(Dec. 15, 2021  12:12 AM)Carma___bigbang Wrote: Lucy- seems like they would be powerful

(Dec. 16, 2021  1:59 AM)Carma___bigbang Wrote: This inspired me to make my fanfic

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This is my fav fanfic

(Dec. 20, 2021  5:11 PM)Carma___bigbang Wrote: You still adding war

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Name- beast daikuten

Age- 16

Dad-bell

Mom-Basara sister forgot her name I think it’s Hana something like that

Eye color- right eye-purple and left eye-teal

Hair color and style-red hair with brown tips and has messy hair

Gender-male

Height-average  

Appearance-has glasses and a teal beanie and a white hooded Jacket with goat horns on the side and blue jeans is a caring nerd  but can be a little heroic smiles often very very very very!!! Friendly!

Introduction for tourneys-the goat demon! Beast!!

Bey name and info-ancient baphomet-a bey crafted by an group of random people and it was made in the past but a fortune teller told them about a future system so they made what she told them based of the goat demon

Core- a core with 5 locks but there not the best but still are ok like astral Spryzen

Blade-a super round bey with two small horns

Jolt- two big horns made of weak plastic that breaks into metal horns like a goat

Disk-throne a disk like karma but more metal

Tip- worthy plastic free spinning ball with a rubber ring

Design-the core has a goat head on it /the disk the blades are shaped like horns/ jolt same but bigger /disk karma but heavier/tip has a outer ring that has rubber making it speed up

Bey colors- black red teal and purple

Overall a great blader

(Dec. 20, 2021  7:42 PM)beansworth Wrote:

(Dec. 20, 2021  5:11 PM)Carma___bigbang Wrote: You still adding war

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Name- beast daikuten

Age- 16

Dad-bell

Mom-Basara sister forgot her name I think it’s Hana something like that

Eye color- right eye-purple and left eye-teal

Hair color and style-red hair with brown tips and has messy hair

Gender-male

Height-average  

Appearance-has glasses and a teal beanie and a white hooded Jacket with goat horns on the side and blue jeans is a caring nerd  but can be a little heroic smiles often very very very very!!! Friendly!

Introduction for tourneys-the goat demon! Beast!!

Bey name and info-ancient baphomet-a bey crafted by an group of random people and it was made in the past but a fortune teller told them about a future system so they made what she told them based of the goat demon

Core- a core with 5 locks but there not the best but still are ok like astral Spryzen

Blade-a super round bey with two small horns

Jolt- two big horns made of weak plastic that breaks into metal horns like a goat

Disk-throne a disk like karma but more metal

Tip- worthy plastic free spinning ball with a rubber ring

Design-the core has a goat head on it /the disk the blades are shaped like horns/ jolt same but bigger /disk karma but heavier/tip has a outer ring that has rubber making it speed up

Bey colors- black red teal and purple

Overall a great blader

This is very good, I'm guessing it's either an Attack Type or Defense Type? Is it fine if I change him a bit?

(Dec. 20, 2021  9:27 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote:

(Dec. 20, 2021  7:42 PM)beansworth Wrote: This is very good, I'm guessing it's either an Attack Type or Defense Type? Is it fine if I change him a bit?

Technically you can do any modifications for it to fit better or because of questionable physics, after all you're the fic owner. Also, I might try doing a character if you don't mind.

(Dec. 21, 2021  3:29 PM)Carma___bigbang Wrote: Defense type and change him a bit i don’t mind

(Dec. 20, 2021  9:44 PM)beansworth Wrote:

(Dec. 20, 2021  9:27 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: Technically you can do any modifications for it to fit better or because of questionable physics, after all you're the fic owner. Also, I might try doing a character if you don't mind.

Your right, but I just want to make sure that the OC doesn't stray too far from the original version. Yeah go right ahead!

(Dec. 21, 2021  5:50 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote:

(Dec. 20, 2021  9:44 PM)beansworth Wrote: Your right, but I just want to make sure that the OC doesn't stray too far from the original version. Yeah go right ahead!

