Beyblade Burst Zero - Printable Version

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Last time on Beyblade Burst Zero! Paris meets Taiki Igarashi, who owns Adamantine Theseus. After defeating him in battle, he will need to step up his game in order to beat Charles Schwab!

[/font][/font]“Hello? Anybody there?”
“Of course not,” Paris pondered.

[font=.SF UI Text][font=.SFUIText]He found himself a seat on a nearby rock, where a neat line of stars aligned together.[/font][/font]
[font=.SF UI Text][font=.SFUIText]“Hey,” Paris laughed, pointing. “That looks like a Pegasus.”[/font][/font]

[font=.SF UI Text][font=.SFUIText]Reaching for Immortal Pegasus, Paris overhead what seemed to be a girl’s voice.[/font][/font]
[font=.SF UI Text][font=.SFUIText]“It’s three in the morning and you don’t want a break? Of course you’re going to beat Paris!”[/font][/font]

The amber-haired boy wound up through the bushes, glancing at the pair. Paris could see a young boy with dark brown skin, drenched curly brown hair, a cozy-looking long-sleeved red shirt, glimmering miraculously under the moonlight and black jeans.

[font=.SF UI Text][font=.SFUIText]The boy was sweating excessively. A trickle of sweat dribbled down, splashing onto the ground. His red gloves complimented his shirt, as he picked up his beyblade.[/font][/font]

[font=.SF UI Text][font=.SFUIText]“That’s Ultra Centurion!” Paris yelled loudly. He soon widened his eyes and covered his mouth, as the two strangers turned.[/font][/font]

[font=.SF UI Text][font=.SFUIText]“I told you,” Charles muttered, “I’m not going home. Paris is unpredictable, and I’m not going to underestimate my opponents.”[/font][/font]

[font=.SF UI Text][font=.SFUIText]His older sister sighed.[/font][/font]
[font=.SF UI Text][font=.SFUIText]“It’s not about that. I think someone wants to see you,” she pointed to the bush.[/font][/font]
[font=.SF UI Text][font=.SFUIText]Paris gasped. “I thought this was a good hiding place!” He said softly.[/font][/font]

[font=.SF UI Text][font=.SFUIText]“You can come out,” Charles said, wiping his face. Paris did so, and bowed.[/font][/font]

[font=.SF UI Text][font=.SFUIText]“Wait, that’s not right,” Paris apologised, his face turning bright red. “Greetings! Uh, hola! Err, hi?”[/font][/font]

[font=.SF UI Text][font=.SFUIText]Charles and Paris exchanged each other a look. [/font][/font]
[font=.SF UI Text][font=.SFUIText]“Maybe people don’t have a sense of humour in the morning?” Paris mumbled.[/font][/font]
[font=.SF UI Text][font=.SFUIText]Charles placed Centurion in his launcher, which matched his outfit.[/font][/font]

[font=.SF UI Text][font=.SFUIText]“Look, Paris Hagane. If you have nothing to do with me, I suggest you leave.”[/font][/font]
[font=.SF UI Text][font=.SFUIText]Her sister frowned, turning to Charles.[/font][/font]
[font=.SF UI Text][font=.SFUIText]“Hey, that’s not nice!” She scolded.[/font][/font]

[font=.SF UI Text][font=.SFUIText]Turning back to Paris, she smiled.[/font][/font]
[font=.SF UI Text][font=.SFUIText]“Sorry about him. He’s just tired. My name’s Jamie.” [/font][/font]
[font=.SF UI Text][font=.SFUIText]Paris nodded, still uneasy.[/font][/font]
[font=.SF UI Text][font=.SFUIText]“I saw your battle with Valt. I gotta say, that was a close battle!”[/font][/font]

[font=.SF UI Text][font=.SFUIText]A bell seemed to have rung in Charles’ ears.[/font][/font]
[font=.SF UI Text][font=.SFUIText]“Y-you battled Valt?”[/font][/font]
[font=.SF UI Text][font=.SFUIText]“You haven’t heard?” Paris folded his arms. “Well then, I’ll show you what I’ve learned through battle!”[/font][/font]

[font=.SF UI Text][font=.SFUIText]Charles seemed to relax a little.[/font][/font]
[font=.SF UI Text][font=.SFUIText]“Challenge accepted. This is who you’ll be facing today, Ultra Centurion!” [/font][/font]

[font=.SF UI Text][font=.SFUIText]Paris made a [/font][font=.SFUIText-Italic]Woah! [/font][font=.SFUIText]expression. Ultra Centurion, a balance type, aggressively glowered at him.[/font][/font]

[font=.SF UI Text][font=.SFUIText]The layer was five sided, and consisted of red, black and white. [/font][/font]
[font=.SF UI Text][font=.SFUIText]There was a large ‘U’ in the middle, with metal feathers similar to Pegasus’.[/font][/font]

[font=.SF UI Text][font=.SFUIText]The bey’s disc, Penta, was in a pentagon shape. The frame, Five, stretched outward, aligning with the disc. Last but not least, came the driver, Revival, which was red, exactly like the disc. The gimmick remained a mystery to Paris, however.[/font][/font]

[font=.SF UI Text][font=.SFUIText]“Ready, set!”[/font][/font]
[font=.SF UI Text][font=.SFUIText]“Three!”[/font][/font]
[font=.SF UI Text][font=.SFUIText]“Two!”[/font][/font]
[font=.SF UI Text][font=.SFUIText]“One!” Paris and Charles leapt into the air, spinning.[/font][/font]
[font=.SF UI Text][font=.SFUIText]“Let it rip!”[/font][/font]

[font=.SF UI Text][font=.SFUIText]Immortal Pegasus circled along the outer rim of the stadium, and crashed into Ultra Centurion.[/font][/font]

[font=.SF UI Text][font=.SFUIText]Centurion wouldn’t budge, as Pegasus endlessly blew a chain of heavy attacks.[/font][/font]

[font=.SF UI Text][font=.SFUIText]“Enough’s enough,” Charles remarked, turning around and raising his arm into the air. “Ultra Revival!” [/font][/font]
[font=.SF UI Text][font=.SFUIText]Ultra Centurion’s driver, Revival, retracted inward, as Centurion jolted through the stadium.[/font][/font]

