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Poison Serpent SW145SD Article Rough Draft [100% Completed. Just needs Approval] - Wizard - Dec. 18, 2010 Quote:Face: Serpent RE: Poison Serpent SW145SD Article Rough Draft - Dan - Dec. 18, 2010 I don't see why you included tests.. The text sounds a bit too informal to me.. :Y RE: Poison Serpent SW145SD Article Rough Draft - Brooklyn-Z - Dec. 18, 2010 huh didnt know about the track thing anyways sounds good,though the face could use a little bit more description RE: Poison Serpent SW145SD Article Rough Draft - Mc Frown - Dec. 18, 2010 Quote:Virgo DF145D vs. Virgo DF145SDoff-topic, but could these old results have been skewed due to varying Virgo molds? anyways, spell out the word 'fifteen', and your writing is awkward. RE: Poison Serpent SW145SD Article Rough Draft - RエスコルピオT125JB - Dec. 18, 2010 (Dec. 18, 2010 5:04 PM)Mc Frown Wrote: off-topic, but could these old results have been skewed due to varying Virgo molds? I believe Kei did those testings with the same mold of Virgos. RE: Poison Serpent SW145SD Article Rough Draft - Mc Frown - Dec. 18, 2010 I wonder if they're actual molds though, or just an inconsistent gradient? RE: Poison Serpent SW145SD Article Rough Draft - Glad Hatter - Dec. 18, 2010 how did sd manage to beat d? RE: Poison Serpent SW145SD Article Rough Draft - Soundwave - Dec. 18, 2010 (Dec. 18, 2010 7:48 PM)Jacksonian Wrote: how did sd manage to beat d? because D has a wider surface area than SD, it goes like this: SD can't woble as much as D but has a higher spin time, but if you want to woble you want WD, dso D is merly a balance of the two therefor it is outclassed :\ RE: Poison Serpent SW145SD Article Rough Draft - Wizard - Dec. 18, 2010 Bump Does anybody know what the Serpent constellation is called? Also, could somebody else who owns Poison Serpent possibly weigh the parts for me? RE: Poison Serpent SW145SD Article Rough Draft - Kai-V - Dec. 18, 2010 (Dec. 18, 2010 8:18 PM)Bey-Heart Wrote: Does anybody know what the Serpent constellation is called?http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/List_of_constellations RE: Poison Serpent SW145SD Article Rough Draft - Wizard - Dec. 18, 2010 (Dec. 18, 2010 8:24 PM)Kai-V Wrote:Well, looks like it's called "Serpens". Thanks Kai-V(Dec. 18, 2010 8:18 PM)Bey-Heart Wrote: Does anybody know what the Serpent constellation is called?http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/List_of_constellations RE: Poison Serpent SW145SD Article Rough Draft - LeonTempest - Dec. 18, 2010 article is to informal...some syntax errprs i think its a decent start though RE: Poison Serpent SW145SD Article Rough Draft - Wizard - Dec. 18, 2010 (Dec. 18, 2010 8:50 PM)LeonTempestXIII Wrote: article is to informal...some syntax errprs i thinkThan you for the bold. What are Syntax Errors? (As you can tell I do not major in English) RE: Poison Serpent SW145SD Article Rough Draft - Wraith - Dec. 18, 2010 AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA I was beaten, LOLWUT? Anyway, I might still make mine. RE: Poison Serpent SW145SD Article Rough Draft - Wizard - Dec. 18, 2010 (Dec. 18, 2010 10:51 PM)Wraith Wrote: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAPlease, make yours. If all fails, we could combine our articles to make a better one. RE: Poison Serpent SW145SD Article Rough Draft - Ga' - Dec. 22, 2010 don't forget to change "gimick" to gimmick. quotes aren't necessary. But either way, great job! RE: Poison Serpent SW145SD Article Rough Draft - Amaterasu - Dec. 22, 2010 deleed RE: Poison Serpent SW145SD Article Rough Draft - Ga' - Dec. 22, 2010 (Dec. 22, 2010 9:57 PM)Ra Wrote: u missed spelt gimmick in the sw145 artickle i just said that.... RE: Poison Serpent SW145SD Article Rough Draft - Amaterasu - Dec. 23, 2010 oops sorry RE: Poison Serpent SW145SD Article Rough Draft - Mc Frown - Dec. 23, 2010 SD is a reason to buy it, but Dark Bull is a better option. RE: Poison Serpent SW145SD Article Rough Draft - Wizard - Dec. 23, 2010 Bump Thank you everybody for you input! When I purchased this Beyblade I made sure I took pictures of it Straight out of the box. So I got that covered. RE: Poison Serpent SW145SD Article Rough Draft - Sparx000 - Dec. 23, 2010 i bought dark bull days ago.it says its balance but its more like stamina. will sd have same effect on poison serpent? i hope not.XD RE: Poison Serpent SW145SD Article Rough Draft - Soundwave - Dec. 23, 2010 (Dec. 23, 2010 9:29 PM)PoisonSerpent=) Wrote: i bought dark bull days ago.it says its balance but its more like stamina. will sd have same effect on poison serpent? i hope not.XDSTAMINA... it is a stamina tip but only useful with stamina parts RE: Poison Serpent SW145SD Article Rough Draft - Wizard - Dec. 28, 2010 Anything else that could be improved? Lol. RE: Poison Serpent SW145SD Article Rough Draft - Soundwave - Dec. 28, 2010 I think you should compare yours and Wraith's draft, they are both good but someone should compare them too see which one is at par :\ |