RE: Beyblade: Metal Burst (Its finally here!) - WizardBlader - Aug. 20, 2022
I’m going to take a bit of a break from writing for a while. I'm definitely not quitting this series, but its just a quick vacation to get back some more creativity.
It’s actually been a bit nicer, not working much on B:MB for a week, and it let me focus more on life a bit better. I don’t know when I’ll upload the next Chapters, but stay tuned.
If this sounds like I’m also taking a vacation from the WBO, I’m not, it’s just B:MB.
-WizardBlader
RE: Beyblade: Metal Burst (Its finally here!) - Stupid Blader - Aug. 20, 2022
(Aug. 20, 2022 2:07 AM)WizardBlader Wrote: I’m going to take a bit of a break from writing for a while. I'm definitely not quitting this series, but its just a quick vacation to get back some more creativity.
It’s actually been nice not working much on B:MB for a week, and it let me focus more on life a bit better. I don’t know when I’ll upload the next Chapters, but stay tuned.
If this sounds like I’m also taking a vacation from the WBO, I’m not, it’s just B:MB.
-WizardBlader
Hi,im a new blader here and i just read the overview and i think its amazing! I might get hooked so im limiting myself to one episode a day.
Cant wait to read episode 1 tomorrow  !
RE: Beyblade: Metal Burst (Its finally here!) - WizardBlader - Aug. 20, 2022
(Aug. 20, 2022 2:19 AM)Stupid Blader Wrote: (Aug. 20, 2022 2:07 AM)WizardBlader Wrote: I’m going to take a bit of a break from writing for a while. I'm definitely not quitting this series, but its just a quick vacation to get back some more creativity.
It’s actually been nice not working much on B:MB for a week, and it let me focus more on life a bit better. I don’t know when I’ll upload the next Chapters but stay tuned.
If this sounds like I’m also taking a vacation from the WBO, I’m not, it’s just B:MB.
-WizardBlader
Hi,im a new blader here and i just read the overview and i think it's amazing! I might get hooked so I'm limiting myself to one episode a day.
Can't wait to read episode 1 tomorrow !
Thanks! I hope you enjoy! ^^
RE: Beyblade: Metal Burst (Its finally here!) - WizardBlader - Nov. 29, 2022
I'm back! While I went on break, I've decided to re-do the entire series. Looking back on it all, the writing style is a bit strange to me now, and I definitely should have spent a lot more time with the first few chapters, than trying to release right after announcing.
I'm not releasing the "remastered" chapters anytime soon (I haven't even gotten started "remastering" yet!), this is just an announcement that I should've made weeks ago.
When I do release, I will probably not have a really organized schedule. Ill also add more information about the characters/beys in the future.
So yeah, sorry for the super long break(s). (And extremely possible future ones)
-WizardBlader
RE: Beyblade: Metal Burst (Please Close Thread) - WizardBlader - Dec. 31, 2022
So, I've taken some time to think about what I should do for the reboot/remastering, and it seems to be coming together quite nicely in my mind.
The reboot will not be with any of the burst characters this time, I find it too difficult to implement their personalities in a good way to my story, and that's why I made that decision.
Because of this, expect a few more brand-new characters in the reboot! I have also made this decision by reading some of the new threads talking about the future of Beyblade anime/manga and gotten inspiration to start anew in a way that feels like how it should be done.
Will be making the brand-new System-Plot Overview as well.
-WizardBlader
RE: Beyblade: Metal Burst (Its finally here!) - Hollowmind13 - Jan. 01, 2023
(Nov. 29, 2022 2:10 AM)WizardBlader Wrote: I dunno if this qualifies as necroposting but:
I'm back! While I went on break, I've decided to re-do the entire series. Looking back on it all, the writing style is a bit strange to me now, and I definitely should have spent a lot more time with the first few chapters, than trying to release right after announcing.
I'm not releasing the "remastered" chapters anytime soon (I haven't even gotten started "remastering" yet!), this is just an announcement that I should've made weeks ago.
When I do release, I will probably not have a really organized schedule. Ill also add more information about the characters/beys in the future.
So yeah, sorry for the super long break(s). (And extremely possible future ones)
-WizardBlader
P.S.: Would deleting the thread and starting anew be a good choice? If so, can some one with experience doing that please tell me? Thanks in advance! .
As you're reviving your own fanfic thread, I don't think you are necroposting.
As for deletion, don't think you need that either.
RE: Beyblade: Metal Burst (Please close thread) - WizardBlader - Jan. 01, 2023
(Jan. 01, 2023 1:08 AM)Hollowmind13 Wrote: (Nov. 29, 2022 2:10 AM)WizardBlader Wrote: I dunno if this qualifies as necroposting but:
I'm back! While I went on break, I've decided to re-do the entire series. Looking back on it all, the writing style is a bit strange to me now, and I definitely should have spent a lot more time with the first few chapters, than trying to release right after announcing.
I'm not releasing the "remastered" chapters anytime soon (I haven't even gotten started "remastering" yet!), this is just an announcement that I should've made weeks ago.
When I do release, I will probably not have a really organized schedule. Ill also add more information about the characters/beys in the future.
So yeah, sorry for the super long break(s). (And extremely possible future ones)
-WizardBlader
P.S.: Would deleting the thread and starting anew be a good choice? If so, can some one with experience doing that please tell me? Thanks in advance! :D .
As you're reviving your own fanfic thread, I don't think you are necroposting.
As for deletion, don't think you need that either.
Ah, thank you for telling me about the deletion part.
Ill change my recent post and thread name then.
Edit: Done!
RE: Beyblade: Metal Burst (Rebooted) - WizardBlader - Jan. 01, 2023
Rebooted System Overview is done! A few new Beyblade parts! Plot Overview hopefully coming soon.
If some parts are hard to understand, just tell me, and I'll make it clear.
Beyblade: Metal Burst (Rebooted) System Overview
Layer: The layer of the Beyblade is separated into two parts. The 'MB Blade', which is the top-most part of the Layer, and is where the more prominent contact points are placed. The second part of the Layer is the 'MB Layer'. the MB Layer fits under the MB Blade uniformly and contains the lesser contact points.
The metal teeth of the Beyblade (for Burst Mode only) are also contained within the MB Layer.
The MB Blade also includes an unbreakable metal burst stopper embedded within it, that engages with a hard launch. This mode is called Metal Mode. This ability can also be reversed by folding the metal lock farther back within the MB Blade, locking it into Burst Mode. To get the metal lock out, simply utilizing a Lock Tool will be enough.
The teeth on MB Layers vary in design, but not in material. They are always made of metal. The main material of the entire layer is metal. Other materials, such as rubber, can also be used.
NA's: Nano Armors are the middle of the Beyblade, and are adjustable in size, to make the Beyblade short, or tall. (Not unlike a Metal Fight Spin Track) They also contain the two metal nubs on the Burst Cap to make contact with the MB Layer's metal teeth, plus a spring for burst resistance. There are also fused metal prongs to make the bursting gimmick possible. (Not unlike a Burst Forge Disk) <-- (New)
NT's/ND's: Nano Tips (also called Nano Drivers), have two clips on opposite ends, to connect with Nano Armors.
MB Cd's: MB Core Drives are where the motif of the Beyblade is placed. The shape, and materials of this part can be highly experimented with. (Example: Metal Bit motif, the rest is plastic etc.) MB Core Drives hold the full Layer together, by being screwed into the center holes in the layer. It does not hold the entire Beyblade together.
So far, there are two Systems for the Metal Burst System. The Fused Layer System, and the Dual Hybrid Layer System. The Fused Layer System is where the MB Blade, MB Layer, and MB Cd's, or MB Core Drives are completely fused together. This is the primary system, and not much customization can be done. (Is the size of a God Burst Beyblade) <-- (New as well)
The Dual Hybrid Layer System is the successor to the Fused Layer System, and the MB Blade, MB Layer, and MB Cd's, or MB Core Drives are completely separate and unique pieces of the Layer, creating far more customizability. (Is the size of a Cho-Z subsystem Beyblade, like Cho-Z Valkyrie) <-- (Also new)
RE: Beyblade: Metal Burst (Rebooted) - Hollowmind13 - Jan. 01, 2023
(Jan. 01, 2023 7:34 PM)WizardBlader Wrote: Rebooted System Overview is done! A few new Beyblade parts! Plot Overview hopefully coming soon.
If some parts are hard to understand, just tell me, and I'll make it clear.
Beyblade: Metal Burst (Rebooted) System Overview
Layer: The layer of the Beyblade is separated into two parts. The 'MB Blade', which is the top-most part of the Layer, and is where the more prominent contact points are placed. The second part of the Layer is the 'MB Layer'. the MB Layer fits under the MB Blade uniformly and contains the lesser contact points.
