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RE: A spirited fighter.[CHARACTER REQUESTS AVAILABLE FOR A LIMITED TIME] - Korinzu - Feb. 28, 2011
WAIT WAIT WAIT... We dont even see the character, this arguement was pointless.
RE: A spirited fighter.[CHARACTER REQUESTS AVAILABLE FOR A LIMITED TIME] - ãƒã‚¼ - Feb. 28, 2011
The character is right in front of you! Just some small adjustments....
Add me or else.... I know where you live, [censored] Boys Dorms, [censored] [censored]. So THERE!
RE: A spirited fighter.[CHARACTER REQUESTS AVAILABLE FOR A LIMITED TIME] - Korinzu - Feb. 28, 2011
"What are the rebels?"Akio asked. "Well..."
Chapter 6: The escort.
"The rebels fight against an evil organisation with psychics controlling one bey from each of the signs of the Zodiac. We have been looking for new recruits for a while, the others have dissapearred on field missions, there is only me and another member called Haze (Thats ha-zay)," Aquios explained to Atsune and Akio. "That would be me!!" a voice said.
Atsune and Akio looked up there was a boy standing on a pipe. Then the pipe rolled forward and the boy fell. "He may be a good agent, but he's a tad bit clumsy,"Aquios said. "Ur, yeah," Haze said awkwardly."We will escort you to the rebels HQ," Haze said.
They turned into an alleyway, south of town. "But this is a dead end,"Atsune said. "Yes but, but, but...err, I forget how to use this..." Haze said. "(Sigh)It's good I'm here," Aquios said, stepping forward. He pushed in a brick and a screen came up. "Blader login initialising,"the computer said in a metallic voice. Aquios flashed his beyblades over the computer screen. "Blader Aquios accepted,"the computer said. Ominously, a loud clunking sound echoed down the alley. The wall opened up and there was a large base inside. "That is incredible!"Akio said, amazed. They walked in.
There were loads of security cameras and surveillance footage on computer screens. One of the screens flashed red. "Ryutaro," Haze said grimly. "Is he one of the psychics you were talking about!?"Akio said while looking at the screens. "Yes," Aquios said,"and your first mission..."
RE: A spirited fighter.[CHARACTER REQUESTS AVAILABLE FOR A LIMITED TIME] - Synth - Mar. 01, 2011
chapter 5 final part has really some wrong spelling.....better fix that......
and awesome chapter 6!
RE: A spirited fighter.[CHARACTER REQUESTS AVAILABLE FOR A LIMITED TIME] - Korinzu - Mar. 01, 2011
Wait, what!? I don't see anything wrong except for the "Yor" part! But thanks for the compliment on chapter 6!
RE: A spirited fighter.[CHARACTER REQUESTS AVAILABLE FOR A LIMITED TIME] - Synth - Mar. 01, 2011
Whoops didnt know that.......and can i have another request?
RE: A spirited fighter.[CHARACTER REQUESTS AVAILABLE FOR A LIMITED TIME] - Korinzu - Mar. 01, 2011
Maybe, depends.
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"Who's Ryutaro?"Akio asked. "He was a participant in last years battle bladers,"Haze said, "and he's dangerous."
Chapter 7: The distortion realm
Akio walked along the river side in town, he had heard of amazing battles, including Japan's champion Gingka Hagane. A person in a blue and white robe stood there. His eyes were clouded black. "Akio, I have been waiting for you," Ryutaro said ominously. "How do you know my name!?" Akio said, astonished. "Because you are the chosen one Akio," Ryutaro said, "and I am, Seth, grandmaster of darkness and shadow!" "But I thought you were Ryutaro!"Akio was confused. "This is only Ryutaro's body, I, Seth, have taken control of your old team member!"
From a camera inserted in Akio's launcher, Aquios, Haze and Atsune watched as Akio confronted Ryutaro. "He used to be in the Rebels!"Atsune shouted in suprise. "Yes its sad to say but he was, he found Seth one day and challenged him to a battle," Aquios told Atsune...
