Mr. N's Beyblade Story (CHAPTER 3 IS UP!) - Mr. N - Mar. 14, 2011
I've decided to write my own Beyblade story!
Unfortunately, I have not thought of a title, so if you guys are willing to post suggestions in the comments, feel free to!
Well, here goes...
Prolouge
Everyone knows the legendary Ginkga Hagane, with his white scarf, and his blue headband. He has saved the world a couple of times, with his Bey Spirit, along with his friends. Everyone knows his story, and remembers it well, but there were other stories, too. There is another boy that who has saved the world, but his story was forgotten when Gingka defeated Ryuuga. I am here to tell you that blader's story. I am here to tell you about a boy who has saved the world many years before Gingka Hagane did...
Chapter 1
Kevin Johnson was your typical 11-year-old. He had soft brown hair, intelligent green eyes, and a smile that no one could forget. He did pretty well in school, and lived in an apartment in New York City with his father, a biologist. One day, his father received news about a new plant being discovered in Tokyo, Japan. He was a respected scientist in the city, and had been asked to go help research. However, he didn’t like the idea of Kevin staying at home alone, so he brought Kevin with him to Japan. Kevin was to pick a place to live in, while he studied the plant along with other fellow researchers. Kevin had no idea where to go, until he met a girl at the Haneda Airport.
Kevin and his father were walking through the baggage claim area, when his father asked him, “Kevin, have you decided a place to stay yet?†Kevin replied, “No, dad. Not yet.†“Well, you better think of a place soon. I don’t care where you want to go. Just make sure there’s someone to look after you. I’ll go get our bags, and you can look through the book I gave you for someplace to go.†Kevin took out the book, while his father went to get their bags. Suddenly, a girl appeared in front of him. She was about his age, and had pretty brown eyes. She said, “Kevin, I know a place you can go, Koma Village.†“Why should I listen to you? I don’t even know you,†Kevin replied. “You must go there, because in Koma Village you will find your destiny. I must go, but I will give you directions to Koma Village. I will tell them you are coming, and I’ll meet you at Meteor Plateau,†she answered. She took out a piece of paper, gave it to Kevin, and walked away. Kevin looked at the piece of paper. Koma Village was in the mountains, not so far away from Tokyo. His father returned, and asked him, “Have you decided a place yet?†Kevin thought for a moment, pondering on whether to go to Koma Village or not. He finally decided that he should go, and find out what that girl meant by finding his destiny there. He looked up into his father’s eyes and said, “Yes, yes I have.â€
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Kevin has finally made it to Koma Village, and is welcomed by everyone there. He wants to go to Meteor Plateau, but finds out that children are forbidden to go there. He desperately wants to find out what that girl at the airport wanted with him, and with the help of a new friend, Rez Inzori, he secretly makes his way to the top of Meteor Plateau…
Kevin looked at the signpost in front of him.
KOMA VILLAGE
THE BEYBLADE VILLAGE
Finally, he had made it to Koma Village! After climbing a mountain, and removing a large boulder, like the girl instructed, there he was. He walked past the sign, and went towards the buildings. Suddenly, three people were running up to him. “Welcome to Koma Village!†said one of them. “Della told us you were coming,†said another. “Welcome to Koma Village, Kevin!†said the last. So Della was that girl’s name, thought Kevin, I must talk to her as soon as possible.
He got a map, and scanned it for Meteor Plateau. There it was, northwest of the village. He then read the caption which said, in big blue letters. Meteor Plateau: The place where the Beyblades Pegasis and L-Drago landed. Children are forbidden to go up there. Those who do will be severely punished. What?!!! thought Kevin, but Della was a kid too… Was she just kidding around with him, or was there something up there worth risking being kicked out of the village?
Just then, a man with flaming red hair walked up and said, “Hi, Kevin! I’m Mr. Hagane. Do you have any questions?†“Why is Meteor Plateau forbidden to children,†said Kevin, “and what is a Beyblade,†he added, remembering the term being used many times. Mr. Hagane replied, “It’s forbidden because it’s very unstable, and a meteor or two crashes on it once in a while, but it has managed to stand. A Beyblade is a battling spinning top. There are four types of them…†Mr. Hagane continued on for about 10 minutes, while Kevin got more and more interested. Finally, Mr. Hagane finished, and Kevin curiously inquired, “Mr. Hagane, do you have a Beyblade?†“Why yes I do,†replied Mr. Hagane as he took out a Beyblade, and handed it to Kevin. Kevin carefully examined the Beyblade. The Face had a bird’s head, and a red background. It had no Clear Wheel, so this must be a Metal System Beyblade Mr. Hagane was talking about. The wheel had two bird heads and their beaks in a counterclockwise direction. In between them was licking flames that were painted a fiery red. So it’s a Phoenix? Kevin thought. The track was funnel-shaped, and the tip was a sharp tip. They were both pale yellow. “So, what’s this Bey of yours called?†asked Kevin. “Phoenix F145PS,†replied Mr. Hagane, who was looking down at Kevin, pleased with himself for guessing the name right. “Well, I need to go, so if you have any more questions, feel free to ask me!â€
Kevin sighed and walked away, disappointed that he can’t find out what Della wanted. Then, a boy walked up. He wore a black t-shirt and jeans, and a silver cloak with red flames. He had been listening to Kevin and Mr. Hagane’s conversation, and said to Kevin, “Hi, Kevin. My name is Rez Inzori. I can help you get to Meteor Plateau. You see…†Rez told Kevin that his older sister, Sonai, along with him, can make lots of fog and smoke. “You will run in the entrance after the two of us make lots and lots of fog and smoke. By the way, why do you want to go up there anyways?†said Rez. Kevin told Rez about Della. “Oh, I see. Della can be a bit mysterious at times, but she never jokes around. Anyway, let me get my sister.†About 5 minutes later, Rez returned with an older girl. She wore the same clothing, but her cloak was blue with silver flames. She was screaming at her younger brother. “WHY DID YOU DISTURB ME?!! I WAS JUST ABOUT TO TAKE A NAP AND-†“Listen, Sonai. I’m sorry for disturbing you, but my friend Kevin here needs help getting on to Meteor Plateau,†Rez said, trying to calm his sister down, though he wasn’t the best at it. “Fine, but you owe me one,†replied Sonai.