The teeth of the Beyblade (for Burst Mode only) are also contained within the MB Layer.
The MB Blade also includes an unbreakable metal burst stopper embedded within it, that engages with a hard launch. This mode is called Metal Mode. This ability can also be reversed by folding the metal lock farther back within the MB Blade, locking it into Burst Mode. To get the metal lock out, simply utilizing a Lock Tool will be enough.
The teeth on MB Layers vary in design, but not in material. They are always made of metal. The main material of the entire layer is metal. Other materials, such as rubber, can also be used.
Many Layers are Dual-Spin, meaning that they can spin to the left or the right when the Blader chooses to change the MB Blade spin direction, by flipping the MB Blade over.
NA's: Nano Armors are the middle of the Beyblade, and are adjustable in size, to make the Beyblade short, or tall. They also contain the two metal nubs on the Burst Cap to make contact with the MB Layer's teeth, plus a spring for burst resistance.
NT's/ND's: Nano Tips (also called Nano Drivers), have two clips on opposite ends, to connect with Nano Armors.
MB Cd's: MB Core Drives are where the motif of the Beyblade is placed. The shape, and materials of this part can be highly experimented with. (Example: Metal Bit motif, the rest is plastic etc.) MB Core Drives hold the full Layer together, by being screwed into the center holes in the layer. It does not hold the entire Beyblade together.
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I wouldn't reccommend having loads of the beys features dual-spun because it could limit them, especially attack types.
Also, is Metal mode like, a burst stopper than can be pushed back in battle or is it more of a set mode thing?
RE: Beyblade: Metal Burst (Rebooted) - WizardBlader - Jan. 02, 2023
(Jan. 01, 2023 9:17 PM)Hollowmind13 Wrote: (Jan. 01, 2023 7:34 PM)WizardBlader Wrote: Rebooted System Overview is done! A few new Beyblade parts! Plot Overview hopefully coming soon.
If some parts are hard to understand, just tell me, and I'll make it clear.
Beyblade: Metal Burst (Rebooted) System Overview
Layer: The layer of the Beyblade is separated into two parts. The 'MB Blade', which is the top-most part of the Layer, and is where the more prominent contact points are placed. The second part of the Layer is the 'MB Layer'. the MB Layer fits under the MB Blade uniformly and contains the lesser contact points.
The teeth of the Beyblade (for Burst Mode only) are also contained within the MB Layer.
The MB Blade also includes an unbreakable metal burst stopper embedded within it, that engages with a hard launch. This mode is called Metal Mode. This ability can also be reversed by folding the metal lock farther back within the MB Blade, locking it into Burst Mode. To get the metal lock out, simply utilizing a Lock Tool will be enough.
The teeth on MB Layers vary in design, but not in material. They are always made of metal. The main material of the entire layer is metal. Other materials, such as rubber, can also be used.
Many Layers are Dual-Spin, meaning that they can spin to the left or the right when the Blader chooses to change the MB Blade spin direction, by flipping the MB Blade over.
NA's: Nano Armors are the middle of the Beyblade, and are adjustable in size, to make the Beyblade short, or tall. They also contain the two metal nubs on the Burst Cap to make contact with the MB Layer's teeth, plus a spring for burst resistance.
NT's/ND's: Nano Tips (also called Nano Drivers), have two clips on opposite ends, to connect with Nano Armors.
MB Cd's: MB Core Drives are where the motif of the Beyblade is placed. The shape, and materials of this part can be highly experimented with. (Example: Metal Bit motif, the rest is plastic etc.) MB Core Drives hold the full Layer together, by being screwed into the center holes in the layer. It does not hold the entire Beyblade together.
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I wouldn't recommend having loads of the beys features dual-spun because it could limit them, especially attack types.
Also, is Metal mode like, a burst stopper than can be pushed back in battle or is it more of a set mode thing?
The dual spin tip I agree with, now that I think of it. I guess I was focusing a bit much on the plastic gen’s features. Just changed the overview to account for that.
Metal Mode is a set mode thing.
RE: Beyblade: Metal Burst (Rebooted) - WizardBlader - Jan. 02, 2023
And it's here! The Plot Overview for Season 1!
If there's any questions, don't be afraid to ask!
Beyblade: Metal Burst (Rebooted) Plot Overview (Season 1)
This story takes place in a completely new universe. Beyblade in this universe remains a largely known sport in many places around the globe. The Beyblades in this universe have all evolved around the Metal Burst System, making this system the only system used in this universe.
Xenophon "Xeno" Gatsuo, is the young Main Protagonist for this series. He is a pretty strong Blader, and easily makes friends because of his likeable personality. His older brother, Bellerophon "Bell" Gatsuo is the Antagonist. Bell is a very strong Blader, and he often places others and Xeno down, ruthlessly deeming them as weak and unworthy Bladers.
Xeno seeks to get the recognition and respect that he truly deserves from his brother. On his journey, he will meet many new friends, as he strives to become: NUMBER ONE! Will Xenophon be able to "redeem" himself in Bellerophon's eyes? Find out in: Beyblade: Metal Burst!
RE: Beyblade: Metal Burst (Rebooted) - WizardBlader - Jan. 03, 2023
The list of new Bladers, and their Beyblades:
List of Beyblade: Metal Burst Bladers/Beyblades (Season 1)
Male Bladers:
Akira Narito: Ares / Belligerent Ares
Bellerophon "Bell" Gatsuo: Bellerus / Void Bellerus
Dai Gendo: Deucalion / Eminent Deucalion
Hikaru Hideki: Hephaestus / Grand Hephaestus
Kane Murata: Kedalion / Eternal Kedalion
Makoto Lodin: Raging Minotaur
Natsu Saito: Neptune / Celestial Neptune
Ryoichi "Ochio" Gendo: Guardian Orion
Paine Yasuhiro: Hydronic Poseidon
Xenophon "Xeno" Gatsuo: Xanthus / Xenosis Xanthus
Female Bladers:
Chika Matsuo: Callisto / Lunar Callisto
Gen Ishigawa: Universe Ganymede
Jirako Orichi: Vortex Jupiter
Character contest probably won't start until I get a few Chapters out, that way I'll have time to adjust the plot accordingly.
Edit: The single named Beyblades without layer names are like the Pre-Hybrid Wheel and Prototype/Single Layer Beyblade names. Not a typo.
RE: Beyblade: Metal Burst (Rebooted) - Naℝut☢♛ - Jan. 08, 2023
I gotta say this fan fic is really good, props to you. Though whenever that character contest pops up I'm definitely entering it. I wonder what my oc could do with your level of writing.
RE: Beyblade: Metal Burst (Rebooted) - WizardBlader - Jan. 28, 2023
Chapter One (Rebooted) is FINALLY out!
Please leave a review!
Beyblade: Metal Burst Episode 1
(A young boy is seen running frantically through a densely populated city block)
???: I'm late! I'm so late! I'm definitely going to go to detention-
(The boy suddenly stops)
???: I've got to take a short cut; not like it'll save me though...
(The boy continues, and arrives at a bridge, not far from his school)
???: Almost there-
(The boy stops as he hears some aggressive talking below the bridge)
Eclipse Grunt 1: Kid, just give up your Beyblade! It'll make it easier for the both of us!
Eclipse Grunt 2: That's right. Unless you want it to be completely pulverized!
Kid: No! My blade and I will keep fighting-
???: Wait! Stop bullying my friend, Queran- AH!
(The boy tumbles down the hill next to the bridge, landing painfully next to the scene)
Eclipse Grunt(s) What the-
Queran: Huh- Xenophon?!
Xenophon: I'm alright... But what are these guys doing to your Beyblade?!
(Amidst the confusion, one of the Eclipse Grunts takes Queran's blade from the stadium as Xenophon gets up)
Queran: Hey, my blade!
(Queran tries to grab back his Beyblade, but is pushed back by the other Grunt)
Grunt 2: Tough luck, kid. Just deal with it.
(Queran gets up, and begins to walk away with a forlorn look on his face, but Xenophon grabs his arm)
Xenophon: So, you're just giving up?
Queran: *Nods* There's nothing I can do, is there?
Xenophon: nothing you can do, but there's something I can do.
(Queran turns to face Xenophon with a scared look on his face)
Queran: No! Don't challenge them! If you lose, you'll also lose your blade!
(Xenophon pats Queran on the shoulder, smiling reassuringly)
Xenophon: I got this. Hey! I got a deal for you guys.
(The Grunts look at Xenophon, smirking)
Grunt 1: Hah! What kinda deal? A kid like you ain't got nothin' to give to us!
Xenophon: I got a battle challenge. If I win in a bey battle with you guys, you've got to give back Queran's bey. If I lose, well...
Grunt 1: We get your Beyblade! Seems fair enough.
