RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical - DJCAT8608 - Feb. 03, 2022
*depression cure rate increased*
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical - beansworth - Feb. 03, 2022
(Feb. 03, 2022 7:40 PM)DJCAT8608 Wrote: *depression cure rate increased* That would be good! Also Chapter 25 tonight!
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical - DJCAT8608 - Feb. 03, 2022
YASSSSSSSS
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical - beansworth - Feb. 03, 2022
Chapter 25: Keith has broken after his defeat, and Obito's Story is unfolded.
Chapter 25: Keith Quit!? Mythical Revival!
The next morning, Keith and Irene were cooking breakfast, and Paige walked in.
Paige: “Hey Keith!”
Keith: “Oh hey, Paige!”
Irene looked up and asked.
Irene: “Hey Keith? What do I do here?”
Keith walked up behind her, and showed her what to do, and she blushed.
Paige: “Fu~Fu! Keith, what’s this about?”
Keith walked over to Paige and sat at the island, and picked up his coffee mug.
Keith: “Irene and I are dating. And I’m helping her make breakfast.”
Irene walked over and gave Keith, his breakfast.
???: “Go Shoot!”
Paige: “Now that I think about it. Why aren’t you blading, Keith?”
Irene and Keith looked at each other, and Irene began to tell Paige, while Keith walked out to the blading hall.
Keith: “What are you doing, Yuito?”
Yuito(Tired): “I’m practicing. We lost our founder, so we need to work even harder now.”
Yuito looked up at Keith, and the two exchanged glances, with Yuito staring at him with anger in his eyes. Lucy, Baki, War and Samson entered the Blading Hall, and Yuito walked over to Baki.
Yuito(Tired): “Baki, I’ve *inhales* been practicing all morning to join the team.”
Baki: “Alright Yuito, battle War and Samson, me and Lucy have something to do.”
The two left, while Yuito, War and Samson called out. Baki and Lucy entered the 3D Print Room, and there sat a new bey.
Baki: “Hey Lucy, thanks a lot for helping me.”
Lucy: “O-of course, Baki!”
Irene entered the room, making sure she closed the door.
Irene: “I got the other materials you needed, Baki.”
Baki: “Thanks Irene! Now we can finish the revival of Kratos!”
Irene: "I'm soooo excited!"
Lucy pouted while looking at Baki and Irene, she walked over to the side and looked at Loki.
Lucy(Mind): “Loki, I don’t think I deserve to use you.”
Loki: “What do you mean! I love blading with you!”
Lucy: *Gasp* “Loki, it’s you!”
Loki: "Yes, that is me, and you DO deserve to use me"
Lucy: "Very rich coming from the god of lies"
Loki: “I'm saying the truth though! You know, we should do the same and upgrade!”
Lucy: “Do you mean...?”
Loki: “Yes, Lucy. I know you’ll design me perfect again.”
Lucy then decided that she would upgrade Loki into a Mythological Bey.
Baki: “Finally, it’s done!”
Irene: “It’s looks amazing, good job Baki!”
Baki blushed a bit and said.
Baki: “Thanks, Irene.”
Lucy looked away and starting playing with her hair, she was jealous of Baki and Irene’s relationship.
Lucy(Mind): “I bet he likes her too. I hate to be the shipper but that might make things worse”
Loki: "Yeah, should we interfere?"
Lucy: "Not yet"
Baki: “Hey Lucy, you fine?”
Lucy caught in her train of thought said,
Lucy: “No, actually I’m not.”
Baki: “Huh, what’s wrong, Lucy?”
Lucy looked up, and saw Baki’s caring face, and said.
Lucy: “Well, I want to evolve Loki. And I can’t do that by myself.”
Baki cupped Lucy’s hands and smiled.
Baki: “Let me help you, Lucy!”
Lucy blushed and said,
Lucy: “T-t-that’s fine…”
Keith looked at the Beyblade Stadium, staring it as his memories played again, then Irene and Baki walked in.
Baki(Mind): “I’m acting cool on the outside, but this leader thing is so difficult! How did Keith do it!?”
As Baki walked into the blading room, he saw Keith lying in a Bey Stadium, and he called out.
Baki: “Keith! I have some news!”
Keith: “Hm?”
