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RE: Bey100's Beyblade Whirlwind! (Coming February 23rd) - Bey100 - Feb. 22, 2024
"Your useful for being useless."
Beyblade Whirlwind Official Trailer 2:
Spoiler (Click to View)
Wonder grips his launcher tightly...
Wonder: Here we go...
"This Friday.."
Inferno Phoenix spins at the center of the stadium as there are huge flames all around the stadium burning everything!
"A wind is blowing.."
Whirlwind Knight intensely clashes with Inferno Phoenix as both beys go full force causing exploding energy!
Wonder: Together..
Wonder in a purple void sees a glorious gigantic Whirlwind Knight avatar beyond his huge eyes!
Wonder: Forever!!!
Wonder purple aurora continues to glow so bright as everyone in the arena can feel the energy going through his veins.
Wonder has a huge wide grin on his face...
Wonder: Now let the battle begin!!!!
Whirlwind Knight flares out and the avatar appears
Feng fixes her hair with glowing blue pupils
Wonder clenches his fist angrily
Wonder: I won't back down!
Wonder holds up Whirlwind Knight high into the sky
This quickly transitions to a shot of Wonder on his knees with bags under his eyes, a wide open mouth & wide open eyes..
Wonder: Never.
*Screen goes black*
An villainous laugh can be heard in the background..
???: If you think the you can win & get your happy ending...
Punish quickly & harshly get pushed down to the ground by a mysterious figure..
???: Then you need to wake up & face the reality..
Finally a tall & buff figure appears. He has a purple mohawk & sharp teeth with big black eyebrows. Alongside this the figure completed with a long purple jacket while not wearing any shirt underneath showing his 6 pack. Alongside this he wears long purple joggers. He finishes off his design with long purple/black Adidas.
???: You never will...
Wonder looks up with his eyes & mouth opened wide while his clothes looking ripped.
???: You ain't nothing against me. You ain't anything. If you were twice as smart you'd still be stupid.
Wonder continues to stare as his face grows pale.
???: If being clueless was a competition you'd be the reigning champion.
Tears begin to form in Wonder's eyes as he fights back tears.
???: Your useful for being useless.
Whirlwind Knight alertly gets pinned to the stadium wall seemingly being almost crushed by another bey that's not seen!
As a lighting bolt strikes the Beyblade Whirlwind logo appears as the countdown to the first episode begins!
"First episode this Friday!"
Wonder: Here we go...
"This Friday.."
Inferno Phoenix spins at the center of the stadium as there are huge flames all around the stadium burning everything!
"A wind is blowing.."
Whirlwind Knight intensely clashes with Inferno Phoenix as both beys go full force causing exploding energy!
Wonder: Together..
Wonder in a purple void sees a glorious gigantic Whirlwind Knight avatar beyond his huge eyes!
Wonder: Forever!!!
Wonder purple aurora continues to glow so bright as everyone in the arena can feel the energy going through his veins.
Wonder has a huge wide grin on his face...
Wonder: Now let the battle begin!!!!
Whirlwind Knight flares out and the avatar appears
Feng fixes her hair with glowing blue pupils
Wonder clenches his fist angrily
Wonder: I won't back down!
Wonder holds up Whirlwind Knight high into the sky
This quickly transitions to a shot of Wonder on his knees with bags under his eyes, a wide open mouth & wide open eyes..
Wonder: Never.
*Screen goes black*
An villainous laugh can be heard in the background..
???: If you think the you can win & get your happy ending...
Punish quickly & harshly get pushed down to the ground by a mysterious figure..
???: Then you need to wake up & face the reality..
Finally a tall & buff figure appears. He has a purple mohawk & sharp teeth with big black eyebrows. Alongside this the figure completed with a long purple jacket while not wearing any shirt underneath showing his 6 pack. Alongside this he wears long purple joggers. He finishes off his design with long purple/black Adidas.
???: You never will...
Wonder looks up with his eyes & mouth opened wide while his clothes looking ripped.
???: You ain't nothing against me. You ain't anything. If you were twice as smart you'd still be stupid.
Wonder continues to stare as his face grows pale.
???: If being clueless was a competition you'd be the reigning champion.
Tears begin to form in Wonder's eyes as he fights back tears.
???: Your useful for being useless.
Whirlwind Knight alertly gets pinned to the stadium wall seemingly being almost crushed by another bey that's not seen!
As a lighting bolt strikes the Beyblade Whirlwind logo appears as the countdown to the first episode begins!
"First episode this Friday!"
RE: Bey100's Beyblade Whirlwind! (Coming February 23rd) - Bey100 - Feb. 22, 2024
Beyblade Whirlwind Character Contest Announcement:
Here’s what you need:
• Core
• Blade
• Driver
For character:
• Name
• Age
• Gender
• Design
• Backstory/Personality
This contest begins today and goes on until next week Thursday. Good Luck!👍
RE: Bey100's Beyblade Whirlwind! (Coming February 23rd) - beyspark - Feb. 22, 2024
Whirlwind Bey: Barrage Minotaur Slash
Name: Max Saito
Gender: Male
Age: 16
Height: 6' 17"
Birthday: January 23th
Appearance: Max has short brown hair with a small white streak on the right side, wears a black sleeveless vest, a gray shirt under the vest, and red mid-length shorts, and has green eyes.
Personality: He was kicked out of three schools because of his insolent behavior, and he really liked to make fun of the smaller ones, taking their things and throwing them everywhere, he became like that because he lived in a not very good family that was angry at him as a child, and they also constantly beat Max and quarreled among themselves.
Core: Minotaur: The core of the Minotaur has the motif of a formidable half-man half-bull guarding the labyrinth, and in the center of the core is a large bull's head with large horns and a very menacing appearance, its color scheme combines brown and white colors with red eyes and a golden nose ring
Blade: Barrage: The Barrage blade has four thick blades pointing downwards for a devastating attack and also has metal on top for more powerful attacks, the color scheme combines brown and red flames.
Driver: Slash: The Slash driver is similar to the Xtreme but has metal instead of rubber.
RE: Bey100's Beyblade Whirlwind! (Coming February 23rd) Character Contest Ongoing - Bey100 - Feb. 22, 2024
First episode drops tomorrow at 7pm! Get ready! 🌪️
RE: Bey100's Beyblade Whirlwind! (Coming February 23rd) Character Contest Ongoing - Turboblader - Feb. 22, 2024
(Feb. 22, 2024 4:10 PM)Bey100 Wrote: Beyblade Whirlwind Character Contest Announcement:
Here’s what you need:
• Core
• Blade
• Driver
For character:
• Name
• Age
• Gender
• Design
• Backstory/Personality
This contest begins today and goes on until next week Thursday. Good Luck!👍
Core: Rhinoceros
A silver right spinning core with the motif of a Rhino to symbolize unstoppable strength
Blade: Impact
A three bladed attack type blade designed for smash attacks so powerful that the opponent get knocked out at high speed
Driver: Final
A driver designed to reserve energy at the start of the battle then release it all at once for a "Final" attack (makes the beyblade stop spinning if it misses the attack)
Blader:
Name: Remy
Age: 17
Birthday: July 20th
Hight: 5'4"
Gender: Male
Appearance: a boy with blond hair from Hawaii with the look of chill surfer dude complete with flip flops and sunglasses
Personality: a chill dude who always treats others with respect
Backstory: he has seen how some bladers get treated by other so he seeks to make a difference for all bladers.
RE: Bey100's Beyblade Whirlwind! (Coming February 23rd) Character Contest Ongoing - Bey100 - Feb. 23, 2024
Beyblade Whirlwind Prologue:
Spoiler (Click to View)
Welcome to Beyblade! Where multiple young & experienced bladers battle their hearts out in heart pumping, jaw dropping showdowns! The road to greatness isn't easy but with hard work & determination anyone no matter how big or small can become a great blader! So enter the tornado & let it rip!
Beyblade Whrilwind Opening 1:
Title: Bey Tornado
Spoiler (Click to View)
Beyblade Whrilwind logo excitedly spins into view!
Music picks up as the beat immediately hits heavy!
🎶 “Are you ready… for a bey tornado!?” 🎶
Wonder stares determined into the sunset at the top of a lighthouse holding Whirlwind Knight.
🎶 “Are you ready.. for a bey tornado!?” 🎶
Wonders then begins to slowly put a grin on his face showing his hope for the future.
The beat then goes extremely hard! 🥁
🎶 “It is time.. for a new electrifying era!” 🎶
Feng smiles as Whirlpool Forneus terrifying shark avatar swims behind her showing how she’ll be a big rival for the first arc of the series.
🎶 “It is time.. for a new fiery era!” 🎶
Punish smiles menacingly as he quickly jumps into a huge volcano in a dark, cloudy atmosphere. The volcano then suddenly erupts and coming out of it is the Inferno Phoenix avatar who flies high into the sky with there being great thunder.
🎶 “Welcome… to the new era!” 🎶
Wonder locks Whirlwind Knight onto a dark blue right launcher with a hyper attitude.
🎶 “Welcome!” 🎶
Whirlwind Knight, Whirlpool Forneus, & Inferno Phoenix all powerfully & aggressively clash in the center of the stadium causing their to be spark flying everywhere. ⚡️
🎶 “Set your heart on fire!” 🎶 ❤️🔥
Wonder screams his heart out with exceeding joy & hope. His eyes glow gold to show him at full sync with Whirlwind Knight.
🎶 “Beyblade… Whirlwind!!!” 🎶
The Beyblade Whrilwind logo once again appears showing off the exciting new series!
Music comes to a close with an image of Wonder holding Whirlwind Knight proudly!
Music picks up as the beat immediately hits heavy!
🎶 “Are you ready… for a bey tornado!?” 🎶
Wonder stares determined into the sunset at the top of a lighthouse holding Whirlwind Knight.
🎶 “Are you ready.. for a bey tornado!?” 🎶
Wonders then begins to slowly put a grin on his face showing his hope for the future.
The beat then goes extremely hard! 🥁
🎶 “It is time.. for a new electrifying era!” 🎶
Feng smiles as Whirlpool Forneus terrifying shark avatar swims behind her showing how she’ll be a big rival for the first arc of the series.
🎶 “It is time.. for a new fiery era!” 🎶
Punish smiles menacingly as he quickly jumps into a huge volcano in a dark, cloudy atmosphere. The volcano then suddenly erupts and coming out of it is the Inferno Phoenix avatar who flies high into the sky with there being great thunder.
🎶 “Welcome… to the new era!” 🎶
Wonder locks Whirlwind Knight onto a dark blue right launcher with a hyper attitude.
🎶 “Welcome!” 🎶
Whirlwind Knight, Whirlpool Forneus, & Inferno Phoenix all powerfully & aggressively clash in the center of the stadium causing their to be spark flying everywhere. ⚡️
🎶 “Set your heart on fire!” 🎶 ❤️🔥
Wonder screams his heart out with exceeding joy & hope. His eyes glow gold to show him at full sync with Whirlwind Knight.
🎶 “Beyblade… Whirlwind!!!” 🎶
The Beyblade Whrilwind logo once again appears showing off the exciting new series!
Music comes to a close with an image of Wonder holding Whirlwind Knight proudly!
Beyblade Whirlwind Episode 1:
A Whirlwind Is Coming..
Spoiler (Click to View)
Picture this: a young teenage boy, with fair skin and blonde hair, is suddenly pushed to the ground with great force by a towering, muscular guy with bulging biceps, a sharp jaw, and huge pecs. The boy falls to the ground with a loud thud, his heart racing with fear and confusion. It's a terrifying scene that no one should ever have to experience.
???: Ow! What the heck!?
Narrator: The slim teenage caucasian boy? The one with blue hair & eyes? The one crying on the ground? The weak dude? The guy with the big forehead? The guy with the long-sleeved blue shirt? That guy? Do you see him? Of course you don’t this is writing. His name is Wonder and bullying is pretty much normal for him.
???: What’s wrong? Do you want to cry, Wonder?
Wonder: Just back off Zack!
"A heartless smile comes from the cold figure."
Zack: Nah, I don’t think so.
Wonder: Uh oh…
The tension builds as the screen suddenly fades to black, leaving nothing but the intense sounds of punches being thrown in the background.
3 hours later…
Wonder was sentenced to detention by the principal, who scowled at him with a stern expression.
As Wonder steps out into the cold, gloomy world, a deafening thunder rumbles in the distance and the heavens open up, pouring down rain. It's as if the elements are trying to drown out the world, but Wonder remains undaunted, trudging through the deluge with unbreakable determination.
Wonder: Ah great.
As Wonder walks down the sidewalk dragging his feet with his head down avoiding eye contact with people he walks by.
Wonder: Why is my life like this...
Narrator: Wonder has lived a very sad life. He has not-so-loving parents & gets bullied by his peers for many reasons... This causes him to feel always dull. Except for one thing...
1 hour later...
Wonder arrives home and opens the door, only to be met by two angry parents staring at him.
Wonder’s Dad: Wonder...
Wonder's heart sinks as he begins to feel chills of fear.
So he just awkwardly smiles knowing things won’t end well for him…
Wonder (Thoughts): I’m dead.
Wonder’s Mom: You worthless idiot!!!! Where the hell have you been!?
Wonder: Uh.. school?
Wonder’s Dad: Don’t ever talk like that to me!!!
Wonder’s Mom: Um.. me too honey.
Wonder’s mother looks at her husband with her head down.
Wonder’s Dad: Yeah, whatever.
Wonder: But-!?
Wonder’s Dad: That is it! You're gonna wash the dishes, clean the bathroom, and make us dinner! Keyword: Us! Meaning me and your mother… NOT YOU.
Wonder's face begins to turn red as his anger rises.
Wonder: Why are you so mean to me!? I haven’t done anything to deserve this!
Wonder’s Mom: Yes you have! You are the reason Jack is dead!
*Flashback begins*
A young Wonder chases his brother Jack as they both run on the sidewalk.
Young Wonder: I’m gonna get you!
Jack: No! I’m too fas-
Then all of a sudden Jack trips as his shoelaces are untied causing him to flop to the ground.
Jack: Ahh!
Unfortunately, a rushing car then comes out of nowhere colliding with Jack
Wonder: Jack!
*Flashback ends*
Wonder’s Dad: Playing tag in the middle of the road! Are you insane!?
Wonder: We were five.. Five!
Wonder’s Mom: Well because of you the child I cared for and had in my womb is dead!
Wonder’s Dad: He lived a concise life yet he was better than you in every way possible! He was kind, cute & always wanted to help others, but you are just a loser! Someone to pick & laugh at! You’re not strong, brave, or anything!! You’re just useless! Useless!!!
The parents walk out of the living room angrily leaving a heartbroken Wonder to stand alone in absolute silence & pain as tears begin to form & roll down his eyes
Wonder: I hate my life.
5 hours later...
Wonder lays flat on the bright blue bed in his room full of spaceships & cars as he just lets out a big...
“Sigh”
Wonder (Thoughts): If only things could’ve been different.
Wonder then picks up the remote & begins to flip through channels using his thumb until he encounters...
Wonder: The Beyblade Channel!!! My favorite! Alongside the cooking channel, the wrestling channel & etc..!
Wonder’s Dad (From another room): Quiet!!!
The TV screen shows two bladers battling with their beys in a huge arena filled with tons of excited people cheering & clapping.
Wonder: Woah…
Wonder continues to stare at his screen as he can’t look away just in pure awe he grins.
Narrator: That one thing is Beyblade! Wonder has loved Beyblades since he was a little kid & it is one of the few hobbies that brings joy to his heart.
Wonder: Maybe this could one day be me?
Wonder eyes widen in shock.
Wonder: Wait, this could be me..?
Wonder continues to stare in realization…
Wonder: What am I doing? I should become a Blader!!!!
Wonder’s Dad (From another room): Be quiet!!!!
Wonder rolls his eyes discarding what his father said.
Wonder: I have a new goal... Time to start a new journey!
Wonder jumps up into the air with his left hand up as he has found newfound determination & purpose.
Wonder’s Dad (From another room *again*): For the last f-ing time.. Be quiet!!!!
Wonder quickly rushes back into the lying position on his bed hearing what his father had just said.
Wonder: Well I will tomorrow. Gonna find that BeyLab so I can make my new Beyblade!
Narrator: The journey of Beyblade Whirlpool has just begun!
Wonder quickly lies up in absolute confusion looking around.
Wonder: Who’s speaking?
Narrator: Uh.. nobody.
Wonder: I can hear you. I have ears.
Narrator: Oh um.. Dang it.
Then the next day…
Wonder speeds down the busy sidewalk as he pushes people out of the way with his fiery heart inside lit with new passion!
Wonder: Gotta find that BeyLab!!
Wonder then suddenly comes to a screeching halt as he investigates the area with there being many buildings, stores, & trees (lots of trees) in absolute confusion.
Wonder: Hold up? Where am I? Am I lost? Ugh! Can my luck get any worse?
Wonder searches around the area to find any blader until he eventually finds a short, chubby-looking male figure with black hair, a blue t-shirt, & brown joggers holding a launcher.
Wonder: A-ha!
Wonder rushes to the boy eager for answers as his legs and arms swing.
Wonder: Hey kid!
The boy's eyes widen in shock, and he begins to run off in absolute fear.
Wonder: Wait! Come back!