Queran: *Muttering* As if these guys know what the word 'fair' means...
Grunt 2: So, because you've challenged us, Eclipse BeyGang bladers to a bey battle, we have our own set of rules. The battle is set in Burst Mode, no rematches, we both battle you, and we get your blade if you lose. Kapish?
Xenophon: Gotcha.
Queran: *Frowning* Are you sure, Xeno?
Xenophon: As sure as I'll ever be!
Grunt 1: C'mon, we don't got all day here! Let's go!
Xenophon: Yeah, yeah...
(Xenophon pulls out his blade)
Xenophon: This'll be the blade I'm battling with. Its name is Xanthus. Got any problem with that?
Grunt 1: *sniggers* You're asking if we've got problems? It looks pretty weak anyways.
(Xenophon and the two Grunts prepare for battle)
Grunt 2: Well, then. Ready, set...
Xenophon/Grunts: 3, 2, 1, Go... SHOOT!
(All three Beyblades land in the stadium, Grunt 1 and Xenophon's Beyblades are going around the stadium, while Grunt 2 claims the center)
Grunt 1: Alrighty, pulverize this little twerp!
(Grunt 1's Beyblade heads at Xanthus, but misses, and hits Grunt 2's Beyblade)
Grunt 2 Huh?! Why're you attacking me?!
Xenophon: An opening! Get them, Xanthus!
(Xanthus heads down the stadium, and does a mini flower pattern/barrage on the two beys, which destabilizes Grunt 1's Beyblade)
Grunt 1: No way! C'mon you dumb blade, balance yourself out!
Xenophon: Not a chance! Hit them again!
(Xanthus slams into Grunt 2's Beyblade, and utilizing the rebounding recoil from that attack, hits Grunt 1's Beyblade, bursting it instantly, then rebounding back to Grunt 2's Beyblade, bursting it as well)
Grunt 1/2: *shocked* No way!
Xenophon: Now. Hand over my friend's blade.
(Grunt 1 gives Queran's Beyblade back to Xenophon, who gives it to Queran)
Grunt 1: We won't forget this! Our Boss'll set you guys straight!
(The Grunts begin running away, clutching their Beyblades)
Queran: And Xeno'll be ready for that guy too!
Xenophon: Uh. I wouldn't be too sure of that, to be honest.
(Queran suddenly looks at his watch, and goes wide-eyed in despair)
Queran: Oh, boy we are really in trouble now. School started 15 minutes ago! We've got to get moving!
Xenophon: GAH! Let's go then! Mom'll be madder than ever...
(The two of them frantically run up the hill, across the bridge, and we fade to black.)
Location: Eclipse BeyGang's Base of Operations (Essentially an abandoned warehouse)
(Grunts 1 and 2 are seen kneeling on the concrete floor of the warehouse, in front of a menacingly constructed bey stadium)
Grunt 1: He beat us really good, Boss! We couldn't even put up a fight against him!
Grunt 2: Yeah, please, you can't do this to us!
(A silhouette of a strange figure is seen in the shadows, and two piercingly red eyes seem to shine from the darkness)
???: You guys are telling me what I can and can't do? Heh. It's like you're just begging for your blades to be destroyed!
(The two Grunts inch backward away from the stadium, terrified. Four other figures from the darkness approach them and restrain them while they take their Beyblades from them.)
Grunt 2: Please, spare our blades! Please!
(Two of the other figures who took the Beyblades launch them into the bey stadium, and slowly, the floor of the stadium opens, revealing a pit of molten steel)
Grunt 1/2: No!
(The Beyblades in the stadium try to stay away from their impending doom, but they end up hitting spikes on the entire perimeter of the stadium, and are flung into the pit, feeding the pit more metal)
???: There is no mercy in Eclipse. Only the powerful shall prevail in the world of Beyblade. There is no room for the weak. Remove these two from my sight.
(The bright red eyes flash again, and the two Grunts are pulled into the darkness, yelling and begging. A hooded figure walks up to the "boss" within the shadows)
???: They called the boy who defeated them, Xenophon. Bring him to me, Paine, and do everything in your power to bring him here to me. We may have some use for him here at Eclipse.
(The figure that the "Boss" called Paine bows deeply to him and jumps away through a skylight in the ceiling.)
END
RE: Beyblade: Metal Burst (Rebooted) - Hollowmind13 - Jan. 30, 2023
(Jan. 28, 2023 8:40 PM)WizardBlader Wrote: Chapter One (Rebooted) is FINALLY out!
Please leave a review!
Beyblade: Metal Burst Episode 1
(A young boy is seen running frantically through a densely populated city block)
???: I'm late! I'm so late! I'm definitely going to go to detention-
(The boy suddenly stops)
???: I've got to take a short cut; not like it'll save me though...
(The boy continues, and arrives at a bridge, not far from his school)
???: Almost there-
(The boy stops as he hears some aggressive talking below the bridge)
Eclipse Grunt 1: Kid, just give up your Beyblade! It'll make it easier for the both of us!
Eclipse Grunt 2: That's right. Unless you want it to be completely pulverized!
Kid: No! My blade and I will keep fighting-
???: Wait! Stop bullying my friend, Queran- AH!
(The boy tumbles down the hill next to the bridge, landing painfully next to the scene)
Eclipse Grunt(s) What the-
Queran: Huh- Xenophon?!
Xenophon: I'm alright... But what are these guys doing to your Beyblade?!
(Amidst the confusion, one of the Eclipse Grunts takes Queran's blade from the stadium as Xenophon gets up)
Queran: Hey, my blade!
(Queran tries to grab back his Beyblade, but is pushed back by the other Grunt)
Grunt 2: Tough luck, kid. Just deal with it.
(Queran gets up, and begins to walk away with a forlorn look on his face, but Xenophon grabs his arm)
Xenophon: So, you're just giving up?
Queran: *Nods* There's nothing I can do, is there?
Xenophon: nothing you can do, but there's something I can do.
(Queran turns to face Xenophon with a scared look on his face)
Queran: No! Don't challenge them! If you lose, you'll also lose your blade!
(Xenophon pats Queran on the shoulder, smiling reassuringly)
Xenophon: I got this. Hey! I got a deal for you guys.
(The Grunts look at Xenophon, smirking)
Grunt 1: Hah! What kinda deal? A kid like you ain't got nothin' to give to us!
Xenophon: I got a battle challenge. If I win in a bey battle with you guys, you've got to give back Queran's bey. If I lose, well...
Grunt 1: We get your Beyblade! Seems fair enough.
Queran: *Muttering* As if these guys know what the word 'fair' means...
Grunt 2: So, because you've challenged us, Eclipse BeyGang bladers to a bey battle, we have our own set of rules. The battle is set in Burst Mode, no rematches, we both battle you, and we get your blade if you lose. Kapish?
Xenophon: Gotcha.
Queran: *Frowning* Are you sure, Xeno?
Xenophon: As sure as I'll ever be!
Grunt 1: C'mon, we don't got all day here! Let's go!
Xenophon: Yeah, yeah...
(Xenophon pulls out his blade)
Xenophon: This'll be the blade I'm battling with. Its name is Xanthus. Got any problem with that?
Grunt 1: *sniggers* You're asking if we've got problems? It looks pretty weak anyways.
(Xenophon and the two Grunts prepare for battle)
Grunt 2: Well, then. Ready, set...
Xenophon/Grunts: 3, 2, 1, Go... SHOOT!
(All three Beyblades land in the stadium, Grunt 1 and Xenophon's Beyblades are going around the stadium, while Grunt 2 claims the center)
Grunt 1: Alrighty, pulverize this little twerp!
(Grunt 1's Beyblade heads at Xanthus, but misses, and hits Grunt 2's Beyblade)
Grunt 2 Huh?! Why're you attacking me?!
Xenophon: An opening! Get them, Xanthus!
(Xanthus heads down the stadium, and does a mini flower pattern/barrage on the two beys, which destabilizes Grunt 1's Beyblade)
Grunt 1: No way! C'mon you dumb blade, balance yourself out!
Xenophon: Not a chance! Hit them again!
(Xanthus slams into Grunt 2's Beyblade, and utilizing the rebounding recoil from that attack, hits Grunt 1's Beyblade, bursting it instantly, then rebounding back to Grunt 2's Beyblade, bursting it as well)
Grunt 1/2: *shocked* No way!
Xenophon: Now. Hand over my friend's blade.
(Grunt 1 gives Queran's Beyblade back to Xenophon, who gives it to Queran)
Grunt 1: We won't forget this! Our Boss'll set you guys straight!
(The Grunts begin running away, clutching their Beyblades)
Queran: And Xeno'll be ready for that guy too!
Xenophon: Uh. I wouldn't be too sure of that, to be honest.
