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RE: Bey100’s BeyFic Thread (Fall BeyCon2023) - Bey100 - Sep. 13, 2023
So this thread is being revived as the general BeyFic thread so I don't keep making new threads and I’ll also be announcing a brand new BeyFic tomorrow. I do miss writing these so I’m excited to come back!
RE: Bey100’s BeyFic Thread - GodzillaFan101 - Sep. 13, 2023
Im looking to see what you have to create!
RE: Bey100’s BeyFic Thread - Bey100 - Sep. 13, 2023
Announcing the new series…
Bey100’s Beyblade X!
This will be my own version of the Beyblade X story! I am aware that the X manga and anime exists but I’m still doing my own thing!
Characters + Beys:
Spoiler (Click to View)
Kazumi Bird - HellScythe 460 T
X Cross - Dransword 360 F
Multi - WizardArrow/Knightshield/KnightLance
Maiden - SharkEdge 360 LF
X Cross - Dransword 360 F
Multi - WizardArrow/Knightshield/KnightLance
Maiden - SharkEdge 360 LF
Spoiler (Click to View)
Bird dreams of making it to the top of the X tower and with the help of his team which consist X Cross and Multi he will attempt and work hard to do just that!
RE: Bey100’s BeyFic Thread (Bey100’s Beyblade X) - Bey100 - Sep. 14, 2023
Bey100’s Beyblade X Episode 1:
X!!! The Journey Begins!!!!
Spoiler (Click to View)
There’s a shot of a boy in red clothes and red hair running down the sidewalk
Then the boy stops and smiles
In the distance he sees a crowd of people gathering around a beyblade stadium
The boy walks through the crowd and gets to the stadium
Then he declares…
Bird: My name is Bird Kazumi!!! And this is my beyblade!
Bird holds up a bey with a hawk motif design
Bird: Strike Hawk!
The crowd stares in awe
???: Stupid little bey….
Then an extremely buff guy from the crowd walks up to the stadium
Takumi: My name is Takumi Ishiyama! And this is my bey!
Takumi holds up a bulky designed bey
Takumi: Stone Mont Blanc!
The crowd once again stares in awe
Bird laughs
Bird: So you want a battle?
Takumi smirks
Takumi: What do ya think?
Bird then gets out his launcher as there is a nice red sparkle effect
Takumi gets his launcher out too
Bird: I’m warning you…. you’re gonna lose!
Takumi laughs
Takumi: Yeah sure.
Random Kid: First Battle!
Bird and Takumi get in their launch positions
Random Kid: Ready Set!
3..2..1..Let It Rip!!!!
Bird and Takumi both launch so hard the it blows some people in the crowd back
Random Kid 2: Ahhhh!!!
Eagle and Blanc both land in the stadium and go around it
Bird moves his left hand quickly (smear frame)
Bird: Attack Eagle!
Eagle goes straight for a hit but Blanc barely dodges
Bird: What!?
Takumi then chuckles
Takumi: Stone Break!
Blanc then hits Eagle knocking Eagle back
Bird: Noo…
Takumi: Now Stone Upper Attack!
Then Blanc using it metal contact points does an upper attack on Eagle to knock Eagle out of the stadium
Random Kid: Stone Mont Blanc wins with a ring out finish!
Bird: Dang it!!!
Then Takumi takes Strike Eagle
Bird: Wait…
Takumi smiles
Takumi: Hold em boys!
The Takumi’s friends holds Bird back
Bird: Give that back!!!!
Takumi: Nah I don’t think I will.
Takumi then pulls out and mini hammer and smashes Strike Eagle destroying the bey
Following this there’s a cool effect where the background goes blurry and Bird’s the only clear person but then the effect goes away
Bird: Noooooo!!!!!!
One of Takumi’s friends push Bird down and Takumi and his group walk off laughing
Tears fill Bird’s eyes
Bird: Noo….
Bird picks up his now destroyed Strike Eagle
Bird: No.
The crowd pulls out their phones and start laughing at him and then they all walk away
Bird looks up at his team….
The Albartos Strikers
Bird then sees his two friends and members
Friend 1: Wow…. you suck.
Friend 2: What an embarrassment…..
Friend 1: Your dad would be ashamed of you….
Tears fill Bird’s eyes
Bird: Don't ever talk about my dad!!!!!!
Friend 2: Maybe if you were good enough... he would still be alive.
Friend 1: And you would be a stronger and better blader
Friend 2: Face it. You're a disgrace in every way and I would just give up if I were you.
Bird's face slowly turns angry
Bird: You guys aren’t my true friends…
Friend 2: Duh, stupid.
The two kids laugh and walk off
Friend 2: By the way we are kicking you out of the team!
Bird frowns and looks down
Bird: I am a failure.
*Flashback Begins*
Bird is holding his father’s hand as his dad’s on his deathbed
Bird’s Dad: Son, remember that whatever you love and want to do in the world… just keep going….
Bird nods
*Flashback Ends*
Bird then looks at the sky and inhales
Bird (thoughts): I made a promise and I’m going to keep it!!!
Then there’s a beautiful shot where Bird is running down the sidewalk determined to be great
But the Bird trips
Bird: Oh.
Bird lands hard on the ground
Then a mysterious figure with a helmet with an X drawn on it walks up to him
Mysterious Helmet Figure: You good man?
Bird gets up
Bird: Yeah. Who are you?
The Bird slowly takes his finger and points it at the figure but extremely slow
Mysterious Helmet Figure: Uh.. okay...
Bird: What do you want anyway? To laugh at how mid I am at blading!
Mysterious Figure: No I just want to help...
Bird: With what?
Mysterious Helmet Figure: Your view on beyblade.
Bird then has a confused look on his face
Bird: Wut?
Mysterious Helmet Blader sighs
X Cross: Name's X Cross.
Bird: Bird, Kazumi Bird!
X Cross: Huh?
Bird: Bird, Kazumi Bird!
X Cross: So Kazumi is your first name?
Bird: What? No! It's Bird, Kazumi Bird!
X Cross: Oh so Bird's your first and last name while Kazumi is your middle-
Bird: Forget it.
X Cross: You seems kind of angry...
Bird: Yeah no sh-
X Cross: Langauge.
Bird sighs
X Cross: Look I know that jerk broke your bey...
Bird holds Strike Eagle with a sad look on his face
X Cross: And I want to avenge you!
Bird: Wait, really?
X Cross: No, or course not.
Bird: Bruh.
X Cross: Not until you remember blading is about having fun!
Bird: What do you-?
Bird eyes then widen
*Flashback Begins*
We see a younger Bird playing beyblade with his original friends and they are all laughing and smiling
*Flashback Ends*
Bird: Wow...
X Cross: I'll help you beat that idiot!
Bird gulps then nods
We cut to a stadium with Takumi and X Cross on each side
Takumi: Can't believe you got this helmet kid to try and get payback for you.
Bird: Well you know you are rude!?
Takumi: And you know I can beat you to a wall!?
Bird gulps
X Cross: Blading is about having fun you A holes!
Bird: A holes? Really?
Takumi: Nah winning is the thrill!
Takumi Friend: First Battle!
X Cross holds up his bey
Bird gasps and so does Takumi and his group
X Cross: DranSword baby!
Bird: But how...?
Takumi (thoughts): A DranSword bey? Wow. It has a 360 ratchet but has a flat bit making it an aggressive attack type... eh.
X Cross gets his launcher out and locks his bey on it
X Cross: Let's go!!!!
Takumi Friend: Ready Set!
3...2..1..Let It Rip!
X Cross launches his bey at full power as Bird stares in amazement
DranSword speeds around the stadium while Blanc takes center stage
Takumi: What ya gonna do?
X Cross then takes his hands and makes an X
Bird: You doing the Wakanda Forever symbol or something?
X Cross: Now!
DranSword uses the X Dash gimmick
Bird then makes an extremely shocked face
DranSword with all it's speed then hits Blanc knocking Blanc into the pocket
Takumi's jaw then drops
Takumi Friend: Uh... DranSword with an extreme finish! X Cross is the winner!
Takumi drops to his knees
X Cross: Bird let's go.
X Cross and Bird both leave Takumi and his friends speechless
A few hours later..
Bird and X Cross are coming out of an ice cream shop with Bird holding a ice cream cone (vanilla flavored)
Bird: Thanks man!
X Cross nods
Bird: But I must ask... who are you? Without the helmet?
X Cross then removes his helmet
Then we see the guy's face
Kamen: Kamen.
Bird jaw drops
Kamen: Kamen X! And I would love to be part of your team!
Bird: But my team abandoned me...
Kamen: Which is why I want to join!
Bird: You were on one of the biggest team's in the country though.... Team PenDragon!
Kamen: Yeah... but I had a falling out with them...
Bird then makes a Pikachu face
Bird: Oh......
Kamen: But now together we can climb our way to the top of the X tower!
Bird: Yeah...
Bird looks up
Bird: We will....
Kamen: Maybe.
Bird looks back at Kamen
Bird: What do you mean?
Kamen: Well you know... we're now both nobody's?
Bird: You're not a nobody... I am!
Kamen chuckles
Kamen: Nah you're a friend.
Bird smiles the hugs Kamen
Kamen: Stop... I don't like hugs..
Bird steps back and smiles sheepishly
Bird: Sorry...
Meanwhile...
We see a figure with long hair standing
???: I will become the strongest...
Then the figure begins to have a dark blue aurora glowing
???: No matter what!
Then a female with a jacket walks up to him
Mysterious Female Figure: No sign of Kamen...
The figure turns around and smiles evilly
???: Good.
To be continued...
Next Episode: Multiple Beyblades? Different Personalities? What's Going On?
3..2..1..Let It Rip!!!!!
Then the boy stops and smiles
In the distance he sees a crowd of people gathering around a beyblade stadium
The boy walks through the crowd and gets to the stadium
Then he declares…
Bird: My name is Bird Kazumi!!! And this is my beyblade!
Bird holds up a bey with a hawk motif design
Bird: Strike Hawk!
The crowd stares in awe
???: Stupid little bey….
Then an extremely buff guy from the crowd walks up to the stadium
Takumi: My name is Takumi Ishiyama! And this is my bey!
Takumi holds up a bulky designed bey
Takumi: Stone Mont Blanc!
The crowd once again stares in awe
Bird laughs
Bird: So you want a battle?
Takumi smirks
Takumi: What do ya think?
Bird then gets out his launcher as there is a nice red sparkle effect
Takumi gets his launcher out too
Bird: I’m warning you…. you’re gonna lose!
Takumi laughs
Takumi: Yeah sure.
Random Kid: First Battle!
Bird and Takumi get in their launch positions
Random Kid: Ready Set!
3..2..1..Let It Rip!!!!
Bird and Takumi both launch so hard the it blows some people in the crowd back
Random Kid 2: Ahhhh!!!
Eagle and Blanc both land in the stadium and go around it
Bird moves his left hand quickly (smear frame)
Bird: Attack Eagle!
Eagle goes straight for a hit but Blanc barely dodges
Bird: What!?
Takumi then chuckles
Takumi: Stone Break!
