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RE: Thermal Lacerta Draft (NEAR PERFECT?) - Serotonin - Jun. 15, 2011 Track section needs work, will crit later this week. RE: Thermal Lacerta Draft (NEAR PERFECT?) - Half Nail - Jun. 15, 2011 In the Thermal section, Earth and Burn aren't capitalized, you might wanna do that. Plus, I think Wing Attacker is just Wing Attack, correct me if I'm wrong. Otherwise, this is very good. RE: Thermal Lacerta Draft (NEAR PERFECT?) - Mr. N - Jun. 15, 2011 (Jun. 15, 2011 4:36 PM)Ink. Wrote: In the Thermal section, Earth and Burn aren't capitalized, you might wanna do that. Plus, I think Wing Attacker is just Wing Attack, correct me if I'm wrong. It's Wing Attacker. RE: Thermal Lacerta Draft (NEAR PERFECT?) - SlayerlvX - Jun. 15, 2011 Okay thanks Ink, I will fix it very soon! I will try to rewrite the WA130 track again RE: Thermal Lacerta Draft (NEAR PERFECT?) - Ultra - Jun. 16, 2011 You haven't mentioned thermal's destabiliser abilities. Also WA130 is in no way a variation on W105. They're completly different... Most of your WA130 section is false rubbish based on your belief in the similarities between W105 and WA130. How about saying that it's basically useless apart from in replacement for S130 in the Fang combo and that it was outclassed from release. This is really not complete at all. Most of your sections are too short. RE: Thermal Lacerta Draft (NEAR PERFECT?) - SlayerlvX - Jun. 16, 2011 Okay thanks for your critiscm ultrablader, though that was pretty mean to say to me... Like in a more nicer way would be nice ... Anyways okay, as said before, I will rewrite WA130 track part and the destalizer thing for the thermal wheel, and the Fang combo thing RE: Thermal Lacerta Draft (NEAR PERFECT?) - SlayerlvX - Jun. 16, 2011 okay I fixed up the WA130 track section up a bit and capitalized Earth and Burn in the Thermal section RE: Thermal Lacerta Draft (NEAR PERFECT?) - Ultra - Jun. 16, 2011 Sorry I wasn't trying to be harsh. RE: Thermal Lacerta Draft (NEAR PERFECT?) - SlayerlvX - Jun. 16, 2011 UltraBlader okay, I understand now, thanks for saying that! Any other critiscm? RE: Thermal Lacerta Draft (NEAR PERFECT?) - Ultra - Jun. 16, 2011 Those were the only ones I can think of though Heart said he was gonna weigh in soon. RE: Thermal Lacerta Draft (NEAR PERFECT?) - SlayerlvX - Jun. 16, 2011 UltraBlader what do you mean by weigh in soon? RE: Thermal Lacerta Draft (NEAR PERFECT?) - Ultra - Jun. 16, 2011 He's going to look and comment on it soon. RE: Thermal Lacerta Draft (NEAR PERFECT?) - Serotonin - Jun. 16, 2011 (Jun. 05, 2011 7:05 PM)SlayerlvX Wrote: Face: Lacerta Re-wrote most of this article (HF was copied from Lightning L Drago 100HF, but apart from that, everything else is new); let me know what you think. Didn't include WA130 as a replacement for S130 because 130 also exists; WA130 is definitely the worst option. I also left out the destabilisation portion of the article even though Ultrablader suggested it; this is only a reflection of the fact that I'm not completely convinced by their overall effectiveness as a type, and the fact that I feel Thermal is poor in that respect. I'm happy to add a bit on it if you can show me otherwise. RE: Thermal Lacerta Draft (NEAR PERFECT?) - Ultra - Jun. 16, 2011 They're not really effective in the current metagame but for the hasbro one they could be. I can't really do any testing since my Attack stadium is out of commision and I need a new one. I think your one is fine Heart. It can be updated with info if it is tested properly which I kinda doubt unless I do it. RE: Thermal Lacerta Draft (NEAR PERFECT?) - Serotonin - Jun. 16, 2011 Yeah, that's fair enough. I'll wait for another member to chime in or something before putting this up properly. RE: Thermal Lacerta Draft (NEAR PERFECT?) - SlayerlvX - Jun. 16, 2011 heart it is pretty good!!! Do you mind copying some or all information from your draft you wrote, and copy/paste it into the draft I have on page 1? RE: Thermal Lacerta Draft (NEAR PERFECT?) - SlayerlvX - Jun. 17, 2011 I will copy the draft fom heart and post it into the draft I have and would like a WBO admin to check out the article and see if it is good enough to be posted onto WBO RE: Thermal Lacerta Draft (NEAR PERFECT?) - SlayerlvX - Jun. 24, 2011 does this article need any more criticsm or is it ready for the WBO??? please let admin check this RE: Thermal Lacerta Draft (NEAR PERFECT?) - DynaZord - Jun. 24, 2011 Since when does WA130 have a height of 105 with the wings attached? I'm pretty sure it's 130 height no matter what. RE: Thermal Lacerta Draft (NEAR PERFECT?) - SlayerlvX - Jun. 24, 2011 okay I fixed it* RE: Thermal Lacerta Draft (NEAR PERFECT?) - DynaZord - Jun. 24, 2011 I think this is pretty good. Might need a small amount of trimming, but I'm not admin. RE: Thermal Lacerta Draft (NEAR PERFECT?) - th!nk - Jun. 24, 2011 I was gonna write this one up myself, but I honestly CBF lately, I've got a lot going on. Anyway, I wrote what I think is really a much better track description, given it's such a unique piece. I hope you don't mind me saying that, but yeah, your description is somewhat lacking. Other than that, great article. So, uhh, here's my description, you're free to use it or parts of it. I Wrote:WA130 is a 130-height track with two aerofoil-shaped “wings†that rotate freely around the track. The direction of these wings can be swapped by removing the “wing†piece, flipping it over, and placing it back on the shaft of the track. These wings are largely negligible in battle, though they can offer some minor protection from lower [[attack]]-type opponents. The main appeal of this track is its height. The 130 height has proven very useful for numerous [[attack]] customisations. While S130 is usually preferred due to its slightly heavier weight, and fixed nature (sometimes allowing it to hit lower opponents solidly), WA130 is a useful substitute, given S130's rarity. @♥ I don't think WA130 is the worst option at all, in my opinion the extra weight and slight ability to hit lower beys even a little is worthwhile (plus, it does provide some minor protection, I believe there was testing on that), though, obviously, I'd not buy it just for WA130. RE: Thermal Lacerta Draft (NEAR PERFECT?) - SlayerlvX - Jun. 24, 2011 thank you Th!nk I will copy your whole article and post it into my draft THANKS!!! I need an admin to check this out -____- RE: Thermal Lacerta Draft (NEAR PERFECT?) - th!nk - Jun. 25, 2011 BTW, metal wheel description: "although it has since been outclassed" needs to be changed to "although it is considered outclassed", as Earth and Burn were both released before Thermal. And you could consider mentioning Lacerta's weird little feet, if you want. I must say, I just love this bey, it's so unique that it looks like it was designed by a different team to the rest of the line, plus, if you look up "Groovy" in a dictionary, there's a picture of thermal lacerta right next to it. RE: Thermal Lacerta Draft (NEAR PERFECT?) - SlayerlvX - Jun. 25, 2011 okay I fixed it!!! |