(Queran suddenly looks at his watch, and goes wide-eyed in despair)
Queran: Oh, boy we are really in trouble now. School started 15 minutes ago! We've got to get moving!
Xenophon: GAH! Let's go then! Mom'll be madder than ever...
(The two of them frantically run up the hill, across the bridge, and we fade to black.)
Location: Eclipse BeyGang's Base of Operations (Essentially an abandoned warehouse)
(Grunts 1 and 2 are seen kneeling on the concrete floor of the warehouse, in front of a menacingly constructed bey stadium)
Grunt 1: He beat us really good, Boss! We couldn't even put up a fight against him!
Grunt 2: Yeah, please, you can't do this to us!
(A silhouette of a strange figure is seen in the shadows, and two piercingly red eyes seem to shine from the darkness)
???: You guys are telling me what I can and can't do? Heh. It's like you're just begging for your blades to be destroyed!
(The two Grunts inch backward away from the stadium, terrified. Four other figures from the darkness approach them and restrain them while they take their Beyblades from them.)
Grunt 2: Please, spare our blades! Please!
(Two of the other figures who took the Beyblades launch them into the bey stadium, and slowly, the floor of the stadium opens, revealing a pit of molten steel)
Grunt 1/2: No!
(The Beyblades in the stadium try to stay away from their impending doom, but they end up hitting spikes on the entire perimeter of the stadium, and are flung into the pit, feeding the pit more metal)
???: There is no mercy in Eclipse. Only the powerful shall prevail in the world of Beyblade. There is no room for the weak. Remove these two from my sight.
(The bright red eyes flash again, and the two Grunts are pulled into the darkness, yelling and begging. A hooded figure walks up to the "boss" within the shadows)
???: They called the boy who defeated them, Xenophon. Bring him to me, Paine, and do everything in your power to bring him here to me. We may have some use for him here at Eclipse.
(The figure that the "Boss" called Paine bows deeply to him and jumps away through a skylight in the ceiling.)
END
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Nice writing, and also nice 1st chapter. The last bit sounds a bit much but might just be me. Cool stuff
RE: Beyblade: Metal Burst (Rebooted) - WizardBlader - Feb. 15, 2023
Sorry for lack of updating. Chapter two's plot has been written, but I have yet to make the chapter, as I don't have access to my PC at the moment. Hoping to get it out (hopefully) soon.
-WizardBlader
RE: Beyblade: Metal Burst (Rebooted) - WizardBlader - Feb. 21, 2023
Been experimenting with creating some Lego Beyblades, and I've made some pretty interesting gimmicks, which I will definitely put into B MB.
Also made some minor System adjustments that have been implemented into the System Overview:
NA's: Nano Armors are the middle of the Beyblade, and are adjustable in size, to make the Beyblade short, or tall. (Not unlike a Metal Fight Spin Track) They also contain the two metal nubs on the Burst Cap to make contact with the MB Layer's metal teeth, plus a spring for burst resistance. There are also fused metal prongs to make the bursting gimmick possible. (Not unlike a Burst Forge Disk) <-- (New)
So far, there are two Systems for the Metal Burst System. The Fused Layer System, and the Dual Hybrid Layer System. The Fused Layer System is where the MB Blade, MB Layer, and MB Cd's, or MB Core Drives are completely fused together. This is the primary system, and not much customization can be done. (Is the size of a God Burst Beyblade) <-- (New as well)
The Dual Hybrid Layer System is the successor to the Fused Layer System, and the MB Blade, MB Layer, and MB Cd's, or MB Core Drives are completely separate and unique pieces of the Layer, creating far more customizability. (Is the size of a Cho-Z subsystem Beyblade, like Cho-Z Valkyrie) <-- (Also new)
-WizardBlader
RE: Beyblade: Metal Burst (Rebooted) - WizardBlader - Mar. 21, 2023
Been an entire month since the last post! Here's the very long awaited second chapter!!!
Chapter 2: Queran's gone?! The Crimson Evil-Eye!
(Xenophon is seen sleeping in his room. His alarm clock rings, and he jumps out of his bed to turn it off.)
Xeno: Okay, Okay, I'm awake already.. I swear that thing's going to give me an actual heart attack some day...
(Xeno gets out of bed, and looks at his alarm clock groggily, until he realises that the time is 30 minutes past the time he's usually supposed to be at school.)
Xeno: I overslept! I'm going to be late again!
(A few minutes later, Xeno is dressed for school, and heads for the front door. Xeno's Mother notices him from their dining table)
Xeno's Mother: Going already, Xeno, without breakfast?
Xeno:(exasperated) Mom, it's way past my wake-up time! I gotta get going!
(Xeno's Mother sighs)
Xeno's Mother: Of course, though I do wish you'd wake up on time these days... Missing breakfast isn't healthy for a growing boy-
Xeno: Uh, yeah- Love you, mom!
(Xeno rushes out the door, leaving his mother shaking her head)
Xeno's Mother: I hope he doesn't turn out like his brother...
(Xeno is later seen sprinting down a road, and is close to his school)
Xeno: Almost there! I didn't see Queran on my way here, so I guess he made it to school safely.
(Xeno makes his way to the school yard, and is about to enter the school, when a kunai with a piece of paper attached to it is thrown in front of him, making him jump back with fear.)
Xeno: Gah! What's going on here?!
(Xeno looks up, and notices a cloaked figure quickly withdraw from the top of a nearby building)
Xeno: Hey, you up there! Throwing ninja weapons at people isn't funny!
(The hooded figure swiftly makes its escape, jumping from rooftop to rooftop, and is out of sight within seconds, leaving Xeno bewildered and angry. Xeno then picks up the kunai, and notices the strange paper attached to it)
Xeno: (To himself) What's this...? There's something written on it.
(After a few seconds, Xeno finished to read the note, and is badly surprised)
Xeno: Taken?! Queran was kidnapped?!
(Some kids put their heads outside of the windows above him, curious to hear who was yelling)
???: What is it, Xenophon? Have you lost your blade again...
(Xeno looks up, and looks slightly irritated once he recognizes the speaker)
Xeno: Oh, it's you again, Chika. It's not about Xanthus this time!
Chika: Then what?
Xeno: Queran's been kidnapped by some Team Eclipse BeyGang guys, and I don't know what to do! There are even directions on where he's at!
(Chika stares at him in disbelief, then she frowns, and looks at him as if he was the dumbest thing on the face of the earth)
Chika: Either call the police, or take care of it yourself, since they're a BeyGang! You do have a blade to do that, right? Or was this really about you losing it again...
Xeno: Fine, I'll get Queran myself. Then we'll see if you're still going to tease me!
(Xeno turns away from the school, and heads down the road, leaving a trail of dust behind him)
Chika: (Sighs) What a kid.
(Location: Outside of an abandoned Warehouse)
(Xeno appears winded, after racing to the port, which was where the warehouses were at)
Xeno: I'm... finally... here...
(Xeno's stomach grumbles, and he grimaces to himself)
Xeno: So hungry... But I've gotta... save Queran...
(Xeno opens the warehouse that the letter told him to enter, and reluctantly enters its darkened insides)
Xeno: This place is super creepy... And weirdly warm for some reason... Hello? Is anybody here? I got your letter!
(Before he could react, the doors close behind Xeno, and he jumps to face the doors)
Xeno: Okay, this isn't funny! Let Queran go, or else-
???: Or else what, kid?
(Xeno turns in the voice's direction, and notices a pair of crimson eyes flash at him from the depths, with a stare so cold it sends chills up and down his spine)
Xeno: W- who are you?
(Suddenly, the lights flicker open, blinding Xeno for a moment, as a person swoops down from the ceiling, landing not far from Xeno)
???: I'm Dai Geno, the leader of the Eclipse BeyGang. I'm glad to see you've accepted my request.
Xeno: Request? What request, just give me back my friend!
Dai: There's no need to be in a hurry, Xenophon... Gatsuo.
Xeno: How do you know my name?
(Dai Gendo points to his left, where we see Queran being held hostage by two other BeyGang Grunts)
Dai: I've been having a nice chat with your little friend there. He tells me you're quite the blader.
Xeno: (gasps) Queran!
Queran: Xeno, don't-
(Xeno rushes forward, in hopes of saving Queran, but is stopped by another person, the hooded figure from before)
Dai: Like I said Xenophon, there's no hurry.
Xeno: What do you want from us?!
(Dai shrugs, then smiles with an unsettling calm)
Dai: It's simple, I only want you to join Eclipse. Then erm... Queran will be free to go.
Xeno: Join you? I don't even want to be anywhere near you!
(The hooded figure advances towards Xeno, but Dai looks at him sharply, which stops him)
Dai: Paine.
