RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical - DJCAT8608 - Mar. 04, 2022
epic chapter, haha funny breaks
I guess making new pages is my job
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical - PikaBeyblade - Mar. 04, 2022
It used to be my job but I pass it down to you
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical - beansworth - Mar. 04, 2022
(Mar. 04, 2022 8:55 PM)PikaBeyblade Wrote: It used to be my job but I pass it down to you Ah, I remember the days...Lol
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical - PikaBeyblade - Mar. 04, 2022
(Mar. 04, 2022 9:05 PM)beansworth Wrote: (Mar. 04, 2022 8:55 PM)PikaBeyblade Wrote: It used to be my job but I pass it down to you Ah, I remember the days...Lol
Yeah those days were fun
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical - demon_king - Mar. 04, 2022
(Nov. 30, 2021 3:41 PM)beansworth Wrote: I've worked on this fanfiction for about 4 months and wanted to post it for some opinions on how it is.
This series takes place, about 16 years after DB and features the Mythical System.
The Mythical system consists of 5 parts, the Mythical Core, Mythical Blade, Mythical Armor, Disc and Driver.
The Mythical Core, is similar to the DB Core and Gachi Chip, the Mythical Blade is similar to the Sparking Rings and DB Blade, the Mythical Armor is similar to the Single Chassis from Sparking, and discs and drivers are the same.
Here are the character profiles:
Keith Shadis
Age:16
Height:5'9"
Beyblades: Astral Ragnurok Tapered Zeta' 3 (Random Combo) Destruction Kratos Shift Xtend+Metal Equal (Main Bey)
Baki Alcazaba
Age:16
Height:5'3"
Beyblades: Guilty Fafnir Nexus+S Xceed (Random Combo) Dynamic Bahamut Shift Atomic Metal Pressure (Main Bey)
Beyblade Burst
Mystic!
Chapter 1: Keith Shadis, Blader from Europe
A boat sails into frame
???: “Nice, I’m finally here!”
???: “Japan! Birthplace of Beyblade!”
The boat docks and ??? runs to the ladder down
???: “3..2..1..Go Shoot!”
Two bladers were battling in the park.
Baki: “I’ll beat you, my bey Gulity Fafnir will burst your bey instantly!”
Benny: “No you won’t, Prominence Belial, outspin him!”
Baki’s Guilty Fafnir then hit Benny’s Bey into the sky and it burst.
Baki: “See I won!”
??? walked up to Baki
???: “You like to Beyblade?”
Baki: “Yeah I love beyblading!”
???: “Well I’m Keith, and this is my bey Astral Ragnurok!”
Then on the T.Vs, BC Sol’s headquarters was shown.
Baki and Keith: “BC Sol, I’ll join their team one day.”
Valt walked into frame.
Keith (His Thoughts): “Valt! He’s so cool, one day I want to battle him!
Valt: “Yo what’s up?”
Valt: “I came with news about the blading world!”
Baki and Keith stood there ready for the news.
Valt grabbed his Beyblade, Holy Valkyrie
Valt: “A new Beyblade system has been announced! The Mystical System!”
Baki and Keith: *Gasp*
Valt took Valkyrie apart and placed it on the table in front of him.
Valt: “There are five parts in the Beyblade, the Core, the Blade, the Armor, the Disc, and the Driver.”
Keith looked at Valkyrie, I want to make a bey like that!
Baki looked at Valkyrie, I want to make a bey like that and Boa’s bey!
Valt then put Valkyrie back together.
Valt: “Now go out there and make some Mystic Beys!”
Then the T.V turned off, and Baki and Keith were excited ready to make their Mystic Beys
Baki: “Hey Keith, why don’t you come to my place to make a Mystic Bey too!”
Baki told Keith to his house to make Mystic Beys.
Inside Baki’s mansion, Baki’s maid, Irene came over and opened the door.
Irene: “Hello, Master Baki, you’ve returned home.”
Baki: “Irene, get the 3d printers ready.”
Irene: “Ugh, yes Master Baki.”
Irene had worked for Baki since she was 7 years old.
In the printer room, Baki and Keith were typing away on their keyboards.
Keith: “I need ultimate balance in my bey!
Baki: “Defense is the key in my bey!”
Then in about 1 hour, both Keith and Baki’s bey were done.
Keith: “My bey, Destruction Kratos is done now!”
Baki: “Dynamic Bahamut is finished as well.”
In the battle room.
Keith: “Alright Baki, let’s battle!”
Baki: “I’m down.”
Thoma, Baki’s butler, came downstairs to Baki and Keith
Thoma: “Master Baki asked me to be the referee of this match.”
Thoma: “Inspect your opponent’s Beyblade”
Keith’s mind “Bahamut is a counter-clockwise spinning bey, with a transforming blade, it seems to have the same disc as my bey, it’s driver features a huge metal ball too!”
Baki’s mind “Kratos is a clockwise spinning bey, with bound blades within all its two sides, those axes seem to be the biggest threat, we have the same disc, and his driver is like Aiga’s but with metal as the tip, hm, I’ll need to put everything into my launch.”
Thoma: “Ready and set!”
Baki: “3!”
Keith: “2!”
Baki and Keith: “1!”
“Go shoot!”
Baki spun in a circle before landing on both feet, pulling off a excellent launch
Keith pulled his ripcord as hard as possible, pulling off a good launch.
Bahamut drift, until it took the center
Keith: “Your going down Baki!”
Baki: “No I won’t lose, Bahamut!”
Bahamut’s avatar appeared, and Keith got ready for his assault.
Keith: “Kratos, awaken!”
Kratos’ avatar appeared, it’s axe gleamed.
Keith: “Bound Axe!”
Kratos slammed into the wall and it’s bound blade fully bound off the wall.
Keith: “Now, Destruction Impact!”
Kratos slammed into Bahamut, and burst itself.
Keith: “What just happened!”
Baki: “We need better launches that’s what.”
The Next Day
Keith was staying at Baki’s mansion, and the three went out on errands for Baki’s parents.
Irene walked over to a jewelery store to look around whilst Baki and Keith went to the park to see all the bladers in town.
???: “Now, end him!”
Baki and Keith walked over and saw a caped boy.
???: “Fallen Valkyrie, Fallen Wing Beat!”
Baki and Keith: “Valkyrie!?”
this roleplay is awsome
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical - Hollowmind13 - Mar. 04, 2022
(Mar. 04, 2022 9:32 PM)demon_king Wrote: (Nov. 30, 2021 3:41 PM)beansworth Wrote: I've worked on this fanfiction for about 4 months and wanted to post it for some opinions on how it is.