Meanwhile at Wonder’s house..
Wonder’s Dad sits at the glass dining table with a pale expression on his face as if he has seen a ghost.
Wonder’s Mom quickly takes notes and addresses her husband.
Wonder’s Mom: Darling, are you okay?
Wonder’s Dad: I just miss Jack.. y’ know?
His wife wraps her thin arms around his thick neck.
Wonder’s Dad: I suffered a lot too when I was younger...
Wonder’s Mom: Honey, we’re gonna be okay.
Wonder’s father looks down at his full plate of veggies
Wonder’s Dad: My dad made me suffer when I was younger and I just didn’t want to go through more pain...
*Sighs*
Wonder’s Mom: We're going to be okay. Now eat.
*Meanwhile in the town*
Boy: Ahhh!!!
Wonder continues to sprint as he chases the boy through the busy city.
Wonder: Stop! Come back!
Wonder pushes people out of the way.
Wonder: Move!
Finally, the boy gets to a dead end as he stops at a huge wall with no other way to escape.
Wonder: Hey!
Wonder begins to slow down running out of breath trapping the boy.
Wonder: I just wanted to know where the BeyLab is.
The young boy's jaw drops.
Boy: That’s why you chased me!?
Wonder shakes his head back & forth.
Wonder: Uh.. yeah?
The boy continues to stare in absolute disbelief at Wonder.
Boy: Wow.
*10 minutes later..*
Wonder & the young boy both arrive at the gigantic 5-level BeyLab building with the sun shining upon it in all its glory. It glows with a white/blue color design and it is circular with a big fat red logo with a Beyblade symbol with the words “BEYLAB”.
Wonder: Woah...
Wonder continues to stare in awe
Wonder: Thanks for…
Wonder said as he began to turn his head to the left to thank the young boy just to see him running off
Wonder: Okay?
Wonder gains a huge grin spreading across his face.
Wonder: Here we go…
Wonder climbs up the small number of stairs eagerly.
Wonder then finally goes through the automatic doors into a brand-new world. The inside features many bladers & scientists plus lots of Bey stadiums + 4 huge screens featuring previous broadcast Bey battles.
Wonder: Yo!!!
Wonder looks around with a huge grin, eyes wide open, & his jaw dropped.
Wonder rushes to the small front counter with a chubby female scientist with curly red hair & lots of freckles.
Wonder: Hello!
The female scientist stares directly at Wonder…
Female Scientist: Hi…
Wonder: Please! I want to make my own new Beyblade!
Female Scientists: 50 bucks.
Wonder eyes lower with his mouth wide open
Wonder: What the hell!? What do you mean 50 bucks!?
Female Scientist: Well I have to make money somehow.
Wonder slightly tilts his head right.
Wonder: Guess you have a point…
Female Scientists: So do you have money?
Wonder slowly and awkwardly smiles.
Wonder: Well.. so you see.
Female Scientists: Out.
Wonder: Wait! But-
Female Scientists: Out.
Wonder looks down with his eyebrows lowered and his back tilted.
???: Wait.
Wonder turns his head to see a slender build, brown eyes, and beautiful brown hair. Completed with a blue tank top a sleek black jacket & bright blue denim jeans that hug her legs along with stylish blue/yellow Nike shoes.
Wonder's eyes immediately light up as he is quickly in complete memorization.
Wonder: Woah…
Then he begins to gain a wide smile on his face as he feels a rush of chills.
Wonder: Hey.
The female smiles and nods her head.
???: I’ll pay for him.
Wonder: What!?
???: It’s alright.
She lightly taps his shoulders immediately giving another chill rush to Wonder seducing him without even trying.
Female Scientist: Are you sure Feng?
Feng: Positive.
Feng pulls out 60$ from her sky-blue wallet and hands it to the female scientists causing the scientist's face to immediately light up.
Female Scientist: Thank you!
Feng thugs Wonder’s shirt as a signal to go into the elevator
*10 minutes later..*
*Swoosh*
As the automatic door opens welcoming both Wonder & Feng into the huge clean lab room full of computers, launchers, & one huge stadium.
Feng: Well here we are!
Wonder can’t help but grin.
Wonder: Thank you so much, Feng! But why did you pay?
*Feng chuckles smiling*
Feng: I saw how excited you were and I didn’t want your excitement to turn into disappointment.
Wonder: Well thanks a lot. I always dreamed of becoming a big blader only problem never really knew if I could do it.
Feng: Well you never know until you try.
*Wonder stares smiling*
Wonder: Yeah. If I may ask though who are you? Like you know?
Feng: Well I’m 15, a blader, and someone who just loves helping people.
Wonder: Really?
Feng: Yeah, I like drawing, music, dancing & superheroes.
Wonder: Cool, I am 16, a future blader, and I’ve always been into cooking, action, and well... as you could probably tell Beyblade.
Feng: Yeah I can see that, but what exactly do you plan for yourself?
Wonder: I want to become the strongest blader alive!
Feng stares confusingly as if she is expecting more.
Feng: That’s it?
Wonder: Well..
Wonder cheery tone starts to be replaced by something far duller as he looks down frowning
Wonder: I- my whole life... Have always been pushed by everyone and nobody ever believes in me and thinks I’ll grow up to be a… failure…
Feng simply frowns with a dull expression
Feng: I’m so sorry…
*Wonder nods*
Wonder: So I want to prove everyone wrong... And make something of myself. To finally live a happy life and to make Jack proud.
Feng’s left eyebrow raises
Feng: Excuse me? Who’s Jack?
Wonder eyes widen
Wonder: Um never mind..
Feng moves slightly closer to Wonder
Feng: You can tell-
Wonder then begins to boil up inside as he fights not to let his emotions get the best of him until…
Wonder: I SAID I DON” T WANT TO TALK ABOUT IT!
Wonder's voice echoes across the room and for a few seconds absolute silence
Wonder takes his left hand and rubs his eyes
Wonder: I’m sorry… I should’ve yelled… I’d just-
Feng: It’s okay… I understand it’s none of my business.
Wonder nods his head with a dull expression on his face as frowns.
Feng: Do your parents believe in you?
Wonder depressingly shakes his head left & right indicating no as his eyes begin to get watery.
*Feng sighs*
Feng: Why would they not believe in their child?
Wonder: I prefer not to talk about it…
Feng: Well it’s okay. At the end of the day as long as your okay.
Wonder smiles as he fights back his tears.
Wonder: Don’t worry I’m okay.
Feng: Let me help you make your new bey!
Wonder slightly raises his hands in disagreement.
Wonder: You-
Feng: I insist.
Wonder smile gets bigger
Wonder: Sure, thank you.
*Feng smiles*
Feng: No problem.
Wonder: Well shall we uh… get started?
Feng has a cute smile as she fixes her hair
Feng: Let’s get to work.
*Montage begins* (Insert song “Unstoppable” from The Score)
Wonder gets out 3 sheets of plain white paper and begins to sketch out his ideas for his new bey with art that seems to impress Feng. The sketch shows off a four-bladed bey with seemingly a Knight motif intriguing Feng.
Wonder then begins to type quickly on the computer keyboard as we transition to the computer screen showing off a 3d model of Wonder’s new bey in a 2000s-like green background.
Finally, Wonder begins to watch as a tiny white/black 3d printer prints out Wonder’s new bey while adding some dark blue color to its design.
*Montage Ends* (So does the song)
Wonder: Whew! It’s done!!!!
Wonder jumps up high into the air holding up his new Beyblade as his eyes are wide open, has a huge smile with his white teeth showing, and eyebrows lit up.
Wonder: Welcome Whirlwind Knight!!!!!
*Feng smiles*
Feng: You did it.
Wonder: Thanks to you.
Feng: So what about the bey?
Wonder then suddenly puts on thin black sleek glasses.
Wonder: Time to get my nerd mode on!
*Feng giggles*
Feng: Okay?
Wonder: The core Knight in question is a right-spinning core that exhibits a striking color scheme of dark blue and bright purplish hues, which blend seamlessly to create a visually captivating appearance. Adding to its appeal is the presence of a winged knight motif, which gives it a sense of nobility and strength. Overall, this object is both aesthetically pleasing and intriguing.
Feng: Continue?
Wonder: The blade is called Whirlwind! Firstly, it has a four-bladed attack-type blade. The blade is designed in a way that is perfect for offensive play, allowing you to launch powerful attacks against your opponent. Secondly, the color scheme of the bey is quite stunning. It has a dark blue color scheme with some bright purplish color on the blades, which gives it a very modern and sleek look. Lastly, the main feature of this bey is its bound attack. What this means is that if you push back the four-blade far enough, a spring is activated, which allows the bey to knock the opponent's bey back with tremendous force. It's a fantastic feature and can give you an edge over your opponents.
Feng: And for the driver?
Wonder: It’s called “Typhoon” There honestly is not much to say about it.
Feng: Fair.
Wonder grips Whirlwind Knight in his palm tightly with a big smile on his face.
Wonder (Thoughts): Finally we're on our way….
*Flashback begins*
Wonder’s Father: Jack lived a concise life yet he was better than you in every way possible! He was kind, cute & always wanted to help others, but you are just a loser! Someone to pick & laugh at! You’re not strong, brave, or anything!! You’re just useless! Useless!!!
*Flashback Ends*
Wonder (Thoughts): We’re gonna prove you wrong!
Narrator: And so we have the birth of Whirlwind Knight! Now the journey truly begins! And we have to end this episode because it’s far too long-
Wonder & Feng both search around the empty room looking for answers.
Wonder/Feng: Who’s that?
Narrator: Oh brother.
To be continued…
???: Ow! What the heck!?
Narrator: The slim teenage caucasian boy? The one with blue hair & eyes? The one crying on the ground? The weak dude? The guy with the big forehead? The guy with the long-sleeved blue shirt? That guy? Do you see him? Of course you don’t this is writing. His name is Wonder and bullying is pretty much normal for him.
???: What’s wrong? Do you want to cry, Wonder?
Wonder: Just back off Zack!
"A heartless smile comes from the cold figure."
Zack: Nah, I don’t think so.
Wonder: Uh oh…
The tension builds as the screen suddenly fades to black, leaving nothing but the intense sounds of punches being thrown in the background.
3 hours later…
Wonder was sentenced to detention by the principal, who scowled at him with a stern expression.
As Wonder steps out into the cold, gloomy world, a deafening thunder rumbles in the distance and the heavens open up, pouring down rain. It's as if the elements are trying to drown out the world, but Wonder remains undaunted, trudging through the deluge with unbreakable determination.
Wonder: Ah great.
As Wonder walks down the sidewalk dragging his feet with his head down avoiding eye contact with people he walks by.
Wonder: Why is my life like this...
Narrator: Wonder has lived a very sad life. He has not-so-loving parents & gets bullied by his peers for many reasons... This causes him to feel always dull. Except for one thing...
1 hour later...
Wonder arrives home and opens the door, only to be met by two angry parents staring at him.
Wonder’s Dad: Wonder...
Wonder's heart sinks as he begins to feel chills of fear.
So he just awkwardly smiles knowing things won’t end well for him…
Wonder (Thoughts): I’m dead.
Wonder’s Mom: You worthless idiot!!!! Where the hell have you been!?
Wonder: Uh.. school?
Wonder’s Dad: Don’t ever talk like that to me!!!
Wonder’s Mom: Um.. me too honey.
Wonder’s mother looks at her husband with her head down.
Wonder’s Dad: Yeah, whatever.
Wonder: But-!?
Wonder’s Dad: That is it! You're gonna wash the dishes, clean the bathroom, and make us dinner! Keyword: Us! Meaning me and your mother… NOT YOU.
Wonder's face begins to turn red as his anger rises.
Wonder: Why are you so mean to me!? I haven’t done anything to deserve this!
Wonder’s Mom: Yes you have! You are the reason Jack is dead!
*Flashback begins*
A young Wonder chases his brother Jack as they both run on the sidewalk.
Young Wonder: I’m gonna get you!
Jack: No! I’m too fas-
Then all of a sudden Jack trips as his shoelaces are untied causing him to flop to the ground.
Jack: Ahh!
Unfortunately, a rushing car then comes out of nowhere colliding with Jack
Wonder: Jack!
*Flashback ends*
Wonder’s Dad: Playing tag in the middle of the road! Are you insane!?
Wonder: We were five.. Five!
Wonder’s Mom: Well because of you the child I cared for and had in my womb is dead!
Wonder’s Dad: He lived a concise life yet he was better than you in every way possible! He was kind, cute & always wanted to help others, but you are just a loser! Someone to pick & laugh at! You’re not strong, brave, or anything!! You’re just useless! Useless!!!
The parents walk out of the living room angrily leaving a heartbroken Wonder to stand alone in absolute silence & pain as tears begin to form & roll down his eyes
Wonder: I hate my life.
5 hours later...
Wonder lays flat on the bright blue bed in his room full of spaceships & cars as he just lets out a big...
“Sigh”
Wonder (Thoughts): If only things could’ve been different.
Wonder then picks up the remote & begins to flip through channels using his thumb until he encounters...
Wonder: The Beyblade Channel!!! My favorite! Alongside the cooking channel, the wrestling channel & etc..!
Wonder’s Dad (From another room): Quiet!!!
The TV screen shows two bladers battling with their beys in a huge arena filled with tons of excited people cheering & clapping.
Wonder: Woah…
Wonder continues to stare at his screen as he can’t look away just in pure awe he grins.
Narrator: That one thing is Beyblade! Wonder has loved Beyblades since he was a little kid & it is one of the few hobbies that brings joy to his heart.
Wonder: Maybe this could one day be me?
Wonder eyes widen in shock.
Wonder: Wait, this could be me..?
Wonder continues to stare in realization…
Wonder: What am I doing? I should become a Blader!!!!
Wonder’s Dad (From another room): Be quiet!!!!
Wonder rolls his eyes discarding what his father said.
Wonder: I have a new goal... Time to start a new journey!
Wonder jumps up into the air with his left hand up as he has found newfound determination & purpose.
Wonder’s Dad (From another room *again*): For the last f-ing time.. Be quiet!!!!
Wonder quickly rushes back into the lying position on his bed hearing what his father had just said.
Wonder: Well I will tomorrow. Gonna find that BeyLab so I can make my new Beyblade!
Narrator: The journey of Beyblade Whirlpool has just begun!
Wonder quickly lies up in absolute confusion looking around.
Wonder: Who’s speaking?
Narrator: Uh.. nobody.
Wonder: I can hear you. I have ears.
Narrator: Oh um.. Dang it.
Then the next day…
Wonder speeds down the busy sidewalk as he pushes people out of the way with his fiery heart inside lit with new passion!
Wonder: Gotta find that BeyLab!!
Wonder then suddenly comes to a screeching halt as he investigates the area with there being many buildings, stores, & trees (lots of trees) in absolute confusion.
Wonder: Hold up? Where am I? Am I lost? Ugh! Can my luck get any worse?
Wonder searches around the area to find any blader until he eventually finds a short, chubby-looking male figure with black hair, a blue t-shirt, & brown joggers holding a launcher.
Wonder: A-ha!
Wonder rushes to the boy eager for answers as his legs and arms swing.
Wonder: Hey kid!
The boy's eyes widen in shock, and he begins to run off in absolute fear.
Wonder: Wait! Come back!
Meanwhile at Wonder’s house..
Wonder’s Dad sits at the glass dining table with a pale expression on his face as if he has seen a ghost.
Wonder’s Mom quickly takes notes and addresses her husband.
Wonder’s Mom: Darling, are you okay?
Wonder’s Dad: I just miss Jack.. y’ know?
His wife wraps her thin arms around his thick neck.
Wonder’s Dad: I suffered a lot too when I was younger...
Wonder’s Mom: Honey, we’re gonna be okay.
Wonder’s father looks down at his full plate of veggies
Wonder’s Dad: My dad made me suffer when I was younger and I just didn’t want to go through more pain...
*Sighs*
Wonder’s Mom: We're going to be okay. Now eat.
*Meanwhile in the town*
Boy: Ahhh!!!
Wonder continues to sprint as he chases the boy through the busy city.
Wonder: Stop! Come back!
Wonder pushes people out of the way.
Wonder: Move!
Finally, the boy gets to a dead end as he stops at a huge wall with no other way to escape.
Wonder: Hey!
Wonder begins to slow down running out of breath trapping the boy.
Wonder: I just wanted to know where the BeyLab is.
The young boy's jaw drops.
Boy: That’s why you chased me!?
Wonder shakes his head back & forth.
Wonder: Uh.. yeah?
The boy continues to stare in absolute disbelief at Wonder.
Boy: Wow.
*10 minutes later..*
Wonder & the young boy both arrive at the gigantic 5-level BeyLab building with the sun shining upon it in all its glory. It glows with a white/blue color design and it is circular with a big fat red logo with a Beyblade symbol with the words “BEYLAB”.
Wonder: Woah...
Wonder continues to stare in awe
Wonder: Thanks for…
Wonder said as he began to turn his head to the left to thank the young boy just to see him running off
Wonder: Okay?
Wonder gains a huge grin spreading across his face.
Wonder: Here we go…
Wonder climbs up the small number of stairs eagerly.
Wonder then finally goes through the automatic doors into a brand-new world. The inside features many bladers & scientists plus lots of Bey stadiums + 4 huge screens featuring previous broadcast Bey battles.
