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RE: bob, the bey breaker{story} - Dual - Aug. 14, 2012
Tournament and Technique. Still needs a bit of improvement.
RE: bob, the bey breaker{story} - Eternal-E - Aug. 15, 2012
i fiished chapter 5!
RE: bob, the bey breaker{story} - MasterBlader-X - Aug. 15, 2012
In chap 5 who will Ally face up with?
RE: bob, the bey breaker{story} - Eternal-E - Aug. 15, 2012
(Aug. 15, 2012 7:30 AM)MasterBlader-x Wrote: In chap 5 who will Ally face up with?Sokka Stewart.
RE: bob, the bey breaker{story} - MasterBlader-X - Aug. 15, 2012
I don't get it. In chap 4 the sheet said Ally and now on Chap 5 it say Sokka. Whats up with that?
RE: bob, the bey breaker{story} - Eternal-E - Aug. 15, 2012
(Aug. 15, 2012 7:38 AM)MasterBlader-x Wrote: I don't get it. In chap 4 the sheet said Ally and now on Chap 5 it say Sokka. Whats up with that?Ally and Sokka are mentioned in bolth chapters. i don't know what you're trying to say.
RE: bob, the bey breaker{story} - Eternal-E - Aug. 15, 2012
Chapter 6 is complete!
RE: bob, the bey breaker{story} - MasterBlader-X - Aug. 15, 2012
You need to make your chapters longer. And is that all that happenned in the fights? They end to quickly.
RE: bob, the bey breaker{story} - Eternal-E - Aug. 15, 2012
(Aug. 15, 2012 8:53 PM)MasterBlader-x Wrote: You need to make your chapters longer. And is that all that happenned in the fights? They end to quickly.
That was basicly a bonus chapter. I couldnt think of anything so I just wrote that Gingka is better than Tyson.
RE: bob, the bey breaker{story} - Eternal-E - Aug. 18, 2012
Chapter 8 is done! after 8 chapter's this one is DEFINATELY in the top 10. and things get a little romantic between a couple characters too.
RE: bob, the bey breaker{story} - dragondrone - Aug. 19, 2012
Yeagh! CHAPTER 9 IS UP! great story bro.
RE: bob, the bey breaker{story} - ElementalDude97 - Aug. 23, 2012
Awesome story!
I just can't believe they kissed...and you should write more details in your chapters because we don't know how ally and mike met...
RE: bob, the bey breaker{story} - Eternal-E - Aug. 23, 2012
chapter two.
RE: bob, the bey breaker{story} - ElementalDude97 - Aug. 23, 2012
(Aug. 23, 2012 12:52 AM)Eternal-E Wrote: chapter two.
I know how they met-__- I meant to say is why did alley just joined the battle out if nowhere...
RE: bob, the bey breaker{story} - Eternal-E - Aug. 23, 2012
she heard a battle from the woods, wanted to be a random person, and jumped in!
RE: bob, the bey breaker{story} - dragondrone - Sep. 02, 2012
are you just gonna cut it short at chapter 9, bro?
RE: bob, the bey breaker{story} - Eternal-E - Sep. 02, 2012
well, with school and stuff and also work... i have very little time to write the rest of this.
RE: bob, the bey breaker{story} - bladeshredder02 - Sep. 02, 2012
:0 awsome story it was the best can u make another one put me in it my name is zeronie my bey is dark fireblaze i dont know the track but its the same as dark wolfes spin track and a sf perfomance tip
p.s.im the leader of team lightning launchers
RE: bob, the bey breaker{story} - Eternal-E - Sep. 02, 2012
so.. dark fireblaze df145sf? cool. is it ok if i just shorten it to zero?
RE: [story]Bob, the Bey Breaker. (chapter 10 is up) - dragondrone - Oct. 15, 2012
Seems as if chapter 10 is up. nice work E.
RE: [story]Bob, the Bey Breaker. (chapter 10 is up) - Eternal-E - Oct. 15, 2012
That is exactly what's up. Working on chapter 11 after number 10 of my other story.