This series takes place, about 16 years after DB and features the Mythical System.
The Mythical system consists of 5 parts, the Mythical Core, Mythical Blade, Mythical Armor, Disc and Driver.
The Mythical Core, is similar to the DB Core and Gachi Chip, the Mythical Blade is similar to the Sparking Rings and DB Blade, the Mythical Armor is similar to the Single Chassis from Sparking, and discs and drivers are the same.
Here are the character profiles:
Keith Shadis
Age:16
Height:5'9"
Beyblades: Astral Ragnurok Tapered Zeta' 3 (Random Combo) Destruction Kratos Shift Xtend+Metal Equal (Main Bey)
Baki Alcazaba
Age:16
Height:5'3"
Beyblades: Guilty Fafnir Nexus+S Xceed (Random Combo) Dynamic Bahamut Shift Atomic Metal Pressure (Main Bey)
Beyblade Burst
Mystic!
Chapter 1: Keith Shadis, Blader from Europe
A boat sails into frame
???: “Nice, I’m finally here!”
???: “Japan! Birthplace of Beyblade!”
The boat docks and ??? runs to the ladder down
???: “3..2..1..Go Shoot!”
Two bladers were battling in the park.
Baki: “I’ll beat you, my bey Gulity Fafnir will burst your bey instantly!”
Benny: “No you won’t, Prominence Belial, outspin him!”
Baki’s Guilty Fafnir then hit Benny’s Bey into the sky and it burst.
Baki: “See I won!”
??? walked up to Baki
???: “You like to Beyblade?”
Baki: “Yeah I love beyblading!”
???: “Well I’m Keith, and this is my bey Astral Ragnurok!”
Then on the T.Vs, BC Sol’s headquarters was shown.
Baki and Keith: “BC Sol, I’ll join their team one day.”
Valt walked into frame.
Keith (His Thoughts): “Valt! He’s so cool, one day I want to battle him!
Valt: “Yo what’s up?”
Valt: “I came with news about the blading world!”
Baki and Keith stood there ready for the news.
Valt grabbed his Beyblade, Holy Valkyrie
Valt: “A new Beyblade system has been announced! The Mystical System!”
Baki and Keith: *Gasp*
Valt took Valkyrie apart and placed it on the table in front of him.
Valt: “There are five parts in the Beyblade, the Core, the Blade, the Armor, the Disc, and the Driver.”
Keith looked at Valkyrie, I want to make a bey like that!
Baki looked at Valkyrie, I want to make a bey like that and Boa’s bey!
Valt then put Valkyrie back together.
Valt: “Now go out there and make some Mystic Beys!”
Then the T.V turned off, and Baki and Keith were excited ready to make their Mystic Beys
Baki: “Hey Keith, why don’t you come to my place to make a Mystic Bey too!”
Baki told Keith to his house to make Mystic Beys.
Inside Baki’s mansion, Baki’s maid, Irene came over and opened the door.
Irene: “Hello, Master Baki, you’ve returned home.”
Baki: “Irene, get the 3d printers ready.”
Irene: “Ugh, yes Master Baki.”
Irene had worked for Baki since she was 7 years old.
In the printer room, Baki and Keith were typing away on their keyboards.
Keith: “I need ultimate balance in my bey!
Baki: “Defense is the key in my bey!”
Then in about 1 hour, both Keith and Baki’s bey were done.
Keith: “My bey, Destruction Kratos is done now!”
Baki: “Dynamic Bahamut is finished as well.”
In the battle room.
Keith: “Alright Baki, let’s battle!”
Baki: “I’m down.”
Thoma, Baki’s butler, came downstairs to Baki and Keith
Thoma: “Master Baki asked me to be the referee of this match.”
Thoma: “Inspect your opponent’s Beyblade”
Keith’s mind “Bahamut is a counter-clockwise spinning bey, with a transforming blade, it seems to have the same disc as my bey, it’s driver features a huge metal ball too!”
Baki’s mind “Kratos is a clockwise spinning bey, with bound blades within all its two sides, those axes seem to be the biggest threat, we have the same disc, and his driver is like Aiga’s but with metal as the tip, hm, I’ll need to put everything into my launch.”
Thoma: “Ready and set!”
Baki: “3!”
Keith: “2!”
Baki and Keith: “1!”
“Go shoot!”
Baki spun in a circle before landing on both feet, pulling off a excellent launch
Keith pulled his ripcord as hard as possible, pulling off a good launch.
Bahamut drift, until it took the center
Keith: “Your going down Baki!”
Baki: “No I won’t lose, Bahamut!”
Bahamut’s avatar appeared, and Keith got ready for his assault.
Keith: “Kratos, awaken!”
Kratos’ avatar appeared, it’s axe gleamed.
Keith: “Bound Axe!”
Kratos slammed into the wall and it’s bound blade fully bound off the wall.
Keith: “Now, Destruction Impact!”
Kratos slammed into Bahamut, and burst itself.
Keith: “What just happened!”
Baki: “We need better launches that’s what.”
The Next Day
Keith was staying at Baki’s mansion, and the three went out on errands for Baki’s parents.
Irene walked over to a jewelery store to look around whilst Baki and Keith went to the park to see all the bladers in town.
???: “Now, end him!”
Baki and Keith walked over and saw a caped boy.
???: “Fallen Valkyrie, Fallen Wing Beat!”
Baki and Keith: “Valkyrie!?”
this roleplay is awsome .
Not really a roleplay, but I won't blame you.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical - beansworth - Mar. 09, 2022
Okay so after thinking about it, Mystical has some changes each spoiler will have some changes.
Amount of Chapters.
Okay so I thought about it and the series will no longer have any confirmed amount of chapters, right now I think I could write up to 60+ chapters. And considering I'm barely started with the Yacht Battle Cruise and it's run, I think I could end up with 70+ chapters.
Chapter Release Dates.
Okay so I want to have Chapters coming out a lot but writing them can be tough, but I plan to have 2 every week hopefully.
Future of Mystical/Odyssey
This might be the longest one, so Mystical after I'm done writing it, will have a sequal. That currently is going to be named Beyblade Burst: Legends. And that will of course be like Naruto: Shippuden and have the characters from Mystic come back after 3 years of training. Meaning most of them will be 17-19, and some older but, the topic of Legends will be discussed closer to the actual release. And Odyssey, I do plan to continue it but I am completely re-writing it, and it will be coming out again.
I've done this before but if you could give feedback for Mystical that would help me with the upcoming arcs.