[font=.SF UI Text][font=.SFUIText]Immortal Pegasus was in perfect sync with Paris, following every direction.[/font][/font]
[font=.SF UI Text][font=.SFUIText]“You know the drill Pegasus! Immortal Starblast Attack!”[/font][/font]

[font=.SF UI Text][font=.SFUIText]Pegasus sloppily rode up the walls of the stadium, before crashing down onto the surface, losing its stamina.[/font][/font]

[font=.SF UI Text][font=.SFUIText]“No way!” he gasped. Paris could sense the grin forming on Charles’ face, but there was none. He seemed serious as ever.[/font][/font]

[font=.SF UI Text][font=.SFUIText]“Immortal Star-“ [/font][/font]
[font=.SF UI Text][font=.SFUIText]Paris was cut off, as he knew it was too late. Ultra Centurion, marching forward like a tank, was only a few seconds away.[/font][/font]

[font=.SF UI Text][font=.SFUIText]“Let’s try this again. Burst Strike!” Charles commanded, as a fiery red aura surrounded him.[/font][/font]

[font=.SF UI Text][font=.SFUIText]Centurion changed trajectory, tilting sideways, as its weight shifted. [/font][/font]
[font=.SF UI Text][font=.SFUIText]“Now!” Charles bellowed, as Ultra Centurion pummelled through Immortal Pegasus, bursting it immediately.[/font][/font]

[font=.SF UI Text][font=.SFUIText]Paris gasped, as he fell to the stone, cold floor. The three parts landed beside him[/font][/font].

Before the amber-haired boy could protest, Paris heard rustling through the bushes. A circular, black frame landed barrel-rolled, landing at his arm.

Charles didn’t seem to notice - he concentrated, firing Centurion into the stadium. Observing the frame, Paris widened his eyes.

“The Crown frame,” he mumbled, as Aiga and Taiki suddenly appeared out of nowhere, rolling out of the bushes and landing in front of the stadium.

Centurion rode up the stadium and landed perfectly into Charles’ glove.
“You brought visitors?” Charles turned to Paris.
The amber-haired boy shook his head. “They didn’t tell me they were coming.”

Brushing himself off, Aiga pinched Paris’ shoulder.
“Eh em, we’re his friends, not they,” Aiga corrected.
“Sorry,” Paris apologised. “What are you doing here anyway?”

Aiga scratched his head, and reached for something.
“Heard you were coming here. Decided to tag along,” he shrugged.

Taiki waved at Charles.
“Woah! Isn’t that your next opponent, Paris?” Taiki questioned.
Paris nodded.

Charles squinted, pointing toward the boy in the middle.
“You’re Aiga Akaba, aren’t you?”
“Sure am! That’s my name, don’t wear it out!” Aiga replied.

Charles seemed to chuckle for a brief moment. Paris turned to Jamie.
“What’s with the personality change?”
Jamie seemed happy to answer the question. “He’s just tired. It’s early in the morning, and he gets really serious when battling. Other than that, he’s a fun guy.”

Paris hoped she was right. Aiga rummaged through his pocket and brought out Cho-Z Achilles.

“Aiga Akaba, I’m a legendary blader. Thanks for bringing along your friends,” Charles smiled. “And I challenge you to a battle!”
Aiga smirked. “Sure thing. Don’t get too upset when I win, though.”

“Ready, set!”
“Three!”
“Two!”
“One!”
“Let it rip!”

Cho-Z Achilles was set in defense position. Ultra Centurion snakes along the outer rim, and farted through the stadium, crashing into Achilles.

“That all you can do?” Aiga remarked. “Cuz I can do way more.”
“Same here,” Charles responded, “Like this! Centurion Crash!”

Ultra Centurion hit the floor of the stadium, hurtling upward and landing onto Cho-Z Achilles, piercing through.
“Haah! Centurion, finish him!”

Paris knew that wasn’t possible. He recalled Aiga activating the Burst Stoppers, making Achilles impossible to bursting.

Cho-Z Achilles launched into the air, and landed at Aiga’s face.
“Attack mode!” he boomed, as Achilles’ Dimension driver shifted to an attack position.

Upon reaching the stadium’s surface, it’s speed drastically boosted, warping into Ultra Centurion, flinging it into the air.

“That’s not all I have!” Charles squalled. “Aerial Attack!”
Centurion’s beast suddenly appeared, a robot-like soldier marching. It fired a beam of fiery plasma from its hands, shooting it at Achilles.

Ultra Centurion gained more speed and momentum as it fell, landing onto Cho-Z Achilles, drilling into the layer.

Both beys clashed, expelling wind and energy from the stadium. Taiki, Paris and Aiga all covered their eyes as they knew this was only the beginning.

Centurion and Achilles were both swept from the wind, landing at their owner’s feet. Jamie stepped up to the stadium.
“Simultaneous Over Finish,” she declared. “No points.”

Taiki and Paris exchanged each other looks. There was a rising tension in the air. Paris felt his hands sweating, although the weather had been pretty bad.

“Ready for round two?” Charles grunted, panting heavily.
“You bet,” Aiga replied, puffing.

“Ready, set!”
“Three!”
“Two!”
“One!” Both bladers leapt into the air and spun, performing their launch.
“Let it rip!”

Cho-Z Achilles was set in attack mode. It spun crazily, and shot into Ultra Centurion, slamming it into the wall.

“End him, now! Super Z Buster!” Aiga leapt into the air, his hairband breaking apart, his maroon hair letting out.

Achilles’ beast appeared, an armoured crimson knight, slashing away with its sword.

Centurion was in the centre of the stadium. Cho-Z Achilles pinned Ultra Centurion to the stadium’s surface, hurtling Charles’ bey into the air.

Charles’ hair stood up, as he thundered, “It’s all over! Ultra Revival!”

The prongs on the Revival driver retracted inward, darting it across the stadium, as it gained a massive outburst in speed.

