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RE: beyblade stories - pocketpulls - Sep. 15, 2012
Be nice, guys. You wouldn't like if someone spoke to you like that. He might be a little kid for all we know.
If you don't like what he is doing, ignore it. Don't write meaningless rude posts. It is nice that you're trying to help him and all, but if he wont take it, don't worry about it.
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Quote:im not a kid i just write on my phone and i try to take their advice but its like im still doing stuff wrong
A PM he sent me. Do whatever you want guys, looks like he just doesn't care.
RE: beyblade stories - ghost22 - Sep. 15, 2012
Just write about what you want me to do.Like what to put when the characters are talking.What to put when the characters are doing something.What other grammar problems are in the story because im not understanding.
its ok to say something good about my stories to.Just saying
thanks guys im trying my best
RE: beyblade stories - beybladefoever - Sep. 15, 2012
this stories about to get better *suspicous laugh*
RE: beyblade stories - Eternal-E - Sep. 15, 2012
(Sep. 15, 2012 6:33 AM)beybladefoever Wrote: this stories about to get better *suspicous laugh*
or worse *cherry bomb* *suspicious laugh*
RE: beyblade stories - beybladefoever - Sep. 15, 2012
story+story= better story
RE: beyblade stories - ghost22 - Sep. 15, 2012
chapter 8
Spoiler (Click to View)
RE: beyblade stories - Dual - Sep. 15, 2012
Script format? Interesting. Geting better but in the third line i believe, there were exclamation points after the quotations. Also, spend more time on the battles. The battles are very important in a beyblade story so focus on them a lot.
RE: beyblade stories - ghost22 - Sep. 15, 2012
having trouble putting all the stories on one page
RE: beyblade stories - beybladefoever - Sep. 15, 2012
if you read my story it will reveal something about this story *hint hint jason is in my story*
hey leone its ok you dont have to put it on on post
RE: beyblade stories - ghost22 - Sep. 15, 2012
i dont wanna continue on this because to many negative comments
RE: beyblade stories - K!d Death - Sep. 15, 2012
(Sep. 15, 2012 4:41 PM)kyoya321 Wrote: i dont wanna continue on this because to many negative commentsWell that's no reason to stop.They're trying to give you advice on how to be a better writer
RE: beyblade stories - beybladefoever - Sep. 15, 2012
then ill continue it on my thread
RE: beyblade stories - ghost22 - Sep. 15, 2012
people arent even reading this.when they do its negative
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RE: beyblade stories - beybladefoever - Sep. 15, 2012
just take there advice the negative comments are the ones that teach you stuff most the time
RE: beyblade stories - wtater888 - Sep. 15, 2012
(Sep. 14, 2012 4:27 PM)kyoya321 Wrote: i fixed all gramar problems.if you see any more gramar problems juss quote it and point it out pleaseWell to start out it should be like this
I fixed all the grammar problems. If you see any more grammar problems just quote it and point it out please.
I think it has a chance. My first story was bad and then I fixed it.
RE: beyblade stories - Dual - Sep. 15, 2012
Ok did you not read this thread? I already said that and try to give constructive critisism.
RE: beyblade stories - ghost22 - Sep. 15, 2012
its getting better?
RE: beyblade stories - Dual - Sep. 15, 2012
Yes. Keep it up and alwill be well
RE: beyblade stories - ghost22 - Sep. 15, 2012
im re-doing all the chapters
RE: beyblade stories - beybladefoever - Sep. 15, 2012
Ok but what oh i know why
RE: beyblade stories - ghost22 - Sep. 16, 2012
wow this a hot thread to buy i want to close this resume it on my new thread [beyblade story]