Story-1/10
Plot-1/10
Characters-1/10
Length-1/10
Battles(The Bey Battles)-1/10
This would help improve Mystical so if you could please fill this out.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical - beansworth - Mar. 09, 2022
Chapter time Chapter time!
32, let's go!
Chapter 33: Duo’s Battles Begin! Two Eyes!?
{The day had arrived and Keith was standing on the deck, looking out over the ocean.}
Keith grabbed Kratos and said:
Keith(Modest): “Ready for today, Kratos? We’ll be working with Izuku to battle Daishi and Annie.”
{Then as he spoke, he felt someone pressed against his back, and saw their arms around his chest.
He turned his head, and saw Irene, hugging him.}
Keith(Happy): “Oh, hey Irene. How are you today?”
{She smiled, while hugging him and said}
Irene(Happy): “I’m good, but do you know what today is?”
Keith(Confused): “No, I don’t? What’s so special?”
{She smiled, and pressed her head against his back more.}
Irene(Happy): “It’s my birthday, silly.”
Keith smiled, and hugged Irene.
Keith(Happy): “Of course, it is! I could never forget my girlfriend’s birthday!”
Irene(sarcastic): "Yeah, of course you wouldn't"
{Obito walked up the stairs, and saw Keith and Irene.}
Obito(Cold): “Wow, one of the strongest bladers, held back by his girlfriend.”
{Keith turned to Obito, and had a angry look on his face.}
Keith(Irritated): “Wow, says the one who follows Van Aoi, who needs to break beys to win.”
{Obito and Keith closed the distance between each other, and Obito said.}
Obito(Cold): “Okay, Mr. Short-Fuse. If your so strong, then why did your bey break?”
{Keith clenched his fist, and grit his teeth, Irene ran forward and held onto Keith’s arm.}
Irene(Concerned): “Keith, don’t get mad with him. There’s no point!”
{Keith calmed himself, and let his fists go.
Obito then looked to Keith, and his eye pierced Keith’s soul, then Keith said.}
Keith(Calm): “Show me your face, Obito Uchiha.”
{Obito heard those words, and clenched his fists, and grabbed Keith’s shirt.}
Obito(Pissed): “Listen here little piece of scum: My mask never comes off!”
{Then Izuku walked up and said}
Izuku(Irritated): “Hey, lay off my partner.”
{Obito let go off Keith and walked away, and Izuku walked over to Keith and said}
Izuku(Chill): “Hey dude, I’m Izuku Suzuki. And I fight with my Mystic Bey, Ravage Iapetus.”
{Keith smiled and high fived Izuku, and the two began talking, while Irene stood at the front of the ship, and said to herself}
Irene(Whispering): “I wish Keith would spend a little more time with me.”
{Keith and Izuku walked to the stadium and saw Daishi and Annie standing on the opposite site.}
Keith(Confident): “Alright Izuku, I think we can win!”
Izuku(Excited): “Of course we will, we got us strong bladers!”
Annie: "So we are battling?" (grinning) "Alright, Daishi?"
Daishi: "Let's do it then"
{Daishi put Diabolos onto his launcher and got ready to launch and everyone else followed.}
All: “3! 2! 1! Go Shoot!”
{Kratos, Diabolos, Iapetus and Atropos Moirai all hit the stadium floor, and Kratos took center, while Diabolos, Iapetus and Moirai sped around the outer ridge.}
{Keith looked at Diabolos and saw, that it has a Blade with six downward facing blades, and it was white and red.}
Keith(Surprised): “Wait what’s that!?”
{Iapetus hit Diabolos and it had the opposite movement pattern a right spin would have, and Keith realized what was up with Diabolos.}
Keith(Surprised): “I figured it out! Diabolos is a Dual Spinning Bey, and now it’s in the Left Mode!”
Daishi(Cold): “Take Iapetus down, Void Smash.”
{Diabolos and Iapetus clashed and Diabolos hit Iapetus into the air.}
Daishi(Cold): “Your done.”
Izuku(Excited): “That’s what you’d think, now Iapetus! Ravage Strike!”
{Iapetus dove down and hit Diabolos, launching off Diabolos, and hit the stadium floor.}
Annie(Cold): “Now, Unbeknownst Strike!”
{Moirai hit Kratos and launched it to the far wall, and Kratos hit the wall, and drift on the edge of Change’s Defense Driver.}
Keith(Excited): “Alright! Kratos, let’s go! God Sync!”
{Kratos awakened and synchronized with Keith, and Kratos shot towards Diabolos.}
Keith(Sync): “Now go! Mythical Crush!”
{Kratos and Diabolos hit each other, and began clashing and Daishi’s face changed from calm to angry and he yelled.}
Daishi(Angry): “Now, Diabolos! Void Scythe!”
{Diabolos hit Kratos into the air, jumping with the Cannon driver activation, and Kratos was hit with 8 purple avatar blades. Kratos clicked twice.}
Keith(Nervous): “Alright Kratos! You held on!”
Daishi(Shocked): “How didn’t Kratos burst!?”
{Then Atropos and Iapetus shot towards each other.}
Izuku(Excited): “Alright Iapetus! Ravage Saber!”
Annie(Calm): “Hold steady, Moirai! Unknowing Crash!”
{Then Moirai and Iapetus hit each other, and Moirai launched Iapetus into the air, and Iapetus began falling.}
Izuku(Shocked): “Woah! You two like sending Iapetus into the air!”
Izuku grinned and called
Izuku(Excited): “Iapetus, let’s do this thing! Ravage Sync!”
{Iapetus’ avatar awakened and synced with Izuku and his aura changed.}
Izuku(Sync): “This is the truest form of Sync! True Sync is what I’ve named it. Now, Ravage Crash!”
{Iapetus dove down into Moirai and burst it, but then burst itself.}
Annie(Shocked): “Are you kidding!?”
Izuku(Disappointed): “Aw, I wanted to help Keith win.”
Annie(frustated): "Well, you took me down so that's already helping."
Izuku(happy): "Yeah, you're right!"
Annie(frustated): "As always."
Keith(Sync): “Kratos! We will win!”
Daishi(Angry): “No, I won’t lose again! Void Sync!”
{Both beys shot towards each other, and both bladers wore faces determined to win.}
Both: “Ragh! We will beat you! Keith/Daishi!”
Daishi(Sync): “Void Scythe!”
Keith(Sync): “Mythical Crush!”
{Both beys hit each other, and huge gales of wind formed and no one could see the beys clashing, well except for the Boys, who when synced with their beys could see their beys no matter what.}
{Keith grit his teeth and called}
Keith(Sync): “Go on! Kratos!”
Daishi(Sync): “Devour! Diabolos!”
