(Jul. 07, 2022  5:17 AM)TylerOfChaos Wrote: I have a series with the same concept! Although, my version of the beys burst. You wouldn't be able to call it Beyblade Burst without bursting.

(Jul. 08, 2022  7:55 AM)TylerOfChaos Wrote:

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And pretty good for a first episode

(Jul. 08, 2022  6:10 PM)WizardBlader Wrote:

(Jul. 08, 2022  7:55 AM)TylerOfChaos Wrote:

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And pretty good for a first episode

Thanks for the review

(Jul. 07, 2022  12:15 PM)WizardBlader Wrote:

(Jul. 07, 2022  5:17 AM)TylerOfChaos Wrote: I have a series with the same concept! Although, my version of the beys burst. You wouldn't be able to call it Beyblade Burst without bursting.

Ah, I see.

The system does allow beyblades to burst but only if the bladers choose to do so in battle (as stated in the overview). Maybe I wasn't as clear there. Ill have a quick look again, and name some of the sections of the Overview to make it easier to read.

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Episode 1 is now out!

Spoiler (Click to View)

Episode 1: Battle into a new era! The MB System!

Location: Raging Bulls Training Room

???/???: "Go... SHOOT!"

???: "Go now! Bellerus!"

???: "You won't win this time, Ben!"

Ben: "Hah! Keep telling yourself that Xaviero! I've won against Xanthus before, and Ill do it again as many times as I possibly can!"

Xaviero: "Grr! Xanthus!"
(Xanthus's aura is released from the beyblade and same as its avatar)

Ben: "Bellerus! Use Void Slash!"
(Void Bellerus quickly speeds towards Mythical Xanthus, with it's blades glowing)

Xaviero: "Counter that Xanthus, by using Mythic Scimitar!"
(Both Beyblades smash into each other in a head-on colision, and Bellerus bursts)

Xaviero: "Yes! I finally won!"
(Xaviero throws Mythical Xanthus into the air, catches it perfectly, and shows it to Benjamin with a confident air.)

Xaviero: "You want to go agai-"

(Ben's phone starts to make dinging noises)
Ben: "Huh? I wonder if that could be..."

(Ben flips open his phone, sees an exhibition match starting on Beytube, presses play, and screen shares the match to a nearby TV)

Ben: "Hey, looks like Shu Kuranai's match is starting-"

Xaviero: "Mister Kuranai's match...? Oh! That's right, that match with that Russian kid from BC Sol who made the new system right?"

Ben: "Right. I've been looking forward to seeing Shu's match with Alek Nevesky. Now Ill be able to see the kind of power this 'Metal Burst System' can pack!"
(They sit on a small bench and watch the match)

Announcer Hanami: "Okay boys and girls! Today is the day we have all been waiting for! The first official exhibition 'Metal Burst' match!"

Hanami: "In the Red Corner, we have The Crimson Flame himself, SHU KURENAI! And in the Blue Corner, we have the new, and famous Beyblading Prodegy, ALEK NEVESKY!"
(The crowd bursts into cheers as both bladers make their way to the stadium)

Alek: "It is an honor to battle you, Shu Kurenai."

Shu: "The honor is truly mine, Alek."

Referee: "Set your beyblades to Burst Mode."
(The bladers get into position)

Referee: "First Battle. Ready, Set!"
Shu/Alek: "3, 2, 1, Go... SHOOT!"

Shu: "Take the center! Spriggan!"
Alek: "Faster, Ares!"
(Valiant Spriggan takes the center spinning counter-clockwise while Belligerent Ares rampages around the stadium ridge, getting faster)

Alek: "Ares! Belligerent Shoot!"
(Ares lets go of the stadium ridge, and rushes towards Spriggan rapidly, creating a flower pattern)

Alek: "Keep it up, Ares!"
Shu: "Let loose! Spriggan!"
(Spriggan's aura is released from the beyblade and same as      its avatar)

Shu: "Valiant Whip!"
(Spriggan tilts on one side, meeting one of Ares's blows full-on, which bursts Ares)
Alek: "What!?"
Referee: "Burst Finish! Two points are awarded to Shu Kurenai! The score is 2 - 0!"
Hanami: "WOW! Spriggan used Ares's momentum against itself, and managed to preform a Burst! Spriggan's new evolution  makes it almost like a brick wall, unable to be moved from its place because of its heavy weighting!"

Referee: "Set your modes to Metal Mode."
Hanami: "If some of you bladers out there do not know what Metal Mode is, It means that the Beyblade can never, EVER, burst, no matter what! That also means, that Spin Finishes and Knockouts are the only ways of scoring points. Because of this, and the fact that the MB System makes Beyblades super heavy, it means that Knockouts are worth
two points!"

(The bladers get into position)
Referee: "Second Battle. Ready, Set!"
Alek/Shu: "3, 2, 1, Go... SHOOT!"

(Both beyblade's Metal Burststoppers fire out with the bladers powerful 'Ultrametal Launches')
Shu: "Valiant Spark!"
Alek: "Counter with Belligerent Slash, Ares!"
(Both beyblades hit with huge clockwise metal attacks, neither letting up)

Shu: "Let loose, Spriggan!"
Alek: "Ares!"
(Both auras are released from the beyblades and same as their avatars)

Alek: "Keep it up, Ares!"
Shu: (thoughts) "He's trying to chip away at my stamina by countering hit after hit!"
(Eventually, Ares is able to waste all of Spriggan's stamina and take it's first point)
Alek: "Yes!"
Shu: "That was great, but lets see you try to win it all!"
Hanami: "These battles just keep getting better and better! Ares chipped away at Spriggan's stamina until Spriggan just couldn't keep up! AMAZING!"