“No way!” Aiga gasped, sweat trickling down his face. “Now, stop him in his tracks! Super Z Shoot!”

Cho-Z Achilles climbed up the stadium of the walls, and dived down, striking Centurion, gaining momentum with every hit.

Ultra Centurion circled among the centre of the stadium, defending itself from the incoming attacks.

“Look at it go!” Taiki exclaimed, suspensefully. “Centurion won’t budge!”

Charles roared, “That was only the beginning! Centurion Fortress!”
Ultra Centurion gained an inferno-like aura around it, as Achilles’ barrage of attacks seemed useless.

Cho-Z Achilles flung into the air, gaining one click. It landed into the stadium wall, and rushed down.

“Super Z Sword!” He commanded. Two large swirls gathered around Achilles, as it pierced through Centurion’s shield.

Ultra Centurion rolled backward and slammed into the stadium wall, recoiling back into the centre, where it clashed with Cho-Z Achilles.

Everyone in the forest knew it was the endgame now. Achilles bounced back, as both beys crazily rushed through each other. Cho-Z Achilles immediately gained its last click.

“Congratulations on making it this far,” Charles blurted, his hair ruffled and messed up. “You could’ve backed away earlier, but it’s too late now.”

Aiga gulped, gasping. Jamie seemed uneasy herself, as if she’s never seen this side of Charles before.
“He’s just serious in battle,” she reminded him. Paris hoped Jamie was right.

Centurion backed away from the clash and launched itself into the air by riding the stadium’s walls. It channeled its energy like a bullet, id layer and disc aligning.

“Quintuple Attack!” Charles commanded. Ultra Centurion returned to the stadium floor, and dealt five massive attacks to Cho-Z Achilles.

“Super Z Defense!” Aiga cried, as a shield formed around Achilles, protecting itself.
“Not happening today!” Charles erupted. “Burst Strike!”

Centurion’s beast appeared once more, a robot soldier. It shot a blinding laser from its hand.

Ultra Centurion snaked around Achilles’ wall, finding a way to break through.
“Haaaah! Let’s show him everything we’ve got, Achilles!”

Cho-Z Achilles knocked back Ultra Centurion, launching it out. Just as everyone thought Centurion would lose by an Over Finish, it rebounded off of the stadium’s wall, gaining more speed as it went.

“Impossible!” Taiki gasped.
Centurion’s Burst Strike exploded Achilles’ shield, and both beys clashed.

As wind expelled from the stadium, Paris, Jamie and Taiki all covered their eyes.

Everything fell silent.. until a bursting noise was heard. Scanning the stadium, neither bey had burst.

Paris’ jaw literally dropped. Achilles’ Burst Stoppers had been pushed in by Ultra Centurion.

“Yes, we did it!” Charles celebrated, as Centurion spiralled around the outer edge of the stadium.

“I don’t need a Burst Stopper, or any special gimmick to prove how strong I am! That’s what strengthens me and Achilles’ bond!” Aiga shouted over the wind.

Achilles suddenly changed height, much to Charles’ surprise.
“Achilles! Super Z Slash!” Aiga commanded.

Achilles’ beast appeared for the final time, as its sword glinted miraculously. Two whips formed around the blade on Achilles, as it sliced through Centurion.

Centurion lost a click, as Achilles used the last of its stamina to defend itself in the centre.

Aiga suddenly gasped, recalling back to his battle with Hearts at the Dead Gran.
“Dead Gravity!” Aiga remembered Hearts call out. It wasn’t a pleasant moment.

Ultra Centurion cycled around Achilles.
“I’ve got you right where I want!” Charles grinned. He clenched his fists and punched through the air.

Cho-Z Achilles was repeatedly thrashed as it bounced around. Centurion seemed to have formed an indestructible ring around Achilles.

“Omni Attack!” Charles bawled finally. The ring got smaller and smaller, smaller and smaller. Centurion glowed up, its feathers going right through Achilles’ layer.

“Finish him!” Charles commanded. The ring vanished, as Achilles was shot into the air. A huge explosion of energy spread across the stadium, blinding everyone as they covered their eyes.

The sound of one bey losing two clicks was all to be heard. Followed by a bursting sound.

Aiga gasped, widening his eyes and falling to his knees. Taiki and Paris seemed just as shocked.

Charles panted heavily, almost collapsing. Achilles had burst into three parts, its Dimension driver still spinning.

Centurion had ran out of stamina, it lay dormant on the stadium’s floor. Every single person looked at Jamie, awaiting a response.

Jamie pointed to Charles proudly.
“Two points to Ultra Centurion for a Burst Finish! The score is now 2-0, meaning Charles wins!”

Taiki and Paris rushed to Aiga’s side, helping him up. Charles smiled, offering his hand to the Crimson Nova.

“That was a close match. Any further and, well,” Charles started. He demonstrated as he attempted to reach for Ultra Centurion, which burst in his hand. “See? Close call.”

Aiga nodded and smiled, wrinkling his nose.
“Good match,” he sighed.

Paris was still surprised. Had Charles just burst Cho-Z Achilles? And yet it took hours to land an Over Finish!

Charles pointed to Paris.
“Hope you know what you’re in for.”
Paris reached for Pegasus, glancing at it. “Sorry we lost. We’ll try harder.”

Taiki stepped in, reaching for Theseus.
“Come on Charles! Let’s battle, right here, right now!”

He nodded.
“Let it rip!” Both bladers cried in unison.

Within seconds, Charles closed his eyes and turned around, raising his fist into the air, as wind dragged away from the stadium.

Theseus burst immediately, landing at Taiki’s feet. Taiki shook his head, his eye twitching.

Paris turned to Jamie.
“He’s not trying,” Paris observed. “Unlike his battle with Aiga.”
Jamie nodded, agreeing.

It was early in the morning, time for breakfast. Jamie walked over to Charles.
“You’ve been training for six hours now. Come on buddy, let’s go home.”

As the two departed, Aiga stood up and brushed himself off. Pointing to Paris, he seemed serious.