They approached Meteor Plateau, and Rez told her the plan. Kevin watched, fascinated, as they launched their Beyblades. “Go… SHOOT!†said the two in unison. Rez yelled out, “Dino! Flame Wipeout!†Sonai yelled out, “Narwhale! Aqua Cannon!†Fire and water collided, creating a great amount of steam and smoke, blocking out vision. Kevin ran into the entrance. “Good luck, Kevin,†whispered Rez.
Kevin made his way to the top of the place, and found Della sitting there waiting for him. “Hi, Kevin,†she said cheerfully. Then, Mr. Hagane appeared too. “Kevin! Della! What are you doing up here? We have to go down!†Then, a meteor came into sight. Mr. Hagane continued urging them to come down, but Della said, “The meteor is Kevin’s to claim.†Then, she took out a Beyblade and a launcher, and said, “Go Shoot! Destiny Shield!†There was a green dome surrounding Kevin, and the meteor landed. He felt attracted to it, and began walking towards it. Mr. Hagane was panicking. “No! If you take out the meteor, the whole thing could collapse!†But, Kevin didn’t seem to care. He continued walking towards the meteor. He could see a Beyblade in it. “This is ridiculous…†said Mr. Hagane, and he launched his Phoenix at the shield. But it was too late. Kevin had reached the meteor and claimed the Beyblade inside it. Suddenly, the plateau began to shake. Then the thing split in half, and all three of them were falling down…
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Kevin, Della, and Mr. Hagane are saved from falling down the crumpling Meteor Plateau by a mysterious blader. Kevin then proceeds to compete in the village tournament to get a chance to compete in the national and world tournament.
The last time we saw Kevin, he was falling down the crumbling Meteor Plateau, along with Della and Mr. Hagane. Let’s separately view their fall experiences.
Mr. Hagane was calling down for help, but the mist from the Inzoris’ special moves hasn’t cleared, and no one could hear from where the cry for help was coming from.
Della was not a bit worried. In fact, she behaved as though this fall was normal. It should be anytime now, she thought. She smiled as she heard a distant voice yell, “GO…SHOOT!†Of course, Mr. Hagane was too focused on getting help from below to notice and Kevin… Well…
Kevin didn’t pay attention to the fall at all. Instead, he was examining the Beyblade that was now his. I’ll tell you what it looks like later, because now we must now move on to the mountainside to continue our story.
Magnus fidgeted his Magnetar nervously. He was a good blader, but the battle with a girl named Della was still creeping him out. He beat her, but her Bey seemed to look inside him and see every memory, every thought, and something else that he couldn’t quite figure out what it was. Della made a deal with him. He would launch his Bey on this day and piece together Meteor Plateau after it collapses, and Della would tell him what he was to do in the future. After some considering, Magnus agreed, and Della said that he would save the world. Of course, Magnus didn’t believe her at first, but Della replied, “My life and other people’s lives will be at stake if you do not do this. You may not believe me at the moment, but you will know that I am truthful when you see the meteor strike the plateau…â€
Magnus still thought that she was making all of it up, but he was indeed a very curious boy. He decided that he would stick around. And now that the meteor was falling, he was starting to think that there was a possibility that Della was right, and that possibility kept on growing. He saw 3 dots going down, and immediately launched his Magnetar to reassemble Meteor Plateau.
Della, Mr. Hagane and Kevin were near the ground when Magnus launched his Magnetar. The three, sorry two, rather one; only Della heard Magnus command Magnetar to do its Special Move. She saw the Bey in mid air with an aura of energy around it, and the next thing she knew, they were on the ground, and Meteor Plateau was still there, proudly standing.
“B-b-b-but how?†Mr. Hagane sputtered.
“I have special connections,†replied Della. “Hey, Kevin!†she called out to Kevin. “Want to stay at my place tonight?â€
“Sure!â€
Kevin remembered what Della had told him at the airport, and decided it was better to ask her when they were alone.
Della stayed by herself in her own house alone.
“She’s old enough to take care of herself,†Mr. Hagane said when he saw the puzzled look on Kevin’s face.
“Hey, Della? When will I find out about my destiny?†asked Kevin before the two of them went to bed.
“This is the first step on your way,†replied Della.
Kevin didn’t doubt at all. He figured out that Della must have told another blader to save them.
Kevin had another question for Della. “What’s this Bey called?†he inquired.
“You will find out tomorrow…â€
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Guys, I need an idea for Kevin's Bey. Please post your suggestions. I won't do the next chapter until I get a very good idea.
RE: Mr. N's Beyblade Story - Minidona - Mar. 14, 2011
Good prologue.
RE: Mr. N's Beyblade Story - Mr. N - Mar. 14, 2011
(Mar. 14, 2011 12:09 AM)Brielyranger Wrote: Good prologue.
Thanks! I'll try to get the first episode up tonight or tommorow.
RE: Mr. N's Beyblade Story - X1 - Mar. 14, 2011
Come'on Very Good Story. But Who Is The Mystery Boy - Kyoya,Tsubasa Or Masamune.
RE: Mr. N's Beyblade Story - Wolverine Mode - Mar. 14, 2011
Great story! I like it  . Just wondering who that boy would be...
RE: Mr. N's Beyblade Story - Mr. N - Mar. 15, 2011
(Mar. 14, 2011 9:22 AM)X1 Wrote: Come'on Very Good Story. But Who Is The Mystery Boy - Kyoya,Tsubasa Or Masamune.
Sorry if this is disappointing, but it will be a made up character.
RE: Mr. N's Beyblade Story - The Fire Wyrm - Mar. 15, 2011
Or it could be Ryo Hagane 
RE: Mr. N's Beyblade Story - Kujikato - Mar. 15, 2011
do you accept character requests? if so...