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WARNING: My character and bey ahead lol 

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Character 

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Name: Finn Mizuno
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Age: 15
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Gender: Male
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Appearance: A blue cap with a gray fish logo on it. Short dark blue hair. Yellow iris. Gray T-shirt with a blue fishing rod stamp. Yellow cargo pants with a black belt. Light blue shoes.
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Personality - Psychology: Believes they are right and Curious.
Self-discipline: Self-confident and Risk taker.
Lifestyle: Independent, Active and Lives for the moment
Social attitude: A team player (when necessary) and People oriented.
Honesty and Honour: Fair and Will not even try to control others
Emotional capacity: Non-judgemental and Can be sentimental, though sees this as a weakness.
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More facts: Finn is a blader since forever according to him, and he is so used to beyblade that he can do accurate (not perfect tho) predictions of the battles with his experience (he needs to know his enemy or the basic concept to predict things. If he can predict 100% Xtreme, he should be able to predict 97% Quick, since both are rubber flats and perform a little different). He can also predict the enemy's movement pattern almost 100%. He treats people fairly, no matter who they are. He's very playful and doesn't take things too seriously unless it is really important. He has a 7 y/o sister (use that info as you want). He hates to control people, he feels like that's wrong, so he will never volunteer for being a leader on something.

 
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Bey 

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Mythical Core: Pisces is a right spinning Core. It features a shark motif on the center opening its mouth with water around it. In the middle there was a circle with the Pisces symbol.
Teeth position: 2 average teeth, 1 tall tooth and another average tooth. 
Color squeme: The shark is gray, the chip is deep sea blue, the eyes are yellow, the circle and the inside is light blue, the pisces symbol is gray.

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Mythical Blade: Thermic is a right spinning stamina type blade. It features shark-like blades aligned in, which gradually become thinner towards the tails. Between a tail and a head, there's a small gap. Although the contact points are not exposed prominently enough to provide any significant attack power. The Blade is relatively round and smooth, affording it Stamina properties while having an above average weight.
Color squeme: The blades are silver, the inner side is deep sea blue and has 2 shark fins on opposite sides for cosmetic.
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Mythical Armor: Fins is a stamina oriented Armor that distributed the weight on the outer side of the Bey, giving it better stamina. It has 2 metal fins that align with the blades. 
Color squeme: Silver
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Disc: Hurricane' is a rather light disc for defense that features a plastic inbuilt frame. This frame can freely rotate akin to Tornado Wyvern. It is a dash variant of Hurricane and it not only adds a bit more weight, but also makes the "frame" bigger, making it barely surpass the blade and make contact with the opponent's layer sometimes. 
Color squeme: The metal is silver and the "frame" is is a lighter tone of blue (and transparent). 
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Driver: Twirl is a stamina type tip. It features a low angled cone tip that can freely rotate by a metal bearing, akin to Eternal Sharp from MFB. It's tip has a similar size to Nothing's tip, but a bit smaller. 
Color squeme: Opaque yellow

 

(Dec. 21, 2021  6:58 PM)beansworth Wrote:

(Dec. 21, 2021  5:50 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: .
WARNING: My character and bey ahead lol 

Spoiler (Click to View)

 
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Character 

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Name: Finn Mizuno
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Age: 15
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Gender: Male
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Appearance: A blue cap with a gray fish logo on it. Short dark blue hair. Yellow iris. Gray T-shirt with a blue fishing rod stamp. Yellow cargo pants with a black belt. Light blue shoes.
.
Personality - Psychology: Believes they are right and Curious.
Self-discipline: Self-confident and Risk taker.
Lifestyle: Independent, Active and Lives for the moment
Social attitude: A team player (when necessary) and People oriented.
Honesty and Honour: Fair and Will not even try to control others
Emotional capacity: Non-judgemental and Can be sentimental, though sees this as a weakness.
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More facts: Finn is a blader since forever according to him, and he is so used to beyblade that he can do accurate (not perfect tho) predictions of the battles with his experience (he needs to know his enemy or the basic concept to predict things. If he can predict 100% Xtreme, he should be able to predict 97% Quick, since both are rubber flats and perform a little different). He can also predict the enemy's movement pattern almost 100%. He treats people fairly, no matter who they are. He's very playful and doesn't take things too seriously unless it is really important. He has a 7 y/o sister (use that info as you want). He hates to control people, he feels like that's wrong, so he will never volunteer for being a leader on something.