“If you can’t beat me, I don’t know why you think you can beat Charles,” Aiga decreed. “It’s going to be a lot harder from now on. You’re going to need to step up your game.”

Woah, sorry guys. I don’t know what the weird ‘font’ thing is popping up, I can’t really fix it.

RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - BounduAtakku - Mar. 18, 2019

What happened to z REVOLUTION?

RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - Beyblade Sensei - Mar. 18, 2019

Dude did you make me mean? Nice descripion tho

Dude "uC farted throght the staduim" (srry bout spelling)

RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - Sir Saitama - Mar. 18, 2019

(Mar. 18, 2019 3:43 PM)Beyblade Sensei Wrote: Dude did you make me mean? Nice descripion tho

Dude "uC farted throght the staduim" (srry bout spelling)

Okay, first of all, I’ve explained it in the story, you’re a serious blader and you’re tired, it’s 3am. I’d also really appreciate it if you wouldn’t judge everything I write. It’s most likely a typo, and as a writer, I have to balance out many other things. Perhaps you should be grateful that I’m writing? And two, I don’t see ‘UC farted through the stadium.’

(Mar. 18, 2019 12:11 PM)BounduAtakku Wrote: What happened to z REVOLUTION?

I don’t write that anymore

RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - Beyblade Sensei - Mar. 18, 2019

(Mar. 18, 2019  8:01 PM)Sir Saitama Wrote:
(Mar. 18, 2019  3:43 PM)Beyblade Sensei Wrote: Dude did you make me mean? Nice descripion tho

Dude "uC farted throght the staduim" (srry bout spelling)

Okay, first of all, I’ve explained it in the story, you’re a serious blader and you’re tired, it’s 3am. I’d also really appreciate it if you wouldn’t judge everything I write. It’s most likely a typo, and as a writer, I have to balance out many other things. Perhaps you should be grateful that I’m writing? And two, I don’t see ‘UC farted through the stadium.’

(Mar. 18, 2019  12:11 PM)BounduAtakku Wrote: What happened to z REVOLUTION?

I don’t write that anymore

uC = Ultra Centurion. Sorry I should thank you for making Charles sooooo OP. XP

i dont know why i texted the same mesagge 3 times

RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - BurningSands - Mar. 18, 2019

(Mar. 18, 2019  9:59 PM)Beyblade Sensei Wrote:
(Mar. 18, 2019  8:01 PM)Sir Saitama Wrote: Okay, first of all, I’ve explained it in the story, you’re a serious blader and you’re tired, it’s 3am. I’d also really appreciate it if you wouldn’t judge everything I write. It’s most likely a typo, and as a writer, I have to balance out many other things. Perhaps you should be grateful that I’m writing? And two, I don’t see ‘UC farted through the stadium.’

I don’t write that anymore

(Mar. 18, 2019  8:01 PM)Sir Saitama Wrote: Okay, first of all, I’ve explained it in the story, you’re a serious blader and you’re tired, it’s 3am. I’d also really appreciate it if you wouldn’t judge everything I write. It’s most likely a typo, and as a writer, I have to balance out many other things. Perhaps you should be grateful that I’m writing? And two, I don’t see ‘UC farted through the stadium.’

I don’t write that anymore

(Mar. 18, 2019  8:01 PM)Sir Saitama Wrote: Okay, first of all, I’ve explained it in the story, you’re a serious blader and you’re tired, it’s 3am. I’d also really appreciate it if you wouldn’t judge everything I write. It’s most likely a typo, and as a writer, I have to balance out many other things. Perhaps you should be grateful that I’m writing? And two, I don’t see ‘UC farted through the stadium.’

I don’t write that anymore
uC = Ultra Centurion. Sorry I should thank you for making Charles sooooo OP. XP

i dont know why i texted the same mesagge 3 times

at least be mature about their writing. Writing is tiring, especially with advanced and entertaining works. Seems like you hadnt learned to be respectful, given this response of yours Uncertain

RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - Sir Saitama - Mar. 19, 2019

(Mar. 18, 2019 10:52 PM)XSabxManiacX Wrote:
(Mar. 18, 2019 9:59 PM)Beyblade Sensei Wrote: uC = Ultra Centurion. Sorry I should thank you for making Charles sooooo OP. XP

i dont know why i texted the same mesagge 3 times

at least be mature about their writing. Writing is tiring, especially with advanced and entertaining works. Seems like you hadnt learned to be respectful, given this response of yours

Thank you so much! If there were upvotes I’d give you a million. But yes, I can’t stress enough that it’s tiring to write, but I do it out of interest and enjoyment. As the saying goes, you can’t please everyone. Smile

RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - Beyblade Sensei - Mar. 19, 2019

I will stick to reading.

And ideas.

RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - BurningSands - Mar. 19, 2019

(Mar. 19, 2019 2:08 PM)Beyblade Sensei Wrote: I will stick to reading.

And ideas.

You are allowed to judge, but please dont harass their writing

RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - Beyblade Sensei - Mar. 19, 2019

(Mar. 19, 2019 2:55 PM)XSabxManiacX Wrote:
(Mar. 19, 2019 2:08 PM)Beyblade Sensei Wrote: I will stick to reading.

And ideas.

You are allowed to judge, but please dont harass their writing

Their writing?

RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - BurningSands - Mar. 19, 2019

(Mar. 19, 2019 5:48 PM)Beyblade Sensei Wrote:
(Mar. 19, 2019 2:55 PM)XSabxManiacX Wrote: You are allowed to judge, but please dont harass their writing

Their writing?

Youre allowed to say "nice chapter!" or "i have a suggestion." But please dont do things like pointing out every small thing about Saitama's story. At this point, youre trying to find ways to NOT like the story. If you keep doing this, you can stop reading and Saitama can take your character out. Disrespect is really rude

RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - CheetoBlader - Mar. 19, 2019

(Mar. 19, 2019 8:30 PM)XSabxManiacX Wrote:
(Mar. 19, 2019 5:48 PM)Beyblade Sensei Wrote: Their writing?

