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RE: Bakushin Susanoh 90WF Article Attempt - WhyD125 - Jan. 10, 2011
It is not "Susanoh", it is Susanow.
RE: Bakushin Susanoh 90WF Article Attempt - Ultra - Jan. 10, 2011
Since this is describing the takara version mainly it's actually Susanoo. Susanow is the hasbro name. I just noticed in the overall section you say that it lost to burn mold 1 yet it won when tested against burn for stamina...
RE: Bakushin Susanoh 90WF Article Attempt - Kai-V - Jan. 10, 2011
(Jan. 10, 2011 4:25 PM)Ultrablader Wrote: Since this is describing the takara version mainly it's actually Susanoo. Susanow is the hasbro name.Actually it is Susanow with TAKARA-TOMY as well.
RE: Bakushin Susanoh 90WF Article Attempt - Ultra - Jan. 10, 2011
That's what I said though... I said that Susanow is the hasbro version name.
RE: Bakushin Susanoh 90WF Article Attempt - Kai-V - Jan. 10, 2011
(Jan. 10, 2011 4:46 PM)Ultrablader Wrote: That's what I said though... I said that Susanow is the hasbro version name.What ? I am telling you that in both versions, it is Susanow, not Susanoo and Susanow. Nor Susanoh.
RE: Bakushin Susanoh 90WF Article Attempt - Daegor42 - Jan. 10, 2011
(Jan. 10, 2011 4:46 PM)Ultrablader Wrote: That's what I said though... I said that Susanow is the hasbro version name.
No, Susanow is just the name. Takara Tomy officially uses Susanow as well, which is what Kai-V said.
RE: Bakushin Susanoh 90WF Article Attempt - ShadowPegasis - Jan. 11, 2011
(Jan. 10, 2011 4:25 PM)Ultrablader Wrote: Since this is describing the takara version mainly it's actually Susanoo. Susanow is the hasbro name. I just noticed in the overall section you say that it lost to burn mold 1 yet it won when tested against burn for stamina...
In the Bakushin discussion thread it actually had a better win rate against Earth. I was basing the "Earth>Bakushin>Burn" thing on a post I saw earlier.
Okay, I fixed the Bakushin section and changed all the "Susanoh"s to "Susanow"s.
RE: Bakushin Susanoh 90WF Article Attempt - Ultra - Jan. 11, 2011
No it didn't....
RE: Bakushin Susanoh 90WF Article Attempt - ShadowPegasis - Jan. 11, 2011
(Jan. 11, 2011 9:47 AM)Ultrablader Wrote: No it didn't....
Ah, sorry. I mixed the win rates up. I fail
haha. I'll make the edits now.
RE: Bakushin Susanoh 90WF Article Attempt - UDC - Jan. 12, 2011
Ah....
the face deciepts susanoo
Also, Susanoo isn't considered a deity, its considered a Kami, which is a spirit.
RE: Bakushin Susanoh 90WF Article Attempt - ShadowPegasis - Jan. 12, 2011
Thanks UDC. Fixed.
RE: Bakushin Susanoh 90WF Article Attempt - ShadowPegasis - Jan. 12, 2011
Made some minor edits to the Bakushin section. What do you guys think?
RE: Bakushin Susanoh 90WF Article Attempt - ShadowPegasis - Jan. 13, 2011
Anything else need editing?
RE: Bakushin Susanoh 90WF Article Attempt - ShadowPegasis - Jan. 16, 2011
Are there any other things that need to be added.
RE: Bakushin Susanoh 90WF Article Attempt - Ultra - Jan. 16, 2011
Bakushin needs way more testing before this article is ready to go up. One small thing though is that you should take out bit in the WF and 90 sections where you say: "this version is clear" since all releases of WF and 90 have been clear.
RE: Bakushin Susanoh 90WF Article Attempt - go-pegasis - Feb. 15, 2011
I think that it would be good to mention that hasbro gives a metal face
RE: Bakushin Susanoh 90WF Article Attempt - ShadowPegasis - Feb. 15, 2011
(Feb. 15, 2011 4:07 AM)go-pegasis Wrote: I think that it would be good to mention that hasbro gives a metal face
You obviously didn't read the entire article.
RE: Bakushin Susanoh 90WF Article Attempt - SajjanSV - Feb. 17, 2011
Copy the MF L-Drago 100 WF section from the quetz article for consistency.
RE: Bakushin Susanoh 90WF Article Attempt - ShadowPegasis - Feb. 17, 2011
Okay. But I'm doing this on mobile, so it'll take some time.
EDIT: Nevermind, I'll just do it once I can get to a computer.
RE: Bakushin Susanoh 90WF Article Attempt - LeonTempest - Feb. 20, 2011
From when i look at my Hasbro Susanow, its name is not on the clear wheel. perhsps a notable difference between TT and Habsro Susanows?
mention that the white/ivory paint is flaky and of low quality, and comes off easily.
also, you are overkilling the use of the word, "the" try being less repetative, especialy in the beggining of the article and the clear wheel section.
all that aside, this is looking good so far.
RE: Bakushin Susanoh 90WF Article Attempt - ShadowPegasis - Feb. 20, 2011
The name is indeed on both versions. I have the Hasbro version and it's quite noticeable. I'll make the other edits later though.
RE: Bakushin Susanoh 90WF Article Attempt - BeyPhilosopher - Feb. 20, 2011
Quote:he Bakushin wheel has very little recoil since every ridge on it is so small.If I where you I'd put put "every ridge on it is relatively" or "very small".
RE: Bakushin Susanoh 90WF Article Attempt - ShadowPegasis - Feb. 21, 2011
Thanks a lot everyone. Anything else?
RE: Bakushin Susanoh 90WF Article Attempt - ShadowPegasis - Feb. 27, 2011
Anything need to be fixed?
RE: Bakushin Susanoh 90WF Article Attempt (Awaiting criticism) - ShadowPegasis - Feb. 28, 2011
I edited the other versions section by adding Lunar Eclipse ver.