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RE: Rise of the Phanton Bladers! (Story) - bakushinsasanow - Feb. 02, 2011
umm heres a bad/good guy, you choose, DarkAlphaWolf gender:male name:Namo Trerry Jr. bey:LightTerryDactaldc145HF/WB/ES light wheel looks like a clay wheel, instead with 13 bumbs instead of 6, face bolt looks like a terydactly, energy ring with claws and wings, dc stands for double claw, a look alike of seggitarios claw145 spin track, instead with 6 claws instead of 3, HF/WB can switch between hole flat and wide ball.for special move, switches to ES beyblade special move: multi digger, beyblade clones itself and then switches to ES, then itself and the clones start to dig, then erupting under the opponets, clones and the real one does damage, great for multiple attackers clothing:white, plain, t-shirt, blue jeans with a belt, shirt tucked into the jeans, also wears a green cap, white skin favorite food(in case you add a food scene) spaggeti, hamburgers, pepperoni pizza, moms brownies , and apples and clemintines. his favorite drinks are milk and soda additional stuff: has green-ble eyes, short and scruffy brown hair
RE: Rise of the Phanton Bladers! (Story) - Meriadie - Feb. 04, 2011
Bakushinsawsanow I'm not taking anymore character requests, sorry. But that doesnt mean your person won't be in it. Your person will be somewhere in the story just keep tuned.
Ok well, sorry that I couldn't do this sooner my phoneline got messed up and I have dial-up so...(dial-up + messed up phoneline = no internet). Here's the next chapter!
Chapter 1
So me and Kevin were walking through the forest on our way to the nearest town when a bey came out of no where and nearly hit Kevin. "Kevin, are you all right?" I asked. Kevin shook his his head yes. "Hey who did that? Show yourself!" yelled Kevin. Then we heard a voice, "I will tell you only if you win in a beybattle!" then this guy jumped out behind us. "Ok! But you promise you'll tell me your name if I win?" asked Kevin. The guy looked at Kevin and said, "I promise." I looked at them both and said, "Kevin, don't do anything rash! At least let me help you!" "No, he shot the bey at me not you." said Kevin as he pulled his bey out. "3! 2! 1! Let it rip!"
and they launched their beys. Kevin's Pegasis quickly attacked the opponent's bey, not even giving it a chance. It looked like Kevin was going to win... but not for long. The opponent's bey shot away from Pegasis and was about to counterattack. "Now Stigma! Special Move: Soul Destruction!" said the gut and his bey shot for huge blasts of dark energy and then was covered by a black aura. Pegasis took the four blasts hard and was losing balance. Stigma, which was still covered by the dark aura shot at Pegasis. "No, Pegasis! Don't give up, you can still do it!" shouted Kevin. Right then Pegasis got hit and there was smoke everywhere. "W-what happened?" I said, choking on the smoke. The smoke started to clear and you could the faint outline of two beys, and when it all cleared they all saw what had happened. Pegasis and Stigma were both lying still on the ground, it was a tie. Kevin looked at the mysterious guy angrily. "Well, since you were strong enough to end the battle in a tie, that's enough for to tell you my name. I am Kaieru. We will battle in the future, but next time I won't hold back." said Kaieru and then there was a huge blast. When the smoke cleared all that was left was Pegasis on the ground.
So if you like my story stay tuned for Chapter 2!
RE: Rise of the Phanton Bladers! (Story) - Light Yagami - Feb. 04, 2011
AWESOME
RE: Rise of the Phanton Bladers! (Story) - EarthEagle2813 - Feb. 04, 2011
love it keep going
RE: Rise of the Phanton Bladers! (Story) - C-Dub - Feb. 05, 2011
cooler than ice!!keep going!!!
RE: Rise of the Phanton Bladers! (Story) - 001 - Feb. 05, 2011
awesome story
RE: Rise of the Phanton Bladers! (Story) - 001 - Feb. 06, 2011
im just posting this so this story gets back on the front page
RE: Rise of the Phanton Bladers! (Story) - Livingdeadgirl - Feb. 07, 2011
epic story keep going!