Referee: "Set your modes to Burst Mode."
Referee: "Ready, Set!"
Alek/Shu: "3, 2, 1, Go... SHOOT!"

Shu: "Spriggan! Valiant Spark!"
(Spriggan quickly begins to hit Ares right off the bat, rapidly chipping at Ares's stamina)

Alek: "Now, Ares!"
(Ares utilizes one of Spriggan's hits to propel itself to the stadium ridge and begins to gain speed)

Alek: "Ares!"
(Ares's aura is released from the beyblade and same as its avatar)

Alek: "Belligerent Propulsion!"
(Ares quickly hits one of the stadium walls, and smashes into Spriggan, which bursts Spriggan.)

Shu: *Gasps*
Referee: "Belligerent Ares with a Burst Finish! Two points are awarded to Alek Nevesky, which means that Alek Nevesky wins this match!"

Hanami: "OH MY GOD! Belligerent Ares came BLASTING right through Valiant Spriggan at light speed, and ended up winning the entire thing! That goes to show you all how powerful the MB System is! Anyways, thats all for now! Goodbye, and make sure to not miss our future videos!"

(The program turns off. Xaviero is sitting in pure awe)
Xaviero: "That...was...so...COOL!"

Ben: "Yeah, but its too bad Shu lost. It was really smart how Alek used Spriggan's attacks to actually speed up really really fast and burst Spriggan!"

Xaviero: "I would really like to evolve Xanthus to the MB System! Don't you think Bellerus would like that too?"

Ben: "Hm- Maybe."
(Ben looks at Void Bellerus with a troubled look on his face, but Xaviero doesn't notice in all of the excitement)

Xaviero: "Hey! I know what we should do when Mister Kurenai gets back from Spain! I'm going to ask him if we can go evolve our beyblades with Alek's help, just like he did!"
(Ben's expression turns surprised, but he quickly covers it up with a smile)

Ben: "Thats a great idea, but take it easy! He's not coming back today anyways."

(Xaviero grins sheepishly)
Xaviero: "Yeah, I probably should."

End Of First Episode

Its not my best episode, but quality will totally get better as the season advances.
Please leave what you think about this chapter! ^-^
-WizardBlader

(Jul. 09, 2022  6:00 AM)IUnseenBurst Wrote:

(Jul. 07, 2022  12:15 PM)WizardBlader Wrote: Ah, I see.

The system does allow beyblades to burst but only if the bladers choose to do so in battle (as stated in the overview). Maybe I wasn't as clear there. Ill have a quick look again, and name some of the sections of the Overview to make it easier to read.

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Episode 1 is now out!

Spoiler (Click to View)

Episode 1: Battle into a new era! The MB System!

Location: Raging Bulls Training Room

???/???: "Go... SHOOT!"

???: "Go now! Bellerus!"

???: "You won't win this time, Ben!"

Ben: "Hah! Keep telling yourself that Xaviero! I've won against Xanthus before, and Ill do it again as many times as I possibly can!"

Xaviero: "Grr! Xanthus!"
(Xanthus's aura is released from the beyblade and same as its avatar)

Ben: "Bellerus! Use Void Slash!"
(Void Bellerus quickly speeds towards Mythical Xanthus, with it's blades glowing)

Xaviero: "Counter that Xanthus, by using Mythic Scimitar!"
(Both Beyblades smash into each other in a head-on colision, and Bellerus bursts)

Xaviero: "Yes! I finally won!"
(Xaviero throws Mythical Xanthus into the air, catches it perfectly, and shows it to Benjamin with a confident air.)

Xaviero: "You want to go agai-"

(Ben's phone starts to make dinging noises)
Ben: "Huh? I wonder if that could be..."

(Ben flips open his phone, sees an exhibition match starting on Beytube, presses play, and screen shares the match to a nearby TV)

Ben: "Hey, looks like Shu Kuranai's match is starting-"

Xaviero: "Mister Kuranai's match...? Oh! That's right, that match with that Russian kid from BC Sol who made the new system right?"

Ben: "Right. I've been looking forward to seeing Shu's match with Alek Nevesky. Now Ill be able to see the kind of power this 'Metal Burst System' can pack!"
(They sit on a small bench and watch the match)

Announcer Hanami: "Okay boys and girls! Today is the day we have all been waiting for! The first official exhibition 'Metal Burst' match!"

Hanami: "In the Red Corner, we have The Crimson Flame himself, SHU KURENAI! And in the Blue Corner, we have the new, and famous Beyblading Prodegy, ALEK NEVESKY!"
(The crowd bursts into cheers as both bladers make their way to the stadium)

Alek: "It is an honor to battle you, Shu Kurenai."

Shu: "The honor is truly mine, Alek."

Referee: "Set your beyblades to Burst Mode."
(The bladers get into position)

Referee: "First Battle. Ready, Set!"
Shu/Alek: "3, 2, 1, Go... SHOOT!"