(The figure who he called Paine retreats away from Xeno, and Dai looks back at Xeno with the same piercing stare)
Dai: That's too bad. I was hoping we could become "friends". It looks like we'll be keeping Queran then...?
Xeno: Wait! Okay I'll join you, but only if you win in a bey battle against me. If you win, I- I'll join Eclipse, but if I do, you have to leave Queran and I alone.
Queran: (Wide eyed) No way...
(Paine appears to be agitated (as much as a hooded figure could look to be), but Dai appears expressionless for a few seconds)
Dai: Interesting. Fine, I'll accept your challenge. It'll probably do well to check your strength before you join, after all.
Xeno: So, where's the stadium we'll be battling in?
(Dai walks over to a button console hanging overhead, and presses one of the buttons on it. They all hear a strange sound coming from above, and notice a large stadium being placed not too far from Dai and Xeno)
Dai: Well then, let's get on with it.
(Xeno and Dai walk up to the stadium, and Xeno notices the temperature getting higher as he approaches)
Xeno: (To himself) Is it getting hotter in here or is it just me?
(Once they step up to the stadium, Xeno gets a better view of the insides of the stadium. When he notices the spikes, he gasps)
Dai: This is it. The Molten Spike Stadium. Like it?
Xeno: Uh, what do you mean by molten?
Dai: You'll find out soon enough.
Xeno: Fine...
(Xeno begins to put Xanthus on Burst Mode, but Dai stops him)
Dai: Contrary to this BeyGang tradition rules, this Battle'll be done with Metal Mode. I'd suggest you keep it on that mode unless you want to say goodbye to your blade as soon as the battle gets started...
(Xeno is clearly surprised, but puts Xanthus back in Metal Mode, puzzled)
Dai: Show me what you can do.
(Dai's eyes briefly glow Crimson once more, and Xeno appears as if turned to stone)
Xeno: (In his mind) What's with this guy?! He's not like anyone else I've faced in the past... I'm not sure that I'll be able to beat him, even if I tried my best!
(Xanthus glows a dull green briefly in Xeno's hand, and he begins to feel relieved, then the glow disappears as soon as Xeno looks at Xanthus)
Xeno: Weird... Must've been a trick of the lights...
(Dai's eyes widen, then narrow, as he saw the green glow, but he shrugs it off as Xeno attaches his blade to his launcher)
Xeno: Okay, I'm ready.
Dai: Let's go.
Dai/Xeno: 3, 2, 1, Go...
(Dai jumps up into the air, and flips once before launching, catching Xeno off-guard)
Dai/Xeno: SHOOT!
(Xanthus and Dai's blade land in the stadium, and Dai's blade circles the center, trying to take it, while Xanthus swiftly goes around the stadium, closer to the stadium's ridge)
Dai: (sneers) An attack type, huh. Typical.
Xeno: We'll show you typical! C'mon, Xanthus!
(Xanthus heads down towards Dai's blade, and they collide, sending sparks flying. Then Xanthus goes flying, as Dai's blade remains undisturbed, calmly circling around)
Xeno: W-what?!
Dai:(Sighs) That's all you've got? Looks like I misjudged you, Xenophon.
(Xanthus hits the spikes, hard. It loses some of its spin, and once it lands, goes around the stadium lower than it had when Xeno first launched.)
Xeno: Xanthus, no!
Dai: I don't have time to waste on you anymore, Xenophon. End this quickly, Deucalion!
(Dai's blade, Deucalion, tilts on its tip, and aims for Xanthus. Once they touch, Deucalion begins to slowly press Xanthus into the spikes lining the stadium walls)
Dai: Well, this is it. You should've said you were so weak before this.
(Xeno's eyes go wide, and he begins to fear for his blade)
Xeno: (Thoughts) Oh no, Xanthus! I- if I don't do something, it's going to be... destroyed!
End
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Edit: Updated the post with the correct formatting, as I went to bed without doing so...
Bit of a small leak for the future of the series:
I've been working on the major plot points for the rest of season one of BMB, and season two. Hopefully, this'll make BMB season one easier to finish off, as I don't have to keep remembering what the plot's gonna be for the rest of the season. However, I will say, that if season one is completely finished (40-50 episodes), season two is confirmed to be coming.
Season two'll be called Beyblade Metal Burst: Project D, and it'll have more fantasy than season one.
RE: Beyblade: Metal Burst (Rebooted) - Hollowmind13 - Mar. 21, 2023
(Mar. 21, 2023 6:40 AM)WizardBlader Wrote: Been an entire month since the last post! Here's the very long awaited second chapter!!!
Chapter 2: Queran's gone?! The Crimson Evil-Eye!
(Xenophon is seen sleeping in his room. His alarm clock rings, and he jumps out of his bed to turn it off.)
Xeno: Okay, Okay, I'm awake already.. I swear that thing's going to give me an actual heart attack some day...
(Xeno gets out of bed, and looks at his alarm clock groggily, until he realises that the time is 30 minutes past the time he's usually supposed to be at school.)
Xeno: I overslept! I'm going to be late again!
(A few minutes later, Xeno is dressed for school, and heads for the front door. Xeno's Mother notices him from their dining table)
Xeno's Mother: Going already, Xeno, without breakfast?
Xeno exasperated) Mom, it's way past my wake-up time! I gotta get going!
(Xeno's Mother sighs)
Xeno's Mother: Of course, though I do wish you'd wake up on time these days... Missing breakfast isn't healthy for a growing boy-
Xeno: Uh, yeah- Love you, mom!
(Xeno rushes out the door, leaving his mother shaking her head)
Xeno's Mother: I hope he doesn't turn out like his brother...
(Xeno is later seen sprinting down a road, and is close to his school)
Xeno: Almost there! I didn't see Queran on my way here, so I guess he made it to school safely.
(Xeno makes his way to the school yard, and is about to enter the school, when a kunai with a piece of paper attached to it is thrown in front of him, making him jump back with fear.)
Xeno: Gah! What's going on here?!
(Xeno looks up, and notices a cloaked figure quickly withdraw from the top of a nearby building)
Xeno: Hey, you up there! Throwing ninja weapons at people isn't funny!
(The hooded figure swiftly makes its escape, jumping from rooftop to rooftop, and is out of sight within seconds, leaving Xeno bewildered and angry. Xeno then picks up the kunai, and notices the strange paper attached to it)
Xeno: (To himself) What's this...? There's something written on it.
(After a few seconds, Xeno finished to read the note, and is badly surprised)
Xeno: Taken?! Queran was kidnapped?!
(Some kids put their heads outside of the windows above him, curious to hear who was yelling)
???: What is it, Xenophon? Have you lost your blade again...
(Xeno looks up, and looks slightly irritated once he recognizes the speaker)
Xeno: Oh, it's you again, Chika. It's not about Xanthus this time!
Chika: Then what?
Xeno: Queran's been kidnapped by some Team Eclipse BeyGang guys, and I don't know what to do! There are even directions on where he's at!
(Chika stares at him in disbelief, then she frowns, and looks at him as if he was the dumbest thing on the face of the earth)
Chika: Either call the police, or take care of it yourself, since they're a BeyGang! You do have a blade to do that, right? Or was this really about you losing it again...
Xeno: Fine, I'll get Queran myself. Then we'll see if you're still going to tease me!
(Xeno turns away from the school, and heads down the road, leaving a trail of dust behind him)
Chika: (Sighs) What a kid.
(Location: Outside of an abandoned Warehouse)
(Xeno appears winded, after racing to the port, which was where the warehouses were at)
Xeno: I'm... finally... here...
(Xeno's stomach grumbles, and he grimaces to himself)
Xeno: So hungry... But I've gotta... save Queran...
(Xeno opens the warehouse that the letter told him to enter, and reluctantly enters its darkened insides)
Xeno: This place is super creepy... And weirdly warm for some reason... Hello? Is anybody here? I got your letter!
(Before he could react, the doors close behind Xeno, and he jumps to face the doors)
Xeno: Okay, this isn't funny! Let Queran go, or else-
???: Or else what, kid?
(Xeno turns in the voice's direction, and notices a pair of crimson eyes flash at him from the depths, with a stare so cold it sends chills up and down his spine)
Xeno: W- who are you?
(Suddenly, the lights flicker open, blinding Xeno for a moment, as a person swoops down from the ceiling, landing not far from Xeno)
???: I'm Dai Geno, the leader of the Eclipse BeyGang. I'm glad to see you've accepted my request.
Xeno: Request? What request, just give me back my friend!
Dai: There's no need to be in a hurry, Xenophon... Gatsuo.
Xeno: How do you know my name?
(Dai Gendo points to his left, where we see Queran being held hostage by two other BeyGang Grunts)
Dai: I've been having a nice chat with your little friend there. He tells me you're quite the blader.