Keith said, while opening one eye to see Baki.
Baki walked to Keith, and gave Keith the item in his hands.
Baki: “Me, Lucy and Irene made this for you, Keith.”
Irene: “It was my idea, because you go all out for everyone, and you give me courage, which is why I like you Keith.”
Keith looked at what Baki, had given him.
Keith: “It’s K-Kratos, but why?”
Baki(Proud): “We fixed Kratos, so can you blade again?”
Keith: “I’m sorry but, I just can’t.”
Baki: “But we-...”
Keith(Shoken): “There’s no point. Van will destroy everything dear to me. You guys can’t battle his team.”
Baki grit his teeth and called out.
Baki(Irritated): “Are you kidding me!? Keith, we fix Kratos and you refuse to use him!?”
Irene(Scared): “Baki, he has his reasons.”
Keith then clenched his fist and yelled.
Keith(Irritated): “Oh come on! You think your high and mighty because you fix Kratos! Then we don’t you use him huh!?”
Irene: “Keith, calm down.”
Baki(Angry): “Damn it, Keith! Van’s been beating everyone, you need to be the one to stop him!”
Keith(Angry): “So!? You can defeat him! Irene could, anyone could!”
Then Irene pushed the two away and said.
Irene(Pissed): “Why can’t you two get along!? Your best friends!”
Baki slapped Irene’s arm off of him and said.
Baki(Pissed): “Irene, you don’t get it! We fixed his bey, and he refuses to Beyblade.”
{silence}
Keith grabs Baki's arm
Keith: "Don't"
Baki got surrounded by anger in his head and slapped Keith's arm off.
Baki entered Valhalla’s Main Room, and Keith walked away to the Garage. Irene ran to Keith and said.
Irene: “Keith! Come on, you don’t want to be fighting with Baki.”
Keith: “He chose this. Could you just leave me alone for a bit.”
Irene understood Keith, but teared up a bit, she turned and walked to her room, and soon everyone would be in their rooms.
{Keith’s POV}
Keith lied in bed, watching old fights between Valt and Shu, or Aiga and Phi.
Keith flipped over and sat up, grabbing a book he had bought.
Keith: “Guess I have time to read this now.”
Keith opened his book and began reading it, thinking about two things.
Keith(Mind): “Why did we argue, and why did I tell Irene to leave me alone, that probably affected her more then it did me.”
Keith put the book down, and entered his bed.
{Baki POV}
Baki walked by the 3D Print Room, trying to find Lucy, so he’d have someone to talk with, when from inside he hard.
???(Quiet): “It’s good, I didn’t say anything.”
Baki put his ear to the door, listening to figure out who was in there.
???(Quiet): “I almost said let out that I like him, god that would’ve been embarrassing.”
Baki almost fell down, right when they said that, he figured out who was in there, Lucy. Lucy Kurenai, was in there.
Baki ran upstairs, and jumped onto his bed, hiding his face in his pillow.
{Irene POV}
Irene grabbed her favorite stuffed animal, and lied on her bed.
She was tearing up and thought.
Irene(Sad): “I understand Keith wants his alone time, but I wish I could there and help him.”
She looked at her calendar and saw her birthday, and Christmas coming up.
Irene: “Hopefully, we can spend those two days together.”
Irene said, while holding a picture she took of her and Keith, twirling like a ballerina, gracefully falling onto her bed, while hugging the picture, tightly.
{Van’s Mansion}
Van stood at the Bey Stadium, Obito on the other side.
Obito: “Alright, preparations are complete. Your new launcher is complete, with a longer string and harder click system.”
Van took the launcher from Obito’s hands, and launched Calamity Valkyrie.
Van: "That’s perfect! Thank you Obito, now it will be easier to crush the beyblade world"
Obito(Mind): “Van, you’ve shown me the way to win, and I thank you. And you saved me.”
{Flashback}
Obito, who was 17 at the time, stood atop a hotel, a 40 meter drop, stood in front of him.
Obito’s hair was so long, he sometimes couldn’t see, but his sight was perfect tonight.
???: “You know, that isn’t the smartest thing to do for a Beyblade and Chemistry master like you.”
Obito looked behind him, and saw a medium black haired boy, with a cape leaning against the wall.
