(Mar. 04, 2024  8:39 PM)Bey100 Wrote: There are 3 types of Whirlwind beys:
1. Main beys
These are just normal Whirlwind beys part of the main story
2. Holiday beys
These are beys you would see in holiday specials
3. Remake
These are beys that you could see cameo

(Mar. 04, 2024  9:37 PM)Turboblader Wrote:

(Mar. 04, 2024  8:39 PM)Bey100 Wrote: There are 3 types of Whirlwind beys:
1. Main beys
These are just normal Whirlwind beys part of the main story
2. Holiday beys
These are beys you would see in holiday specials
3. Remake
These are beys that you could see cameo

Will the remakes be battling other beyblades in future episodes.

(Mar. 04, 2024  9:38 PM)Bey100 Wrote:

(Mar. 04, 2024  9:37 PM)Turboblader Wrote: Will the remakes be battling other beyblades in future episodes.

Yes

(Mar. 08, 2024  2:21 AM)Bey100 Wrote: Beyblade Whirlwind Episode 3:
The Mighty Shark! Whirlpool Forneus!

Spoiler (Click to View)

Feng joyfully stands as she is one point ahead of her competition.

Feng: Told you I was strong.

Wonder: Yeah I can see that… don’t get cocky though.

*Wonder smirks at Feng*

Wonder: Might come back to bite you.

*Feng fixes her hair*

Feng: Yeah we’ll see.

*Wonder & Feng lock their beys unto their launchers*

Feng (Thoughts): Gotta make sure to take the center.

Wonder (thoughts): Forneus is strongest when it gets to the center *grips launcher tighter*  so I have to ensure it doesn’t.

Feng: Ready?

Wonder: Set!

Wonder/Feng: 3..

Wonder clenches his launcher tightly!

Wonder/Feng: 2..

Feng's eyebrows lower as her heart beats faster and faster.

Wonder/Feng: 1! Let It Rip!!

Both bladers excitedly explosively launch their beys into battle!

Both beys collide with the stadium!

Wonder: Here we go!!!

The amazing Whirlwind Knight zooms across the stadium electrifyingly while Whirlpool Forneus rushes to take center stage!

Wonder(Thoughts): She beat me to it oh well..

Whirlwind Knight then rushes straight towards Forneus as Knight slices through the wind!

Wonder: Whirlwind Slash!

Wonder right hand glows purple as he slices through the screen allowing for an electric trail to follow *smear frame*!

Knight then forcefully clashes with Forneus causing the sparks to fly!

Wonder's grin becomes wider as he clenches his fist feeling the heat and excitement of the battle!

Feng: *Grunts* no...

Feng clenches her fist for all the wrong reasons as things aren’t looking too good for Forneus…

Feng: Whirlpool Whip!!!

Forneus begins to glow aqua green as a mini tornado starts forming and the wind starts blowing!

Feng's pupils glow green as she has a huge grin on her face with an impenetrable confidence.

Feng: Now wash them away! Whirlpool Forneus!

Forneus flares out and the avatar appears with the appearance of a black/white mighty shark!

Wonder: Not on our watch, slice and dice Whirlwind Knight!

Knight flares out and the avatar appears as the light purple knight holds the electric sword with a mighty heart!

Wonder: Go!!!!!

Whirlwind Knight begins to go straight for Forneus but the wind begins to pick up the bey as it gets blown up into the air!

Feng: Ha!

Wonder: Now!!

Wonder eyes glow gold and his fist turns blue as he seems to be entering full power!?

Feng: *eyes widen* Wonder?

Wonder: No Thunderbolt Smash!!!!!

Whirlwind Knight comes back flying down like a meteor as an electric trail follows.

Feng: Wait!

Knight lands on Forneus and suddenly everything goes white… then once it is clear Forneus is in the stadium upside down meanwhile Knight continues to speed around the stadium.

Wonder: Yes! I got 1 point! With a spin finish! Meaning we’re now 1 -1!

Feng stares with her mouth slightly opened and can’t help but stare at Whirlwind Knight.

Feng (Thoughts): It used Forneus' power against itself…

Feng then just looks down not helping but smile.

Wonder: So not so sloppy huh?

Feng: Nope not at all.

Wonder: Well quickly growing as a blader.

Feng: Calm down, don’t get too cocky I could make a comeback you never know?

Wonder: Alright, fine then.

Both blader's happy expressions are seen in a split screen showing the exciting and energetic battle they are having.

*Meanwhile at Wonder’s home…*

Wonder’s father is sitting on a big red couch with a huge old-style TV remote and he’s watching a football game on a small screen-sized TV, but his expression is dull as he just frowns and his eyes lowered.

???: Daddy!

Suddenly he stands up frantically searching around for the voice he just heard..

Wonder’s Dad: Jack?

He then sits back down with an empty heart…

Wonder’s Dad: Jack…? *voice cracking* Jack…?

His tears begin to form in his eyes as he screams…

Wonder’s Dad: Jack!!!

His wife then rushes into the living room to find her husband screaming...

Wonder’s Dad: Jack!!!

She stares in absolute horror as she has her mouth wide open and begins shaking.

Wonder’s Mom: What happened!?

He stares directly at her with bloody red eyes.

Wonder’s Dad: I heard Jack’s voice.

She makes an annoyed Pikachu face in response.

Wonder’s Mom: You're just seeing things.

Wonder’s Dad: No, I’m not! I heard him!

Wonder’s Mom: No you didn’t!

He stands up with his face red and him sweating uncontrollably.

Wonder’s Dad: I HEARD HIS VOICE!

Wonder’s Mom: No you didn’t he is gone.

Wonder’s Dad: No!

He throws the TV remote and it hits the TV screen causing there to be a huge crack and for the screen to begin to glitch out.

Wonder’s Mom: Now look at what you did!
Wonder’s Dad looks around with his hands on his head looking almost confused.

Wonder’s Mom: Honey?

He then suddenly collapses to the floor.

Wonder’s Mom: *stares in horror* Honey!?

*Back at the BeyPark*

Whirlwind Knight is zooming around the stadium pushing Whirlpool Forneus!

Wonder: Yes! Let’s go!

Feng: Shoot! Knight was able to knock Forneus out of the center!

Knight continues to powerfully push Forneus around the stadium!

Wonder: Keep pushing!!!!

Knight then knocks Forneus into the stadium wall therefore causing Forneus to wobble.

Wonder: Yes!

Feng: No!

Wonder pupils glow purple and his purple aurora glows brighty!

Wonder: Whirlwind Knight!

Knight flares out and the avatar appears once again!

Feng: Whirlpool Forneus!

Forneus flares out and the avatar appears once again!

Wonder/Feng: Go!

Both beys clash at the center of the stadium causing wind to blow both bladers back!

Wonder: Hold on!

But then all of a sudden everything goes white… and once everything is clear both bey parts are in the stadium.

Wonder/Feng: Double burst.

Feng simply grins but breathes heavily.

Feng: I think that’s enough battling for the day.

???: No it’s not!

Both bladers turn to see a skinny figure wearing a green suit and and green hat with a little leaf on it.

Wonder: What the?

It’s a boy dressed as a Leprechaun!

Feng stares with a weird expression as she takes a step back.

Wonder: Who are you?

Leprechaun: You’ll find out…

The boy then holds up a green round beyblade with a circular design and a leprechaun motif plus the bey has a green/gold color scheme!

Wonder eyes widen as he stares in complete awe.

Wonder: Woah, what is that?

Landon: My name is Landon and this is my bey Lucky Leprechaun!

Lucky Leprechaun sparkles and shines brightly in all glory!

*Meanwhile at the BeyLab…*

The same glass tube that L Drago Destructor was in is now empty and a shadow of a familiar figure appears with a certain evil laugh and all of a sudden a red glow reflects on the glass tube…

???: What was my bey in this tube for decoration?

Then we see the figure who is smiling sinisterly is none other than… Ryuga! With the same design as 4d but with this comes so many questions how!? All those answers will soon be revealed…

To be continued...

The ending will shock you (well at least attempt to). If you got thoughts tell me what’s up.

(Mar. 08, 2024  3:55 PM)beansworth Wrote:

(Mar. 08, 2024  2:21 AM)Bey100 Wrote: Beyblade Whirlwind Episode 3:
The Mighty Shark! Whirlpool Forneus!

Spoiler (Click to View)

Feng joyfully stands as she is one point ahead of her competition.

Feng: Told you I was strong.

Wonder: Yeah I can see that… don’t get cocky though.

*Wonder smirks at Feng*

Wonder: Might come back to bite you.

*Feng fixes her hair*

Feng: Yeah we’ll see.

*Wonder & Feng lock their beys unto their launchers*

Feng (Thoughts): Gotta make sure to take the center.

Wonder (thoughts): Forneus is strongest when it gets to the center *grips launcher tighter*  so I have to ensure it doesn’t.

Feng: Ready?

Wonder: Set!

Wonder/Feng: 3..

Wonder clenches his launcher tightly!

Wonder/Feng: 2..

Feng's eyebrows lower as her heart beats faster and faster.

Wonder/Feng: 1! Let It Rip!!

Both bladers excitedly explosively launch their beys into battle!

