RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical and Beyblade Burst: Odyssey - PikaBeyblade - Jan. 16, 2022
I wonder when Shane and Barry will appear next
Oh I started a new page again
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical and Beyblade Burst: Odyssey - Carma___bigbang - Jan. 16, 2022
Is making new pages your job?
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical and Beyblade Burst: Odyssey - PikaBeyblade - Jan. 16, 2022
I’ll consider it
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical and Beyblade Burst: Odyssey - beansworth - Jan. 17, 2022
I think I'll have Bryan be Free's adopted son, that makes it easier for everything
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical and Beyblade Burst: Odyssey - beansworth - Jan. 18, 2022
I'll have Chapter 21 done at some point this week, I was playing Stardew Valley all weekend plus yesterday, so I didn't work on Mystical.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical and Beyblade Burst: Odyssey - PikaBeyblade - Jan. 21, 2022
I wonder what happened to this
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical and Beyblade Burst: Odyssey - beansworth - Jan. 22, 2022
(Jan. 21, 2022 10:06 PM)PikaBeyblade Wrote: I wonder what happened to this I've had no time this week to make the chapter, I have two sentences done, and I think I have to delay 21 for a little. Sorry for the trouble.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical and Beyblade Burst: Odyssey - PikaBeyblade - Jan. 22, 2022
It’s ok beansworth
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical and Beyblade Burst: Odyssey - beansworth - Jan. 22, 2022
(Jan. 22, 2022 5:42 PM)PikaBeyblade Wrote: It’s ok beansworth I'll try to get the Chapter out this Monday. I'm currently going through getting my grades up, keeping this story alive as it seems a lot of people like it. And I'm currently working up the courage to ask a girl in my class out, so I have a lot on my mind.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical and Beyblade Burst: Odyssey - Hollowmind13 - Jan. 22, 2022
(Jan. 22, 2022 5:44 PM)beansworth Wrote: (Jan. 22, 2022 5:42 PM)PikaBeyblade Wrote: It’s ok beansworth I'll try to get the Chapter out this Monday. I'm currently going through getting my grades up, keeping this story alive as it seems a lot of people like it. And I'm currently working up the courage to ask a girl in my class out, so I have a lot on my mind. .
Oh, so you're older than I pictured you.
Anyhow, I feel like a fic is less important than those 2 things.
If you don't mind I can help you out, not like I have anything to do anyways (on the fic, I'm not a teacher (yet))
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical and Beyblade Burst: Odyssey - beansworth - Jan. 23, 2022
(Jan. 22, 2022 10:24 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: (Jan. 22, 2022 5:44 PM)beansworth Wrote: I'll try to get the Chapter out this Monday. I'm currently going through getting my grades up, keeping this story alive as it seems a lot of people like it. And I'm currently working up the courage to ask a girl in my class out, so I have a lot on my mind. .
Oh, so you're older than I pictured you.
Anyhow, I feel like a fic is less important than those 2 things.
If you don't mind I can help you out, not like I have anything to do anyways (on the fic, I'm not a teacher (yet)) Could you explain what you mean by helping? Like making the chapters with me? Also I'd like to know how old you thought I was, lol
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical and Beyblade Burst: Odyssey - Hollowmind13 - Jan. 23, 2022
(Jan. 23, 2022 3:55 AM)beansworth Wrote: (Jan. 22, 2022 10:24 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: .
Oh, so you're older than I pictured you.
Anyhow, I feel like a fic is less important than those 2 things.
If you don't mind I can help you out, not like I have anything to do anyways (on the fic, I'm not a teacher (yet)) Could you explain what you mean by helping? Like making the chapters with me? Also I'd like to know how old you thought I was, lol .
Normally my help involves me polishing things but I guess it depends on you really.
Oh, and I thought you were 12 or something
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical and Beyblade Burst: Odyssey - beansworth - Jan. 23, 2022
(Jan. 23, 2022 1:40 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: (Jan. 23, 2022 3:55 AM)beansworth Wrote: Could you explain what you mean by helping? Like making the chapters with me? Also I'd like to know how old you thought I was, lol .