{Then the wind disappeared, and everyone saw both beys in the air, and both were very close to bursting}
Shu(Shocked): “I don’t believe it.”
{Both beys started falling down}
Keith(Sync): “Come on, Kratos! We can win! Mythical Rebound!”
Daishi(Sync): “Don’t back down, Diabolos! We will win!”
{Kratos and Diabolos hit the stadium floor with the layer, but Kratos used the bound to burst after Diabolos}
{Daishi fell to his knees and yelled}
Daishi(Pissed): “Are you kidding me!”
{Annie pat him in the back}
Annie(slightly scared): "It's fine, you did your best" (mind) "That guy is something else, beating Daishi is hard."
{Keith caught the Layer and Driver of Kratos and said}
Keith(Proud): “Good job, Kratos!”
{Shu raised his right arm and called}
Shu: “Keith and Kratos take the victory! Three stars are awarded to Keith and Izuku.”
{Both bladers high fived, and walked away to the deck of the ship. Daishi and Annie followed.}
Annie(forcing a smile): "We can go to the therapy if you want"
Daishi(frustated): "I'm fine"
{On the deck, Keith pointed out someone.}
Keith(Confused): “Who’s the guy with the long jacket?"
Izuku(excited): "Maybe a new blader?"
{He turned to them, wearing a white mask with two eye openings, the mask’s design had three flames. Two by the eyes and one on the top of the mask.}
Masked Man(Cold): “Hello. I’ve evolved into my truest form.”
Keith(Nervous): “Just who are you!?”
Masked Man(Cold): “Wow, it should be easy. I’m Obito Uchiha.
{Keith gasped and said}
Keith(Surprised): “No way, you're completely different!”
Izuku: "You're exaggerating don't you think?"
{Obito grinned and said}
Obito(Cold): “Well I am the same, so deal with it.”
{Obito walked away and Van stood there, watching Obito.}
Van(Calm): “Yo, Obito! How you have been?”
Obito looked up to Van and said,
Obito(Calm): “I’ve been fine, and as you can see, changed my mask.”
{Van chuckled and jumped down to Obito}
Van: "Honestly, I like that one more. Can I have your old one?"
{The two walked away.}
{Keith stood there and his hair blew in the wind, and he walked under deck to his room, and opened his door.}
{Keith entered his room and opened his closet and grabbed the three wrapped boxes, and grabbed a few other things and ran to Irene’s room.}
{He knocked on the door, but no one answered.}
Keith(Excited): “Alright she’s not here right now, I’ll open her door, and wait for her!”
{He opened her door, and went inside her room and placed the gifts on the bed, and sat down and turned off the lights.}
Keith(Excited): “I’ll make sure Irene has the best birthday!”
{Irene walked down the stairs, and she was talking with Lucy, Brooklyn, Baki and Himawari.}
Irene(Sad): “I wish he knew it was my birthday.”
Lucy: “I’m sure he does know, Irene." (Especially because you told him) "Maybe he’s planned something for you?”
"Irene smiled and said"
Irene(Happy): “Yeah, maybe. Well I’ll see you guys tomorrow!”
{Everyone waved bye to Irene and she entered her room, and heard}
Keith(Happy and loudly): “Happy birthday, Irene!!”
Lucy(off screen): "AAAAAAAAH!!"
Baki(off screen): "Well now I'm deaf, thanks Keith!"
{Irene and Keith laughed a little. Irene was smiling and teared up.}
Keith(Shocked): “Wait, Irene! Are you okay?”
Irene(Crying): “I’m amazing! Thank you so much, Keith!”
{She hugged Keith and he hugged her back, and the two talked while she opened her gifts from him.
As the two talked, time sped by and soon it was midnight and two people stood on the deck, those people being Baki and Lucy.}
{Baki turned to Lucy, his hair flew with the wind, and he said}
Baki(Confident): “Lucy, I need to tell you something.”
Lucy(playful): "It's better not be about me screaming"
Baki(confident): "It is... something else"
{Lucy blushed a little}
Lucy(Nervous): “What is it, Baki?”
Yeah! Keith and Irene ship time, and Baki and Lucy need to talk?
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical - PikaBeyblade - Mar. 09, 2022
So what’s the talk for
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical - Hollowmind13 - Mar. 09, 2022
(Mar. 09, 2022 10:45 PM)PikaBeyblade Wrote: So what’s the talk for .
I think it is about how Baki is secretly an agent hired by the WBBA to stop Van, not sure tho.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical - UnseenBurst - Mar. 09, 2022
(Mar. 09, 2022 1:56 PM)beansworth Wrote: Chapter time Chapter time!
32, let's go!
Chapter 33: Duo’s Battles Begin! Two Eyes!?
{The day had arrived and Keith was standing on the deck, looking out over the ocean.}
Keith grabbed Kratos and said:
Keith(Modest): “Ready for today, Kratos? We’ll be working with Izuku to battle Daishi and Annie.”
{Then as he spoke, he felt someone pressed against his back, and saw their arms around his chest.
He turned his head, and saw Irene, hugging him.}
Keith(Happy): “Oh, hey Irene. How are you today?”
{She smiled, while hugging him and said}
Irene(Happy): “I’m good, but do you know what today is?”
Keith(Confused): “No, I don’t? What’s so special?”
{She smiled, and pressed her head against his back more.}
Irene(Happy): “It’s my birthday, silly.”
Keith smiled, and hugged Irene.
Keith(Happy): “Of course, it is! I could never forget my girlfriend’s birthday!”
Irene(sarcastic): "Yeah, of course you wouldn't"
{Obito walked up the stairs, and saw Keith and Irene.}
Obito(Cold): “Wow, one of the strongest bladers, held back by his girlfriend.”
{Keith turned to Obito, and had a angry look on his face.}
Keith(Irritated): “Wow, says the one who follows Van Aoi, who needs to break beys to win.”
{Obito and Keith closed the distance between each other, and Obito said.}
Obito(Cold): “Okay, Mr. Short-Fuse. If your so strong, then why did your bey break?”
{Keith clenched his fist, and grit his teeth, Irene ran forward and held onto Keith’s arm.}
Irene(Concerned): “Keith, don’t get mad with him. There’s no point!”
{Keith calmed himself, and let his fists go.
Obito then looked to Keith, and his eye pierced Keith’s soul, then Keith said.}
Keith(Calm): “Show me your face, Obito Uchiha.”
{Obito heard those words, and clenched his fists, and grabbed Keith’s shirt.}
Obito(Pissed): “Listen here little piece of scum: My mask never comes off!”
{Then Izuku walked up and said}
Izuku(Irritated): “Hey, lay off my partner.”
