnt city. Zac started to celebrate his win when suddenly metal luinor flew out of the dust and hit master pegasus right in the middle of the energy layer. Zac just watched as metal luinor split all three parts on master pegasus into six parts.
Lui then called out his special move phoenix melt and as soon as he hit the pieces of the broken beyblade they melted and hardened into a lump of metal and plastic.
RE: group story - heroalexander05 - Apr. 23, 2020
(Apr. 21, 2020 3:06 AM)Xtend+ Wrote: Woah! Im scared if its Takashi.
could takashi have metal luinor cause i have a good story plot if he can have it
RE: group story - Needforspeed - Apr. 23, 2020
I am still waiting for xcalius upgrade keep up te god work
RE: group story - Xtend+ - Apr. 23, 2020
(Apr. 23, 2020 2:15 AM)heroalexander05 Wrote:(Apr. 21, 2020 3:06 AM)Xtend+ Wrote: Woah! Im scared if its Takashi.
could takashi have metal luinor cause i have a good story plot if he can have it
You can give him whatever you want actually.
RE: group story - heroalexander05 - Apr. 23, 2020
(Apr. 23, 2020 2:24 PM)Needforspeed Wrote: I am still waiting for xcalius upgrade keep up te god work
dude you will get what you want
RE: group story - Needforspeed - Apr. 23, 2020
(Apr. 23, 2020 10:18 PM)heroalexander05 Wrote:(Apr. 23, 2020 2:24 PM)Needforspeed Wrote: I am still waiting for xcalius upgrade keep up te god work
dude you will get what you want
Oh okay then
I wanted to request a character
Haruno Tamashiii
Age 14
Bey : if i can request a hydra dragon
RE: group story - heroalexander05 - Apr. 23, 2020
(Apr. 23, 2020 10:21 PM)Needforspeed Wrote:(Apr. 23, 2020 10:18 PM)heroalexander05 Wrote: dude you will get what you want
Oh okay then
I wanted to request a character
Haruno Tamashiii
Age 14
Bey : if i can request a hydra dragon
perfect cause i was needing a new character
could his bey be a fusion beyblade
chapter 12 is out
It was one month later and Zac still had not made a new beyblade. His defeat by Lui and Phi scared him into having a fear of beyblades. But there was also another thing he was afraid of, when phoenix and luinor combined Lui and Phi also combined at the end of the battle and formed a new blader named Takashi. They combined because when their beyblades combined, their bey spirit grew so much that they fused together like their beyblades. Suddenly there was a knock on the door and when he opened it it was Xander. He told Zac that his beyblade needed an upgrade and Zac should make a new beyblade with him.
Zac told Xander he did not want to beyblade anymore and closed the door. A few seconds later Xander kicked down the door and told Zac that his attitude would get him nowhere. Then Xander told him that he should make a fusion bey with someone that he was good friends with, but then Zac told Xander how Gin and Damion disappeared and how they were his only really good friends. Xander just told Zac that he had to make new friends, and that Xander would be happy to be one. Zac asked where he could find new friends and Xander told him about this ramen shop and how he met Valt there when they were just starting school. Zac agreed to it but first he had to make a beyblade and a launcher.
Soon after Zac and Xander went into Zac’s basement both the beyblades were complete. Xanders beyblade was doom xcalius and Zac's beyblade was based off of a beyblade Ryuga had told him in a dream, storm pegasus. Xander then looked at his watch and told Zac that it was time to go to the ramen shop and meet Xander’s fusion partner.
When they got to the ramen shop there was an event. If you could burst a certain beyblade you would be able to eat all the ramen you could eat for one meal. Xander told Zac that he had to go somewhere but he would find him with his partner soon enough. Zac decided to wander around and found a nice seat away from the crowd. When he got there he found a guy in a hoodie eating dry ramen. When he sat down the guy looked up and extended his hand, when Zac extended his hand to shake the strangers hand the stranger grabbed his arm and twisted it. Zac felt pain but then his arm felt better.