Xeno: (gasps) Queran!
Queran: Xeno, don't-
(Xeno rushes forward, in hopes of saving Queran, but is stopped by another person, the hooded figure from before)
Dai: Like I said Xenophon, there's no hurry.
Xeno: What do you want from us?!
(Dai shrugs, then smiles with an unsettling calm)
Dai: It's simple, I only want you to join Eclipse. Then erm... Queran will be free to go.
Xeno: Join you? I don't even want to be anywhere near you!
(The hooded figure advances towards Xeno, but Dai looks at him sharply, which stops him)
Dai: Paine.
(The figure who he called Paine retreats away from Xeno, and Dai looks back at Xeno with the same piercing stare)
Dai: That's too bad. I was hoping we could become "friends". It looks like we'll be keeping Queran then...?
Xeno: Wait! Okay I'll join you, but only if you win in a bey battle against me. If you win, I- I'll join Eclipse, but if I do, you have to leave Queran and I alone.
Queran: (Wide eyed) No way...
(Paine appears to be agitated (as much as a hooded figure could look to be), but Dai appears expressionless for a few seconds)
Dai: Interesting. Fine, I'll accept your challenge. It'll probably do well to check your strength before you join, after all.
Xeno: So, where's the stadium we'll be battling in?
(Dai walks over to a button console hanging overhead, and presses one of the buttons on it. They all hear a strange sound coming from above, and notice a large stadium being placed not too far from Dai and Xeno)
Dai: Well then, let's get on with it.
(Xeno and Dai walk up to the stadium, and Xeno notices the temperature getting higher as he approaches)
Xeno: (To himself) Is it getting hotter in here or is it just me?
(Once they step up to the stadium, Xeno gets a better view of the insides of the stadium. When he notices the spikes, he gasps)
Dai: This is it. The Molten Spike Stadium. Like it?
Xeno: Uh, what do you mean by molten?
Dai: You'll find out soon enough.
Xeno: Fine...
(Xeno begins to put Xanthus on Burst Mode, but Dai stops him)
Dai: Contrary to this BeyGang tradition rules, this Battle'll be done with Metal Mode. I'd suggest you keep it on that mode unless you want to say goodbye to your blade as soon as the battle gets started...
(Xeno is clearly surprised, but puts Xanthus back in Metal Mode, puzzled)
Dai: Show me what you can do.
(Dai's eyes briefly glow Crimson once more, and Xeno appears as if turned to stone)
Xeno: (In his mind) What's with this guy?! He's not like anyone else I've faced in the past... I'm not sure that I'll be able to beat him, even if I tried my best!
(Xanthus glows a dull green briefly in Xeno's hand, and he begins to feel relieved, then the glow disappears as soon as Xeno looks at Xanthus)
Xeno: Weird... Must've been a trick of the lights...
(Dai's eyes widen, then narrow, as he saw the green glow, but he shrugs it off as Xeno attaches his blade to his launcher)
Xeno: Okay, I'm ready.
Dai: Let's go.
Dai/Xeno: 3, 2, 1, Go...
(Dai jumps up into the air, and flips once before launching, catching Xeno off-guard)
Dai/Xeno: SHOOT!
(Xanthus and Dai's blade land in the stadium, and Dai's blade circles the center, trying to take it, while Xanthus swiftly goes around the stadium, closer to the stadium's ridge)
Dai: (sneers) An attack type, huh. Typical.
Xeno: We'll show you typical! C'mon, Xanthus!
(Xanthus heads down towards Dai's blade, and they collide, sending sparks flying. Then Xanthus goes flying, as Dai's blade remains undisturbed, calmly circling around)
Xeno: W-what?!
DaiSighs) That's all you've got? Looks like I misjudged you, Xenophon.
(Xanthus hits the spikes, hard. It loses some of its spin, and once it lands, goes around the stadium lower than it had when Xeno first launched.)
Xeno: Xanthus, no!
Dai: I don't have time to waste on you anymore, Xenophon. End this quickly, Deucalion!
(Dai's blade, Deucalion, tilts on its tip, and aims for Xanthus. Once they touch, Deucalion begins to slowly press Xanthus into the spikes lining the stadium walls)
Dai: Well, this is it. You should've said you were so weak before this.
(Xeno's eyes go wide, and he begins to fear for his blade)
Xeno: (Thoughts) Oh no, Xanthus! I- if I don't do something, it's going to be... destroyed!
End
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Edit: Updated the post with the correct formatting, as I went to bed without doing so...
Bit of a small leak for the future of the series:
I've been working on the major plot points for the rest of season one of BMB, and season two. Hopefully, this'll make BMB season one easier to finish off, as I don't have to keep remembering what the plot's gonna be for the rest of the season. However, I will say, that if season one is completely finished (40-50 episodes), season two is confirmed to be coming.
Season two'll be called Beyblade Metal Burst: Project D, and it'll have more fantasy than season one.
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I like your writing style, and I don't think there is much difference between the two, only how certain stuff is grouped.
Xeno simply forgetting he has school is understandable, but I'm very surprised someone actually got kidnapped. They even got qualified ninja equipment, which surprises me.
RE: Beyblade: Metal Burst (Rebooted) - WizardBlader - Apr. 08, 2023
Yessir, a new episode of BMB is out now! Let's a go!
Enjoy, and don't hesitate to review it! :D
Chapter 3: The continuing battle of Freedom! Deucalion's Hidden Power!
Location: Eclipse Base Warehouse
(The final scene from Chapter 2 continues with Xenophon and Dai still battling, and Xanthus being pushed towards the deadly spiked walls in the Molten Spike Stadium)
Dai: Well, this is it. I should not have listened to those two Grunts when they told me about your "high" power level. Pitiful.
(Xeno's eyes go wide, and he begins to fear for his blade)
Xeno: (Thoughts) Oh no, Xanthus! I- if I don't do something, it's going to be destroyed! But I can't let it down, or Queran... C'mon Xeno, think of a way out of this!
(Xanthus is now very close to the stadium ridge and the spikes, and Deucalion continues to press hard)
Xeno: Wait, that's it! Xanthus, let's do it!
Dai: Huh?
(Xanthus begins to move to the right of Deucalion, bit by bit, and when Xanthus hits the stadium ridge, just mere seconds before hitting the spikes, it begins to speed away from Deucalion, riding the ridge, causing Deucalion to slam into the spikes and lose some spin)
Dai: (shocked) What the-?!
Xeno: Swing back around, Xanthus!
(Xanthus appears to increase its speed just a bit more, and sideswipes into Deucalion each time it goes around the stadium, hitting Deucalion into the spikes, causing minor stamina loss for every hit)
Xeno: Yes! How's that for strength?
(Dai closes his eyes and makes an unsettling smile)
Dai: Interesting... You're a very interesting person, Gatsuo. But that's all you'll ever be.
(Dai nods at Paine, who appears to take out a small remote and throws it to Dai, who catches it)
Dai: The real battle begins now. Prepare yourself, Gatsuo.
(Dai presses a button on the remote, and Xeno begins to notice that the stadium floor is beginning to shrink little by little, starting from the center, revealing the fiery, molten depths beneath it)
Queran: Oh no!
Xeno: What the-?!
Dai: And this, is the reason I call this stadium the Molten Spike Stadium.
Xeno: No way, this isn't fair!
Dai: *shrugs* Deal with it.
(Meanwhile, Xanthus is losing stamina, and goes around the stadium ridge slower than before, giving Deucalion an advantage to move)
Dai: *grins evilly* Deucalion!
(Deucalion begins to shine with a deep crimson glare, and slips out of Xanthus's trap, sliding towards the hole (Which has taken up a quarter of the stadium's center))
Xeno: What- Are you crazy?! Your Blade'll get melted if you fall in there-
Dai: Not crazy. Just innovative. Special Move!
Xeno: A Special Move?!
Dai: Deucalion Drift Strike!
(Deucalion heads to the very edge of the hole, and rides around the hole using the plate on the tip, propelling itself at Xanthus, which flings Xanthus into the spikes and back down again, creating a pendulum effect as Deucalion returns of the hole's edge to inflict the move upon Xanthus repeatedly)
(While being flung, Xanthus begins to glow a dull green that appears to pulsate)
Xeno: (Thoughts) Dai has a Special Move?! Only the most experienced bladers can make and preform one successfully! This guy's something else! But, for some reason I don't feel intimidated. In fact, I'm actually having- fun? I must be going crazy but, I'll go with it.
Xeno: XANTHUS! Let's go!
(Xanthus gets hit again, and this time recoils off of a spike, and meets Deucalion in the middle of its rebound, and both are stopped in their tracks, sparks flying)
Dai: Hm. Interesting.