Blanc then hits Eagle knocking Eagle back
Bird: Noo…
Takumi: Now Stone Upper Attack!
Then Blanc using it metal contact points does an upper attack on Eagle to knock Eagle out of the stadium
Random Kid: Stone Mont Blanc wins with a ring out finish!
Bird: Dang it!!!
Then Takumi takes Strike Eagle
Bird: Wait…
Takumi smiles
Takumi: Hold em boys!
The Takumi’s friends holds Bird back
Bird: Give that back!!!!
Takumi: Nah I don’t think I will.
Takumi then pulls out and mini hammer and smashes Strike Eagle destroying the bey
Following this there’s a cool effect where the background goes blurry and Bird’s the only clear person but then the effect goes away
Bird: Noooooo!!!!!!
One of Takumi’s friends push Bird down and Takumi and his group walk off laughing
Tears fill Bird’s eyes
Bird: Noo….
Bird picks up his now destroyed Strike Eagle
Bird: No.
The crowd pulls out their phones and start laughing at him and then they all walk away
Bird looks up at his team….
The Albartos Strikers
Bird then sees his two friends and members
Friend 1: Wow…. you suck.
Friend 2: What an embarrassment…..
Friend 1: Your dad would be ashamed of you….
Tears fill Bird’s eyes
Bird: Don't ever talk about my dad!!!!!!
Friend 2: Maybe if you were good enough... he would still be alive.
Friend 1: And you would be a stronger and better blader
Friend 2: Face it. You're a disgrace in every way and I would just give up if I were you.
Bird's face slowly turns angry
Bird: You guys aren’t my true friends…
Friend 2: Duh, stupid.
The two kids laugh and walk off
Friend 2: By the way we are kicking you out of the team!
Bird frowns and looks down
Bird: I am a failure.
*Flashback Begins*
Bird is holding his father’s hand as his dad’s on his deathbed
Bird’s Dad: Son, remember that whatever you love and want to do in the world… just keep going….
Bird nods
*Flashback Ends*
Bird then looks at the sky and inhales
Bird (thoughts): I made a promise and I’m going to keep it!!!
Then there’s a beautiful shot where Bird is running down the sidewalk determined to be great
But the Bird trips
Bird: Oh.
Bird lands hard on the ground
Then a mysterious figure with a helmet with an X drawn on it walks up to him
Mysterious Helmet Figure: You good man?
Bird gets up
Bird: Yeah. Who are you?
The Bird slowly takes his finger and points it at the figure but extremely slow
Mysterious Helmet Figure: Uh.. okay...
Bird: What do you want anyway? To laugh at how mid I am at blading!
Mysterious Figure: No I just want to help...
Bird: With what?
Mysterious Helmet Figure: Your view on beyblade.
Bird then has a confused look on his face
Bird: Wut?
Mysterious Helmet Blader sighs
X Cross: Name's X Cross.
Bird: Bird, Kazumi Bird!
X Cross: Huh?
Bird: Bird, Kazumi Bird!
X Cross: So Kazumi is your first name?
Bird: What? No! It's Bird, Kazumi Bird!
X Cross: Oh so Bird's your first and last name while Kazumi is your middle-
Bird: Forget it.
X Cross: You seems kind of angry...
Bird: Yeah no sh-
X Cross: Langauge.
Bird sighs
X Cross: Look I know that jerk broke your bey...
Bird holds Strike Eagle with a sad look on his face
X Cross: And I want to avenge you!
Bird: Wait, really?
X Cross: No, or course not.
Bird: Bruh.
X Cross: Not until you remember blading is about having fun!
Bird: What do you-?
Bird eyes then widen
*Flashback Begins*
We see a younger Bird playing beyblade with his original friends and they are all laughing and smiling
*Flashback Ends*
Bird: Wow...
X Cross: I'll help you beat that idiot!
Bird gulps then nods
We cut to a stadium with Takumi and X Cross on each side
Takumi: Can't believe you got this helmet kid to try and get payback for you.
Bird: Well you know you are rude!?
Takumi: And you know I can beat you to a wall!?
Bird gulps
X Cross: Blading is about having fun you A holes!
Bird: A holes? Really?
Takumi: Nah winning is the thrill!
Takumi Friend: First Battle!
X Cross holds up his bey
Bird gasps and so does Takumi and his group
X Cross: DranSword baby!
Bird: But how...?
Takumi (thoughts): A DranSword bey? Wow. It has a 360 ratchet but has a flat bit making it an aggressive attack type... eh.
X Cross gets his launcher out and locks his bey on it
X Cross: Let's go!!!!
Takumi Friend: Ready Set!
3...2..1..Let It Rip!
X Cross launches his bey at full power as Bird stares in amazement
DranSword speeds around the stadium while Blanc takes center stage
Takumi: What ya gonna do?
X Cross then takes his hands and makes an X
Bird: You doing the Wakanda Forever symbol or something?
X Cross: Now!
DranSword uses the X Dash gimmick
Bird then makes an extremely shocked face
DranSword with all it's speed then hits Blanc knocking Blanc into the pocket
Takumi's jaw then drops
Takumi Friend: Uh... DranSword with an extreme finish! X Cross is the winner!
Takumi drops to his knees
X Cross: Bird let's go.
X Cross and Bird both leave Takumi and his friends speechless
A few hours later..
Bird and X Cross are coming out of an ice cream shop with Bird holding a ice cream cone (vanilla flavored)
Bird: Thanks man!
X Cross nods
Bird: But I must ask... who are you? Without the helmet?
X Cross then removes his helmet
Then we see the guy's face
Kamen: Kamen.
Bird jaw drops
Kamen: Kamen X! And I would love to be part of your team!
Bird: But my team abandoned me...
Kamen: Which is why I want to join!
Bird: You were on one of the biggest team's in the country though.... Team PenDragon!
Kamen: Yeah... but I had a falling out with them...
Bird then makes a Pikachu face
Bird: Oh......
Kamen: But now together we can climb our way to the top of the X tower!
Bird: Yeah...
Bird looks up
Bird: We will....
Kamen: Maybe.
Bird looks back at Kamen
Bird: What do you mean?
Kamen: Well you know... we're now both nobody's?
Bird: You're not a nobody... I am!
Kamen chuckles
Kamen: Nah you're a friend.
Bird smiles the hugs Kamen
Kamen: Stop... I don't like hugs..
Bird steps back and smiles sheepishly
Bird: Sorry...
Meanwhile...
We see a figure with long hair standing
???: I will become the strongest...
Then the figure begins to have a dark blue aurora glowing
???: No matter what!
Then a female with a jacket walks up to him
Mysterious Female Figure: No sign of Kamen...
The figure turns around and smiles evilly
???: Good.
To be continued...
Next Episode: Multiple Beyblades? Different Personalities? What's Going On?
3..2..1..Let It Rip!!!!!
Also a few updates regarding the future of the thread:
Spoiler (Click to View)
•Beyblade Burst Cyber Legends Is Still Happening And New Trailer Will Come Tomorrow Plus The Premiere Date Will Be Announced
•I Plan On Finishing Elemental Journey And Yes Season 2 Is Coming
•There Is A New BeyFic Is The Very Early Stages Of Development But It’s Not Coming For A Very Long Time (Gonna have to be patient sorry 🙂)
•Episodes Will Be A Bit More Spaced Out So I Or You Guys Won’t Feel Fatigued
•I Will Be A Lot More Vocal And Consistent From Now On (Well at least I’ll try lol)
•I Plan On Finishing Elemental Journey And Yes Season 2 Is Coming
•There Is A New BeyFic Is The Very Early Stages Of Development But It’s Not Coming For A Very Long Time (Gonna have to be patient sorry 🙂)
•Episodes Will Be A Bit More Spaced Out So I Or You Guys Won’t Feel Fatigued
•I Will Be A Lot More Vocal And Consistent From Now On (Well at least I’ll try lol)
RE: Bey100’s BeyFic Thread - Bey100 - Sep. 14, 2023
“Become The Legend”
Beyblade Burst Cyber Legends Official Teaser Trailer:
Spoiler (Click to View)
WBO/Bey100 BeyFics logo appears
There’s a shot of Alex declining a call from Alice
Alex sighs
Then there’s a text that says…
“Get ready….”
Alex then puts his Strongest Aires bey on his new yellow launcher
“To become a legend!”
Alex then launches his bey
Then the screen goes black
Finally we see a figure with a tattooed face smiling
Wonder: My name’s Wonder Wild! And you… are a pathetic weakling.
Wonder then points at Alex
Then Wonder holds up his bey Claw Cobra smiling
Finally the logo for Beyblade Burst Cyber Legends appears
Then the date’s revealed to be “January 12th 2024”
The trailer ends
There’s a shot of Alex declining a call from Alice
Alex sighs
Then there’s a text that says…
“Get ready….”
Alex then puts his Strongest Aires bey on his new yellow launcher
“To become a legend!”
Alex then launches his bey
Then the screen goes black
Finally we see a figure with a tattooed face smiling
Wonder: My name’s Wonder Wild! And you… are a pathetic weakling.
Wonder then points at Alex
Then Wonder holds up his bey Claw Cobra smiling
Finally the logo for Beyblade Burst Cyber Legends appears
Then the date’s revealed to be “January 12th 2024”
The trailer ends
RE: Bey100’s BeyFic Thread (Bey100’s Beyblade X) - Hollowmind13 - Sep. 14, 2023
(Sep. 14, 2023 2:06 AM)Bey100 Wrote: Bey100’s Beyblade X Episode 1:.
X!!! The Journey Begins!!!!
The First Episode Is Here! Hope You Enjoy!Spoiler (Click to View)There’s a shot of a boy in red clothes and red hair running down the sidewalk
Then the boy stops and smiles
In the distance he sees a crowd of people gathering around a beyblade stadium
The boy walks through the crowd and gets to the stadium
Then he declares…
Bird: My name is Bird Kazumi!!! And this is my beyblade!
Bird holds up a bey with a hawk motif design
Bird: Strike Hawk!
The crowd stares in awe
???: Stupid little bey….
Then an extremely buff guy from the crowd walks up to the stadium
Takumi: My name is Takumi Ishiyama! And this is my bey!
Takumi holds up a bulky designed bey
Takumi: Stone Mont Blanc!
The crowd once again stares in awe
Bird laughs
Bird: So you want a battle?
Takumi smirks
Takumi: What do ya think?
Bird then gets out his launcher as there is a nice red sparkle effect
Takumi gets his launcher out too
Bird: I’m warning you…. you’re gonna lose!
Takumi laughs
Takumi: Yeah sure.
Random Kid: First Battle!
Bird and Takumi get in their launch positions
Random Kid: Ready Set!
3..2..1..Let It Rip!!!!
Bird and Takumi both launch so hard the it blows some people in the crowd back
Random Kid 2: Ahhhh!!!
Eagle and Blanc both land in the stadium and go around it
Bird moves his left hand quickly (smear frame)
Bird: Attack Eagle!
Eagle goes straight for a hit but Blanc barely dodges
Bird: What!?
Takumi then chuckles
Takumi: Stone Break!
