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RE: BB-88 Meteo L-Drago LW105LF Draft - Dracoblader99 - Jul. 15, 2011 lol i just realised that you typed track instead of bottom oh and you forgot to mention that lf is more aggressive then other plastic bottoms due to its jagged form RE: BB-88 Meteo L-Drago LW105LF Draft - DuhRegend - Jul. 23, 2011 hey Whatzzer, for the LF, you could add that the 6 protrusions facing left sort of grips onto the stadium giving meteo a decent amount of attack, i also have the bey RE: BB-88 Meteo L-Drago LW105LF Draft - Whatzzer - Aug. 10, 2011 Any more comments? I updated it already. RE: BB-88 Meteo L-Drago LW105LF Draft - Whatzzer - Sep. 04, 2011 Updated it.What is the Hasbro version? RE: BB-88 Meteo L-Drago LW105LF Draft - Futomos - Sep. 04, 2011 (Sep. 04, 2011 8:03 AM)Whatzzer Wrote: Updated it.What is the Hasbro version? It is the same name, except there are 2 of them, one from the Triple Battle Set (Gold/Grey, I think), and the other one being the original TT and Sonokong color, from the Hasbro "Single Packs". RE: BB-88 Meteo L-Drago LW105LF Draft - JBladerMS - Sep. 05, 2011 This article is coming along nicely. Add these bits of information to the LF section: -LF is a left, plastic version of R^2F. -LF has decent attack, but it is unreliable because performing sliding shoot is very difficult with it; LF tends to rocket around the stadium rather than retain a flower pattern. RE: BB-88 Meteo L-Drago LW105LF Draft - Shabalabadoo - Sep. 05, 2011 (Jun. 18, 2011 5:41 PM)Whatzzer Wrote: Ok,I own this bey,I know momiji has one,but since his is not approved yet,I still have a chance right? I made quite a few edits, in almost every section. Thisneeds some more work though. Simple things: You need to explain which mode is better. You need to explain what The protrusions on Meteo look like. I think the Meteo section needs a little more to it. RE: BB-88 Meteo L-Drago LW105LF Draft - Whatzzer - Sep. 09, 2011 Edited it.Thanks,I realise there are some spelling errors in your quote,but i fixed it. RE: BB-88 Meteo L-Drago LW105LF Draft - Benjohadi - Sep. 14, 2011 i think youshould add its spin stealing combos..add in used un stamina customization.. Meteo shows good potential fighting Basalt combos.. RE: BB-88 Meteo L-Drago LW105LF Draft - Ryzuke - Sep. 15, 2011 I think you should write more about Assult/barrage mode differences and tell us which is better. RE: BB-88 Meteo L-Drago LW105LF Draft - Whatzzer - Sep. 15, 2011 I have wrote about it,seriously,but I still need to test which one is better. RE: BB-88 Meteo L-Drago LW105LF Draft DONED.KEI,read it! - Whatzzer - Nov. 06, 2011 Edited! RE: BB-88 Meteo L-Drago LW105LF Draft DONED.KEI,read it! - Rustled Jimmies - Nov. 06, 2011 I'm too dumb to add to any Beyblade facts, so I'll offer essay-related advice (this is something you can use in the future if you're not in high school or college yet, especially in college). If you want this as a reference, it'd need to look a little more professional. Phrase-ending punctuations, such as periods (.), question marks (?), exclamation marks (!), and commas (,), as well as colons and semi-colons (: and ; respectively), should often be followed with a space before continuing the next phrase. I can see that you've done it for most sentence enders, but the commas and colons need it as well. Also, fix some of your line breaks. Quote:L Drago II features three Dragon-heads which cover 3 of the 6 protrusions of Meteo at all times, which allows for a mode change similar to Lightning L Drago. By removing L Drago II from Meteo, rotating it 180 degrees, and placing it back on Meteo, there are 2 modes; Assault Mode and Barrage Mode. The modes are easily recognizable by the Protrusions on Meteo, and which ones stick out. In Assault Quote:This clear wheel is made of 50% hard rubber, and it lines the circumference of the Clear Wheel. This rubber provides great spin steal/equalizing properties for battles against right-spin beyblades. This rubber also provides a