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RE: Blitz Unicorno 100RSF Draft THE WORD KEI IS IN MY THREAD TITLE - Shabalabadoo - Oct. 15, 2011 (Oct. 15, 2011 12:25 AM)Hazel Wrote: 4D Metal Wheel: Blitz Just rearranging. And you actually mixed up the Metal Frame and the core. The Core is the part that has the centre that the face fits into. Not a big problem though, easily changed, and easily changed back. RE: Blitz Unicorno 100RSF Draft THE WORD KEI IS IN MY THREAD TITLE - Hazel - Oct. 15, 2011 Ah, yeah. Sorry, the mixup slipped my mind - I had three separate notepads open when editing it. Anyway, I reformatted what you gave me and edited the OP to include it. (Oct. 15, 2011 12:23 AM)Dan Wrote: HAHAHAHAHAHAHA Thank you. I figured it appropriate, because everyone else was doing it. Perhaps under the assumption that Kei was only capable of reading if his name were present, or that making a thread title more ridiculous was a better idea than PMing him. I just wanted to fit in. EDIT: Since the Draft is undergoing more revisions, I have changed the thread title to match. RE: Blitz Unicorno 100RSF Draft - Undergoing Revisions, Don't read it, Kei! - Dan - Oct. 15, 2011 You sir are now my favorite member hahaha. Though, ALL CAPS WOULD BE MORE APPROPRIATE FOR THE EXTREME IMPORTANCE OF KEI NOT BEING ALLOWED TO READ IT UNTIL YOU'RE DONE!!!1 RE: Blitz Unicorno 100RSF Draft - Undergoing Revisions, Don't read it, Kei! - Hazel - Oct. 15, 2011 Actually, I'm not sure if I'd still call it "Undergoing Revisions", since Shabalabadoo and I are in agreement over its current form. If anyone else has anything they'd like to add, feel free to mention it, however. Also still seeking pictures. RE: Blitz Unicorno 100RSF Draft - Undergoing Revisions, Don't read it, Kei! - Dan - Oct. 15, 2011 DONT READ IT KEI DONT READ IT OR ELSEEEEEE!!!!! Didn't get to find that patch of light in your very woody area? Man oh man! RE: Blitz Unicorno 100RSF Draft - Undergoing Revisions, Don't read it, Kei! - Hazel - Oct. 15, 2011 (Oct. 15, 2011 4:14 AM)Dan Wrote: DONT READ IT KEI DONT READ IT OR ELSEEEEEE!!!!! I did, but the sunshafts are either too dim or too bright. We've got several oak trees that are more than a hundred years old directly over our property, so there's little leniency with sunlight. It's great for most things(especially during the 100+ degree summers), but for photography... eh. RE: Blitz Unicorno 100RSF Draft - Undergoing Revisions, Don't read it, Kei! - Dan - Oct. 15, 2011 Why not post your best ones then? :V RE: Blitz Unicorno 100RSF Draft - Undergoing Revisions, Don't read it, Kei! - Hazel - Oct. 15, 2011 (Oct. 15, 2011 4:39 AM)Dan Wrote: Why not post your best ones then? :V I already did. They are the ones on the previous page. RE: Blitz Unicorno 100RSF Draft - Undergoing Revisions, Don't read it, Kei! - Dan - Oct. 15, 2011 Oh, lol. I guess just re-take the RSF picture and maybe face bolt as well. RE: Blitz Unicorno 100RSF Draft - Undergoing Revisions, Don't read it, Kei! - H8R - Oct. 15, 2011 what about MF Blitz Unicorno S130R2F I mean it gets the just as good (if not better) results as the others mentioned ... I do like the draft though! RE: Blitz Unicorno 100RSF Draft - Undergoing Revisions, Don't read it, Kei! - Hazel - Oct. 15, 2011 (Oct. 15, 2011 12:18 PM)H8R Wrote: what about MF Blitz Unicorno S130R2F I mean it gets the just as good (if not better) results as the others mentioned ... I'd not really seen it discussed that much, but if others think it's valid, I can add it. RE: Blitz Unicorno 100RSF Draft - Undergoing Revisions, Don't read it, Kei! - Nocto - Oct. 15, 2011 Just a thing I've noted. 4D Metal Wheel: Blitz Hazel Wrote:This Metal Wheel is made up of two parts. A Metal Frame, which comprises the bulk of the Metal Wheel, and a Core, which facilitates the primary gimmick...I believe it's the other way around. Especially since you wrote this: Core: Hazel Wrote:Blitz's Core, which makes up the majority of the Metal Wheel... RE: Blitz Unicorno 100RSF Draft - Undergoing Revisions, Don't read it, Kei! - Hazel - Oct. 15, 2011 (Oct. 15, 2011 1:15 PM)Nocto Wrote: Just a thing I've noted. Yeah, that's one of the things that slipped through when I was editing in two notepads. I apologize, and will fix it. EDIT: Alright, I fixed it. Thank you for pointing that out. EDIT 2: I retook some images. Most didn't turn out any better, but the ones that did, I will provide(and combine with the others): Spoiler (Click to View) RE: Blitz Unicorno 100RSF Draft - Pretty Much Done. - Dan - Oct. 17, 2011 I'd say they are pretty good now. :V RE: Blitz Unicorno 100RSF Draft - Pretty Much Done. - BeybladeStation - Oct. 19, 2011 I also agree, those are BeyWiki worthy. RE: Blitz Unicorno 100RSF Draft - Finished. Pictures added. - Hazel - Oct. 19, 2011 Alright. I'm marking this article down as finished, and have edited the picture links into the Gallery section of the original post. Thanks for all the help, guys. Wouldn't have been as purdy without ya'll. RE: Blitz Unicorno 100RSF Draft - Finished. Pictures added. - Kei - Oct. 28, 2011 (Oct. 07, 2011 11:25 PM)Hazel Wrote:Quote:1 Face Bolt: Unicorno Alright, so I've gone through and made a number of edits, both content- and formatting-wise. If no one else has any suggestions, it should be ready! Whoever ends up posting this, please be sure to follow the same formatting that was used for the Death Quetzalcoatl stub with regards to the "Metal Frame" and "Core" sections, and the same formatting from the Hell Kerbecs article that was used for the different modes of BD145. The pictures you took Hazel are OK to be posted as well. However, could you please re-take the pictures of the Blitz Metal Wheel? I'd like them to be from a top-down (for both the top of the Metal Wheel and the bottom of it) view like all of the other current Beywiki articles. And, could you do the same for just the Metal Frame and just the Core (bottom is not necessary for these). One question, though: it states in the Blitz section that the Assault Attack Mode is the "usually the preferred mode of the two", but then never states where Barrage would be useful. I do not have a lot of experience with Blitz, so could someone enlighten me? Or is that false and should it be made clear that Assault Attack Mode is the best mode in all situations? RE: Blitz Unicorno 100RSF Draft - Finished. Pictures added. - Hazel - Oct. 28, 2011 It should be made clear that Barrage is best in all situations unless you're going for a Self-KO record. I suppose I was fishing to see if anyone out there knew of a use for Barrage, but there really isn't, and I forgot to go back and edit it. I'll try to retake pictures sometime today or over the weekend, and then I'll see about uploading it. EDIT: I've put the article together, now all I need to do is upload images and then save it. The article hasn't been created yet, I just did the formatting and everything for it. EDIT 2: I took all the pictures exactly to specification. Resizing them. RE: Blitz Unicorno 100RSF Draft - Finished. Pictures added. - Nocto - Oct. 28, 2011 Quote: RE: Blitz Unicorno 100RSF Draft - Finished. Pictures added. - Hazel - Oct. 28, 2011 (Oct. 28, 2011 8:09 PM)Nocto Wrote:Quote: Alright. I've edited the current final draft to include those. If that's all, I have the wiki article format 100% complete now, including beybox images, all part images, etc. I uploaded all of my pictures to the Beywiki, and the preview of the article looks correct. ...er. I accidentally hit "Save Page" instead of "Show Preview", so here it is: http://wiki.worldbeyblade.org/index.php/Blitz_Unicorno_100RSF I do not know how to delete an article, so I'll just wait until Kei gets around to it, if it needs to be deleted. In the meantime, I've fully updated the OP. RE: Blitz Unicorno 100RSF Draft - Finished. Pictures added. - Nocto - Oct. 28, 2011 May I suggest using the ====X==== or =====X===== heading (whatever it's called) instead of ===X=== to distinguish the Metal Wheel components from the Customization section? Also, shouldn't those components be placed before the Customization section? It's kind of awkward to have them after. RE: Blitz Unicorno 100RSF Draft - Finished. Pictures added. - Hazel - Oct. 28, 2011 (Oct. 28, 2011 9:01 PM)Nocto Wrote: May I suggest using the ====X==== or =====X===== heading (whatever it's called) instead of ===X=== to distinguish the Metal Wheel components from the Customization section? I did actually forget to use ==== instead of ===. I'll correct that now. As for the other issue... hm. I suppose you're right. I'll tweak it. EDIT: Done tweaking it. What do you think? RE: Blitz Unicorno 100RSF Draft - Finished. Pictures added. - Nocto - Oct. 28, 2011 I tried to place them in different ways, but it never feels like a "natural progression". We'll see what Kei thinks, but for me, your way seems like the best. RE: Blitz Unicorno 100RSF Draft - Finished. Pictures added. - Kei - Oct. 28, 2011 (Oct. 28, 2011 8:37 PM)Hazel Wrote: ...er. I accidentally hit "Save Page" instead of "Show Preview", so here it is: Thanks! You just forgot to add in links and italicize the names of suggested customs, so I've gone ahead and done that. RE: Blitz Unicorno 100RSF Draft - Finished. Pictures added. - Dan - Oct. 28, 2011 Great job guys, the article is amazing! Edit: Woah, this was posted on the 28th of October and I posted VariAres on the 28th of September.. :V fsjaladja !! |