Wonder: Yo!!!
Wonder looks around with a huge grin, eyes wide open, & his jaw dropped.
Wonder rushes to the small front counter with a chubby female scientist with curly red hair & lots of freckles.
Wonder: Hello!
The female scientist stares directly at Wonder…
Female Scientist: Hi…
Wonder: Please! I want to make my own new Beyblade!
Female Scientists: 50 bucks.
Wonder eyes lower with his mouth wide open
Wonder: What the hell!? What do you mean 50 bucks!?
Female Scientist: Well I have to make money somehow.
Wonder slightly tilts his head right.
Wonder: Guess you have a point…
Female Scientists: So do you have money?
Wonder slowly and awkwardly smiles.
Wonder: Well.. so you see.
Female Scientists: Out.
Wonder: Wait! But-
Female Scientists: Out.
Wonder looks down with his eyebrows lowered and his back tilted.
???: Wait.
Wonder turns his head to see a slender build, brown eyes, and beautiful brown hair. Completed with a blue tank top a sleek black jacket & bright blue denim jeans that hug her legs along with stylish blue/yellow Nike shoes.
Wonder's eyes immediately light up as he is quickly in complete memorization.
Wonder: Woah…
Then he begins to gain a wide smile on his face as he feels a rush of chills.
Wonder: Hey.
The female smiles and nods her head.
???: I’ll pay for him.
Wonder: What!?
???: It’s alright.
She lightly taps his shoulders immediately giving another chill rush to Wonder seducing him without even trying.
Female Scientist: Are you sure Feng?
Feng: Positive.
Feng pulls out 60$ from her sky-blue wallet and hands it to the female scientists causing the scientist's face to immediately light up.
Female Scientist: Thank you!
Feng thugs Wonder’s shirt as a signal to go into the elevator
*10 minutes later..*
*Swoosh*
As the automatic door opens welcoming both Wonder & Feng into the huge clean lab room full of computers, launchers, & one huge stadium.
Feng: Well here we are!
Wonder can’t help but grin.
Wonder: Thank you so much, Feng! But why did you pay?
*Feng chuckles smiling*
Feng: I saw how excited you were and I didn’t want your excitement to turn into disappointment.
Wonder: Well thanks a lot. I always dreamed of becoming a big blader only problem never really knew if I could do it.
Feng: Well you never know until you try.
*Wonder stares smiling*
Wonder: Yeah. If I may ask though who are you? Like you know?
Feng: Well I’m 15, a blader, and someone who just loves helping people.
Wonder: Really?
Feng: Yeah, I like drawing, music, dancing & superheroes.
Wonder: Cool, I am 16, a future blader, and I’ve always been into cooking, action, and well... as you could probably tell Beyblade.
Feng: Yeah I can see that, but what exactly do you plan for yourself?
Wonder: I want to become the strongest blader alive!
Feng stares confusingly as if she is expecting more.
Feng: That’s it?
Wonder: Well..
Wonder cheery tone starts to be replaced by something far duller as he looks down frowning
Wonder: I- my whole life... Have always been pushed by everyone and nobody ever believes in me and thinks I’ll grow up to be a… failure…
Feng simply frowns with a dull expression
Feng: I’m so sorry…
*Wonder nods*
Wonder: So I want to prove everyone wrong... And make something of myself. To finally live a happy life and to make Jack proud.
Feng’s left eyebrow raises
Feng: Excuse me? Who’s Jack?
Wonder eyes widen
Wonder: Um never mind..
Feng moves slightly closer to Wonder
Feng: You can tell-
Wonder then begins to boil up inside as he fights not to let his emotions get the best of him until…
Wonder: I SAID I DON” T WANT TO TALK ABOUT IT!
Wonder's voice echoes across the room and for a few seconds absolute silence
Wonder takes his left hand and rubs his eyes
Wonder: I’m sorry… I should’ve yelled… I’d just-
Feng: It’s okay… I understand it’s none of my business.
Wonder nods his head with a dull expression on his face as frowns.
Feng: Do your parents believe in you?
Wonder depressingly shakes his head left & right indicating no as his eyes begin to get watery.
*Feng sighs*
Feng: Why would they not believe in their child?
Wonder: I prefer not to talk about it…
Feng: Well it’s okay. At the end of the day as long as your okay.
Wonder smiles as he fights back his tears.
Wonder: Don’t worry I’m okay.
Feng: Let me help you make your new bey!
Wonder slightly raises his hands in disagreement.
Wonder: You-
Feng: I insist.
Wonder smile gets bigger
Wonder: Sure, thank you.
*Feng smiles*
Feng: No problem.
Wonder: Well shall we uh… get started?
Feng has a cute smile as she fixes her hair
Feng: Let’s get to work.
*Montage begins* (Insert song “Unstoppable” from The Score)
Wonder gets out 3 sheets of plain white paper and begins to sketch out his ideas for his new bey with art that seems to impress Feng. The sketch shows off a four-bladed bey with seemingly a Knight motif intriguing Feng.
Wonder then begins to type quickly on the computer keyboard as we transition to the computer screen showing off a 3d model of Wonder’s new bey in a 2000s-like green background.
Finally, Wonder begins to watch as a tiny white/black 3d printer prints out Wonder’s new bey while adding some dark blue color to its design.
*Montage Ends* (So does the song)
Wonder: Whew! It’s done!!!!
Wonder jumps up high into the air holding up his new Beyblade as his eyes are wide open, has a huge smile with his white teeth showing, and eyebrows lit up.
Wonder: Welcome Whirlwind Knight!!!!!
*Feng smiles*
Feng: You did it.
Wonder: Thanks to you.
Feng: So what about the bey?
Wonder then suddenly puts on thin black sleek glasses.
Wonder: Time to get my nerd mode on!
*Feng giggles*
Feng: Okay?
Wonder: The core Knight in question is a right-spinning core that exhibits a striking color scheme of dark blue and bright purplish hues, which blend seamlessly to create a visually captivating appearance. Adding to its appeal is the presence of a winged knight motif, which gives it a sense of nobility and strength. Overall, this object is both aesthetically pleasing and intriguing.
Feng: Continue?
Wonder: The blade is called Whirlwind! Firstly, it has a four-bladed attack-type blade. The blade is designed in a way that is perfect for offensive play, allowing you to launch powerful attacks against your opponent. Secondly, the color scheme of the bey is quite stunning. It has a dark blue color scheme with some bright purplish color on the blades, which gives it a very modern and sleek look. Lastly, the main feature of this bey is its bound attack. What this means is that if you push back the four-blade far enough, a spring is activated, which allows the bey to knock the opponent's bey back with tremendous force. It's a fantastic feature and can give you an edge over your opponents.
Feng: And for the driver?
Wonder: It’s called “Typhoon” There honestly is not much to say about it.
Feng: Fair.
Wonder grips Whirlwind Knight in his palm tightly with a big smile on his face.
Wonder (Thoughts): Finally we're on our way….
*Flashback begins*
Wonder’s Father: Jack lived a concise life yet he was better than you in every way possible! He was kind, cute & always wanted to help others, but you are just a loser! Someone to pick & laugh at! You’re not strong, brave, or anything!! You’re just useless! Useless!!!
*Flashback Ends*
Wonder (Thoughts): We’re gonna prove you wrong!
Narrator: And so we have the birth of Whirlwind Knight! Now the journey truly begins! And we have to end this episode because it’s far too long-
Wonder & Feng both search around the empty room looking for answers.
Wonder/Feng: Who’s that?
Narrator: Oh brother.
To be continued…
RE: Bey100's Beyblade Whirlwind! (1st Episode's Out!) Character Contest Ongoing - Turboblader - Feb. 23, 2024
(Feb. 23, 2024 6:00 PM)Bey100 Wrote: Beyblade Whirlwind Prologue:
Spoiler (Click to View)Welcome to Beyblade! Where multiple young & experienced bladers battle their hearts out in heart pumping, jaw dropping showdowns! The road to greatness isn't easy but with hard work & determination anyone no matter how big or small can become a great balder! So enter the tornado & let it rip!
Beyblade Whrilwind Opening 1:
Title: Bey Tornado
Spoiler (Click to View)Beyblade Whrilwind logo excitedly spins into view!
Music picks up as the beat immediately hits heavy!
🎶 “Are you ready… for a bey tornado!?” 🎶
Wonder stares determined into the sunset at the top of a lighthouse holding Whirlwind Knight.
🎶 “Are you ready.. for a bey tornado!?” 🎶
Wonders then begins to slowly put a grin on his face showing his hope for the future.
The beat then goes extremely hard! 🥁
🎶 “It is time.. for a new electrifying era!” 🎶
Feng smiles as Whirlpool Forneus terrifying shark avatar swims behind her showing how she’ll be a big rival for the first arc of the series.
🎶 “It is time.. for a new fiery era!” 🎶
Punish smiles menacingly as he quickly jumps into a huge volcano in a dark, cloudy atmosphere. The volcano then suddenly erupts and coming out of it is the Inferno Phoenix avatar who flies high into the sky with there being great thunder.
🎶 “Welcome… to the new era!” 🎶
Wonder locks Whirlwind Knight onto a dark blue right launcher with a hyper attitude.
🎶 “Welcome!” 🎶
Whirlwind Knight, Whirlpool Forneus, & Inferno Phoenix all powerfully & aggressively clash in the center of the stadium causing their to be spark flying everywhere. ⚡️
🎶 “Set your heart on fire!” 🎶 ❤️🔥
Wonder screams his heart out with exceeding joy & hope. His eyes glow gold to show him at full sync with Whirlwind Knight.
🎶 “Beyblade… Whirlwind!!!” 🎶
The Beyblade Whrilwind logo once again appears showing off the exciting new series!
Music comes to a close with an image of Wonder holding Whirlwind Knight proudly!
Beyblade Whirlwind Episode 1:
A Whirlwind Is Coming..
The first episode is finally here! Please tell me your thoughts on what you like & what I could improve on for future episodes Hollowmind13, Turboblader, & beansworth + whoever has anything to say.Spoiler (Click to View)Picture this: a young teenage boy, with fair skin and blonde hair, is suddenly pushed to the ground with great force by a towering, muscular guy with bulging biceps, a sharp jaw, and huge pecs. The boy falls to the ground with a loud thud, his heart racing with fear and confusion. It's a terrifying scene that no one should ever have to experience.
???: Ow! What the heck!?
Narrator: The slim teenage caucasian boy? The one with blue hair & eyes? The one crying on the ground? The weak dude? The guy with the big forehead? The guy with the long-sleeved blue shirt? That guy? Do you see him? Of course you don’t this is writing. His name is Wonder and bullying is pretty much normal for him.
???: What’s wrong? Do you want to cry, Wonder?
Wonder: Just back off Zack!
"A heartless smile comes from the cold figure."
Zack: Nah, I don’t think so.
Wonder: Uh oh…
The tension builds as the screen suddenly fades to black, leaving nothing but the intense sounds of punches being thrown in the background.
3 hours later…
Wonder was sentenced to detention by the principal, who scowled at him with a stern expression.
As Wonder steps out into the cold, gloomy world, a deafening thunder rumbles in the distance and the heavens open up, pouring down rain. It's as if the elements are trying to drown out the world, but Wonder remains undaunted, trudging through the deluge with unbreakable determination.
Wonder: Ah great.
As Wonder walks down the sidewalk dragging his feet with his head down avoiding eye contact with people he walks by.
Wonder: Why is my life like this...
Narrator: Wonder has lived a very sad life. He has not-so-loving parents & gets bullied by his peers for many reasons... This causes him to feel always dull. Except for one thing...
1 hour later...
Wonder arrives home and opens the door, only to be met by two angry parents staring at him.
Wonder’s Dad: Wonder...
Wonder's heart sinks as he begins to feel chills of fear.
So he just awkwardly smiles knowing things won’t end well for him…
Wonder (Thoughts): I’m dead.
Wonder’s Mom: You worthless idiot!!!! Where the hell have you been!?
Wonder: Uh.. school?
Wonder’s Dad: Don’t ever talk like that to me!!!
Wonder’s Mom: Um.. me too honey.
Wonder’s mother looks at her husband with her head down.
Wonder’s Dad: Yeah, whatever.
Wonder: But-!?
Wonder’s Dad: That is it! You're gonna wash the dishes, clean the bathroom, and make us dinner! Keyword: Us! Meaning me and your mother… NOT YOU.
Wonder's face begins to turn red as his anger rises.
Wonder: Why are you so mean to me!? I haven’t done anything to deserve this!
Wonder’s Mom: Yes you have! You are the reason Jack is dead!
*Flashback begins*
A young Wonder chases his brother Jack as they both run on the sidewalk.
Young Wonder: I’m gonna get you!
Jack: No! I’m too fas-
Then all of a sudden Jack trips as his shoelaces are untied causing him to flop to the ground.
Jack: Ahh!
Unfortunately, a rushing car then comes out of nowhere colliding with Jack
Wonder: Jack!
*Flashback ends*
Wonder’s Dad: Playing tag in the middle of the road! Are you insane!?
Wonder: We were five.. Five!
Wonder’s Mom: Well because of you the child I cared for and had in my womb is dead!
Wonder’s Dad: He lived a concise life yet he was better than you in every way possible! He was kind, cute & always wanted to help others, but you are just a loser! Someone to pick & laugh at! You’re not strong, brave, or anything!! You’re just useless! Useless!!!
The parents walk out of the living room angrily leaving a heartbroken Wonder to stand alone in absolute silence & pain as tears begin to form & roll down his eyes
Wonder: I hate my life.
5 hours later...
Wonder lays flat on the bright blue bed in his room full of spaceships & cars as he just lets out a big...
“Sigh”
Wonder (Thoughts): If only things could’ve been different.
Wonder then picks up the remote & begins to flip through channels using his thumb until he encounters...
Wonder: The Beyblade Channel!!! My favorite! Alongside the cooking channel, the wrestling channel & etc..!
Wonder’s Dad (From another room): Quiet!!!
The TV screen shows two bladers battling with their beys in a huge arena filled with tons of excited people cheering & clapping.
Wonder: Woah…
Wonder continues to stare at his screen as he can’t look away just in pure awe he grins.
Narrator: That one thing is Beyblade! Wonder has loved Beyblades since he was a little kid & it is one of the few hobbies that brings joy to his heart.
Wonder: Maybe this could one day be me?
Wonder eyes widen in shock.
Wonder: Wait, this could be me..?
Wonder continues to stare in realization…
Wonder: What am I doing? I should become a Blader!!!!
Wonder’s Dad (From another room): Be quiet!!!!
Wonder rolls his eyes discarding what his father said.
Wonder: I have a new goal... Time to start a new journey!
Wonder jumps up into the air with his left hand up as he has found newfound determination & purpose.
Wonder’s Dad (From another room *again*): For the last f-ing time.. Be quiet!!!!
Wonder quickly rushes back into the lying position on his bed hearing what his father had just said.
Wonder: Well I will tomorrow. Gonna find that BeyLab so I can make my new Beyblade!
Narrator: The journey of Beyblade Whirlpool has just begun!
Wonder quickly lies up in absolute confusion looking around.
Wonder: Who’s speaking?
Narrator: Uh.. nobody.
Wonder: I can hear you. I have ears.
Narrator: Oh um.. Dang it.
Then the next day…
Wonder speeds down the busy sidewalk as he pushes people out of the way with his fiery heart inside lit with new passion!
Wonder: Gotta find that BeyLab!!
Wonder then suddenly comes to a screeching halt as he investigates the area with there being many buildings, stores, & trees (lots of trees) in absolute confusion.
Wonder: Hold up? Where am I? Am I lost? Ugh! Can my luck get any worse?
Wonder searches around the area to find any blader until he eventually finds a short, chubby-looking male figure with black hair, a blue t-shirt, & brown joggers holding a launcher.
Wonder: A-ha!
Wonder rushes to the boy eager for answers as his legs and arms swing.
Wonder: Hey kid!
The boy's eyes widen in shock, and he begins to run off in absolute fear.
Wonder: Wait! Come back!
Meanwhile at Wonder’s house..
Wonder’s Dad sits at the glass dining table with a pale expression on his face as if he has seen a ghost.
Wonder’s Mom quickly takes notes and addresses her husband.
Wonder’s Mom: Darling, are you okay?
Wonder’s Dad: I just miss Jack.. y’ know?
His wife wraps her thin arms around his thick neck.
Wonder’s Dad: I suffered a lot too when I was younger...
Wonder’s Mom: Honey, we’re gonna be okay.
Wonder’s father looks down at his full plate of veggies
Wonder’s Dad: My dad made me suffer when I was younger and I just didn’t want to go through more pain...
*Sighs*
Wonder’s Mom: We're going to be okay. Now eat.
*Meanwhile in the town*
Boy: Ahhh!!!
Wonder continues to sprint as he chases the boy through the busy city.
Wonder: Stop! Come back!
Wonder pushes people out of the way.
Wonder: Move!
Finally, the boy gets to a dead end as he stops at a huge wall with no other way to escape.
Wonder: Hey!
Wonder begins to slow down running out of breath trapping the boy.
Wonder: I just wanted to know where the BeyLab is.
The young boy's jaw drops.
Boy: That’s why you chased me!?
Wonder shakes his head back & forth.
Wonder: Uh.. yeah?
The boy continues to stare in absolute disbelief at Wonder.
Boy: Wow.
*10 minutes later..*
Wonder & the young boy both arrive at the gigantic 5-level BeyLab building with the sun shining upon it in all its glory. It glows with a white/blue color design and it is circular with a big fat red logo with a Beyblade symbol with the words “BEYLAB”.
Wonder: Woah...
Wonder continues to stare in awe
Wonder: Thanks for…
Wonder said as he began to turn his head to the left to thank the young boy just to see him running off
Wonder: Okay?
Wonder gains a huge grin spreading across his face.
Wonder: Here we go…
Wonder climbs up the small number of stairs eagerly.
Wonder then finally goes through the automatic doors into a brand-new world. The inside features many bladers & scientists plus lots of Bey stadiums + 4 huge screens featuring previous broadcast Bey battles.
Wonder: Yo!!!
Wonder looks around with a huge grin, eyes wide open, & his jaw dropped.
Wonder rushes to the small front counter with a chubby female scientist with curly red hair & lots of freckles.
Wonder: Hello!
The female scientist stares directly at Wonder…
Female Scientist: Hi…
Wonder: Please! I want to make my own new Beyblade!
Female Scientists: 50 bucks.
Wonder eyes lower with his mouth wide open
Wonder: What the hell!? What do you mean 50 bucks!?
Female Scientist: Well I have to make money somehow.
Wonder slightly tilts his head right.
Wonder: Guess you have a point…
Female Scientists: So do you have money?
Wonder slowly and awkwardly smiles.
Wonder: Well.. so you see.
Female Scientists: Out.
Wonder: Wait! But-
Female Scientists: Out.
Wonder looks down with his eyebrows lowered and his back tilted.
???: Wait.
Wonder turns his head to see a slender build, brown eyes, and beautiful brown hair. Completed with a blue tank top a sleek black jacket & bright blue denim jeans that hug her legs along with stylish blue/yellow Nike shoes.
Wonder's eyes immediately light up as he is quickly in complete memorization.
Wonder: Woah…
Then he begins to gain a wide smile on his face as he feels a rush of chills.
Wonder: Hey.
The female smiles and nods her head.
???: I’ll pay for him.
Wonder: What!?
???: It’s alright.
She lightly taps his shoulders immediately giving another chill rush to Wonder seducing him without even trying.
Female Scientist: Are you sure Feng?
Feng: Positive.
Feng pulls out 60$ from her sky-blue wallet and hands it to the female scientists causing the scientist's face to immediately light up.
Female Scientist: Thank you!
Feng thugs Wonder’s shirt as a signal to go into the elevator
*10 minutes later..*
*Swoosh*
As the automatic door opens welcoming both Wonder & Feng into the huge clean lab room full of computers, launchers, & one huge stadium.
Feng: Well here we are!
Wonder can’t help but grin.
Wonder: Thank you so much, Feng! But why did you pay?
*Feng chuckles smiling*
Feng: I saw how excited you were and I didn’t want your excitement to turn into disappointment.
Wonder: Well thanks a lot. I always dreamed of becoming a big blader only problem never really knew if I could do it.
Feng: Well you never know until you try.
*Wonder stares smiling*
Wonder: Yeah. If I may ask though who are you? Like you know?
Feng: Well I’m 15, a blader, and someone who just loves helping people.
Wonder: Really?
Feng: Yeah, I like drawing, music, dancing & superheroes.
Wonder: Cool, I am 16, a future blader, and I’ve always been into cooking, action, and well... as you could probably tell Beyblade.
Feng: Yeah I can see that, but what exactly do you plan for yourself?
Wonder: I want to become the strongest blader alive!
Feng stares confusingly as if she is expecting more.
Feng: That’s it?
Wonder: Well..
Wonder cheery tone starts to be replaced by something far duller as he looks down frowning
Wonder: I- my whole life... Have always been pushed by everyone and nobody ever believes in me and thinks I’ll grow up to be a… failure…
Feng simply frowns with a dull expression
Feng: I’m so sorry…
*Wonder nods*
Wonder: So I want to prove everyone wrong... And make something of myself. To finally live a happy life and to make Jack proud.
Feng’s left eyebrow raises
Feng: Excuse me? Who’s Jack?
Wonder eyes widen
Wonder: Um never mind..
Feng moves slightly closer to Wonder
Feng: You can tell-
Wonder then begins to boil up inside as he fights not to let his emotions get the best of him until…
Wonder: I SAID I DON” T WANT TO TALK ABOUT IT!
Wonder's voice echoes across the room and for a few seconds absolute silence
Wonder takes his left hand and rubs his eyes
Wonder: I’m sorry… I should’ve yelled… I’d just-
Feng: It’s okay… I understand it’s none of my business.
Wonder nods his head with a dull expression on his face as frowns.
Feng: Do your parents believe in you?
Wonder depressingly shakes his head left & right indicating no as his eyes begin to get watery.
*Feng sighs*
Feng: Why would they not believe in their child?
Wonder: I prefer not to talk about it…
Feng: Well it’s okay. At the end of the day as long as your okay.
Wonder smiles as he fights back his tears.
Wonder: Don’t worry I’m okay.
Feng: Let me help you make your new bey!
Wonder slightly raises his hands in disagreement.
Wonder: You-
Feng: I insist.
Wonder smile gets bigger
Wonder: Sure, thank you.
*Feng smiles*
Feng: No problem.
Wonder: Well shall we uh… get started?
Feng has a cute smile as she fixes her hair
Feng: Let’s get to work.
*Montage begins* (Insert song “Unstoppable” from The Score)
Wonder gets out 3 sheets of plain white paper and begins to sketch out his ideas for his new bey with art that seems to impress Feng. The sketch shows off a four-bladed bey with seemingly a Knight motif intriguing Feng.
Wonder then begins to type quickly on the computer keyboard as we transition to the computer screen showing off a 3d model of Wonder’s new bey in a 2000s-like green background.
Finally, Wonder begins to watch as a tiny white/black 3d printer prints out Wonder’s new bey while adding some dark blue color to its design.
*Montage Ends* (So does the song)
Wonder: Whew! It’s done!!!!
Wonder jumps up high into the air holding up his new Beyblade as his eyes are wide open, has a huge smile with his white teeth showing, and eyebrows lit up.
Wonder: Welcome Whirlwind Knight!!!!!
*Feng smiles*
Feng: You did it.
Wonder: Thanks to you.
Feng: So what about the bey?
Wonder then suddenly puts on thin black sleek glasses.
Wonder: Time to get my nerd mode on!
*Feng giggles*
Feng: Okay?
Wonder: The core Knight in question is a right-spinning core that exhibits a striking color scheme of dark blue and bright purplish hues, which blend seamlessly to create a visually captivating appearance. Adding to its appeal is the presence of a winged knight motif, which gives it a sense of nobility and strength. Overall, this object is both aesthetically pleasing and intriguing.
Feng: Continue?
Wonder: The blade is called Whirlwind! Firstly, it has a four-bladed attack-type blade. The blade is designed in a way that is perfect for offensive play, allowing you to launch powerful attacks against your opponent. Secondly, the color scheme of the bey is quite stunning. It has a dark blue color scheme with some bright purplish color on the blades, which gives it a very modern and sleek look. Lastly, the main feature of this bey is its bound attack. What this means is that if you push back the four-blade far enough, a spring is activated, which allows the bey to knock the opponent's bey back with tremendous force. It's a fantastic feature and can give you an edge over your opponents.
Feng: And for the driver?
Wonder: It’s called “Typhoon” There honestly is not much to say about it.
Feng: Fair.
Wonder grips Whirlwind Knight in his palm tightly with a big smile on his face.
Wonder (Thoughts): Finally we're on our way….
*Flashback begins*
Wonder’s Father: Jack lived a concise life yet he was better than you in every way possible! He was kind, cute & always wanted to help others, but you are just a loser! Someone to pick & laugh at! You’re not strong, brave, or anything!! You’re just useless! Useless!!!
*Flashback Ends*
Wonder (Thoughts): We’re gonna prove you wrong!
Narrator: And so we have the birth of Whirlwind Knight! Now the journey truly begins! And we have to end this episode because it’s far too long-
Wonder & Feng both search around the empty room looking for answers.
Wonder/Feng: Who’s that?
Narrator: Oh brother.
To be continued…
I only have one thing to say about this, YES.
RE: Bey100's Beyblade Whirlwind! (Coming February 23rd) Character Contest Ongoing - beansworth - Feb. 23, 2024
(Feb. 23, 2024 6:00 PM)Bey100 Wrote: Beyblade Whirlwind Prologue:My thoughts: So far the characters seem alright. Wonder definitely has me rooting for him. Waiting to see how Feng evolves with the plot, and there's definitely a little something between the two. Zack seems like a generic bully but hey, that's alright doesn't seem like a major plot character so. Now the parents quite honestly act like real abusive parents would, though the dad showing weakness helps and makes his abuse, a little unbelievable. Now hear me out, obviously showing weakness shows he doesn't try to be abusive but the way it was portrayed made him almost not make sense(unless his abuse towards Wonder is supposed to exist, and he's only caring about Jack's passing) The mother on the other hand, really fits the role, good job on the characters. Story and plot wise, it's Ep1, good set-up and good balance of comedy and sadness. Overall, I would say this is your strongest fanfic opener so far, my only real criticism is the Dad, and how Wonder explained his bey(I was able to tell it was Ctrl+C and Ctrl+P, that's not bad, but you could always rewrite it how your character would say it.) Anyway, sorry for ranting, excited to see how Whirlwind goes!
Spoiler (Click to View)Welcome to Beyblade! Where multiple young & experienced bladers battle their hearts out in heart pumping, jaw dropping showdowns! The road to greatness isn't easy but with hard work & determination anyone no matter how big or small can become a great balder! So enter the tornado & let it rip!
Beyblade Whrilwind Opening 1:
Title: Bey Tornado
Spoiler (Click to View)Beyblade Whrilwind logo excitedly spins into view!
Music picks up as the beat immediately hits heavy!
🎶 “Are you ready… for a bey tornado!?” 🎶
Wonder stares determined into the sunset at the top of a lighthouse holding Whirlwind Knight.
🎶 “Are you ready.. for a bey tornado!?” 🎶
Wonders then begins to slowly put a grin on his face showing his hope for the future.
The beat then goes extremely hard! 🥁
🎶 “It is time.. for a new electrifying era!” 🎶
Feng smiles as Whirlpool Forneus terrifying shark avatar swims behind her showing how she’ll be a big rival for the first arc of the series.
🎶 “It is time.. for a new fiery era!” 🎶
Punish smiles menacingly as he quickly jumps into a huge volcano in a dark, cloudy atmosphere. The volcano then suddenly erupts and coming out of it is the Inferno Phoenix avatar who flies high into the sky with there being great thunder.
🎶 “Welcome… to the new era!” 🎶
Wonder locks Whirlwind Knight onto a dark blue right launcher with a hyper attitude.
🎶 “Welcome!” 🎶
Whirlwind Knight, Whirlpool Forneus, & Inferno Phoenix all powerfully & aggressively clash in the center of the stadium causing their to be spark flying everywhere. ⚡️
🎶 “Set your heart on fire!” 🎶 ❤️🔥
Wonder screams his heart out with exceeding joy & hope. His eyes glow gold to show him at full sync with Whirlwind Knight.
🎶 “Beyblade… Whirlwind!!!” 🎶
The Beyblade Whrilwind logo once again appears showing off the exciting new series!
Music comes to a close with an image of Wonder holding Whirlwind Knight proudly!
Beyblade Whirlwind Episode 1:
A Whirlwind Is Coming..
The first episode is finally here! Please tell me your thoughts on what you like & what I could improve on for future episodes Hollowmind13, Turboblader, & beansworth + whoever has anything to say.Spoiler (Click to View)Picture this: a young teenage boy, with fair skin and blonde hair, is suddenly pushed to the ground with great force by a towering, muscular guy with bulging biceps, a sharp jaw, and huge pecs. The boy falls to the ground with a loud thud, his heart racing with fear and confusion. It's a terrifying scene that no one should ever have to experience.
???: Ow! What the heck!?
Narrator: The slim teenage caucasian boy? The one with blue hair & eyes? The one crying on the ground? The weak dude? The guy with the big forehead? The guy with the long-sleeved blue shirt? That guy? Do you see him? Of course you don’t this is writing. His name is Wonder and bullying is pretty much normal for him.
???: What’s wrong? Do you want to cry, Wonder?
Wonder: Just back off Zack!
"A heartless smile comes from the cold figure."
Zack: Nah, I don’t think so.
Wonder: Uh oh…
The tension builds as the screen suddenly fades to black, leaving nothing but the intense sounds of punches being thrown in the background.
3 hours later…
Wonder was sentenced to detention by the principal, who scowled at him with a stern expression.
As Wonder steps out into the cold, gloomy world, a deafening thunder rumbles in the distance and the heavens open up, pouring down rain. It's as if the elements are trying to drown out the world, but Wonder remains undaunted, trudging through the deluge with unbreakable determination.
Wonder: Ah great.
As Wonder walks down the sidewalk dragging his feet with his head down avoiding eye contact with people he walks by.
Wonder: Why is my life like this...
Narrator: Wonder has lived a very sad life. He has not-so-loving parents & gets bullied by his peers for many reasons... This causes him to feel always dull. Except for one thing...
1 hour later...
Wonder arrives home and opens the door, only to be met by two angry parents staring at him.
Wonder’s Dad: Wonder...
Wonder's heart sinks as he begins to feel chills of fear.
So he just awkwardly smiles knowing things won’t end well for him…
Wonder (Thoughts): I’m dead.
Wonder’s Mom: You worthless idiot!!!! Where the hell have you been!?
Wonder: Uh.. school?
Wonder’s Dad: Don’t ever talk like that to me!!!
Wonder’s Mom: Um.. me too honey.
Wonder’s mother looks at her husband with her head down.
Wonder’s Dad: Yeah, whatever.
Wonder: But-!?
Wonder’s Dad: That is it! You're gonna wash the dishes, clean the bathroom, and make us dinner! Keyword: Us! Meaning me and your mother… NOT YOU.
Wonder's face begins to turn red as his anger rises.
Wonder: Why are you so mean to me!? I haven’t done anything to deserve this!
Wonder’s Mom: Yes you have! You are the reason Jack is dead!
*Flashback begins*
A young Wonder chases his brother Jack as they both run on the sidewalk.
Young Wonder: I’m gonna get you!
Jack: No! I’m too fas-
Then all of a sudden Jack trips as his shoelaces are untied causing him to flop to the ground.
Jack: Ahh!
Unfortunately, a rushing car then comes out of nowhere colliding with Jack
Wonder: Jack!
*Flashback ends*
Wonder’s Dad: Playing tag in the middle of the road! Are you insane!?
Wonder: We were five.. Five!
Wonder’s Mom: Well because of you the child I cared for and had in my womb is dead!
Wonder’s Dad: He lived a concise life yet he was better than you in every way possible! He was kind, cute & always wanted to help others, but you are just a loser! Someone to pick & laugh at! You’re not strong, brave, or anything!! You’re just useless! Useless!!!
The parents walk out of the living room angrily leaving a heartbroken Wonder to stand alone in absolute silence & pain as tears begin to form & roll down his eyes
Wonder: I hate my life.
5 hours later...
Wonder lays flat on the bright blue bed in his room full of spaceships & cars as he just lets out a big...
“Sigh”
Wonder (Thoughts): If only things could’ve been different.
Wonder then picks up the remote & begins to flip through channels using his thumb until he encounters...
Wonder: The Beyblade Channel!!! My favorite! Alongside the cooking channel, the wrestling channel & etc..!
Wonder’s Dad (From another room): Quiet!!!
The TV screen shows two bladers battling with their beys in a huge arena filled with tons of excited people cheering & clapping.
Wonder: Woah…
Wonder continues to stare at his screen as he can’t look away just in pure awe he grins.
Narrator: That one thing is Beyblade! Wonder has loved Beyblades since he was a little kid & it is one of the few hobbies that brings joy to his heart.
Wonder: Maybe this could one day be me?
Wonder eyes widen in shock.
Wonder: Wait, this could be me..?
Wonder continues to stare in realization…
Wonder: What am I doing? I should become a Blader!!!!
Wonder’s Dad (From another room): Be quiet!!!!
Wonder rolls his eyes discarding what his father said.
Wonder: I have a new goal... Time to start a new journey!
Wonder jumps up into the air with his left hand up as he has found newfound determination & purpose.
Wonder’s Dad (From another room *again*): For the last f-ing time.. Be quiet!!!!
Wonder quickly rushes back into the lying position on his bed hearing what his father had just said.
Wonder: Well I will tomorrow. Gonna find that BeyLab so I can make my new Beyblade!
Narrator: The journey of Beyblade Whirlpool has just begun!
Wonder quickly lies up in absolute confusion looking around.
Wonder: Who’s speaking?
Narrator: Uh.. nobody.
Wonder: I can hear you. I have ears.
Narrator: Oh um.. Dang it.
Then the next day…
Wonder speeds down the busy sidewalk as he pushes people out of the way with his fiery heart inside lit with new passion!
Wonder: Gotta find that BeyLab!!
Wonder then suddenly comes to a screeching halt as he investigates the area with there being many buildings, stores, & trees (lots of trees) in absolute confusion.
Wonder: Hold up? Where am I? Am I lost? Ugh! Can my luck get any worse?
Wonder searches around the area to find any blader until he eventually finds a short, chubby-looking male figure with black hair, a blue t-shirt, & brown joggers holding a launcher.
Wonder: A-ha!
Wonder rushes to the boy eager for answers as his legs and arms swing.
Wonder: Hey kid!
The boy's eyes widen in shock, and he begins to run off in absolute fear.
Wonder: Wait! Come back!
Meanwhile at Wonder’s house..
Wonder’s Dad sits at the glass dining table with a pale expression on his face as if he has seen a ghost.
Wonder’s Mom quickly takes notes and addresses her husband.
Wonder’s Mom: Darling, are you okay?
Wonder’s Dad: I just miss Jack.. y’ know?
His wife wraps her thin arms around his thick neck.
Wonder’s Dad: I suffered a lot too when I was younger...
Wonder’s Mom: Honey, we’re gonna be okay.
Wonder’s father looks down at his full plate of veggies
Wonder’s Dad: My dad made me suffer when I was younger and I just didn’t want to go through more pain...
*Sighs*
Wonder’s Mom: We're going to be okay. Now eat.
*Meanwhile in the town*
Boy: Ahhh!!!
Wonder continues to sprint as he chases the boy through the busy city.
Wonder: Stop! Come back!
Wonder pushes people out of the way.
Wonder: Move!
Finally, the boy gets to a dead end as he stops at a huge wall with no other way to escape.
Wonder: Hey!
Wonder begins to slow down running out of breath trapping the boy.
Wonder: I just wanted to know where the BeyLab is.
The young boy's jaw drops.
Boy: That’s why you chased me!?
Wonder shakes his head back & forth.
Wonder: Uh.. yeah?
The boy continues to stare in absolute disbelief at Wonder.
Boy: Wow.
*10 minutes later..*
Wonder & the young boy both arrive at the gigantic 5-level BeyLab building with the sun shining upon it in all its glory. It glows with a white/blue color design and it is circular with a big fat red logo with a Beyblade symbol with the words “BEYLAB”.
Wonder: Woah...
Wonder continues to stare in awe
Wonder: Thanks for…
Wonder said as he began to turn his head to the left to thank the young boy just to see him running off
Wonder: Okay?
Wonder gains a huge grin spreading across his face.
Wonder: Here we go…
Wonder climbs up the small number of stairs eagerly.
Wonder then finally goes through the automatic doors into a brand-new world. The inside features many bladers & scientists plus lots of Bey stadiums + 4 huge screens featuring previous broadcast Bey battles.
Wonder: Yo!!!
Wonder looks around with a huge grin, eyes wide open, & his jaw dropped.
Wonder rushes to the small front counter with a chubby female scientist with curly red hair & lots of freckles.
Wonder: Hello!
The female scientist stares directly at Wonder…
Female Scientist: Hi…
Wonder: Please! I want to make my own new Beyblade!
Female Scientists: 50 bucks.
Wonder eyes lower with his mouth wide open
Wonder: What the hell!? What do you mean 50 bucks!?
Female Scientist: Well I have to make money somehow.
Wonder slightly tilts his head right.
Wonder: Guess you have a point…
Female Scientists: So do you have money?
Wonder slowly and awkwardly smiles.
Wonder: Well.. so you see.
Female Scientists: Out.
Wonder: Wait! But-
Female Scientists: Out.
Wonder looks down with his eyebrows lowered and his back tilted.
???: Wait.
Wonder turns his head to see a slender build, brown eyes, and beautiful brown hair. Completed with a blue tank top a sleek black jacket & bright blue denim jeans that hug her legs along with stylish blue/yellow Nike shoes.
Wonder's eyes immediately light up as he is quickly in complete memorization.
Wonder: Woah…
Then he begins to gain a wide smile on his face as he feels a rush of chills.
Wonder: Hey.
The female smiles and nods her head.
???: I’ll pay for him.
Wonder: What!?
???: It’s alright.
She lightly taps his shoulders immediately giving another chill rush to Wonder seducing him without even trying.
Female Scientist: Are you sure Feng?
Feng: Positive.
Feng pulls out 60$ from her sky-blue wallet and hands it to the female scientists causing the scientist's face to immediately light up.
Female Scientist: Thank you!
Feng thugs Wonder’s shirt as a signal to go into the elevator
*10 minutes later..*
*Swoosh*
As the automatic door opens welcoming both Wonder & Feng into the huge clean lab room full of computers, launchers, & one huge stadium.
Feng: Well here we are!
Wonder can’t help but grin.
Wonder: Thank you so much, Feng! But why did you pay?
*Feng chuckles smiling*
Feng: I saw how excited you were and I didn’t want your excitement to turn into disappointment.
Wonder: Well thanks a lot. I always dreamed of becoming a big blader only problem never really knew if I could do it.
Feng: Well you never know until you try.
*Wonder stares smiling*
Wonder: Yeah. If I may ask though who are you? Like you know?
Feng: Well I’m 15, a blader, and someone who just loves helping people.
Wonder: Really?
Feng: Yeah, I like drawing, music, dancing & superheroes.
Wonder: Cool, I am 16, a future blader, and I’ve always been into cooking, action, and well... as you could probably tell Beyblade.
Feng: Yeah I can see that, but what exactly do you plan for yourself?
Wonder: I want to become the strongest blader alive!
Feng stares confusingly as if she is expecting more.
Feng: That’s it?
Wonder: Well..
Wonder cheery tone starts to be replaced by something far duller as he looks down frowning
Wonder: I- my whole life... Have always been pushed by everyone and nobody ever believes in me and thinks I’ll grow up to be a… failure…
Feng simply frowns with a dull expression
Feng: I’m so sorry…
*Wonder nods*
Wonder: So I want to prove everyone wrong... And make something of myself. To finally live a happy life and to make Jack proud.
Feng’s left eyebrow raises
Feng: Excuse me? Who’s Jack?
Wonder eyes widen
Wonder: Um never mind..
Feng moves slightly closer to Wonder
Feng: You can tell-
Wonder then begins to boil up inside as he fights not to let his emotions get the best of him until…
Wonder: I SAID I DON” T WANT TO TALK ABOUT IT!
Wonder's voice echoes across the room and for a few seconds absolute silence
Wonder takes his left hand and rubs his eyes
Wonder: I’m sorry… I should’ve yelled… I’d just-
Feng: It’s okay… I understand it’s none of my business.
Wonder nods his head with a dull expression on his face as frowns.
Feng: Do your parents believe in you?
Wonder depressingly shakes his head left & right indicating no as his eyes begin to get watery.
*Feng sighs*
Feng: Why would they not believe in their child?
Wonder: I prefer not to talk about it…
Feng: Well it’s okay. At the end of the day as long as your okay.
Wonder smiles as he fights back his tears.
Wonder: Don’t worry I’m okay.
Feng: Let me help you make your new bey!
Wonder slightly raises his hands in disagreement.
Wonder: You-
Feng: I insist.
Wonder smile gets bigger
Wonder: Sure, thank you.
*Feng smiles*
Feng: No problem.
Wonder: Well shall we uh… get started?
Feng has a cute smile as she fixes her hair
Feng: Let’s get to work.
*Montage begins* (Insert song “Unstoppable” from The Score)
Wonder gets out 3 sheets of plain white paper and begins to sketch out his ideas for his new bey with art that seems to impress Feng. The sketch shows off a four-bladed bey with seemingly a Knight motif intriguing Feng.
Wonder then begins to type quickly on the computer keyboard as we transition to the computer screen showing off a 3d model of Wonder’s new bey in a 2000s-like green background.
Finally, Wonder begins to watch as a tiny white/black 3d printer prints out Wonder’s new bey while adding some dark blue color to its design.
*Montage Ends* (So does the song)
Wonder: Whew! It’s done!!!!
Wonder jumps up high into the air holding up his new Beyblade as his eyes are wide open, has a huge smile with his white teeth showing, and eyebrows lit up.
Wonder: Welcome Whirlwind Knight!!!!!
*Feng smiles*
Feng: You did it.
Wonder: Thanks to you.
Feng: So what about the bey?
Wonder then suddenly puts on thin black sleek glasses.
Wonder: Time to get my nerd mode on!
*Feng giggles*
Feng: Okay?
Wonder: The core Knight in question is a right-spinning core that exhibits a striking color scheme of dark blue and bright purplish hues, which blend seamlessly to create a visually captivating appearance. Adding to its appeal is the presence of a winged knight motif, which gives it a sense of nobility and strength. Overall, this object is both aesthetically pleasing and intriguing.
Feng: Continue?
Wonder: The blade is called Whirlwind! Firstly, it has a four-bladed attack-type blade. The blade is designed in a way that is perfect for offensive play, allowing you to launch powerful attacks against your opponent. Secondly, the color scheme of the bey is quite stunning. It has a dark blue color scheme with some bright purplish color on the blades, which gives it a very modern and sleek look. Lastly, the main feature of this bey is its bound attack. What this means is that if you push back the four-blade far enough, a spring is activated, which allows the bey to knock the opponent's bey back with tremendous force. It's a fantastic feature and can give you an edge over your opponents.
Feng: And for the driver?
Wonder: It’s called “Typhoon” There honestly is not much to say about it.
Feng: Fair.
Wonder grips Whirlwind Knight in his palm tightly with a big smile on his face.
Wonder (Thoughts): Finally we're on our way….
*Flashback begins*
Wonder’s Father: Jack lived a concise life yet he was better than you in every way possible! He was kind, cute & always wanted to help others, but you are just a loser! Someone to pick & laugh at! You’re not strong, brave, or anything!! You’re just useless! Useless!!!
*Flashback Ends*
Wonder (Thoughts): We’re gonna prove you wrong!
Narrator: And so we have the birth of Whirlwind Knight! Now the journey truly begins! And we have to end this episode because it’s far too long-
Wonder & Feng both search around the empty room looking for answers.
Wonder/Feng: Who’s that?
Narrator: Oh brother.
To be continued…
RE: Bey100's Beyblade Whirlwind! (1st Episode's Out!) Character Contest Ongoing - Turboblader - Feb. 23, 2024
(Feb. 23, 2024 8:08 PM)beansworth Wrote:(Feb. 23, 2024 6:00 PM)Bey100 Wrote: Beyblade Whirlwind Prologue:My thoughts: So far the characters seem alright. Wonder definitely has me rooting for him. Waiting to see how Feng evolves with the plot, and there's definitely a little something between the two. Zack seems like a generic bully but hey, that's alright doesn't seem like a major plot character so. Now the parents quite honestly act like real abusive parents would, though the dad showing weakness helps and makes his abuse, a little unbelievable. Now hear me out, obviously showing weakness shows he doesn't try to be abusive but the way it was portrayed made him almost not make sense(unless his abuse towards Wonder is supposed to exist, and he's only caring about Jack's passing) The mother on the other hand, really fits the role, good job on the characters. Story and plot wise, it's Ep1, good set-up and good balance of comedy and sadness. Overall, I would say this is your strongest fanfic opener so far, my only real criticism is the Dad, and how Wonder explained his bey(I was able to tell it was Ctrl+C and Ctrl+P, that's not bad, but you could always rewrite it how your character would say it.) Anyway, sorry for ranting, excited to see how Whirlwind goes!
Spoiler (Click to View)Welcome to Beyblade! Where multiple young & experienced bladers battle their hearts out in heart pumping, jaw dropping showdowns! The road to greatness isn't easy but with hard work & determination anyone no matter how big or small can become a great balder! So enter the tornado & let it rip!
Beyblade Whrilwind Opening 1:
Title: Bey Tornado
Spoiler (Click to View)Beyblade Whrilwind logo excitedly spins into view!
Music picks up as the beat immediately hits heavy!
🎶 “Are you ready… for a bey tornado!?” 🎶
Wonder stares determined into the sunset at the top of a lighthouse holding Whirlwind Knight.
🎶 “Are you ready.. for a bey tornado!?” 🎶
Wonders then begins to slowly put a grin on his face showing his hope for the future.
The beat then goes extremely hard! 🥁
🎶 “It is time.. for a new electrifying era!” 🎶
Feng smiles as Whirlpool Forneus terrifying shark avatar swims behind her showing how she’ll be a big rival for the first arc of the series.
🎶 “It is time.. for a new fiery era!” 🎶
Punish smiles menacingly as he quickly jumps into a huge volcano in a dark, cloudy atmosphere. The volcano then suddenly erupts and coming out of it is the Inferno Phoenix avatar who flies high into the sky with there being great thunder.
🎶 “Welcome… to the new era!” 🎶
Wonder locks Whirlwind Knight onto a dark blue right launcher with a hyper attitude.
🎶 “Welcome!” 🎶
Whirlwind Knight, Whirlpool Forneus, & Inferno Phoenix all powerfully & aggressively clash in the center of the stadium causing their to be spark flying everywhere. ⚡️
🎶 “Set your heart on fire!” 🎶 ❤️🔥
Wonder screams his heart out with exceeding joy & hope. His eyes glow gold to show him at full sync with Whirlwind Knight.
🎶 “Beyblade… Whirlwind!!!” 🎶
The Beyblade Whrilwind logo once again appears showing off the exciting new series!
Music comes to a close with an image of Wonder holding Whirlwind Knight proudly!
Beyblade Whirlwind Episode 1:
A Whirlwind Is Coming..
The first episode is finally here! Please tell me your thoughts on what you like & what I could improve on for future episodes Hollowmind13, Turboblader, & beansworth + whoever has anything to say.Spoiler (Click to View)Picture this: a young teenage boy, with fair skin and blonde hair, is suddenly pushed to the ground with great force by a towering, muscular guy with bulging biceps, a sharp jaw, and huge pecs. The boy falls to the ground with a loud thud, his heart racing with fear and confusion. It's a terrifying scene that no one should ever have to experience.
???: Ow! What the heck!?
Narrator: The slim teenage caucasian boy? The one with blue hair & eyes? The one crying on the ground? The weak dude? The guy with the big forehead? The guy with the long-sleeved blue shirt? That guy? Do you see him? Of course you don’t this is writing. His name is Wonder and bullying is pretty much normal for him.
???: What’s wrong? Do you want to cry, Wonder?
Wonder: Just back off Zack!
"A heartless smile comes from the cold figure."
Zack: Nah, I don’t think so.
Wonder: Uh oh…
The tension builds as the screen suddenly fades to black, leaving nothing but the intense sounds of punches being thrown in the background.
3 hours later…
Wonder was sentenced to detention by the principal, who scowled at him with a stern expression.
As Wonder steps out into the cold, gloomy world, a deafening thunder rumbles in the distance and the heavens open up, pouring down rain. It's as if the elements are trying to drown out the world, but Wonder remains undaunted, trudging through the deluge with unbreakable determination.
Wonder: Ah great.
As Wonder walks down the sidewalk dragging his feet with his head down avoiding eye contact with people he walks by.
Wonder: Why is my life like this...
Narrator: Wonder has lived a very sad life. He has not-so-loving parents & gets bullied by his peers for many reasons... This causes him to feel always dull. Except for one thing...
1 hour later...
Wonder arrives home and opens the door, only to be met by two angry parents staring at him.
Wonder’s Dad: Wonder...
Wonder's heart sinks as he begins to feel chills of fear.
So he just awkwardly smiles knowing things won’t end well for him…
Wonder (Thoughts): I’m dead.
Wonder’s Mom: You worthless idiot!!!! Where the hell have you been!?
Wonder: Uh.. school?
Wonder’s Dad: Don’t ever talk like that to me!!!
Wonder’s Mom: Um.. me too honey.
Wonder’s mother looks at her husband with her head down.
Wonder’s Dad: Yeah, whatever.
Wonder: But-!?
Wonder’s Dad: That is it! You're gonna wash the dishes, clean the bathroom, and make us dinner! Keyword: Us! Meaning me and your mother… NOT YOU.
Wonder's face begins to turn red as his anger rises.
Wonder: Why are you so mean to me!? I haven’t done anything to deserve this!
Wonder’s Mom: Yes you have! You are the reason Jack is dead!
*Flashback begins*
A young Wonder chases his brother Jack as they both run on the sidewalk.
Young Wonder: I’m gonna get you!
Jack: No! I’m too fas-
Then all of a sudden Jack trips as his shoelaces are untied causing him to flop to the ground.
Jack: Ahh!
Unfortunately, a rushing car then comes out of nowhere colliding with Jack
Wonder: Jack!
*Flashback ends*
Wonder’s Dad: Playing tag in the middle of the road! Are you insane!?
Wonder: We were five.. Five!
Wonder’s Mom: Well because of you the child I cared for and had in my womb is dead!
Wonder’s Dad: He lived a concise life yet he was better than you in every way possible! He was kind, cute & always wanted to help others, but you are just a loser! Someone to pick & laugh at! You’re not strong, brave, or anything!! You’re just useless! Useless!!!
The parents walk out of the living room angrily leaving a heartbroken Wonder to stand alone in absolute silence & pain as tears begin to form & roll down his eyes
Wonder: I hate my life.
5 hours later...
Wonder lays flat on the bright blue bed in his room full of spaceships & cars as he just lets out a big...
“Sigh”
Wonder (Thoughts): If only things could’ve been different.
Wonder then picks up the remote & begins to flip through channels using his thumb until he encounters...
Wonder: The Beyblade Channel!!! My favorite! Alongside the cooking channel, the wrestling channel & etc..!
Wonder’s Dad (From another room): Quiet!!!
The TV screen shows two bladers battling with their beys in a huge arena filled with tons of excited people cheering & clapping.
Wonder: Woah…
Wonder continues to stare at his screen as he can’t look away just in pure awe he grins.
Narrator: That one thing is Beyblade! Wonder has loved Beyblades since he was a little kid & it is one of the few hobbies that brings joy to his heart.
Wonder: Maybe this could one day be me?
Wonder eyes widen in shock.
Wonder: Wait, this could be me..?
Wonder continues to stare in realization…
Wonder: What am I doing? I should become a Blader!!!!
Wonder’s Dad (From another room): Be quiet!!!!
Wonder rolls his eyes discarding what his father said.
Wonder: I have a new goal... Time to start a new journey!
Wonder jumps up into the air with his left hand up as he has found newfound determination & purpose.
Wonder’s Dad (From another room *again*): For the last f-ing time.. Be quiet!!!!
Wonder quickly rushes back into the lying position on his bed hearing what his father had just said.
Wonder: Well I will tomorrow. Gonna find that BeyLab so I can make my new Beyblade!
Narrator: The journey of Beyblade Whirlpool has just begun!
Wonder quickly lies up in absolute confusion looking around.
Wonder: Who’s speaking?
Narrator: Uh.. nobody.
Wonder: I can hear you. I have ears.
Narrator: Oh um.. Dang it.
Then the next day…
Wonder speeds down the busy sidewalk as he pushes people out of the way with his fiery heart inside lit with new passion!
Wonder: Gotta find that BeyLab!!
Wonder then suddenly comes to a screeching halt as he investigates the area with there being many buildings, stores, & trees (lots of trees) in absolute confusion.
Wonder: Hold up? Where am I? Am I lost? Ugh! Can my luck get any worse?
Wonder searches around the area to find any blader until he eventually finds a short, chubby-looking male figure with black hair, a blue t-shirt, & brown joggers holding a launcher.
Wonder: A-ha!
Wonder rushes to the boy eager for answers as his legs and arms swing.
Wonder: Hey kid!
The boy's eyes widen in shock, and he begins to run off in absolute fear.
Wonder: Wait! Come back!
Meanwhile at Wonder’s house..
Wonder’s Dad sits at the glass dining table with a pale expression on his face as if he has seen a ghost.
Wonder’s Mom quickly takes notes and addresses her husband.
Wonder’s Mom: Darling, are you okay?
Wonder’s Dad: I just miss Jack.. y’ know?
His wife wraps her thin arms around his thick neck.
Wonder’s Dad: I suffered a lot too when I was younger...
Wonder’s Mom: Honey, we’re gonna be okay.
Wonder’s father looks down at his full plate of veggies
Wonder’s Dad: My dad made me suffer when I was younger and I just didn’t want to go through more pain...
*Sighs*
Wonder’s Mom: We're going to be okay. Now eat.
*Meanwhile in the town*
Boy: Ahhh!!!
Wonder continues to sprint as he chases the boy through the busy city.
Wonder: Stop! Come back!
Wonder pushes people out of the way.
Wonder: Move!
Finally, the boy gets to a dead end as he stops at a huge wall with no other way to escape.
Wonder: Hey!
Wonder begins to slow down running out of breath trapping the boy.
Wonder: I just wanted to know where the BeyLab is.
The young boy's jaw drops.
Boy: That’s why you chased me!?
Wonder shakes his head back & forth.
Wonder: Uh.. yeah?
The boy continues to stare in absolute disbelief at Wonder.
Boy: Wow.
*10 minutes later..*
Wonder & the young boy both arrive at the gigantic 5-level BeyLab building with the sun shining upon it in all its glory. It glows with a white/blue color design and it is circular with a big fat red logo with a Beyblade symbol with the words “BEYLAB”.
Wonder: Woah...
Wonder continues to stare in awe
Wonder: Thanks for…
Wonder said as he began to turn his head to the left to thank the young boy just to see him running off
Wonder: Okay?
Wonder gains a huge grin spreading across his face.
Wonder: Here we go…
Wonder climbs up the small number of stairs eagerly.
Wonder then finally goes through the automatic doors into a brand-new world. The inside features many bladers & scientists plus lots of Bey stadiums + 4 huge screens featuring previous broadcast Bey battles.
Wonder: Yo!!!
Wonder looks around with a huge grin, eyes wide open, & his jaw dropped.
Wonder rushes to the small front counter with a chubby female scientist with curly red hair & lots of freckles.
Wonder: Hello!
The female scientist stares directly at Wonder…
Female Scientist: Hi…
Wonder: Please! I want to make my own new Beyblade!
Female Scientists: 50 bucks.
Wonder eyes lower with his mouth wide open
Wonder: What the hell!? What do you mean 50 bucks!?
Female Scientist: Well I have to make money somehow.
Wonder slightly tilts his head right.
Wonder: Guess you have a point…
Female Scientists: So do you have money?
Wonder slowly and awkwardly smiles.
Wonder: Well.. so you see.
Female Scientists: Out.
Wonder: Wait! But-
Female Scientists: Out.
Wonder looks down with his eyebrows lowered and his back tilted.
???: Wait.
Wonder turns his head to see a slender build, brown eyes, and beautiful brown hair. Completed with a blue tank top a sleek black jacket & bright blue denim jeans that hug her legs along with stylish blue/yellow Nike shoes.
Wonder's eyes immediately light up as he is quickly in complete memorization.
Wonder: Woah…
Then he begins to gain a wide smile on his face as he feels a rush of chills.
Wonder: Hey.
The female smiles and nods her head.
???: I’ll pay for him.
Wonder: What!?
???: It’s alright.
She lightly taps his shoulders immediately giving another chill rush to Wonder seducing him without even trying.
Female Scientist: Are you sure Feng?
Feng: Positive.
Feng pulls out 60$ from her sky-blue wallet and hands it to the female scientists causing the scientist's face to immediately light up.
Female Scientist: Thank you!
Feng thugs Wonder’s shirt as a signal to go into the elevator
*10 minutes later..*
*Swoosh*
As the automatic door opens welcoming both Wonder & Feng into the huge clean lab room full of computers, launchers, & one huge stadium.
Feng: Well here we are!
Wonder can’t help but grin.
Wonder: Thank you so much, Feng! But why did you pay?
*Feng chuckles smiling*
Feng: I saw how excited you were and I didn’t want your excitement to turn into disappointment.
Wonder: Well thanks a lot. I always dreamed of becoming a big blader only problem never really knew if I could do it.
Feng: Well you never know until you try.
*Wonder stares smiling*
Wonder: Yeah. If I may ask though who are you? Like you know?
Feng: Well I’m 15, a blader, and someone who just loves helping people.
Wonder: Really?
Feng: Yeah, I like drawing, music, dancing & superheroes.
Wonder: Cool, I am 16, a future blader, and I’ve always been into cooking, action, and well... as you could probably tell Beyblade.
Feng: Yeah I can see that, but what exactly do you plan for yourself?
Wonder: I want to become the strongest blader alive!
Feng stares confusingly as if she is expecting more.
Feng: That’s it?
Wonder: Well..
Wonder cheery tone starts to be replaced by something far duller as he looks down frowning
Wonder: I- my whole life... Have always been pushed by everyone and nobody ever believes in me and thinks I’ll grow up to be a… failure…
Feng simply frowns with a dull expression
Feng: I’m so sorry…
*Wonder nods*
Wonder: So I want to prove everyone wrong... And make something of myself. To finally live a happy life and to make Jack proud.
Feng’s left eyebrow raises
Feng: Excuse me? Who’s Jack?
Wonder eyes widen
Wonder: Um never mind..
Feng moves slightly closer to Wonder
Feng: You can tell-
Wonder then begins to boil up inside as he fights not to let his emotions get the best of him until…
Wonder: I SAID I DON” T WANT TO TALK ABOUT IT!
Wonder's voice echoes across the room and for a few seconds absolute silence
Wonder takes his left hand and rubs his eyes
Wonder: I’m sorry… I should’ve yelled… I’d just-
Feng: It’s okay… I understand it’s none of my business.
Wonder nods his head with a dull expression on his face as frowns.
Feng: Do your parents believe in you?
Wonder depressingly shakes his head left & right indicating no as his eyes begin to get watery.
*Feng sighs*
Feng: Why would they not believe in their child?
Wonder: I prefer not to talk about it…
Feng: Well it’s okay. At the end of the day as long as your okay.
Wonder smiles as he fights back his tears.
Wonder: Don’t worry I’m okay.
Feng: Let me help you make your new bey!
Wonder slightly raises his hands in disagreement.
Wonder: You-
Feng: I insist.
Wonder smile gets bigger
Wonder: Sure, thank you.
*Feng smiles*
Feng: No problem.
Wonder: Well shall we uh… get started?
Feng has a cute smile as she fixes her hair
Feng: Let’s get to work.
*Montage begins* (Insert song “Unstoppable” from The Score)
Wonder gets out 3 sheets of plain white paper and begins to sketch out his ideas for his new bey with art that seems to impress Feng. The sketch shows off a four-bladed bey with seemingly a Knight motif intriguing Feng.
Wonder then begins to type quickly on the computer keyboard as we transition to the computer screen showing off a 3d model of Wonder’s new bey in a 2000s-like green background.
Finally, Wonder begins to watch as a tiny white/black 3d printer prints out Wonder’s new bey while adding some dark blue color to its design.
*Montage Ends* (So does the song)
Wonder: Whew! It’s done!!!!
Wonder jumps up high into the air holding up his new Beyblade as his eyes are wide open, has a huge smile with his white teeth showing, and eyebrows lit up.
Wonder: Welcome Whirlwind Knight!!!!!
*Feng smiles*
Feng: You did it.
Wonder: Thanks to you.
Feng: So what about the bey?
Wonder then suddenly puts on thin black sleek glasses.
Wonder: Time to get my nerd mode on!
*Feng giggles*
Feng: Okay?
Wonder: The core Knight in question is a right-spinning core that exhibits a striking color scheme of dark blue and bright purplish hues, which blend seamlessly to create a visually captivating appearance. Adding to its appeal is the presence of a winged knight motif, which gives it a sense of nobility and strength. Overall, this object is both aesthetically pleasing and intriguing.
Feng: Continue?
Wonder: The blade is called Whirlwind! Firstly, it has a four-bladed attack-type blade. The blade is designed in a way that is perfect for offensive play, allowing you to launch powerful attacks against your opponent. Secondly, the color scheme of the bey is quite stunning. It has a dark blue color scheme with some bright purplish color on the blades, which gives it a very modern and sleek look. Lastly, the main feature of this bey is its bound attack. What this means is that if you push back the four-blade far enough, a spring is activated, which allows the bey to knock the opponent's bey back with tremendous force. It's a fantastic feature and can give you an edge over your opponents.
Feng: And for the driver?
Wonder: It’s called “Typhoon” There honestly is not much to say about it.
Feng: Fair.
Wonder grips Whirlwind Knight in his palm tightly with a big smile on his face.
Wonder (Thoughts): Finally we're on our way….
*Flashback begins*
Wonder’s Father: Jack lived a concise life yet he was better than you in every way possible! He was kind, cute & always wanted to help others, but you are just a loser! Someone to pick & laugh at! You’re not strong, brave, or anything!! You’re just useless! Useless!!!
*Flashback Ends*
Wonder (Thoughts): We’re gonna prove you wrong!
Narrator: And so we have the birth of Whirlwind Knight! Now the journey truly begins! And we have to end this episode because it’s far too long-
Wonder & Feng both search around the empty room looking for answers.
Wonder/Feng: Who’s that?
Narrator: Oh brother.
To be continued…
I agree.
RE: Bey100's Beyblade Whirlwind! (1st Episode's Out!) Character Contest Ongoing - Bey100 - Feb. 23, 2024
I know that there's only one episode out and it is way too early but I would like to hear some of your early predications in terms of characters already confirmed and seen in the first episode and where the story can go. (Just curious)
RE: Bey100's Beyblade Whirlwind! (1st Episode's Out!) Character Contest Ongoing - Turboblader - Feb. 24, 2024
(Feb. 23, 2024 10:24 PM)Bey100 Wrote: I know that there's only one episode out and it is way too early but I would like to hear some of your early predictions in terms of characters already confirmed and seen in the first episode and where the story can go. (Just curious)
I think that Wonder will prove that he is no loser and that Feng will help him overcome all of his troubles, and I hope that the person who has L-drago destructor will be one of Wonder’s allies or teammates in future episodes.
RE: Bey100's Beyblade Whirlwind! (1st Episode's Out!) Character Contest Ongoing - Bey100 - Feb. 24, 2024
(Feb. 24, 2024 12:41 AM)Turboblader Wrote:Who said L Drago Destructor had to be the only remake?.. 😏(Feb. 23, 2024 10:24 PM)Bey100 Wrote: I know that there's only one episode out and it is way too early but I would like to hear some of your early predictions in terms of characters already confirmed and seen in the first episode and where the story can go. (Just curious)
I think that Wonder will prove that he is no loser and that Feng will help him overcome all of his troubles, and I hope that the person who has L-drago destructor will be one of Wonder’s allies or teammates in future episodes.
RE: Bey100's Beyblade Whirlwind! (1st Episode's Out!) Character Contest Ongoing - Turboblader - Feb. 24, 2024
(Feb. 24, 2024 1:24 AM)Bey100 Wrote:(Feb. 24, 2024 12:41 AM)Turboblader Wrote: I think that Wonder will prove that he is no loser and that Feng will help him overcome all of his troubles, and I hope that the person who has L-drago destructor will be one of Wonder’s allies or teammates in future episodes.Who said L Drago Destructor had to be the only remake?.. 😏
I would love for there to be more remakes, like Gasher for example or a burst beyblade.
RE: Bey100's Beyblade Whirlwind! (1st Episode's Out!) Character Contest Ongoing - Bey100 - Feb. 25, 2024
New episode will release this Friday also character contest continues so if you want to make sure you join as it ends this Thursday
RE: Bey100's Beyblade Whirlwind! (1st Episode's Out!) Character Contest Ongoing - Bey100 - Feb. 27, 2024
Beyblade Whirlwind Arcs Explained:
Spoiler (Click to View)
Arc One (Episodes 1 - 15)
This will mostly be introducing characters so expect mostly just character development.
Arc Two (Episodes 15 - 30)
This will introduce more new bladers and will have more world - building so expect mostly that.
Arc Three (Episode 30 - 40)
This will introduce the main antagonist and will be probably the darkest and biggest in terms of plot so expect a lot of bombshells during this arc.
Arc Four (Episodes 40 - 52)
The final arc that really sets up and leads to the ending.
This will mostly be introducing characters so expect mostly just character development.
Arc Two (Episodes 15 - 30)
This will introduce more new bladers and will have more world - building so expect mostly that.
Arc Three (Episode 30 - 40)
This will introduce the main antagonist and will be probably the darkest and biggest in terms of plot so expect a lot of bombshells during this arc.
Arc Four (Episodes 40 - 52)
The final arc that really sets up and leads to the ending.
RE: Bey100's Beyblade Whirlwind! *Character Contest Ongoing* - Bey100 - Feb. 28, 2024
Final reminder that the character contest ends tomorrow so today’s your last chance to join so make sure you hurry up.
RE: Bey100's Beyblade Whirlwind! *Character Contest Ongoing* - Turboblader - Feb. 29, 2024
(Feb. 28, 2024 8:01 PM)Bey100 Wrote: Final reminder that the character contest ends tomorrow so today’s your last chance to join so make sure you hurry up.
Can't wait to see who the winner is.
RE: Bey100's Beyblade Whirlwind! *Character Contest Ongoing* - Bey100 - Feb. 29, 2024
The winner of the character contest is Turbobader! Congrats!
Your character and bey will appear later in the series! 👍
Remy Remy - Inpact Rhinoceros.Final
New episode tomorrow at 10am 🕙 stay tuned.
RE: Bey100's Beyblade Whirlwind! - Turboblader - Feb. 29, 2024
(Feb. 29, 2024 3:15 PM)Bey100 Wrote: The winner of the character contest is Turbobader! Congrats!
Your character and bey will appear later in the series! 👍
Remy Remy - Inpact Rhinoceros.Final
New episode tomorrow at 10am 🕙 stay tuned.
Awesome, also I forgot to give my character a last name so you can come up with one if you want.
RE: Bey100's Beyblade Whirlwind! - Bey100 - Feb. 29, 2024
Well that’s it. These are all the main beys in Whirlwind.
Wonder Tabu - Whirlwind Knight.Typoon
Feng Oceania - Whirlpool Forneus.Wave
Punish Takai - Inferno Phoenix.Burn
Leon Wild - Fierce Lynx.Rage
Xan Tokoroa - Mighty Xcalibur.Sword
Nina Heart - Whirlwhip Neptune.King
Duo Takara - Fly Dragon.Spread
Curse Silo - Evil Chaos.End
Sam Tryant - Glory Solomon.Shine
Percy Woods - Storm Perseus.Engulf
Remy Remy - Inpact Rhinoceros.Final
New episode tomorrow stay tuned.
RE: Bey100's Beyblade Whirlwind! - Bey100 - Mar. 01, 2024
Beyblade Whirlwind Episode 2:
Mastering The New Bey!
Spoiler (Click to View)
Wonder: Let It Rip!
Wonder powerfully launches his new bey!
Whirlwind Knight heavily lands in the stadium with a big thud.
Wonder: Yeah!
Whirlwind Knight charges towards the stadium's center with great speed and precision. It starts spinning around at an astonishing rate, making it hard to keep track of its location. The Knight's metallic armor reflects the light brilliantly, creating a mesmerizing visual display. As it spins, the wind generated by its movements creates a powerful gust that sends debris flying in all directions.
Wonder: Woah...
Wonder stares with his eyes lit up joyfully and a huge smile.
Feng: Now that’s cool.
Wonder: I know.
Feng: So.. ready to train?
Wonder: Yeah let’s battle.
Feng's eyes widen as she cheekily smiles.
Feng: Woah! Calm down, you’re not battling me yet.
Wonder frowns
Wonder: Why?
Feng: I’m a super strong blader and respectfully speaking..
Wonder: Yes?
Feng inhales loudly
Feng: You would be obliterated.
Wonder: Ouch.
Feng: Sorry.
Wonder: That’s fine, I’ll get stronger and eventually beat you.
Feng giggles
Feng: Enthusiastic.
Wonder grins
Wonder: Yup.
In the same room, there is a glass tube with a L Drago Destructor bey inside!
Meanwhile in the Amazon rainforest…
There is a tall buff figure who is shirtless and seems to have a sharp nose and big head running through the bright green trees and in the background, a bright beautiful waterfall causing there to be huge fog. Everywhere you look there are bugs and wild animals. The sounds of buzzes and roars can be heard and the smells of the fresh water can be felt but the mysterious figure continues to run seemingly determined to get somewhere.
Later back at Wonder’s home..
Wonder’s Dad: Well look who decided to show up?
Wonder: Dad, it’s me. Pretty obvious.
Wonder’s Dad: Shut up!! Where did you go!?
Wonder: Um nowhere?
Wonder’s Dad stares with his eyebrows and eyes lowered plus his mouth slightly opened.
Wonder’s Dad: You are such a bad liar.
Wonder: Well..
Wonder’s Dad: Where did you go!?
Wonder stares as his face grows pale and his palms begin to get sweaty.
Wonder’s Dad: Wonder!?
Wonder: Fine! Okay! *Sighs* I went to the BeyLab.
His father stares and his face turns red and starts steaming.
Wonder’s Dad: You made a Beyblade!?
Wonder: Yes. *Starts digging through his pocket*
Wonder pulls the Whirlwind Knight layer out of his pocket to show his father.
Wonder: See?
His father just stares with a mouth wide open and his eyes widen almost looking terrified.
Wonder’s Father: Why?
Wonder: I want to become a great, strong, and famous blader one day.
Wonder’s Father: You think you can do that!?
Wonder: Yeah, I’ll prove you one wrong day and you’ll say *Mimicking his father’s voice* “I’m so sorry I doubted you! You made me proud and proved me wrong!”
Wonder’s Father: Wonder, you’re 16 face it.. not all dreams come true. The quicker you accept that the better things will be for you.
Wonder’s father walks off leaving a silent Wonder standing there alone.
Wonder: I’ll prove you wrong.
*The next day…*
Wonder walks through the busy streets with his shoulder bumping into people left and right.
Wonder: This is comfortable… so nice.
Wonder frowns annoyingly
Wonder: *Looks around* Now where is the..
Wonder’s eyes then catch a big area with multiple stadiums, kid/teenage bladers, and dark green grass. And there’s a feminine figure in the distance until *Wonder squints his eyes to look closer* it’s Feng!
Wonder frown turns into a grin.
Wonder: Now there’s the BeyPark.
Wonder wastes no time quickly rushing to the area as he is eager to get training.
Wonder quickly stops nearly bumping into Feng.
Wonder: My bad.
Feng scrunchies up her hair into a ponytail as she gives a cute smile.
Feng: It’s fine now let’s get started.
Wonder: Cool.
Feng: First you need to launch your bey.
Wonder pulls out his purple right launcher and takes out of his pocket his new bey Whirlwind Knight!
Wonder: Let’s go.
Wonder excitedly locks Whirlwind Knight onto his launcher.
*Feng nods*
Wonder: Count me down.
Feng: 3..2..1..
Wonder: Let It Rip!
Wonder powerfully launches Whirlwind Knight as the wind blows some of the other bladers around back.
Wonder: Ha!
Whirlwind Knight lands in the stadium and speeds around it faster than the Flash!
Wonder clenches his fist joyfully.
Wonder: Sweet.
Feng: That was... Great.
Not too long after other bladers around the area come around Wonder and the stadium to witness the blazing awe of Whirlwind Knight.
Wonder: Now this is how we do it!
Whirlwind Knight begins to wobble signaling it lost in stamina.
Wonder: Uh oh.
Whirlwind Knight finally comes to a screeching halt at the center of the stadium but its impact is left on everybody's faces.
Random Blader Boy 1: That was so cool!!
Random Blader Girl 2: Yeah!
All the bladers start to swarm around Wonder seemingly impressed by his and his bey strength.
Wonder starts to back up and look around frantically.
Wonder: Everyone, everyone! Can you please back up?
Soon a random girl starts to get close to Wonder moving her hand near him until..
Feng pops out and blocks the girl’s way
Feng: Give him some space!
All the bladers would start to back off and walk off leaving Wonder and Feng speechless.
Wonder: How did that work?
Feng: I have no idea.
Wonder: Thanks though.
Feng: No problem.
Both bladers stare at each other with huge smiles on their faces…
Feng: Heh.
Feng tentatively raises her hand and gives Wonder's shoulder a gentle tap.
Wonder: Ow.
Feng: Sorry!
Wonder: Nah it’s all good.
Feng: So Whirlwind Knight went extremely fast like really fast.
Wonder: Well we know it is an attack type for sure.
Feng: Right, but it lost all its stamina quickly.
Wonder: *Touches his chin* Well it’s wasn’t made to last super long that why whatever bey it goes up against it has to make do with quickly.
Feng: Fair.
Wonder: Sorry if this gets annoying but can you please tell me what your bey is?
*Feng chuckles*
Feng: Fine.
Feng pulls out her pocket a circular bey with a black/blue color scheme alongside a Shark motif.
Wonder's jaw drops as he stares in complete awe.
Wonder: W-what’s that?
Feng: Meet Whirlpool Forneus!
*Whirlpool Forneus glows brightly in all glory*
Wonder: Whirlpool? That’s cool. Our bey’s names are rather similar.
Feng: Yeah they are.
Wonder: So tell me about your bey?
Feng: The top portion of the Whirlpool blade is made out of metal allowing the bey to stand its ground considering it is a defense type.
Wonder: Sweet so now you owe me something.
Feng: What’s that?
Wonder proudly holds up Whirlwind Knight.
Wonder: You know what!
Feng's eyes lockdown as she can’t help but chuckle.
Feng: Fine, let’s go! First to 2 points!
Wonder: Wait, didn’t you say you would respectfully destroy me?
Feng: Yeah.. but since you asked..?
Wonder & Feng both rush to a stadium eager to battle…
Wonder & Feng then both immediately lock their beys onto their launchers.
Wonder: Ready?
Feng: Whenever you are.
Wonder: 3! *Titlts his launcher*
Feng: 2! *Grips her launcher tighter*
Wonder/Feng: 1! *In between frame of their faces*
Wonder: Let-!
Feng: It-!
Wonder/Feng: Rip!!!
Both bladers powerfully launch their beys as other bladers start to once again gather around to witness the powerful display.
Whirlwind Knight & Whirlpool Forneus both land in the stadium with Whirlwind Knight racing around the stadium while Forneus takes center of the stage.
Wonder: Alright knock 'em out!
Whirlwind Knight then rushes to the center about to go for a head-on collision with Whirlpool Forneus.
Feng: Here we go…
Whirlwind Knight powerfully clashes with Whirlpool Forneus causing sparks to fly!
*Feng's pupils begin to glow aqua green* and Wonder quickly notices.
Wonder (Thoughts): She resonated with Forneus.
Feng then starts to emit a bright blue shining aurora causing everyone to not be able to look away.
Wonder: Feng?
Feng: Together.. Whirlpool Forneus!
Whirlpool Forneus flares out and a terrifying but glorious shark avatar appears in an aqua-green background!
Feng: Now!
The Whirlpool blade begins to blow bright blue and the energy knocks back Whirlwind Knight into a stadium wall.
Wonder: Whoa.
Feng: Whirlpool Twist!
Whirlpool Forneus suddenly creates a mini blue tornado and it begins to pull a wobbling Whirlwind Knight in.
Wonder: Hang on!
Whirlwind Knight gets raised and then thrown out of the stadium.
Wonder: What!?
*Clink* that’s the sound heard as Whirlwind Knight hits the ground.
Feng: Looks like I got 1 point.
The episode ends off with a shot of Feng holding up Whirlpool Forneus with the avatar menacingly at the back with an artistic ocean background!
To be continued…
Wonder powerfully launches his new bey!
Whirlwind Knight heavily lands in the stadium with a big thud.
Wonder: Yeah!
Whirlwind Knight charges towards the stadium's center with great speed and precision. It starts spinning around at an astonishing rate, making it hard to keep track of its location. The Knight's metallic armor reflects the light brilliantly, creating a mesmerizing visual display. As it spins, the wind generated by its movements creates a powerful gust that sends debris flying in all directions.
Wonder: Woah...
Wonder stares with his eyes lit up joyfully and a huge smile.
Feng: Now that’s cool.
Wonder: I know.
Feng: So.. ready to train?
Wonder: Yeah let’s battle.
Feng's eyes widen as she cheekily smiles.
Feng: Woah! Calm down, you’re not battling me yet.
Wonder frowns
Wonder: Why?
Feng: I’m a super strong blader and respectfully speaking..
Wonder: Yes?
Feng inhales loudly
Feng: You would be obliterated.
Wonder: Ouch.
Feng: Sorry.
Wonder: That’s fine, I’ll get stronger and eventually beat you.
Feng giggles
Feng: Enthusiastic.
Wonder grins
Wonder: Yup.
In the same room, there is a glass tube with a L Drago Destructor bey inside!
Meanwhile in the Amazon rainforest…
There is a tall buff figure who is shirtless and seems to have a sharp nose and big head running through the bright green trees and in the background, a bright beautiful waterfall causing there to be huge fog. Everywhere you look there are bugs and wild animals. The sounds of buzzes and roars can be heard and the smells of the fresh water can be felt but the mysterious figure continues to run seemingly determined to get somewhere.
Later back at Wonder’s home..
Wonder’s Dad: Well look who decided to show up?
Wonder: Dad, it’s me. Pretty obvious.
Wonder’s Dad: Shut up!! Where did you go!?
Wonder: Um nowhere?
Wonder’s Dad stares with his eyebrows and eyes lowered plus his mouth slightly opened.
Wonder’s Dad: You are such a bad liar.
Wonder: Well..
Wonder’s Dad: Where did you go!?
Wonder stares as his face grows pale and his palms begin to get sweaty.
Wonder’s Dad: Wonder!?
Wonder: Fine! Okay! *Sighs* I went to the BeyLab.
His father stares and his face turns red and starts steaming.
Wonder’s Dad: You made a Beyblade!?
Wonder: Yes. *Starts digging through his pocket*
Wonder pulls the Whirlwind Knight layer out of his pocket to show his father.
Wonder: See?
His father just stares with a mouth wide open and his eyes widen almost looking terrified.
Wonder’s Father: Why?
Wonder: I want to become a great, strong, and famous blader one day.
Wonder’s Father: You think you can do that!?
Wonder: Yeah, I’ll prove you one wrong day and you’ll say *Mimicking his father’s voice* “I’m so sorry I doubted you! You made me proud and proved me wrong!”
Wonder’s Father: Wonder, you’re 16 face it.. not all dreams come true. The quicker you accept that the better things will be for you.
Wonder’s father walks off leaving a silent Wonder standing there alone.
Wonder: I’ll prove you wrong.
*The next day…*
Wonder walks through the busy streets with his shoulder bumping into people left and right.
Wonder: This is comfortable… so nice.
Wonder frowns annoyingly
Wonder: *Looks around* Now where is the..
Wonder’s eyes then catch a big area with multiple stadiums, kid/teenage bladers, and dark green grass. And there’s a feminine figure in the distance until *Wonder squints his eyes to look closer* it’s Feng!
Wonder frown turns into a grin.
Wonder: Now there’s the BeyPark.
Wonder wastes no time quickly rushing to the area as he is eager to get training.
Wonder quickly stops nearly bumping into Feng.
Wonder: My bad.
Feng scrunchies up her hair into a ponytail as she gives a cute smile.
Feng: It’s fine now let’s get started.
Wonder: Cool.
Feng: First you need to launch your bey.
Wonder pulls out his purple right launcher and takes out of his pocket his new bey Whirlwind Knight!
Wonder: Let’s go.
Wonder excitedly locks Whirlwind Knight onto his launcher.
*Feng nods*
Wonder: Count me down.
Feng: 3..2..1..
Wonder: Let It Rip!
Wonder powerfully launches Whirlwind Knight as the wind blows some of the other bladers around back.
Wonder: Ha!
Whirlwind Knight lands in the stadium and speeds around it faster than the Flash!
Wonder clenches his fist joyfully.
Wonder: Sweet.
Feng: That was... Great.
Not too long after other bladers around the area come around Wonder and the stadium to witness the blazing awe of Whirlwind Knight.
Wonder: Now this is how we do it!
Whirlwind Knight begins to wobble signaling it lost in stamina.
Wonder: Uh oh.
Whirlwind Knight finally comes to a screeching halt at the center of the stadium but its impact is left on everybody's faces.
Random Blader Boy 1: That was so cool!!
Random Blader Girl 2: Yeah!
All the bladers start to swarm around Wonder seemingly impressed by his and his bey strength.
Wonder starts to back up and look around frantically.
Wonder: Everyone, everyone! Can you please back up?
Soon a random girl starts to get close to Wonder moving her hand near him until..
Feng pops out and blocks the girl’s way
Feng: Give him some space!
All the bladers would start to back off and walk off leaving Wonder and Feng speechless.
Wonder: How did that work?
Feng: I have no idea.
Wonder: Thanks though.
Feng: No problem.
Both bladers stare at each other with huge smiles on their faces…
Feng: Heh.
Feng tentatively raises her hand and gives Wonder's shoulder a gentle tap.
Wonder: Ow.
Feng: Sorry!
Wonder: Nah it’s all good.
Feng: So Whirlwind Knight went extremely fast like really fast.
Wonder: Well we know it is an attack type for sure.
Feng: Right, but it lost all its stamina quickly.
Wonder: *Touches his chin* Well it’s wasn’t made to last super long that why whatever bey it goes up against it has to make do with quickly.
Feng: Fair.
Wonder: Sorry if this gets annoying but can you please tell me what your bey is?
*Feng chuckles*
Feng: Fine.
Feng pulls out her pocket a circular bey with a black/blue color scheme alongside a Shark motif.
Wonder's jaw drops as he stares in complete awe.
Wonder: W-what’s that?
Feng: Meet Whirlpool Forneus!
*Whirlpool Forneus glows brightly in all glory*
Wonder: Whirlpool? That’s cool. Our bey’s names are rather similar.
Feng: Yeah they are.
Wonder: So tell me about your bey?
Feng: The top portion of the Whirlpool blade is made out of metal allowing the bey to stand its ground considering it is a defense type.
Wonder: Sweet so now you owe me something.
Feng: What’s that?
Wonder proudly holds up Whirlwind Knight.
Wonder: You know what!
Feng's eyes lockdown as she can’t help but chuckle.
Feng: Fine, let’s go! First to 2 points!
Wonder: Wait, didn’t you say you would respectfully destroy me?
Feng: Yeah.. but since you asked..?
Wonder & Feng both rush to a stadium eager to battle…
Wonder & Feng then both immediately lock their beys onto their launchers.
Wonder: Ready?
Feng: Whenever you are.
Wonder: 3! *Titlts his launcher*
Feng: 2! *Grips her launcher tighter*
Wonder/Feng: 1! *In between frame of their faces*
Wonder: Let-!
Feng: It-!
Wonder/Feng: Rip!!!
Both bladers powerfully launch their beys as other bladers start to once again gather around to witness the powerful display.
Whirlwind Knight & Whirlpool Forneus both land in the stadium with Whirlwind Knight racing around the stadium while Forneus takes center of the stage.
Wonder: Alright knock 'em out!
Whirlwind Knight then rushes to the center about to go for a head-on collision with Whirlpool Forneus.
Feng: Here we go…
Whirlwind Knight powerfully clashes with Whirlpool Forneus causing sparks to fly!
*Feng's pupils begin to glow aqua green* and Wonder quickly notices.