Normally my help involves me polishing things but I guess it depends on you really.
Oh, and I thought you were 12 or something Honestly if you have the time, I'd love the help! I've 14, and half way through my 1st Year of high school.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical and Beyblade Burst: Odyssey - PikaBeyblade - Jan. 23, 2022
I’m 12 half way through my second year of middle school
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical and Beyblade Burst: Odyssey - beansworth - Jan. 24, 2022
I've finished the product list now.
March
B-201(Starter)-Destruction Kratos.Shift.Xtend+Metal-Equal+Mystic Launcher(Keith's)
B-202(Starter)-Dynamic Bahamut.Shift.Atomic Metal-Pressure+Mystic Launcher(Baki's)
B-203(Starter Set)Destruction Kratos(Stock,Blue&White Recolor) Dynamic Bahamut(Stock,Black&Blood Red Recolor)+Mystic Stadium and 2 Mystic Launcher
April
B-204(Starter)-Eruption Ifrit.Aerial.Wave'-Sense+Mystic Launcher(Irene's)
B-205(Booster)-Ghastly Yaoguai.Aqualion.Agression-Sense
B-206(Starter)-Holy Valkyrie.Hurt.Ultimate Reboot' Metal-Run+Mystic Power Launcher(Valt's)
May
B-207(Starter)-Fallen Valkyrie.Hurt.Venture'+V-Output+Mystic Power Launcher(Van's)
B-208(Booster)-Illusion Fafnir.Instant.Absorb Metal-Output
B-209(Booster)-Immortal Warrior.Torment.Forced-Splinter
June
B-210(Mystic Customize Set)-Legacy Spriggan Shift Quattro'-Requiem+Elite Gladius.Retract.Sole-Trepass+Holy Ifrit.Wheel.Reboot'-Pressure+Illusion Bahamut.Aerial.Atomic'-Sense
B-211(Booster)-Hurricane Ragnurok.Aqualion.Reverse-Output
July
B-212(Booster)-Extinction Longinus.Drago.Jolt'-Lost
B-213(Booster)-Saint Solomon.Crown.Unison
B-214(Starter)-Disaster Loki.Distant.Faze-Cut+Mystic Launcher(Lucy's)
August
B-215(Starter)-Thermic Pisces.Hurricane'.Twirl-Fins+Mystic Launcher(Finn's)
B-216-Mystic Launchers(Shu,Ren,Lui,Samson,War,Yuito)
B-217-Mystic Dash Stadium
September
B-218(DX Booster)-Scarred Shisa.Statue-Storm
B-219(Starter)-Revolution Bellerophon.Allign.Xtreme'-Equal+Mystic Launcher(Barry's)
B-220(Booster)-Forge Vulcan.Anvil.Metal Xtreme
October
B-221(Starter)-Aqua Poseidon.Whirlpool.Liquid-Typhoon+Mystic Launcher(Percy's)
B-222(DX Booster)-Mistral Notus.Accessio-Radiance
B-223(Triple Booster)-Hero Achilles Switch.High Xtend+'-Slash, Crescent Dragon.Distant.Charge Metal'-Cut, Chained Samael.Drago.Xtreme'-Archangel
November
B-224(DX Starter)-Mythical Kratos2.Change-Axe+Mystic' Launcher(Keith's)
B-225(DX Starter)-Calamity Valkyrie2.Rush-Invert+Mystic' Launcher(Van's)
December
B-226(DX Booster)-Havoc Loki2.Ruin-Spear
B-227(DX Booster)-Spiritual Yaoguai2.Blitzkreig-Split
B-228(Booster)-Deadly Belial.Verse.Flash-Run
B-229(Booster)-Everburn Phoenix.Instant.Gripped-Winged
January
B-230(Booster)-Kidnapped Persephone.Shift.Tight-Typhoon
B-231(Booster)-Criminal Balphomet.Comet.ShootingStar-Crisis
B-232(RBV)-Random Booster 29
Impulse Muramasa.Verse.Xtreme'-Rough(Prize)
Immortal Phoenix.Hurricane'.Metal Wedge-Pressure
Eruption Valkyrie1.Crown.Sole-Axe
Hero Vulcan.Hurt.Metal Assault-Typhoon
Thermic Warrior.Retract.Liquid-Radiance
Forge Bellerophon.Whirlpool.Atomic Metal-Crisis
Criminal Notus.Switch.Faze-Lost
Mistral Poseidon.Aerial.Forced-Archangel
Scarred Shisa.Blitzkreig-Fins
Dynamic Longinus.Anvil.Tight-Splinter
February
B-233-Random Booster 30-Rare Recolors
Alpha Amaterios.Aerial.Advance-Alight(Prize)
Thermic Pisces.Hurricane'.Twirl-Fins(Flame Recolor)
Forge Vulcan.Anvil.Metal Xtreme(Gold Recolor)
Mythical Kratos2.Change-Axe(Evil Recolor)
Calamity Valkyrie2.Rush-Invert(Holy Knight Recolor)
Everburn Phoenix.Instant.Gripped-Winged(Ice Bird Recolor)
Criminal Balphomet.Comet.ShootingStar-Crisis(Platinum Recolor)
Eruption Ifrit.Aerial.Wave'-Sense(Ice Recolor)
Revolution Bellerophon.Allign.Xtreme'-Equal(Phantom Recolor)
Immortal Warrior.Torment.Forced-Splinter(Evil Recolor)
Mistral Notus.Accessio-Radiance(Flame Recolor)
Deadly Belial.Verse.Flash-Run(Holy King Recolor)
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical and Beyblade Burst: Odyssey - PikaBeyblade - Jan. 24, 2022
Hey thanks for making mine a starter
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical and Beyblade Burst: Odyssey - Carma___bigbang - Jan. 25, 2022
Btw my birthday actually in January and I like that it’s hard to find chef kiz
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical and Beyblade Burst: Odyssey - beansworth - Jan. 25, 2022
(Jan. 24, 2022 11:49 PM)PikaBeyblade Wrote: Hey thanks for making mine a starter Yeah no prob. Because of Barry's Role(No spoilers though) Him having a starter makes a lot of sense.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical and Beyblade Burst: Odyssey - PikaBeyblade - Jan. 25, 2022
Oh he has a very large role I guess
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical and Beyblade Burst: Odyssey - beansworth - Jan. 25, 2022
(Jan. 25, 2022 3:14 AM)PikaBeyblade Wrote: Oh he has a very large role I guess You got it right on the mark! He's going to have a huge role.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical and Beyblade Burst: Odyssey - PikaBeyblade - Jan. 25, 2022
I’m very grateful my character has a huge role
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical and Beyblade Burst: Odyssey - beansworth - Jan. 25, 2022
(Jan. 25, 2022 3:23 AM)PikaBeyblade Wrote: I’m very grateful my character has a huge role Yes, Finn, Barry and two others have huge roles.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical and Beyblade Burst: Odyssey - beansworth - Jan. 25, 2022
I think I may actually have Chapter 21(Or whatever) done today, don't quote me on that.
Let's go!
Chapter 21!
Chapter 21: Percy’s Attack! Aqua Poseidon’s Strike!
Percy’s plane landed after hours in the air, and Percy exited, and began running to find Keith.
Keith, Barry and Shane were in the middle of a battle.
Shane: “Now Shisa!”
Shisa took center, and Bellerophon and Kratos began barraging Shisa.
Keith(Confident): “Now Kratos! Destruction Shoot!”
Barry(Excited): “Alright, Bellerophon! Revolution Flash!”
Bellerophon and Kratos hit Shisa, but the attacks were equal to nothing. The ceramic blades of Shisa, were hard to damage.
Shane(Proud): “Hey Hey! Shisa won’t be damaged, the only way to take us down, is a Burst Finish or Over Finish! Cause a Spin Finish, is beyond your dreams. Statue Drive!”
Statue’s core activated and the Scarred Shisa Layer began accelerating at high speeds.
Keith(Confused): “How is your bey doing that!?”
Barry(Daring): “It doesn’t matter. Revolution Flash!”
Bellerophon sped up around the outer ridge and then hit Shisa, bursting upon impact.
Barry(Confused): “How did he?”
Keith(Brave): “Alright then! Kratos! Destruction Axe!”
Kratos hit Shisa, and launched out of the stadium.
Shane: “That’s the power of Scarred Shisa, and my Power Core Driver, Statue.”
The sunlight pierced into a dark room, where four boys stood.
Van sat on his throne, as Kai walked in.
Kai: “So I hear you’re the strongest around?”
Van opened his right eye and said.
Van: “Yes, I’ve beaten Valt, Keith and many others.”
Kai pulled out Vulcan.
Kai(Excited): “Then battle me! Me and Vulcan are the strongest ever!”
Van got up and grabbed Fallen Valkyrie.
War got up and exited the Mansion, and walked down to the local bey park, where Keith, Barry, Shane and the newly arrived Irene.
Percy walked to the park, and War ran into him.
War: “Ah, a new blader? Let’s see if you can beat me.”
Percy grabbed Poseidon and showed it to War.
Percy(Unfazed): “Sure, but Poseidon will win, I’ll bet you that.”
The two walked to the nearest bey stadium, and readied their launchers and beys.
Percy(Mind): “I’ll take this guy down quickly. I want to battle Valhalla soon anyway.”
Both: “3! 2! 1! Go Shoot!”
Poseidon and Warrior landed on the stadium floor, and Warrior took center.
War(Confident): “Now! Immortal Guard!”
Warrior held steady, as Poseidon shot off the soft rubber of it’s Liquid Driver.
Percy(Somewhat Excited): “Alright then, Aqua Shoot!”
Poseidon drift on the Liquid Driver, and began barraging Warrior.
War(Fazed): “How did you break Warrior’s defense!?”
Percy(Excited): “You see, this is what bladers call Synchronization! Now come together, Aquatic Sync!”
Poseidon and Percy synchronized, and Poseidon began to glow.
Poseidon’s avatar appeared, and he slammed his trident into the ground.
Percy(Excited+Sync): “Now, Aqua Geyser!”
Poseidon shot towards Warrior, accelerating to high speeds.
War(Excited): “Not so fast! Now, Warrior!”
Warrior parried Poseidon, as Poseidon went to the outer ridge, it drift on the Liquid Driver’s support ring, and shot towards Warrior.
Percy(Energetic+Sync): “Now, you lose! Aqua Geyser!”
Poseidon hit Warrior into the floor, and Warrior burst.
War: “What the! How did you!?”
Percy: “I have a question, War.”
War grabbed Warrior and said.
War: “What do you want?”
Percy: “Why do you side with Van? You can’t truly achieve Sync when you don’t listen to your bey.”
Percy turned away and began to walk away.
War gripped Warrior.
War(Mind): “Warrior, are we on the right side?”
Warrior: “War, the right side is the side, that you believe is right. So which side, do you think is right?”
War: “I think, we’ve been on the wrong side, this whole time, Warrior.”
Then War’s talk with Warrior ended, and he had to make a tough choice.
Chapter 22: Van V.S Valt! Why Van Chose Darkness
Chapter 22-Preview
As the battle rages on, Van looks back, and his corruption is shown.
Next TIme: Van V.S Valt!
I got the New Chapter done
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical and Beyblade Burst: Odyssey - PikaBeyblade - Jan. 26, 2022
Oh so this is the current lineup of Valhalla(not sure if this is
Keith, Baki, Irene, Shane, and Barry
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical and Beyblade Burst: Odyssey - beansworth - Jan. 26, 2022
(Jan. 26, 2022 1:54 AM)PikaBeyblade Wrote: Oh so this is the current lineup of Valhalla(not sure if this is
Keith, Baki, Irene, Shane, and Barry Keith, Baki, Irene, Samson, Yuito, Lucy so far, but Shane, Barry and Finn will join later.
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