Obito: “How would you know?”
??? stepped forward, and his face could be seen.
Obito: “You're... Van Aoi!”
Van stood about 10 meters away from Obito, the wind current picked up, and both the blader’s hair flew faster with the wind.
Van: “Join me and Fallen Valkyrie, we will reform the blading world.”
Obito looked down a little.
Obito: “Shut up, Blading isn’t my thing anymore.”
Van: “I’m sure it is.”
Obito: “No it isn’t! Ever since... Something, my life has gotten worse, it is time I end it”
Van walked forward, his dark red eyes pierced Obito’s soul, and Obito’s hands began shaking.
Van: “Come on, don't be stupid and follow me.”
Obito then tried to fall off the building, but Van quickly grabs him by the arm for long enough to change his route, making him fall on the metal ladders by the side instead of the floor. Obito broke some bones and spent time recovering while Van caused havoc over the blading world.
{Present}
Obito grabbed Orion, and remembered his past, launching Orion.
Obito(Mind): “My mask is the only thing that keeps me whole. Without it on, I feel like I'm not in control anymore.”
Van(mind): "Obito is an inch away from breaking, I’ll need to keep an eye on him"
26-Preview
A boy stood outside, watching Baki and Lucy.
???: “So, that’s one weakness, haha!”
The boy jumped off the hill and his pink hair became bright with the sun, it was Payne getting info on them for the upcoming fight.
Payne: “I can’t believe it, Van truly is on a whole other level."
{Van’s Mansion, 1 hour ago.}
Everyone: “Go Shoot!”
{Phoenix, Valkyrie, Gladius, Orion and Vulcan hit the stadium floor. Phoenix took center, and Gladius began lightly hitting it, while Orion, Valkyrie and Vulcan sped around the outer ridge.}
Kai: “Burning Shoot!”
Van: “I’ll beat everyone, now Calamity Shoot!”
Obito: “When stars align, new fates can be born. Orion, now we’ll burst Gladius in one blow. Zodiac Shot!”
{Orion, Valkyrie and Vulcan darted for the center, Vulcan and Valkyrie hitting Phoenix, and Orion hitting and bursting Gladius.}
With Requiem and Valhalla's battle coming up, both teams train, and Baki reveals something.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical - Carma___bigbang - Feb. 04, 2022
I hope that Baki and Keith have a other fight and Irene gets so mad that she knocks them both out
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical - beansworth - Feb. 04, 2022
Hey DJCAT8608, I ended a OC entry a while ago, but would you like to add a custom Oc and Bey? And do you know the Mystical System?
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical - We do not care - Feb. 04, 2022
(Feb. 04, 2022 4:11 AM)beansworth Wrote: Hey DJCAT8608, I ended a OC entry a while ago, but would you like to add a custom Oc and Bey? And do you know the Mystical System?
Can I add one as well? I have a good idea for one at least imo
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical - beansworth - Feb. 04, 2022
(Feb. 04, 2022 4:21 AM)We do not care Wrote: (Feb. 04, 2022 4:11 AM)beansworth Wrote: Hey DJCAT8608, I ended a OC entry a while ago, but would you like to add a custom Oc and Bey? And do you know the Mystical System?
Can I add one as well? I have a good idea for one at least imo Sure, I have a arc that needs some characters.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical - We do not care - Feb. 05, 2022
(Feb. 04, 2022 1:41 PM)beansworth Wrote: (Feb. 04, 2022 4:21 AM)We do not care Wrote: Can I add one as well? I have a good idea for one at least imo Sure, I have a arc that needs some characters.
Alright thank you
my character:
Name: Sean Krueger
Age: 14
Gender: Male
Appearance: He has brown hair and brown eyes (When he uses his aura and special moves his eyes and hair will turn red with his red and black aura.) He usually is in formal clothing but will sometimes wear casual.