Name: Izuma Inzori
BeyBlade: starts with: Silent Ninja MSBSCH85 RHF/RS, final form is: Silent Samurai MKSCH85 WRHF/RWD
BeyBlade description:
Face: A shuriken in the middle, between two kantanas and the writing SAMURAI for Silent Samurai and NINJA for Silent Ninja (color: all decals black on silver background)
Silent: think of Lightning with the multi hit mode (renamed Rapid Strike mode) as thick shurikens, and upper mode (renamed Slice mode) as a kantana (color: un-painted)
Samurai: think of Kerbecs + L-Drago I with the 'rings' as shurikens and the dragon heads as kantanas (color; silver)
Ninja: same as Samurai except that the dragon heads are shaped like kunai (color: silver)
MKSCH85: Metal Kantana Spring Change Height 8.5mm – 11.0mm, same as MSBSCH85 except that the Shuriken Blade is changed with 4 kantanas (color: translucent silver for the plastic, un-painted metal for the “bladesâ€)
MSBSCH85: Metal Shuriken Blade Spring Change Height 8.5mm-11mm, think of CH120 with an external shell resembling a shuriken made of metal, when lose, MSBSCH85 can bounce due to the spring within the core of MSBSCH85.
RHF/RS: Rubber Hole Flat / Rubber Sharp (can change during combat at Izuma’s command)
WRHF/RWD: Wide Rubber Hole Flat / Rubber Wide Defense (can change during combat at Izuma’s command (color: translucent silver for plastic, black for the rubber))
Super Attacks:
Level 1: “Silent death,†Silent Samurai disappears and hits opponent with a million kunai and shuriken and kantanas
Level 2: “100 Slices of The Samurais’’,†the Metal Shuriken shell on MSBSCH85 swells and smashes the opponent’s bey 100 times, on the 99th time, Silent Ninja halts and circles the stadium 10 times, cheating a black hurricane that flips the opposing bey out of the stadium with a insanely powerful smash from Silent Samurai.
Level 3: N/A
Level X: “Infinite Blade†Samurai appears and slices at the opponent’s bey with such speed and power that the opposing bey instantly stops and flies out of the stadium 10 meters away, breaking it in half. (Last resort, can only be used three times in a year!)
Team attack 1: “Hydro Kantana Blitzâ€: Team attack with Hydro Narwhale: Narwhale lifts Samurai, Samurai creates a kantana and Narwhale adds high pressure water jets to it, they attack together, while Samurai slices with the kantana, narwhale flips and uses water jets to grind the opponent’s clear wheel, and increase its spin velocity, causing the opponent’s bey to completely stop by Narwhale’s grind or get KOed by Samurai’s attack
Team attack 2: “Electric Kantana Diveâ€: Team attack with Electric Berserker: Berserker goes around Samurai as a shield while circling the stadium (like the moon is Berserker, earth is Samurai and the centre of the stadium id the sun) and then Samurai shoots up in the sky, descending with Samurai spinning a kantana charged with lightning and Berserker keeping the opponent bey in one spot by surrounding it with a electric fence
Team attack 3: “Magma Kantana Diveâ€: Team attack with Magma Saurian: Refer to “Electric Kantana Dive†team attack with Berserker’s parts replaced by Saurian
Team attack X: “Inzori Finaleâ€: Team attack involving all the Team members: first, Narwhale soaks all the opponent beys, next Berserker zaps all of them, while the opponents are distracted by Narwhale and Berserkers team attack, then Narwhale fills the stadium with water at the same time, Saurian releases a flow of lava, trapping the opponent beys in Rock, allowing the entire team the time to do “Infinite Magma Hydro Electric Kantana Attack†without any opposition
BeyBlade Type: Legendary
Spin Direction: Left
Character bio:
Gender: Male
Clothes: Black Kevlar T-shirt and jeans and silver Kevlar cloak with black flames. (cloak is based on Minato from NARUTO)
Black hair, Chinese origin, oldest of 4 children
Caries twin Kantanas everywhere.
Team rank: Leader
Attitude: helpful and cool, he has to keep a critical eye on his twin sister, Sonai so that she doesn’t go out of control with her short temper, his classmates (except for Sonai) are jealous of him. When he promises something, you can guarantee that he will keep his promise unless it has anything to do with murder or theft. Keeps his younger brothers in line every day so that they don’t drive Sonai crazy.
Age: 17 years as of February 27, 2011
BeyBlade: begins with: Pre-HWS Narwhale CH120 PD, and ends with: Hydro Narwhale XDFCH110 EPWD/PD
Type: Stamina
BeyBlade description:
Face: For both Narwhales, two narwhales next to each other with a wave and the writing Narwhale on the bottom. (Color: the narwhales: sliver, the wave: light blue, the writing: silver, the background: medium dark blue)
Hydro: imagine the Pre-HWS Virgo except the lobes are wave like. (Un-colored)
(Metal wheel) Narwhale: 4 Narwhales in a circle with a wave pattern on the bottom
(Clear wheel) Narwhale: two Narwhales in a circle. (Translucent blue)
XDFCH110: eXtreme Down Force Change Height 11.0mm- 13.5mm, basically a CH110 with the external shell as a super wide DF that works in both spin directions. (Translucent blue)
EPWD/PD: Eternal Polish Wide Defense/Polish Defense, PD with a voice controlled shaft aligned in PD’s notches, wielding a free spinning PWD (Translucent blue)
Super Attacks:
Level 1: “ Hydro Turbo Boostâ€: Narwhale creates a water typhoon complimenting its team members spin or itself spin, thus increasing the bey affected by the water typhoon spin velocity.
Level 2: “Hydro Cannonâ€: Narwhale creates a huge water typhoon in the playing area and sends it at the opponent’s bey, sending it flying repeatedly so that Narwhale’s extreme stamina can be used to outlast the opponent’s bey.
Level 3: “Flying Hydro Narwhale Cannonâ€: Hydro Narwhale hovers in the air because on XDFCH110 and creates a water Narwhale to ram the opponent’s bey.