Shu: "Take the center! Spriggan!"
Alek: "Faster, Ares!"
(Valiant Spriggan takes the center spinning counter-clockwise while Belligerent Ares rampages around the stadium ridge, getting faster)

Alek: "Ares! Belligerent Shoot!"
(Ares lets go of the stadium ridge, and rushes towards Spriggan rapidly, creating a flower pattern)

Alek: "Keep it up, Ares!"
Shu: "Let loose! Spriggan!"
(Spriggan's aura is released from the beyblade and same as      its avatar)

Shu: "Valiant Whip!"
(Spriggan tilts on one side, meeting one of Ares's blows full-on, which bursts Ares)
Alek: "What!?"
Referee: "Burst Finish! Two points are awarded to Shu Kurenai! The score is 2 - 0!"
Hanami: "WOW! Spriggan used Ares's momentum against itself, and managed to preform a Burst! Spriggan's new evolution  makes it almost like a brick wall, unable to be moved from its place because of its heavy weighting!"

Referee: "Set your modes to Metal Mode."
Hanami: "If some of you bladers out there do not know what Metal Mode is, It means that the Beyblade can never, EVER, burst, no matter what! That also means, that Spin Finishes and Knockouts are the only ways of scoring points. Because of this, and the fact that the MB System makes Beyblades super heavy, it means that Knockouts are worth
two points!"

(The bladers get into position)
Referee: "Second Battle. Ready, Set!"
Alek/Shu: "3, 2, 1, Go... SHOOT!"

(Both beyblade's Metal Burststoppers fire out with the bladers powerful 'Ultrametal Launches')
Shu: "Valiant Spark!"
Alek: "Counter with Belligerent Slash, Ares!"
(Both beyblades hit with huge clockwise metal attacks, neither letting up)

Shu: "Let loose, Spriggan!"
Alek: "Ares!"
(Both auras are released from the beyblades and same as their avatars)

Alek: "Keep it up, Ares!"
Shu: (thoughts) "He's trying to chip away at my stamina by countering hit after hit!"
(Eventually, Ares is able to waste all of Spriggan's stamina and take it's first point)
Alek: "Yes!"
Shu: "That was great, but lets see you try to win it all!"
Hanami: "These battles just keep getting better and better! Ares chipped away at Spriggan's stamina until Spriggan just couldn't keep up! AMAZING!"

Referee: "Set your modes to Burst Mode."
Referee: "Ready, Set!"
Alek/Shu: "3, 2, 1, Go... SHOOT!"

Shu: "Spriggan! Valiant Spark!"
(Spriggan quickly begins to hit Ares right off the bat, rapidly chipping at Ares's stamina)

Alek: "Now, Ares!"
(Ares utilizes one of Spriggan's hits to propel itself to the stadium ridge and begins to gain speed)

Alek: "Ares!"
(Ares's aura is released from the beyblade and same as its avatar)

Alek: "Belligerent Propulsion!"
(Ares quickly hits one of the stadium walls, and smashes into Spriggan, which bursts Spriggan.)

Shu: *Gasps*
Referee: "Belligerent Ares with a Burst Finish! Two points are awarded to Alek Nevesky, which means that Alek Nevesky wins this match!"

Hanami: "OH MY GOD! Belligerent Ares came BLASTING right through Valiant Spriggan at light speed, and ended up winning the entire thing! That goes to show you all how powerful the MB System is! Anyways, thats all for now! Goodbye, and make sure to not miss our future videos!"

(The program turns off. Xaviero is sitting in pure awe)
Xaviero: "That...was...so...COOL!"

Ben: "Yeah, but its too bad Shu lost. It was really smart how Alek used Spriggan's attacks to actually speed up really really fast and burst Spriggan!"

Xaviero: "I would really like to evolve Xanthus to the MB System! Don't you think Bellerus would like that too?"

Ben: "Hm- Maybe."
(Ben looks at Void Bellerus with a troubled look on his face, but Xaviero doesn't notice in all of the excitement)

Xaviero: "Hey! I know what we should do when Mister Kurenai gets back from Spain! I'm going to ask him if we can go evolve our beyblades with Alek's help, just like he did!"
(Ben's expression turns surprised, but he quickly covers it up with a smile)

Ben: "Thats a great idea, but take it easy! He's not coming back today anyways."

(Xaviero grins sheepishly)
Xaviero: "Yeah, I probably should."

End Of First Episode

Its not my best episode, but quality will totally get better as the season advances.
Please leave what you think about this chapter! ^-^
-WizardBlader

Why does this Aleck Character remind me of Sanji This was a pretty Good First Chapter but I feel like it was weird how you introduced the Main Character since he seemingly appeared like a Side-Character and this First Chapter didn't really feel like a First Chapter tbh. It felt like a Chapter to introduce a Side-Character that would happen in the middle of the story. But this was also pretty good and the details were also pretty good so for a First Chapter it wasn't awful but it wasn't amazing either. You should know that your Story is at the beginning area so you need to make it feel like it is the beginning by slowly introducing Characters one by one and making it clear who the Main Protag is since I personally couldn't tell. Great start to the story besides these details and I feel like there is some great potential in this story so I'll be keeping tabs on this. Nice Work so far though!

(Jul. 14, 2022  12:17 PM)WizardBlader Wrote: Episode Two is out!