 
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Bey 

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Mythical Core: Pisces is a right spinning Core. It features a shark motif on the center opening its mouth with water around it. In the middle there was a circle with the Pisces symbol.
Teeth position: 2 average teeth, 1 tall tooth and another average tooth. 
Color squeme: The shark is gray, the chip is deep sea blue, the eyes are yellow, the circle and the inside is light blue, the pisces symbol is gray.

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Mythical Blade: Thermic is a right spinning stamina type blade. It features shark-like blades aligned in, which gradually become thinner towards the tails. Between a tail and a head, there's a small gap. Although the contact points are not exposed prominently enough to provide any significant attack power. The Blade is relatively round and smooth, affording it Stamina properties while having an above average weight.
Color squeme: The blades are silver, the inner side is deep sea blue and has 2 shark fins on opposite sides for cosmetic.
.
Mythical Armor: Fins is a stamina oriented Armor that distributed the weight on the outer side of the Bey, giving it better stamina. It has 2 metal fins that align with the blades. 
Color squeme: Silver
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Disc: Hurricane' is a rather light disc for defense that features a plastic inbuilt frame. This frame can freely rotate akin to Tornado Wyvern. It is a dash variant of Hurricane and it not only adds a bit more weight, but also makes the "frame" bigger, making it barely surpass the blade and make contact with the opponent's layer sometimes. 
Color squeme: The metal is silver and the "frame" is is a lighter tone of blue (and transparent). 
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Driver: Twirl is a stamina type tip. It features a low angled cone tip that can freely rotate by a metal bearing, akin to Eternal Sharp from MFB. It's tip has a similar size to Nothing's tip, but a bit smaller. 
Color squeme: Opaque yellow

 

This is such a cool OC! I'll make sure to add him and his sister(If you have a name for her, I'll take it) to Chapter 16, he seems like he'd be a really cool rival, can't wait to add him.

(Dec. 22, 2021  12:59 AM)Hollowmind8 Wrote:

(Dec. 21, 2021  6:58 PM)beansworth Wrote: This is such a cool OC! I'll make sure to add him and his sister(If you have a name for her, I'll take it) to Chapter 16, he seems like he'd be a really cool rival, can't wait to add him.

Sure, her name is Fuyuko Mizuno. Btw, she has a japanese name because their father is japanese and their mother is american, and he let the mom choose the name for the first one and then he would choose for the second. The first was Finn, and then was Fuyuko. Funny enough, both are names with F and I didn't planned that lol.

(Dec. 22, 2021  1:13 AM)beansworth Wrote:

(Dec. 22, 2021  12:59 AM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: Sure, her name is Fuyuko Mizuno. Btw, she has a japanese name because their father is japanese and their mother is american, and he let the mom choose the name for the first one and then he would choose for the second. The first was Finn, and then was Fuyuko. Funny enough, both are names with F and I didn't planned that lol.

Alright, that back story is good to know then. Also with Pisces and Finn, I know Beyblade does the thing of having the blader and bey start with the same letter, so I wanted to ask about that, I mean I could just pull a Tokyo Revengers like Mikey's Japanese name is Manjirou, but that's up to you. I just wanted to ask.

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Chapter 9 baby! Semi-Finals began and the finals are next chapter!


Chapter 9: Destruction Axe! Irene’s Rematch!