(Dai's eyes flash crimson again, and Xanthus is knocked up into the air, and is falling towards the molten pit. Xeno, not taking a second to rethink his life choices, jumps into the pit to save Xanthus)
Xeno: XANTHUS, NO!
Queran: XENO!
(Xeno catches Xanthus but begins to fall into the pit. All of the sudden, Xeno stops falling, and when he looks up, he sees Dai was the one who saved him. With great effort, Dai then swings Xeno up through the stadium hole, and gets himself out afterward, closing the stadium. After they catch their breath, Dai begins to reprimand Xeno)
Dai: What were you thinking, Gatsuo?! You could've died in there, if I didn't have the audacity to save your life!
Xeno: I- I know. I didn't think. But I couldn't let Xanthus get destroyed. Plus, it's technically your fault!
Dai: That's it! Take your friend and leave! I no longer want to recruit you anymore.
Xeno: Wait- really? O- okay.
(The other Grunts watching Queran let him go to Xeno, and they exit the Warehouse together. Queran hits Xeno on the head)
Xeno: *rubbing head* Ow! What was that for?
Queran: You know, you didn't have to take it that far! You scared me when you jumped in that literal 'lava' pit. It was like you were possessed!
Xeno: Yeah, I'm really sorry for worrying you. Its just- like I felt something coming from Xanthus, like it was alive, and I- *sigh* I don't know. Probably just slowly going mad from the heat in that place.
Queran: I'm glad you survived though. Weird how Dai saved you though. He doesn't seem like that kind of guy, y'know? (Especially after kidnapping me.)
Xeno: Yeah. Listen, we've got to get to school, and I'm hungry!
Queran: Typical Xenophon. Let's go, quick! We are so in trouble...
(The two boys run off into the distance, unaware of Dai and Paine observing them from the Warehouse roof)
Paine: That boy, Xenophon Gatsuo. He has potential.
Dai: To be honest, yes. And perhaps the brains to match it. His Beyblade, though, is what is the most intriguing part of it all.
(Dai grins, and a crimson aura surrounds him, as we fade to black)
END
RE: Beyblade: Metal Burst (Rebooted) - WizardBlader - May. 23, 2023
Xenophon is no longer a faceless protagonist! I've decided to make character descriptions for everyone, after finally watching the perfect anime to base nearly all of them on.
also, yes, I know I have yet to post the 4th chapter, believe it or not I haven't started writing it yet, lol
Name: Xenophon (Xeno) Gatsuo
Age: 13
Gender: Male
Height: 4' 11''
Personality: Xenophon (Nicknamed as Xeno) is a hard person to provoke, because of his light-hearted, and calculating persona. He rarely ever cares about himself, and would do anything for his closest friends. He was not entirely invested into the Beyblading sport, as his mother would always keep him focused upon his schooling, but when Dai Gendo, leader of the Eclipse BeyGang dramatically enters his life, Xeno becomes more and more invested into getting better at blading.
Appearance: Xenophon's hair has a very similar appearance to Guren Nash's hair style from 'Tenkai Knights', except for the fact that instead of it being colored bright red and black, it is dark green and black, with a small section of hair going down the middle of the front of his hair being a neon/bright green.
His eyes are jade colored, and on his left cheek, he has a black tattoo/birthmark that looks suspiciously similar to a galloping horse.
Xeno's outfit is basically a white t-shirt with a futuristic looking "X" emblem on it, worn with a metal shoulder padded, dark green jacket. He also wears blue jeans with beige suspenders hanging on the sides, and black ankle-high boots with green rims, and detailing.
Bey: Xanthus.D-50.F
Layer: Xanthus (Xanthus is an attack-focused Fused-Layer System Metal Burst Layer. It's main points of contact are two blades that focus on Smash-Attack potential. At the center, it holds a sticker motif akin to a Plastic Gen's sticker, of one of the legendary horses gifted to Achillies, Xanthus.
The avatar motif is emerald colored, with a tinge of silver, and tinier tinge of gold. It looks similar to Valkyrie's horse.
Nano Armor: D-50 or Dual-50 (Dual-50 has two metal blades that protrude from the top of the Nano Armor, giving any dual bladed beyblade better attack potential, thanks to it's synchrony with the Layer. This D-50's plastic part of the Nano Armor has a transparent green look to it.)
Nano Tip: F or Flat (Flat is a basic plastic flat Nano Tip, made for attack types. This Nano Tip is colored a solid green.)
No special moves, for now. *wink, wink*
Disregard my older post about the character's names, the plot I've developed for both season one and two will definitely change their destiny's whether to become bladers, or not.
RE: Beyblade: Metal Burst (Rebooted) - WizardBlader - May. 23, 2023
Dai Gendo's Bio:
Name: Dai Gendo
Age: 15
Gender: Male
Height: 5' 7''
Personality: Dai is calm, cool, and collected, even stoic, though he dislikes people who need teammates because he thinks they're weak, even going so far as doing most important tasks he is given by himself, despite having many "minions" that could do it for him. This gives him an antisocial personality to most. His closest equivalent to a friend is Paine Yasuhiro, his most trusted subordinate, who does some tasks for Dai.
Dai is also the leader of the Eclipse BeyGang, which is secretly operated and owned by a secret organization/corporation.
Appearance: Dai is a tall, 15-year-old boy. His eyes have a sharp red color, with the right eye being covered by an emo flip from his hair. His hair is also spiky in the back and is a darkish red color on the upper half, which fades into a blacker color on the lower half.
Dai also has a large red birthmark that has the appearance of flames that covers the entirety of his right part of his face. This birthmark is usually hidden both by his hair, and high-collared cloak, and is almost never seen unless he chooses to reveal it.
He wears a high-collared, black cloak made of what appears to be leather. The cloak is only able to be zipped up from his waist, up to his nose. The cloak usually covers his mouth and has two faux shark tooth buttons on each side that connect to each other. He rarely unbuttons that part of it, which gives him the appearance of a ninja. Dai's lower attire consists of long pants are made of the same material that his cloak is made of, which is held up by a belt worn crooked to the left, with a metalic-red buckle.
Bey: Deucalion.Q-60.RB
Layer: Deucalion (Deucalion is a defense-oriented Fused-Layer System Metal Burst Layer. It is not entirely circle, with two large, curved blades that contain a small gap in them, for countering attacks. It also has smaller blades that are half the size of the main ones, that are near half circles, and achieve a near synchrony with the other two main blades but are still separated from them.
At the center, it holds a sticker motif akin to a Plastic Gen's sticker, of a Crimson dragon, akin to a species of dragon named “Dragonnet”, despite being named Deucalion, who is closely connected with the flood myth in Greek mythology and is the Greek counterpart of the Biblical Noah.
Nano Armor: Q-60 or Quad-60 (Q-60 has four small metal blades places in the same places as a Burst Cross disk frame. These four blades encourage synchrony of four bladed layers, and while too small to come into contact with the opponent's Layer, the relatively round shape of the Nano Armor grants the highest Life-After-Death out of all current Nano Armors. In addition, the upwards angle of the protrusions ensures that they will not scrape against the stadium floor when the Beyblade tilts at low rotation speeds.
This particular Q-60's plastic part of the Nano Armor has a transparent red look to it.
Nano Tip: RB or Ringed Ball (Ringed Ball is a some-what basic plastic ball Nano Tip, made for defensive types. The ball in the middle is surrounded by a fixed ring that can be used for counter attacks, and some Life-After-Death potential.
This Nano Tip is colored a solid red.
Special Move: Deucalion Drift Strike (A special move where Deucalion utilizes the hole created in the Molten Spike Stadium. Deucalion heads to the very edge of the hole, and rides around the hole using the fixed ring on the tip, propelling itself at its opponent, which flings the opponent into the spikes and back into the stadium again, creating a pendulum effect as Deucalion returns of the hole's edge to inflict the move upon the opponent repeatedly)
RE: Beyblade: Metal Burst (Rebooted) - WizardBlader - May. 27, 2023
Queran's Bio:
Name: Queran Dazaio
Age: 13
Gender: Male
Height: 4' 10"
Personality: Queran is a slightly shy, anxious, and cautious person. But once you get to know him, he has a friendly and easy to approach personality. However, because of his more prominent, chronically anxious side, his only friend is Xenophon Gatsuo, who understands him rather well. Queran tends to give up on difficult challenges.
Queran is adopted and has lived with his foster parents since the age of three. No one knows his real last name, or who his biological family was.
Appearance: Queran has indigo hair that looks very similar to Ceylan Jones's hair from Tenkai Knights, with three small neon/purple rhombuses in the front and sapphire-colored eyes. He wears a gray hooded sweatshirt with a black denim jacket rolled up to his elbows, with a picture of two gold wings on the back over it and dark-blue pants. He also wears royal-purple sneakers with gold-yellow-colored details.