Level X: “Hydro Hornâ€: Narwhale appears and creates a high pressure water jet in the shape of a Narwhale’s horn and Stabs the opponent’s bey breaking it in half, or KOing in instantly
Team Attacks:
Team attack 1: “Hydro Kantana Blitzâ€: Team attack with Silent Samurai: Hydro Narwhale lifts Silent Samurai, Samurai creates a Kantana and Narwhale adds high pressure water jets to it, and then they attack together, while Samurai slices with the kantana, narwhale flips and uses Hydro to grind the opponent’s clear wheel, causing the opponent’s bey to completely stop by Narwhale’s grind or get KOed by Samurai’s attack
Team attack 2: “Hydro Shockâ€: Team attack with Electric Berserker: Team attack with Hydro Narwhale: First, Narwhale soaks the opposing beys with water, then Berserker zaps them, after that, Narwhale creates a water typhoon that Berserker charges with electricity
Team attack 3: “Rock Strikeâ€: Team attack with Magma Saurian: Narwhale fills the stadium with at the same time, Saurian releases a flow of lava, trapping the opposing beys in rock, defenseless against a water/magma spear strike.
Team attack X: “Inzori Finaleâ€: Team attack involving all the Team members: first, Narwhale soaks all the opponent beys, next Berserker zaps all of them, while the opponents are distracted by Narwhale and Berserkers team attack, then Narwhale fills the stadium with water at the same time, Saurian releases a flow of lava, trapping the opponent beys in Rock, allowing the entire team the time to do “Infinite Magma Hydro Electric Kantana Attack†without any opposition
Spin Direction: L/R
Character bio:
Gender: Female
Clothes: wears basically the same as all the Inzori except that her cloak is blue with silver flames.
Caries a special Touch Screen Repair Computer, TSRC, and tools for bey repairs
Rank in Team: repairer. (Technician)
Black hair, Chinese origin, and 2nd oldest of 4 children
Attitude: very reckless, and has a short temper, her twin brother, Izuma, does all that he can do to make sure she doesn’t go out of control with her rage and short temper doesn’t get the worst of her, her classmates (except for Izuma) are jealous of her. When she promises something, you can guarantee that she will keep her promise unless it has anything to do with murder or theft. She can get very angry with her 2 younger brothers, she respects Inzori as the greatest beyblader of all time
She is Izuma’s twin sister
Age: 17 as of February 27, 2011
Name: Hatachi Inzori [spoiler]
BeyBlade: begins with: Static Zerker LB135 ELRF final form: Electric Berserker BXBCH135 EMCLRF
Beyblade type: Attack
BeyBlade Discription:
Face: A sword with electricity coming out of it and the writing BERSERKER or ZERKER on the bottom. (Color: the sword: Silver, everything else: yellow on a black background)
Electric: Looks like a metal wheel with 4 lengthened protrusions in the shape of thunderbolts. (Slightly overhangs the track like Rock does (color: silver))
Static: same as Electric but it only has 3 protrusions
Berserker: 4 very large swords in a circle. (Color: translucent light yellow)
Zerker: 3 swords in a circle. (Color: translucent dark yellow)
BXBCH135: Bending eXtreme Blades Change Height 13.5mm – 16.0mm, basically a CH___ with 4 large Blades that can bend at Hatachi’s command during battle.
LB135: Lightning Blade 13.5mm, 3 lightning like blades facing outward.
ELRF: Eternal Left Rubber Flat, a free spinning RF.
EMCLRF: Eternal Metal Coated Left Rubber Flat, combine Metal Flat, Rubber Flat, and Eternal___ and CS, a free spinning LRF with a Metal Coat around it. (The metal coat is raised by 2mm from the Left Rubber Flat)
Super attacks:
Level 1: “Static Shieldâ€: a shield of electricity that causes the opponent’s bey to gain static electricity and stick to other unwanted friction causing things.
Level 2: “Lightning Horn Rampâ€: a Horn with a smooth slope made of electricity rams the opponent bey and “slopes†it out of the stadium if it hits.
Level 3: “Electric Blade Typhoonâ€: a electric typhoon with electric Berserker Blades popping out every where to hit the opposing bey.
Level X: “Electric Berserker Bladeâ€: Electric Berserker’s version of Samurai’s Infinite Blade except that the sword is made of electricity.
Team attacks:
Team attack 1: “Hydro Shockâ€: Team attack with Hydro Narwhale: First, Narwhale soaks the opposing beys with water, then Berserker zaps them, after that, Narwhale creates a water typhoon that Berserker charges with electricity.
Team attack 2: “Lightning Kantana Diveâ€: Team attack with Silent Samurai: Berserker goes around Samurai as a shield while circling the stadium (like the moon is Berserker, earth is Samurai and the centre of the stadium id the sun) and then Samurai shoots up in the sky, descending with Samurai spinning a kantana charged with lightning and Berserker keeping the opponent bey in one spot by surrounding it with a electric fence.
Team attack 3: “Lava/Lightning Trap Grindâ€: Team attack with Magma Saurian: (possibly the silliest tag-team attack ever) Saurian makes a wall of lava in the shape of [and Berserker creates a wall that looks like], then they trap the opposing beys in between the two walls like this[], then make the wall look like ll, thus creating friction to halt the trapped beys to a complete stop
Team attack X: “Inzori Finaleâ€: Team attack involving all the Team members: first, Narwhale soaks all the opponent beys, next Berserker zaps all of them, while the opponents are distracted by Narwhale and Berserkers team attack, then Narwhale fills the stadium with water at the same time, Saurian releases a flow of lava, trapping the opponent beys in Rock, allowing the entire team the time to do “Infinite Magma Hydro Electric Kantana Attack†without any opposition
Spin direction: Left
Character bio:
Gender: male
Clothes: wears basically the same as all the Inzori except that his cloak is black with yellow thunderbolts, and wears repair goggles.
Black hair, Chinese origin, and 3rd of 4 children
Carries a special touch screen analyzer computer that can scan beys and create strategies according to the opponent’s bey parts and battle strategies for each of the team’s members
Team rank: Tactician
Attitude: a Bey strategist, caring and intelligent.