RE: Rise of the Phanton Bladers! (Story) - Meriadie - Feb. 08, 2011
Thanks guys! Well since I haven't been on in a while I'll try to write more than usualy. So heres next chapter:
Chapter 2
Ok so me and Kevin finaly made it to the town, but I noticed that he hadn't said anything since he battle Kaieru. "Hey Kevin, are you Ok? You've been awfully quiet lately." Kevin looked at me and then at the ground again, "I'm fine, it's just... I've been thinking about that Kaieru guy I battled earlier." "That's what I thought..." I said. "It's just, when he said he wasn't battling with all he got... how am I going to win when he's at full power?" he said. There was a long silence until I got an awesome idea, "Kevin, if we can't beat him now then we just have to train like crazy. And what if we get some more followers? Then we'd beat him for sure!" Kevin seemed to like this idea so he nodded in agreement, but then he looked confused. "How will we pick from all these bladers here?" he asked. "Well, let's go to the nearest tournament going on and see who wins it. That'll at least get us a start." I told him. So we went to the nearest tournament and watched it. All the bladers that we seen were to weak. But one seemed to catch my eye. It was a girl about my age, and she seemed really famillar. She and her bey were blowing through the round like it was nothing. Everything about her seemed too famillar That's when it hit me. "Cyber!" I screamed. "Cyber? Who's that?" asked Kevin. "Cyber was a good friend of mine back when I was a kid. We got separated because she had to move to some distant land or something. No one really told me why though... maybe after this tournament I'll ask her." Cyber had obviously won the tournament with ease. When everyone was walking out I stopped in front of Cyber. "Uhhh.... I gotta get through here so... get out of my way." said Cyber. "That's no way to talk to an old friend, Cyber." I said. "Wait, how do you know my name, and old friend? Wait a sec..... Epsilon?" I nodded, "Yep! Hey I've always wanted to asked you this... where did you move to and why?" Cyber stared at me then looked down. There was a long, akward silence, I knew something was wrong. "Epsilon, what did they tell you... about where I went and the reason?" she asked. I wasn't expecting a question like that and I never really thought about it. "Well, they told me you went to a land because of your dad's job was there." She chuckled and said, "All lies..."
CLIFFHANGER! Well you have to wait till chapter 3 to find out what she's talking about. And thanks to everyone who reads my story!
RE: Rise of the Phanton Bladers! (Story) - C-Dub - Feb. 08, 2011
awesome chaptah
RE: Rise of the Phanton Bladers! (Story) - Meriadie - Feb. 08, 2011
Thank you
RE: Rise of the Phanton Bladers! (Story) - Livingdeadgirl - Feb. 08, 2011
another good chapter!
RE: Rise of the Phanton Bladers! (Story) - Light Yagami - Feb. 10, 2011
it was amazing
RE: Rise of the Phanton Bladers! (Story) - EarthEagle2813 - Feb. 14, 2011
can't wait til the next chap
RE: Rise of the Phanton Bladers! (Story) - Kujikato - Mar. 05, 2011
heres 4 characters
Name: Izuma Inzori
BeyBlade: starts with: Silent Ninja MSBSCH85 RHF/RS, final form is: Silent Samurai MKSCH85 WRHF/RWD
BeyBlade description:
Face: A shuriken in the middle, between two kantanas and the writing SAMURAI for Silent Samurai and NINJA for Silent Ninja (color: all decals black on silver background)
Silent: think of Lightning with the multi hit mode (renamed Rapid Strike mode) as thick shurikens, and upper mode (renamed Slice mode) as a kantana (color: un-painted)
Samurai: think of Kerbecs + L-Drago I with the 'rings' as shurikens and the dragon heads as kantanas (color; silver)
Ninja: same as Samurai except that the dragon heads are shaped like kunai (color: silver)
MKSCH85: Metal Kantana Spring Change Height 8.5mm – 11.0mm, same as MSBSCH85 except that the Shuriken Blade is changed with 4 kantanas (color: translucent silver for the plastic, un-painted metal for the “bladesâ€)
MSBSCH85: Metal Shuriken Blade Spring Change Height 8.5mm-11mm, think of CH120 with an external shell resembling a shuriken made of metal, when lose, MSBSCH85 can bounce due to the spring within the core of MSBSCH85.
RHF/RS: Rubber Hole Flat / Rubber Sharp (can change during combat at Izuma’s command)
WRHF/RWD: Wide Rubber Hole Flat / Rubber Wide Defense (can change during combat at Izuma’s command (color: translucent silver for plastic, black for the rubber))
Super Attacks:
Level 1: “Silent death,†Silent Samurai disappears and hits opponent with a million kunai and shuriken and kantanas
Level 2: “100 Slices of The Samurais’’,†the Metal Shuriken shell on MSBSCH85 swells and smashes the opponent’s bey 100 times, on the 99th time, Silent Ninja halts and circles the stadium 10 times, cheating a black hurricane that flips the opposing bey out of the stadium with a insanely powerful smash from Silent Samurai.