"And I challenge you to a battle!" Seth said. "I accept," Akio said. He gulped. "But we do battle in the distortion realm!" Akio felt his feet numb. The feeling started from below and went up his body as it reached his neck. Akio screamed in pain. The pain was unbearable, like being stabbed. As the feeling passed, Akio looked up, his eyes were blurry still but he could see he wasn't by the river anymore. He was in the distortion realm...
RE: A spirited fighter.[CHARACTER REQUESTS AVAILABLE FOR A LIMITED TIME] - Synth - Mar. 01, 2011
Cool chapter!
RE: A spirited fighter.[CHARACTER REQUESTS AVAILABLE FOR A LIMITED TIME] - Korinzu - Mar. 02, 2011
I wish I could get more readers...
If you (Cyber pegasis) could get more readers for me I will thank you highly.
RE: A spirited fighter.[CHARACTER REQUESTS AVAILABLE FOR A LIMITED TIME] - Synth - Mar. 02, 2011
going to place this story in my sig,along with some stories.....
RE: A spirited fighter.[CHARACTER REQUESTS AVAILABLE FOR A LIMITED TIME] - Korinzu - Mar. 02, 2011
Thanks highly.
Akio looked around, everything was purple and red and blue. This was all so new and wierd to Akio. He was frightened.
Chapter 8: The distortion realm. Part 2
"Ha ha ha, this is the distortion realm!" Seth said maliciously. "Now," a beystadium shape opened up in the ground, "we battle."
They put their beys on their launcher. "Three, two, one, let it riiiiiiip!"they both called. "So you have a Thermal Pisces," Akio spluttered. "Yes and I will use it to deystroy you!" Seth said, "Go, Pisces!"
"He's scared," Aquios said gravely. "Yes, very," Atsune replied. "Lets use the teleporter to go to that dimension," Haze said "It'll be wierd!" "We probably sent him on a mission too early," Aquios said. They stepped into a teleporter and they pressed a button. "How did you get this tech'?"Atsune asked Haze. "By mistake," Haze said. "Figures," Atsune said.
Pisces attacked bull over and over."Ha ha ha, do more and more damage Pisces!!" Seth exclaimed. "Err...err...err..." Akio couldn't do anything, he was petrified. Out of the blue, a machine appeared. Three people walked out of it. It was Atsune, Aquios and Haze! "You can do it!" Atsune cheered. "Yeah!" Haze and Aquios cheered aswell. "OK, now you are going down," Akio said. He had found new courage. "Burning Bull Counter Thrust!"Akio called out bravely. "What!? Thats impossible!" Seth said. Pisces flew back. Bull went back and into the air. "Special move, Burning Solar Stomp"Akio called. Pisces was hit hard and flew out of the stadium. "Thats the move he learned against me!" Aquios said. "Yessss!" Akio said out aloud....
RE: A spirited fighter.[CHARACTER REQUESTS AVAILABLE FOR A LIMITED TIME] - Sniper - Mar. 02, 2011
Name:Tenji Okana
Bey: Cyber Libra BT125 ES
BT125(Tornado type 2 12.5 milimetres) is like T125 except bigger and with free spinning wings
Apperance: Like Tobio(capt.capri) just black with black hair
Personality:ecstatic and friendly
Special move: Cybernetic Shockwave -its like when libra does his special move but the ground looks like a computer network
Hope you like it
RE: A spirited fighter.[CHARACTER REQUESTS AVAILABLE FOR A LIMITED TIME] - Korinzu - Mar. 02, 2011
(Mar. 02, 2011 4:57 PM)Kid Sniper Wrote: Name:Tenji Okana
Bey: Cyber Libra BT125 ES
BT125(Tornado type 2 12.5 milimetres) is like T125 except bigger and with free spinning wings
Apperance: Like Tobio(capt.capri) just black with black hair
Personality:ecstatic and friendly
Special move: Cybernetic Shockwave -its like when libra does his special move but the ground looks like a computer network
Hope you like it
I like the idea of cybernetic shockwave.
. So you're in. Do you like the story?