Then the stranger introduced himself, his name was Haruno tamashiii, and his beyblade was hydra dragon, an inner fusion bey. Zac was happy that he found an inner fusion bey and asked Haruno if they wanted to make a fusion bey together. Haruno said sure and they went to the battle arena just in time to see five beyblades knocked out at once. Then Zac heard Xander laugh and saw that the beyblade was Xanders, but it had an inner beyblade to complete the fusion. Then Xander saw Zac and asked if he found anyone yet, and Zac introduced Haruno. Then Xander introduced his partner, Hearts, and his bey phantom hades.
RE: group story - Xtend+ - Apr. 23, 2020
Not what I was expecting. But I guess Ill have to deal with it!
RE: group story - heroalexander05 - Apr. 23, 2020
well its just i had all the other blader names and then i came up with fusion and that changed everything
RE: group story - Xtend+ - Apr. 23, 2020
Ill make a new bio for takashi
Name: Takashi Nomuya
Origins: Fusion
Beyblade: Drag Anubis.Sting.Metal Atomic.
RE: group story - Needforspeed - Apr. 24, 2020
(Apr. 23, 2020 10:34 PM)heroalexander05 Wrote:Wow that fast I expect like a few more days(Apr. 23, 2020 10:21 PM)Needforspeed Wrote: Oh okay then
I wanted to request a character
Haruno Tamashiii
Age 14
Bey : if i can request a hydra dragon
perfect cause i was needing a new character
could his bey be a fusion beyblade
chapter 12 is out
It was one month later and Zac still had not made a new beyblade. His defeat by Lui and Phi scared him into having a fear of beyblades. But there was also another thing he was afraid of, when phoenix and luinor combined Lui and Phi also combined at the end of the battle and formed a new blader named Takashi. They combined because when their beyblades combined, their bey spirit grew so much that they fused together like their beyblades. Suddenly there was a knock on the door and when he opened it it was Xander. He told Zac that his beyblade needed an upgrade and Zac should make a new beyblade with him.
Zac told Xander he did not want to beyblade anymore and closed the door. A few seconds later Xander kicked down the door and told Zac that his attitude would get him nowhere. Then Xander told him that he should make a fusion bey with someone that he was good friends with, but then Zac told Xander how Gin and Damion disappeared and how they were his only really good friends. Xander just told Zac that he had to make new friends, and that Xander would be happy to be one. Zac asked where he could find new friends and Xander told him about this ramen shop and how he met Valt there when they were just starting school. Zac agreed to it but first he had to make a beyblade and a launcher.
Soon after Zac and Xander went into Zac’s basement both the beyblades were complete. Xanders beyblade was doom xcalius and Zac's beyblade was based off of a beyblade Ryuga had told him in a dream, storm pegasus. Xander then looked at his watch and told Zac that it was time to go to the ramen shop and meet Xander’s fusion partner.
When they got to the ramen shop there was an event. If you could burst a certain beyblade you would be able to eat all the ramen you could eat for one meal. Xander told Zac that he had to go somewhere but he would find him with his partner soon enough. Zac decided to wander around and found a nice seat away from the crowd. When he got there he found a guy in a hoodie eating dry ramen. When he sat down the guy looked up and extended his hand, when Zac extended his hand to shake the strangers hand the stranger grabbed his arm and twisted it. Zac felt pain but then his arm felt better.
Then the stranger introduced himself, his name was Haruno tamashiii, and his beyblade was hydra dragon, an inner fusion bey. Zac was happy that he found an inner fusion bey and asked Haruno if they wanted to make a fusion bey together. Haruno said sure and they went to the battle arena just in time to see five beyblades knocked out at once. Then Zac heard Xander laugh and saw that the beyblade was Xanders, but it had an inner beyblade to complete the fusion. Then Xander saw Zac and asked if he found anyone yet, and Zac introduced Haruno. Then Xander introduced his partner, Hearts, and his bey phantom hades.
RE: group story - heroalexander05 - Apr. 24, 2020
(Apr. 24, 2020 12:02 AM)Needforspeed Wrote:dude if i wanted i could make about 6 or 7 a day(Apr. 23, 2020 10:34 PM)heroalexander05 Wrote: perfect cause i was needing a new characterWow that fast I expect like a few more days
could his bey be a fusion beyblade
chapter 12 is out
It was one month later and Zac still had not made a new beyblade. His defeat by Lui and Phi scared him into having a fear of beyblades. But there was also another thing he was afraid of, when phoenix and luinor combined Lui and Phi also combined at the end of the battle and formed a new blader named Takashi. They combined because when their beyblades combined, their bey spirit grew so much that they fused together like their beyblades. Suddenly there was a knock on the door and when he opened it it was Xander. He told Zac that his beyblade needed an upgrade and Zac should make a new beyblade with him.
