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RE: im giveing a my story - Dude - Apr. 30, 2011
Here's a feedback:
The story sucks.
It's not the worst I've read, meaning there's still hope, but it really needs work.
Also, you don't need requests for the Beyblades. Just think of some yourself.
RE: im giveing a my story - Black♧Jack - Apr. 30, 2011
thanks for hurting my feelings this story is over