World Beyblade Organization by Fighting Spirits Inc.
Fakir and Fakir's duck Writing Reviewing - Printable Version

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RE: Fakir and Fakir's duck Writing Reviewing - Duck - Apr. 28, 2012

(Apr. 28, 2012  3:59 AM)Akio314 Wrote: Could you please review mine, check my avatar for the main character.

PM Fakir or me your story, please.


RE: Fakir and Fakir's duck Writing Reviewing - Damaged - Apr. 28, 2012

Akio your story was kinda hard to follow at first but it has its kinks and diologe goes like thi

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RE: Fakir and Fakir's duck Writing Reviewing - Kai-V - Apr. 28, 2012

You can seriously just write those reviews in the stories' respective threads. If you want to review so much, then you should take the responsibility of visiting people's story topics.