Personality: Sean seems to be a normal popular kid at his school but under that mask is a twisted, evil, manipulative person. Sean uses his remarkable intelligence to manipulate people to do his dirty work to complete his goal which originally was innocent at first wanting to punish evil bladers who break other bladers beys. But due to the corruption from Shinigami Sean's personality was twisted from the innocent smart person he was to the cold calculative and manipulative person he is now. And with the corruption his goals changed from punishing the evil bladers who breaks peoples beys, to destroying evil bladers and the innocent who gets in his way, too now finally to become the god of the beyblade world. His entire plan though to get rid of evil bladers by destroying their beys comes from trauma he received after Lane broke his bey when Lane had First Uranus and after that Sean swore vengeance on Lane and the power to punish all evil bladers who break beys like Lane.
Mythical Core: Shinigami ( A black left spinning core with the center being a red Shinigami mask.)
Mythical Blade: Rotten ( A left spinning black blade with two strong red metal attack points shaped similarly to Zwei.)
Mythical Armor: Hate (A red armor that the weight is distributed equally through out.)
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Disc: A red Sting
Driver: A black Jolt' with the rubber being red.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical - UnseenBurst - Feb. 05, 2022
Would you mind if I added a Character? I have an Idea for a New Character and it'd be cool if I could add him in your Fanfic. I know I already added Percy but if you need any more Characters I'd be more than happy to share my Character.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical - beansworth - Feb. 05, 2022
(Feb. 05, 2022 12:47 AM)We do not care Wrote: (Feb. 04, 2022 1:41 PM)beansworth Wrote: Sure, I have a arc that needs some characters.
Alright thank you
my character:
Name: Sean Krueger
Age: 14
Gender: Male
Appearance: He has brown hair and brown eyes (When he uses his aura and special moves his eyes and hair will turn red with his red and black aura.) He usually is in formal clothing but will sometimes wear casual.
Personality: Sean seems to be a normal popular kid at his school but under that mask is a twisted, evil, manipulative person. Sean uses his remarkable intelligence to manipulate people to do his dirty work to complete his goal which originally was innocent at first wanting to punish evil bladers who break other bladers beys. But due to the corruption from Shinigami Sean's personality was twisted from the innocent smart person he was to the cold calculative and manipulative person he is now. And with the corruption his goals changed from punishing the evil bladers who breaks peoples beys, to destroying evil bladers and the innocent who gets in his way, too now finally to become the god of the beyblade world. His entire plan though to get rid of evil bladers by destroying their beys comes from trauma he received after Lane broke his bey when Lane had First Uranus and after that Sean swore vengeance on Lane and the power to punish all evil bladers who break beys like Lane.
Mythical Core: Shinigami ( A black left spinning core with the center being a red Shinigami mask.)
Mythical Blade: Rotten ( A left spinning black blade with two strong red metal attack points shaped similarly to Zwei.)
Mythical Armor: Hate (A red armor that the weight is distributed equally through out.)
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Disc: A red Sting
Driver: A black Jolt' with the rubber being red. I like this OC, only thing I have to change is the armor, which is already Output, which is featured on Fafnir and Fallen Valkyrie
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical - PikaBeyblade - Feb. 05, 2022
(Feb. 05, 2022 12:47 AM)We do not care Wrote: (Feb. 04, 2022 1:41 PM)beansworth Wrote: Sure, I have a arc that needs some characters.
Alright thank you
my character:
Name: Sean Krueger
Age: 14
Gender: Male
Appearance: He has brown hair and brown eyes (When he uses his aura and special moves his eyes and hair will turn red with his red and black aura.) He usually is in formal clothing but will sometimes wear casual.
Personality: Sean seems to be a normal popular kid at his school but under that mask is a twisted, evil, manipulative person. Sean uses his remarkable intelligence to manipulate people to do his dirty work to complete his goal which originally was innocent at first wanting to punish evil bladers who break other bladers beys. But due to the corruption from Shinigami Sean's personality was twisted from the innocent smart person he was to the cold calculative and manipulative person he is now. And with the corruption his goals changed from punishing the evil bladers who breaks peoples beys, to destroying evil bladers and the innocent who gets in his way, too now finally to become the god of the beyblade world. His entire plan though to get rid of evil bladers by destroying their beys comes from trauma he received after Lane broke his bey when Lane had First Uranus and after that Sean swore vengeance on Lane and the power to punish all evil bladers who break beys like Lane.
Mythical Core: Shinigami ( A black left spinning core with the center being a red Shinigami mask.)
Mythical Blade: Rotten ( A left spinning black blade with two strong red metal attack points shaped similarly to Zwei.)