Blanc then hits Eagle knocking Eagle back
Bird: Noo…
Takumi: Now Stone Upper Attack!
Then Blanc using it metal contact points does an upper attack on Eagle to knock Eagle out of the stadium
Random Kid: Stone Mont Blanc wins with a ring out finish!
Bird: Dang it!!!
Then Takumi takes Strike Eagle
Bird: Wait…
Takumi smiles
Takumi: Hold em boys!
The Takumi’s friends holds Bird back
Bird: Give that back!!!!
Takumi: Nah I don’t think I will.
Takumi then pulls out and mini hammer and smashes Strike Eagle destroying the bey
Following this there’s a cool effect where the background goes blurry and Bird’s the only clear person but then the effect goes away
Bird: Noooooo!!!!!!
One of Takumi’s friends push Bird down and Takumi and his group walk off laughing
Tears fill Bird’s eyes
Bird: Noo….
Bird picks up his now destroyed Strike Eagle
Bird: No.
The crowd pulls out their phones and start laughing at him and then they all walk away
Bird looks up at his team….
The Albartos Strikers
Bird then sees his two friends and members
Friend 1: Wow…. you suck.
Friend 2: What an embarrassment…..
Friend 1: Your dad would be ashamed of you….
Tears fill Bird’s eyes
Bird: Don't ever talk about my dad!!!!!!
Friend 2: Maybe if you were good enough... he would still be alive.
Friend 1: And you would be a stronger and better blader
Friend 2: Face it. You're a disgrace in every way and I would just give up if I were you.
Bird's face slowly turns angry
Bird: You guys aren’t my true friends…
Friend 2: Duh, stupid.
The two kids laugh and walk off
Friend 2: By the way we are kicking you out of the team!
Bird frowns and looks down
Bird: I am a failure.
*Flashback Begins*
Bird is holding his father’s hand as his dad’s on his deathbed
Bird’s Dad: Son, remember that whatever you love and want to do in the world… just keep going….
Bird nods
*Flashback Ends*
Bird then looks at the sky and inhales
Bird (thoughts): I made a promise and I’m going to keep it!!!
Then there’s a beautiful shot where Bird is running down the sidewalk determined to be great
But the Bird trips
Bird: Oh.
Bird lands hard on the ground
Then a mysterious figure with a helmet with an X drawn on it walks up to him
Mysterious Helmet Figure: You good man?
Bird gets up
Bird: Yeah. Who are you?
The Bird slowly takes his finger and points it at the figure but extremely slow
Mysterious Helmet Figure: Uh.. okay...
Bird: What do you want anyway? To laugh at how mid I am at blading!
Mysterious Figure: No I just want to help...
Bird: With what?
Mysterious Helmet Figure: Your view on beyblade.
Bird then has a confused look on his face
Bird: Wut?
Mysterious Helmet Blader sighs
X Cross: Name's X Cross.
Bird: Bird, Kazumi Bird!
X Cross: Huh?
Bird: Bird, Kazumi Bird!
X Cross: So Kazumi is your first name?
Bird: What? No! It's Bird, Kazumi Bird!
X Cross: Oh so Bird's your first and last name while Kazumi is your middle-
Bird: Forget it.
X Cross: You seems kind of angry...
Bird: Yeah no sh-
X Cross: Langauge.
Bird sighs
X Cross: Look I know that jerk broke your bey...
Bird holds Strike Eagle with a sad look on his face
X Cross: And I want to avenge you!
Bird: Wait, really?
X Cross: No, or course not.
Bird: Bruh.
X Cross: Not until you remember blading is about having fun!
Bird: What do you-?
Bird eyes then widen
*Flashback Begins*
We see a younger Bird playing beyblade with his original friends and they are all laughing and smiling
*Flashback Ends*
Bird: Wow...
X Cross: I'll help you beat that idiot!
Bird gulps then nods
We cut to a stadium with Takumi and X Cross on each side
Takumi: Can't believe you got this helmet kid to try and get payback for you.
Bird: Well you know you are rude!?
Takumi: And you know I can beat you to a wall!?
Bird gulps
X Cross: Blading is about having fun you A holes!
Bird: A holes? Really?
Takumi: Nah winning is the thrill!
Takumi Friend: First Battle!
X Cross holds up his bey
Bird gasps and so does Takumi and his group
X Cross: DranSword baby!
Bird: But how...?
Takumi (thoughts): A DranSword bey? Wow. It has a 360 ratchet but has a flat bit making it an aggressive attack type... eh.
X Cross gets his launcher out and locks his bey on it
X Cross: Let's go!!!!
Takumi Friend: Ready Set!
3...2..1..Let It Rip!
X Cross launches his bey at full power as Bird stares in amazement
DranSword speeds around the stadium while Blanc takes center stage
Takumi: What ya gonna do?
X Cross then takes his hands and makes an X
Bird: You doing the Wakanda Forever symbol or something?
X Cross: Now!
DranSword uses the X Dash gimmick
Bird then makes an extremely shocked face
DranSword with all it's speed then hits Blanc knocking Blanc into the pocket
Takumi's jaw then drops
Takumi Friend: Uh... DranSword with an extreme finish! X Cross is the winner!
Takumi drops to his knees
X Cross: Bird let's go.
X Cross and Bird both leave Takumi and his friends speechless
A few hours later..
Bird and X Cross are coming out of an ice cream shop with Bird holding a ice cream cone (vanilla flavored)
Bird: Thanks man!
X Cross nods
Bird: But I must ask... who are you? Without the helmet?
X Cross then removes his helmet
Then we see the guy's face
Kamen: Kamen.
Bird jaw drops
Kamen: Kamen X! And I would love to be part of your team!
Bird: But my team abandoned me...
Kamen: Which is why I want to join!
Bird: You were on one of the biggest team's in the country though.... Team PenDragon!
Kamen: Yeah... but I had a falling out with them...
Bird then makes a Pikachu face
Bird: Oh......
Kamen: But now together we can climb our way to the top of the X tower!
Bird: Yeah...
Bird looks up
Bird: We will....
Kamen: Maybe.
Bird looks back at Kamen
Bird: What do you mean?
Kamen: Well you know... we're now both nobody's?
Bird: You're not a nobody... I am!
Kamen chuckles
Kamen: Nah you're a friend.
Bird smiles the hugs Kamen
Kamen: Stop... I don't like hugs..
Bird steps back and smiles sheepishly
Bird: Sorry...
Meanwhile...
We see a figure with long hair standing
???: I will become the strongest...
Then the figure begins to have a dark blue aurora glowing
???: No matter what!
Then a female with a jacket walks up to him
Mysterious Female Figure: No sign of Kamen...
The figure turns around and smiles evilly
???: Good.
To be continued...
Next Episode: Multiple Beyblades? Different Personalities? What's Going On?
3..2..1..Let It Rip!!!!!
Also a few updates regarding the future of the thread:
Spoiler (Click to View)•Beyblade Burst Cyber Legends Is Still Happening And New Trailer Will Come Tomorrow Plus The Premiere Date Will Be Announced
•I Plan On Finishing Elemental Journey And Yes Season 2 Is Coming
•There Is A New BeyFic Is The Very Early Stages Of Development But It’s Not Coming For A Very Long Time (Gonna have to be patient sorry 🙂)
•Episodes Will Be A Bit More Spaced Out So I Or You Guys Won’t Feel Fatigued
•I Will Be A Lot More Vocal And Consistent From Now On (Well at least I’ll try lol)
You kicked things off with a bit too much haste, and the whole thing was paced quite fast. The part where they make Bird sad is a bit uh... Extreme? I think that's the word.
That being said, it's not a bad chapter, just could've been done better (I don't know anything Beyblade X related so I can't comment much on that).
RE: Bey100’s BeyFic Thread - Bey100 - Sep. 15, 2023
Beyblade Elemental Journey Episode 16:
Corvus Vs Pegasus!
Spoiler (Click to View)
We see Clause and Ginga on the opposite sides of the stadium
Valt: Second battle!
Clause has a determined look on his face
Drake (thoughts): What’s your plan to win this?
Clause then puts Corvus on his launcher
Clause: Alrighty let’s go!
Ginga smiles
Drake: Why is he smiling?
Tyson: He’s having fun.
Drake then smiles
Then Ice Pegasus starts to glow
Ginga (Thoughts): We’ve been through a lot together….
Then a shot of all Pegasus (Storm, Galaxy, Big Bang, and Samurai) leading up to Ice Pegasus
Ginga (Thoughts): We’ve come this far and we won’t stop now!
Ginga then has a big grin on his face
Valt: Ready Set!
3..2..1.. Let It Rip!
Then both Ginga and Clause do super powerful elemental launches with elemental energy coming from both
Drake: Sweet!
Both Pegasus and Corvus land in the stadium
Clause: Whoo.
Corvus takes the center while Pegasus speeds around the stadium
Ginga then swings his hand forward
Ginga: Now Ice Rush!
Pegasus goes straight for Corvus
Clause: Nope! Cross Twister!
Then Crovus makes a mini tornado effect while spinning
Tyson: Uh oh.
Pegasus hits Corvus but then gets blown back causing the bey to hit the stadium wall
Ginga: Hold on…
Pegasus begins to wobble
Ginga then closes his eyes
Drake: Ha! You lost!
Then there an effect where everything turns black and white
Ginga takes a deep breath in…
…then out
*Effect disappears*
Ginga smiles as a blue aurora begins to glow
Ginga: We got the blader spirit! Ice Pegasus!!!!
Pegasus flares out and avatar appears
Clause: You’re not winning this battle! Got that? Cross Corvus!!!!
Corvus flares out and avatar appears
Clause: Now! End this!
Ginga then clenches his fist
Tyson: Here we go.
Drake looks at Tyson with a confused look on his face
Ginga: Final Drive!!!!!
Then Pegasus Wing driver bottom tip slowly goes down and then Pegasus goes extremely fast around the stadium
Ginga: Ah ha!
Pegasus goes so fast the stadium begins to emit a blue light
Clause: What?
Ginga: Goooo!!!
Pegasus then hits Corvus knocking Corvus out of the stadium
Clause: Why..?
Valt: Ice Pegasus with a ring out finish! With a score of 2-0 Ginga’s the winner!
Ginga: Yes!
Clause makes an annoyed face
Clause: Really?
Drake: Oh stop being such a sore loser!
Clause mimics Drake
Clause: Whatever.
Ginga: You did well! Impressed!
Clause then has a slight smile on his face
Then a figure walks into the room
???: Hello…
Everyone turns their heads
Drake: Oh no…
It's Pan and he's smiling evilly
Then Pan holds up his bey
Drake eyes widen
Pan: Take a good look at Elemental Padglin! He he!
Drake takes a step back then gulps
Clause: We're screwed.
To be continued…
Next Episode: Pan Unleashed! Elemental Destruction!
Valt: Second battle!
Clause has a determined look on his face
Drake (thoughts): What’s your plan to win this?
Clause then puts Corvus on his launcher
Clause: Alrighty let’s go!
Ginga smiles
Drake: Why is he smiling?