Youre allowed to say "nice chapter!" or "i have a suggestion." But please dont do things like pointing out every small thing about Saitama's story. At this point, youre trying to find ways to NOT like the story. If you keep doing this, you can stop reading and Saitama can take your character out. Disrespect is really rude

??????????? Best Post Of the WBO!

RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - BounduAtakku - Mar. 19, 2019

Do you still take character requests?

RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - Sir Saitama - Mar. 19, 2019

Last time on Beyblade Burst Zero! Paris sneaks out of home at night and ultimately finds his next opponent training, Charles Schwab! After defeating Paris, Taiki and even Aiga, Paris knows he needs to train!

Chapter 4 - Immortal Stormbringer! Pegasus vs Centurion!

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Paris felt like his legs were turning to jelly. He’d make him hurl a rock from one side of the school to the other.

“Paris,” Aiga warned sternly, “I understand you’re tired. But you need to train to beat Charles!”

Nodding, Paris held out Pegasus.

“How about a few battles, then?”

Aiga’s face immediately lit up.

Taiki held his hand in the centre of the stadium, as Paris could clearly see that battles would be different from now.

Paris guessed this was from experience. He’d battled Phi and Hearts, both of whom were almost impossible to defeat.

“Ready, set!”

“Three!”

“Two!”

“One!” Paris and Aiga both leapt into the air, spinning, as Paris immediately slipped, landing on his back.

“Let it rip!”

Pegasus immediately hurtled toward the wall and bounced off, losing a click.

“If only I could push in the burst stopper..”

Cho-Z Achilles came rushing down with a scorching chain of attacks.

With nowhere to move, Pegasus burst, landing at Paris’ feet.

Taiki burst out laughing.

“Can I make the name for that move? The Pegasus Plummet!”

Paris rolled his eyes, and wiped away the sweat.

“Come on, another battle!”

Aiga agreed, shrugging.

“—-One!” The Crimson Nova and Paris ran, leaping into the air and spinning.

“Let it rip!”

Immortal Pegasus dashed into the centre and crammed around it.

“Now Achilles!” Aiga yelled, as Cho-Z Achilles charged down at incredible speeds.

Pegasus quickly dodged the impending attack, however Paris knew there were more.

Immortal Pegasus shot upward and circled around the stadium, crashing into Cho-Z Achilles.

Both beys clashed, before Aiga commanded, “This is our chance! Super Z Sword!”

Achilles’ beast appeared, an armoured red knight. Its sword gleamed.

Cho-Z Achilles knocked Pegasus, but it barely survived, rebounding off the wall and losing a click.

“Phew,” Paris sighed.

Achilles made his way for a second round. It pressed into Pegasus, giving it barely no chance to escape.

Pegasus flung into the air and not before long, Paris shouted,

“Let’s do this! Immortal Starblast Attack!”

Pegasus’ beast appeared, a white winged-horse. It galloped and charged forward.

Immortal Pegasus dived down, arrowing into Achilles’ burst stopper.

“Come on.. come on...”

“Enough!” Aiga roared, “Super Z Slash!”

Two fiery whips emerged from either side of Achilles, as it slashed at Pegasus, making it lose another two clicks.

“One more click to go,” Aiga mumbled.

“That is, if you can beat this! Immortal Stormbringer!”

Aiga gasped, Taiki spitting out his drink.

Pegasus rushed to the centre of the stadium, as Paris’ lightning-bolt necklace flared. The bey rushed around, and captured Achilles into the tornado, widening its range.

“Now! Take him down!” Paris exclaimed. Cho-Z Achilles attempted to escape, but Immortal Pegasus blocked it, shooting Achilles into the sky.

As Aiga picked up Achilles, he noticed the Burst Stoppers push in.

“Wow! Paris, you took down Achilles’ wings!”

“I did?” The amber-haired boy leapt into the air excitedly, “I did it!”

Taiki was still in shock.

“Sweet! Now, take Charles down and earn yourself a place in the quarterfinals!”

Glancing over at Aiga, he nodded, and Paris looked down at Pegasus.

“We’ll fight together, Pegasus!”

“Ladies and gentlemen, welcome to a highly anticipated match! In the red corner, we have Charles Schwab!”

Charles emerged from a door, and waved at the crowd, as they cheered for him.

“And in the blue corner, we have the boy who took the world by surprise! Paris Hagane!”

Paris ran eagerly and landed in front of the stadium.

“Nice to see you again, Paris,” Charles smiled.

Paris raised an eyebrow. “Sorry, but you seem.. different?”

“Thanks. Only kidding, I’m just serious during battle.”

Paris nodded. The room fell silent, as his eyes dawned on Pegasus.

“Let’s do this buddy.”

“First battle! Ready, set!”

“Three!”

“Two!”

“One!” The two bladers jumped, spinning and firing their beys.

“Let it rip!”

Ultra Centurion captured the centre inmediately.

“Centurion Fortress!” he yelled.

An orb-like ring surrounded Centurion, defending it as Pegasus dived down for a rush of attacks.

Pegasus jolted back, and warped into Centurion from all kinds of directions. Nonetheless, Centurion wouldn’t budge.

Immortal Pegasus rebounded and zoomed from the wall, ready to land a damaging attack onto Centurion.

“Dodge it!” Charles exclaimed, his red gloves glinting. Ultra Centurion rolled backward, and Immortal Pegasus slammed into the wall, losing stamina.

“Not good,” Aiga observed from the sidelines. Meanwhile, Roan was still watching. He seemed silent, but curious.

As Pegasus performed a flower-pattern attack, Centurion took advantage and cycled around it, making a Dead-Gravity style move.

The ring got smaller and smaller. Attempting to escape, Centurion thwarted each move.

“Now! End this, Centurion!” Immediately, Pegasus lost two clicks. Paris knew Pegasus was going to burst, and it’d be all over for him.

Luckily for Paris, Pegasus flung out of the stadium, and hit the floor, bursting afterward.

The replay button repeated what just happened.

“One point to Ultra Centurion for an Over Finish. The score is now 1-0,” the referee announced, pointing to Charles.

Charles grinned, picking up Centurion.

“Now let’s finish him off in the next battle.”