Age: 14 years old as of March 8, 2011
Beyblade: first bey: Inferno Dino BD145 RS ___ final bey: Magma Saurian XGBCH160 RDS
BeyBlade Description:
Face: A T-Red head blowing Flame and the writing DINO on the bottom for Inferno Dino/A T-Rex head with Magma trickling down the side and the writing SAURIAN on the bottom for Magma Saurian. (Color: Brown T-Rex head, red flames/magma, & gold DINO/SAURIAN)
Inferno: the Hasbro Pre-HWS HWS version of SGTO (red and brown)
Magma: Metal version of Heat with rubber in the gaps. (Rubber: red, metal: un-colored)
Dino: a T-Rex in a circle (the T-Rex: brown, the background or other plastic: red)
Saurian: ripples of lava in a circle. (Color: translucent red)
BD145: Hell Kerbecs’ Track. (Translucent red)
XGBCH160: eXtreme Gravity Bowl Change Height 16.0mm – 18.5mm, cross of CH___ and GB145, 4 metal balls on the shell of CH___, the plastic is arranged in a 4 pronged star.
RS: Rubber Sharp. (Color: translucent red, rubber: red)
RDS: Rubber Defense Sharp, a DS made of rubber (Color: red rubber and translucent red for the plastic parts)
Super attacks:
Level 1: “Lava Shieldâ€: Saurian creates a wall of Lava around it to protect it from attacks.
Level 2: “Lava Wipeoutâ€: Saurian creates a wave of lava to cover its opponents.
Level X: “Volcano Graveâ€: Saurian suddenly starts circling the stadium and creates a miniature un-erupted volcano in the middle of the stadium, then when the opponent’s bey is in the volcano’s crater, the volcano explodes, sending the opponent’s bey flying.
Team attacks:
Team attack 1: Magma Kantana Strike: Team attack with Silent Samurai: Refer to “Electric Kantana Dive†team attack with Berserker’s parts replaced by Saurian
Team attack 2: “Lava/Lightning Trap Grind†(possibly the silliest tag-team attack ever) : Team attack with Electric Berserker: Saurian makes a wall of lava in the shape of [and Berserker creates a wall that looks like], then they trap the opposing beys in between the two walls like this[], then make the wall look like ll, thus creating friction to halt the trapped beys to a complete stop
Team attack 3: Rock Strike: Team attack with Hydro Narwhale: Narwhale fills the stadium with at the same time, Saurian releases a flow of lava, trapping the opposing beys in rock, defenseless against a water/magma spear strike.
Team attack X: “Inzori Finaleâ€: Team attack involving all the Team members: first, Narwhale soaks all the opponent beys, next Berserker zaps all of them, while the opponents are distracted by Narwhale and Berserkers team attack, then Narwhale fills the stadium with water at the same time, Saurian releases a flow of lava, trapping the opponent beys in Rock, allowing the entire team the time to do “Infinite Magma Hydro Electric Kantana Attack†without any opposition
Character bio:
Gender: male
Clothes: wears basically the same as all the Inzori except that his cloak is silver with red flames.
Black hair, Chinese origin, and the youngest of 4 children
Team rank: Attack absorber (the shield)
Attitude: very humorous, liked by everyone.
RE: Mr. N's Beyblade Story - Wolverine Mode - Mar. 15, 2011
Where is the second part? You said it will be soon...O_O
RE: Mr. N's Beyblade Story - Mr. N - Mar. 16, 2011
(Mar. 15, 2011 4:52 PM)Legendary 4 Wrote: Where is the second part? You said it will be soon...O_O
Sorry, I don't have lots of time during the weekdays. I'll do extra for the weekends! Please be patient
Edit: I just remembered that sometimes I think of a character and how he/she fits into the story, but I can't think of a good name for them. I know this is embarassing not to have character's names for my own story, but could you guys help me if I ask for some names?
RE: Mr. N's Beyblade Story - Kujikato - Mar. 16, 2011
@ the question, sure! i have a list of names on my laptop eg: Takachi, Nerizno, Ratamachi and ect,
RE: Mr. N's Beyblade Story - C-Dub - Mar. 16, 2011
good story i wanna see where it goes.
RE: Mr. N's Beyblade Story - Mr. N - Mar. 16, 2011
(Mar. 15, 2011 3:47 PM)Dracovianauis Wrote: do you accept character requests? if so...
Name: Izuma Inzori
BeyBlade: starts with: Silent Ninja MSBSCH85 RHF/RS, final form is: Silent Samurai MKSCH85 WRHF/RWD
BeyBlade description:
Face: A shuriken in the middle, between two kantanas and the writing SAMURAI for Silent Samurai and NINJA for Silent Ninja (color: all decals black on silver background)
Silent: think of Lightning with the multi hit mode (renamed Rapid Strike mode) as thick shurikens, and upper mode (renamed Slice mode) as a kantana (color: un-painted)
Samurai: think of Kerbecs + L-Drago I with the 'rings' as shurikens and the dragon heads as kantanas (color; silver)
Ninja: same as Samurai except that the dragon heads are shaped like kunai (color: silver)
MKSCH85: Metal Kantana Spring Change Height 8.5mm – 11.0mm, same as MSBSCH85 except that the Shuriken Blade is changed with 4 kantanas (color: translucent silver for the plastic, un-painted metal for the “bladesâ€)
MSBSCH85: Metal Shuriken Blade Spring Change Height 8.5mm-11mm, think of CH120 with an external shell resembling a shuriken made of metal, when lose, MSBSCH85 can bounce due to the spring within the core of MSBSCH85.
RHF/RS: Rubber Hole Flat / Rubber Sharp (can change during combat at Izuma’s command)
WRHF/RWD: Wide Rubber Hole Flat / Rubber Wide Defense (can change during combat at Izuma’s command (color: translucent silver for plastic, black for the rubber))
Super Attacks:
Level 1: “Silent death,†Silent Samurai disappears and hits opponent with a million kunai and shuriken and kantanas
Level 2: “100 Slices of The Samurais’’,†the Metal Shuriken shell on MSBSCH85 swells and smashes the opponent’s bey 100 times, on the 99th time, Silent Ninja halts and circles the stadium 10 times, cheating a black hurricane that flips the opposing bey out of the stadium with a insanely powerful smash from Silent Samurai.
