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RE: WBO Writing Links and Reviewing Company! - Cygnus - Jan. 29, 2012
Just pick any story and review it.
RE: WBO Writing Links and Reviewing Company! - Temporal - Jan. 29, 2012
Oh, okay. That was more what I was hoping for.
RE: WBO Writing Links and Reviewing Company! - .:J:. - Jan. 30, 2012
I might do one later, if thats ok?
RE: WBO Writing Links and Reviewing Company! - Cygnus - Jan. 30, 2012
That would be fine. I'm currently doing another one, by request.
RE: WBO Writing Links and Reviewing Company! - litlleboy92 - Feb. 02, 2012
I sent ______ a review. (This is a bump) Please make sure to check it, ______.
RE: WBO Writing Links and Reviewing Company! - Cygnus - Apr. 16, 2012
I'm open for a review. (bumpitybump)
RE: WBO Writing Links and Reviewing Company! - Duck - Apr. 16, 2012
Name: Duck
Writing experience: The first story I wrote was The Elements Combined. I have not ditched the story, but I have moved on to a new story. I also write poems and songs. My (unfinished) story, Bound by the Bey: Sekenorou's Reign, can be viewed here at the WBO. Please click the link below my signature to view it.
Best paragraph I can do:
The night was cold and dark. Her bare feet pressed into the mud. The nearby creatures sensed her presence, her power, but they sensed something else, too. She continued to walk, heading towards the cliff where the violet flower's petals fell... slowly... softly. The wind rushed, carrying the petals away, each like a person's last breath, fading away into the night. Her pace quickened. Finally, she had reached the cliff, but she was too late. The flower was dead. Through her tears, she could hear something faintly familiar in the distance. It was a lonely, sorrowful cry. It was the fearsome howl of a wolf.
RE: WBO Writing Links and Reviewing Company! - Cygnus - Apr. 16, 2012
(Apr. 16, 2012 6:57 PM)Fakirs Duck Wrote: Name: Duck
Welcome... Duck.
RE: WBO Writing Links and Reviewing Company! - XXaron - Apr. 20, 2012
I got an invite fron Duck, and I decided to take it. Finally I won't be raging about grammar for no reason!
Name you want to be called by: XXar, Xaron, X, aron, XX, etc. Any varient will do.
Writing Experience: I am currently writing Everything Spins Into Chaos (Beyblade story) which was my first actually good story of any length. I wrote some short stories before that either I finished or abandoned due to a lack of ideas. I also have helped edit other stories, and of course if you've seen any of my posts of stories... you can tell I prefer ver, very good grammar.
Best Paragraph you can do: The small candle sputtered, casting strange ethereal shadows across the cave's wall. The small group of people, their clothes rags, huddled together for warmth. Outside, a unending blizzard raged, freezing anything that lived in their tracks. Many people in the group already passed, and the others used their bodies for what little heat and food they would offer. The small group knew that the end was near for all of them. All of them except for one, that is.
RE: WBO Writing Links and Reviewing Company! - TakasuMouce - Apr. 21, 2012
Name: Takasu
Writing Experience : Got 1st place in the pledge essay competition for NY (6th Grade)
Average of 98 in LA. Also currently writing a story.
Age: 12/11
My best paragraph:
Takasu's life has always been hard. Ever since he was a mouseling, he has been dismayed at the thought of his mother being muredered. She was killed by Coridite Doni, who hasn't been caught by police yet. It has been 10 long years, and Takasu hasn't forgotten. Flashbacks ran though his mind, so vivid, so real. He remebered the night; it was rayless. He remembered screaming, with was then cut off. He remembered the crimson red blood, dripping onto the ground. He remembered how he felt; he was nebulous, yet still he was frozen in fear, so helpless, unable to to anything to stop the horrible moment. Takasu blinked, and the lifelike images dissolved from mind, and they sunk to the bottom of his memories. But it wont be long before they find a way to float right back up from the immeasurable ocean of memories.
