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+--- Thread: Bey Series - The Four Pillars, Chapter 5 is up! Review Please! (/Thread-Bey-Series-The-Four-Pillars-Chapter-5-is-up-Review-Please)
RE: (Beyblade Story) The Edge (accepting character requests) - ★WindStarElite★ - Aug. 25, 2013
True XD Unless I sign in into my other acc I forgot the passwy two So I created this one and give you a sidekick for that evil person
RE: (Beyblade Story) The Edge (accepting character requests) - LimiTTrickster - Aug. 25, 2013
Also make sure to rate my story on Tue poll.
RE: (Beyblade Story) The Edge (accepting character requests) - Rnold201 - Aug. 25, 2013
This is q pretty good story so far, considering its on your phone.
RE: (Beyblade Story) The Edge (accepting character requests) - LimiTTrickster - Aug. 25, 2013
Guys, I'm allowing fire element for today and tomorrow so you better give your character requests quick.
RE: (Beyblade Story) The Edge (accepting character requests) - LimiTTrickster - Aug. 25, 2013
I have added 60% of chapter 2, the rest, I will put up tomorrow morning, or even today night. Let me know how it is.
RE: (Beyblade Story) The Edge (accepting character requests) - Rnold201 - Aug. 25, 2013
It is quite good but I expected there to be more detail on the battle rather than just that, so I may change my vote to ok from pretty good. Don't take this as offense, I am trying to help out.
RE: (Beyblade Story) The Edge (accepting character requests) - ★WindStarElite★ - Aug. 25, 2013
Can I put fire element in my descrpition then.
RE: (Beyblade Story) The Edge (accepting character requests) - LimiTTrickster - Aug. 25, 2013
Um.. You'll have to make a side character or I'll allow one special move to be chqnged to fire
RE: (Beyblade Story) The Edge (accepting character requests) - ★WindStarElite★ - Aug. 25, 2013
Ok I'll change one special move.
RE: (Beyblade Story) The Edge (accepting character requests) - Ryukiba - Aug. 25, 2013
Second chapter's cool! Lol Ryu's a bey mechanic!
Also can I change one special move to a fire element?
RE: (Beyblade Story) The Edge (accepting character requests) - LimiTTrickster - Aug. 25, 2013
Yes, you can all do that, just post the move soon, as I am working on chapter 3 right now. Ryukiba your charactecr is not a beymechanic, she just knows a lot about beys which is why she can make beyblades and improve them.
RE: (Beyblade Story) The Edge (accepting character requests) - Ryukiba - Aug. 25, 2013
Oh cool! that sounds like the real me!XD I'm going to change one special move to fire!
RE: (Beyblade Story) The Edge (accepting character requests) - LimiTTrickster - Aug. 25, 2013
Like I said, post it SOO preferably in the next hour.
RE: (Beyblade Story) The Edge (accepting character requests) - ★WindStarElite★ - Aug. 25, 2013
Awesome I can't wait for chapter three and awesome skills ryukiba
RE: (Beyblade Story) The Edge (accepting character requests) - Ryukiba - Aug. 25, 2013
(Aug. 25, 2013 9:27 PM)XKai_DranzerX Wrote: Awesome I can't wait for chapter three and awesome skills ryukiba
Yeah can't wait either! And thanks!
RE: (Beyblade Story) The Edge (accepting character requests) - LimiTTrickster - Aug. 25, 2013
I've added chapter 3, and I will make it bigger tomorrow(hopefully).
RE: (Beyblade Story) The Edge (accepting character requests) - ★WindStarElite★ - Aug. 25, 2013
Ok great.Im going to love it.
RE: (Beyblade Story) The Edge (accepting character requests) - LimiTTrickster - Aug. 25, 2013
How was it, feed back is appreciated, rather than sayng it is awesome, put more detail and actually tell me how it was.
RE: (Beyblade Story) The Edge (accepting character requests) - Ryukiba - Aug. 25, 2013
Ok lol!XD I rated it!
RE: (Beyblade Story) The Edge (accepting character requests) - ★WindStarElite★ - Aug. 25, 2013
It was how do you say great it was fasted paced s bit but the new level UPS ir upgrades are really. Unique to. Our bets it shows our personality and eb
RE: (Beyblade Story) The Edge (accepting character requests) - LimiTTrickster - Aug. 26, 2013
Yeah this was short chapter but now the new ones will be at least 1.5 pages Lon word.
RE: (Beyblade Story) The Edge (accepting character requests) - ★WindStarElite★ - Aug. 26, 2013
Lol sorry I was typing. To fast on my phone so its messy but I'm filled in joy for chapter4
RE: (Beyblade Story) The Edge (accepting character requests) - LimiTTrickster - Aug. 26, 2013
I'll pm you what is coming up in q mo
RE: (Beyblade Story) The Edge (accepting character requests) - ★WindStarElite★ - Aug. 26, 2013
Ok great that way I can help you.
RE: (Beyblade Story) The Edge (accepting character requests) - LimiTTrickster - Aug. 26, 2013
Also ill try not to rush the battles this time. Thanks for the input.