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RE: (New Story)Beyblade X Generation(Updated And Fixed) - Beychamp76 - Aug. 18, 2012
yup because he is outgoing but no one knows that he is one of the best bladers
RE: (New Story)Beyblade X Generation(Chapter 5 is up) - MasterBlader-X - Aug. 18, 2012
Great story. Can't wait till the next chapter comes.
RE: (New Story)Beyblade X Generation(Chapter 5 is up) - flashbladerX - Aug. 18, 2012
hey kid keep going dont give up little kid and you can make money with that story maybe
RE: (New Story)Beyblade X Generation(Chapter 5 is up) - ElementalDude97 - Aug. 18, 2012
(Aug. 18, 2012 6:07 AM)flashbladerX Wrote: hey kid keep going dont give up little kid and you can make money with that story maybe
dude really-___-...
what do you mean little kid!I am one year younger than you!
RE: (New Story)Beyblade X Generation(Chapter 5 is up) - JCx06 - Aug. 18, 2012
I think that the plot is great, but you really should try to use less speech. *Show, don't tell.
RE: (New Story)Beyblade X Generation(Chapter 5 is up) - ElementalDude97 - Aug. 18, 2012
(Aug. 18, 2012 6:31 AM)JCx06 Wrote: I think that the plot is great, but you really should try to use less speech. *Show, don't tell.
Ok I will!Chapter 6 will be added later on the day!some pics too maybe late night!
RE: (New Story)Beyblade X Generation(Chapter 5 is up) - Beychamp76 - Aug. 18, 2012
Great story bro
Your improving really fast just like your beyblading skills
RE: (New Story)Beyblade X Generation(Chapter 5 is up) - ElementalDude97 - Aug. 18, 2012
(Aug. 18, 2012 10:47 AM)Beychamp76 Wrote: Great story bro
Your improving really fast just like your beyblading skills
Thanks!
RE: (New Story)Beyblade X Generation(Chapter 6 is up) - MasterBlader-X - Aug. 19, 2012
In chapter 6 you put Thunder Fox. Need to fix that. Other then that it's great!
RE: (New Story)Beyblade X Generation(Chapter 6 is up) - ElementalDude97 - Aug. 19, 2012
(Aug. 19, 2012 2:50 AM)MasterBlader-X Wrote: In chapter 6 you put Thunder Fox. Need to fix that. Other then that it's great!
Oh really!I didn't notice thanks!!!
RE: (New Story)Beyblade X Generation(Chapter 6 is up) - Beychamp76 - Aug. 19, 2012
It's great
RE: (New Story)Beyblade X Generation(Chapter 6 is up) - ElementalDude97 - Aug. 19, 2012
I can't do another chapter if I don't get another character!
Beychamp76:I will do your character drawing soon!
RE: (New Story)Beyblade X Generation(Chapter 6 is up) - BeatFox - Aug. 20, 2012
character request
name:Chris Roland
bey:Grand Cetus WD145 RS
looks
verything blue or white(clothes,eyes,hair,bandana,)personality:He believes he is one with the ocean and will say it countless times, he will go to help or destroy anyone he feels to
Special Move:WAVE DEFENSE(water spins with left rotation around the bey preventing a hit to cetus and lowering the attacks stamina)WATER WAVE STRIKE(water turns into the whape or a narwhals horn and cetus slams into the other bey
RE: (New Story)Beyblade X Generation(Chapter 6 is up) - Zero X - Aug. 20, 2012
character request
Name:Ryan
Age:12
bey:L drago Destroy LW160CF
looks:Black hair with a white sleeve black jacket with blue jeans and black sneakers with light skin
personality:Mysterious and he dont like to pick on the weak as he dont fight pointless battles and destroy whatever bey that challenge him he loves blading but can be kind if he wanted too but he only seeks out to beat every strong blader and declare himself the only true strongest blader
special move: Emeror death grip
Your story improving spark
RE: (New Story)Beyblade X Generation(Chapter 6 is up) - ElementalDude97 - Aug. 20, 2012
(Aug. 20, 2012 4:25 PM)Zero X Wrote: character requestThanks I will do your character like in chapter 8 or 9!after beatfox character...
Name:Ryan
Age:12
bey:L drago Destroy LW160CF
looks:Black hair with a white sleeve black jacket with blue jeans and black sneakers with light skin
personality:Mysterious and he dont like to pick on the weak as he dont fight pointless battles and destroy whatever bey that challenge him he loves blading but can be kind if he wanted too but he only seeks out to beat every strong blader and declare himself the only true strongest blader
special move: Emeror death grip
Your story improving spark
RE: (New Story)Beyblade X Generation(Chapter 6 is up) - ElementalDude97 - Aug. 21, 2012
sorry guys i haven't been doing the chapters... but tomorrow i will do chapter 7 and 8!and some new pics of characters will be added tomorrow!
RE: (New Story)Beyblade X Generation(Chapter 6 is up) - wingedpegasus - Aug. 21, 2012
The story is good.Although it still needs a little more work!
RE: (New Story)Beyblade X Generation(Chapter 7 is up) - BeatFox - Aug. 22, 2012
I like this chapter alot but i did not expect you to make chris bad but im fine with it
RE: (New Story)Beyblade X Generation(Chapter 7 is up) - ElementalDude97 - Aug. 22, 2012
(Aug. 22, 2012 2:19 AM)BeatFox Wrote: I like this chapter alot but i did not expect you to make chris bad but im fine with iti just wanted to make a twist in the story!specially since no one has seen Aiden and Keenan beyblades or their background story...
RE: (New Story)Beyblade X Generation(Chapter 7 is up) - BeatFox - Aug. 22, 2012
i understand its all good, i guess we cant expect to know whats next in ur story
RE: (New Story)Beyblade X Generation(Chapter 7 is up) - Eternal-E - Aug. 23, 2012
nice story. interesting beys.
RE: (New Story)Beyblade X Generation(Chapter 7 is up) - ElementalDude97 - Aug. 23, 2012
(Aug. 23, 2012 1:02 AM)Eternal-E Wrote: nice story. interesting beys.
Check out the drawings at the top of the first post
RE: (New Story)Beyblade X Generation(Chapter 7 is up) - Eternal-E - Aug. 23, 2012
leom reminds e of leon from beywheelz
RE: (New Story)Beyblade X Generation(Chapter 7 is up) - ElementalDude97 - Aug. 23, 2012
(Aug. 23, 2012 1:05 AM)Eternal-E Wrote: leom reminds e of leon from beywheelz
I know right!!!but I did this drawing 2 years ago when it was summer vacation and I was about to go to 8 grade!*its just weird*...I kinda fixed the drawing a bit from how it was before I changed where the launcher and beyblade is.
RE: (New Story)Beyblade X Generation(Chapter 7 is up) - Zero X - Aug. 23, 2012
Cool drawings