Mythical Armor: Hate (A red armor that the weight is distributed equally through out.)
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Disc: A red Sting
Driver: A black Jolt' with the rubber being red.
I’m trying not to be offensive here but this is a bit too similar to Light Yagami
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical - beansworth - Feb. 05, 2022
(Feb. 05, 2022 1:22 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Would you mind if I added a Character? I have an Idea for a New Character and it'd be cool if I could add him in your Fanfic. I know I already added Percy but if you need any more Characters I'd be more than happy to share my Character. New character from Unseen? Yeah, that's fine, you'll be taking the 2nd OC slot from the Forums.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical - PikaBeyblade - Feb. 05, 2022
I’d like to make a new character too
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical - beansworth - Feb. 05, 2022
(Feb. 05, 2022 1:58 AM)PikaBeyblade Wrote: I’d like to make a new character too Alright, Pika with one. Sounds great dude, I'd love to see what you can come up with.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical - PikaBeyblade - Feb. 05, 2022
(Btw can you make Barry more powerful than Thomas because I wanna emphasize the part where he can keep up and possibly surpass older bladers. Also I just like him slightly more because it was the first OC I created.)
Thomas Patterson
Age: 13
Height: 5’0
Weight: 87 lbs
Personality: An easygoing , but earnest boy who is Barry’s cousin and good friend and can get quite rude and aggressive in battle due to him feeling the need to toughen up. He gets bothered by laziness and sometimes slaps them if he gets agitated enough. He was inspired by Fubuki Sumiye to train as hard as he can
Appearance: A short tan-skinned 13 year old with hazel eyes and red hair with teal highlights.
Backstory: In third grade he got beaten up by 3 5th graders after losing a Beyblade battle to one of the bullies and he went home bleeding. The next day he shut himself off from everyone and dedicated his time to Beyblade,
practicing 9 hours each day and when the Mythical System was announced he created his Beyblade, Perseverance Typhon
Beyblade:
Type: Attack
Core: A Right-Spin core with a rubber burst stopper akin to Judgement
Blade: Perseverance: A 4-bladed Blade with 2 rubber wings that pop out of the rubber upper blades and 2 plastic blades sticking out for a impact-like attack
Armor: Hammer: An armor with 2 points on 1 side and 3 points on the other side for an unbalanced attack
Disc: Anvil(same as Forge Vulcan’s Disc)
Driver: Switch: A Driver with a metal semi-flat tip that turns into a rubber flat tip
Special Moves: Fang Impact, Perseverance Slash, Perseverance Awakening(when the rubber wings pop out of the rubber upper blades), Perseverance Upper, Switch Counter(when the metal semi-flat tip retracts and it goes for a counter-attack
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical - We do not care - Feb. 05, 2022
(Feb. 05, 2022 1:29 AM)beansworth Wrote: (Feb. 05, 2022 12:47 AM)We do not care Wrote: Alright thank you
my character:
Name: Sean Krueger
Age: 14
Gender: Male
Appearance: He has brown hair and brown eyes (When he uses his aura and special moves his eyes and hair will turn red with his red and black aura.) He usually is in formal clothing but will sometimes wear casual.
Personality: Sean seems to be a normal popular kid at his school but under that mask is a twisted, evil, manipulative person. Sean uses his remarkable intelligence to manipulate people to do his dirty work to complete his goal which originally was innocent at first wanting to punish evil bladers who break other bladers beys. But due to the corruption from Shinigami Sean's personality was twisted from the innocent smart person he was to the cold calculative and manipulative person he is now. And with the corruption his goals changed from punishing the evil bladers who breaks peoples beys, to destroying evil bladers and the innocent who gets in his way, too now finally to become the god of the beyblade world. His entire plan though to get rid of evil bladers by destroying their beys comes from trauma he received after Lane broke his bey when Lane had First Uranus and after that Sean swore vengeance on Lane and the power to punish all evil bladers who break beys like Lane.
Mythical Core: Shinigami ( A black left spinning core with the center being a red Shinigami mask.)
Mythical Blade: Rotten ( A left spinning black blade with two strong red metal attack points shaped similarly to Zwei.)
Mythical Armor: Hate (A red armor that the weight is distributed equally through out.)