Level 3: N/A
Level X: “Infinite Blade†Samurai appears and slices at the opponent’s bey with such speed and power that the opposing bey instantly stops and flies out of the stadium 10 meters away, breaking it in half. (Last resort, can only be used three times in a year!)
Team attack 1: “Hydro Kantana Blitzâ€: Team attack with Hydro Narwhale: Narwhale lifts Samurai, Samurai creates a kantana and Narwhale adds high pressure water jets to it, they attack together, while Samurai slices with the kantana, narwhale flips and uses water jets to grind the opponent’s clear wheel, and increase its spin velocity, causing the opponent’s bey to completely stop by Narwhale’s grind or get KOed by Samurai’s attack
Team attack 2: “Electric Kantana Diveâ€: Team attack with Electric Berserker: Berserker goes around Samurai as a shield while circling the stadium (like the moon is Berserker, earth is Samurai and the centre of the stadium id the sun) and then Samurai shoots up in the sky, descending with Samurai spinning a kantana charged with lightning and Berserker keeping the opponent bey in one spot by surrounding it with a electric fence
Team attack 3: “Magma Kantana Diveâ€: Team attack with Magma Saurian: Refer to “Electric Kantana Dive†team attack with Berserker’s parts replaced by Saurian
Team attack X: “Inzori Finaleâ€: Team attack involving all the Team members: first, Narwhale soaks all the opponent beys, next Berserker zaps all of them, while the opponents are distracted by Narwhale and Berserkers team attack, then Narwhale fills the stadium with water at the same time, Saurian releases a flow of lava, trapping the opponent beys in Rock, allowing the entire team the time to do “Infinite Magma Hydro Electric Kantana Attack†without any opposition
BeyBlade Type: Attack/Defense
Spin Direction: Left
Character bio:
Gender: Male
Clothes: Black Armani Exchange T-Shirt with black GUESS jeans and a silver cloak with black flames (cloak is based on Minato from NARUTO) clothes all the time
Black hair, Chinese origin, oldest of 4 children
Caries twin Kantanas everywhere.
Team rank: Leader
Attitude: helpful and cool, he has to keep a critical eye on his twin sister, Sonai so that she doesn’t go out of control with her short temper, his classmates (except for Sonai) are jealous of him. When he promises something, you can guarantee that he will keep his promise unless it has anything to do with murder or theft. Keeps his younger brothers in line every day so that they don’t drive Sonai crazy.
Age: 17 years as of February 27, 2011
Name: Sonai Inzori
BeyBlade: begins with: Pre-HWS Narwhale CH120 PD, and ends with: Hydro Narwhale XDFCH110 EPWD/PD
Type: Stamina
BeyBlade description:
Face: For both Narwhales, two narwhales next to each other with a wave and the writing Narwhale on the bottom. (Color: the narwhales: sliver, the wave: light blue, the writing: silver, the background: medium dark blue)
Hydro: imagine the Pre-HWS Virgo except the lobes are wave like. (Un-colored)
(Metal wheel) Narwhale: 4 Narwhales in a circle with a wave pattern on the bottom
(Clear wheel) Narwhale: two Narwhales in a circle. (Translucent blue)
XDFCH110: eXtreme Down Force Change Height 11.0mm- 13.5mm, basically a CH110 with the external shell as a super wide DF that works in both spin directions. (Translucent blue)
EPWD/PD: Eternal Polish Wide Defense/Polish Defense, PD with a voice controlled shaft aligned in PD’s notches, wielding a free spinning PWD (Translucent blue)
Super Attacks:
Level 1: “ Hydro Turbo Boostâ€: Narwhale creates a water typhoon complimenting its team members spin or itself spin, thus increasing the bey affected by the water typhoon spin velocity.
Level 2: “Hydro Cannonâ€: Narwhale creates a huge water typhoon in the playing area and sends it at the opponent’s bey, sending it flying repeatedly so that Narwhale’s extreme stamina can be used to outlast the opponent’s bey.
Level 3: “Flying Hydro Narwhale Cannonâ€: Hydro Narwhale hovers in the air because on XDFCH110 and creates a water Narwhale to ram the opponent’s bey.