Both beys collide with the stadium!

Wonder: Here we go!!!

The amazing Whirlwind Knight zooms across the stadium electrifyingly while Whirlpool Forneus rushes to take center stage!

Wonder(Thoughts): She beat me to it oh well..

Whirlwind Knight then rushes straight towards Forneus as Knight slices through the wind!

Wonder: Whirlwind Slash!

Wonder right hand glows purple as he slices through the screen allowing for an electric trail to follow *smear frame*!

Knight then forcefully clashes with Forneus causing the sparks to fly!

Wonder's grin becomes wider as he clenches his fist feeling the heat and excitement of the battle!

Feng: *Grunts* no...

Feng clenches her fist for all the wrong reasons as things aren’t looking too good for Forneus…

Feng: Whirlpool Whip!!!

Forneus begins to glow aqua green as a mini tornado starts forming and the wind starts blowing!

Feng's pupils glow green as she has a huge grin on her face with an impenetrable confidence.

Feng: Now wash them away! Whirlpool Forneus!

Forneus flares out and the avatar appears with the appearance of a black/white mighty shark!

Wonder: Not on our watch, slice and dice Whirlwind Knight!

Knight flares out and the avatar appears as the light purple knight holds the electric sword with a mighty heart!

Wonder: Go!!!!!

Whirlwind Knight begins to go straight for Forneus but the wind begins to pick up the bey as it gets blown up into the air!

Feng: Ha!

Wonder: Now!!

Wonder eyes glow gold and his fist turns blue as he seems to be entering full power!?

Feng: *eyes widen* Wonder?

Wonder: No Thunderbolt Smash!!!!!

Whirlwind Knight comes back flying down like a meteor as an electric trail follows.

Feng: Wait!

Knight lands on Forneus and suddenly everything goes white… then once it is clear Forneus is in the stadium upside down meanwhile Knight continues to speed around the stadium.

Wonder: Yes! I got 1 point! With a spin finish! Meaning we’re now 1 -1!

Feng stares with her mouth slightly opened and can’t help but stare at Whirlwind Knight.

Feng (Thoughts): It used Forneus' power against itself…

Feng then just looks down not helping but smile.

Wonder: So not so sloppy huh?

Feng: Nope not at all.

Wonder: Well quickly growing as a blader.

Feng: Calm down, don’t get too cocky I could make a comeback you never know?

Wonder: Alright, fine then.

Both blader's happy expressions are seen in a split screen showing the exciting and energetic battle they are having.

*Meanwhile at Wonder’s home…*

Wonder’s father is sitting on a big red couch with a huge old-style TV remote and he’s watching a football game on a small screen-sized TV, but his expression is dull as he just frowns and his eyes lowered.

???: Daddy!

Suddenly he stands up frantically searching around for the voice he just heard..

Wonder’s Dad: Jack?

He then sits back down with an empty heart…

Wonder’s Dad: Jack…? *voice cracking* Jack…?

His tears begin to form in his eyes as he screams…

Wonder’s Dad: Jack!!!

His wife then rushes into the living room to find her husband screaming...

Wonder’s Dad: Jack!!!

She stares in absolute horror as she has her mouth wide open and begins shaking.

Wonder’s Mom: What happened!?

He stares directly at her with bloody red eyes.

Wonder’s Dad: I heard Jack’s voice.

She makes an annoyed Pikachu face in response.

Wonder’s Mom: You're just seeing things.

Wonder’s Dad: No, I’m not! I heard him!

Wonder’s Mom: No you didn’t!

He stands up with his face red and him sweating uncontrollably.

Wonder’s Dad: I HEARD HIS VOICE!

Wonder’s Mom: No you didn’t he is gone.

Wonder’s Dad: No!

He throws the TV remote and it hits the TV screen causing there to be a huge crack and for the screen to begin to glitch out.

Wonder’s Mom: Now look at what you did!
Wonder’s Dad looks around with his hands on his head looking almost confused.

Wonder’s Mom: Honey?

He then suddenly collapses to the floor.

Wonder’s Mom: *stares in horror* Honey!?

*Back at the BeyPark*

Whirlwind Knight is zooming around the stadium pushing Whirlpool Forneus!

Wonder: Yes! Let’s go!

Feng: Shoot! Knight was able to knock Forneus out of the center!

Knight continues to powerfully push Forneus around the stadium!

Wonder: Keep pushing!!!!

Knight then knocks Forneus into the stadium wall therefore causing Forneus to wobble.

Wonder: Yes!

Feng: No!

Wonder pupils glow purple and his purple aurora glows brighty!

Wonder: Whirlwind Knight!

Knight flares out and the avatar appears once again!

Feng: Whirlpool Forneus!

Forneus flares out and the avatar appears once again!

Wonder/Feng: Go!

Both beys clash at the center of the stadium causing wind to blow both bladers back!

Wonder: Hold on!

But then all of a sudden everything goes white… and once everything is clear both bey parts are in the stadium.

Wonder/Feng: Double burst.

Feng simply grins but breathes heavily.

Feng: I think that’s enough battling for the day.

???: No it’s not!

Both bladers turn to see a skinny figure wearing a green suit and and green hat with a little leaf on it.

Wonder: What the?

It’s a boy dressed as a Leprechaun!

Feng stares with a weird expression as she takes a step back.

Wonder: Who are you?

Leprechaun: You’ll find out…

The boy then holds up a green round beyblade with a circular design and a leprechaun motif plus the bey has a green/gold color scheme!

Wonder eyes widen as he stares in complete awe.

Wonder: Woah, what is that?

Landon: My name is Landon and this is my bey Lucky Leprechaun!

Lucky Leprechaun sparkles and shines brightly in all glory!

*Meanwhile at the BeyLab…*

The same glass tube that L Drago Destructor was in is now empty and a shadow of a familiar figure appears with a certain evil laugh and all of a sudden a red glow reflects on the glass tube…

???: What was my bey in this tube for decoration?

Then we see the figure who is smiling sinisterly is none other than… Ryuga! With the same design as 4d but with this comes so many questions how!? All those answers will soon be revealed…

To be continued...

The ending will shock you (well at least attempt to). If you got thoughts tell me what’s up.

So, I'll give ratings on the newest chapters. Chapter 2 was genuinely very good compared to Chp1. Now onto Chp3, on the discord we were talking about bringing old characters back and how it takes away from a story and it may just be me, but bringing Ryuga back(and in general remaking beys) was not a good move. It opens way too many questions and plot would then have to stray with how did he even get here, even if Whirlwind takes place in the same universe as Metal Fight, it would make absolutely no sense for him to be exactly the same. Oh, and the holiday stuff is okay, not a big fan of them myself but that's alright. Again, this was just me, but when you were hyping this CHP up, I was expecting something to do with the actual story and not the crossover bey. If this feedback is harsh, I'm sorry but it should be mentioned.

(Mar. 08, 2024  4:14 PM)Bey100 Wrote:

(Mar. 08, 2024  3:55 PM)beansworth Wrote: So, I'll give ratings on the newest chapters. Chapter 2 was genuinely very good compared to Chp1. Now onto Chp3, on the discord we were talking about bringing old characters back and how it takes away from a story and it may just be me, but bringing Ryuga back(and in general remaking beys) was not a good move. It opens way too many questions and plot would then have to stray with how did he even get here, even if Whirlwind takes place in the same universe as Metal Fight, it would make absolutely no sense for him to be exactly the same. Oh, and the holiday stuff is okay, not a big fan of them myself but that's alright. Again, this was just me, but when you were hyping this CHP up, I was expecting something to do with the actual story and not the crossover bey. If this feedback is harsh, I'm sorry but it should be mentioned.

See where you’re coming from but don’t worry later on most of your questions will be answered also he does actually tie into the main villain (I’ll leave it at that).

(Mar. 13, 2024  1:33 AM)Bey100 Wrote: Early release of... 
Beyblade Whirlwind Episode 5:
The Destroyer! L Drago Destructor!

Spoiler (Click to View)

Wonder sits down on the living room floor crisscrossed with his arms folded as he frowns with his mind racing with tons of questions.

Wonder: How can he still be alive?

Wonder’s Dad: I mean it’s not like I know that but something in my heart tells me he may be.

Wonder: Are you sure you're not going *clicks tongue and points the finger at his head spinning*?

Wonder’s Dad: Positive.

Wonder’s Mom: Well I don’t believe any of this nonsense!

She angrily storms off refusing to believe any of the claims.

Wonder’s Dad: Maybe I’m just going crazy… but the voices… they keep echoing…

Jack (Voice): Dad! Help me!

Suddenly Wonder’s father falls to his knees shaken.

Wonder’s Dad: I hear it again.

Wonder looks down with a frown.

Wonder: Are you sure?

Wonder’s Dad: The voice just said *Help me*.

Wonder: But how?

Wonder’s Dad: I don’t know but I would like to find out.

Wonder’s father gets up and walks off leaving a skeptical but intrigued Wonder.

Wonder: Maybe he still is alive.

Meanwhile…

Ryuga: Ah!!!

Erebus's dark aura engulfs Ryuga, causing him to roll on the ground, screaming in agony. The air around them crackles with malevolent energy as the battle between light and darkness rages on.