.
Disc: A red Sting
Driver: A black Jolt' with the rubber being red. I like this OC, only thing I have to change is the armor, which is already Output, which is featured on Fafnir and Fallen Valkyrie
Alright im fine with you changing it
(Feb. 05, 2022 1:42 AM)PikaBeyblade Wrote: (Feb. 05, 2022 12:47 AM)We do not care Wrote: Alright thank you
my character:
Name: Sean Krueger
Age: 14
Gender: Male
Appearance: He has brown hair and brown eyes (When he uses his aura and special moves his eyes and hair will turn red with his red and black aura.) He usually is in formal clothing but will sometimes wear casual.
Personality: Sean seems to be a normal popular kid at his school but under that mask is a twisted, evil, manipulative person. Sean uses his remarkable intelligence to manipulate people to do his dirty work to complete his goal which originally was innocent at first wanting to punish evil bladers who break other bladers beys. But due to the corruption from Shinigami Sean's personality was twisted from the innocent smart person he was to the cold calculative and manipulative person he is now. And with the corruption his goals changed from punishing the evil bladers who breaks peoples beys, to destroying evil bladers and the innocent who gets in his way, too now finally to become the god of the beyblade world. His entire plan though to get rid of evil bladers by destroying their beys comes from trauma he received after Lane broke his bey when Lane had First Uranus and after that Sean swore vengeance on Lane and the power to punish all evil bladers who break beys like Lane.
Mythical Core: Shinigami ( A black left spinning core with the center being a red Shinigami mask.)
Mythical Blade: Rotten ( A left spinning black blade with two strong red metal attack points shaped similarly to Zwei.)
Mythical Armor: Hate (A red armor that the weight is distributed equally through out.)
.
Disc: A red Sting
Driver: A black Jolt' with the rubber being red.
I’m trying not to be offensive here but this is a bit too similar to Light Yagami
Its fine my character being considered like Light is more of a complement to me due to Light being my favorite fictional character of all time.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical - beansworth - Feb. 05, 2022
(Feb. 05, 2022 2:34 AM)PikaBeyblade Wrote: (Btw can you make Barry more powerful than Thomas because I wanna emphasize the part where he can keep up and possibly surpass older bladers. Also I just like him slightly more because it was the first OC I created.)
Thomas Patterson
Age: 13
Height: 5’0
Weight: 87 lbs
Personality: An easygoing , but earnest boy who is Barry’s cousin and good friend and can get quite rude and aggressive in battle due to him feeling the need to toughen up. He gets bothered by laziness and sometimes slaps them if he gets agitated enough. He was inspired by Fubuki Sumiye to train as hard as he can
Appearance: A short tan-skinned 13 year old with hazel eyes and red hair with teal highlights.
Backstory: In third grade he got beaten up by 3 5th graders after losing a Beyblade battle to one of the bullies and he went home bleeding. The next day he shut himself off from everyone and dedicated his time to Beyblade,
practicing 9 hours each day and when the Mythical System was announced he created his Beyblade, Perseverance Typhon
Beyblade:
Type: Attack
Core: A Right-Spin core with a rubber burst stopper akin to Judgement
Blade: Perseverance: A 4-bladed Blade with 2 rubber wings that pop out of the rubber upper blades and 2 plastic blades sticking out for a impact-like attack
Armor: Hammer: An armor with 2 points on 1 side and 3 points on the other side for an unbalanced attack
Disc: Anvil(same as Forge Vulcan’s Disc)
Driver: Switch: A Driver with a metal semi-flat tip that turns into a rubber flat tip
Special Moves: Fang Impact, Perseverance Slash, Perseverance Awakening(when the rubber wings pop out of the rubber upper blades), Perseverance Upper, Switch Counter(when the metal semi-flat tip retracts and it goes for a counter-attack Alright sounds good, I have to switch(No pun) the driver name because Switch is already the name of Aiga's disc, so would you be able to find a different name if not, I can change Aiga's disc name.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical - Carma___bigbang - Feb. 05, 2022
Can I make 1?