Bey: Khronos.S-55.WS
Layer: Khronos (Khronos is a stamina oriented Fused-Layer System Metal Burst Layer. Kronos has two medium-sized semi-circle blades on opposite sides, and on the other two sides, two triangle shaped protrusions. (Not unlike Wizard Arrow, hint, hint)
At the center, it holds a sticker motif akin to a Plastic Gen's sticker, of the personification of time itself, Chronos/Khronos.
Nano Armor: S-55 or Smooth-55 (S-55 features a circle shape with a round shape, increasing synchrony with rounded layers. While too small to come into contact with an opponent's Layer, the relatively round shape of S-55 grants high Life-After-Death out of few other Nano Armors and can sometimes outclass Q-60 in its Stamina capabilities.
This particular S-55's plastic part of the Nano Armor has a transparent purple look to it.
Nano Tip: WS or Wide Sharp (The traditional stamina-sharp tip. It has a wide base, so when the Beyblade tilts, the Beyblade can stay up for a little longer, before eventually falling completely on its side.
yes, I know Queran has a Beyblade that starts with a K instead of a Q, this serves as plot for the second (maybe upcoming) season
RE: Beyblade: Metal Burst (Rebooted) - WizardBlader - Jul. 28, 2023
Deleted Chapter 4 (It sucks fr, imo)
Chapter 4: A Generous Offer! BeyZone Tower!
(Xeno is seen sitting at his family's dining table, picking at his breakfast with his chopsticks absentmindedly. His mother, who is also eating beside him, is watching him with concern)
Xeno's Mother: Xeno?
Xeno: *continues to pick at food*
Xeno's Mother: ...Xeno.
(Xeno continues to unintentionally ignore his mother, which gets her slightly angry, as she thinks that he's ignoring her on purpose. Slightly angry though, is an understatement)
Xeno's Mother: XENOPHON GATSUO! PAY ATTENTION!
Xeno: *jolted back to reality* AH! I'm already awake, Mom!
Xeno's Mother: *sighs* Xenophon, is something bothering you?
Xeno: Uh... Kind of. There's this guy I met yesterday, the guy who kinda kidnapped Queran, remember?
Xeno's Mother: Oh, yes. The Dai Gendo boy?
Xeno: Yes, him. I still can't understand how he got so good! I've never even heard of him!
Xeno's Mother: Well, maybe Queran can help you. He's a smart boy.
Xeno: Oh, yeah! Thanks Mom!
(Xeno gets up from the dining table, and starts heading out the door)
Xeno's Mother: Xenophon Gatsuo! Where do you think you're going without eating your breakfast?! (And even after I've slaved away making it!)
Xeno: Oh. I forgot, hehe...
Xeno's Mother: *sighs* I still can't figure out how you can just lose your need to eat so abruptly...
(Two hours later, at the heart of the city)
Queran: This is it, Xeno! My dad's place. You can train here!
(Xeno looks around, and points at a small building)
Xeno: This one? It's kinda small. But I guess size doesn't matter, quality does... (Why'd you make such a big deal about it?)
Queran: Huh?! Small? Do you need to get your eyes checked?
Xeno: *scratches head* But, uh. This is the place, right?
(Queran points at a far taller building nearby)
Queran: No, that's the place!
(Xeno looks at the place Queran was pointing at, and looks at Queran in disbelief)
Xeno: No way. BeyZone Tower? That place's for the best bladers in Japan!
Queran: That's true! And you're going to start training here!
(Xeno stares at Queran for a while, making him slightly uncomfortable)
Queran: Uh-
Xeno: I guess you've never really been one to kid with me.
(Queran jabs Xeno with his elbow)
Queran: That's obvious, dummy. I've never been the kind of person to joke about things, period.
Xeno: Okay, okay! But this is crazy! This place is huge!
(Xeno stares up at the monolithic spire that BeyZone Tower is, with awe beyond anyone's comprehension)
Queran: I know, right? Dad's the manager here, so he's made it so you can train here on weekends for free!
Xeno: How come you've never told me about this? I've always wanted to train here!
Queran: Dad's only been the manager here for about a month anyways. I thought that I'd just keep it a secret.
Xeno: Why though...?
Queran: Ah, no reason, don't worry about it. C'mon, let's head inside! I'll show you around!
Xeno: *thoughts* So casual!
(They head inside The BeyZone, and Xeno decides to look around a bit)
Xeno: Whoa! This place is better than the adverts on TV said! So much training equipment!
Queran: Dad says that the UBA provides all of the next-gen training equipment to this place. The top floors are specifically for the UBA's Japanese Blading Team.
Xeno: How many floors does this thing have? It's huge, even on the inside!
Queran: 121.
Xeno: Wow...
???: Queran! My boy!
(Xeno and Queran swivel around, and see Queran's Father walking up to them)
Queran: Dad! You made it!
Queran's Father: *ruffles Queran's hair* Indeed I did, Queran! Just got out of a meeting with some executives from Celestial Enterprises. Quite unnerving people. I hope to never be stuck in the same room with them again.
(Queran's Father looks over at Xeno)
Queran's Father: Ah, Xeno! Queran told me that you'd be over today! Enjoying yourself so far?
Xeno: I sure am, Mr. Dazaio. This place is amazing!
Mr. Dazaio: *chuckles* Indeed it is! I'm honored to partake in such a large part of the UBA's future. Although, it does get rather repetitive.
(Mr. Dazaio's SmartWatch beeps, and he takes an exasperated look at it)
Mr. Dazaio: Well, boys. I'd better be off now. Floor 91's been in shambles for weeks now, and someone's got to be up there telling the people there what to do... Queran, I assume you'll take charge for me then?
Queran: Sure, Dad!
Mr.Dazaio: That's my boy!
(Mr. Dazaio hurries off to one of the transparent elevators, and disappears from view)
Queran: Okay, Xeno. the first training area is at Floor 10. Let's head up there.
Xeno: Alright!
(Xeno heads at an elevator, but Queran stops him)
Xeno: Huh? What's wrong?
Queran: The elevators are just for the Mid to Upper Class bladers and the Japanese Blading Team. Not to mention the BeyZone personnel. You've gotta take the stairs for now, since you're a Lower Class Trainer.
Xeno: What?! Up ten stories?!
Queran: Yeah! It's for building your stamina. If you can't get up those stairs, you won't be able to start any training!
Xeno: Have you been training here, then?
Queran: Yeah, for a little while. After that time when you saved me from those two guys from Dai's BeyGang, I sort of realized that I needed to get stronger. That way I don't need you preaching that embarrassing stuff anymore.
(Xeno fidgets a bit)
Xeno: Ah c'mon, it was cool at least!
Queran: Hah! Barely.
Xeno: Grrr... Let's just get up these stairs-
(Xeno and Queran walk up to the foot of the stairs. Xeno notices how far up they go)
Xeno: *gulps* Has anyone ever walked up all the way to the top of BeyZone Tower?
Queran: Apparently, there's a few people.
Xeno: Wow... They must pack some serious power.
(Xeno looks determinedly at the first step. His right hand goes into his pocket, and he subconsciously draws out his Beyblade, Xanthus, which is shining in a dull jade hue)
Xeno: * thoughts* If I don't climb these stairs, I'll never stand a chance against Dai Gendo. And I don't want that! I'll surpass even him!
(And so, Xeno unknowingly takes the first step, the metaphorical first step to reaching his ultimate goal!
END
RE: Beyblade: Metal Burst (Rebooted) - WizardBlader - Sep. 12, 2023
Ello, WizardBlader here.
Just wanted to say that I have officially disregarded Chapter 4 as not existing. My reasoning of doing so, is because of the fact that it felt kind of weird (Cringe even?) to me, after thinking about the far too overpowered Training Arc that it was putting the series on, and how close I was making the series end up like Beyblade X, by complete accident.
I had actually made Chapter 5, a few days after I had constructed Chapter 5, and it too, seemed WAY too weird, as it followed this "Way too Over-Powered Training Arc". That's why I never posted it. I didn't want Xeno to have a truckload of Plot Armor, cuz, c'mon, we all know that stuff sucks (*Cough* *Cough*, Aiga Akaba, *Cough*).
So yeah.
Also updated Dai Gendo’s bio, the beyblade layer part of it, to be precise.
Having his beyblade reference a mythical person who is a near-carbon-copy of the Biblical Noah, was kinda uncalled for, to be honest.
So I pulled a “Longinus” (If you know, you know), and made Deucalion a Dragon.
Pretty generic, I know! But it was the best solution in my mind, to put my conscience to rest, lol.
By the way, to clarify any disturbances the previous post might’ve caused, I am NOT abandoning B:MB. Despite all of my best efforts to do so
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