Level 3: N/A
Level X: “Infinite Blade†Samurai appears and slices at the opponent’s bey with such speed and power that the opposing bey instantly stops and flies out of the stadium 10 meters away, breaking it in half. (Last resort, can only be used three times in a year!)
Team attack 1: “Hydro Kantana Blitzâ€: Team attack with Hydro Narwhale: Narwhale lifts Samurai, Samurai creates a kantana and Narwhale adds high pressure water jets to it, they attack together, while Samurai slices with the kantana, narwhale flips and uses water jets to grind the opponent’s clear wheel, and increase its spin velocity, causing the opponent’s bey to completely stop by Narwhale’s grind or get KOed by Samurai’s attack
Team attack 2: “Electric Kantana Diveâ€: Team attack with Electric Berserker: Berserker goes around Samurai as a shield while circling the stadium (like the moon is Berserker, earth is Samurai and the centre of the stadium id the sun) and then Samurai shoots up in the sky, descending with Samurai spinning a kantana charged with lightning and Berserker keeping the opponent bey in one spot by surrounding it with a electric fence
Team attack 3: “Magma Kantana Diveâ€: Team attack with Magma Saurian: Refer to “Electric Kantana Dive†team attack with Berserker’s parts replaced by Saurian
Team attack X: “Inzori Finaleâ€: Team attack involving all the Team members: first, Narwhale soaks all the opponent beys, next Berserker zaps all of them, while the opponents are distracted by Narwhale and Berserkers team attack, then Narwhale fills the stadium with water at the same time, Saurian releases a flow of lava, trapping the opponent beys in Rock, allowing the entire team the time to do “Infinite Magma Hydro Electric Kantana Attack†without any opposition
BeyBlade Type: Legendary
Spin Direction: Left
Character bio:
Gender: Male
Clothes: Black Kevlar T-shirt and jeans and silver Kevlar cloak with black flames. (cloak is based on Minato from NARUTO)
Black hair, Chinese origin, oldest of 4 children
Caries twin Kantanas everywhere.
Team rank: Leader
Attitude: helpful and cool, he has to keep a critical eye on his twin sister, Sonai so that she doesn’t go out of control with her short temper, his classmates (except for Sonai) are jealous of him. When he promises something, you can guarantee that he will keep his promise unless it has anything to do with murder or theft. Keeps his younger brothers in line every day so that they don’t drive Sonai crazy.
Age: 17 years as of February 27, 2011
BeyBlade: begins with: Pre-HWS Narwhale CH120 PD, and ends with: Hydro Narwhale XDFCH110 EPWD/PD
Type: Stamina
BeyBlade description:
Face: For both Narwhales, two narwhales next to each other with a wave and the writing Narwhale on the bottom. (Color: the narwhales: sliver, the wave: light blue, the writing: silver, the background: medium dark blue)
Hydro: imagine the Pre-HWS Virgo except the lobes are wave like. (Un-colored)
(Metal wheel) Narwhale: 4 Narwhales in a circle with a wave pattern on the bottom
(Clear wheel) Narwhale: two Narwhales in a circle. (Translucent blue)
XDFCH110: eXtreme Down Force Change Height 11.0mm- 13.5mm, basically a CH110 with the external shell as a super wide DF that works in both spin directions. (Translucent blue)
EPWD/PD: Eternal Polish Wide Defense/Polish Defense, PD with a voice controlled shaft aligned in PD’s notches, wielding a free spinning PWD (Translucent blue)
Super Attacks:
Level 1: “ Hydro Turbo Boostâ€: Narwhale creates a water typhoon complimenting its team members spin or itself spin, thus increasing the bey affected by the water typhoon spin velocity.
Level 2: “Hydro Cannonâ€: Narwhale creates a huge water typhoon in the playing area and sends it at the opponent’s bey, sending it flying repeatedly so that Narwhale’s extreme stamina can be used to outlast the opponent’s bey.
Level 3: “Flying Hydro Narwhale Cannonâ€: Hydro Narwhale hovers in the air because on XDFCH110 and creates a water Narwhale to ram the opponent’s bey.
Level X: “Hydro Hornâ€: Narwhale appears and creates a high pressure water jet in the shape of a Narwhale’s horn and Stabs the opponent’s bey breaking it in half, or KOing in instantly
Team Attacks:
Team attack 1: “Hydro Kantana Blitzâ€: Team attack with Silent Samurai: Hydro Narwhale lifts Silent Samurai, Samurai creates a Kantana and Narwhale adds high pressure water jets to it, and then they attack together, while Samurai slices with the kantana, narwhale flips and uses Hydro to grind the opponent’s clear wheel, causing the opponent’s bey to completely stop by Narwhale’s grind or get KOed by Samurai’s attack
Team attack 2: “Hydro Shockâ€: Team attack with Electric Berserker: Team attack with Hydro Narwhale: First, Narwhale soaks the opposing beys with water, then Berserker zaps them, after that, Narwhale creates a water typhoon that Berserker charges with electricity
Team attack 3: “Rock Strikeâ€: Team attack with Magma Saurian: Narwhale fills the stadium with at the same time, Saurian releases a flow of lava, trapping the opposing beys in rock, defenseless against a water/magma spear strike.
Team attack X: “Inzori Finaleâ€: Team attack involving all the Team members: first, Narwhale soaks all the opponent beys, next Berserker zaps all of them, while the opponents are distracted by Narwhale and Berserkers team attack, then Narwhale fills the stadium with water at the same time, Saurian releases a flow of lava, trapping the opponent beys in Rock, allowing the entire team the time to do “Infinite Magma Hydro Electric Kantana Attack†without any opposition
Spin Direction: L/R
Character bio:
Gender: Female
Clothes: wears basically the same as all the Inzori except that her cloak is blue with silver flames.