Kratos and Fafnir landed on the stadium floor, Kratos was in Attack mode.
Keith: “Destruction Shoot!”
Kratos shot towards Fafnir.
Free: “Fafnir! Illusion Claw”
Fafnir and Kratos hit each other, Fafnir launched Kratos back, but Kratos hit the stadium wall and bound of the side of it.
Keith: “Bound Axe!”
Kratos slammed into Fafnir, and with all his force hit Fafnir out of the stadium.
Referee: “Kratos with an Over Finish, Keith is awarded one point.”
Keith smirked, while Free picked up Fafnir and got ready to launch.
Both: “3! 2! 1! Go Shoot!”
Kratos was in Attack Mode again, Fafnir took center.
Keith: “Destruction Shoot!”
Kratos shot towards Fafnir, but Fafnir was spinning slowly, Keith smirked he knew he’d beat Fafnir.
Then once Kratos hit Fafnir, it burst.
Keith: “Huh! But your bey was slow.”
Free smiled, and put Fafnir back on his launcher.
Referee: “Fafnir with a Burst Finish, Free is awarded two points.”
Both: “3! 2! 1! Go Shoot!”
Kratos hit the stadium floor, and shot towards Fafnir.
Keith: “Now, Kratos synchronize!”
Kratos’ avatar appeared, and synchronized with Keith.
Keith(Sync): “Destruction Axe!”
Free then called.
Free: “Fafnir, Illusion Claw!”
Fafnir hit Kratos, but it hit the bound blade, and launched itself into the wall.
Keith(Sync): “Now Kratos.”
Kratos shot towards Fafnir and slammed into it, bursting Fafnir.
Free gasped.
Referee: “Kratos with a Burst Finish, Keith wins the match.”
Then the two left, and Irene and Van came up.
The two prepared their launches, but Irene was starting to get anxious, last time she battled Van, he broke her Bey, then Irene began to lose her breath and was going to start hyperventilating.
Keith hugged her from behind.
Keith: “You’ll be fine, Irene, I’m rooting for you!”
Irene blushed and found her breath.
Both: “3! 2! 1! Go Shoot!”
Van pulled off his signature shoot.
Ifrit circled center, while Fallen Valkyrie rushed around the outer ridge, then it shot towards Ifrit.
Van: “Venture Shoot!”
Fallen Valkyrie began to barrage Ifrit, but everytime Fallen Valkyrie hit Ifrit, Ifrit absorbed some of the impact spin due to Eruption’s Rubber.
Irene: “Ifrit! Wave Shoot!”
Fallen Valkyrie went to attack Ifrit, but Ifrit shot away, narrowly dodging Fallen Valkyrie.
Van: “Fallen Valkyrie, we’ll share our pain!”
Van then entered his dark sync.
Van(Sync): “Fallen Wing Beat!”
Fallen Valkyrie hit Ifrit, and knocked it out.
Referee: “Fallen Valkyrie with an Over Finish, one point awarded to Van.”
Van smirked and grabbed Fallen Valkyrie.
Irene held Ifrit, after all the training, she’d still lost, she was ready to cry when, Keith’s words filled her head.
Irene’s Mind: “I’m rooting for you!” “I’m rooting for you!”
She snapped back to reality, and put Ifrit on the launcher.
Irene’s Mind: “If it hadn’t been for Keith, I’d have stop blading, and not had fun. I like Keith.”

(Dec. 22, 2021  10:47 AM)Hollowmind8 Wrote:

(Dec. 22, 2021  1:13 AM)beansworth Wrote: Alright, that back story is good to know then. Also with Pisces and Finn, I know Beyblade does the thing of having the blader and bey start with the same letter, so I wanted to ask about that, I mean I could just pull a Tokyo Revengers like Mikey's Japanese name is Manjirou, but that's up to you. I just wanted to ask.

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Chapter 9 baby! Semi-Finals began and the finals are next chapter!


Chapter 9: Destruction Axe! Irene’s Rematch!