Tyson: He’s having fun.
Drake then smiles
Then Ice Pegasus starts to glow
Ginga (Thoughts): We’ve been through a lot together….
Then a shot of all Pegasus (Storm, Galaxy, Big Bang, and Samurai) leading up to Ice Pegasus
Ginga (Thoughts): We’ve come this far and we won’t stop now!
Ginga then has a big grin on his face
Valt: Ready Set!
3..2..1.. Let It Rip!
Then both Ginga and Clause do super powerful elemental launches with elemental energy coming from both
Drake: Sweet!
Both Pegasus and Corvus land in the stadium
Clause: Whoo.
Corvus takes the center while Pegasus speeds around the stadium
Ginga then swings his hand forward
Ginga: Now Ice Rush!
Pegasus goes straight for Corvus
Clause: Nope! Cross Twister!
Then Crovus makes a mini tornado effect while spinning
Tyson: Uh oh.
Pegasus hits Corvus but then gets blown back causing the bey to hit the stadium wall
Ginga: Hold on…
Pegasus begins to wobble
Ginga then closes his eyes
Drake: Ha! You lost!
Then there an effect where everything turns black and white
Ginga takes a deep breath in…
…then out
*Effect disappears*
Ginga smiles as a blue aurora begins to glow
Ginga: We got the blader spirit! Ice Pegasus!!!!
Pegasus flares out and avatar appears
Clause: You’re not winning this battle! Got that? Cross Corvus!!!!
Corvus flares out and avatar appears
Clause: Now! End this!
Ginga then clenches his fist
Tyson: Here we go.
Drake looks at Tyson with a confused look on his face
Ginga: Final Drive!!!!!
Then Pegasus Wing driver bottom tip slowly goes down and then Pegasus goes extremely fast around the stadium
Ginga: Ah ha!
Pegasus goes so fast the stadium begins to emit a blue light
Clause: What?
Ginga: Goooo!!!
Pegasus then hits Corvus knocking Corvus out of the stadium
Clause: Why..?
Valt: Ice Pegasus with a ring out finish! With a score of 2-0 Ginga’s the winner!
Ginga: Yes!
Clause makes an annoyed face
Clause: Really?
Drake: Oh stop being such a sore loser!
Clause mimics Drake
Clause: Whatever.
Ginga: You did well! Impressed!
Clause then has a slight smile on his face
Then a figure walks into the room
???: Hello…
Everyone turns their heads
Drake: Oh no…
It's Pan and he's smiling evilly
Then Pan holds up his bey
Drake eyes widen
Pan: Take a good look at Elemental Padglin! He he!
Drake takes a step back then gulps
Clause: We're screwed.
To be continued…
Next Episode: Pan Unleashed! Elemental Destruction!
RE: Bey100’s BeyFic Thread (Bey100's Beyblade X/ Beyblade Elemental Journey) - Bey100 - Sep. 15, 2023
Beyblade Elemental Journey Episode 17:
Pan Unleashed! Elemental Destruction!
Spoiler (Click to View)
Everyone stares at Pan in shock
Clause: What are you doing here?
Pan: I have come to absorb the elemental power of Drago!
Drake mouth drops
Drake: What!?
Pan: For years I owned and created Drago…. I wanted to pitch my idea to the WBBA but they refused…
Valt stares
Pan: Then I realized Drago wasn’t connecting with me in the same way anymore.
Drake: So?
Pan: I abandon it!
Tyson: You did what!?
Pan: Drago elemental power wasn’t strong enough but then you came into the picture Drake… it connected with you.
Drake holds Fire Drago tightly
Pan: So I wanted it back!!!! But you refused!
Ginga: So you made Paglin to steal Drago’s elemental energy?
Pan smiles evilly
Pan: Accurate.
Drake: Well you’re not getting Drago you had the chance to be a good owner to your bey but you lost it!
Pan eyes lower down a little
Drake: But I won’t!
Pan sighs
Pan: Very well…
Valt: No! Battle me Pan!
Pan turns to Valt
Pan then slowly smiles
Pan: That’s really what you want?
Valt holds up Thunder Valkyrie
Pan: Fine.
A few minutes later..
Drake is staring at the bey stadium
Drake: Why won’t Valt let me battle?
Tyson: I think he’s scared of what Paglin can do.
Clause: But Valt’s the legend of legends he can’t be scared!
Tyson chuckles a little
Tyson: You have no idea….
Drake and Clause look at each other with confusion
Ginga: First Battle!
Valt puts his bey on his launcher
Valt: Elemental Paglin…. A right spinning balance type. It has a cool orange and blue color scheme I guess… but its driver is combined with the ring and it looks funky.
Pan smiles evilly
Pan: I’ll enjoy this.
Pan (thoughts): Thunder Valkyrie, has a combined ring and driver… he…
Ginga: Ready Set!
3..2..1.. Let It Rip!
Valt and Pan both do extreme elemental launches as their launchers glow bright
Both Valkyrie and Paglin land in the stadium
Drake: Please win Valt…
Paglin then goes for the center
Pan: Now Elemental Block!
Then this barrier goes around Paglin and Valkyrie rushes for an attack
Valt clenches his fist and pushes it forward
Valt: Rush Launch!
Valkyrie gives a barrage of attacks to Paglin
Valt then does same slash effect from Quad Strike
Valt: ThunderBolt Slash!
Valkyrie wings have an electricity effect as it breaks through Paglin’s barrier
Pan: Hmm…
Valkyrie then hits Paglin again knocking Paglin back into the stadium wall
This causes Paglin to start to wobble
Pan: Dang it.
Paglin stops spinning
Ginga: Thunder Valkyrie with a ring out finish! Valt takes the lead with a score of 0-1!
Drake: Yes Valt!
Tyson smiles
Pan than looks down
Valt: Pan…
Then there’s an effect where the screen gets darker and darker until Pan starts bursting out laughing
Pan: Ha!
Everyone stares at him
Valt (thoughts): He’s getting serious…
Ginga: Second Battle!
Valt and Pan put their beys on their launchers
Pan smiles creepily
*Flashback Begins*
Cavas: You must win brother!
Pan: But what if I don’t…
Cavas just chuckles
Cavas: You’ll know hell.
Pan eyes widen as his brother walks off
Pan starts to tremble in fear
*Flashback Ends*
Pan: I won’t lose!
Ginga: Ready Set!
3..2..1... Let It Rip!
Valt and Pan launch their beys as elemental energy comes from their launches
Paglin and Valkyrie land in the stadium
Pan makes a claw effect with his hands
Pan: Elemental Burn!!!
Then there’s a fire effect coming from Paglin
Drake: It really does use elemental power!
Paglin then hits Valkyrie hard into the stadium wall
Valt: We’re not done yet!
Then Valkyrie’s Push driver begins to glow blue
Valt: Thunder Rush!
Then Valkyrie goes speeding around the stadium
Valt blue aurora begins to glow
Valt: Together! Valkyrie!
Valkyrie flares out and avatar appears
Pan smiles as a orange aurora begins to glow
Pan: I will win! Paglin!
Paglin flares out and avatar appears
Valt gasps
Pan hair then goes crazy
Drake stares in absolute horror
Pan: Now Elemental Break!
Paglin then clashes with Valkyrie
Pan: Kill it!
Valkyrie then starts to from cracks on the layer
Valt: Hang on!
But unfortunately Valkyrie shatters in pieces
Everyone gasps in shock as Paglin spins around the stadium endlessly
There’s a moment of complete silence
Ginga: P-Paglin with a break finish? Pan wins with a score of 2-1!
Pan then takes Paglin and walks off
Drake runs after him
Drake: What the hell was that for!?
Pan then turns his head as his eyes glow a bright orange simply saying two words...
Pan: You're next.
Drake takes a step back in fear as Pan continues to walk away
To be continued...
Next Episode: Training Hard! Let It Rip!
3..2..1..Let It Rip!
This is probably the best episode of Elemental Journey so far
Beyblade Elemental Journey Episode 18:
Training Hard! Let It Rip!
Spoiler (Click to View)
There’s a shot of Drake launching his bey
Clause walks up to him
Clause: Still freaked out about yesterday?
Drake nods
Clause frowns
Clause: Well got some bad news…
Clause then pulls his phone out and gives it to Drake
Clause: Watch the vid.
Drake then looks in utter shock
Pan: Drake Kurgum! I challenge you to a battle at the Super Battle Arena this Saturday!
Drake face turns pale
Pan: I will take the elemental powers of Drago away and will reign supreme!
Drake starts to breathe heavily
Pan: Accept or run away like a coward!
The video ends
Drake then inhales
Drake: Welp, I’m done.
Valt: Don’t be so sure.
Valt walks up to Drake
Valt: I know things seem hopeless but at the end of the day you need to have faith.
Drake: Faith’s not gonna get me out of this! He destroyed Valkyrie for crying out loud!
Valt: That’s why you’ll train harder than ever before to defeat him!
Drake looks down
Drake: But I can’t defeat him.. I’m weak.
???: No you’re not!
Drake then turns around
Valt smiles
It’s revealed to be Shu
Clause then gets out his phone and takes a picture of him
Drake: I can’t believe this right now!
Shu smiles
Shu: Nice to meet you guys.
Clause: Nice to meet you too!
Drake: I cannot believe you’re here!
Shu: Well after hearing about everything that happened I thought to help you train for you big battle with Pan.
Drake: Wow.. thank you.
Shu nods
Shu: Now let’s waste no time!
*Montage Starts*
Drake is doing push ups
Drake: 165…
Clause jaw drops
Clause: How?
Drake is running on the treadmill
Drake: Keep pushing!
Shu: Go faster!
Clause gulps
Then we cut to Water Drago and Burst Spriggan clashing (TT Model)
Shu: Ahh!
Drake: Ahh!
*Montage Ends*
Drake is panting
Drake: I’m.. alive…
Shu: I can see that.
Drake: I can’t stop…
Clause: Buddy you should take a rest.
Drake: No.. I’m fina-
Drake then collapses to the ground
Valt: No! He passed out!
Later at Drake’s house
Drake is laying on the couch while Shu talks to his dad
Shu: I’m extremely sorry about this sir.
Drake’s Dad: It’s fine! At least my man’s okay.
Drake then makes a thumbs up
Clause: You really need to take it easy man! You went past your limits!
Drake: That’s the point!
Clause eyes widen in confusion
Clause: What do you mean?
Drake stares for a moment
Drake: Clause.. Pan’s powerful and dangerous.. I have to defeat him and I don’t know if I can.
Tears begin to fill Drake’s eyes
Drake: I don’t know if I can do anything!
???: You can!
Drake: Huh?
Then Drake is taking to Fire Drago’s aurora as he sees the Fire Drago avatar right in front of him
Fire Drago: Do you no longer believe in me!?
Drake: I-
Fire Drago: Will you abandon me too!?
Drake: Never!!!!
Fire Drago: Then rest your mind. We’re a team we got each other!
Drake: You’re right, I’m sorry..
Fire Drago: Don’t be, I know what it’s like to be afraid.