Caries a special Touch Screen Repair Computer, TSRC, and tools for bey repairs
Rank in Team: repairer. (Technician)
Black hair, Chinese origin, and 2nd oldest of 4 children
Attitude: very reckless, and has a short temper, her twin brother, Izuma, does all that he can do to make sure she doesn’t go out of control with her rage and short temper doesn’t get the worst of her, her classmates (except for Izuma) are jealous of her. When she promises something, you can guarantee that she will keep her promise unless it has anything to do with murder or theft. She can get very angry with her 2 younger brothers, she respects Inzori as the greatest beyblader of all time
She is Izuma’s twin sister
Age: 17 as of February 27, 2011
Name: Hatachi Inzori [spoiler]
BeyBlade: begins with: Static Zerker LB135 ELRF final form: Electric Berserker BXBCH135 EMCLRF
Beyblade type: Attack
BeyBlade Discription:
Face: A sword with electricity coming out of it and the writing BERSERKER or ZERKER on the bottom. (Color: the sword: Silver, everything else: yellow on a black background)
Electric: Looks like a metal wheel with 4 lengthened protrusions in the shape of thunderbolts. (Slightly overhangs the track like Rock does (color: silver))
Static: same as Electric but it only has 3 protrusions
Berserker: 4 very large swords in a circle. (Color: translucent light yellow)
Zerker: 3 swords in a circle. (Color: translucent dark yellow)
BXBCH135: Bending eXtreme Blades Change Height 13.5mm – 16.0mm, basically a CH___ with 4 large Blades that can bend at Hatachi’s command during battle.
LB135: Lightning Blade 13.5mm, 3 lightning like blades facing outward.
ELRF: Eternal Left Rubber Flat, a free spinning RF.
EMCLRF: Eternal Metal Coated Left Rubber Flat, combine Metal Flat, Rubber Flat, and Eternal___ and CS, a free spinning LRF with a Metal Coat around it. (The metal coat is raised by 2mm from the Left Rubber Flat)
Super attacks:
Level 1: “Static Shieldâ€: a shield of electricity that causes the opponent’s bey to gain static electricity and stick to other unwanted friction causing things.
Level 2: “Lightning Horn Rampâ€: a Horn with a smooth slope made of electricity rams the opponent bey and “slopes†it out of the stadium if it hits.
Level 3: “Electric Blade Typhoonâ€: a electric typhoon with electric Berserker Blades popping out every where to hit the opposing bey.
Level X: “Electric Berserker Bladeâ€: Electric Berserker’s version of Samurai’s Infinite Blade except that the sword is made of electricity.
Team attacks:
Team attack 1: “Hydro Shockâ€: Team attack with Hydro Narwhale: First, Narwhale soaks the opposing beys with water, then Berserker zaps them, after that, Narwhale creates a water typhoon that Berserker charges with electricity.
Team attack 2: “Lightning Kantana Diveâ€: Team attack with Silent Samurai: Berserker goes around Samurai as a shield while circling the stadium (like the moon is Berserker, earth is Samurai and the centre of the stadium id the sun) and then Samurai shoots up in the sky, descending with Samurai spinning a kantana charged with lightning and Berserker keeping the opponent bey in one spot by surrounding it with a electric fence.
Team attack 3: “Lava/Lightning Trap Grindâ€: Team attack with Magma Saurian: (possibly the silliest tag-team attack ever) Saurian makes a wall of lava in the shape of [and Berserker creates a wall that looks like], then they trap the opposing beys in between the two walls like this[], then make the wall look like ll, thus creating friction to halt the trapped beys to a complete stop
Team attack X: “Inzori Finaleâ€: Team attack involving all the Team members: first, Narwhale soaks all the opponent beys, next Berserker zaps all of them, while the opponents are distracted by Narwhale and Berserkers team attack, then Narwhale fills the stadium with water at the same time, Saurian releases a flow of lava, trapping the opponent beys in Rock, allowing the entire team the time to do “Infinite Magma Hydro Electric Kantana Attack†without any opposition
Spin direction: Left
Character bio:
Gender: male
Clothes: wears basically the same as all the Inzori except that his cloak is black with yellow thunderbolts, and wears repair goggles.
Black hair, Chinese origin, and 3rd of 4 children
Carries a special touch screen analyzer computer that can scan beys and create strategies according to the opponent’s bey parts and battle strategies for each of the team’s members
Team rank: Tactician
Attitude: a Bey strategist, caring and intelligent.
Age: 14 years old as of March 8, 2011
Beyblade: first bey: Inferno Dino BD145 RS ___ final bey: Magma Saurian XGBCH160 RDS
BeyBlade Description:
Face: A T-Red head blowing Flame and the writing DINO on the bottom for Inferno Dino/A T-Rex head with Magma trickling down the side and the writing SAURIAN on the bottom for Magma Saurian. (Color: Brown T-Rex head, red flames/magma, & gold DINO/SAURIAN)
Inferno: the Hasbro Pre-HWS HWS version of SGTO (red and brown)
Magma: Metal version of Heat with rubber in the gaps. (Rubber: red, metal: un-colored)
Dino: a T-Rex in a circle (the T-Rex: brown, the background or other plastic: red)
Saurian: ripples of lava in a circle. (Color: translucent red)
BD145: Hell Kerbecs’ Track. (Translucent red)
XGBCH160: eXtreme Gravity Bowl Change Height 16.0mm – 18.5mm, cross of CH___ and GB145, 4 metal balls on the shell of CH___, the plastic is arranged in a 4 pronged star.
RS: Rubber Sharp. (Color: translucent red, rubber: red)
RDS: Rubber Defense Sharp, a DS made of rubber (Color: red rubber and translucent red for the plastic parts)
Super attacks:
Level 1: “Lava Shieldâ€: Saurian creates a wall of Lava around it to protect it from attacks.
Level 2: “Lava Wipeoutâ€: Saurian creates a wave of lava to cover its opponents.
Level X: “Volcano Graveâ€: Saurian suddenly starts circling the stadium and creates a miniature un-erupted volcano in the middle of the stadium, then when the opponent’s bey is in the volcano’s crater, the volcano explodes, sending the opponent’s bey flying.
