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RE: Ray Joker's Flame Byxis 230WD Article Draft - ©oke - Jan. 27, 2011 You could put something like "Can be beaten by 85 but it can also defeat it" RE: Ray Joker's Flame Byxis 230WD Article Draft - Ray Joker - Jan. 27, 2011 It doesn't really make sense, IMO, because only two people have tested 85 against 230 and it won, while the rest have proved 230 can defeat 85. RE: Ray Joker's Flame Byxis 230WD Article Draft - Kai-V - Jan. 27, 2011 I would not write anything about that for the moment. RE: Ray Joker's Flame Byxis 230WD Article Draft - Ray Joker - Jan. 27, 2011 Okay, thank you Kai-V! RE: Ray Joker's Flame Byxis 230WD Article Draft - Serotonin - Jun. 22, 2011 Hey there, was writing a Flame Byxis 230WD draft when I found yours haha; this is the best draft of this we have, so I thought I would work off it and add some things too: Quote:Face: Byxis Comments/Crit/Suggestions welcome as usual, haha. RE: Ray Joker's Flame Byxis 230WD Article Draft - Ga' - Jun. 23, 2011 Shouldn't D be used in the 230 stamina combo? D was found to be the best choice for 230 stamina, WD's wobbling made it bad, and SD just failed epically. And I believe its MF Vulcan Byxis 85RF/R2F, yes? And edit that last sentence of Byxis, the meanwhile seems awkwardly placed. "Meanwhile, Byxis' unique shape allows it to be used with certain Metal Wheels to expose their contact points more prominently." sounds better IMO. RE: Ray Joker's Flame Byxis 230WD Article Draft - Serotonin - Jun. 23, 2011 Ah yeah, you're right and I meant to change that. WD isn't a great choice for 230. MF is a good call too. Removing the comma makes it sound better, but I don't think putting meanwhile at the start sounds great either. RE: Ray Joker's Flame Byxis 230WD Article Draft - Ga' - Jun. 23, 2011 True, it's just an awkward sentence in general. RE: Ray Joker's Flame Byxis 230WD Article Draft - Dan - Aug. 18, 2011 going to bump this. I wanted to make a Flame Byxis article, but obviously I would first look around and I came across this which has already been edited by an admin so I thought why not just reinvigorate this thread rather than make my own. (much simpler, and faster that way.) Oh, Quote:230 is rounder and thicker than regular Tracks with no gimmicks,TBH its amazing height is a gimmick of its own, no? and yeah maybe you should make it clearer that it is much smoother than other tracks which have a hexagonal type shape to them. This could very well play a large part in the fact that if it were to have the usual hexagonal type shape (85-145) it would have more recoil. Perhaps a small and completely theoretical idea which shouldn't be included? lol RE: Ray Joker's Flame Byxis 230WD Article Draft - Mr. N - Aug. 18, 2011 Isn't TH170 better? RE: Ray Joker's Flame Byxis 230WD Article Draft - Dan - Aug. 18, 2011 That isn't really relevant, is it? RE: Ray Joker's Flame Byxis 230WD Article Draft - Mr. N - Aug. 18, 2011 I wasn't replying to you, I was pointing out that TH170 is better than 230. Example - Basalt TH170WF/CS > Basalt 230WF/CS RE: Ray Joker's Flame Byxis 230WD Article Draft - Serotonin - Aug. 18, 2011 (Aug. 18, 2011 5:29 PM)Dan Wrote:Quote:230 is rounder and thicker than regular Tracks with no gimmicks,TBH its amazing height is a gimmick of its own, no? Arguably yes, but the point I was trying to illustrate here is the very point you've highlighted there too. You're right about the recoil issue, and I'll add that in. (Aug. 18, 2011 6:40 PM)Mr. N Wrote: Isn't TH170 better? I suppose we could add a sentence that TH170's versatility and height as TH220 makes it a superior choice to 230 now. RE: Ray Joker's Flame Byxis 230WD Article Draft - Dan - Aug. 18, 2011 Other than that little thing, I felt everything was really good. (Update the recommended combinations, and we're good to go, I think!) Shame I didn't get a crack at the article myself, haha. RE: Ray Joker's Flame Byxis 230WD Article Draft - Imperial - Aug. 19, 2011 Under clear wheel and track shouldn't it be was released instead of is released since it was released in the past? RE: Ray Joker's Flame Byxis 230WD Article Draft - Ray Joker - Aug. 19, 2011 Great draft, ♥! By the way: (Jun. 22, 2011 8:34 PM)♥ Wrote: Byxis was originally released in a turquoise green color. It is overall round in shape, and has four arrows. There are two large arrows, on which stickers can be placed. The remaining two arrows have a dark blue color. The Clear Wheel represents a compass, with four circular symbols to represent North, South, East, and West. Byxis’s unique shape meanwhile allows it to be used in conjunction with certain Metal Wheels to expose their contact points more prominently. Isn't this supposed to be Byxis' ? RE: Ray Joker's Flame Byxis 230WD Article Draft - Kai-V - Aug. 19, 2011 (Aug. 19, 2011 3:57 AM)Ray Joker Wrote: By the way: In English, all proper names coupled with a possessive mark can be either "Alexis'" or "Alexis's", to the discretion of the writer. RE: Ray Joker's Flame Byxis 230WD Article Draft - Ray Joker - Aug. 19, 2011 Ah, ok, thanks for clearing that up Kai-V. RE: Ray Joker's Flame Byxis 230WD Article Draft - Spdshadow - Aug. 20, 2011 How bout MF(the customisable one) Basalt Aquario TH170 WF? You could go right under the metal wheel with 220 and destabilize it with Aquario clear wheel, and come round again for another hit while your opponent is wobbly. Won't it be a KO since basalt would be so heavy? RE: Ray Joker's Flame Byxis 230WD Article Draft - Dan - Aug. 20, 2011 Yo, so we gonna get this posted? I mean it looks good enough for it. All that is needed now are some pictures. RE: Ray Joker's Flame Byxis 230WD Article Draft - Blitz Unicorno - Aug. 20, 2011 heart: In the Flame article, shouldn't that destabiliser be removed since destabilisers are outdated now? And in use in stamina customization, rather than Flame Bull 85WD put Flame Bull 230D since Flame is one of the best wheels on 230. RE: Ray Joker's Flame Byxis 230WD Article Draft - Dan - Aug. 20, 2011 Destabilizers still do well and are not outdated. Take anything on 85 and it will destabilize 145's, take 145's and it will destabilize TH170/230. Take TH170 and it will also destabilize 145s from the top. Basically most stamina matches involve destabilization in some form or another. It is still prominent. RE: Ray Joker's Flame Byxis 230WD Article Draft - Blitz Unicorno - Aug. 20, 2011 Kei also said that destabilisers should not be seen as a type/sub-type since destabilisation is just a result of two beyblades' height. RE: Ray Joker's Flame Byxis 230WD Article Draft - Dan - Aug. 20, 2011 Therefore destabilizers can never be outdated..? RE: Ray Joker's Flame Byxis 230WD Article Draft - Blitz Unicorno - Aug. 20, 2011 (Jun. 27, 2011 9:04 AM)Kei Wrote: Pure "destabilizers" have always been outdated. They're garbage; why use a "destabilizer" when you could just use a Stamina custom on a low Track?Flame Cancer 100SF is a pure destabiliser, isn't it? |