(Aug. 04, 2011  5:34 PM)Nwolf Wrote: u could use like google translate, but it wouldn't be that accurate

Quote:傳說七勇者 The Seven Legendary Heroes

序：黒暗的世界

天色灰暗，毫無生氣。永遠没有明天和希望，只有黑暗和絶望……
這裡，是未來。

(第一人稱----盼羽)

「呼呼……」
我在媽媽----一隻火伊貝-----的懷中，感受着她身上散發的熱力，聽見她因為長時間奔跑而導致的急促的呼吸聲，看着那個急速地向後退的黑暗世界。
「十萬伏特！」
我的爸爸----一隻雷伊貝----在後邊發出高電壓的電撃，把後面窮追不捨的傢伙盡量撃退，務求保護我和媽媽！
「小嵐，我們還要跑多久？十萬伏特快用完了！」
「快了！就在前面的山丘！時空洞就在那！」
我舉頭一看，没錯，前面的山丘上確實有一個像漩渦般的洞穴！
那就是時空洞了！
媽媽放緩了腳步，走近了時空洞，並把我緩緩放下。「快進去吧，盼羽。」
「等等，爸爸媽媽你們呢？你們去哪裏？」
媽媽定了一定，說：「我和爸爸會繼續對抗那些傢伙。」
「不可以啊！媽媽！」我堅定的捉着她的手，「你可能被那些人給……！」
「没關係的，孩子。」她抱起了我，把我慢慢放進時空洞。「妳是唯一能改變世界的小精靈。我們一定要保護妳。」
突然，我感到媽媽身後有一股古怪的氣息，正當我想開口之際，一把鋒利的刀刃插穿了媽媽的身體，連同小段的腸藏被插了出來！
媽媽痛苦的叫了一聲，口中吐出了一口鮮血。
在媽媽的身後，只見一隻飛天螳螂正在邪笑着！
「把『光之子』給交出來！」
「不交！」
「好，敬酒不吃吃罰酒是嗎?」說罷，他無情地把刀刃插得更入，媽媽的傷口裂得更開了！「現在妳交不交出來？」
「媽媽，妳把我交出去吧！」我說，「我不想妳受更大的傷！」
媽媽吐了一口鮮血，對我說道：「不可以啊，孩子。妳要記住改變這個未來，這是為了媽媽，好嗎？」
然後，她轉頭向那飛天螳螂說：「絶不！」她一手把我投入時空洞裏去！
「媽媽--------」 我激動的大叫。
時空洞內的畫面急速的變化，快得令人咋舌。黑色一片的世界，慢慢變得彩色繽紛；死寂一片的草原，出現了生命。
我知道，我正通往過去。
我卻不會忘記，媽媽的身影，慈愛的臉和她最後的一句話。
「妳要記住改變這個未來，這是為了媽媽，好嗎？」
我合上了雙眼，眼淚從眼角流了出來。

「我不會忘記妳的，媽媽！

「 妳永遠是我最尊敬的人！」

Quote:The Seven Legendary Heroes

Order: Black Dark World

Sky gray and lifeless. Never tomorrow and hope, only darkness and despair ... ...
Here is the future.

(First-person ---- hope Yu)

"Whirring ..."
I am a mother ---- ----- fire irbesartan arms, feeling her body radiates heat, because the long run and heard her rapid breathing caused by, looked at the back of the rapidly World of Darkness.
"Thousands of volts!"
My father ---- a ---- Lei Yibei issue in the back of high voltage electrical æ’ƒ to chase the guy back as æ’ƒ back, in order to protect me and my mother!
"Koarashi, we have to run long? Of thousands of volts Express ran out!"
"Soon! In front of the hill! Empty in that time!"
I give the first look, yes, indeed on a hill in front of a cave-like as the whirlpool!
That is, when empty it!
Slow down the pace of her mother, when approached empty, and put me down slowly. "Fast into it, hope feather."
"Wait, Mom and Dad you? You go?"
Mom fixed a certain, said: "I and my father will continue to fight those guys."
"Can not ah! Mom!" I firmly kept on holding her hand, "you may be to those people ... ...!"
"Never mind, child." She hugged me, and I slowly into the empty time. "You only can change the world, elf, we must to protect you."
Suddenly, I felt my mother behind the existence of a strange atmosphere, just as I would like to speak on the occasion, a sharp blade inserted through the mother's body, together with the possession of small pieces of intestine were inserted out!
Mother's cry of pain, mouth spit a mouthful of blood.
Behind her mother, saw a flying mantis is Xie Xiaozhao!
"To" Guangzhi Zi "to pay out!"
"Do not pay!"
"Well, toast Monastic is it?" He finished, he ruthlessly put more into the blade insert, more mother's wound split open! "Now you pay do not pay out?"
"Mom, you go my hand!" I said, "I do not want you hurt by greater!"
Mom spit a mouthful of blood, said to me: "No, ah, child. Niyao remember to change the future, which is to my mother, okay?"
Then she turned unto Flying Mantis said: "Never!" When she put my hand go empty!
"Mom --------" I cried excitedly.
Time and space inside the picture changes rapidly, so fast that is astounding. Black one of the world, slowly becoming colorful; silence a grassland, there has been life.
I know, I was leading in the past.
I will not forget, mother figure, a loving face and her last words.
"Ni Yao remember to change the future, which is to my mother, okay?"
I closed his eyes, tears streaming from his eyes out.

"I will not forget you, mother!

"You will always be the person I most respect!"

(Aug. 04, 2011  1:11 AM)Sparta Wrote:

(Aug. 04, 2011  1:04 AM)NoodooSoup Wrote: My characters' results (I only did my main protagonists). You guys might not know them, but still, you'll see that they are balanced.

Kyo (Beyblade: Redemption) - 5

I'll post the rest in a few

Wow, nice score! I think you scored better than Temporal

@Taiwo Seigi...aha, you need some work...

(Aug. 04, 2011  7:54 PM)Sparta Wrote: -7?? WHAT THE HELL?!

How is that even possible?! Lol

That's an insane score. Are you sure? Go back and check, that's an incredible score.