Drake stares
Fire Drago: But we must be brave to overcome challenges!
Drake: I understand!
Fire Drago: Good!
Then Drake is taking out of the void
Drake: I have to be brave.
Clause: What?
Then all the sudden music starts playing
Drake: I got to be brave!
Clause: Yeah?
Drake then stands up
Drake: I got to be strong!
Clause then makes a weirded out face
Clause: This isn’t Disney buddy.
Drake: I have to feel like I belong!!!!
Clause: Where?
Drake: I have to climb over mountains!
Then there's an image of Drake climbing a mountain
Drake: I have to break through walls!!!
Then we see Drake punching through a wall
Drake then jumps on the living room table
Drake: I…have…to..keep…going!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Everyone covers their ears
Music stops
Clause: You are a terrible singer!
Drake: Bruh.
Clause: Never do that again okay!?
Meanwhile…
Cavas punches Pan's face to the ground
Pan: Brother… why?
Cavas: I wanted you to destroy Drago not Valkyrie you idiot!
Pan: But I’m go-
Cavas: Shut up!!!!
Pan shuts his mouth
Cavas: You will defeat Drake or otherwise I will take Paglin! Got it!?
Pan nods in fear
To be continued…
Next Episode: The Ends Beginning!
3..2..1.. Let It Rip!!!
RE: Bey100’s BeyFic Thread (Bey100's Beyblade X/ Beyblade Elemental Journey) - Bey100 - Sep. 16, 2023
Updates On The Rest Of Year:
Spoiler (Click to View)
• Elemental Journey Finale is next week and I promise the season will go out with a bang
• Cyber Legends is not being released until next year mostly because I simply want a gap between first and second season plus there’s some parts of the first season I’m not a big fan of so I want to correct for the second, remember it premieres January 12th 2024
• Elemental Explosion isn’t gonna come till next spring mostly so that way there can be time to breathe in between seasons, I don’t have an exact date but I playing around with these few: March 1st 2024, March 15th 2024 or April 5th 2024
• X will be the big BeyFic for the rest of the year and will continue to get new episodes (this will include some holiday specials)
• Cyber Legends is not being released until next year mostly because I simply want a gap between first and second season plus there’s some parts of the first season I’m not a big fan of so I want to correct for the second, remember it premieres January 12th 2024
• Elemental Explosion isn’t gonna come till next spring mostly so that way there can be time to breathe in between seasons, I don’t have an exact date but I playing around with these few: March 1st 2024, March 15th 2024 or April 5th 2024
• X will be the big BeyFic for the rest of the year and will continue to get new episodes (this will include some holiday specials)
RE: Bey100’s BeyFic Thread (Bey100's Beyblade X/ Beyblade Elemental Journey) - Bey100 - Sep. 19, 2023
Beyblade Elemental Journey Episode 19:
The End! Elemental Showdown! (Changed this to the final episode)
Spoiler (Click to View)
Drake is launching his bey
Drake: Yah!
Drake then breathes heavily
Valt walks up to him
Valt: You think you’re ready for your battle with Pan tomorrow?
Drake smiles
Drake: Let’s do this!
Valt smiles
*The next day*...
There is a big arena with crowds screaming
Clause, Drake’s Dad, Valt and Shu are in the bleachers
Shu: You can do this Drake…
Announcer: Ladies and Gentlemen! Welcome to the battle you’ve all been waiting for!
Crowd scream
Drake is standing as his heart is beating quickly
Drake then takes a deep breath in then out
Pan is talking to his brother
Cavas: Remember Pan.. do not lose!!!
Pan looks down with a frown
Cavas: And get that stupid frown off your face!
Cavas walks off leaving Pan
Announcer: On the left side it is the Elemental master himself Pan!
A door opens up and Pan comes out
Crowd screams
Announcer: And on the right side is the kid.. Drake Kurgum!!!
A door opens up and Drake comes out
Crowd screams
Clause: Go Drake!
Drake’s Dad: Go son! Go!
Valt: You can do it!
Shu smiles
Shu: You got this.
Drake smiles and nods
Drake and Pan walk up to the stadium
Referee: Listen up! This will be first to 2 points! Got it?
Drake and Pan both nod
Pan smiles evilly
Pan: I can’t wait to crush you!
Drake then pulls out Fire Drago
Clause: Going with Fire huh?
Valt nods
Shu: He needs to go aggressive if he wants to win.
Drake holds up Fire Drago proudly
Drake: I had enough of your shenanigans! It’s time to end this once and for all!
Pan holds up Elemental Paglin
Pan: Couldn’t agree more!
Drake then is taken to Drago’s void
Then there a beautiful shot of the Fire Drago avatar in front of him
Drago: Drake..
Drake: Drago!
Drago: It’s all come down to this!
Drake nods
Drake: Remember we fight as one!
Drago: Agreed.
Drake: I always got your back buddy!!!
Drago: Just like I have yours!
Drake taken out of the void
Pan stares angrily
Pan: You cannot win!!!!
Drake: Yeah you're right I can!
Pan stomps his left leg
Pan: I will take the elemental power of Drago away!
Drake: Nuh uh!’
Pan: Why are you so annoying!!!?
Referee smiles sheepishly
Referee: Can we get back to the battle please?
Pan: Yeah whatever.
Drake laughs
Clause makes a Pikachu face
Clause: Drake loves being annoying.
Shu: Yeah, but it seems to be a part of his plan.
Valt: Well he’s definitely doing a great job!
Valt smiles
Referee: First battle!
Drake and Pan put their beys on their launchers
Pan: You’re done!
Referee: Ready Set!
3..2..1.. Let It Rip!
Drake and Pan both do super powerful Elemental launches as their launchers glow extremely bright and elemental energy comes from their launches
Fire Drago and Elemental Paglin land in the stadium
Pan: Elemental Crux!
Paglin speeds up and goes for an attack on Drago
Drake: Twist him up!
Drago the uses its Burn driver to do a mini drift on the stadium and dodge Paglin’s attack
Drake smirks
Drake: You like that?
Pan: No but thanks for asking. Elemental Rush!
Then there’s a cool effect where Paglin uses a lot of elemental power (Fire, Water, Earth, Air, and some lighting)
Drake eyes widen
Pan: Now Elemental Breaker!
Paglin then goes straight for a hit on Drago
Drake’s red aurora then starts to glow as he clenches his fist
Drake eyes turn red
Drake: Let’s turn up the heat! Fire Drago!
Drago flares out and avatar appears
Pan orange aurora then glows
Pan: Feel the power! Elemental Paglin!
Paglin flares out and avatar appears
Then there’s a cool shot where it looks like Drago’s avatar is going in for an attack
Pan: Elemental Steal!
Paglin and Drago then clash in the center of the stadium
Pan: Go!!!
Drake: Don’t hold back!
Then there’s a cool effect where it looks like Paglin is stealing Drago’s elemental power by the fire in Drago going into Paglin
Drake then screams
Drake: Ahhhhhh!!!
Then it looks like Drago is taking the elemental powers of Paglin
Pan: What!?
Then all the sudden there’s a big explosion from the stadium and the screen goes white
We then see a cool black and white effect where Drago and Paglin avatars are fighting each other in a void with Drake and Pan being the only people present
Drake: I will not give up!!!!!
Drake’s hair then goes crazy and the black/white effect goes away
Drake: Push through!!!!!!!!!!
Pan then screams at the top of his lungs
Pan: Now!!!!!!! Paglin!!!!!
Then another explosion happens and the screen goes white
When the effect disappear Paglin is outside the stadium while Drago is steal spinning inside
Drake: Yes!!!!
Drake’s Dad: Yeah!
Clause: Let’s go!
Valt: He did it!
Referee: Fire Drago with a ring out finish! With a score of 0-2 Drake Kurgum is the winner!!!!!
Drake jumps in the air joyfully
Drake: I won!!!!!!!
Cavas watching from his phone yells angrily
Cavas: That useless idiot!!!!!
Cavas throws his phone to the ground breaking it
Drake picks up Drago but realizes it’s different
Drake: Woah…
Drago now has three blades and a red, blue, green, and gold color scheme, and a combined driver that is very similar to Generate
Drake: Wow Drago evolved… and it seems to be a new system as there's no ring.
Crowds cheer
Drake the smiles
Drake: I will call this new bey Drago Explosion and its driver Combined!
Drake holds his new Drago in the air proudly
Crowds continue to cheer
Clause: I knew you could do it!
Drake’s Dad then holds back his tears being so proud of his son
Drake’s Dad: His dream came true… he proved me wrong. Well done!!!
Beno watches from his phone
Beno: Nice job…
Beno then licks his teeth
Valt: How was Drago able to evolve during battle?
Shu: We’ll never know…
Shu chuckles
Ginga and Tyson are both watching from their phones
Ginga/Tyson: Yes!
Pan then holds Paglin seeing the color of the bey all gray
Pan: Drake took what was rightfully his.
Pan looks down and smiles slightly
Drake: Hey!
Pan eyes widen
Drake runs up to him
Drake: Good battle.
Drake then hold out his hand offering him a handshake
Pan then shakes Drake’s hand
Pan: I guess you won fair and square.
Drake smiles
Drake: Thanks for not being a sore loser.
Pan rolls his eyes than smiles
Drake’s Dad: We are going to celebrate!
Drake: Yeah!
Then we see a shot of Buck on the ground crying like a little baby
Buck: How did Drake win the battle!
Buck's Dad comes
Buck's Dad: Go to your room! You're grounded!
Buck whines as he gets up and walks to his room
A few hours later..
Cavas has Pan tied to a chair
Cavas: You idiot…
Pan: I’m sorry!
Cavas then hits his brother in the head with a bat knocking Pan out
Cavas: I will put you into a coma.. So I can take Paglin and turn it into something stronger, better, and crazier… and you
There’s a shot of Pan knocked out on the chair
Cavas: Are worthless!
Cavas then takes another swing
The End!
The story continues in Elemental Explosion which is a literal part 2!
Tell me your thoughts on it!!!
And to celebrate the finale here's this:
"Power Up"
Beyblade Elemental Explosion Official Teaser Trailer:
Spoiler (Click to View)
WBO/Bey100 BeyFics logo appears
There's a text that says...
"Next Year...."
Drake puts Drago Explosion on his launcher that is now blue and red
"Power Up"
Drake launches Drago
Then there's a bunch of shots of Valt, Tyson, Ginga and Clause powering up
There's a quick shot of Cavas holding his new bey Crazy Chaos as his hand is glowing and purple auroa
There's then a shot of Clause holding up his new Corvus (It has a Master Diabolos like shape and a dark green and aqua blue color scheme with some gold)
There's then another shot of a new Valkyrie in the air (It has a very close shape with Strike Valkyrie having more of three wings then blades and color scheme is blue and gold with some hints of red)
Finally Drake red aurora glows as he holds up Drago Explosion
Then the logo for Beyblade Elemental Explosion appears
No date yet revealed just "Next Year"
There's a text that says...
"Next Year...."