{Obito let go off Keith and walked away, and Izuku walked over to Keith and said}
Izuku(Chill): “Hey dude, I’m Izuku Suzuki. And I fight with my Mystic Bey, Ravage Iapetus.”
{Keith smiled and high fived Izuku, and the two began talking, while Irene stood at the front of the ship, and said to herself}
Irene(Whispering): “I wish Keith would spend a little more time with me.”
{Keith and Izuku walked to the stadium and saw Daishi and Annie standing on the opposite site.}
Keith(Confident): “Alright Izuku, I think we can win!”
Izuku(Excited): “Of course we will, we got us strong bladers!”
Annie: "So we are battling?" (grinning) "Alright, Daishi?"
Daishi: "Let's do it then"
{Daishi put Diabolos onto his launcher and got ready to launch and everyone else followed.}
All: “3! 2! 1! Go Shoot!”
{Kratos, Diabolos, Iapetus and Atropos Moirai all hit the stadium floor, and Kratos took center, while Diabolos, Iapetus and Moirai sped around the outer ridge.}
{Keith looked at Diabolos and saw, that it has a Blade with six downward facing blades, and it was white and red.}
Keith(Surprised): “Wait what’s that!?”
{Iapetus hit Diabolos and it had the opposite movement pattern a right spin would have, and Keith realized what was up with Diabolos.}
Keith(Surprised): “I figured it out! Diabolos is a Dual Spinning Bey, and now it’s in the Left Mode!”
Daishi(Cold): “Take Iapetus down, Void Smash.”
{Diabolos and Iapetus clashed and Diabolos hit Iapetus into the air.}
Daishi(Cold): “Your done.”
Izuku(Excited): “That’s what you’d think, now Iapetus! Ravage Strike!”
{Iapetus dove down and hit Diabolos, launching off Diabolos, and hit the stadium floor.}
Annie(Cold): “Now, Unbeknownst Strike!”
{Moirai hit Kratos and launched it to the far wall, and Kratos hit the wall, and drift on the edge of Change’s Defense Driver.}
Keith(Excited): “Alright! Kratos, let’s go! God Sync!”
{Kratos awakened and synchronized with Keith, and Kratos shot towards Diabolos.}
Keith(Sync): “Now go! Mythical Crush!”
{Kratos and Diabolos hit each other, and began clashing and Daishi’s face changed from calm to angry and he yelled.}
Daishi(Angry): “Now, Diabolos! Void Scythe!”
{Diabolos hit Kratos into the air, jumping with the Cannon driver activation, and Kratos was hit with 8 purple avatar blades. Kratos clicked twice.}
Keith(Nervous): “Alright Kratos! You held on!”
Daishi(Shocked): “How didn’t Kratos burst!?”
{Then Atropos and Iapetus shot towards each other.}
Izuku(Excited): “Alright Iapetus! Ravage Saber!”
Annie(Calm): “Hold steady, Moirai! Unknowing Crash!”
{Then Moirai and Iapetus hit each other, and Moirai launched Iapetus into the air, and Iapetus began falling.}
Izuku(Shocked): “Woah! You two like sending Iapetus into the air!”
Izuku grinned and called
Izuku(Excited): “Iapetus, let’s do this thing! Ravage Sync!”
{Iapetus’ avatar awakened and synced with Izuku and his aura changed.}
Izuku(Sync): “This is the truest form of Sync! True Sync is what I’ve named it. Now, Ravage Crash!”
{Iapetus dove down into Moirai and burst it, but then burst itself.}
Annie(Shocked): “Are you kidding!?”
Izuku(Disappointed): “Aw, I wanted to help Keith win.”
Annie(frustated): "Well, you took me down so that's already helping."
Izuku(happy): "Yeah, you're right!"
Annie(frustated): "As always."
Keith(Sync): “Kratos! We will win!”
Daishi(Angry): “No, I won’t lose again! Void Sync!”
{Both beys shot towards each other, and both bladers wore faces determined to win.}
Both: “Ragh! We will beat you! Keith/Daishi!”
Daishi(Sync): “Void Scythe!”
Keith(Sync): “Mythical Crush!”
{Both beys hit each other, and huge gales of wind formed and no one could see the beys clashing, well except for the Boys, who when synced with their beys could see their beys no matter what.}
{Keith grit his teeth and called}
Keith(Sync): “Go on! Kratos!”
Daishi(Sync): “Devour! Diabolos!”
{Then the wind disappeared, and everyone saw both beys in the air, and both were very close to bursting}
Shu(Shocked): “I don’t believe it.”
{Both beys started falling down}
Keith(Sync): “Come on, Kratos! We can win! Mythical Rebound!”
Daishi(Sync): “Don’t back down, Diabolos! We will win!”
{Kratos and Diabolos hit the stadium floor with the layer, but Kratos used the bound to burst after Diabolos}
{Daishi fell to his knees and yelled}
Daishi(Pissed): “Are you kidding me!”
{Annie pat him in the back}
Annie(slightly scared): "It's fine, you did your best" (mind) "That guy is something else, beating Daishi is hard."
{Keith caught the Layer and Driver of Kratos and said}
Keith(Proud): “Good job, Kratos!”
{Shu raised his right arm and called}
Shu: “Keith and Kratos take the victory! Three stars are awarded to Keith and Izuku.”
{Both bladers high fived, and walked away to the deck of the ship. Daishi and Annie followed.}
Annie(forcing a smile): "We can go to the therapy if you want"
Daishi(frustated): "I'm fine"
{On the deck, Keith pointed out someone.}
Keith(Confused): “Who’s the guy with the long jacket?"
Izuku(excited): "Maybe a new blader?"
{He turned to them, wearing a white mask with two eye openings, the mask’s design had three flames. Two by the eyes and one on the top of the mask.}
Masked Man(Cold): “Hello. I’ve evolved into my truest form.”
Keith(Nervous): “Just who are you!?”
Masked Man(Cold): “Wow, it should be easy. I’m Obito Uchiha.
{Keith gasped and said}
Keith(Surprised): “No way, you're completely different!”
Izuku: "You're exaggerating don't you think?"
{Obito grinned and said}
Obito(Cold): “Well I am the same, so deal with it.”
{Obito walked away and Van stood there, watching Obito.}
Van(Calm): “Yo, Obito! How you have been?”
Obito looked up to Van and said,
Obito(Calm): “I’ve been fine, and as you can see, changed my mask.”
{Van chuckled and jumped down to Obito}
Van: "Honestly, I like that one more. Can I have your old one?"