Aiga and Taiki both relieved a sweat.

“Phew,” Taiki said, “Close call.”

“We can’t keep relying on close calls, though.”

“Ready, set!”

“Three!”

“Two!”

“One!” Both bladers performed their special launches.

“Let it rip!”

Both Centurion and Pegasus immediately clashed in the centre, tossing wind and outbursts of energy out of the stadium.

“Take him down Centurion!”

“You know the drill, Pegasus!”

Both beys continued to clash, until one click was down. Pegasus was driven to the outer rim of the stadium, and Centurion in hot pursuit.

“Now’s our chance Centurion! Burst Strike!”

Centurion’s beast appeared, a robot-like soldier.

It sped up dramatically, flinging Pegasus into the air.

“Oh no you don’t! Immortal Starblast Attack!”

Pegasus tilted downward and fired into Centurion, flinging it into the air.

“Hah! It’s like an endless cycle!” Taiki exclaimed.

“Centurion Crash!” Charles erupted. Centurion bounced onto Pegasus, hurling both beys into the stadium wall.

“Haaaaah!” They both roared, as the two beys endlessly struck each other with scorching hot attacks.

“End this!” They cried in unison, as both beys flung into their blader’s faces, bursting.

The crowd exploded with excitement, as the referee pointed to both bladers.

“Simultaneous Over Finish! No points!”

Charles and Paris both panted, and prepared for round three.

“Third battle! Ready, set!”

“Three!”

“Two!”

“One!” Paris used his Supernova Shoot.

“Let it rip!

Immortal Pegasus rushed into Ultra Centurion with a chain of cosmic attacks.

“Let’s turn this up a notch, Centurion! Ultra Revival!”

Centurion’s beast appeared, a robot soldier. The bey spiralled along the outer edges of the stadium before diving down with amazing speed and attacks.

“No way!” Paris gasped, as Pegasus was thrown into the air. “Fight together! Immortal Starblast Attack!”

Pegasus’ beast appeared, a white-winged horse, galloping through the cosmos.

Immortal Pegasus bolted down and pierced through Ultra Centurion, knocking both beys into the air.

They both recovered, and Ultra Centurion took the centre.

“Heat the battle up, Pegasus! Rush him!”

A strong chain of attacks swept through Centurion, however it wouldn’t budge.

“Come on, Paris! You can do it!” Aiga boomed.

Paris gasped, turning away from the stadium and looking at Aiga. The Crimson Nova nodded, giving a thumbs-up.

Then, the entire crowd chanted Paris’ name. He felt a sudden burst of confidence, as Pegasus glowed, climbing the stadium walls and darting back down, expelling its power into one massive attack.

Centurion’s fortress broke, as its trajectory changed. Charles leapt into the air, his hair raising.

“Burst Strike!”

Ultra Centurion snaked around the stadium, viciously pinching Pegasus, making it lose a click.

Both beys crazily rushed each other, as they both drained each other’s stamina.

“Hold on, Centurion!”

“You can do it, Pegasus!”

Charles had a trick up his sleeve. As if pulling a card, he commanded,

“Now! Omni Attack!”

Aiga and Taiki gasped. Unfortunately for Pegasus, it was caught between Centurion’s ring.

Pegasus bounced around, attempting to escape, but it was within Centurion’s grasp. The ring closed, decreasing in size.

Then suddenly, Immortal Pegasus circled around the stadium, trailing a blue flash behind it.

Paris’ lightning bolt necklace flared.

“Now! Immortal Stormbringer!”

Charles gasped, as he had never heard the move name before.

Hanami tuned his microphone.

“Wow! Omni Attack against Immortal Stormbringer! Look at those beys go!”

Pegasus’ barrier extended, pressing against Centurion’s. After the dust cleared, Ultra Centurion’s barrier broke, leaving Pegasus capturing Centurion.

“Hah! I’ve always wanted to say this, but I got you right where I want!” Paris giggled a little.

Immortal Stormbringer closed and got smaller and smaller, smaller and smaller, until...

A beam of blue light shot upward, dragging Ultra Centurion along.

“Hang in there, Centurion!”

Ultra Centurion managed to escape, barely, landing onto Pegasus’ layer. It crashed down, bursting upon impact.

Charles gasped. The crowd cheered, as Aiga and Taiki leapt out of their seats and exclaimed,

“We knew you could do it!”

Charles hair covered his eyes, but he blew it away.

“Good job..” he said, sinking his fist into the floor.

Paris smiled, offering his hand.

“You did really good! I want you to take this.”

Charles glanced up, a little shocked. Paris handed him a Centurion-style BeyBread, as Charles quickly nibbled it.

“And there’s more of those at the BeyClub!” Paris smiled.

“Well count me in!” Charles added.

The referee finally pointed to Paris.

“Two points for a Burst Finish! The score is now 2-1, making Paris Hagane the winner! He moves on to the Quarterfinals.

“What an amazing win! Both blazers must be exhausted!”

Paris stared off into the screen, which showed the remaining bladers. Including himself, there were six left. His photo was paired up with a boy with a cheerful smile.

His bey read, Flash Trident!

There you go! Chapter 5 will be Ocean Training! Gateway to the Quarterfinals!

RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - Beyblade Sensei - Mar. 19, 2019

Two part chapters my favorite.?????

Bey ? oh yeah ?

And a bey club

How do you make a thread

RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - Sir Saitama - Mar. 20, 2019

(Mar. 19, 2019 9:59 PM)Beyblade Sensei Wrote: Two part chapters my favorite.?????

Bey ? oh yeah ?

And a bey club

How do you make a thread

Thanks! Chapter 5 will be dropping soon!

(Mar. 19, 2019 8:58 PM)BounduAtakku Wrote: Do you still take character requests?

Yep, I do! Fire away, just give me a good description of a character.

RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - Sir Saitama - Mar. 23, 2019

Chapter 5 - Ocean Training! Gateway to the Quarterfinals!

Spoiler (Click to View)

“I love the ocean!” Paris exclaimed, diving head-first into the water. Charles and Aiga were having an intense volleyball match, whilst Taiki shook a crab off of his hand.