Wonder (Thoughts): She resonated with Forneus.
Feng then starts to emit a bright blue shining aurora causing everyone to not be able to look away.
Wonder: Feng?
Feng: Together.. Whirlpool Forneus!
Whirlpool Forneus flares out and a terrifying but glorious shark avatar appears in an aqua-green background!
Feng: Now!
The Whirlpool blade begins to blow bright blue and the energy knocks back Whirlwind Knight into a stadium wall.
Wonder: Whoa.
Feng: Whirlpool Twist!
Whirlpool Forneus suddenly creates a mini blue tornado and it begins to pull a wobbling Whirlwind Knight in.
Wonder: Hang on!
Whirlwind Knight gets raised and then thrown out of the stadium.
Wonder: What!?
*Clink* that’s the sound heard as Whirlwind Knight hits the ground.
Feng: Looks like I got 1 point.
The episode ends off with a shot of Feng holding up Whirlpool Forneus with the avatar menacingly at the back with an artistic ocean background!
To be continued…
RE: Bey100's Beyblade Whirlwind! *2nd episode out now!* - Turboblader - Mar. 01, 2024
(Mar. 01, 2024 4:02 PM)Bey100 Wrote: Beyblade Whirlwind Episode 2:
Mastering The New Bey!
This episode continues from the first episode while doing some groundwork & foreshadowing for the future! If you have any thoughts let me know!Spoiler (Click to View)Wonder: Let It Rip!
Wonder powerfully launches his new bey!
Whirlwind Knight heavily lands in the stadium with a big thud.
Wonder: Yeah!
Whirlwind Knight charges towards the stadium's center with great speed and precision. It starts spinning around at an astonishing rate, making it hard to keep track of its location. The Knight's metallic armor reflects the light brilliantly, creating a mesmerizing visual display. As it spins, the wind generated by its movements creates a powerful gust that sends debris flying in all directions.
Wonder: Woah...
Wonder stares with his eyes lit up joyfully and a huge smile.
Feng: Now that’s cool.
Wonder: I know.
Feng: So.. ready to train?
Wonder: Yeah let’s battle.
Feng's eyes widen as she cheekily smiles.
Feng: Woah! Calm down, you’re not battling me yet.
Wonder frowns
Wonder: Why?
Feng: I’m a super strong blader and respectfully speaking..
Wonder: Yes?
Feng inhales loudly
Feng: You would be obliterated.
Wonder: Ouch.
Feng: Sorry.
Wonder: That’s fine, I’ll get stronger and eventually beat you.
Feng giggles
Feng: Enthusiastic.
Wonder grins
Wonder: Yup.
In the same room, there is a glass tube with a L Drago Destructor bey inside!
Meanwhile in the Amazon rainforest…
There is a tall buff figure who is shirtless and seems to have a sharp nose and big head running through the bright green trees and in the background, a bright beautiful waterfall causing there to be huge fog. Everywhere you look there are bugs and wild animals. The sounds of buzzes and roars can be heard and the smells of the fresh water can be felt but the mysterious figure continues to run seemingly determined to get somewhere.
Later back at Wonder’s home..
Wonder’s Dad: Well look who decided to show up?
Wonder: Dad, it’s me. Pretty obvious.
Wonder’s Dad: Shut up!! Where did you go!?
Wonder: Um nowhere?
Wonder’s Dad stares with his eyebrows and eyes lowered plus his mouth slightly opened.
Wonder’s Dad: You are such a bad liar.
Wonder: Well..
Wonder’s Dad: Where did you go!?
Wonder stares as his face grows pale and his palms begin to get sweaty.
Wonder’s Dad: Wonder!?
Wonder: Fine! Okay! *Sighs* I went to the BeyLab.
His father stares and his face turns red and starts steaming.
Wonder’s Dad: You made a Beyblade!?
Wonder: Yes. *Starts digging through his pocket*
Wonder pulls the Whirlwind Knight layer out of his pocket to show his father.
Wonder: See?
His father just stares with a mouth wide open and his eyes widen almost looking terrified.
Wonder’s Father: Why?
Wonder: I want to become a great, strong, and famous blader one day.
Wonder’s Father: You think you can do that!?
Wonder: Yeah, I’ll prove you one wrong day and you’ll say *Mimicking his father’s voice* “I’m so sorry I doubted you! You made me proud and proved me wrong!”
Wonder’s Father: Wonder, you’re 16 face it.. not all dreams come true. The quicker you accept that the better things will be for you.
Wonder’s father walks off leaving a silent Wonder standing there alone.
Wonder: I’ll prove you wrong.
*The next day…*
Wonder walks through the busy streets with his shoulder bumping into people left and right.
Wonder: This is comfortable… so nice.
Wonder frowns annoyingly
Wonder: *Looks around* Now where is the..
Wonder’s eyes then catch a big area with multiple stadiums, kid/teenage bladers, and dark green grass. And there’s a feminine figure in the distance until *Wonder squints his eyes to look closer* it’s Feng!
Wonder frown turns into a grin.
Wonder: Now there’s the BeyPark.
Wonder wastes no time quickly rushing to the area as he is eager to get training.
Wonder quickly stops nearly bumping into Feng.
Wonder: My bad.
Feng scrunchies up her hair into a ponytail as she gives a cute smile.
Feng: It’s fine now let’s get started.
Wonder: Cool.
Feng: First you need to launch your bey.
Wonder pulls out his purple right launcher and takes out of his pocket his new bey Whirlwind Knight!
Wonder: Let’s go.
Wonder excitedly locks Whirlwind Knight onto his launcher.
*Feng nods*
Wonder: Count me down.
Feng: 3..2..1..
Wonder: Let It Rip!
Wonder powerfully launches Whirlwind Knight as the wind blows some of the other bladers around back.
Wonder: Ha!
Whirlwind Knight lands in the stadium and speeds around it faster than the Flash!
Wonder clenches his fist joyfully.
Wonder: Sweet.
Feng: That was... Great.
Not too long after other bladers around the area come around Wonder and the stadium to witness the blazing awe of Whirlwind Knight.
Wonder: Now this is how we do it!
Whirlwind Knight begins to wobble signaling it lost in stamina.
Wonder: Uh oh.
Whirlwind Knight finally comes to a screeching halt at the center of the stadium but its impact is left on everybody's faces.
Random Blader Boy 1: That was so cool!!
Random Blader Girl 2: Yeah!
All the bladers start to swarm around Wonder seemingly impressed by his and his bey strength.
Wonder starts to back up and look around frantically.
Wonder: Everyone, everyone! Can you please back up?
Soon a random girl starts to get close to Wonder moving her hand near him until..
Feng pops out and blocks the girl’s way
Feng: Give him some space!
All the bladers would start to back off and walk off leaving Wonder and Feng speechless.
Wonder: How did that work?
Feng: I have no idea.
Wonder: Thanks though.
Feng: No problem.
Both bladers stare at each other with huge smiles on their faces…
Feng: Heh.
Feng tentatively raises her hand and gives Wonder's shoulder a gentle tap.
Wonder: Ow.
Feng: Sorry!
Wonder: Nah it’s all good.
Feng: So Whirlwind Knight went extremely fast like really fast.
Wonder: Well we know it is an attack type for sure.
Feng: Right, but it lost all its stamina quickly.
Wonder: *Touches his chin* Well it’s wasn’t made to last super long that why whatever bey it goes up against it has to make do with quickly.
Feng: Fair.
Wonder: Sorry if this gets annoying but can you please tell me what your bey is?
*Feng chuckles*
Feng: Fine.
Feng pulls out her pocket a circular bey with a black/blue color scheme alongside a Shark motif.
Wonder's jaw drops as he stares in complete awe.
Wonder: W-what’s that?
Feng: Meet Whirlpool Forneus!
*Whirlpool Forneus glows brightly in all glory*
Wonder: Whirlpool? That’s cool. Our bey’s names are rather similar.
Feng: Yeah they are.
Wonder: So tell me about your bey?
Feng: The top portion of the Whirlpool blade is made out of metal allowing the bey to stand its ground considering it is a defense type.
Wonder: Sweet so now you owe me something.
Feng: What’s that?
Wonder proudly holds up Whirlwind Knight.
Wonder: You know what!
Feng's eyes lockdown as she can’t help but chuckle.
Feng: Fine, let’s go! First to 2 points!
Wonder: Wait, didn’t you say you would respectfully destroy me?
Feng: Yeah.. but since you asked..?
Wonder & Feng both rush to a stadium eager to battle…
Wonder & Feng then both immediately lock their beys onto their launchers.
Wonder: Ready?
Feng: Whenever you are.
Wonder: 3! *Titlts his launcher*
Feng: 2! *Grips her launcher tighter*
Wonder/Feng: 1! *In between frame of their faces*
Wonder: Let-!
Feng: It-!
Wonder/Feng: Rip!!!
Both bladers powerfully launch their beys as other bladers start to once again gather around to witness the powerful display.
Whirlwind Knight & Whirlpool Forneus both land in the stadium with Whirlwind Knight racing around the stadium while Forneus takes center of the stage.
Wonder: Alright knock 'em out!
Whirlwind Knight then rushes to the center about to go for a head-on collision with Whirlpool Forneus.
Feng: Here we go…
Whirlwind Knight powerfully clashes with Whirlpool Forneus causing sparks to fly!
*Feng's pupils begin to glow aqua green* and Wonder quickly notices.
Wonder (Thoughts): She resonated with Forneus.
Feng then starts to emit a bright blue shining aurora causing everyone to not be able to look away.
Wonder: Feng?
Feng: Together.. Whirlpool Forneus!
Whirlpool Forneus flares out and a terrifying but glorious shark avatar appears in an aqua-green background!
Feng: Now!
The Whirlpool blade begins to blow bright blue and the energy knocks back Whirlwind Knight into a stadium wall.
Wonder: Whoa.
Feng: Whirlpool Twist!
Whirlpool Forneus suddenly creates a mini blue tornado and it begins to pull a wobbling Whirlwind Knight in.
Wonder: Hang on!
Whirlwind Knight gets raised and then thrown out of the stadium.
Wonder: What!?
*Clink* that’s the sound heard as Whirlwind Knight hits the ground.
Feng: Looks like I got 1 point.
The episode ends off with a shot of Feng holding up Whirlpool Forneus with the avatar menacingly at the back with an artistic ocean background!
To be continued…
Love it, these episodes are getting better, I can't wait to see L-drago destructor battle in a future episode and to see other remakes, also I think that mysterious blader in the forest might either have dark bull or a different bull related beyblade.
RE: Bey100's Beyblade Whirlwind! *2nd episode out now!* - Bey100 - Mar. 01, 2024
Products Listing For Whirlwind:
Spoiler (Click to View)
February
B 01 Whirlwind Knight Starter
B 02 Whirlpool Forneus Starter
B 03 Whirlwind LR Launcher
B 04 Whirlwind Battle Set (Includes recolors of Knight & Forneus, a stadium, and two right launchers)
March
B 05 Inferno Phoenix Booster
April
B 06 Random Booster Volume 1 (Fierce Lynx)
May
B 07 Mighty Xcalibur Booster
B 00 L Drago Destructor Booster (Remake)
June
B 08 Whirlwhip Neptune Booster
July
B 09 Evil Chaos Starter
B 10 Random Booster Volume 2 (Storm Perseus *Beansworth Beyblade*)
August
B 11 Glory Solomon Booster
September
B 12 Impact Rhinoceros Booster *Turboblader character contest bey winner*
October
B 13 Fly Dragon Booster
B 00 Dark Bull Booster (Remake)
November
B 14 Cloudburst Knight Starter
B 00 Storm Spriggan (Remake)
December
B 15 End Of Whirlwind Set (includes a recolor of Cloudburst Knight & Evil Chaos, a stadium, and one LR Launcher)
B 00 Trygle (Remake)
B 01 Whirlwind Knight Starter
B 02 Whirlpool Forneus Starter
B 03 Whirlwind LR Launcher
B 04 Whirlwind Battle Set (Includes recolors of Knight & Forneus, a stadium, and two right launchers)
March
B 05 Inferno Phoenix Booster
April
B 06 Random Booster Volume 1 (Fierce Lynx)
May
B 07 Mighty Xcalibur Booster
B 00 L Drago Destructor Booster (Remake)
June
B 08 Whirlwhip Neptune Booster
July
B 09 Evil Chaos Starter
B 10 Random Booster Volume 2 (Storm Perseus *Beansworth Beyblade*)
August
B 11 Glory Solomon Booster
September
B 12 Impact Rhinoceros Booster *Turboblader character contest bey winner*
October
B 13 Fly Dragon Booster
B 00 Dark Bull Booster (Remake)
November
B 14 Cloudburst Knight Starter
B 00 Storm Spriggan (Remake)
December
B 15 End Of Whirlwind Set (includes a recolor of Cloudburst Knight & Evil Chaos, a stadium, and one LR Launcher)
B 00 Trygle (Remake)
Episode Titles:
Spoiler (Click to View)
3. The Mighty Shark! Whirlpool Forneus!
強大なサメ！ 渦のフォルネウス！
Kyōdaina same! Uzu no foruneusu!
4. Sword Vs Shark!
剣VSサメ！
Ken VS same!
5. Reborn From The Ashes! Inferno Phoenix!
灰の中から生まれ変わる! インフェルノフェニックス！
Hai no naka kara umarekawaru! Inferunofenikkusu!
6. Fear Of The Flames!
炎の恐怖！
Honō no kyōfu!
強大なサメ！ 渦のフォルネウス！
Kyōdaina same! Uzu no foruneusu!
4. Sword Vs Shark!
剣VSサメ！
Ken VS same!
5. Reborn From The Ashes! Inferno Phoenix!
灰の中から生まれ変わる! インフェルノフェニックス！
Hai no naka kara umarekawaru! Inferunofenikkusu!
6. Fear Of The Flames!
炎の恐怖！
Honō no kyōfu!
Updates:
Spoiler (Click to View)
*Like I said new episodes will release once a week so expect episode 3 next Saturday (They won't always be on a Friday)
*There will be holiday specials for Whirlwind specials and I'll have more info about this soon
*There will be a hiatus around mid - late April since that's will be around testing season
*There is a lot of surprises and I mean a lot in Whirlwind that I don't even want to spoil but just keep your eyes peeled..
*There will be holiday specials for Whirlwind specials and I'll have more info about this soon
*There will be a hiatus around mid - late April since that's will be around testing season
*There is a lot of surprises and I mean a lot in Whirlwind that I don't even want to spoil but just keep your eyes peeled..
RE: Bey100's Beyblade Whirlwind! *2nd episode out now!* - Turboblader - Mar. 01, 2024
(Mar. 01, 2024 8:58 PM)Bey100 Wrote: Products Listing For Whirlwind:
Spoiler (Click to View)February
B 01 Whirlwind Knight Starter
B 02 Whirlpool Forneus Starter
B 03 Whirlwind LR Launcher
B 04 Whirlwind Battle Set (Includes recolors of Knight & Forneus, a stadium, and two right launchers)
March
B 05 Inferno Phoenix Booster
April
B 06 Random Booster Volume 1 (Fierce Lynx)
May
B 07 Mighty Xcalibur Booster
B 00 L Drago Destructor Booster (Remake)
June
B 08 Whirlwhip Neptune Booster
July
B 09 Evil Chaos Starter
B 10 Random Booster Volume 2 (Storm Pegasus *Beansworth Beyblade*)
August
B 11 Glory Solomon Booster
September
B 12 Impact Rhinoceros Booster *Turboblader character contest bey winner*
October
B 13 Fly Dragon Booster
B 00 Dark Bull Booster (Remake)
November
B 14 Cloudburst Knight Starter
B 00 Storm Spriggan (Remake)
December
B 15 End Of Whirlwind Set (includes a recolor of Cloudburst Knight & Evil Chaos, a stadium, and one LR Launcher)
B 00 Trygle (Remake)
Episode Titles:
Spoiler (Click to View)3. The Mighty Shark! Whirlpool Forneus!
強大なサメ！ 渦のフォルネウス！
Kyōdaina same! Uzu no foruneusu!
4. Sword Vs Shark!
剣VSサメ！
Ken VS same!
5. Reborn From The Ashes! Inferno Phoenix!
灰の中から生まれ変わる! インフェルノフェニックス！
Hai no naka kara umarekawaru! Inferunofenikkusu!
6. Fear Of The Flames!
炎の恐怖！
Honō no kyōfu!
Updates:
Happy new month, new update Monday!Spoiler (Click to View)*Like I said new episodes will release once a week so expect episode 3 next Saturday (They won't always be on a Friday)
*There will be holiday specials for Whirlwind specials and I'll have more info about this soon
*There will be a hiatus around mid - late April since that's will be around testing season
*There is a lot of surprises and I mean a lot in Whirlwind that I don't even want to spoil but just keep your eyes peeled..
Oh yeah, Dark bull and storm Spryzen, have to admit balance types are pretty cool, I would if there will be any stamina type remakes.
RE: Bey100's Beyblade Whirlwind! - Bey100 - Mar. 04, 2024
☘️ BeySpring 2024 Announcement:
Spoiler (Click to View)
There will be a Patrick Day & Easter special for Whirlwind which would introduce special Patrick’s day & Easter Beyblade’s.