Drake puts Drago Explosion on his launcher that is now blue and red
"Power Up"
Drake launches Drago
Then there's a bunch of shots of Valt, Tyson, Ginga and Clause powering up
There's a quick shot of Cavas holding his new bey Crazy Chaos as his hand is glowing and purple auroa
There's then a shot of Clause holding up his new Corvus (It has a Master Diabolos like shape and a dark green and aqua blue color scheme with some gold)
There's then another shot of a new Valkyrie in the air (It has a very close shape with Strike Valkyrie having more of three wings then blades and color scheme is blue and gold with some hints of red)
Finally Drake red aurora glows as he holds up Drago Explosion
Then the logo for Beyblade Elemental Explosion appears
No date yet revealed just "Next Year"
April 10 2023 - September 18 2023
Update Time:
Spoiler (Click to View)
- Now that both Cyber Crush and Elemental Journey are finished the countdown to Cyber Legends and Elemental Explosion begin!
- Elemental Explosion may be pushed up to Winter or pushed to the summer of next year due to me not wanting to start the series when big tests are going on (And I take big test seriously) but it's a bit more likely to be pushed up tbh
- For the rest of the year X will be the BeyFic running
- Elemental Explosion may be pushed up to Winter or pushed to the summer of next year due to me not wanting to start the series when big tests are going on (And I take big test seriously) but it's a bit more likely to be pushed up tbh
- For the rest of the year X will be the BeyFic running
RE: Bey100’s BeyFic Thread (Bey100's Beyblade X/ Beyblade Elemental Journey *Finale*) - Bey100 - Sep. 19, 2023
Episode Titles For X:
2. Multiple Beyblade’s? Different Personalities? Multi!
3. The Perfect Defense! KnightShield!
4. KnightShield Evolution! KnightLance!
5. A Maid Owns This Bey!? SharkEdge!
RE: Bey100’s BeyFic Thread (Bey100's Beyblade X/ Beyblade Elemental Journey *Finale*) - Bey100 - Sep. 20, 2023
Beyblade Elemental Explosion will premiere February 2nd 2024
RE: Bey100’s BeyFic Thread (Bey100's Beyblade X/ Beyblade Elemental Journey *Finale*) - Bey100 - Sep. 20, 2023
Teaser For New Untitled BeyFic Coming 2025:
Spoiler (Click to View)
WBO/Bey100s BeyFics Logo Appears
There’s then a shot of a spinning letter B going around the stadium like a Beyblade
Then we see the B clash with another B
Then an explosion happens and the screen glows gold for a little bit
Finally we then see “Coming 2025…”
Project BZ!
There’s then a shot of a spinning letter B going around the stadium like a Beyblade
Then we see the B clash with another B
Then an explosion happens and the screen glows gold for a little bit
Finally we then see “Coming 2025…”
Project BZ!
RE: Bey100’s BeyFic Thread (Bey100's Beyblade X/ Beyblade Elemental Journey *Finale*) - Bey100 - Sep. 22, 2023
Bey100's Beyblade X Episode 2:
Multiple Beyblades? Different Personalities? Multi!
Spoiler (Click to View)
Kamen and Bird are sitting down talking with Kamen wearing his helmet
Bird: So what’s our plan here?
Kamen: First things first, we need to get you a new bey.
Bird looks down sad
Bird: Yeah that jerk broke my eagle bey!
???: Bummer.
Bird and Kamen both get up and turn around to see a female wearing a black sweater
Kamen: Uh hi?
Multi: My name is Multi! You must be Bird and the mysterious X Cross.
Kamen chuckles
Multi: Bird, I’ve heard about how badly you were defeated.
Bird screeches his teeth
Multi laughs
Bird: Stop laughing! It’s not funny!
Multi: You were crying like a little baby!
Bird then blushes in embarrassment
Bird: Stop!
Tears start to come down Multi eyes as she laughs hard
Kamen: Hey!!!
Multi then all the sudden stops laughing
Kamen: If you know you aren’t going to be useful to us then leave!
Multi then rolls her eyes and looks at Bird
Bird: What?
Multi then tosses Bird a Beyblade
Multi: Sorry geez.
Bird catches the bey
Bird: Woah.
Then there’s a nice look at HellScythe
Bird: What’s it called?
Multi: HellScythe.
Bird: Cool.
Multi: I thought you may have liked it and as funny as the outcome of the battle was I still felt kinda bad, so..
Bird smiles
Bird then quickly rushes to hug Multi
Bird: Thank you! Thank you!
Multi then smiles sheepishly
Multi: Ha ha.
Kamen: Do you have multiple beys?
Multi: Well I just recently made HellScythe but..
Multi then pulls out three beys from her pocket
Then there’s a shot of WizardArrow, KnightShield, and KnightLance
Multi: Meet WizardArrow, KnightShield and KnightLance!!!!
Bird: You have 3 beys!?
Kamen: I mean Multi is her name.
Bird: Oh.
Multi smiles
Multi: WizardArrow is a stamina type.
Bird: Hm.
Multi: KnightShield and KnightLance are both defensive types.
Bird: Nice.
Kamen: You know what? Tell us more about yourself.
Multi chuckles looking down then fixes her hair
Later at a noodle shop..
Bird, Multi, and Kamen are all sitting down
Bird rushes the noodles
Bird: Yummy!!!!
Kamen: Goodness calm down.
Multi: I am a Beytuber making tons of content.
Bird: Beytuber? How many subscribers?
Multi: Well..
Multi then takes Bird face and shows him her channel
Bird jaw drops
Then it’s revealed to be 40.5 Million subscribers
Bird: Holy sh!t!
Kamen: How do we not know you!?
Multi shrugs
Bird: How do you even plan on eating?
Kamen: I don’t..
Multi eyes lower
Multi: Hey..
Kamen stares
Kamen: What’s up?
Multi: You wanna battle!
Kamen: I don’t know…
Bird: Say yes man!
Kamen: Fine… let’s do this!
Then there’s a shot of a stadium where both Kamen and Multi are standing on opposite sides
Kamen: This is gonna be fun.
Kamen then holds up DranSword
Multi eyes then widen a little
Multi: Wait how do you have-
Multi jaw drops
Multi looks at Bird
Multi: Bird?
Bird then looks back at Multi
Multi: Is he?
Bird: Find out.
Multi the looks back at Kamen
Multi: Wait I almost forgot!
Kamen: What?
Multi then runs off
Bird: Hey!
A few minutes later..
Multi is back with this cat outfit
Multi: Now the fun can really begin!
Bird looks at Kamen and shrugs
Bird: First Battle!
Multi: I’ll use WizardArrow!
She holds her bey up
Kamen: WizardArrow is a stamina type… let’s see how this goes.
Bird: Ready Set!
3..2..1.. Let It Rip!
Then both Kamen and Multi launch their beys
WizardArrow and Dransword land in the stadium
Multi: Now go!
WizardArrow takes the center
Kamen: Attack and don’t hold back!
DranSword then gives a barrage of attacks to WizardArrow
Multi then does the cute anime wink
Bird: What the hell…
Multi: Now WizardFlash!
The WizardArrow does this affect where is looks like there’s multiple WizardArrows in the center of the stadium and the real one knocks DranSword back
Kamen then does the X with his hands
Kamen:X Dash!!!!!!!
DranSword hits the gear on the stadium then goes extremely fast
Kamen: Go!
DranSword then hits WizardArrow but gets knocked back so far it goes out of the stadium
Kamen: Dang it!
Bird: WizardArrow with a ring out finish! Multi wins with a score of 2-0!
Multi laughs
Multi: Nice!
Bird looks at Multi then smiles
Bird: So cool..
Kamen then takes off his helmet to reveal his face
Multi: Ha! I knew it!
Kamen smiles and nods
Bird: This is cool! Now it’s my turn!
Bird then holds up HellScythe
Multi then changes her outfit into a magician clothing
Multi: Then let's get started...
Meanwhile...
An old man is closing his noodle shop
Old Man: One day....
To be continued..
Next Episode: The Perfect Defense! KnightShield!
3..2..1..Let It Rip!!!!
RE: Bey100’s BeyFic Thread (Bey100's Beyblade X/ Beyblade Burst Cyber Legends) - Bey100 - Sep. 22, 2023
Out of curiosity which of my BeyFics do you like the most and why? (Cyber Crush, Elemental Journey and X)
Turboblader and Hollowmind13
RE: Bey100’s BeyFic Thread (Bey100's Beyblade X/ Beyblade Burst Cyber Legends) - Turboblader - Sep. 23, 2023
(Sep. 22, 2023 11:25 PM)Bey100 Wrote: Out of curiosity which of my BeyFics do you like the most and why? (Cyber Crush, Elemental Journey and X)
Turboblader and Hollowmind13
I like Cyber Crush and X so far.
RE: Bey100’s BeyFic Thread (Bey100's Beyblade X/ Beyblade Burst Cyber Legends) - Hollowmind13 - Sep. 23, 2023
(Sep. 22, 2023 11:25 PM)Bey100 Wrote: Out of curiosity which of my BeyFics do you like the most and why? (Cyber Crush, Elemental Journey and X)We getting fancy here with the mentions, huh?
Turboblader and Hollowmind13
Cyber tbh.
Elemental has that high power vibe that I kinda don't resonate too well, but it's not bad (imo). Characters are nice tho and story is ok.
X is brand new so no comments as of rn.
RE: Bey100’s BeyFic Thread (Bey100's Beyblade X/ Beyblade Burst Cyber Legends) - Bey100 - Sep. 26, 2023
Bey100’s Beyblade X Episode 3:
The Perfect Defense! KnightShield!
Spoiler (Click to View)
Multi is smiling as she is in her magician outfit
Multi: Time for you Bird to battle my defense type bey!
Multi then holds up KnightShield
Bird eyes widen
Kamen: KnightShield a right spin defense type.. With a 3-80 Ratchet and a needle bit. Let’s see what’s up.
Bird smiles
Bird: It doesn’t matter what you throw my way!
Multi smirks
Bird: I won’t lose!
Bird then holds up his HellScythe bey
Bird smiles
Kamen: First Battle!
Kamen: HellScythe is a right spin balance type! Has a 4-60 Ratchet and a Tapered bit…
Multi: Me and my bey will destroy you but first want to see a magic trick?
Bird: Huh?
Then Multi walks up to Bird and takes a coin from the back of Bird’s ear
Bird then has a confused look
Bird: But how?
Multi flips the coin and catches it
Multi: You’ll never know.
Then Multi flips back to the other side of the stadium
Kamen: I wonder if Multi gave Bird HellScythe on purpose after all she probably knows the bey strength and maybe weakness..
Bird and Multi put their beys on their launchers
Kamen: Okay!
Bird has a fierce look in his eye
Kamen: Ready Set!
3..2..1..Let It Rip!
Bird and Multi launch their beys into the stadium
KnightShield and HellScythe land in the stadium
Multi smiles
KnightShield takes the center while HellScythe spins around the stadium
Multi: Now KnightShield!
The KnightShield blade glows green as HellScythe continues to go around the stadium
Multi then snaps her fingers
Multi: Come on.. I’m waiting.
Bird then clenches his fist
Bird: Okay.. Go!!