Spoiler (Click to View)

Episode 2: Battles of Redemption! Bellerus Versus Spriggan!
Location: Raging Bulls Entrance

(Ben is walking towards the entrance of The Raging Bulls building with Xaviero)
Ben: "I can't wait to start training today! Shu messaged me an hour ago that he made it back in New York, and is at the building."
Xaviero: "Really?! Man, I can't wait to ask him about evolving our bey's-"

(Ben's face returned to that troubling look as he pulled Void Bellerus out of his pocket)
Xaviero: "Ben? Whats wrong?"
Ben: "Oh! Its nothing. I'm just... worried."
Xaviero: "Worried? About what?"

(Ben slips Bellerus back into his pocket before replying)
Ben: Its just that, I'm worried about evolving Bellerus again. I've gotten much stronger and bonded more with this Bellerus more than I ever have with any other evolution, and...
Xaviero: "And what?"
Ben: "And I'm worried about losing that bond again. You know, when Quinn..."
Xaviero: "Yeah, I remember. But it will be alright. Like you said, your bond with Bellerus has gotten super powerful! That means you are also super powerful as well! And with a
evolution, Bellerus will be Super Ultra Powerful!"

(Ben smiles, and rustles Xaviero's hair with his hand)
Ben: "Yeah, now that I think about it, you're right. We do make a great team, yeah?"
Xaviero: "We sure do!"

(Ben and Xaviero high-five, and head up to the Training Room, where they see Shu Kurenai tutoring the other bladers)
Xaviero: "Hi, Mister Kurenai!"
(Shu turns, and smiles when he sees Xaviero and Benjamin)
Shu: "Oh! Hello, Xaviero."
Xaviero: "We watched your Metal Burst match on the television yesterday! It was Super Ultra Powered!"
Shu: "Super Ultra Powered...? I guess that means it was really cool, right?"
Xaviero: "Yep! We also have a question for you. We want to evolve out beyblades into the MB System!"

(Shu appears to not be surprised at this; he was probably expecting this)
Shu: "Of course, I'm glad to hear that you are excited to do this, but what about Benjamin?  Does he also wish to evolve Bellerus?"

(Ben shifts around a bit uncomfortably before he answers)
Ben: "Well- I do, but first I want to ask a favor of you, Shu."
Shu: "Sure, what is it?"
Ben: "I want to have a battle with you, to see just how strong the Metal Burst System truly is. I know its powerful and strong, like I saw on TV yesterday, but I want true proof of its power."
Shu: *Gasps*

(Ben bows deeply before continuing)
Ben: "Just one battle!"
(Shu starts to smile warmly before replying)
Shu: "Of course Ill accept. After all, its my job to see how strong you've become as your teacher!"

(The three bladers go into a separate training room, one reserved for Shu Kurenai himself)
Xaviero: "Ill be the Referee!"
(Ben's eyes start to glow golden)
Ben: "Okay Shu, don't go easy on me just because I'm a bit weaker. Go all out!"
Shu: "I wasn't planning on going easy."
Xaviero: "Okay! First Battle between Benjamin Gaunt and Mister Kurenai! The mode for Valiant Spriggan, according to the rules, must be set to Burst Mode for opposing beyblades that can still burst!"
(Both bladers get into position)
Xaviero: "Ready, set!"
Shu/Ben: "3, 2, 1, Go... SHOOT!"

(Void Bellerus rampages around the stadium on its Attack+ mode, while Spriggan takes the center)
Shu: "Spriggan, take the center!"
Ben: "Mayhem Shoot!"
(Void Bellerus speeds down and up the stadium in a flower pattern, hitting Spriggan rapidly in the center, but barely making a dent in it's stamina)

Shu: "Stop him in his tracks! Valiant Slash!"
(Bellerus connects with the move, and is knocked out, bursting when it hits the floor)

Ben: *Gasps*
Xaviero: "Mister Kurenai with a Knockout! One point is awarded to him!"
Ben: (thoughts) "Just one move and he knocked me out of the stadium, and nearly bursted me!"
Xaviero: "Wow! That was cool- but anyways, Second Battle! Ready, Set!"
Ben/Shu: "3, 2, 1, Go... SHOOT!"

(Bellerus circles around the center of the stadium on Defense+ Mode, and Spriggan rages through the stadium)
Ben: "Bellerus! Head to the center!"
Shu: "Stop him! Valiant Spark!"
(Spriggan catches Bellerus before it got into the center, and began to chip away at its stamina with its metal-clad rights pin blades, but not effectivley because of the Defense+ Mode's height)

Ben: "Go, Bellerus!"
(Bellerus's aura is released from the beyblade and same as its avatar, and Ben's eyes and beyblade glows Golden for a split second)
Ben: "Now!"
(Bellerus lets itself get hit with a super-powerful blow by Spriggan's move, and propelles itself a little farther away, getting out of Shu's trap)

Shu: "What!?"
Ben: "Meet him with Mayhem Drift!"
(Bellerus 'drifts' towards Valiant Spriggan rapidly)
Shu: "Not today! Come forth, Spriggan!"
(Spriggan's aura is released from the beyblade and same as its avatar)

Shu: "Finish this with Valiant Whip!"
(The two beyblades collide with a shower of sparks)
Ben: "Bellerus!" *Roars*
(Bellerus starts to push Spriggan back a little bit, emitting a small golden Flare as it does so)
Shu: "Now, Spriggan!"
(Spriggan bursts through Void Bellerus with its two metal blades glowing brighter)

Ben: "What?!"
Xaviero: "Valiant Spriggan with a Burst Finish! That means that with the score at 0 - 3, Mister Kurenai wins the match."
(Ben falls to his knees, with one hand holding Bellerus's pieces, balled in a fist on the floor. Shu sees this and offers his hand to help Ben up)

(Ben looks at his hand, takes it, and Shu pulls him up)
Shu: "That was a great battle."
Ben: "...Yeah. It really was a fun battle."
Shu: "So? Have you decided what you are going to do with Bellerus?"