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical - beansworth - Feb. 05, 2022
(Feb. 05, 2022 3:49 AM)Carma___bigbang Wrote: Can I make 1? Sure sounds fine to me.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical - PikaBeyblade - Feb. 05, 2022
Switch was the only name I could come up with so I’d like you to change Aiga’s disc
(Feb. 05, 2022 2:38 AM)We do not care Wrote: (Feb. 05, 2022 1:29 AM)beansworth Wrote: I like this OC, only thing I have to change is the armor, which is already Output, which is featured on Fafnir and Fallen Valkyrie
Alright im fine with you changing it
(Feb. 05, 2022 1:42 AM)PikaBeyblade Wrote: I’m trying not to be offensive here but this is a bit too similar to Light Yagami
Its fine my character being considered like Light is more of a complement to me due to Light being my favorite fictional character of all time.
I can tell because both your pfp and the gif below ur posts are Light
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical - Carma___bigbang - Feb. 06, 2022
Himawari akchiyo
Age-15
Height- 4,9
Personality-a tomboy who says what she thinks about people, she also enjoys sleeping, she likes war, nice and sometimes messes with people
Friends-everyone in Valhalla
Enemies-everyone in requiem + her sis
Rival-war or anyone that you want
Appearance-she has blue hair , a white jacket ,she wears That black net clothes thingy, she has she has short hair that reaches to the end of her neck
Bey- viral hooligan,viral,titan,crack
Blade-viral (the intense blade is a circle with 2 sharp blades colored White , black and blue)
Core-hooligan (looks like a dragon that’s blue and white with black flames)
Armor-intense (looks like anything you want)
Disk-titan (a big disk that’s kinda like blitz but has 4 flaps colored black blue)
Tip-nuke (kinda like atomic tip but is shorter and has metal)
Moves-viral slash, viral breaker, viral shield, titan dive, cracked flash, viral spin,
Special move-ULTIMATE VIRAL WHIP!
type- balance
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical - beansworth - Feb. 07, 2022
(Feb. 06, 2022 5:18 PM)Carma___bigbang Wrote: Himawari akchiyo
Age-15
Height- 4,9
Personality-a tomboy who says what she thinks about people, she also enjoys sleeping, she likes war, nice and sometimes messes with people
Friends-everyone in Valhalla
Enemies-everyone in requiem + her sis
Rival-war or anyone that you want
Appearance-she has blue hair , a white jacket ,she wears That black net clothes thingy, she has she has short hair that reaches to the end of her neck
Bey- viral hooligan,viral,titan,crack
Blade-viral (the intense blade is a circle with 2 sharp blades colored White , black and blue)
Core-hooligan (looks like a dragon that’s blue and white with black flames)
Armor-intense (looks like anything you want)
Disk-titan (a big disk that’s kinda like blitz but has 4 flaps colored black blue)
Tip-nuke (kinda like atomic tip but is shorter and has metal)
Moves-viral slash, viral breaker, viral shield, titan dive, cracked flash, viral spin,
Special move-ULTIMATE VIRAL WHIP!
type- balance @We do not care, PikaBeyblade and Carma___bigbang, I got your ocs for the Yacht Battle Arc, down.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical - UnseenBurst - Feb. 07, 2022
Too much my Hero Academia.
"I'll become the Greatest Blader to ever Exist!"
Name: Izuku Suzuki
Age: 14
Height: 5'4
Personality/Background: Izuku has been Blading since he was 7 and he knows almost everything there is to know about Beyblade. He's well aware of how to create a Beyblade and he takes notes in every Bey he sees so he can learn how to beat them. He's very good at drawing, he's usually sketching his Opponents' Bey to spot out any Weaknesses or Advantages they may have. Izuku lives with his Father after his Mother passed when he was about 5. She was very understanding and caring but she got severely sick and then eventually passed on. Izuku was crushed when his Mother passed away and only had his Father to rely on after she was gone. His Dad was a Good Understanding Person and always tries to keep his sad feelings in for Izuku until one-day Izuku just said to him "It's okay, Daddy. I understand you're sad." Which warmed his Father's Heart and they became more open with each other. Izuku is usually a Pretty Chill guy but can get very angry if his Bey or his Friends get insulted and will not hesitate to protect either one if he feels as if they are threatened or are about to get hurt. Izuku is always training his Blading Skills and has a Powerful Resonance with his Bey and can talk to his Bey at Free Will.