Ryuga: Make it stop!!!!

Endor creepily whistles "A Beautiful Day In The Neighborhood" as Ryuga screams in anguish and begs for mercy.

Ryuga: I beg you! Please!

Endor sinisterly smiles and continues to whistle.

Suddenly Ryuga eyes turn into a bright purple and he gets up.

Endor: Finally!

Endor tosses L Drago Destructor to Ryuga.

Endor: Let’s get to work.

*The next day at the BeyPark*

Whirlwind Knight violently clashes with Whirlpool Forneus at the center of the stadium!

Wonder: Go!

Forneus blows back Knight.

Wonder: Not today! Whirlwind Slash!

Knight goes in and gives Forneus a big attack but gets deflected and gets thrown out of the stadium.

Wonder: Dammit! *Stomps his right leg*

Feng: Are you okay? You seem frustrated and oddly less positive than normal.

Wonder: *Eyebrows lowered and with a big frown scowl..* I’m fine!

Feng: Okay… geese. You didn’t have to yell.

Feng looks down with her eyes lowered.

Wonder: *Rubs eyes* I’m sorry… I didn’t mean to.

Feng: If you didn’t then tell me why you did you yell.

Wonder: I am going through a lot.

Feng: Is this about your parents again?

Wonder: My brother might still be alive.

Feng's eyes then opened wide with her jaw dropped.

Feng: Wh- I- a.. How!?

Wonder: My dad just mentioned how he was hearing these weird voice that sounds exactly like Jack. I think he’s honestly crazy.

Feng: I mean he doesn’t drink right?

Wonder: No, but I had a feeling he may had one, look I don’t wanna talk about it. If I keep reminiscing on the past I can never look towards the future specifically becoming the strongest bladers ever.

Feng: But Wonder?- Okay fine. Let’s just keep training… I guess.

Wonder nods his head in agreement as he pulls out his launcher.

*Meanwhile…*

As the scene changes, the camera zooms in on a colossal castle situated amid a vast expanse of lush green fields. The sun is shining bright in the sky, illuminating the surroundings with its warm glow. The chirping birds are audible in the background, creating a peaceful and serene atmosphere. However, as we move closer to the castle, the atmosphere inside seems different, as if something ominous lurks behind those walls.

The scene before me is of a large, desolate stadium that appears to have been destroyed. In the center of the stadium, there is a young-looking male figure wearing a Knight's shining armor, who is on his knees and crying. The sadness in his eyes is palpable as he looks up at Ryuga, who is standing menacingly before him. Ryuga is smirking and his eyes are a bright shade of purple that glows in the darkness. In his hand, he holds up his Bey - L Drago Destructor - as though he unleashed its full power. The air around them is filled with a dark purple aura, which adds to the intensity of the moment.

Endor: *Claps hands* Nicely done.

The Knight figure stands up and wipes his tears.

Xan: How dare you!? Do you know who I am!? I am Xan Tokoroa!

Endor let out a loud yawn.

Endor: I’m sorry, it’s just that that was extremely boring you didn’t even give him a challenge.

Xan: Y-yeah but-!?

Endor: Your a$s that’s what.

Both Ryuga & Endor walk off leaving the poor figure speechless.

Narrator: You are probably wondering how in the hell did that happen? Well let’s go back a little, shall we?

*10 minutes earlier*

Ryuga holds up L Drago Destructor.

A king with blue & red clothing sits on a golden throne.

King: How dare you break into my palace without my permission!

Endor: Respectfully and by respectfully I mean not respectful at all… we don’t care, so will you battle my friend here or not?

Xan: …

The mighty knight walks up to the stadium and holds up his bey in the air!

Xan: Meet my bey Shine Pandora!

The bey which is a right-spinning attack type has four sharp contact points with a red/orange color scheme with some gold to finish its striking appearance! The driver called “Speed” has a spikey bottom but the bottom is made of rubber!

Xan: No one dares challenges, my king!

Endor smirks sinisterly…

Endor: Well Ryuga will.

Ryuga continues to menacingly stand straight with his glowing purple eyes.

Xan: Why can’t you?

Endor: Simple, I don’t feel like it.

Xan: I don’t want this fool to battle me!

Ryuga: The question isn’t who’s gonna let me battle, it’s who’s gonna stop me.

Xan: Fine, then let’s battle!

Endor: Good, I’ll be the referee… First Battle!

Both bladers walk up to the stadium ready for battle!

Xan locks Shine Pandora with a shiny silver launcher.

Ryuga locks L Drago Destructor with a fully golden launcher as he glows a growing, raging dark purple aurora.

Xan (Thoughts): L Drago Destructor was used a long time ago by a powerful blader named Rylan Fist! He was considered to be one of the strongest bladers of all time! Now.. it’s in the hands of this clown! I must defeat him so I can not only get back his bey but protect the king!

*Flashback begins*

Xan and King are walking down the royal hall, deep in conversation. The hall is adorned with an array of portraits that seem to be staring down at them, their eyes following the two men as they move forward. A red carpet stretches out beneath their feet, leading the way down the grand corridor.

Xan: King, I can only imagine how much it must have hurt when your previous family abandoned you. But you worked hard and are now a King. Now that you have taken me in, I want you to know that I am here for you, always. You can count on me to protect you no matter what, just like you did for me.

King: I have complete faith in you, my dear friend. You are like family to me.

Ryuga (Thoughts): Shine Pandora looks useless. So plastic and weak… I assume the driver can cause so many problems but even then this battle is already over.

Endor: Ready & Set! *Swings arm up*

Xan: 3! *Stomps left leg*

Ryuga: 2! *Purple eyes glow brighter*

Xan/Ryuga: 1! *In between the frame of their eyes*

Xan/Ryuga: Let It Rip!

Both bladers passionately launch their beys into battle as their energy flows through their veins!

The stadium shook with a deafening thud as both beys collided in the arena!

Pandora speeds through the stadium as so does L Drago but both beys are spinning opposite sides!

Xan: Left spin?

Ryuga: *Throws right fist forward with his glowing purple eyes making a trail as his head swishes to the left* Tear them apart!

L Drago then goes for a head-on collision with Pandora!

Xan: Not so fast! Shine Pandora!

As Shine Pandora flares out, a magnificent avatar emerges with an egg-like design, resembling an extraterrestrial creature!

Shine Pandora begins to glow a fiery color and is then engulfed in a sparkling red leaving a fiery trail!

Xan: Now!

With Shine Pandora slightly titling the Speed driver does its magic allowing for Pandora to barely miss the attack as it swerves to the left side!

Endor: Hmm…

Xan: Burn them!

Pandora collides and knocks L Drago sky-high into the air!

Xan: Yes!

But L Drago hits the stadium wall and bounces back into the arena!

Xan: No!

L Drago and Pandora give each other a barrage of relentless attacks which attacks hitting harder than the last!

Xan: Hold on!

The king watches with his chin up, his eyes wide, and is wiping sweat off his forehead.

Ryuga continues to stand almost robotically with no movement and just stares at the battle.

Xan: Go!

Pandora powerfully clashes with L Drago and the sparks fly!

Endor: *Snaps fingers* Let’s end this.

Ryuga then all of a sudden screams his heart out as his spirit is let loose and runs wild!

Ryuga: L Drago Destructor!!!

L Drago flares out and a mighty white dragon avatar appears!

But L Drago begins to lose its stamina as it wobbles!

Ryuga; Now!... *Background goes black as crumbling noises can be heard in the background with Ryuga's face being clear and his purple eyes horrifically turning black* Survive.

L Drago then is fully engulfed in black as it’s now at full power. Then the Survive driver's two sliders move outwards allowing the bey to get even more aggressive while preserving spin.

Xan: Ah!

Ryuga: *With a dark, creepy, eerie corrupted voice* End them.

L Drago then clashes with Pandora and all of a sudden a huge explosion happens and the screen goes white with only these words heard…

Endor: L Drago Destructor with a burst finish! With a score of 0 - 2, Ryuga is the winner.

The screen finally reveals a busted Shine Pandora on the ground with the stadium being in complete shambles.

Xan: No… I failed…

Xan trembles to his knees as tears start to pour out of his eyes.

Xan: I - I *Voice cracks* I f - failed.

The king stares in absolute horror and disbelief.

Narrator: Ah! Here we are again! Now hope you had your popcorn for that battle because that was epic! Let’s get back, shall we?

Endor: *Claps hands* Nicely done.

The Knight figure stands up and wipes his tears.

Xan: How dare you!? Do you know who I am!? I am Xan Tokoroa!

Endor let out a loud yawn.

Endor: I’m sorry, it’s just that that was extremely boring you didn’t even give him a challenge.

Xan: Y-yeah but-!?

Endor: Your a$s that’s what.

Both Ryuga & Endor walk off leaving the poor figure speechless.

Endor: And by the way…

Endor suddenly pulls out a lighter and sets the glorious red carpet on fire and sure enough it quickly spreads.

Ryuga: Have fun burning alive.

Xan: No!!!!

*12 minutes later*

Xan with a burnt face full of horror and terror daunts out of the burning castle holding his king in his big arms.