RE: WBO Writing Links and Reviewing Company! - akio314 - Apr. 21, 2012
Would you review my work? Search Beyblade ABBS. Please review it, I've had it for months and it has zero posts besides mine.
RE: WBO Writing Links and Reviewing Company! - litlleboy92 - Apr. 22, 2012
I sent BBP a PM and she didn't reply back.
RE: WBO Writing Links and Reviewing Company! - Temporal - Apr. 22, 2012
Sent in my first review!
RE: WBO Writing Links and Reviewing Company! - BeybladerPotter - Apr. 23, 2012
(Apr. 22, 2012 5:54 PM)litlleboy92 Wrote: I sent BBP a PM and she didn't reply back.Sorry sorry. I'm still on a vacation and the WiFi isn't that good. I was to reply but I guess I forgot after the connexion got cut. I'll do the story tomorrow since my flight is at midnight.
RE: WBO Writing Links and Reviewing Company! - Cygnus - Apr. 23, 2012
(Apr. 22, 2012 11:39 PM)Temporal Wrote: Sent in my first review!
Got it! Thanks. I'm on my phone now, so I can't put it in the OP at the moment, but I'll do it this evening.
RE: WBO Writing Links and Reviewing Company! - BeybladerPotter - Apr. 24, 2012
I'm currently reviewing your story, litlleboy92. But can I ask something? Cygnus or Temp? May either of you review mine? If it isn't too much trouble.
RE: WBO Writing Links and Reviewing Company! - Temporal - Apr. 25, 2012
I'll try.
RE: WBO Writing Links and Reviewing Company! - .:J:. - Apr. 25, 2012
by the way I'm back and ready to review some stories if you guys want?
RE: WBO Writing Links and Reviewing Company! - Temporal - Apr. 29, 2012
Bah. It's hard to review without my ranty nature. My last review wasn't so great, either. I'll have to get better.
RE: WBO Writing Links and Reviewing Company! - Cygnus - Apr. 29, 2012
(Apr. 29, 2012 6:02 PM)Temporal Wrote: Bah. It's hard to review without my ranty nature. My last review wasn't so great, either. I'll have to get better.
I think it was fine. Aren't getting many reviews in. And the ones that I have, the people I have assigned them to haven't done them yet.
RE: WBO Writing Links and Reviewing Company! - Duck - Apr. 29, 2012
(Apr. 29, 2012 6:22 PM)Cygnus Wrote:(Apr. 29, 2012 6:02 PM)Temporal Wrote: Bah. It's hard to review without my ranty nature. My last review wasn't so great, either. I'll have to get better.
I think it was fine. Aren't getting many reviews in. And the ones that I have, the people I have assigned them to haven't done them yet.
Uh... Cygnus... there are at least two people that have posted an application for admission. Aren't you gonna reply? I'm becoming tempted to do it myself, I've been watching so long!
RE: WBO Writing Links and Reviewing Company! - akio314 - Apr. 29, 2012
Could anyone review "N!GHTMARE"?
RE: WBO Writing Links and Reviewing Company! - Cygnus - Apr. 29, 2012
(Apr. 29, 2012 7:44 PM)Fakirs Duck Wrote: Uh... Cygnus... there are at least two people that have posted an application for admission. Aren't you gonna reply? I'm becoming tempted to do it myself, I've been watching so long!
Did you not check the OP? You and Moderator are there.
RE: WBO Writing Links and Reviewing Company! - Duck - Apr. 29, 2012
(Apr. 29, 2012 7:53 PM)Cygnus Wrote:(Apr. 29, 2012 7:44 PM)Fakirs Duck Wrote: Uh... Cygnus... there are at least two people that have posted an application for admission. Aren't you gonna reply? I'm becoming tempted to do it myself, I've been watching so long!
Did you not check the OP? You and Moderator are there.
I am reffering to XXaron and Takasu. They have been waiting for awhile, and their posts are thirteen above mine.
RE: WBO Writing Links and Reviewing Company! - TakasuMouce - Apr. 29, 2012
I'm Takasu. I changed my username.