Zac told Xander he did not want to beyblade anymore and closed the door. A few seconds later Xander kicked down the door and told Zac that his attitude would get him nowhere. Then Xander told him that he should make a fusion bey with someone that he was good friends with, but then Zac told Xander how Gin and Damion disappeared and how they were his only really good friends. Xander just told Zac that he had to make new friends, and that Xander would be happy to be one. Zac asked where he could find new friends and Xander told him about this ramen shop and how he met Valt there when they were just starting school. Zac agreed to it but first he had to make a beyblade and a launcher.
Soon after Zac and Xander went into Zac’s basement both the beyblades were complete. Xanders beyblade was doom xcalius and Zac's beyblade was based off of a beyblade Ryuga had told him in a dream, storm pegasus. Xander then looked at his watch and told Zac that it was time to go to the ramen shop and meet Xander’s fusion partner.
When they got to the ramen shop there was an event. If you could burst a certain beyblade you would be able to eat all the ramen you could eat for one meal. Xander told Zac that he had to go somewhere but he would find him with his partner soon enough. Zac decided to wander around and found a nice seat away from the crowd. When he got there he found a guy in a hoodie eating dry ramen. When he sat down the guy looked up and extended his hand, when Zac extended his hand to shake the strangers hand the stranger grabbed his arm and twisted it. Zac felt pain but then his arm felt better.
Then the stranger introduced himself, his name was Haruno tamashiii, and his beyblade was hydra dragon, an inner fusion bey. Zac was happy that he found an inner fusion bey and asked Haruno if they wanted to make a fusion bey together. Haruno said sure and they went to the battle arena just in time to see five beyblades knocked out at once. Then Zac heard Xander laugh and saw that the beyblade was Xanders, but it had an inner beyblade to complete the fusion. Then Xander saw Zac and asked if he found anyone yet, and Zac introduced Haruno. Then Xander introduced his partner, Hearts, and his bey phantom hades.
RE: group story - heroalexander05 - Apr. 25, 2020
chapter 13 is out
Zac and Haruno got their launchers ready and then the battle started. Haruno made the first move by hitting hades with his full strength, which resulted in hydra dragon hitting the wall of the stadium. Hearts told Zac and Haruno that phantom hades had two springs, one on each half of the beyblade, and the only way they could beat it was from attacking it from above. Then xcalius hit storm pegasus and it went flying up in the air. Then it flew down and hit hades right in the middle of its layer. Then xcalius just barely hit hades on the side and it moved far enough that pegasus fell off. Then hades tip changed modes and it hit hydra dragon and it went flying. Hearts told them when the tip changes modes it could go into spring mode or destruction mode, where the springs don’t go in.
Then hades hit the wall and flew into the air, landing into xcalius. Then a bright light blinded everyone watching and when it cleared Xander and Hearts had combined to form a new blader named Riku Balliol. The new beyblade, fusion hades, then moves to the center of the arena. When pegasus and hydra hit it both beyblades went flying, hades on the other hand, did not move at all.
Suddenly hydra flew into the air and landed into pegasus and another bright light blinded everyone watching, and when it cleared a new bladder was there, his name was Blue, and his new beyblade, acid pegasus. Then spikes came out of acid pegasus and it started scraping on the stadium. Haruno told Zac to let him handle the rest of the battle and soon acid pegasus started to gain a huge amount of speed and eventually flipped sideways like a wheel and started hitting the walls. Every time acid pegasus hit the wall it gained a small boost and slammed into fusion hades, eventually moving it against the wall. Then suddenly acid pegasus changed directions and then after hitting the wall they both flew toward the middle and an explosion disintegrated the stadium and left a huge hole in the ground.