Kratos and Fafnir landed on the stadium floor, Kratos was in Attack mode.
Keith: “Destruction Shoot!”
Kratos shot towards Fafnir.
Free: “Fafnir! Illusion Claw”
Fafnir and Kratos hit each other, Fafnir launched Kratos back, but Kratos hit the stadium wall and bound of the side of it.
Keith: “Bound Axe!”
Kratos slammed into Fafnir, and with all his force hit Fafnir out of the stadium.
Referee: “Kratos with an Over Finish, Keith is awarded one point.”
Keith smirked, while Free picked up Fafnir and got ready to launch.
Both: “3! 2! 1! Go Shoot!”
Kratos was in Attack Mode again, Fafnir took center.
Keith: “Destruction Shoot!”
Kratos shot towards Fafnir, but Fafnir was spinning slowly, Keith smirked he knew he’d beat Fafnir.
Then once Kratos hit Fafnir, it burst.
Keith: “Huh! But your bey was slow.”
Free smiled, and put Fafnir back on his launcher.
Referee: “Fafnir with a Burst Finish, Free is awarded two points.”
Both: “3! 2! 1! Go Shoot!”
Kratos hit the stadium floor, and shot towards Fafnir.
Keith: “Now, Kratos synchronize!”
Kratos’ avatar appeared, and synchronized with Keith.
Keith(Sync): “Destruction Axe!”
Free then called.
Free: “Fafnir, Illusion Claw!”
Fafnir hit Kratos, but it hit the bound blade, and launched itself into the wall.
Keith(Sync): “Now Kratos.”
Kratos shot towards Fafnir and slammed into it, bursting Fafnir.
Free gasped.
Referee: “Kratos with a Burst Finish, Keith wins the match.”
Then the two left, and Irene and Van came up.
The two prepared their launches, but Irene was starting to get anxious, last time she battled Van, he broke her Bey, then Irene began to lose her breath and was going to start hyperventilating.
Keith hugged her from behind.
Keith: “You’ll be fine, Irene, I’m rooting for you!”
Irene blushed and found her breath.
Both: “3! 2! 1! Go Shoot!”
Van pulled off his signature shoot.
Ifrit circled center, while Fallen Valkyrie rushed around the outer ridge, then it shot towards Ifrit.
Van: “Venture Shoot!”
Fallen Valkyrie began to barrage Ifrit, but everytime Fallen Valkyrie hit Ifrit, Ifrit absorbed some of the impact spin due to Eruption’s Rubber.
Irene: “Ifrit! Wave Shoot!”
Fallen Valkyrie went to attack Ifrit, but Ifrit shot away, narrowly dodging Fallen Valkyrie.
Van: “Fallen Valkyrie, we’ll share our pain!”
Van then entered his dark sync.
Van(Sync): “Fallen Wing Beat!”
Fallen Valkyrie hit Ifrit, and knocked it out.
Referee: “Fallen Valkyrie with an Over Finish, one point awarded to Van.”
Van smirked and grabbed Fallen Valkyrie.
Irene held Ifrit, after all the training, she’d still lost, she was ready to cry when, Keith’s words filled her head.
Irene’s Mind: “I’m rooting for you!” “I’m rooting for you!”
She snapped back to reality, and put Ifrit on the launcher.
Irene’s Mind: “If it hadn’t been for Keith, I’d have stop blading, and not had fun. I like Keith.”

Oh, is just that he thinks having a name that matches the motif is dumb. Totally isn't because I messed up with the names lol. Tbh I would also pick a motif that wouldn't match if the anime was real.
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Also nice chapter

(Dec. 22, 2021  11:09 PM)PikaBeyblade Wrote: If Valt was 15 in db and Van is 15 here and this is 16 years after db Valt would be 16 when van was born which just is kinda weird

(Dec. 23, 2021  12:22 AM)beansworth Wrote:

(Dec. 22, 2021  11:09 PM)PikaBeyblade Wrote: If Valt was 15 in db and Van is 15 here and this is 16 years after db Valt would be 16 when van was born which just is kinda weird

Yeah, it's kinda weird with all the kids and when they we're born.

(Dec. 23, 2021  12:35 AM)Hollowmind8 Wrote:

(Dec. 23, 2021  12:22 AM)beansworth Wrote: Yeah, it's kinda weird with all the kids and when they we're born.

You can just add some more years and call it fixed