(Ben looks at Bellerus with a excited look on his face, and it glints in the light)
Ben: "Yeah. I'm going to evolve Bellerus into a Metal Burst Beyblade!"
Shu: "Then tomorrow, both of you can head to Spain. Ill tell Alek in advance so then its not such a surprise."
(Xaviero and Ben jump up together with happiness)
Xaviero: "Yes! Did you hear that Xanthus?! I'm going to evolve you!"
Ben: "But wait- Mom and Dad need to hear about this. They obviously won't let us go on a whim, not telling them and making them worried-"
(Xaviero waves his hand confidently)
Xaviero: "Don't you worry Ben. I spoke to them before we left for training today, and they were pretty chill with it!"

(Ben stares at Xaviero with his mouth wide open in surprise)
Ben: "B- but, what if I had won the battle against Shu?! Then I wouldn't have decided to go evolve our beyblades with you!"

(Xaviero rolls his eyes at Ben)
Xaviero: "I knew you would lose from the very beginning. I had absolutely no faith in you that you could win against Mister Kurenai-"
Ben: "Why you-"

(Ben starts to chase Xaviero out the door)
Xaviero: "Hey! Come on! It was just planning ahead!"
(They both say their good-byes as Shu waves goodbye. He begins to think back to the battle he had when Ben showed a small Golden Flare)

Shu: (thoughts) "Is it possible? Could Ben have the ability to use Flare? If that was a true Flare, even just a little spark, then I know he's going to get even stronger than he is now. I just hope he will understand how to use that Flare to its best." (smiles)

End of Episode 2

Leave a review, to let me know how this one is!
-WizardBlader

(Jul. 14, 2022  2:15 PM)SpeedySuomi Wrote:

(Jul. 14, 2022  12:17 PM)WizardBlader Wrote: Episode Two is out!

Spoiler (Click to View)

Episode 2: Battles of Redemption! Bellerus Versus Spriggan!
Location: Raging Bulls Entrance

(Ben is walking towards the entrance of The Raging Bulls building with Xaviero)
Ben: "I can't wait to start training today! Shu messaged me an hour ago that he made it back in New York, and is at the building."
Xaviero: "Really?! Man, I can't wait to ask him about evolving our bey's-"

(Ben's face returned to that troubling look as he pulled Void Bellerus out of his pocket)
Xaviero: "Ben? Whats wrong?"
Ben: "Oh! Its nothing. I'm just... worried."
Xaviero: "Worried? About what?"

(Ben slips Bellerus back into his pocket before replying)
Ben: Its just that, I'm worried about evolving Bellerus again. I've gotten much stronger and bonded more with this Bellerus more than I ever have with any other evolution, and...
Xaviero: "And what?"
Ben: "And I'm worried about losing that bond again. You know, when Quinn..."
Xaviero: "Yeah, I remember. But it will be alright. Like you said, your bond with Bellerus has gotten super powerful! That means you are also super powerful as well! And with a
evolution, Bellerus will be Super Ultra Powerful!"

(Ben smiles, and rustles Xaviero's hair with his hand)
Ben: "Yeah, now that I think about it, you're right. We do make a great team, yeah?"
Xaviero: "We sure do!"

(Ben and Xaviero high-five, and head up to the Training Room, where they see Shu Kurenai tutoring the other bladers)
Xaviero: "Hi, Mister Kurenai!"
(Shu turns, and smiles when he sees Xaviero and Benjamin)
Shu: "Oh! Hello, Xaviero."
Xaviero: "We watched your Metal Burst match on the television yesterday! It was Super Ultra Powered!"
Shu: "Super Ultra Powered...? I guess that means it was really cool, right?"
Xaviero: "Yep! We also have a question for you. We want to evolve out beyblades into the MB System!"

(Shu appears to not be surprised at this; he was probably expecting this)
Shu: "Of course, I'm glad to hear that you are excited to do this, but what about Benjamin?  Does he also wish to evolve Bellerus?"

(Ben shifts around a bit uncomfortably before he answers)
Ben: "Well- I do, but first I want to ask a favor of you, Shu."
Shu: "Sure, what is it?"
Ben: "I want to have a battle with you, to see just how strong the Metal Burst System truly is. I know its powerful and strong, like I saw on TV yesterday, but I want true proof of its power."
Shu: *Gasps*

(Ben bows deeply before continuing)
Ben: "Just one battle!"
(Shu starts to smile warmly before replying)
Shu: "Of course Ill accept. After all, its my job to see how strong you've become as your teacher!"