bit of Defense as it is good at absorbing hits, however as a whole, Meteo L Drago is very light and can't exhibit Quote:LW105 has three wings facing downwards,in left direction.This feature is somehowand Quote:LF is a plastic version of LRF,having the almost similiar properties.It's star shape features 6have early line breaks that shouldn't be there since it's still part of the paragraph. I have a feeling you used Notepad to do this; I recommend writing more analytic type of drafts such as this one in a program that auto-corrects or notes spelling and grammatical errors, as well as it doesn't carp with your line breaks, such as Microsoft Word (I don't know if OpenOffice does that too). Notepad has a habit of messing with linebreaks when Copied and Pastied from the file itself. RE: BB-88 Meteo L-Drago LW105LF Draft DONED.KEI,read it! - Whatzzer - Nov. 06, 2011 I didn't.Just written it on a piece pf paper and copied it to this thread. RE: BB-88 Meteo L-Drago LW105LF Draft DONED.KEI,read it! - xSora10 - Nov. 07, 2011 (Jun. 18, 2011 5:41 PM)Whatzzer Wrote: Ok,I own this bey,I know momiji has one,but since his is not approved yet,I still have a chance right? Made a few edits. Makes it look more professional. Pretty good already though! RE: BB-88 Meteo L-Drago LW105LF Draft DONED.KEI,read it! - Ga' - Nov. 08, 2011 Seeing how LRF came out after LF, that first sentence of the bottom section is rather pointless. There is some other stuff that went wrong in the passage, I'll point it out eventually. RE: BB-88 Meteo L-Drago LW105LF Draft DONED.KEI,read it! - Raigeko13 - Nov. 16, 2011 http://worldbeyblade.org/Thread-Meteo-L-Drago-LW105LF Maybe you could refer to this thread for a few more points in your article? And are photos needed, or are there some already ready for it? RE: BB-88 Meteo L-Drago LW105LF Draft DONED.KEI,read it! - Whatzzer - Nov. 16, 2011 Dayum Shame.My Meteo is all busted up.Chipped here,all the paints were chipped.Want it?I might need help.Rai,gee,I don't think I should copy. RE: BB-88 Meteo L-Drago LW105LF Draft DONED.KEI,read it! - Benjohadi - Nov. 16, 2011 Not copy..improve by modify some relevant points in there.. i have mint MLD..but i'm not that good in photograph..and my version is the MLD reshuffle set.. RE: BB-88 Meteo L-Drago LW105LF Draft DONED.KEI,read it! - Whatzzer - Dec. 19, 2011 Ok,I edited it due to Meteo's unusefullness in this new metagame.Any more comments?Also edited the MW section. RE: BB-88 Meteo L-Drago LW105LF Draft DONED.KEI,read it! - njrk97 - Dec. 19, 2011 (Dec. 19, 2011 2:47 PM)Whatzzer Wrote: Ok,I edited it due to Meteo's unusefullness in this new metagame.Any more comments?Also edited the MW section. no to least reason to purchase this Beyblade is it just me or does this last sentence not make sense shouldnt it be like no reason to purchase this beyblade the least just doesnt make sense to me RE: BB-88 Meteo L-Drago LW105LF Draft DONED.KEI,read it! - Hazel - Dec. 19, 2011 "Little to no competitive reason to purchase this Beyblade". RE: BB-88 Meteo L-Drago LW105LF Draft DONED.KEI,read it! - Hov - Dec. 20, 2011 (Dec. 19, 2011 2:47 PM)Whatzzer Wrote: Ok,I edited it due to Meteo's unusefullness in this new metagame.Any more comments?Also edited the MW section. Well, look at the LA Bey Bash thread. Someone was placed using Meteo L Drago(145 variant)WD. Meteo is still useful IMO, especially paired with WD, or BD RE: BB-88 Meteo L-Drago LW105LF Draft DONED.KEI,read it! - Whatzzer - Dec. 20, 2011 Oh,I forgot about that term.Thanks a lot,Hazel! Jon:-Left-spin wheels(not right and left)are kinda useless in this meta game,as th!nk said,and about someone placing:-Is he 1st?Meteo can't compete with all the new tier-worthy(check tier list,Kei was trying to make people agree on a new upgraded tier list) parts,which is useless. RE: BB-88 Meteo L-Drago LW105LF Draft DONED.KEI,read it! - njrk97 - Dec. 20, 2011 (Dec. 19, 2011 11:45 PM)Hazel Wrote: "Little to no competitive reason to purchase this Beyblade". yes that make alot more sense |