Team attacks:
Team attack 1: Magma Kantana Strike: Team attack with Silent Samurai: Refer to “Electric Kantana Dive†team attack with Berserker’s parts replaced by Saurian
Team attack 2: “Lava/Lightning Trap Grind†(possibly the silliest tag-team attack ever) : Team attack with Electric Berserker: Saurian makes a wall of lava in the shape of [and Berserker creates a wall that looks like], then they trap the opposing beys in between the two walls like this[], then make the wall look like ll, thus creating friction to halt the trapped beys to a complete stop
Team attack 3: Rock Strike: Team attack with Hydro Narwhale: Narwhale fills the stadium with at the same time, Saurian releases a flow of lava, trapping the opposing beys in rock, defenseless against a water/magma spear strike.
Team attack X: “Inzori Finaleâ€: Team attack involving all the Team members: first, Narwhale soaks all the opponent beys, next Berserker zaps all of them, while the opponents are distracted by Narwhale and Berserkers team attack, then Narwhale fills the stadium with water at the same time, Saurian releases a flow of lava, trapping the opponent beys in Rock, allowing the entire team the time to do “Infinite Magma Hydro Electric Kantana Attack†without any opposition
Character bio:
Gender: male
Clothes: wears basically the same as all the Inzori except that his cloak is silver with red flames.
Black hair, Chinese origin, and the youngest of 4 children
Team rank: Attack absorber (the shield)
Attitude: very humorous, liked by everyone.
Thanks! I'll use the characters, but will you mind if I tweak their roles a bit? Oh yeah, their ages might be a bit different, since it was before Gingka saved the world...
RE: Mr. N's Beyblade Story - C-Dub - Mar. 16, 2011
I have a character request:
Name hantom
Bey:MF Haunting Phantom F135 IR2F
Gender:Boy
Side:Good or bad...doesnt reall matter to me as long as he's a main character.
Age:15
Type:Attack,Left spin
Bey Descripton:The face bolt says Phantom across and black surrounding the word.:The energy ring is black wth a little shade of dark purple there are P's on the left and right side of the energy ring with an oval in the middle of the ring and spikes surrounding the P's.The fusion wheel ,Haunting, is like pegasis energy ring with the wings only their stickin out of the side of the fusion wheel and there are 3 like the points of a triangle and in the gaps are little needles about 5 millimeters long sticking out too.The spin track ,F135, stands for fabric and it wobbles so when the opponent tries to attack the track they'll just fall over,but it's a mystery how it supports the fusion wheel,energy ring, and facebolt.The performance tip ,Ir2f,stands for invisibleR2f.If you take it off of the spintrack it becomes visible again.
Personality:Mysterious,dark,doesn't talk much,doesnt really use his full power,trustworthy until u make him mad,he's always cool and contained even when he loses,doesn't love any thing exept his family,friends,and bey.He knows karate and only battles strong opponents.
Looks like:He has black eyes,brown drooping hair like reiji over his right eye,he's about 5'11'',wears all black,black jordans,skinny jeans,black open sweatshirt with a black t-shirt,and black gloves that the UFC fighters wear.
RE: Mr. N's Beyblade Story - Dan - Mar. 16, 2011
I cannot tell much about your prose or writing style with so little written, but I'm pretty sure the first guy to save the world with beyblades was Tyson. (Of course you did not mean it like that, but I felt bringing it up was appropriate. :V)
'In a world where spinning-tops seem to dictate man-kind.. One boy..'
Keep it up so I can see how much of a writer you are!
RE: Mr. N's Beyblade Story - Mr. N - Mar. 16, 2011
Episode 1 is up. Kevin won't get his Beyblade until Episode 3. The first 2 episodes are to set things up!
RE: Mr. N's Beyblade Story - Kujikato - Mar. 19, 2011
i like the preview of episode 3
RE: Mr. N's Beyblade Story - Mr. N - Mar. 19, 2011
Yeah, I know it isn't interesting now, but I promise it'll get better when Kevin gets his Bey. Speaking of his Bey, what should it be?
Edit: @ Dracovianauis, is it OK if Inferno is modified (you might have to change the name) so that you can use Boost Mode, since with normal mode, it kind of defeats the point of BD145.
RE: Mr. N's Beyblade Story - Kujikato - Mar. 22, 2011
im ok with any changes, just have my characters in lol, seroiusly
RE: Mr. N's Beyblade Story (Episode 2 Up This Weekend! Taking Character Requests!) - RAW - Mar. 26, 2011
Good Job!
I was going to give you tow charectars but this has inspired me to do my own.
RE: Mr. N's Beyblade Story (Episode 2 Up This Weekend! Taking Character Requests!) - Mr. N - Mar. 26, 2011
Episode 2 is up. I need ideas for Kevin Bey...
I also need names:
Doji/Dr. Ziggurat eqivalent
Ryuuga/Faust equivalent
Spy (I won't say anything about it.)
RE: Mr. N's Beyblade Story (EPISODE 2 IS UP!) - C-Dub - Mar. 26, 2011
hey what about my character?!?!?!?Anyway good chapter!
RE: Mr. N's Beyblade Story (EPISODE 2 IS UP!) - Mr. N - Mar. 26, 2011
(Mar. 26, 2011 8:41 PM)C-Dub Wrote: hey what about my character?!?!?!?Anyway good chapter!
Don't worry, your character will appear after the tournament.
Post your suggestions for Kevin's Bey!
RE: Mr. N's Beyblade Story (EPISODE 2 IS UP!) - C-Dub - Mar. 26, 2011
I have an suggestion:
Name:Ray Anubis R85 WHF
Description:
R85:Rubber85
WHF:WideHoleFlat
RE: Mr. N's Beyblade Story (EPISODE 2 IS UP!) - Mr. N - Mar. 26, 2011
(Mar. 26, 2011 9:07 PM)C-Dub Wrote: I have an suggestion:
Name:Ray Anubis R85 WHF
Description:
R85:Rubber85
WHF:WideHoleFlat
I actually have a Metal Wheel Already, so I just need Clear Wheel, Track, and Bottom. Preferably something new for all three.
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