HellScythe then goes straight for KnightShield
Multi then holds out her palm
Multi: Nope!!!! Stand Strong!!
HellScythe clashes with KnightShield
Bird smiles
Bird: Now end this!
But HellScythe gets pushed back as the attack was deflected
Kamen: It deflected the attack..
HellScythe then begins to wobble
Bird: Oh.
Then KnightShield hits HellScythe knocking HellScythe out of the stadium
Kamen: KnightShield with a ring out finish! With a score of 2-0 Multi wins!
Multi the laughs
Multi: I told you.. No one can get past my shield!!!
Multi holds up KnightShield
Bird then picks up HellScythe
Bird growls angrily
Bird: This is so stupid!!!!!!!! I should’ve won!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Bird then storms off
Multi: Bird!
Multi looks at Kamen concerned
Kamen looks at Multi
Kamen: I’ll talk to him.
Multi nods
Multi: I hope I didn’t offend him.
Kamen: No you didn’t do anything wrong.
Bird is sitting on the sidewalk talking to himself
Kamen then walks up to Bird and sits by him
Kamen: Bird..
Bird turns his head to look at Kamen
Bird: What?
Kamen: What’s wrong with you?
Bird: I’m just angry I lost.
Kamen: I talked to you about understanding that Beyblade is just a game. It’s about having fun, not just winning.
Bird: But my two old team members called me pathetic and my dad..
Kamen: Then you have to prove them wrong!!!
Bird: But my dad’s gone. What if he is disappointed in me..?
Kamen then gets up
Kamen: It doesn’t matter!!!
Bird then gets up
Bird: What!!!!!????
Kamen: Wah my dad died! So what!? You have to stand up for yourself!!!!!
Bird: Shut up! You don’t know how much I missed him!
Kamen: Guess what many people lose loved ones they care about so deal with it!
Bird then gives Kamen a death look
Multi walks up to both Bird and Kamen
Multi: Uh guys?
Bird/Kamen: NOT NOW!!!!!
Bird: I thought I made a friend, turns out you’re just a jerk, an absolute jerk!!!!!!
Kamen: I’m not the one wanting to cry!
Multi: Guys, can we just get back to battling?
Bird: Listen Multi I appreciate you for getting me HellScythe but I can’t be friends with this jerk!
Kamen: Hey-
Bird: I always looked up to you but your true colors have shown!
Kamen: Which is?
Bird: You are a terrible person! No wonder Team Pendragon kicked you out!!
Kamen: They never kicked me out-!
Bird: They should’ve been ashamed to ever have you on the team in the first place!!!
Then everyone goes quiet
Kamen looks down
Bird: Stings huh?
Kamen looks up close to tears
Bird: Good.
Bird then storms off leaving Multi and Kamen alone
Multi: Uh.. want to see another magic-?
Kamen: Not now.
Multi: Okay cool.
Bird continues to walk down the sidewalk as he sees from the distance some kids looking at him and whispering before he hears..
Random Kid 1: What a joke! He can’t win any battle! He sucks!
Bird then clenches his fist and runs up to the kids
Bird: Stop talking about me!!!
Random Kid 2: Or what?
Random Kid 3 clenches his fist
Then there’s a shot of the kids beating up Bird
???: Stop!!!!
Then there’s a shot of an old man
One of the kids look at the man
Random Kid 2: What are ya gonna do?
The kid then goes goes for a punch on the old man but the man takes the kid arm and twists it
Random Kid 2: Ow! Sorry!
The 3 kids then run off
???: Are you ok?
Bird gets up as he wipes blood coming from his nose
Bird: Yeah, who are you?
The old man smiles
Meanwhile…
There’s a bey spinning around the stadium
Random Kid: Go! BigApe!
There’s a bey with a gorilla motif and a 4 bladed shape
Then there’s the opponent who has orange hair and a wild looking design
???: Tear them apart.
A massive explosion from the stadium happens
Then Random Kid gets knocked back from the wind
The opponent smiles
When the explosion stops the Random Kid sees his bey: BigApe snapped in half at the middle of the stadium
???: Sucks to be you huh?
Then the opponents grabs his bey and tosses it into the air before catching it
Opponent holds up his bey with a Leon motif and a black color scheme
Opponent: Never mess with LeonClaw!!!!
LeonClaw then glows a gold aurora
Opponent: Team Zooganic is supreme!!!!!
The opponent then laughs
Meanwhile..
We see a mysterious figure sitting in a big chair while holding Cobalt Drake smiling
To..be..continued!
Next Episode: KnightShield Evolution! KnightLance!!
3..2..1..Let It Rip!!!!
Multi: Time for you Bird to battle my defense type bey!
Multi then holds up KnightShield
Bird eyes widen
Kamen: KnightShield a right spin defense type.. With a 3-80 Ratchet and a needle bit. Let’s see what’s up.
Bird smiles
Bird: It doesn’t matter what you throw my way!
Multi smirks
Bird: I won’t lose!
Bird then holds up his HellScythe bey
Bird smiles
Kamen: First Battle!
Kamen: HellScythe is a right spin balance type! Has a 4-60 Ratchet and a Tapered bit…
Multi: Me and my bey will destroy you but first want to see a magic trick?
Bird: Huh?
Then Multi walks up to Bird and takes a coin from the back of Bird’s ear
Bird then has a confused look
Bird: But how?
Multi flips the coin and catches it
Multi: You’ll never know.
Then Multi flips back to the other side of the stadium
Kamen: I wonder if Multi gave Bird HellScythe on purpose after all she probably knows the bey strength and maybe weakness..
Bird and Multi put their beys on their launchers
Kamen: Okay!
Bird has a fierce look in his eye
Kamen: Ready Set!
3..2..1..Let It Rip!
Bird and Multi launch their beys into the stadium
KnightShield and HellScythe land in the stadium
Multi smiles
KnightShield takes the center while HellScythe spins around the stadium
Multi: Now KnightShield!
The KnightShield blade glows green as HellScythe continues to go around the stadium
Multi then snaps her fingers
Multi: Come on.. I’m waiting.
Bird then clenches his fist
Bird: Okay.. Go!!
HellScythe then goes straight for KnightShield
Multi then holds out her palm
Multi: Nope!!!! Stand Strong!!
HellScythe clashes with KnightShield
Bird smiles
Bird: Now end this!
But HellScythe gets pushed back as the attack was deflected
Kamen: It deflected the attack..
HellScythe then begins to wobble
Bird: Oh.
Then KnightShield hits HellScythe knocking HellScythe out of the stadium
Kamen: KnightShield with a ring out finish! With a score of 2-0 Multi wins!
Multi the laughs
Multi: I told you.. No one can get past my shield!!!
Multi holds up KnightShield
Bird then picks up HellScythe
Bird growls angrily
Bird: This is so stupid!!!!!!!! I should’ve won!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Bird then storms off
Multi: Bird!
Multi looks at Kamen concerned
Kamen looks at Multi
Kamen: I’ll talk to him.
Multi nods
Multi: I hope I didn’t offend him.
Kamen: No you didn’t do anything wrong.
Bird is sitting on the sidewalk talking to himself
Kamen then walks up to Bird and sits by him
Kamen: Bird..
Bird turns his head to look at Kamen
Bird: What?
Kamen: What’s wrong with you?
Bird: I’m just angry I lost.
Kamen: I talked to you about understanding that Beyblade is just a game. It’s about having fun, not just winning.
Bird: But my two old team members called me pathetic and my dad..
Kamen: Then you have to prove them wrong!!!
Bird: But my dad’s gone. What if he is disappointed in me..?
Kamen then gets up
Kamen: It doesn’t matter!!!
Bird then gets up
Bird: What!!!!!????
Kamen: Wah my dad died! So what!? You have to stand up for yourself!!!!!
Bird: Shut up! You don’t know how much I missed him!
Kamen: Guess what many people lose loved ones they care about so deal with it!
Bird then gives Kamen a death look
Multi walks up to both Bird and Kamen
Multi: Uh guys?
Bird/Kamen: NOT NOW!!!!!
Bird: I thought I made a friend, turns out you’re just a jerk, an absolute jerk!!!!!!
Kamen: I’m not the one wanting to cry!
Multi: Guys, can we just get back to battling?
Bird: Listen Multi I appreciate you for getting me HellScythe but I can’t be friends with this jerk!
Kamen: Hey-
Bird: I always looked up to you but your true colors have shown!
Kamen: Which is?
Bird: You are a terrible person! No wonder Team Pendragon kicked you out!!
Kamen: They never kicked me out-!
Bird: They should’ve been ashamed to ever have you on the team in the first place!!!
Then everyone goes quiet
Kamen looks down
Bird: Stings huh?
Kamen looks up close to tears
Bird: Good.
Bird then storms off leaving Multi and Kamen alone
Multi: Uh.. want to see another magic-?
Kamen: Not now.
Multi: Okay cool.
Bird continues to walk down the sidewalk as he sees from the distance some kids looking at him and whispering before he hears..
Random Kid 1: What a joke! He can’t win any battle! He sucks!
Bird then clenches his fist and runs up to the kids
Bird: Stop talking about me!!!
Random Kid 2: Or what?
Random Kid 3 clenches his fist
Then there’s a shot of the kids beating up Bird
???: Stop!!!!
Then there’s a shot of an old man
One of the kids look at the man
Random Kid 2: What are ya gonna do?
The kid then goes goes for a punch on the old man but the man takes the kid arm and twists it
Random Kid 2: Ow! Sorry!
The 3 kids then run off
???: Are you ok?
Bird gets up as he wipes blood coming from his nose
Bird: Yeah, who are you?
The old man smiles
Meanwhile…
There’s a bey spinning around the stadium
Random Kid: Go! BigApe!
There’s a bey with a gorilla motif and a 4 bladed shape
Then there’s the opponent who has orange hair and a wild looking design
???: Tear them apart.
A massive explosion from the stadium happens
Then Random Kid gets knocked back from the wind
The opponent smiles
When the explosion stops the Random Kid sees his bey: BigApe snapped in half at the middle of the stadium
???: Sucks to be you huh?
Then the opponents grabs his bey and tosses it into the air before catching it
Opponent holds up his bey with a Leon motif and a black color scheme
Opponent: Never mess with LeonClaw!!!!
LeonClaw then glows a gold aurora
Opponent: Team Zooganic is supreme!!!!!
The opponent then laughs
Meanwhile..
We see a mysterious figure sitting in a big chair while holding Cobalt Drake smiling
To..be..continued!
Next Episode: KnightShield Evolution! KnightLance!!
3..2..1..Let It Rip!!!!
RE: Bey100’s BeyFic Thread (Bey100's Beyblade X/ Beyblade Burst Cyber Legends) - Bey100 - Sep. 26, 2023
Beyblade Burst Cyber Legends Episode Titles:
1. The Legend Arrives!
2. Venom Power! Claw Cobra!
3. A New Legacy! Aires Evolution!
4. The Protector! Defend Roc!
5. Burn Down! Master Griffin!
More updates soon.