When the dust cleared both fusion hades and acid pegasus were burst and the judge called it a tie. Then all four beyblades separated and all four bladers went back to their original form. Hearts looked kind of disappointed but Xander just laughed and told Haruno and Zac to get all the ramen they could eat.
RE: group story - heroalexander05 - Apr. 27, 2020
here is when i will post new chapters.
1 or 2 during weekdays
3 to 5 during the weekends
chapter 14 is now out
All four bladers were sitting down eating ramen and talking about life when suddenly, they heard an explosion in the alley across from the ramen store. When they got there they saw Takashi, Valt and Aiga. Just then a blinding light made it hard to see anything but when it cleared Aiga and Valt had created a fusion beyblade called comet achilles, and its fusion blader, Star. But then Takashi took metal luinor out of the battle and told Star that comet achilles was not even worth beating and disappeared. But Hearts noticed something and launched his beyblade, missing Takashi by a mile, but using its spring to launch toward Haruno. He dodged and it hit a masked guy. The masked guy fell to the ground holding his nose and saying something that no one could make out. Finally when everyone surrounded him he took off his mask and revealed a familiar face, Gin.
Zac was so happy to see Gin but he told Zac that he only had a few minutes because he took off his mask. He told everyone to make sure their beyblades did not break twice or else they would be transported to a laboratory where they would be tested and would have to go through a test where they have to create the best beyblade and whoever lost was killed. Suddenly a high pitched noise rang in everyone's ear and right before Gin disappeared he told everyone to avoid the dark fusion ten, and then he disappeared. Then suddenly another familiar face appeared from the entrance of the alley, it was Ryuga.
Ryuga told Zac and Haruno to come with him. Zac said yes and then Ryuga told them that he did not have much time because he would be revealed when the sun came out. So Zac and Haruno followed Ryuga as they ran for the next town over. When they got to the next town over, Ryuga suddenly stopped and turned around to face Zac and Haruno. Then he took out his launcher and then the sun started to shine above the skyscrapers. As soon as the sunlight hit Ryuga he started to disintegrate, forming another person. When the unknown person finally looked up Zac and Haruno saw a number on his neck, it was the number nine. He told them that his name was Fear, and his beyblade was fear anubius.
RE: group story - heroalexander05 - May. 01, 2020
chapter 15 is out
Fear told Zac and Haruno that he was a member of the dark fusion ten. Then suddenly an arena popped out of the ground and Fear told them to launch their beyblades. As soon as they launched their beyblades a flame appeared on the arena in the shape of an F and when it disappeared both beyblades had burst. Then Fear told Zac and Haruno to come with him to the next arena and that they had three more tries to beat him or else he would break their beyblades on the last turn.
When they got to the next arena they decided to launch their beyblades in the same spot and do a fusion as soon as they launched. But as soon as they launched the flames appeared again and when dragon burst the top hit pegasus out of the air and it landed in another spot where the flames hit it as well, creating an E. After they picked up the pieces of their beyblades they saw that both energy layers had tiny bits missing and there were also scratched on the sides. Haruno then asked Fear to show them his beyblades performance tip. When fear showed them the performance tip they saw a very thin line made out of rubber. Fear told Zac and Haruno that all of the dark fusion ten beyblades are made to counter the top ten bladers in the world, and his was to counter Free’s beyblade, fafnir.
Haruno then smiled and told Zac to sit the next battle out, and when Zac asked why Haruno told him he had found a way to beat Fear. Fear started laughing and told him his beyblade had more than just speed in store. Then as soon as they launched fears beyblade was going left spin, but something was wrong, it was going really slow. Haruno just started laughing hysterically and called out his special move, poison barrage, and razor sharp blades came out of dragon and it started shredding fear anubius to tiny shards of plastic and metal. Fear started begging Haruno to stop but he continued to shred anubis until eventually, all that remained was a pile of metal and plastic shards. Just as soon as Haruno picked up hydra fear started to evaporate, and eventually disappeared.
ok so just so you all know i will now be making two stories this one and one about Haruno's past and later on i might do one about how the dark fusion ten were created
RE: group story - Xtend+ - Sep. 07, 2020
could I request another character?
RE: group story - Xtend+ - Dec. 16, 2020
is this story dead
RE: group story - Xtend+ - Dec. 18, 2020
oh come on