Apperance: ![[Image: 482800_jAGQOTEg.png]](https://share-cdn.picrew.me/shareImg/org/202202/482800_jAGQOTEg.png)
Beyblade: Ravage Iapetus Dimond Metal Xceed+Z
Blade Ravage: Ravage is a Blade with 3 Long Blades like Dynamite Belial's 3 Blades on in between each Blade is Rubber (Like Dangerous Rubber) with Metal inside of it. (Basically Dangerous' Rubber with L Gear in it). The Metal resembles a Roaring Beast with Red Eyes.
Core Iapetus: Iapetus is a Horizontal Core with an Iapetus Motif with Fangs in its Mouth on the Chip and its eyes Purely Green. It also has Claws going downward like Lucifer the End's Core.
Disk Dimond: Dimond is an Aggressive Disk that looks like Greatest Raphael's Layer with 8 Spikes surrounding it but the Spikes are long and a bit jagged. which balances out the Bey and if it makes contact with the Disk the Opposing Bey is most likely to burst or get knocked out if it at High Speed.
Driver Metal Xceed+Z: Basically Xceed with the Z Chip attached and with a Metal Spring Lock.
Forgot about Moves. Sorry!
Ravage Saber: Iapetus uses its Large Blades to slash at its Opposing Bey usually scoring an Over Finish or Burst.
Ravage Shoot: Iapetus leans on its driver and accelerates unleashing a Barrage of Attacks.
Feel Free to add as many more moves as you want! 
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical - beansworth - Feb. 07, 2022
(Feb. 07, 2022 5:32 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Too much my Hero Academia.
"I'll become the Greatest Blader to ever Exist!"
Name: Izuku Suzuki
Age: 14
Height: 5'4
Personality/Background: Izuku has been Blading since he was 7 and he knows almost everything there is to know about Beyblade. He's well aware of how to create a Beyblade and he takes notes in every Bey he sees so he can learn how to beat them. He's very good at drawing, he's usually sketching his Opponents' Bey to spot out any Weaknesses or Advantages they may have. Izuku lives with his Father after his Mother passed when he was about 5. She was very understanding and caring but she got severely sick and then eventually passed on. Izuku was crushed when his Mother passed away and only had his Father to rely on after she was gone. His Dad was a Good Understanding Person and always tries to keep his sad feelings in for Izuku until one-day Izuku just said to him "It's okay, Daddy. I understand you're sad." Which warmed his Father's Heart and they became more open with each other. Izuku is usually a Pretty Chill guy but can get very angry if his Bey or his Friends get insulted and will not hesitate to protect either one if he feels as if they are threatened or are about to get hurt. Izuku is always training his Blading Skills and has a Powerful Resonance with his Bey and can talk to his Bey at Free Will.
Apperance:
Beyblade: Ravage Iapetus Dimond Metal Xceed+Z
Blade Ravage: Ravage is a Blade with 3 Long Blades like Dynamite Belial's 3 Blades on in between each Blade is Rubber (Like Dangerous Rubber) with Metal inside of it. (Basically Dangerous' Rubber with L Gear in it). The Metal resembles a Roaring Beast with Red Eyes.
Core Iapetus: Iapetus is a Horizontal Core with an Iapetus Motif with Fangs in its Mouth on the Chip and its eyes Purely Green. It also has Claws going downward like Lucifer the End's Core.
Disk Dimond: Dimond is an Aggressive Disk that looks like Greatest Raphael's Layer with 8 Spikes surrounding it but the Spikes are long and a bit jagged. which balances out the Bey and if it makes contact with the Disk the Opposing Bey is most likely to burst or get knocked out if it at High Speed.
Driver Metal Xceed+Z: Basically Xceed with the Z Chip attached and with a Metal Spring Lock.
Forgot about Moves. Sorry!
Ravage Saber: Iapetus uses its Large Blades to slash at its Opposing Bey usually scoring an Over Finish or Burst.
Ravage Shoot: Iapetus leans on its driver and accelerates unleashing a Barrage of Attacks.
Feel Free to add as many more moves as you want! I like Izuku, definitely one of the cooler people coming to the Yacht Battle Arc, can't wait to see him and Iapetus battle.
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