Charles slammed the volleyball, pouncing into the air. “I call this the Aerial Attack!” he joked.

Aiga flinched, dropping the ball.

“I’ll get it!” Paris exclaimed, running after it.

The boy was sidetracked however, by what seemed to be the sound of a ship. The four dashed to the pier, as a boy with a beige trench coat and light-blue hair stood on the boat.

The boat was large, and docked by the side. The boy leapt off the boat and landed on his feet, tossing the ball into Paris’ arms as he caught it.

The mysterious boy gave a cheerful grin, as Taiki, Charles and Aiga all ran up to him.

“Toko!” they cried in unison.

“Hey guys,” he said. “I’m back from Spain.”

Paris felt slightly excluded, but Toko turned to him.

“Who’s this?”

Paris grinned. “Son of Gingka Hagane of course! I’m Paris!”

Toko gasped. “You’re the Paris Hagane?”

Paris nodded. Aiga stepped in, raising his hand like a student.

“Whatcha doing in Spain?”

Toko replied, “Went to Raul. He helped me evolve Screw Trident into Flash Trident!”

The boy revealed his bey. It had three rubber patches on each side, and a large metal trident that went across the layer.

The disc, 0, Paris recognised on Cho Z Spriggan and Emperor Forneus. Perhaps Toko had a connection with Shu?

The frame, Barrier, had many round spikes around it, like Bump, but was split into two thick platforms, which was able to be customised.

The driver, Dome, had a wide tip with a large perimeter, joining up to an apex. The side of the driver had a ring on a large pole.

“Raul’s gotten heaps better,” Aiga stifled a laugh.

Toko smiled, pointing back to the ship, “Well, I gotta go. Wanna tag along?”

Everyone’s eyes lit up, as they followed Toko onboard. On the main deck, was a huge stadium. Multiple cannons were placed around the stadium.

Taiki fiddled with one cannon.

“That doesn’t work,” Toko said.

Taiki frowned, walking over to the stadium.

“What?” Paris’ jaw fell to the stadium. “You mean to tell me you’re Valt’s younger brother?”

Everyone rolled their eyes, nodding.

Charles headed over to the cockpit, pointing to the wheel. “I got some experience with that,” he said.

“Oh yeah, and by the way, Paris is your next opponent for the tournament,” Aiga interrupted.

Toko turned to Charles. “Sorry, we can talk ships later.” He ran over to the stadium.

There was a pause of silence. “Flash Trident and I will take you down!” Toko challenged.

Paris searched for his pockets and pulled out Immortal Pegasus.
“Not if we can’t help it!”

Charles exclaimed, “I’ll be the ref’! Ready, set!”
“Three!”
“Two!”
“One!” Paris spun and leapt into the air.
“Let it rip!”

Flash Trident took the centre, its avatar hovering over the bey.
“Now Pegasus!” Paris cried, Immortal Pegasus zooming around Trident. “Immortal Stormbringer!”

A wave of endless clashes proceeded, Trident taking on each hit with ease. Pegasus’ beast appeared, as Trident shot up.

“Flash Counter!” Toko exclaimed. Trident’s beast appeared, a spearman wielding a trident.

Flash Trident ascended downward, crashing into Immortal Pegasus. Pegasus was flung into the wall, but it managed to keep doing.

“Not enough to take us down!” Paris remarked. “Go, go, go!”
Immortal Pegasus rushed through Trident.

Trident tilted on its driver, charging its momentum.
“Here it comes,” Taiki commented on the sidelines.
“Final Flash Strike!”

Paris had a bad feeling about this. Just then, a beam of water erupted from the stadium, the waves violently crashing against the ship.
“I’m gonna get sick,” Taiki belched.

Trident suddenly changed its height, as Pegasus dived in for another blow. This time, only the driver got attacked.
“Gah!” Paris couldn’t believe what he was seeing.

“The secret’s in the spring,” Toko winked. “And the secret to winning isn’t to be caught off-guard.”
“Huh?” Paris gazed at him cluelessly.
“Now Trident! Final Flash Sting!”

Trident’s layer scaled down to its usual height, with Pegasus uppercutting its driver.
A large crunching sound was followed by Pegasus bursting into three parts.

“Take on Achilles!” Aiga challenged, as Paris seated himself on a bench.
“And Theseus!”
“Don’t forget Centurion!”

Paris smiled at Pegasus, “I’m sorry buddy. I shouldn-“ He paused, then shook his head. “No, we’ll try harder!”

By the time he refocused his attention to the stadium, Theseus had already burst.

Achilles clawed at Trident from one side, Centurion on the other.
“Let’s go Centurion! Burst Strike!” Charles commanded.

Ultra Centurion, like an arrow, struck Trident, knocking it backward, hurtling off the stadium and spinning mid-air.

“Final Flash Sting!” Trident’s trajectory changed, as it sneakily landed onto the side of Centurion’s layer, grabbing ahold of it. Trident lowered its height and tossed Ultra Centurion into the air.

“It’s not over!” Charles shouted. Centurion landed near Achilles, as it accidentally burst upon impact.

“Sorry Charles!” Aiga said.
“It’s fine,” he laughed it off. “You got revenge at least.”
Aiga nodded, returning his attention to the battle.

Trident and Cho-Z Achilles clashed in the middle of the stadium.
“Super Z Shoot!” Achilles, with a red trail behind it, warped into Trident.
“Flash Counter!” Trident’s height decreased, giving it a greater amount of speed.

Both beys clashed again as both flung out of the stadium.
“Good match!” Toko panted.
“Y-yeah. Good match,” Aiga was just as exhausted.

Paris checked his pockets and saw a dusty photo of him and his father.
He hadn’t seen him since he was five. As the owner of the WBBA, Gingka was pretty busy.

He noticed the ship docking back at the pier. It had started to rain, thankfully. Toko waved the four goodbye.

Taiki hopped out first, then Aiga, then Charles, fist-bumping Toko.
“Let’s decide the better blader tomorrow, yeah?”
Paris smiled, “Yeah.”

