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RE: Total control (now accepting character requests!) [beyblade story] - DRAGON KING - Dec. 02, 2013
@kyler_thebest lol, I just thought of 9,000 cause I saw the RPMs on a BBG vid, do u want a character?
RE: Total control (now accepting character requests!) [beyblade story] - RagerBlade - Dec. 02, 2013
I love it! I'll do a request later when I have time. Keep this awesome work up!
RE: Total control (now accepting character requests!) [beyblade story] - DRAGON KING - Dec. 02, 2013
Thanks
The OP now is updated with chapter 5!
RE: Total control (now accepting character requests!) [beyblade story] - ★WindStarElite★ - Dec. 02, 2013
Its Funny That I'm an 5'4 body guard Atill its really Idealistic. I like it can't. Wait to see chapter. 6
RE: Total control (now accepting character requests!) [beyblade story] - DRAGON KING - Dec. 02, 2013
OP updated with chapter 6, I'm really sorry about the length
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RE: Total control (now accepting character requests!) [beyblade story] - DRAGON KING - Dec. 02, 2013
Sorry for the double post, but chapter 7 Is in the OP
RE: Total control (now accepting character requests!) [beyblade story] - ★WindStarElite★ - Dec. 02, 2013
The Suspense is killing me What will happen to. Ace! Dang suspense
RE: Total control (now accepting character requests!) [beyblade story] - DRAGON KING - Dec. 02, 2013
(Dec. 02, 2013 6:18 AM)XKai_DranzerX Wrote: The Suspense is killing me What will happen to. Ace! Dang suspense
Will ace die or will he live?!?!?!?!, who knows
??? just gotta wait and see
RE: Total control (now accepting character requests!) [beyblade story] - Madness - Dec. 02, 2013
Can i join i wanna be Omega,personality Mysterious,nice,but he also loves to see the hope burn out of his opponents eyes xD,good or evil? nobody knows,bey:Girago dragoon SA165ewd or if its not zero-g Diablo kerbecs w145 EWD
RE: Total control (now accepting character requests!) [beyblade story] - DRAGON KING - Dec. 02, 2013
Ok sure.
Chapter 8 is in the OP!!!
RE: Total control (now accepting character requests!) [beyblade story] - DRAGON KING - Dec. 03, 2013
Chapter 9 is in the OP!!! I will have chapter 10 up today hopefully
EDIT: I hope people still want to read this
RE: Total control (now accepting character requests!) [beyblade story] - ★WindStarElite★ - Dec. 03, 2013
I like the new Chapter Its pretty good can't wait for chapter 10
RE: Total control (now accepting character requests!) [beyblade story] - DRAGON KING - Dec. 03, 2013
Thanks xkai_dranzerx
Ok the final chapter is up, but I'm planning on doing multiple stories with the same characters
in this thread P.S. character requests are welcome
RE: Total control (now accepting character requests!) [beyblade story] - ★WindStarElite★ - Dec. 03, 2013
Lol That was. Amazing Lol ace Came. Out Of nowhere I was very Surprised my self . X)
RE: Total control (now accepting character requests!) [beyblade story] - Draciel Boy - Dec. 04, 2013
Cool story! I like it.
RE: Total control (now accepting character requests!) [beyblade story] - Airus - Dec. 05, 2013
Can u bring my character in the story plz?
Name: Jake Hagane
Bey: Bandit Ifrit ED145UB (Ultimate ball)
Appearance: Medium black hair with grey jacket. Black gloves and wears a belt similar to Gingka's, and wears blue jeans with black boots.
Personality: Very strong and is very short tempered. Very serious while in battle, and hates to be betrayed.
Backstory: Gingka Hagane's son. Was abandoned as Gingka went on a training journey.
Original story: Blurred Light
For any extra info on Jake see my story Blurred Light [Beyblade Story]
RE: Total control (now accepting character requests!) [beyblade story] - DRAGON KING - Dec. 05, 2013
Could u use a real performance tip? What about TB?
RE: Total control (now accepting character requests!) [beyblade story] - Airus - Dec. 05, 2013
Sure. UB is just a wider B variant, but ok.
I could use a WB or FB. UB is a combo of WB and FB.
RE: Total control (now accepting character requests!) [beyblade story] - DRAGON KING - Dec. 05, 2013
So which one do you want? B, WB, FB, TB etc.
RE: Total control (now accepting character requests!) [beyblade story] - Airus - Dec. 05, 2013
FB please
RE: Total control (now accepting character requests!) [beyblade story] - Bladerguy2 - Dec. 06, 2013
Name: Tyoka
Bey: Dark Night Horuseus(Vulcan horuseus 145 D in all black)
Age: 13
Gender: Male
Info: Hyoma's son. Hyoma was captured by the DNA and Tyoka had to make money. So Tyoka became a Blader For Hire. Ginka reminded Tyoka what it means to be a blader.
Appearance: Blue shirt(with popped collar) and light blue stripe down the middle. Jeans With chains outlining the pockets. Vans, Brown hair(bangs over one eye) When the battle gets heated his hair turns black and stands up.
OTHER: Has a curse laid upon him(ill tell you the story for the book if u want) and battles can be dangerous. If Tyoka goes to far he and his bey are engulfed in black flames, and a dark power controls them.
There
RE: Total control (now accepting character requests!) [beyblade story] - Ryukiba - Dec. 06, 2013
woah! Epic chapters 6-10! lol I had stopped on chapter 5 and i was able catch up!
This story is amazing!
RE: Total control (now accepting character requests!) [beyblade story] - DRAGON KING - Dec. 06, 2013
Thanks! Ill try to start the other story as soon as I can
RE: Total control (now accepting character requests!) [beyblade story] - Airus - Dec. 07, 2013
(Dec. 06, 2013 1:59 AM)MinecraftAdict Wrote: Name: Tyoka
Bey: Dark Night Horuseus(Vulcan horuseus 145 D in all black)
Age: 13
Gender: Male
Info: Hyoma's son. Hyoma was captured by the DNA and Tyoka had to make money. So Tyoka became a Blader For Hire. Ginka reminded Tyoka what it means to be a blader.
Appearance: Blue shirt(with popped collar) and light blue stripe down the middle. Jeans With chains outlining the pockets. Vans, Brown hair(bangs over one eye) When the battle gets heated his hair turns black and stands up.
OTHER: Has a curse laid upon him(ill tell you the story for the book if u want) and battles can be dangerous. If Tyoka goes to far he and his bey are engulfed in black flames, and a dark power controls them.
There
This request was on my story, correct?
DRAGON KING, you should accept this one, Tyoka is a good character to work with.
RE: Total control (now accepting character requests!) [beyblade story] - DRAGON KING - Dec. 07, 2013
Yep, I'm gonna have the next chapter up by possibly today