(The three bladers go into a separate training room, one reserved for Shu Kurenai himself)
Xaviero: "Ill be the Referee!"
(Ben's eyes start to glow golden)
Ben: "Okay Shu, don't go easy on me just because I'm a bit weaker. Go all out!"
Shu: "I wasn't planning on going easy."
Xaviero: "Okay! First Battle between Benjamin Gaunt and Mister Kurenai! The mode for Valiant Spriggan, according to the rules, must be set to Burst Mode for opposing beyblades that can still burst!"
(Both bladers get into position)
Xaviero: "Ready, set!"
Shu/Ben: "3, 2, 1, Go... SHOOT!"

(Void Bellerus rampages around the stadium on its Attack+ mode, while Spriggan takes the center)
Shu: "Spriggan, take the center!"
Ben: "Mayhem Shoot!"
(Void Bellerus speeds down and up the stadium in a flower pattern, hitting Spriggan rapidly in the center, but barely making a dent in it's stamina)

Shu: "Stop him in his tracks! Valiant Slash!"
(Bellerus connects with the move, and is knocked out, bursting when it hits the floor)

Ben: *Gasps*
Xaviero: "Mister Kurenai with a Knockout! One point is awarded to him!"
Ben: (thoughts) "Just one move and he knocked me out of the stadium, and nearly bursted me!"
Xaviero: "Wow! That was cool- but anyways, Second Battle! Ready, Set!"
Ben/Shu: "3, 2, 1, Go... SHOOT!"

(Bellerus circles around the center of the stadium on Defense+ Mode, and Spriggan rages through the stadium)
Ben: "Bellerus! Head to the center!"
Shu: "Stop him! Valiant Spark!"
(Spriggan catches Bellerus before it got into the center, and began to chip away at its stamina with its metal-clad rights pin blades, but not effectivley because of the Defense+ Mode's height)

Ben: "Go, Bellerus!"
(Bellerus's aura is released from the beyblade and same as its avatar, and Ben's eyes and beyblade glows Golden for a split second)
Ben: "Now!"
(Bellerus lets itself get hit with a super-powerful blow by Spriggan's move, and propelles itself a little farther away, getting out of Shu's trap)

Shu: "What!?"
Ben: "Meet him with Mayhem Drift!"
(Bellerus 'drifts' towards Valiant Spriggan rapidly)
Shu: "Not today! Come forth, Spriggan!"
(Spriggan's aura is released from the beyblade and same as its avatar)

Shu: "Finish this with Valiant Whip!"
(The two beyblades collide with a shower of sparks)
Ben: "Bellerus!" *Roars*
(Bellerus starts to push Spriggan back a little bit, emitting a small golden Flare as it does so)
Shu: "Now, Spriggan!"
(Spriggan bursts through Void Bellerus with its two metal blades glowing brighter)

Ben: "What?!"
Xaviero: "Valiant Spriggan with a Burst Finish! That means that with the score at 0 - 3, Mister Kurenai wins the match."
(Ben falls to his knees, with one hand holding Bellerus's pieces, balled in a fist on the floor. Shu sees this and offers his hand to help Ben up)

(Ben looks at his hand, takes it, and Shu pulls him up)
Shu: "That was a great battle."
Ben: "...Yeah. It really was a fun battle."
Shu: "So? Have you decided what you are going to do with Bellerus?"

(Ben looks at Bellerus with a excited look on his face, and it glints in the light)
Ben: "Yeah. I'm going to evolve Bellerus into a Metal Burst Beyblade!"
Shu: "Then tomorrow, both of you can head to Spain. Ill tell Alek in advance so then its not such a surprise."
(Xaviero and Ben jump up together with happiness)
Xaviero: "Yes! Did you hear that Xanthus?! I'm going to evolve you!"
Ben: "But wait- Mom and Dad need to hear about this. They obviously won't let us go on a whim, not telling them and making them worried-"
(Xaviero waves his hand confidently)
Xaviero: "Don't you worry Ben. I spoke to them before we left for training today, and they were pretty chill with it!"

(Ben stares at Xaviero with his mouth wide open in surprise)
Ben: "B- but, what if I had won the battle against Shu?! Then I wouldn't have decided to go evolve our beyblades with you!"

(Xaviero rolls his eyes at Ben)
Xaviero: "I knew you would lose from the very beginning. I had absolutely no faith in you that you could win against Mister Kurenai-"
Ben: "Why you-"

(Ben starts to chase Xaviero out the door)
Xaviero: "Hey! Come on! It was just planning ahead!"
(They both say their good-byes as Shu waves goodbye. He begins to think back to the battle he had when Ben showed a small Golden Flare)

Shu: (thoughts) "Is it possible? Could Ben have the ability to use Flare? If that was a true Flare, even just a little spark, then I know he's going to get even stronger than he is now. I just hope he will understand how to use that Flare to its best." (smiles)

End of Episode 2

Leave a review, to let me know how this one is!
-WizardBlader

First off, I'm really liking the more down-to-earth conversations/dialogue you put in, it gives off a human vibe to the characters but it isn't too casual to stray off from Beyblade's usual style. But what I noticed from the first chapter and this was that the battles were quite short, so maybe extend them a bit and don't rely too much on special moves. Overall, it's a nice story so far and I'm looking forward to whatever you put out following this.