Toko fell backwards, as Paris gasped. Giving him a thumbs-up, Toko completely submerged himself underwater.

Paris arrived home. The place just felt empty. Bellyflopping onto the couch, he opened his TV, broadcasting his favourite channel.

“Ladies and gentlemen! The District Tournament is soon coming to an end! Tomorrow we have Paris vs Toko, and the winner will face Daniel Aziel! Not to mention, of course, the winner of that will have the chance to face Roan and Revenge!”

The screen displayed numerous occasions of other bladers bursting against Smash Revenge.

“He’s that strong?” Paris wondered. He held his launcher outward. “We’re gonna show Toko who’s boss!”

I haven’t forgotten about the story, don’t worry. :P I’ll try to drop another few chapters today, since I got free time.

RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - Sir Saitama - Mar. 23, 2019

Chapter 6 - Vortex! Flash Trident!

Spoiler (Click to View)

“Ladies and gentlemen! Today we have two famous bladers, going head-to head!” Hanami jumped out of his seat.

It was the final match of the quarterfinals, and Daniel had already eliminated all the semi-finalists.

Toko emerged from one corner, and Paris spotted Valt, next to Roan. In one corner, an unimpressed blader folded his arms.

“Hope you’re ready,” Toko smiled.

“You bet I am! All this hard work better pay off!”

“First battle!” The referee called.

“Ready, set!”

“Three!”

“Two!”

“One!” Paris jumped and spun mid-air.

“Let it rip!”

Immortal Pegasus took the first blood, by pouncing onto Trident, which shifted away, entering the ‘attack zone.’

“Now Pegasus! After it!” Paris curled his fists, punching the air. As Trident attempted to escape, Pegasus blocked each try.

“That’s like the Flash Launch,” Toko pointed out. “Another reason to believe you and Valt are alike.”

Paris quickly ingested the comment, as Pegasus swarmed Flash Trident with an endless amount of attacks.

“But let’s see if you can get through this! Trident, use your Final Flash Strike!”

Trident’s avatar appeared, the spearman wielding a trident. Before Pegasus could deal another devastating blow, Flash Trident extended its driver height.

“Not again!” Paris said tensely. Immortal Pegasus, from all sorts of directions, slammed into Trident with incredible amounts of speed.

Toko grinned, “A+ for speed. But F- if you can’t take on this!” Trident proceeded to lower its height. Within seconds, Paris knew what would happen. The sound of a bursting bey lingered in his mind.

Immortal Pegasus’ speed backfired. It travelled around the stadium a dozen times, before crashing into the wall, losing one click.

Pegasus quivered, and scraped among the stadium’s surface.

“No! Pegasus!” Paris hollered. Before it could capsize fully, it tilted on the back of its layer, like a wheel.

Flash Trident pinned Pegasus down, attempting to compress the bey. With Pegasus sideways, it was almost impossible to change Trident’s height.

Aiga, Taiki and Charles all had trouble deciding who to vote for. Same scenario with Valt, as Toko was his younger brother.

“That was a smart move!” Aiga praised. Taiki seemed confused.

“They’re both our friends, how can you cheer for one?”

Aiga replied, “Well, I’m not. I’m cheering for both!”

Both beys duelled for a prolonged amount of time, until... Flash Trident, when in its taller mode, was prone to recoil.

Trident shot out of the stadium and landed at Toko’s feet.

“One point to Immortal Pegasus for an Over Finish! The score is now

1-0!” The referee declared.

The crowd cheered.

“Wow, would you look at that! Paris scores himself a point!” Hanami was easily just as excited.

Meanwhile, Daniel made the same bored expression as earlier. Paris figured he’d get along well with Lui.

“Second battle!” The referee hosted.

“Ready, set!”

“Three!”

“Two!”

“One!” Paris used his Supernova Shoot.

“Let it rip!”

Thanks to his special launch, Pegasus made a decent job at maintaining stamina.

Flash Trident guarded itself in the middle of the stadium. Immortal Pegasus swarmed it once more with spectacular attacks.

Trident refused to budge, as the rubber patches on its layer absorbed each and every one.

Flash Trident finished taking on each blow, as it used its energy in an outburst, sniping Pegasus into the wall.

It simply shot upward, in time for,

“Immortal Starblast Attack!”
Pegasus’ avatar appeared, the white divine winged-horse.

“Now! Spread your wings Pegasus!” Paris commanded. Immortal Pegasus rained down, showering Trident with a delivery of heavy attacks.

Toko shunted his hand forward, “Trident! Flash Counter!”

Flash Trident, exiting the middle of the stadium, narrowly avoided slamming into the wall. Instead, it jolted right into Immortal Pegasus.

Pegasus rebounded off the wall and made a sudden decrease in stamina. Trident retreated back into the stadium.

“Immortal Stormbringer!” Paris exclaimed. Pegasus snaked around Trident a dozen times, forming a ring as it gradually closed, shooting Flash Trident upward.

“No!” Toko seemed set back a little, as if he wasn’t expecting it to happen.

Trident and Pegasus were both drained of stamina, making the attacks minimal.

“Supernova Shoot!” Paris roared. Pegasus was close to bursting, but it managed to pull off a surge of power one last time.

Pegasus made its way to Trident, both beys mimicking each other’s movements.
“Finish him, Pegasus!”

With a tiny ‘clink!’ Trident burst, Pegasus depleted of stamina. The referee pointed to Paris.
“Two points to Immortal Pegasus for a Burst Finish! The score is now 3-0, making Paris the winner!”

Paris leapt into the air with excitement.
“All right!” he celebrated.

Toko walked over to Paris, shaking his hand.
“Congrats on beating me!”
Paris replied, “Let’s battle again sometime!”

Meanwhile, the room’s lighting dimmed, as a spotlight fixed on both Paris and Daniel.

“Ladies and gentlemen! The next match will be an intense one, the final match of the Semi-Finals will be Paris against Daniel!”

Daniel walked out of the building.
“That dude’s got sass,” Taiki commented.
Paris glanced at Pegasus, glimmering under the lights.
“We’ve made it this far. No holding back!”