Level X: “Hydro Hornâ€: Narwhale appears and creates a high pressure water jet in the shape of a Narwhale’s horn and Stabs the opponent’s bey breaking it in half, or KOing in instantly
Team Attacks:
Team attack 1: “Hydro Kantana Blitzâ€: Team attack with Silent Samurai: Hydro Narwhale lifts Silent Samurai, Samurai creates a Kantana and Narwhale adds high pressure water jets to it, and then they attack together, while Samurai slices with the kantana, narwhale flips and uses Hydro to grind the opponent’s clear wheel, causing the opponent’s bey to completely stop by Narwhale’s grind or get KOed by Samurai’s attack
Team attack 2: “Hydro Shockâ€: Team attack with Electric Berserker: Team attack with Hydro Narwhale: First, Narwhale soaks the opposing beys with water, then Berserker zaps them, after that, Narwhale creates a water typhoon that Berserker charges with electricity
Team attack 3: “Rock Strikeâ€: Team attack with Magma Saurian: Narwhale fills the stadium with at the same time, Saurian releases a flow of lava, trapping the opposing beys in rock, defenseless against a water/magma spear strike.
Team attack X: “Inzori Finaleâ€: Team attack involving all the Team members: first, Narwhale soaks all the opponent beys, next Berserker zaps all of them, while the opponents are distracted by Narwhale and Berserkers team attack, then Narwhale fills the stadium with water at the same time, Saurian releases a flow of lava, trapping the opponent beys in Rock, allowing the entire team the time to do “Infinite Magma Hydro Electric Kantana Attack†without any opposition
Spin Direction: L/R
Character bio:
Gender: Female
Clothes: wears basically the same as all the Inzori except that her cloak is blue with silver flames.
Caries a special Touch Screen Repair Computer, TSRC, and tools for bey repairs
Rank in Team: repairer. (Technician)
Black hair, Chinese origin, and 2nd oldest of 4 children
Attitude: very reckless, and has a short temper, her twin brother, Izuma, does all that he can do to make sure she doesn’t go out of control with her rage and short temper doesn’t get the worst of her, her classmates (except for Izuma) are jealous of her. When she promises something, you can guarantee that she will keep her promise unless it has anything to do with murder or theft. She can get very angry with her 2 younger brothers, she respects Inzori as the greatest beyblader of all time
She is Izuma’s twin sister
Age: 17 as of February 27, 2011
Name: Hatachi Inzori
BeyBlade: begins with: Static Zerker LB135 ELRF final form: Electric Berserker BXBCH135 EMCLRF
Beyblade type: Attack
BeyBlade Discription:
Face: A sword with electricity coming out of it and the writing BERSERKER or ZERKER on the bottom. (Color: the sword: Silver, everything else: yellow on a black background)
Electric: Looks like a metal wheel with 4 lengthened protrusions in the shape of thunderbolts. (Slightly overhangs the track like Rock does (color: silver))
Static: same as Electric but it only has 3 protrusions
Berserker: 4 very large swords in a circle. (Color: translucent light yellow)
Zerker: 3 swords in a circle. (Color: translucent dark yellow)
BXBCH135: Bending eXtreme Blades Change Height 13.5mm – 16.0mm, basically a CH___ with 4 large Blades that can bend at Hatachi’s command during battle.
LB135: Lightning Blade 13.5mm, 3 lightning like blades facing outward.
ELRF: Eternal Left Rubber Flat, a free spinning RF.
EMCLRF: Eternal Metal Coated Left Rubber Flat, combine Metal Flat, Rubber Flat, and Eternal___ and CS, a free spinning LRF with a Metal Coat around it. (The metal coat is raised by 2mm from the Left Rubber Flat)
Super attacks:
Level 1: “Static Shieldâ€: a shield of electricity that causes the opponent’s bey to gain static electricity and stick to other unwanted friction causing things.
Level 2: “Lightning Horn Rampâ€: a Horn with a smooth slope made of electricity rams the opponent bey and “slopes†it out of the stadium if it hits.
Level 3: “Electric Blade Typhoonâ€: a electric typhoon with electric Berserker Blades popping out every where to hit the opposing bey.
Level X: “Electric Berserker Bladeâ€: Electric Berserker’s version of Samurai’s Infinite Blade except that the sword is made of electricity.
Team attacks:
Team attack 1: “Hydro Shockâ€: Team attack with Hydro Narwhale: First, Narwhale soaks the opposing beys with water, then Berserker zaps them, after that, Narwhale creates a water typhoon that Berserker charges with electricity.
Team attack 2: “Lightning Kantana Diveâ€: Team attack with Silent Samurai: Berserker goes around Samurai as a shield while circling the stadium (like the moon is Berserker, earth is Samurai and the centre of the stadium id the sun) and then Samurai shoots up in the sky, descending with Samurai spinning a kantana charged with lightning and Berserker keeping the opponent bey in one spot by surrounding it with a electric fence.
Team attack 3: “Lava/Lightning Trap Grindâ€: Team attack with Magma Saurian: (possibly the silliest tag-team attack ever) Saurian makes a wall of lava in the shape of [and Berserker creates a wall that looks like], then they trap the opposing beys in between the two walls like this[], then make the wall look like ll, thus creating friction to halt the trapped beys to a complete stop
Team attack X: “Inzori Finaleâ€: Team attack involving all the Team members: first, Narwhale soaks all the opponent beys, next Berserker zaps all of them, while the opponents are distracted by Narwhale and Berserkers team attack, then Narwhale fills the stadium with water at the same time, Saurian releases a flow of lava, trapping the opponent beys in Rock, allowing the entire team the time to do “Infinite Magma Hydro Electric Kantana Attack†without any opposition
Spin direction: Left
Character bio:
Gender: male
Clothes: wears basically the same as all the Inzori except that his cloak is black with yellow thunderbolts, and wears repair goggles.
Black hair, Chinese origin, and 3rd of 4 children
Carries a special touch screen analyzer computer that can scan beys and create strategies according to the opponent’s bey parts and battle strategies for each of the team’s members
Team rank: Tactician
Attitude: a Bey strategist, caring and intelligent.
Age: 14 years old as of March 8, 2011
Name: Rez Inzori
Beyblade: first bey: Inferno Dino BD145 RS ___ final bey: Magma Saurian XGBCH160 RDS
BeyBlade Description:
Face: A T-Red head blowing Flame and the writing DINO on the bottom for Inferno Dino/A T-Rex head with Magma trickling down the side and the writing SAURIAN on the bottom for Magma Saurian. (Color: Brown T-Rex head, red flames/magma, & gold DINO/SAURIAN)
Inferno: the Hasbro Pre-HWS HWS version of SGTO (red and brown)
Magma: Metal version of Heat with rubber in the gaps. (Rubber: red, metal: un-colored)
Dino: a T-Rex in a circle (the T-Rex: brown, the background or other plastic: red)
Saurian: ripples of lava in a circle. (Color: translucent red)
BD145: Hell Kerbecs’ Track. (Translucent red)
XGBCH160: eXtreme Gravity Bowl Change Height 16.0mm – 18.5mm, cross of CH___ and GB145, 4 metal balls on the shell of CH___, the plastic is arranged in a 4 pronged star.
RS: Rubber Sharp. (Color: translucent red, rubber: red)
RDS: Rubber Defense Sharp, a DS made of rubber (Color: red rubber and translucent red for the plastic parts)
Super attacks:
Level 1: “Lava Shieldâ€: Saurian creates a wall of Lava around it to protect it from attacks.
Level 2: “Lava Wipeoutâ€: Saurian creates a wave of lava to cover its opponents.
Level X: “Volcano Graveâ€: Saurian suddenly starts circling the stadium and creates a miniature un-erupted volcano in the middle of the stadium, then when the opponent’s bey is in the volcano’s crater, the volcano explodes, sending the opponent’s bey flying.
Team attacks:
Team attack 1: Magma Kantana Strike: Team attack with Silent Samurai: Refer to “Electric Kantana Dive†team attack with Berserker’s parts replaced by Saurian
Team attack 2: “Lava/Lightning Trap Grind†(possibly the silliest tag-team attack ever) : Team attack with Electric Berserker: Saurian makes a wall of lava in the shape of [and Berserker creates a wall that looks like], then they trap the opposing beys in between the two walls like this[], then make the wall look like ll, thus creating friction to halt the trapped beys to a complete stop
Team attack 3: Rock Strike: Team attack with Hydro Narwhale: Narwhale fills the stadium with at the same time, Saurian releases a flow of lava, trapping the opposing beys in rock, defenseless against a water/magma spear strike.
Team attack X: “Inzori Finaleâ€: Team attack involving all the Team members: first, Narwhale soaks all the opponent beys, next Berserker zaps all of them, while the opponents are distracted by Narwhale and Berserkers team attack, then Narwhale fills the stadium with water at the same time, Saurian releases a flow of lava, trapping the opponent beys in Rock, allowing the entire team the time to do “Infinite Magma Hydro Electric Kantana Attack†without any opposition
Character bio:
Gender: male
Clothes: wears basically the same as all the Inzori except that his cloak is silver with red flames.
Black hair, Chinese origin, and the youngest of 4 children
Team rank: Attack absorber (the shield)
Attitude: very humorous, liked by everyone.