(Aug. 12, 2022  5:04 AM)WizardBlader Wrote: Sorry for posting so late! I hadn't finished the Chapter earlier today, so I had to work overtime to make sure I hit the deadline today.

This is definitely my longest Chapter ever, might be a bit boring??? If it is, please leave why, and what should be improved on later chapters.

Episode 6:

Spoiler (Click to View)

Episode 6: An old friend?! Valt Aoi Versus Benjamin and Xaviero Gaunt!


???: "Come on, show yourself! If you are that thief agai-"
(Alek quickly opens the door)

???: "Alek?! What're you doing in there talking? Are you okay?
Alek: "Yeah, I'm okay. I was just-"
(Ben gets up to look at the person speaking)

Ben: "Cahira!?"
(Cahira's eyes widen in surprise, as she blushes slightly)

Cahira: "Benjamin?! What in the world are you doing here?"
Alek: "They were sent by Shu Kurenai to get their beyblade's evolved. Do you know them?"
Cahira: "Them?"
(Xaviero pops into view)

Xaviero: "It is you! Cahira, its so good to see you again!"

Cahira: "Xaviero! You're here too?"

Xaviero: "Yep! We came yesterday to get Xanthus and Bellerus evolved!"

Cahira: "Oh. Alek, why didn't you tell everyone about this?"
(Alek flushes in embarrassment)

Alek: "Well, uh, you see-"

Ben: "It was pretty late when we came, and you guys were in training, so Alek didn't want us to intrude."

Cahira: "Thats still not an excuse, he could have came to tell us after training. Let's go and tell everyone before they start thinking you ran away."
(They all start up the hallway towards the cafeteria, and Cahira slows down a bit to talk with Benjamin)

Cahira: "Its good to see you again, Ben."

Ben: "Same here! So, how has the rest of BC Sol been treating you?"

Cahira: "Quite good! I've been training really hard. Alek even evolved my Callisto to a MB System bey as a reward."

Ben: "Seriously? Thats awesome!"

Cahira: "Yeah, I know! Say, do you want to have a battle with me tomorrow?"

Ben: "That sounds great!"

Xaviero: "Me too, please?"

Cahira: "Of course! How about we make it a 2 on 1? Both of you against me."

Xaviero: "Hah! You sound pretty sure about yourself now. The old you would have never asked that kind of batt-"
(Xaviero is stopped from talking with a swift hit on the head by Cahira)

Cahira: "Seems like I still got it." (Grins)
(Xaviero rubs the place where she hit him)

Xaviero: "How do you keep hitting me in that area? Even Ben can't do tha-"
(They hear footsteps running their way)

???: "Hey! Cahira! Have you found Alek yet?"
Cahira: "Oh! That must be Magnus... Yeah! I found them!"
(Magnus turns the corner and sees the group)

Magnus: "Thank goodness- Wait. Who are those other two?"
(Cahira points at Ben and then Xaviero)

Cahira: "Oh! This is Ben. We go way back, when I was still at the Raging Bulls in New York, and this is his brother Xaviero, who is still the same as he was when I met him."
(Magnus's eyes narrow at Benjamin as Ben waves to Magnus)

Magnus: (murmurs) "You go way back, huh?"
Cahira: "We were on our way to the cafeteria to tell everyone about the news. Lets go, before everyone goes searching again."
(A couple of hours after Dinner, both of the brothers go into their temporarily assigned rooms)

(Xaviero hops onto his bed)
Xaviero: "Man! I can't wait to sleep on an actual bed at BC Sol. All we had yesterday were two uncomfortable chairs."

Ben: "Mhm, sleep well. Not like we still need to put away the clothes in our luggage away."

Xaviero: "Oh! Thats right..."
(Xaviero gets up quickly and assists Ben, before they both go to bed. The next day, they head to the cafeteria for breakfast)

Alek: "Hey guys! Come and sit over here, when you both have your food!"

Xaviero: "Okay!"
(Ben and Xaviero order their food from Ange, who greets them warmly)

Ange: "Hello you two! I hope you are both enjoying the stay!"

Xaviero: "We sure are!" (smiles)

Ben: "May we have that tasty-looking food Alek is having?"

Ange: "Of course!"
(Ange serves the brothers their food, and they go to sit at the table with Alek, Nigel, Cahira, and Magnus)
Cahira: "So, before our battle, I wanted to introduce you guys to Free and Valt."

(Xaviero looks around the cafeteria)
Xaviero: "But where are they? Speaking of which, I didn't see them anywhere yesterday at dinner."

Cahira: "Yeah, they take off to training early in the mornings, and only come back for training all of us, but I know exacly where they train. That's why I'm going to intoduce you
two to them at that time."
(Ben and Xaviero make huge smiles, and their eyes sparkle with excitement)

Xaviero: "Oh, yeah! I've always wanted to meet Valt and Free!"
Ben: "Me too!
(Ben and Xaviero begin to eat rapidly, and Ange sees this)

Ange: "Boys, chew your food!"
(Ben and Xaviero choke on their food and are given water to down the food)
Ben/Xaviero: "Sorry, Ange!"
All: (Laughs)

Location: Legendary Training Area at BC Sol

Alek: "Here we are, again!"
(Two figures are seen battling fiercely at the stadium where Alek and Nigel were seen by the brothers training)

Valt Aoi: "Keep up the hits, Valkyrie!"
Free de la Hoya: "Fafnir!"
(Fafnir and Valkyrie burst simultaniusly)

Free: "Another tie."