Xan turns his head to see his huge castle continue to burn and eventually collapse to the ground causing a wave of dust.

Xan: *Coughs*.

The dust covers the whole atmosphere as it smells like fire, and tastes like dirt and breathing becomes a fight as the toxic air goes into your ears, nose, and lungs. Nothing can be seen other than greyness and fog.

Xan gently drops his king's body to the solid ground in the smoky atmosphere. The king's crown is broken and his clothes are burnt alongside his body and half his face. His eyes closed…

Xan: King?

The king doesn't respond.

Xan: King?

The king once again

Tears begin to form in Xan’s eyes as his voice starts choking up, his body starts shaking and his breathing becomes more rapid.

Xan: King? Please wake up *Tear falls down his left eye*! Please!

Xan lays his head on his chest but he hears no heart beating.

The voice echoes in his head... 

"You can count on me to protect you no matter what, just like you did for me."

... 

Xan then squinting his eyes pulls out a small knife from his armor and holds it up to his neck less than a centimeter away with his breathing becoming heavier and heavier…

… but… he just drops it…

And simply lays on the ground right by his fallen king.

To be continued…

Talk about a crazy episode. Please tell me your thoughts if you got any.

(Mar. 15, 2024  2:18 AM)Bey100 Wrote: Beyblade Whirlwind Episode 6:
Reborn From The Ashes! Inferno Phoenix!

Spoiler (Click to View)

A giant volcano erupts waves of lava while a mysterious figure is seen in the dark, grey, and eerie atmosphere.

???: I’ll burn the blading world….

The mysterious figure then grows a horrifying wide grin.

*Meanwhile back at the BeyPark*

Wonder: Go!

Whirlwind Knight & Whirlpool Forneus both clash at the center of the stadium causing sparks to fly!

Feng: Whirlpool Whip!

Forneus creates a giant green tornado and it quickly pulls Knight into the air!

Wonder: No!

Whirlwind Knight then burst midair!

Feng: *Squeals* I won!

Wonder: *Rolls eyes* Yeah you did I guess.

*Rrrrr*

*Feng’s phone rings*

Feng: Huh?

She takes out her phone and what she sees makes her eyes widen.

Wonder: *Takes out Earpods* What’s wrong?

Feng: Check this out.

Feng moves the phone close to Wonder’s face.

Wonder: *Squints* Hm…

On the screen, a slim-looking black man is wearing a blue/white suit with a red tie. He has a black buzz cut and black Rolex to finish his appearance.

Mr.Gerald: Hello Beyfans! My name is Mr.Gerald Hogwon and we have breaking news as there seems to be a crazy blader named Punish Takai! He has been going around destroying Beys left and right! He destroyed someone so badly that the person went flying and had to be rushed to the emergency room. While there’s not much on this blader there’s one thing for sure… he’s dangerous!

Wonder: Honestly, there are many crazy bladers these days.

Feng: Yeah, but doesn’t change the fact that it’s wrong.

Wonder: I guess.

Feng: At least we won’t ever have to deal with him.

???: Ha!!!!! Ha!!!!!! Ha!!!!

Wonder & Feng both quickly turn their heads around in confusion just to see a maniac-looking individual.

The individual in question is a striking white figure possessing an average build that is neither too large nor too small. He has long white hair that cascades down his back, drawing attention to his striking blood-red eyes. The individual is often seen wearing a red robe which effortlessly complements his unique appearance, paired with a comfortable set of black jeans. He completes his look with a pair of fancy party-like red and gold shoes that add a touch of elegance to his outfit.

Wonder: Well you spoke too soon *sighs*.

The figure looks around with a massive sinister grin on his face.

Punish: My name is Punish Takai, and I’m gonna burn the blading world! He! He! He!

Punish then continues to laugh maniacally.

The other kid/teenage bladers around the area run off in fear except for Wonder & Feng who stand completely unfazed.

Punish takes notice and looks directly at both bladers.

Punish: What’s wrong? Why aren’t you scared!?

Wonder: Well, Number 1: You’re not intimidating 2: You are insane, and 3: Why should we be scared when you're dressed like that?

Feng then covers her mouth holding back her laughter.

Punish quickly stares at his design.

Punish: What is funny!? This makes me look beautiful!

Punish spins around as his hair and robe move to the flow of the wind!

Wonder: Yeah sure buddy.

Punish eyebrows lower and his smile turns into a fierce grin.

Punish: Since you like to run your mouth why don’t you battle me?

Wonder: Y-

Feng quickly moves her arm and gently pushes back Wonder’s chest.

Wonder: Feng?

Feng: You have so much more training to do!

Wonder: So..?

Feng: I’ll battle you!

Punish: Good…

*Feng nods*

Punish: I can’t wait to burn you.

Feng: *Concerned look* Uh? Okay?

Punish then slowly turns around and walks off.

Feng: Gives me the creeps.

Wonder: Yeah with his creepy smile.

Wonder stares at Feng with a concerned look.

Wonder: Are you sure you want to do this?

Feng: No, but if I don’t he’ll cook me literally.

*Later at Wonder’s house*

Wonder is lying in his big bed with his blue long-sleeved button pajamas and with his arms folded as he stares straight up at the ceiling with a blank stare.

Wonder (Thoughts): Feng…

*The next day*

As the camera zooms out, we get a panoramic view of the enormous Beyblade arena. The colors of black, blue, and green dominate the arena and create a vibrant, energetic atmosphere. The arena is packed with fans who are cheering and shouting in excitement, creating an electric ambiance. Adding to the experience is a massive screen displaying the official logo of the World Beyblade Organization (WBO), which is visible from every corner of the arena.

Yet, Wonder is sitting in the middle of a large crowd with a blank stare.

Wonder (Thoughts): Feng…

Mr.Gerald: Hello Beyfans! I’m your host Mr.Gerald! And we are all gathered here to witness the battle between Punish Takai & *Whispers* What is her name? *Nods* *Yelling* Feng Oceania!

*Crowd cheers*

Both bladers finally walk up to the stage coming from their respective sides (Punish left, Feng right).

Mr.Gerald: Who will win this showdown!?

Wonder (Thoughts): Feng…

Feng proudly holds up Whirlpool Forneus!

Punish: *Yawns* Boring.

Punish holds up his bey!

Punish: Meet Inferno Phoenix!

Feng: Woah…

Punish: The central element of the design features a captivating color scheme consisting of shades of red, orange, and gold. The motif of a majestic Phoenix bird with its magnificent wings gracefully spread out is prominently displayed, evoking a sense of power and resilience. It's a stunning visual representation that is both striking and memorable.

Feng: Hm.

Punish: Inferno is a blade that boasts of a striking two-bladed shape which is both eye-catching and unique. The blade features a vibrant red and gold color scheme that makes it stand out from the rest. What sets this Beyblade apart from others is its main gimmick, which is the upper and lower attack. One of the blades is slightly raised higher than the other, allowing for a more effective upper attack while the lowered blade facilitates a powerful lower attack. This feature makes the Inferno a formidable opponent in battles. The driver is simply called Burn.

Feng: Finally talking sense.

*Feng grins*

*Punish grins*

A buff figure walks up to the stadium wearing a hat, black sleek glasses & a black/white striped long-sleeved shirt.

Referee: I’m gonna be the referee!

Feng: Okay, geez why are you yelling?

Referee: This is my job!

Feng: Right.

Referee: First Battle!

Feng locks Whirlpool Forneus onto her launcher.

Punish locks Inferno Phoenix onto his red/gold launcher.

Feng (Thoughts): So upper attack & lower attack? Defense beats attack. This should be a walk in the park.

Referee: Ready Set! *Swings arm*

Crowd: 3…2…1…!

Feng/Punish: Let It Rip!

Punish launches his bey as Phoenix wings appear behind him.

Mr.Gerald: Both beys land into the stadium with extreme thuds showcasing the start of an epic battle!

Feng: Center now!

Whirlpool Forneus quickly takes center stage meanwhile Inferno Phoenix blazes around the stadium!

Feng: That bey’s fast!

Punish: Yes it is, now go Inferno Rush!

Phoenix quickly gives a barrage of attacks to Forneus!

*Feng grits teeth*

Feng: Hold on!

Phoenix then knocks Forneus with its upper blade so high into the air that Forneus gets sent flying out of the stadium.

Referee: Inferno Phoenix with a ring out! The score is 1-0!

*Crowd cheers*

Mr.Gerald: Wow, what a!... quick battle.

Feng picks up Whirlpool Forneus.

Feng (Thoughts): This isn’t over.

Referee: Second Battle!

Both bladers get into their launch positions again as Feng’s blue aurora glows while Punish glows a bloody red aurora.

Referee: Ready Set!

Crowd: 3…2…1…!

Feng/Punish: Let It Rip!

Punish Phoenix wings pop out once again!

Mr.Gerald: Both beys land in the stadium!

Whirlpool Forneus takes center stage again meanwhile Inferno Phoenix spins around the stadium at amazing speeds!

Mr.Gerald: Will this be a repeat of the last battle!?

Feng: No it won’t! *Pupils glow blue* Whirlpool Forneus!

Forneus flares out and its avatar appears!

Punish: *Pupils glow red* Burn them! Inferno Phoenix!

Phoenix flares out and its avatar is revealed to be a fiery Phoenix coming out of the ashes!

Punish: Now it’s time for Inferno Slam! *Snaps finger*

Feng: Whirlpool Whip!

Forneus green tornado spins into action!

Punish: Enough!

Phoenix easily breaks through the wind and hits Forneus with an under attack and sure enough, an explosion happens!

Feng: Ugh!

When the dust clears Inferno Phoenix spins at the center of the stadium while Whirlpool Forneus is seen bursting but more importantly… Its blade is split in half!

Feng's eyes widen in absolute shock!

Feng: No.

Referee: Inferno Phoenix with a burst finish! With a score of 2-0, Punish wins!

As Punish face and the text “Winner” appear on the screen the whole arena is silent with the excitement seemingly faded.

Wonder stares with a horrified look.

Wonder: Feng.

Feng falls to her knees with her eyes closed and a massive frown.

Punish: I told you… I’ll burn the blading world.

Punish walks off with a sinister smirk on his face.

*10 minutes later*

Feng is walking down the hallway looking down helplessly as Wonder runs up to her.

Wonder: Feng…

Feng turns around and stares sadly.

Feng: I failed.

Punish: Yes you did.

Wonder turns around to see Punish lying back on the wall with a massive smirk on his face.

Wonder: *Eyes widen with a fierce look* You... *Clenches fist* You are gonna pay for this!

Punish (Sarcastically): I’m sure I will.

Punish walks off with a cherry tone.

To be continued…

Punish is here and he's come here to destroy... AND ONLY DESTROY!
If you got thoughts please let me know.

(Mar. 13, 2024  1:33 AM)Bey100 Wrote: Early release of... 
Beyblade Whirlwind Episode 5:
The Destroyer! L Drago Destructor!

Spoiler (Click to View)

Wonder sits down on the living room floor crisscrossed with his arms folded as he frowns with his mind racing with tons of questions.

Wonder: How can he still be alive?

Wonder’s Dad: I mean it’s not like I know that but something in my heart tells me he may be.

Wonder: Are you sure you're not going *clicks tongue and points the finger at his head spinning*?

Wonder’s Dad: Positive.

Wonder’s Mom: Well I don’t believe any of this nonsense!

She angrily storms off refusing to believe any of the claims.

Wonder’s Dad: Maybe I’m just going crazy… but the voices… they keep echoing…

Jack (Voice): Dad! Help me!

Suddenly Wonder’s father falls to his knees shaken.

Wonder’s Dad: I hear it again.

Wonder looks down with a frown.

Wonder: Are you sure?

Wonder’s Dad: The voice just said *Help me*.

Wonder: But how?

Wonder’s Dad: I don’t know but I would like to find out.

Wonder’s father gets up and walks off leaving a skeptical but intrigued Wonder.

Wonder: Maybe he still is alive.

Meanwhile…

Ryuga: Ah!!!

Erebus's dark aura engulfs Ryuga, causing him to roll on the ground, screaming in agony. The air around them crackles with malevolent energy as the battle between light and darkness rages on.

Ryuga: Make it stop!!!!

Endor creepily whistles "A Beautiful Day In The Neighborhood" as Ryuga screams in anguish and begs for mercy.

Ryuga: I beg you! Please!

Endor sinisterly smiles and continues to whistle.

Suddenly Ryuga eyes turn into a bright purple and he gets up.

Endor: Finally!

Endor tosses L Drago Destructor to Ryuga.

Endor: Let’s get to work.

*The next day at the BeyPark*

Whirlwind Knight violently clashes with Whirlpool Forneus at the center of the stadium!

Wonder: Go!

Forneus blows back Knight.

Wonder: Not today! Whirlwind Slash!

Knight goes in and gives Forneus a big attack but gets deflected and gets thrown out of the stadium.

Wonder: Dammit! *Stomps his right leg*

Feng: Are you okay? You seem frustrated and oddly less positive than normal.

Wonder: *Eyebrows lowered and with a big frown scowl..* I’m fine!

Feng: Okay… geese. You didn’t have to yell.

Feng looks down with her eyes lowered.

Wonder: *Rubs eyes* I’m sorry… I didn’t mean to.

Feng: If you didn’t then tell me why you did you yell.

Wonder: I am going through a lot.

Feng: Is this about your parents again?

Wonder: My brother might still be alive.

Feng's eyes then opened wide with her jaw dropped.

Feng: Wh- I- a.. How!?

Wonder: My dad just mentioned how he was hearing these weird voice that sounds exactly like Jack. I think he’s honestly crazy.

Feng: I mean he doesn’t drink right?

Wonder: No, but I had a feeling he may had one, look I don’t wanna talk about it. If I keep reminiscing on the past I can never look towards the future specifically becoming the strongest bladers ever.

Feng: But Wonder?- Okay fine. Let’s just keep training… I guess.

Wonder nods his head in agreement as he pulls out his launcher.

*Meanwhile…*

As the scene changes, the camera zooms in on a colossal castle situated amid a vast expanse of lush green fields. The sun is shining bright in the sky, illuminating the surroundings with its warm glow. The chirping birds are audible in the background, creating a peaceful and serene atmosphere. However, as we move closer to the castle, the atmosphere inside seems different, as if something ominous lurks behind those walls.

The scene before me is of a large, desolate stadium that appears to have been destroyed. In the center of the stadium, there is a young-looking male figure wearing a Knight's shining armor, who is on his knees and crying. The sadness in his eyes is palpable as he looks up at Ryuga, who is standing menacingly before him. Ryuga is smirking and his eyes are a bright shade of purple that glows in the darkness. In his hand, he holds up his Bey - L Drago Destructor - as though he unleashed its full power. The air around them is filled with a dark purple aura, which adds to the intensity of the moment.

Endor: *Claps hands* Nicely done.

The Knight figure stands up and wipes his tears.

Xan: How dare you!? Do you know who I am!? I am Xan Tokoroa!

Endor let out a loud yawn.

Endor: I’m sorry, it’s just that that was extremely boring you didn’t even give him a challenge.

Xan: Y-yeah but-!?

Endor: Your a$s that’s what.

Both Ryuga & Endor walk off leaving the poor figure speechless.

Narrator: You are probably wondering how in the hell did that happen? Well let’s go back a little, shall we?

*10 minutes earlier*

Ryuga holds up L Drago Destructor.

A king with blue & red clothing sits on a golden throne.

King: How dare you break into my palace without my permission!

Endor: Respectfully and by respectfully I mean not respectful at all… we don’t care, so will you battle my friend here or not?

Xan: …

The mighty knight walks up to the stadium and holds up his bey in the air!

Xan: Meet my bey Shine Pandora!

The bey which is a right-spinning attack type has four sharp contact points with a red/orange color scheme with some gold to finish its striking appearance! The driver called “Speed” has a spikey bottom but the bottom is made of rubber!

Xan: No one dares challenges, my king!

Endor smirks sinisterly…

Endor: Well Ryuga will.

Ryuga continues to menacingly stand straight with his glowing purple eyes.

Xan: Why can’t you?

Endor: Simple, I don’t feel like it.

Xan: I don’t want this fool to battle me!

Ryuga: The question isn’t who’s gonna let me battle, it’s who’s gonna stop me.

Xan: Fine, then let’s battle!

Endor: Good, I’ll be the referee… First Battle!

Both bladers walk up to the stadium ready for battle!

Xan locks Shine Pandora with a shiny silver launcher.

Ryuga locks L Drago Destructor with a fully golden launcher as he glows a growing, raging dark purple aurora.

Xan (Thoughts): L Drago Destructor was used a long time ago by a powerful blader named Rylan Fist! He was considered to be one of the strongest bladers of all time! Now.. it’s in the hands of this clown! I must defeat him so I can not only get back his bey but protect the king!

*Flashback begins*

Xan and King are walking down the royal hall, deep in conversation. The hall is adorned with an array of portraits that seem to be staring down at them, their eyes following the two men as they move forward. A red carpet stretches out beneath their feet, leading the way down the grand corridor.

Xan: King, I can only imagine how much it must have hurt when your previous family abandoned you. But you worked hard and are now a King. Now that you have taken me in, I want you to know that I am here for you, always. You can count on me to protect you no matter what, just like you did for me.

King: I have complete faith in you, my dear friend. You are like family to me.

Ryuga (Thoughts): Shine Pandora looks useless. So plastic and weak… I assume the driver can cause so many problems but even then this battle is already over.

Endor: Ready & Set! *Swings arm up*

Xan: 3! *Stomps left leg*

Ryuga: 2! *Purple eyes glow brighter*

Xan/Ryuga: 1! *In between the frame of their eyes*

Xan/Ryuga: Let It Rip!

Both bladers passionately launch their beys into battle as their energy flows through their veins!

The stadium shook with a deafening thud as both beys collided in the arena!

Pandora speeds through the stadium as so does L Drago but both beys are spinning opposite sides!

Xan: Left spin?

Ryuga: *Throws right fist forward with his glowing purple eyes making a trail as his head swishes to the left* Tear them apart!

L Drago then goes for a head-on collision with Pandora!

Xan: Not so fast! Shine Pandora!

As Shine Pandora flares out, a magnificent avatar emerges with an egg-like design, resembling an extraterrestrial creature!

Shine Pandora begins to glow a fiery color and is then engulfed in a sparkling red leaving a fiery trail!

Xan: Now!

With Shine Pandora slightly titling the Speed driver does its magic allowing for Pandora to barely miss the attack as it swerves to the left side!

Endor: Hmm…

Xan: Burn them!

Pandora collides and knocks L Drago sky-high into the air!

Xan: Yes!

But L Drago hits the stadium wall and bounces back into the arena!

Xan: No!

L Drago and Pandora give each other a barrage of relentless attacks which attacks hitting harder than the last!

Xan: Hold on!

The king watches with his chin up, his eyes wide, and is wiping sweat off his forehead.

Ryuga continues to stand almost robotically with no movement and just stares at the battle.

Xan: Go!

Pandora powerfully clashes with L Drago and the sparks fly!

Endor: *Snaps fingers* Let’s end this.

Ryuga then all of a sudden screams his heart out as his spirit is let loose and runs wild!

Ryuga: L Drago Destructor!!!

L Drago flares out and a mighty white dragon avatar appears!

But L Drago begins to lose its stamina as it wobbles!

Ryuga; Now!... *Background goes black as crumbling noises can be heard in the background with Ryuga's face being clear and his purple eyes horrifically turning black* Survive.

L Drago then is fully engulfed in black as it’s now at full power. Then the Survive driver's two sliders move outwards allowing the bey to get even more aggressive while preserving spin.

Xan: Ah!

Ryuga: *With a dark, creepy, eerie corrupted voice* End them.

L Drago then clashes with Pandora and all of a sudden a huge explosion happens and the screen goes white with only these words heard…

Endor: L Drago Destructor with a burst finish! With a score of 0 - 2, Ryuga is the winner.

The screen finally reveals a busted Shine Pandora on the ground with the stadium being in complete shambles.

Xan: No… I failed…

Xan trembles to his knees as tears start to pour out of his eyes.

Xan: I - I *Voice cracks* I f - failed.

The king stares in absolute horror and disbelief.

Narrator: Ah! Here we are again! Now hope you had your popcorn for that battle because that was epic! Let’s get back, shall we?

Endor: *Claps hands* Nicely done.

The Knight figure stands up and wipes his tears.

Xan: How dare you!? Do you know who I am!? I am Xan Tokoroa!

Endor let out a loud yawn.

Endor: I’m sorry, it’s just that that was extremely boring you didn’t even give him a challenge.

Xan: Y-yeah but-!?

Endor: Your a$s that’s what.

Both Ryuga & Endor walk off leaving the poor figure speechless.

Endor: And by the way…

Endor suddenly pulls out a lighter and sets the glorious red carpet on fire and sure enough it quickly spreads.

Ryuga: Have fun burning alive.

Xan: No!!!!

*12 minutes later*

Xan with a burnt face full of horror and terror daunts out of the burning castle holding his king in his big arms.

Xan turns his head to see his huge castle continue to burn and eventually collapse to the ground causing a wave of dust.

Xan: *Coughs*.

The dust covers the whole atmosphere as it smells like fire, and tastes like dirt and breathing becomes a fight as the toxic air goes into your ears, nose, and lungs. Nothing can be seen other than greyness and fog.

Xan gently drops his king's body to the solid ground in the smoky atmosphere. The king's crown is broken and his clothes are burnt alongside his body and half his face. His eyes closed…

Xan: King?

The king doesn't respond.

Xan: King?

The king once again

Tears begin to form in Xan’s eyes as his voice starts choking up, his body starts shaking and his breathing becomes more rapid.

Xan: King? Please wake up *Tear falls down his left eye*! Please!

Xan lays his head on his chest but he hears no heart beating.

The voice echoes in his head... 

"You can count on me to protect you no matter what, just like you did for me."

... 

Xan then squinting his eyes pulls out a small knife from his armor and holds it up to his neck less than a centimeter away with his breathing becoming heavier and heavier…

… but… he just drops it…

And simply lays on the ground right by his fallen king.

To be continued…

Talk about a crazy episode. Please tell me your thoughts if you got any.

(Mar. 15, 2024  6:13 PM)Turboblader Wrote:

(Mar. 13, 2024  1:33 AM)Bey100 Wrote: Early release of... 
Beyblade Whirlwind Episode 5:
The Destroyer! L Drago Destructor!

Spoiler (Click to View)

Wonder sits down on the living room floor crisscrossed with his arms folded as he frowns with his mind racing with tons of questions.

Wonder: How can he still be alive?

Wonder’s Dad: I mean it’s not like I know that but something in my heart tells me he may be.

Wonder: Are you sure you're not going *clicks tongue and points the finger at his head spinning*?

Wonder’s Dad: Positive.

Wonder’s Mom: Well I don’t believe any of this nonsense!

She angrily storms off refusing to believe any of the claims.

Wonder’s Dad: Maybe I’m just going crazy… but the voices… they keep echoing…

Jack (Voice): Dad! Help me!

Suddenly Wonder’s father falls to his knees shaken.

Wonder’s Dad: I hear it again.

Wonder looks down with a frown.

Wonder: Are you sure?

Wonder’s Dad: The voice just said *Help me*.

Wonder: But how?

Wonder’s Dad: I don’t know but I would like to find out.

Wonder’s father gets up and walks off leaving a skeptical but intrigued Wonder.

Wonder: Maybe he still is alive.

Meanwhile…

Ryuga: Ah!!!

Erebus's dark aura engulfs Ryuga, causing him to roll on the ground, screaming in agony. The air around them crackles with malevolent energy as the battle between light and darkness rages on.

Ryuga: Make it stop!!!!

Endor creepily whistles "A Beautiful Day In The Neighborhood" as Ryuga screams in anguish and begs for mercy.

Ryuga: I beg you! Please!

Endor sinisterly smiles and continues to whistle.

Suddenly Ryuga eyes turn into a bright purple and he gets up.

Endor: Finally!

Endor tosses L Drago Destructor to Ryuga.

Endor: Let’s get to work.

*The next day at the BeyPark*

Whirlwind Knight violently clashes with Whirlpool Forneus at the center of the stadium!

Wonder: Go!

Forneus blows back Knight.

Wonder: Not today! Whirlwind Slash!

Knight goes in and gives Forneus a big attack but gets deflected and gets thrown out of the stadium.

Wonder: Dammit! *Stomps his right leg*

Feng: Are you okay? You seem frustrated and oddly less positive than normal.

Wonder: *Eyebrows lowered and with a big frown scowl..* I’m fine!

Feng: Okay… geese. You didn’t have to yell.

Feng looks down with her eyes lowered.

Wonder: *Rubs eyes* I’m sorry… I didn’t mean to.

Feng: If you didn’t then tell me why you did you yell.

Wonder: I am going through a lot.

Feng: Is this about your parents again?

Wonder: My brother might still be alive.

Feng's eyes then opened wide with her jaw dropped.

Feng: Wh- I- a.. How!?

Wonder: My dad just mentioned how he was hearing these weird voice that sounds exactly like Jack. I think he’s honestly crazy.

Feng: I mean he doesn’t drink right?

Wonder: No, but I had a feeling he may had one, look I don’t wanna talk about it. If I keep reminiscing on the past I can never look towards the future specifically becoming the strongest bladers ever.

Feng: But Wonder?- Okay fine. Let’s just keep training… I guess.

Wonder nods his head in agreement as he pulls out his launcher.

*Meanwhile…*

As the scene changes, the camera zooms in on a colossal castle situated amid a vast expanse of lush green fields. The sun is shining bright in the sky, illuminating the surroundings with its warm glow. The chirping birds are audible in the background, creating a peaceful and serene atmosphere. However, as we move closer to the castle, the atmosphere inside seems different, as if something ominous lurks behind those walls.

The scene before me is of a large, desolate stadium that appears to have been destroyed. In the center of the stadium, there is a young-looking male figure wearing a Knight's shining armor, who is on his knees and crying. The sadness in his eyes is palpable as he looks up at Ryuga, who is standing menacingly before him. Ryuga is smirking and his eyes are a bright shade of purple that glows in the darkness. In his hand, he holds up his Bey - L Drago Destructor - as though he unleashed its full power. The air around them is filled with a dark purple aura, which adds to the intensity of the moment.

Endor: *Claps hands* Nicely done.

The Knight figure stands up and wipes his tears.

Xan: How dare you!? Do you know who I am!? I am Xan Tokoroa!

Endor let out a loud yawn.

Endor: I’m sorry, it’s just that that was extremely boring you didn’t even give him a challenge.

Xan: Y-yeah but-!?

Endor: Your a$s that’s what.

Both Ryuga & Endor walk off leaving the poor figure speechless.

Narrator: You are probably wondering how in the hell did that happen? Well let’s go back a little, shall we?

*10 minutes earlier*

Ryuga holds up L Drago Destructor.

A king with blue & red clothing sits on a golden throne.

King: How dare you break into my palace without my permission!

Endor: Respectfully and by respectfully I mean not respectful at all… we don’t care, so will you battle my friend here or not?

Xan: …

The mighty knight walks up to the stadium and holds up his bey in the air!

Xan: Meet my bey Shine Pandora!

The bey which is a right-spinning attack type has four sharp contact points with a red/orange color scheme with some gold to finish its striking appearance! The driver called “Speed” has a spikey bottom but the bottom is made of rubber!

Xan: No one dares challenges, my king!

Endor smirks sinisterly…

Endor: Well Ryuga will.

Ryuga continues to menacingly stand straight with his glowing purple eyes.

Xan: Why can’t you?

Endor: Simple, I don’t feel like it.

Xan: I don’t want this fool to battle me!

Ryuga: The question isn’t who’s gonna let me battle, it’s who’s gonna stop me.

Xan: Fine, then let’s battle!

Endor: Good, I’ll be the referee… First Battle!

Both bladers walk up to the stadium ready for battle!

Xan locks Shine Pandora with a shiny silver launcher.

Ryuga locks L Drago Destructor with a fully golden launcher as he glows a growing, raging dark purple aurora.

Xan (Thoughts): L Drago Destructor was used a long time ago by a powerful blader named Rylan Fist! He was considered to be one of the strongest bladers of all time! Now.. it’s in the hands of this clown! I must defeat him so I can not only get back his bey but protect the king!

*Flashback begins*

Xan and King are walking down the royal hall, deep in conversation. The hall is adorned with an array of portraits that seem to be staring down at them, their eyes following the two men as they move forward. A red carpet stretches out beneath their feet, leading the way down the grand corridor.

Xan: King, I can only imagine how much it must have hurt when your previous family abandoned you. But you worked hard and are now a King. Now that you have taken me in, I want you to know that I am here for you, always. You can count on me to protect you no matter what, just like you did for me.

King: I have complete faith in you, my dear friend. You are like family to me.

Ryuga (Thoughts): Shine Pandora looks useless. So plastic and weak… I assume the driver can cause so many problems but even then this battle is already over.

Endor: Ready & Set! *Swings arm up*

Xan: 3! *Stomps left leg*

Ryuga: 2! *Purple eyes glow brighter*

Xan/Ryuga: 1! *In between the frame of their eyes*

Xan/Ryuga: Let It Rip!

Both bladers passionately launch their beys into battle as their energy flows through their veins!

The stadium shook with a deafening thud as both beys collided in the arena!

Pandora speeds through the stadium as so does L Drago but both beys are spinning opposite sides!

Xan: Left spin?

Ryuga: *Throws right fist forward with his glowing purple eyes making a trail as his head swishes to the left* Tear them apart!

L Drago then goes for a head-on collision with Pandora!

Xan: Not so fast! Shine Pandora!

As Shine Pandora flares out, a magnificent avatar emerges with an egg-like design, resembling an extraterrestrial creature!

Shine Pandora begins to glow a fiery color and is then engulfed in a sparkling red leaving a fiery trail!

Xan: Now!

With Shine Pandora slightly titling the Speed driver does its magic allowing for Pandora to barely miss the attack as it swerves to the left side!

Endor: Hmm…

Xan: Burn them!

Pandora collides and knocks L Drago sky-high into the air!

Xan: Yes!

But L Drago hits the stadium wall and bounces back into the arena!

Xan: No!

L Drago and Pandora give each other a barrage of relentless attacks which attacks hitting harder than the last!

Xan: Hold on!

The king watches with his chin up, his eyes wide, and is wiping sweat off his forehead.

Ryuga continues to stand almost robotically with no movement and just stares at the battle.

Xan: Go!

Pandora powerfully clashes with L Drago and the sparks fly!

Endor: *Snaps fingers* Let’s end this.

Ryuga then all of a sudden screams his heart out as his spirit is let loose and runs wild!

Ryuga: L Drago Destructor!!!

L Drago flares out and a mighty white dragon avatar appears!

But L Drago begins to lose its stamina as it wobbles!

Ryuga; Now!... *Background goes black as crumbling noises can be heard in the background with Ryuga's face being clear and his purple eyes horrifically turning black* Survive.

L Drago then is fully engulfed in black as it’s now at full power. Then the Survive driver's two sliders move outwards allowing the bey to get even more aggressive while preserving spin.

Xan: Ah!

Ryuga: *With a dark, creepy, eerie corrupted voice* End them.

L Drago then clashes with Pandora and all of a sudden a huge explosion happens and the screen goes white with only these words heard…

Endor: L Drago Destructor with a burst finish! With a score of 0 - 2, Ryuga is the winner.

The screen finally reveals a busted Shine Pandora on the ground with the stadium being in complete shambles.

Xan: No… I failed…

Xan trembles to his knees as tears start to pour out of his eyes.

Xan: I - I *Voice cracks* I f - failed.

The king stares in absolute horror and disbelief.

Narrator: Ah! Here we are again! Now hope you had your popcorn for that battle because that was epic! Let’s get back, shall we?

Endor: *Claps hands* Nicely done.

The Knight figure stands up and wipes his tears.

Xan: How dare you!? Do you know who I am!? I am Xan Tokoroa!

Endor let out a loud yawn.

Endor: I’m sorry, it’s just that that was extremely boring you didn’t even give him a challenge.

Xan: Y-yeah but-!?

Endor: Your a$s that’s what.

Both Ryuga & Endor walk off leaving the poor figure speechless.

Endor: And by the way…

Endor suddenly pulls out a lighter and sets the glorious red carpet on fire and sure enough it quickly spreads.

Ryuga: Have fun burning alive.

Xan: No!!!!

*12 minutes later*

Xan with a burnt face full of horror and terror daunts out of the burning castle holding his king in his big arms.

Xan turns his head to see his huge castle continue to burn and eventually collapse to the ground causing a wave of dust.

Xan: *Coughs*.

The dust covers the whole atmosphere as it smells like fire, and tastes like dirt and breathing becomes a fight as the toxic air goes into your ears, nose, and lungs. Nothing can be seen other than greyness and fog.

Xan gently drops his king's body to the solid ground in the smoky atmosphere. The king's crown is broken and his clothes are burnt alongside his body and half his face. His eyes closed…

Xan: King?

The king doesn't respond.

Xan: King?

The king once again

Tears begin to form in Xan’s eyes as his voice starts choking up, his body starts shaking and his breathing becomes more rapid.

Xan: King? Please wake up *Tear falls down his left eye*! Please!

Xan lays his head on his chest but he hears no heart beating.

The voice echoes in his head... 

"You can count on me to protect you no matter what, just like you did for me."

... 

Xan then squinting his eyes pulls out a small knife from his armor and holds it up to his neck less than a centimeter away with his breathing becoming heavier and heavier…

… but… he just drops it…

And simply lays on the ground right by his fallen king.

To be continued…

Talk about a crazy episode. Please tell me your thoughts if you got any.

Hello I'm back, and I have a few things to say about episodes 5 and 6.
1. Good story.
2. Isn't L-drago's bit beast red (it's a different universe so I understand if there are a few differences).
3. Why didn't L-drago destructor change modes and used its rubber to absorb spin power like in metal fury.
4. Ryuga's character is a bit different than in the metal series.
5. Is Punish going to be like Azula from the last Airbender?
6. Yikes-e-ola Punish straight up killed Feng's hopes and dreams.
I can't wait for more episodes.

(Mar. 15, 2024  8:17 PM)Bey100 Wrote:

(Mar. 15, 2024  6:13 PM)Turboblader Wrote: Hello I'm back, and I have a few things to say about episodes 5 and 6.
1. Good story.
2. Isn't L-drago's bit beast red (it's a different universe so I understand if there are a few differences).
3. Why didn't L-drago destructor change modes and used its rubber to absorb spin power like in metal fury.
4. Ryuga's character is a bit different than in the metal series.
5. Is Punish going to be like Azula from the last Airbender?
6. Yikes-e-ola Punish straight up killed Feng's hopes and dreams.
I can't wait for more episodes.

To answer your questions:
1. Thank you
2. Yes it was red but since this a different universe the avatar slightly different
3. You'll see more of the gimmicks in the future
4. Obviously it's not gonna be 100% accurate but I'm still trying also keep in mind he's under control in Episode 5 
5. Punish is more of a 1st arc antagonist so not exactly like Azula in that sense but personality wise in the sense of being an absolute menace pretty close honestly
6. Lol Forneus will still get an evo though so I wouldn't say her hopes and dreams are completely dead in the water

(Mar. 16, 2024  1:23 AM)Bey100 Wrote: Beyblade Whirlwind Episode 7:
Hopping Beyblade! Hopper Bunny! (Easter Special)

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Feng is quietly sitting down on her big black couch with a frozen stare.

Wonder: *Sighs* Are you okay?

Feng continues to stare.

Wonder: I’ll check back up on you tomorrow.

Turning around, Wonder saw a muscular figure with long black hair wearing a plain blue t-shirt, black jeans, and a gold watch.

Wonder: *Eyes widen* You must be Mr.Oceania Feng’s father!

Mr.Oceania gives Wonder a death stare.

Mr.Oceania: Yes, and you are Feng’s friend Wonder?

Wonder: *Awkwardly smiles* Yup, that's me. Heh.

Mr.Oceania: Nothing more?

Wonder: Yes.

Mr.Oceanaia: Nothing less?

Wonder: Uh… yes?

Mr.Oceania: *Chuckles with a slight grin* Good, because if it were not for any of the questions I would’ve ripped your skin off.

Wonder: *Gulps* Yeah… ha. So how’s your wife? Feng’s mother?

Mr.Oceania: She’s dead.

Wonder: *Eyes widen* Oh wow I’m uh? So sorry about that. *Whispers* Kinda weird how you said that casually but okay.

Mr.Oceania: It’s time to take your leave.

Wonder nods as he immediately sprints out the door.

Wonder (thoughts): Hope she’ll be okay.

As Wonder walks down the bustling sidewalk, the vibrant and lively energy of the city surrounds him. The streets are filled with people dressed in colorful bunny costumes, hopping and frolicking around. The air is thick with the sweet scent of cotton candy and the sound of cheerful music that fills the atmosphere. Everywhere you look, there are vendors selling balloons, popcorn, and other carnival treats.

Wonder: Easter… almost here.

There’s then a mini light bulb that appears over his head.

Wonder: That gives me an idea…

*The next day…*

Both Wonder & Feng are in a crowded Easter-decorated Beypark filled with cheer & laughter.

Feng stares at a small group of children in bunny costumes.

Feng: Really?

Wonder: Yeah looks fun right?

Feng: No.

Wonder: *Roll's eyes* Common I’m trying to cheer you up here.

Feng: Well you are honestly doing a terrible job.

Wonder sighs.

Wonder: Look you can’t be sad forever.

Feng: It’s not Forneus breaking that makes me sad is the fact that I lost in front of that idiot…

Wonder sadly stares.

Feng: I feel a response for him still being out there causing chaos.

Wonder: Feng, you’re not.

Feng: *Crosses arms* Well that’s how it feels…

Wonder: Look I promise I’ll defeat that guy and avenge you.

Feng: I don’t think you can… Inferno Phoenix is powerful.

Wonder: Well I have to try.

All of sudden a big figure in a pink/white bunny costume hops up to Feng joyfully.

Bunny Guy: Why not turn that frown upside down?

Feng stares with bags under her eyes an annoyed look.

Wonder makes a Pikachu face.

Wonder: Really?

The figure's cherry and upbeat tone changes to a more somber tone.

Bunny Guy: What?

Wonder: Can’t you see she’s clearly not in a good mood?

Bunny Guy: What!? It’s Easter time! A time for love, joy and-

Feng yawns.

Feng: Take off the mask.

The figure in the costume sighs and takes off his mask to reveal a blond buzz cut with a pale-looking face.

Ben: My name is Ben. Saw you were looking sad. What’s wrong?

Feng: None of your business.

Wonder stares angrily at Feng.

Wonder: She got her bey destroyed by a psycho named Punish.

Ben: That guy is crazy, destroying beys left & right. Sorry about that.

Feng: Thanks.

Ben: So what’s your plan?

Wonder: Simple, get good old fashion revenge.

Ben: How?

Wonder: *Shrugs* I don’t know.

Ben: Well… maybe I can help?

Wonder: Please… how can you help?

The guy pulls down the long zipper and takes off the rest of his costume to reveal a skin-tight pink/white bunny costume with no gloves.

Feng: Well this guy likes bunnies a lot.

He shows a pink and gold 6-bladed right-spin bey with a bunny motif on the core. The bey has 6 small contact points around it.

Ben: Meet Hopper Bunny!

Feng: What’s up with all the bunnies?

Then two kids, one black and one white, run around her in circles while holding baskets before running off cheerfully.

Feng: Careful!

Wonder: Woah.. easter bey?

Ben's face lits up with joy.

Ben: Yes! It’s a right-spin balance type.

Wonder: Cool.

Feng: *Rolls eyes* Yeah so cool.

Feng storms off leaving both Wonder & Ben alone.

Ben: I know her bey broke but honestly she’s acting like a jerk.

Wonder: Let me go talk to her.

Wonder runs off while Ben stands in the middle of the park waiting patiently.

Feng sits on a long black bench right outside the exit of the park where there’s barely anyone to be seen with her hands covering her face.

Wonder: Feng!

Wonder finds a saddened Feng on the bench.

Wonder: What’s your problem? Having your bey broken is no excuse to be a jerk.

Feng: *Glares down* I’m sorry I just feel so useless.

Wonder: I did too… but I decided to push myself and you can too.

Feng: You don’t get it not only did I lose to Punish but in front of everyone as well.

Wonder: Kind of a good thing though.

Feng: How!?

Wonder: We sometimes need to fail to succeed, we sometimes need to lose to win.

Feng stares with a confused Pikachu face.

Wonder: *Low voice tone* We need to sometimes fail to have the motivation to grow.

Wonder holds out his arm offering it to Feng.

Wonder: And we will grow together.

Feng grinning takes Wonder's hand and is raised to her feet.

Both bladers walk back into the crowded park and they both see Ben waiting there with his arms crossed and legs tapping.

Ben: About time.

Feng: It wasn’t that long.

Ben: Whatever, if you're gonna beat Punish… you’ll need some training!

Ben holds up Hopper Bunny.

Wonder holds up Whirlwind Knight.

Wonder: I’m up for a challenge.

Feng: Then I’ll be ref! First Battle!

Ben locks his bey onto his pink launcher.

Wonder (Thoughts): Seems like a balance type, what’s the worst it could do?

Feng: Ready Set!

Ben: 3! *Hops a little*

Ben: 2! *Hops a little higher*

Ben: 1! *Hops high into the air and does flips as a trick*

Wonder: Woah…

Ben/Wonder: Let It Rip!

Both bladers launch their beys with great strength launching us into battle!

Ben lands on his feet perfectly.

Ben: Whoo.

Both beys land in the stadium!

Whirlwind Knight & Hopper Bunny both speed around the stadium electrifyingly!

Wonder: *Swings left arm* Attack!

Whirlwind Knight rushes to give a smash hit to Bunny sending Bunny flying into a wall but rebounding back into the center of the stadium with the bey wobbling.

Wonder: *Clenches fist* Yes!

Ben: Now!

All of a sudden Hopper Bunny bounces up into the air with a slightly thin-looking rod coming out of the green driver!

Feng: Woah!

Ben: Now this is the power of Hopper Bunny’s Egg driver!

Feng: For such a goofy name such a cool gimmick…

Wonder (Thoughts): Seems like when the bey begins to lose stamina the bey will jump into the air and become more aggressive.

Ben's pupils then turn pink as a green aurora begins to glow brightly!

Ben: Jump Up! Hopper Bunny!

Hopper Bunny then glows with a sparkling gold trail.

Wonder pupils turn blue as he glows a shining bright blue aurora!

Wonder: It’s our time to strike⚡! Whirlwind Knight!

Whirlwind Knight flares out and its mighty avatar appears with a striking appearance!

Bunny & Knight then clash and a major explosion happens!

Wonder: Stand strong!

Both beys are up into the air with Knight being slightly higher.

Wonder: Now go! Thunderbolt Smash!

Whirlwind Knight comes back flying down like a meteor as an electric trail follows.

Ben: No wait!

Whirlwind Knight then clashes with Hopper Bunny in midair causing massive sparks to fly!

Feng: Woah!

The energy of the clash begins to blow back wind!

Feng: *Hands in front of face* Hold on…

The wind causes Feng's black leather jacket to slip off her shoulder, revealing a blue tank top.

Wonder: Ah!

Finally, both beys get knocked back then Hopper Bunny bursts two seconds before Whirlwind Knight!

Wonder: Yes!

All the parts come falling to the ground.

Feng pulls her jacket back up before saying…

Feng: Whirlwind Knight with a burst finish! With a score of 0-2, Wonder is the winner!

Wonder grins.

Wonder: Of course.

Ben: *Chuckles* Guess you are stronger than I thought can’t believe you beat my gimmick in one round, but be careful Punish is stronger than you think… that upper and under attack always got to be prepared.

Wonder nods in agreement.

Ben happily shakes hands with Feng.

Feng: Sorry for my attitude earlier.

Ben: That’s okay all it took was for your boyfriend-

Wonder/Feng: WE’RE NOT DATING.

Ben: Okay. Noted.

Ben picks up his bey parts and then walks off into the rest of the crowd.

*Meanwhile…*

???: They took everything away from me so now they must pay...

We can see Xan wearing his gleaming armor in a dimly lit atmosphere.

Xan: The birth of Mighty Xcalibur…

Xan holds up the silver/gold rounded bey with a two-sword design.

Xan: Is here.

Xan says as a white aurora surrounds him with glowing gold eyes and a fierce look.

Been on a roll for episodes this week, but expect only at most two episodes next week as since I'm approaching testing season soon I'll want to make sure I'm extra focused.   If you got any thoughts let me know. This also technically ends BeySpring as well.

(Mar. 16, 2024  10:28 PM)Bey100 Wrote: How would you rank all the episodes of Whirlwind so far? Worst - Best?