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RE: Dranzer GT Draft - th!nk - Nov. 22, 2011 Actually guys, after some googling, methinks Phoenix may be right. Our spin gear page mentions a middle clutch, and wikipedia mentions it resembling final clutch and being exclusively used on Dranzer gt. (That said wikipedia also says "the two gt beys", sooooo...) I guess it's a more sensitive final clutch or something :s http://www.worldbeyblade.org/Thread-Ask-a-question-get-an-answer-New-Thread-Rules?pid=39668 RE: Dranzer GT Draft - Benjohadi - Nov. 22, 2011 oh..shoot..yeah..PI is right...apologize for you PI... Quote:BB: Miccle Clutch Base ( Dranzer GT version) Thanks Th!nk RE: Dranzer GT Draft - th!nk - Nov. 22, 2011 I would make clear that it's clutch is unique, as that is certainly notable. A quick description would be nice, it always stands out in my memory, eheh :3 RE: Dranzer GT Draft - Benjohadi - Nov. 22, 2011 (Nov. 22, 2011 3:38 AM)Benjohadi Wrote:Quote:BB: Miccle Clutch Base (Dranzer GT version) like this Th!nk? on the edited section for AR,is it ok to replace? RE: Dranzer GT Draft - Phoenix Inferno - Nov. 23, 2011 (Nov. 22, 2011 3:46 AM)Benjohadi Wrote:(Nov. 22, 2011 3:38 AM)Benjohadi Wrote:Quote:BB: Middle Clutch Base (Dranzer GT version) Great edit, that miccle clutch was bothering me. I also spaced a period out. RE: Dranzer GT Draft - Benjohadi - Feb. 18, 2012 Made some edit on EG and BB section..th!nk,can you have a look...also th!nk confirmed on the middle clutch bb.. XD RE: Dranzer GT Draft - th!nk - Feb. 18, 2012 I'll check it out later, I'm working on a rewrite already, but I've got a lot on my plate at the moment, haha. Also, it *is called* final clutch, but it supposedly kicks in faster than other final clutch bases. RE: Dranzer GT Draft - Benjohadi - Feb. 18, 2012 alright..feel free to post yours later..haha.. so themabe is "final clutch" but it works as "middle clutch"? haha RE: Dranzer GT Draft - th!nk - Feb. 18, 2012 It's based off yours, so keep writing. You have a good understanding of the beyblade and that is by far the most important thing, all I do is include what I know and then write it like anyone else can, as long as they understand what you mean, which is easy. Keep writing. Heck, someone has to write a desert sphinxer article, don't they? Man, this music seminar is all about this kind of stuff. Anyway, just making sure you (and others) don't feel discouraged by my rewriting and such RE: Dranzer GT Draft - Benjohadi - Feb. 18, 2012 haha..lol..many would get discourage by your insanely good,meaningful articles..haha..hope my spirit dont go down yet...haha i would like to try on the article..but one thing really bother me..i dont really want to play with mine...hahah XD RE: Dranzer GT Draft - Mc Frown - Feb. 18, 2012 Unfortunately, each one of the Triangle Wing has two slopes making the AR suitable for both right and left spin, but it caused the upper attack evenly distributed as it sacrifices half of it's attack ^this is whawhawhat RE: Dranzer GT Draft - Benjohadi - Feb. 18, 2012 (Feb. 18, 2012 5:44 PM)Mc Frown Wrote: Unfortunately, each one of the Triangle Wing has two slopes making the AR suitable for both right and left spin, but it caused the upper attack evenly distributed as it sacrifices half of it's attacklol..it was beyphilosopher draft.. so i think... Quote:Each one of the Triangle Wing has two slopes making the AR scan be used efficiently for both right and left spin, however, shortened the upper slope in which making Upper Dragoon still a better choice for Upper Attack.how about that? RE: Dranzer GT Draft - Benjohadi - Feb. 21, 2012 did the draft in beywiki format..but i'm not sure if the coding is OK or not..feel free to point out if there is any mistakes... ADDITION:Thanks th!nk.. you're a big help.. RE: Dranzer GT Draft - th!nk - Feb. 21, 2012 Not bad, the first sentence under the TOC isn't neccessary (that part is only for products that lack an item number or whatever). Pretty good, though I think I might cut back on the links, as is done on wikipedia, and keep the linking to the first time something is mentioned other than for really relevant spots. But good job. I will get around to rewriting this for you real soon, hopefully today RE: Dranzer GT Draft - th!nk - Feb. 21, 2012 Rewrite complete. Weights taken from my own parts on my scale, tired of the old ones being to 1g and not very accurate. Weights manually adjusted based off a 50g calibration weight's reading (49.97g), and only given to .1g, at least until I can get a 200g calibration weight which is what I need for my scale. Enjoooyyyyy. Quote:{{Beybox By the way, Benjohadi, your writing is improving rapidly. Take a look at mine and compare it to yours in terms of formatting and style, and try to avoid repeating yourself, and soon enough your articles will be as good as any (though in terms of facts, you are definitely one of the better plastics writers :3) RE: Dranzer GT Draft- DONE! - Benjohadi - Feb. 21, 2012 yeah..the description on the AR is quite short but full with required info about it..haha and now..the only left id the pictures... i dont think there is other release right? thanks for the praised th!nk..haha RE: Dranzer GT Draft- DONE! - th!nk - Feb. 21, 2012 Yep, that's the point, concise but comprehensive All we need is the main image, haha, the gallery can wait longer. Nope, no other releases. Only other colour I've seen is that photoshopped black one (which was a photoshop, I tracked down the source). I'm surprised/disappointed there was never a Dranzer GT Tournament Prize Set, but yeah. Hey, just being honest, always good to have more writers RE: Dranzer GT Draft- DONE! - Benjohadi - Feb. 21, 2012 if it does..i bet..it would more expensive than Dragoon GT one..only if i can get them cheap,i would like to make self painting tournament set..haha so yeah...i think this article is finallize now.. cant wait to see it on beywiki.. RE: Dranzer GT Draft- DONE! - Imperial - Feb. 21, 2012 Quote: it's left spin slopes are longerIt should be "its". Quote: it the best AR for left-spin [[Upper Attack.Shouldn't there be brackets on the other side of Upper Attack? Quote: patterns, and lucky KO'sI think it should be KOs. RE: Dranzer GT Draft- DONE! - th!nk - Feb. 21, 2012 Fixed, thanks. RE: Dranzer GT Draft- DONE! - Benjohadi - Feb. 21, 2012 updated the OP with th!nk's latest article.. EDIT:pictures posted by Nocto is added to the OP.. thanks Nocto for great pics.. RE: Dranzer GT Draft- DONE! - th!nk - Jul. 24, 2012 This should be just about ready. I want to fiddle around with the BB/SG now I have a complete dranzer GT and see if there's anything else worth noting but if anyone else wants to go over the version in the OP and offer any pointers (it's been a while since this was worked on, haha), that'd be nice. RE: Dranzer GT Draft- DONE! - Benjohadi - Jul. 31, 2012 i find this part of sentence is quite confusing.. Quote:While its slopes are slightly shorter than those of [[Master Dragoon|Master Dragoon's]] Upper Dragoon, making it marginally less effective in right spin, its left spin slopes are longer, making it the best AR for left-spin [[Upper Attack]].so itry to make it less confusing but a bit lengthy.. Quote:== Attack Ring (AR): Triangle Wing == RE: Dranzer GT Draft- DONE! - th!nk - Jul. 31, 2012 Good point but I find your fix sounds a little repetitive. Try this: Quote:Its Right Spin slopes are slightly shorter than those of [[Master Dragoon|Upper Dragoon]], making it marginally less effective in that spin direction, however in Left Spin, its slopes are much longer than [[Master Dragoon|Upper Dragoon's]], which, combined with their angle, makes [[Triangle Wing]] the best AR for left-spin [[Upper Attack]]. The AR section needs to be a bit more descriptive IMO, I mean this is a top tier attack ring so I think why it is so good needs more explanation, but other than that (and a couple of capitalisation things), this is nearly ready. RE: Dranzer GT Draft- DONE! - Benjohadi - Jul. 31, 2012 Quote:== Attack Ring (AR): Triangle Wing ==how about a little bit more description on the design of the wings...but might have errors since i simply made just now..haha |