Valt: "Man, I really wanted to win that time. We keep doing so many ties."

Free: "Mhm."

Alek/Cahira: "Valt! Free!"
(Both Legends turn to face them)

Valt: "Oh hey Cahira! You too, Alek! Wait... don't tell me we missed training again?

Free: "No, the sun's not at the correct position for it to be that time yet."

Alek: "Yeah, Free's right. We came to introduce you both to two Raging Bulls trainees. They were personally sent by Shu Kurenai, to get their beyblades evolved by me."

Valt: "Shu, eh? Thats cool!"
(Ben and Xaviero introduce themselves)

Ben: "My name's Benjamin Gaunt."

Xaviero: "My name is Xaviero Gaunt! I've always wanted to meet you two! May I have an autograp-"
(Xaviero is stopped abruptly with a smack on the head from Cahira)

Cahira: "Not right now, Xaviero!"

Valt: "Can we have a battle? I really want to see the potencial that you guys have!"

Cahira: "But I was going to have a battle first..."
(Free pats her shoulder)

Free: "There's always later, Cahira. Valt's been wanting a new opponent for a little while anyways, and you will be able to see the brothers strategy."

Cahira: "True. Well then, Ill just observe."
(The battle commences. Xaviero, Benjamin, and Valt make their way to the stadium)

Xaviero: "I wonder who should go first...?"
Valt: "Ill take you both on! Heroic Valkyrie and I will beat both of you!"
(Heroic Valkyrie glints in the light as Valt holds it out)

Xaviero: "Thats not going to happen with Xanthus and I! With team work, we can never go wrong, right Ben?"

Benjamin: "I guess...?"
(Xaviero pats Benjamin's back)

Xaviero: "Come on! There's nothing we can't win against if we work together, remember?"
(Benjamin smiles a bit, nodding)

Xaviero: "Then let's beat Valkyrie!"

Valt: "I like your spirit, Xaviero! Now I want to battle you two even more!"

Free: "Well then. Ill be the referee."

Free: "The First Round between Benjamin and Xaviero Gaunt, and Valt Aoi will now begin. The battle stops when one team wins 3 points. With the modes on Metal Mode, Ready, set!"

Valt/Benjamin/Xaviero: "3, 2, 1, Go, SHOOT!"

(Valt does a powerful Ultrametal Launch, and the brother's do semi-powerful Ultrametal Launches. Heroic Valkyrie speeds intensely around the stadium, rapidly catching up to Superior Xanthus, while Nova Bellerus holds the center)

Xaviero: "Whoa! Look at that speed!"
Benjamin: "Watch out!"
(Valkyrie smashes into Xanthus, uppering it into the stadium wall)

Xaviero: "So much power! Hang on, Xanthus!"
(Xanthus's aura is released from the beyblade and same as its avatar, and it begins to glow Green)

Valt/Free: (Thoughts) "A Flare?!"

Xaviero: "Superior Scimtar!"

Valt: "Im afraid I can't let you do that! Rush Shoot!"
(Valkyrie makes a swift flower pattern, violently uppercutting Bellerus and Xanthus high into the air)

Benjamin: "What?! I didn't even have a chance to do anything-"

Xaviero: *Gasps* "My attack was countered!
(Bellerus and Xanthus come hurtling down)

Xaviero: "We've got one more chance to get him!"

Benjamin: "Right!"

Benjamin/Xaviero: "Nova Crash!"/"Superior Smash!"
(Bellerus connects with the stadium slope, driving towards Valkyrie with intense speed. Xanthus's blades glow green, and hits the top of Valkyrie, when Bellerus reached it)

Valt: "Impressive strategy, but now its time for me to end this! Heroic Sword!"
(Heroic Valkyrie's three rubber blades glow an intense Golden Red, and powerfully slashes at the brother's beyblades, knocking them both out immediately)

Benjamin/Xaviero: *Gasps*

Free: "Not too surprising. Valt Aoi wins the First Round with a Knockout, earning himself two points. Point standings are 2 - 0."

Valt: "Yes!"
(Benjamin and Xaviero pick up their beys, and they begin the Second Round)

Benjamin: "Valt's really powerful with his MB Valkyrie Evolution. We need to make a better strategy than last time."

Xaviero: "Okay. Lets try to attack together like last time, but more organized!"

Free: "Second Round will be with the modes on Burst Mode. Ready, set!"
Valt/Benjamin/Xaviero: "3, 2, 1, Go, SHOOT!"

(Valt does a powerful Ultrametal Launch, and the brother's do semi-powerful Ultrametal Launches. Heroic Valkyrie speeds intensely around the stadium near the middle, Superior Xanthus swiftly circles closer to the stadium walls, while Nova Bellerus holds the center again)
Valt: "Trying out a new strategy? Let's see how it does!"

Xaviero: "We're going to win this time! Superior Scimtar, repeatedly!"
(Xanthus barrages Valkyrie, chipping at its stamina bye making a small flower pattern while following Valkyrie around the stadium)

Valt: "Keep spinning, Valkyrie!"
(Valkyrie starts to speed up;  which results in some of Xanthus's attacks are missing)

Benjamin: "Oh no you don't. