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RE: Darkangel's Story #1 Battle for the fate of earth(Plz vote on poll) - C-Dub - Feb. 19, 2011 (Feb. 19, 2011 12:22 AM)regulardude Wrote: [gdyegcyusdgcdy] dhd] uf6duw6wy767hoijeirewyhrgudrfirfejurwOL What the double carp RE: Darkangel's Story #1 Battle for the fate of earth(Plz vote on poll) - Light Yagami - Feb. 19, 2011 ii really wonder whats going on in his mind when he wrote that RE: Darkangel's Story #1 Battle for the fate of earth(Plz vote on poll) - Sparx000 - Feb. 19, 2011 (Feb. 19, 2011 12:22 AM)regulardude Wrote: [gdyegcyusdgcdy] dhd] uf6duw6wy767hoijeirewyhrgudrfirfejurwOL???What the carp?!I think this is SPAM RE: Darkangel's Story #1 Battle for the fate of earth(Plz vote on poll) - Light Yagami - Feb. 19, 2011 yeah its definatly spam. RE: Darkangel's Story #1 Battle for the fate of earth(Plz vote on poll) - 001 - Feb. 20, 2011 i really dont mean to spam at his spam... but... trololololol! RE: Darkangel's Story #1 Battle for the fate of earth(Plz vote on poll) - Kujikato - Feb. 20, 2011 Character request can i join, you have a lot of talent as a writer, name: Izuma Inzori Bey: Silent Ninja SBSCH85-110 RHF/RS Bey discrption: Silent: think of Lightning with the multi hit mode as thick shurikens, and upper mode as a kunai Ninja: think of kerbecs and l-drago1 with the 'rings' as shurikens and the dragon heads as kunai. SBSCH85-110: Shuriken Blade Spring Change Height8.5mm-11mm, think of CH120 with shell resembeling a shuriken, can bounce when loosened. Bounces at the command of izuma. RHF/RS: HF/F with the tips made of rubber characther bio: wears Black all the time, helpful and cool, classmates are jealous of him super attack: Silent death Silent Ninja dissapears and hits oponent with a million kunai and shuriken bey color: all black age 12 Thx RE: Darkangel's Story #1 Battle for the fate of earth(Plz vote on poll) - Light Yagami - Feb. 20, 2011 um is he good or bad RE: Darkangel's Story #1 Battle for the fate of earth(Plz vote on poll) - Key blader - Feb. 20, 2011 When is the next chapter? I'm excited to see it. Oh and btw, Kevin has his big battle with a new charcater in my story Fusion Whirlwind Blade School. RE: Darkangel's Story #1 Battle for the fate of earth(Plz vote on poll) - Light Yagami - Feb. 20, 2011 yayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy and the next chapter will be done soon.but spartas writing it cuz i am sick RE: Darkangel's Story #1 Battle for the fate of earth(Plz vote on poll) - Key blader - Feb. 20, 2011 (Feb. 20, 2011 7:44 PM)darkangelkaieru Wrote: yayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyhaha okay. The chapter would've been done last night but I pressed the wrong button and the chapter got deleted. RE: Darkangel's Story #1 Battle for the fate of earth(Plz vote on poll) - Light Yagami - Feb. 20, 2011 okay and i hope its done soon RE: Darkangel's Story #1 Battle for the fate of earth(Plz vote on poll) - Key blader - Feb. 20, 2011 (Feb. 20, 2011 9:00 PM)darkangelkaieru Wrote: okay and i hope its done soonIt's about half way done again now RE: Darkangel's Story #1 Battle for the fate of earth(Plz vote on poll) - Light Yagami - Feb. 20, 2011 yes i cant wait RE: Darkangel's Story #1 Battle for the fate of earth(Plz vote on poll) - Ozma - Feb. 21, 2011 Namezma Appearance:black jacket over a black a and red shirt and gray pants with a black cloak Personality:very straightforward Backstory:he grew up in a tribe and was given the mission to protect the sacred bey Beyblade:eclipse sol blaze v145ms Alignment:neutral Talents:very fast runner and extremely stealthy Special moves:black sunset:sol blaze turns into a black sun and collapses on the opponents bey.sacred firestorm:sol blaze spins very fast and forms a tornado of fire.cross fire:sol blaze forms a burning x to power itself up. Weaknesses:holding grudges which make it hard for him to forgive and sometimes causes him to deny help because he doesn't like the person trying to help him Age:15 Purpose:his mission is to protect the sacred bey but he'll go as far as to seal it away for good if it's owner can't handle it RE: Darkangel's Story #1 Battle for the fate of earth(Plz vote on poll) - Light Yagami - Feb. 21, 2011 is he good or bad there is no netral RE: Darkangel's Story #1 Battle for the fate of earth(Plz vote on poll) - LordCepheusIII - Feb. 21, 2011 Great story man. I also got Gravity Perseus and Meteo L Drago yesterday. RE: Darkangel's Story #1 Battle for the fate of earth(Plz vote on poll) - Light Yagami - Feb. 21, 2011 nice RE: Darkangel's Story #1 Battle for the fate of earth(Plz vote on poll) - Ozma - Feb. 21, 2011 He's good but to the person with the sacred bey he seems bad RE: Darkangel's Story #1 Battle for the fate of earth(Plz vote on poll) - Light Yagami - Feb. 21, 2011 okay RE: Darkangel's Story #1 Battle for the fate of earth(Plz vote on poll) - Ozma - Feb. 21, 2011 So is my character accepted RE: Darkangel's Story #1 Battle for the fate of earth(Plz vote on poll) - Light Yagami - Feb. 21, 2011 uh well yeah i guess RE: Darkangel's Story #1 Battle for the fate of earth(Plz vote on poll) - Light Yagami - Feb. 22, 2011 CHAPTER 34 Ethan and Jake launched, and their beys went straight at each other. They clashed, and sparks flew, but Jake yawned. "Gimme a real fight," He said, clearly bored. Ethan was mad. "Just play the game!" He said. Jake took a step back. "Take it easy!" He said. "I don't want you to strain yourself. Anyways, it's not like you can win. You know, I've heard that losing can be frustrating sometimes. But I wouldn't know." He narrowed his gaze at Ethan. "I rarely lose." He raised his hand up towards the sky. "Special move!" He shouted. "Peafowl! Rainbow Dance!" Ethan looked taken aback. "What?" He asked. "Peafowl Rainbow Dance?" Suddenly, Peafowls emblem flashed and a colorful blend of rainbow lights filled the room. "Aaaah!" Ethan cried, shielding his eyes from the blinding lights. Jake laughed. "Deal with this!" He said, and the lights intensified. Dranzer was wobbling! Meanwhile Peafowl took advantage of Ethan's disorientation and attacked Dranzer. "No!" I shouted. "Fight back Ethan!" His mind flashed with realization. That's right, he thought. I need to win so we can get out of here! "Raaaaaahh!" He screamed. "Go now Dranzer!" Now it was Jake who was surprised. "What?" He asked, fear in his eyes. "Even after all of those attacks he still has power to spare?" Ethan smirked. "Funny thing about Peacocks!" He shouted. "They have all sorts of dazzling lights, but no power to back it up! They're all show, JUST LIKE YOU!" He closed his eyes. "I don't need to see do be able to defeat the likes of you! DRANZER! BLAZING COMET RAINSTORM AAAAAHH!!" Dranzer flew up into the air, flashed his emblem, and dove, as millions of raining comets. Jake was scared. "This can't be!" He shrieked. His eyes were full of fear. "Oh," I smiled under my breath. "But it is." I turned to Ethan. "Do it now!" I shouted, and he nodded. "Now!" And Dranzer, in the master comet, dove and hit Peafowl like a hammer on a nail. "Nooo!" Jake cried, but it was too late. Peafowl was pushed into the ground. After the smoke cleared, only one bey was left spinning. It was Dranzer! "Yah!" We all shouted. Ethan smiled. "I won!" He yelled, and laughed. Meanwhile, Jake was on the ground, too weak to stand. "This isn't over!" He shouted. "You little pipsqueaks aren't going anywhere!" He tried to stand, but he fell. Ethan laughed. "Like I said, you're all show." And with that, our team, full again, left. The eclipse savior's have left the building! this chapter was writin by sparta RE: Darkangel's Story #1 Battle for the fate of earth(Plz vote on poll) - C-Dub - Feb. 22, 2011 cooluo chaptah...lot of action like Libra vs Pegasis RE: Darkangel's Story #1 Battle for the fate of earth(Plz vote on poll) - Light Yagami - Feb. 22, 2011 yeah oh yeah i will be writing the next chapter my self just to let you guys know RE: Darkangel's Story #1 Battle for the fate of earth(Plz vote on poll) - Sparx000 - Feb. 22, 2011 Epic new chapter! |