RE: A spirited fighter.[CHARACTER REQUESTS AVAILABLE FOR A LIMITED TIME] - Sniper - Mar. 02, 2011
it sounds really awesome
RE: A spirited fighter.[CHARACTER REQUESTS AVAILABLE FOR A LIMITED TIME] - Korinzu - Mar. 02, 2011
Thanks, the next chapter should be up tomorrow.
RE: A spirited fighter.[CHARACTER REQUESTS AVAILABLE FOR A LIMITED TIME] - Kyoya_Lion - Mar. 03, 2011
Here's a character:
Name: Gale
Beyblade: Tornado Wolf
Appearence: Black hair, black shirt with a wolf on it and an overshirt that is army-green with a black hood. black cargo shorts and black and green VANS skateboarding shoes.
Personality: hot-headed and wild, VERY unpredictable, likes to skateboard and beyblade
Beyblade discription: black Wolf clear wheel with green design stickers, storm fusion wheel but it has the defense of earth, attack of storm, and stamina of earth, it has a green C145 spin track that also acts like Rock Aries's eternal defense spin track and a black wide ball performance tip
Special Move: 1st special move: nightmare tornado, 2nd special move: delta wind hurricane, 3rd special move: cyclone's claw
Cyberpegasis98: i'm sorry if any of my moves are like yours but my theme is wind and that was the best i could do, i am open to alternative suggestion though
RE: A spirited fighter.[CHARACTER REQUESTS AVAILABLE FOR A LIMITED TIME] - Korinzu - Mar. 03, 2011
Maybe, though tornado is already a part.
RE: A spirited fighter.[CHARACTER REQUESTS AVAILABLE FOR A LIMITED TIME] - Korinzu - Mar. 03, 2011
Actually,the next chapter might be up in a day or two.
RE: A spirited fighter.[CHARACTER REQUESTS AVAILABLE FOR A LIMITED TIME] - Sniper - Mar. 03, 2011
(Mar. 03, 2011 3:20 PM)Korinzu Wrote: Actually,the next chapter might be up in a day or two.
NOOOOOOOOO!!!
its because of my awesome character isnt it
RE: A spirited fighter.[CHARACTER REQUESTS AVAILABLE FOR A LIMITED TIME] - Kujikato - Mar. 04, 2011
i might post my character request as soon as i can get on my laptop, am on my phone atm, btw dude, impressive story
RE: A spirited fighter.[CHARACTER REQUESTS AVAILABLE FOR A LIMITED TIME] - Korinzu - Mar. 05, 2011
Three things 1. Its not cause o' your character, its cause I was busy at my boarding school. 2.Im not accepting any more good guy character requests for the moment. 3. I might also make a beyblade story based around King Arthur if anyone thinks it would be good.
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Akio's eyes started to blur again. He collapsed on the ground. "Akiooo!" The team shouted, worried. Ryutaro also fell on the ground, dazed.
Chapter 9: Akio's other soul.
"Akio, Akio," a voice said from nowhere. Akio looked up, he wasn't in the distortion realm, but not in town. "Akio," the voice said again. His eyesight cleared up and before him stood a young girl. She was about five and had black hair, the same length as himself. "Akio, are you Ok?" she asked.
"Um yeah," Akio said. He looked around confused.
" I'm Chika," she said with a smile. "Come with me," she said and grabbed Akio's hand.
"I don't need you to hold my hand," Akio said.
"Yeah well I don't care," Chika said.
"Where are we?" Akio asked as he was being dragged along.
"We are in your dream world," Chika said.
"How do you know my name?" Akio said.
"I will tell you when we get to where we are going," she said.
"Where are we going?" Akio asked.
"Man, don't you ask a lot of questions," she said, "it doesn't matter we're here."
"It looks like a blank TV screen," Akio said.
"Just look," Chika said.
People stood in front of three graves. One of them said Chika Asuhuro.
"Wait, is that you!" Akio said in surprise.