{The two walked away.}
{Keith stood there and his hair blew in the wind, and he walked under deck to his room, and opened his door.}
{Keith entered his room and opened his closet and grabbed the three wrapped boxes, and grabbed a few other things and ran to Irene’s room.}
{He knocked on the door, but no one answered.}
Keith(Excited): “Alright she’s not here right now, I’ll open her door, and wait for her!”
{He opened her door, and went inside her room and placed the gifts on the bed, and sat down and turned off the lights.}
Keith(Excited): “I’ll make sure Irene has the best birthday!”
{Irene walked down the stairs, and she was talking with Lucy, Brooklyn, Baki and Himawari.}
Irene(Sad): “I wish he knew it was my birthday.”
Lucy: “I’m sure he does know, Irene." (Especially because you told him) "Maybe he’s planned something for you?”
"Irene smiled and said"
Irene(Happy): “Yeah, maybe. Well I’ll see you guys tomorrow!”
{Everyone waved bye to Irene and she entered her room, and heard}
Keith(Happy and loudly): “Happy birthday, Irene!!”
Lucy(off screen): "AAAAAAAAH!!"
Baki(off screen): "Well now I'm deaf, thanks Keith!"
{Irene and Keith laughed a little. Irene was smiling and teared up.}
Keith(Shocked): “Wait, Irene! Are you okay?”
Irene(Crying): “I’m amazing! Thank you so much, Keith!”
{She hugged Keith and he hugged her back, and the two talked while she opened her gifts from him.
As the two talked, time sped by and soon it was midnight and two people stood on the deck, those people being Baki and Lucy.}
{Baki turned to Lucy, his hair flew with the wind, and he said}
Baki(Confident): “Lucy, I need to tell you something.”
Lucy(playful): "It's better not be about me screaming"
Baki(confident): "It is... something else"
{Lucy blushed a little}
Lucy(Nervous): “What is it, Baki?”
Yeah! Keith and Irene ship time, and Baki and Lucy need to talk?
Izuku's Debute is actually very good in this episode. Izuku kinda did Irene dirty by just spending most of is time with Keith. Me literally forgets that Irene and Keith are a thing now. Anyways I'm pretty excited for the Next Couple of Chapters and what's coming for the future of this fanfic! Keep up the Amazing Work and you did Amazing on Izuku's Introduction!
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical - PikaBeyblade - Mar. 10, 2022
(Mar. 09, 2022 11:39 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: (Mar. 09, 2022 10:45 PM)PikaBeyblade Wrote: So what’s the talk for .
I think it is about how Baki is secretly an agent hired by the WBBA to stop Van, not sure tho.
Man that would be cool like Tsubasa
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical - Hollowmind13 - Mar. 10, 2022
(Mar. 10, 2022 6:19 PM)PikaBeyblade Wrote: (Mar. 09, 2022 11:39 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: .
I think it is about how Baki is secretly an agent hired by the WBBA to stop Van, not sure tho.
Man that would be cool like Tsubasa .
Yeah, but I lied
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical - beansworth - Mar. 10, 2022
(Mar. 10, 2022 7:36 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: (Mar. 10, 2022 6:19 PM)PikaBeyblade Wrote: Man that would be cool like Tsubasa .
Yeah, but I lied Haha, I never finished Metal Fight, so I don't get the Tsubasa joke. Although I should finish Metal Fight.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical - PikaBeyblade - Mar. 10, 2022
(Mar. 10, 2022 7:36 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: (Mar. 10, 2022 6:19 PM)PikaBeyblade Wrote: Man that would be cool like Tsubasa .
Yeah, but I lied
You lied!! OMG you traitor jk
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical - DJCAT8608 - Mar. 15, 2022
*waiting for next chapter be like*
(yes i'm bumping this, cry about it)
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical - PikaBeyblade - Mar. 15, 2022
What Barry’s appearance would be like as an teenager and adult(Long post ik)
Also he had a massive growth spurt
Age: 13
Height: 5’2
Weight: 93 lbs
Body type: slim
Age: 14
Height: 5’5
Weight: 125 lbs
Body type: slim
Age: 15
Height: 5’7
Weight: 139 lbs
Body type: toned from Beyblade(Yes it’s a sport deal with it)
Age: 16
Height: 5’11
Weight: 154 lbs
Body type: toned
Age: 17
Height: 6’1
Weight: 210 lbs
Body type: muscular from Beyblade(ITS A SPORT)
Age: 18
Height: 6’2
Weight: 215 lbs
Body type: muscular from Beyblade(it’s a sport
Age: 19
Height: 6’4
Weight: 225 lbs
Body type: same as ages 17-18
New OC(very uncalled for)
Eren Jaeger(I decided to try an anime name like beansworth’s Keith)
Age: 15
Eyes: Blue
Hair: Brown
Personality: A energetic boy that can be aggressive but also has an encyclopedic knowledge of Beyblade.
Power Level: (Same as Barry)
Height: 5’7
Weight: 139 lbs
Beyblade: Charred Eurynomos Weight Hunter’
Layer: Charred Eurynomos: A 2-bladed layer with metal mounted on the blades and 4 standard locks: Weight: 42.1 grams
Disc: Weight: A very heavy disc: Weight: 40.1 grams
Driver: Hunter’: self-explanatory
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical - beansworth - Mar. 16, 2022
Chapter 33: Shipping Time, plus a bey evolution.
Chapter 33:
Chapter 34: Confess! / Arrival! Obito Uchiha!
{12:00 AM, December 26th, 2022.}
Baki stood on the deck of the Yacht and said,
Baki(Confident): “Lucy Kurenai, I need to tell you something.”
{Lucy thought of what Baki could want to tell her}
Lucy(Curious): “Yeah, Baki?”
{Baki then thought about what he was going to say, and blushed}
Baki(Flustered): “Lucy, the thing is… How do I say it... uhh..."
{Baki was getting nervous}
Baki(Flustered): "I uhh... I..." (breaths slowly) "I heard what you said the other day... in Valhalla."
{Lucy doesn't recall}
Baki(blushing a little more): "About you having a... crush on me"
{Lucy does recall and blushes, hiding some of her face on the scarf}
Baki(Flustered): "And I just... I just want to say that I... I have a crush on you too."
{Lucy heard Baki clearly and blushed deeper, hiding her face in the scarf. Baki looked to the ocean, and was blushing deeply as well.}
{The two tried to look at each other, but couldn’t as they both were almost consumed by their blush.}
Baki(Flustered): “O-oh I just remember, I have to help Keith with uhh... training! yeah, bye!"
{Baki blushed more and starting running to his room, when Lucy grabbed his arm.