RE: Bey100’s BeyFic Thread (Bey100's Beyblade X/ Beyblade Burst Cyber Legends) - Bey100 - Sep. 27, 2023
All Characters In Beyblade Burst Cyber Legends So Far:
Spoiler (Click to View)
Alex Akane - Legend Aires
Willow Wild - Claw Cobra
Valt Aoi - Arrow Valkyrie
Gale Ten - Master Griffin
Ron Kiowa - Defend Roc
Alice Alina - Glow Athena
Chuck Dollar - Bullseye Hercules
Phil Power - Priceless Phoenix
Man Walker - Strong Hercules
Leno Katana - Sword Shinobo
Willow Wild - Claw Cobra
Valt Aoi - Arrow Valkyrie
Gale Ten - Master Griffin
Ron Kiowa - Defend Roc
Alice Alina - Glow Athena
Chuck Dollar - Bullseye Hercules
Phil Power - Priceless Phoenix
Man Walker - Strong Hercules
Leno Katana - Sword Shinobo
RE: Bey100’s BeyFic Thread (Bey100's Beyblade X/ Beyblade Burst Cyber Legends) - Bey100 - Sep. 28, 2023
Dates For Upcoming BeyFics:
Beyblade Burst Cyber Legends (January 12th 2024)
Beyblade Elemental Explosion (February 2nd 2024)
Untitled BeyFic (May 31st 2024)
Project BZ BeyFic (Sometime In 2025)
More Updates Soon!
RE: Bey100’s BeyFic Thread (Bey100's Beyblade X/ Beyblade Burst Cyber Legends) - Bey100 - Sep. 29, 2023
Breaking Announcement!
Beyblade Hex Announcement:
Plot:
Spoiler (Click to View)
A 40 year old man named Vex Vector use to love blading as a child but eventually grew up and thought he would never blade again, but when a new tournament for older players is announced Vex takes the opportunity to return to blading and be the best!
Spoiler (Click to View)
Vex Vector - ViciousHex.Rush
Thomas Dwayne - TerrorGhost.Fear
Thomas Dwayne - TerrorGhost.Fear
Spoiler (Click to View)
Blade: It is where the main contact points are and there’s some metal.
Driver - Self Explanatory
Magnet- It helps the driver connect to stadium.
Driver - Self Explanatory
Magnet- It helps the driver connect to stadium.
H**e*D**g**n
This is gonna be much different from the other BeyFics because the main protagonist will be an adult so hope your hype!
Releases May 31st 2024!
RE: Bey100’s BeyFic Thread (Bey100's Beyblade X/ Beyblade Burst Cyber Legends) - Bey100 - Oct. 01, 2023
Beyblade Elemental Explosion New Beys:
Drago Explosion.Combined
Crazy Cavas.Spike
Switch Corvus.Dud
Unlimited Valkyrie.Invincible Reboot
More Info Soon.
RE: Bey100’s BeyFic Thread (Bey100's Beyblade X/ Beyblade Burst Cyber Legends) - Bey100 - Oct. 03, 2023
Beyblade Hex Character Contest Announcement!
Spoiler (Click to View)
While waiting for episode 4 of Beyblade X (taking long due to personal family stuff) I am officially launching the Beyblade Hex character contest!
Here’s how it will work:
For the character you will have….
- Name
- Age
- Birthday
- Appearance
- Personality
And for the bey you will have…
- Blade
- Driver
- Magnet
Whoever wins will have their bey and character appear in Beyblade Hex when it premieres!
This contest begins today Tuesday October 3rd 2023 and runs until December 1st 2023!!!
Here’s how it will work:
For the character you will have….
- Name
- Age
- Birthday
- Appearance
- Personality
And for the bey you will have…
- Blade
- Driver
- Magnet
Whoever wins will have their bey and character appear in Beyblade Hex when it premieres!
This contest begins today Tuesday October 3rd 2023 and runs until December 1st 2023!!!
Update Time:
Spoiler (Click to View)
* Episode 4 of X is coming soon (maybe tomorrow) the reason it’s been taking long is due to an important family development and I won’t say more than that, but don’t worry episode 4 will arrive soon
* Obviously the Hex character contest is going on currently so join if you want to
* Speaking of Hex a brand new trailer for Hex is coming soon along with some updates on beys and characters
* As you can probably tell Cyber Legends and Elemental Explosion has been getting more info lately and that trend will continue for the rest of the year so stay tuned
* Obviously the Hex character contest is going on currently so join if you want to
* Speaking of Hex a brand new trailer for Hex is coming soon along with some updates on beys and characters
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RE: Bey100’s BeyFic Thread (Bey100's Beyblade X) *Character Contest Ongoing* - ShaDowTr3x0531 - Oct. 04, 2023
Guess I'll join since I'm new here.
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- Name: Romen Skaar
- Age: 16
- Birthday: December 22nd
- Appearance: He's 5'9" and weighs 132 pounds with a muscular and athletic physique. As well as this he has a light skin tone, red eyes, and black spiked slicked back hair. He usually wears traditional Japanese clothes with his main attire being a black sleeveless shirt under a white sleeveless kimono with him wearing a black long sleeved kimono robe over those layers which he'll only take the robe off if he gets serious. As well as this he wears baggy white pants, black socks, and white sandals.
- Personality: He's selfish and sadistic with his only goal being to prove he's the stronger as he has no care for anyone or anything and will do whatever he wishes no matter how it affects other people. When he defeats people with ease (like most times) he'll usually mock them and bully them as he laughs at them sadistically as he believes the weak have no place in the blading world. So if he believes his opponent is weak he'll likely break their bey to tell them to stop blading forever. But under that facade is a hurt kid as he was an unwanted child and was an accident causing his parents to not love him and just use him to give their family success. Causing Roman to believe the only way to cause his family to love him was success. Though the more he climbed to power the more lonelier he became as the more he continued on his path to power less people were able to understand him causing him to feel isolated and him to draw a line between him and bladers. Though even with that he continued climbing and growing his power as he became more and more isolated as he wished someday to finally meet an equal, someone who could justify his strength, someone that could understand him and the natural loneliness that came from becoming strong. But due to his personality and goal that never happens as his natural personality would cause him to push others away and for people to hate him as even if he found an equal his natural competitive nature would cause him to continue working till he eventually surpassed the obstacle in which his downward spiral of loneliness would continue. Making Roman's worst enemy himself and his nature.
And for the bey you will have: Imaginary Raum.Adaption
- Blade: Raum (A right spinning blade that has two main attack points that are shaped similar to Rage Longinus's attack points with the attack points being metal but the design is inverted to fit a right spinning bey rather then a left spinning bey. The blade is red with the metal on the attack points being black with the metal on the blades being in the shape of a raven rather then a dragon like Longinus. As well as this the gabs you would normally see on a Rage Longinus is covered with black bumpers made of metal so if the bey is attacked and the bumpers are hit it will reduce the damage taken with the bumpers having edges and jagged curves. In the center of the blade is the bey avatar which is a black raven standing on it's two legs and with its wings tucked in as well as the head looking to the top right as only the right side of the raven is being shown. The raven is also made of the same black metal as the attack points and bumpers and has a singular red eye due to only the right side of the raven being shown.)
- Driver: Adaption: (A red driver built in a similar shape to Xtend+ but the driver has two main functions compared to Xtend+. When the bey is first launched Adaption will be in its attack mode where the driver is shaped like Xtreme as the tip that touches the stadium floor is fully extended out. But later in the battle due to stamina loss the tip will go back into the driver where it'll go into it's defense mode creating a defense like tip. Then finally at it's final stage it'll go into it's stamina mode where the tip will go to it's maximum state inside the driver creating a bearing like tip as the driver's bottom then unlocks and starts spinning freely creating a similar affect as bearing. The separate function is that the more clicks Raum takes the driver will then tighten it's spring more causing Raum to gain more and more burst resistance the more attacks it takes.)
- Magnet: Imaginary (A black magnet you would see on balance types as it's equally useful for every type.)
- Age: 16
- Birthday: December 22nd
- Appearance: He's 5'9" and weighs 132 pounds with a muscular and athletic physique. As well as this he has a light skin tone, red eyes, and black spiked slicked back hair. He usually wears traditional Japanese clothes with his main attire being a black sleeveless shirt under a white sleeveless kimono with him wearing a black long sleeved kimono robe over those layers which he'll only take the robe off if he gets serious. As well as this he wears baggy white pants, black socks, and white sandals.
- Personality: He's selfish and sadistic with his only goal being to prove he's the stronger as he has no care for anyone or anything and will do whatever he wishes no matter how it affects other people. When he defeats people with ease (like most times) he'll usually mock them and bully them as he laughs at them sadistically as he believes the weak have no place in the blading world. So if he believes his opponent is weak he'll likely break their bey to tell them to stop blading forever. But under that facade is a hurt kid as he was an unwanted child and was an accident causing his parents to not love him and just use him to give their family success. Causing Roman to believe the only way to cause his family to love him was success. Though the more he climbed to power the more lonelier he became as the more he continued on his path to power less people were able to understand him causing him to feel isolated and him to draw a line between him and bladers. Though even with that he continued climbing and growing his power as he became more and more isolated as he wished someday to finally meet an equal, someone who could justify his strength, someone that could understand him and the natural loneliness that came from becoming strong. But due to his personality and goal that never happens as his natural personality would cause him to push others away and for people to hate him as even if he found an equal his natural competitive nature would cause him to continue working till he eventually surpassed the obstacle in which his downward spiral of loneliness would continue. Making Roman's worst enemy himself and his nature.
And for the bey you will have: Imaginary Raum.Adaption
- Blade: Raum (A right spinning blade that has two main attack points that are shaped similar to Rage Longinus's attack points with the attack points being metal but the design is inverted to fit a right spinning bey rather then a left spinning bey. The blade is red with the metal on the attack points being black with the metal on the blades being in the shape of a raven rather then a dragon like Longinus. As well as this the gabs you would normally see on a Rage Longinus is covered with black bumpers made of metal so if the bey is attacked and the bumpers are hit it will reduce the damage taken with the bumpers having edges and jagged curves. In the center of the blade is the bey avatar which is a black raven standing on it's two legs and with its wings tucked in as well as the head looking to the top right as only the right side of the raven is being shown. The raven is also made of the same black metal as the attack points and bumpers and has a singular red eye due to only the right side of the raven being shown.)
- Driver: Adaption: (A red driver built in a similar shape to Xtend+ but the driver has two main functions compared to Xtend+. When the bey is first launched Adaption will be in its attack mode where the driver is shaped like Xtreme as the tip that touches the stadium floor is fully extended out. But later in the battle due to stamina loss the tip will go back into the driver where it'll go into it's defense mode creating a defense like tip. Then finally at it's final stage it'll go into it's stamina mode where the tip will go to it's maximum state inside the driver creating a bearing like tip as the driver's bottom then unlocks and starts spinning freely creating a similar affect as bearing. The separate function is that the more clicks Raum takes the driver will then tighten it's spring more causing Raum to gain more and more burst resistance the more attacks it takes.)
- Magnet: Imaginary (A black magnet you would see on balance types as it's equally useful for every type.)