"Yes, 7 years ago I died in an attack by the psychics, but I didn't really die. My soul was supposed to go into the power of Seth, but you Akio, my childhood friend, my soul went into you. I am your second half," Chika explained to Akio.
"Yes...my childhood friend, I remember now, Chika, we used to play together," Akio said nostalgically.
"Good, now I can transform," Chika said.
A bright light emanated from Chika. Akio closed his eyes. When he looked back Chika was a twelve-year-old, just like him.
"I will help you on your journey to battle Seth," Chika said, "and to free everyone who Seth is controlling."
"I will defeat Seth," Akio said bravely, "for you and everyone."
Ryutaro and Atsune watched over Akio. Ryutaro had woken up, back as normal. "Haze, we want you to go on patrol," Aquios said.
"Agreed," Haze said, "waaah!" He fell off his chair...
RE: A spirited fighter.[CHARACTER REQUESTS AVAILABLE FOR A LIMITED TIME] - Sniper - Mar. 05, 2011
lol where do i come in?
RE: A spirited fighter.[CHARACTER REQUESTS AVAILABLE FOR A LIMITED TIME] - Synth - Mar. 05, 2011
weirdly,I think this chapter is like kingdom hearts.....
RE: A spirited fighter.[CHARACTER REQUESTS AVAILABLE FOR A LIMITED TIME] - Korinzu - Mar. 05, 2011
Hmm, I never played or seen gameplay of kingdom hearts.
@ Kid Sniper, in the next chapter you fight Haze
RE: A spirited fighter.[CHARACTER REQUESTS AVAILABLE FOR A LIMITED TIME] - Korinzu - Mar. 05, 2011
Akio walked alongside Chika. She looked a lot different from her five year-old form. She had long purple hair and a white belly top. She also wore blue, bootleg style jeans. A pair of sunglasses adorned her head.
Chapter 10: Akio's other soul. Part 2
"So, Akio, I was wondering if we could battle, you know, for old times," Chika said. "Sure!" Akio said, "wait, what bey do you have?" "I have Midnight Beafowl AD145 SF," Chika said. "Can I see it?" Akio asked. "Yep!" Chika gleamed. She may have been older, but her smile hadn't changed. Akio looked at the bey. The clear wheel was a pink-purple colour. The track and tip were a darker colour of the clear wheel. "Nice, now lets battle!"
Haze walked the streets. Someone jumped in front of him. "My name is Tenji and I challenge you, Haze, to a battle," Tenji said. "Y'whaat!?" Haze said while he grasped for his launcher grip and bey. "This'll be so fun!!" Tenji said. "Are you a psychic?" Haze asked. "Depends, are you a Rebel?" Tenji asked. "Yes for your information!" Haze shouted. "Then, yes, I am," Tenji said.
From each battle the competitors chanted their words. "Three, two, one, let it riiiip!" the four said. Amazingly Chika's sunglasses were a launcher grip.
In Haze's battle his bey, Vulcan Virgo 85 CS, sped into the centre and stopped, perfectly balanced. Tenji's bey, Cyber Libra BT125 ES did so also. The two beys clashed in the centre. Neither pulled away. Suddenly Vulcan Virgo sped round the edge, faster than Atsune's Capricorn. Virgo attacked Libra and Libra flew to the edge and it's tip hit the edge. Libra curled round the very edge of the stadium and back to the centre. "Wow, that was really cool!" Tenji said, "but my Libra has the Eternal Sharp tip, it cant be thrown off balance." "What!" Haze said, worried, "it doesn't matter, my virgo's power will throw it upside down!!" Then he threw a series of attacks...
Akio's and Chika's bey spun into the centre. They attacked eachother and they both got pushed back. They both went in for a second attack and Beafowl did more damage. "The Midnight wheel has a bit of all types, Stamina, Defense and Attack," Chika said. "Wow, you're so strong Chika," Akio complimented Chika, "and you have a new bey. I used to have Infinity Saggitario 145 WB and you used to have Killer Gemios T125 SD." Akio and Chika enjoyed them being friends again...
Also, Chika, means 'near and dear' ironicly.