He looked back and saw her eyes, the only thing out of her scarf.}
Lucy(Flustered): “W—wait.”
{Baki then stood there, and the two looked at each other, and Lucy said nothing.}
Baki: “Y-yeah?”
{Lucy then moved forward, and whispered}
Lucy(Flustered): “I...”
{She lightly kissed his check and ran downstairs. He stood there and almost fell over while breathing heavy.}
Baki(Flustered): “Oh my god, what just happened!?”
Bahamut(proud): "That's the Baki I'm talking about!"
Baki(Drained): "I feel like I just took a lead ball off my chest"
{He walked slowly downstairs to his room, and hid under his covers. Soon daybreak came.}
{Keith got out of his bed and stretched,
Irene was still sleeping in a sleeping bag. Keith looked at her and then at the room around}
Keith(mind): "Well that is awkward"
{Keith smiled while gently tapping her}
Keith(Whispered): “It’s time to wake up, Irene.”
{She yawned, and rolled over to Keith}
Irene(Tired): “Just 5 more minutes...”
{She got up, and entered the bathroom to change, while Keith got changed as well.}
{They both exited his room, and got to the dining hall, where everyone else was.}
{Obito, Van, Payne and Daishi all sat at a table together, and all of Valhalla sat together.
Keith and Irene went up and grabbed their breakfasts and sat down.}
Baki: "Oh hey Keith and Irene, did you guys also noticed the..." (Whispering) "... New Obito's mask?"
Keith: "Yeah, I saw him with it yesterday"
{The Legends entered the room, and Valt called out.}
Valt(Happy): “Alright bladers! Ready for today? We’ll be arriving at our first stop, at Onigashima Island!”
{Keith remembered when he went there, and first met War.}
Valt: “With this stop, the top three ranking star bladers will make a team of three and battle against the legend team of Lui Shirasagijo, Drum Koryu and Bell Daikokuten. Their bey team consists of Extinction Longinus, Crescent Dragon, Deadly Belial.”
{Free stood up from the wall (he was leaning on it)}
Free(Calm): “And the one’s with the most stars are... Lemme see..."
{Free grabs a paper from his pocket}
Free(focused on the paper} " Ok: Keith with 5, Izuku with 3 and a four way tie between Barry, Lucy, Baki and... Obito. You four will have a battle royale to decide the winner.”
{Obito, Baki, Lucy and Barry all got up and walked over while Keith jumped up and said}
Keith(Excited): “I’m in First!”
Chloe(annoyed): "Chill! No need to rub it on our faces!"
Keith(awkward): "Oh uh, sorry!"
{The four bladers stood at the stadium and readied their launches, and Obito’s was different.}
Izuku(curious): "Changing tactics? This will be fun!"
{Everyone did their normal launches, but Obito pushed his right foot back and lifted his left arm, that would pull the String. He then darted forward, and stopped abruptly and stopped his left foot, and pull the string.}
All: “Go Shoot!”
{Orion, Bahamut, Bellerophon and Loki hit the stadium floor. Bahamut took center while Bellerophon and Orion shot towards the outer ridge.}
Barry(Excited): “We’ll take Obito down, Bellerophon! Revolution Flash!”
{Obito squinted his eyes}
Obito(Sarcastic): “You really think your Attack Type is anything to MY Orion!?”
{Obito clenched his fists and called}
Obito(Calm): “Now, Orion! Re-write the stars and make our fate better! Zodiac Shatter!”
{Orion and Bellerophon clashed. Orion hit Bellerophon out of the stadium, and Barry called}
Barry(Defeated): “Already!?”
Lucy(a bit shocked): "W-Well don't worry, we will avenge you!"
{Orion rushed to the center, where Bahamut was.}
Obito(mind): "Orion isn't hitting as hard now is it?" (calm) “Orion, now! Zodiac Burst!”
{Orion went to the center, and Loki intercepted it.}
Obito(Irritated): “I don’t care who’s in my way, Orion will destroy them!”
{Orion and Loki began clashing and Bahamut drift of Atomic’s outer ring.}
Baki(Excited): “Alright, go for Dynamic Crush!”
{Bahamut slammed into Orion and Loki and all the beys were thrown to the walls. Loki and Bahamut went over while Orion barely stayed in.}
{Obito then grabbed Orion before Free could even announce him the winner.}
Obito(Calm): “Now it’s time I evolve Orion with me.”
{He walked down the stairsand met with Requiem’s members, which now included Daishi.}
Lilia: "Time is running out Annie, just finish it already and we can go home." (holds Lachesis Moirai) "You know what they said."
Annie: "I have hope in him."
Lilia(mind): "Chloe will have to know about this"
{Obito and the Requiem team are walking through the corridors}
Van(Calm): “Alright, so you’ll be evolving Orion?”
Obito(Calm): “Yes, and I’ve already thought about his evolution: Ωmega Ωrion Comet Velocity-Nova. It will be my new Orion.”
{Van, Obito, Payne and Daishi all walked into Van’s room, and began working on the new Orion.
Shu walked up to Keith and asked}
Shu(Curious): “Alright, what bladers do you want on your team, Keith?”
Keith(Confident): “I’ll take Irene Mao, and….hm.”
Shu: “Can’t decide between all your friends huh? Understandable.”
{Keith looked around, and saw a girl with about medium lengthed, black hair and said}
Keith(Curious): “What’s her name?”
Shu looked over, the girl was leaning on the wall while using the phone}
Shu: “Oh, that must be Kaede Midoriya, she’s a Defense Blader.”
Keith: “Alright, I’ll take her.”
{Shu nodded, and walked to Izuku, and asked}
Shu(Curious): “Alright, your turn. Who do you want on your team?”
Izuku(Excited): “Well that's easy, Brooklyn and Yuito!”
S{hu nodded, and wrote their names down, and walked to Obito}
Shu: “Who do you want?”
{Obito looked to his comrades}
Obito(Serious): “I’ll have Daishi and Van.”
{Shu wrote the names down and sent them to Valt, Free and Lui.}
{Lui showed the names to Bell and Drum.}
Drum(Excited): “These seem like a bunch of strong bladers!”
{Bell jumped up, and called}
Bell(Excited): “I can’t wait to use Belial!”
Lui: "Don't get too excited, they are just kids." (smirks) "But they better pull up a fight"
{Whilst on the Yacht, Keith and Valhalla were all eating together. While they ate, Keith saw Kaede sitting alone.}
Keith(Curious): “I’ll be right back, I’m gonna invite Kaede over.”
{Keith walked over to Kaede, and she was picking at her food while her bey sat on the table.}
Keith(Curious): “Hey Kaede, would you like to join our table?”
Kaede(Scared): “Eep!!”
Keith almost fell over, when Kaede jumped and she almost instantly began saying,
Kaede(Guilty): “I’m sorry! I didn’t mean to scare you!”
Keith laughed and said,
Keith: “Nah it’s fine, I just wanted to ask if you wanted to join our table?”
Kaede: "Sure"
{Kaede got up and walked to their table}
Keith: "Ok, I'm Keith, She's Irene, they're Baki and Barry and last but not least, Lucy"
{Everyone greeted Kaede}
Kaede(awkwardly): "Hi. I'm Kaede as you may already know. And I'm in Keith's team now I guess."
Baki(curious): "From your name I figured you're related to Kensuke Midoriya, right?"
Kaede(nervous): "Y-yeah, I even made my own Kerbeus"
{Baki awed to her bey while the others were staring at him, with Kaede's hand shaking while holding the bey}
Barry(worried): "What was on his food?"
{Soon nightfall hit and everyone went to sleep but two people were still up: Lucy and Baki.}
{Baki was out on the deck, practicing with Bahamut, when Lucy walked up to him from behind.}
Lucy(Whispered): “H—hey, Baki?”
{Baki jumped, and then saw it was the timid, Lucy Kurenai.}
{Baki then recalled this morning and blushed.}
Baki(Flustered): “Um, yeah what is it?”
{Lucy went to hide her face, but then she let go of her scarf and asked}
Lucy(Flustered): “Do you actually like me?”
Baki(Confused): “Of course I do! I made it very clear this morning.”
{Lucy then held onto his hand}
Lucy(Tearing up): “Will you then please be my boyfriend?”
Next time on Beyblade Burst: Mystical!
Keith, Irene and Kaede face off aganist legendary bladers, Lui, Bell and Drum. Can they win or will they lose trying to beat the legends, find out on Chapter 34!
Keith: "3! 2! 1! Go Shoot!"
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical - Anime Blader - Mar. 16, 2022
(Mar. 15, 2022 1:52 PM)PikaBeyblade Wrote: What Barry’s appearance would be like as an teenager and adult(Long post ik)
Also he had a massive growth spurt
Age: 13
Height: 5’2
Weight: 93 lbs
Body type: slim
Age: 14
Height: 5’5
Weight: 125 lbs
Body type: slim
Age: 15
Height: 5’7
Weight: 139 lbs
Body type: toned from Beyblade(Yes it’s a sport deal with it)
Age: 16
Height: 5’11
Weight: 154 lbs
Body type: toned
Age: 17
Height: 6’1
Weight: 210 lbs
Body type: muscular from Beyblade(ITS A SPORT)
Age: 18
Height: 6’2
Weight: 215 lbs
Body type: muscular from Beyblade(it’s a sport
Age: 19
Height: 6’4
Weight: 225 lbs
Body type: same as ages 17-18
New OC(very uncalled for)
Eren Jaeger(I decided to try an anime name like beansworth’s Keith)
Age: 15
Eyes: Blue
Hair: Brown
Personality: A energetic boy that can be aggressive but also has an encyclopedic knowledge of Beyblade.
Power Level: (Same as Barry)
Height: 5’7
Weight: 139 lbs
Beyblade: Charred Eurynomos Weight Hunter’
Layer: Charred Eurynomos: A 2-bladed layer with metal mounted on the blades and 4 standard locks: Weight: 42.1 grams
Disc: Weight: A very heavy disc: Weight: 40.1 grams
Driver: Hunter’: self-explanatory
Wait is there a character contest here?
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical - PikaBeyblade - Mar. 16, 2022
(Mar. 16, 2022 12:20 AM)Anime Blader Wrote: (Mar. 15, 2022 1:52 PM)PikaBeyblade Wrote: What Barry’s appearance would be like as an teenager and adult(Long post ik)
Also he had a massive growth spurt
Age: 13
Height: 5’2
Weight: 93 lbs
Body type: slim
Age: 14
Height: 5’5
Weight: 125 lbs
Body type: slim
Age: 15
Height: 5’7
Weight: 139 lbs
Body type: toned from Beyblade(Yes it’s a sport deal with it)
Age: 16
Height: 5’11
Weight: 154 lbs
Body type: toned
Age: 17
Height: 6’1
Weight: 210 lbs
Body type: muscular from Beyblade(ITS A SPORT)
Age: 18
Height: 6’2
Weight: 215 lbs
Body type: muscular from Beyblade(it’s a sport
Age: 19
Height: 6’4
Weight: 225 lbs
Body type: same as ages 17-18
New OC(very uncalled for)
Eren Jaeger(I decided to try an anime name like beansworth’s Keith)
Age: 15
Eyes: Blue
Hair: Brown
Personality: A energetic boy that can be aggressive but also has an encyclopedic knowledge of Beyblade.
Power Level: (Same as Barry)
Height: 5’7
Weight: 139 lbs
Beyblade: Charred Eurynomos Weight Hunter’
Layer: Charred Eurynomos: A 2-bladed layer with metal mounted on the blades and 4 standard locks: Weight: 42.1 grams
Disc: Weight: A very heavy disc: Weight: 40.1 grams
Driver: Hunter’: self-explanatory
Wait is there a character contest here?
Nah just a very uncalled for OC
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical - Anime Blader - Mar. 16, 2022
(Mar. 16, 2022 12:41 AM)PikaBeyblade Wrote: (Mar. 16, 2022 12:20 AM)Anime Blader Wrote: Wait is there a character contest here?
Nah just a very uncalled for OC
Oh because I have a cool oc I would've liked to enter if there was one
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical - DJCAT8608 - Mar. 16, 2022
shipping chapter pog haha
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical - beansworth - Mar. 16, 2022
(Mar. 16, 2022 12:49 PM)DJCAT8608 Wrote: shipping chapter pog haha Haha, it's more of a calm before the storm chapter. The storm being the 3v3 Battles.
(Mar. 16, 2022 1:07 AM)Anime Blader Wrote: (Mar. 16, 2022 12:41 AM)PikaBeyblade Wrote: Nah just a very uncalled for OC
Oh because I have a cool oc I would've liked to enter if there was one Sure, I can listen and see, the OC might not make it, though because of plot constrants.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical - DJCAT8608 - Mar. 16, 2022
*meanwhile my OC watching how this plays out to come in at the perfect time lol*
3v3 battles gonna be epic tho cause haha idk what to say anymore
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical - beansworth - Mar. 16, 2022
Question, should I include the little previews, after every chapter?
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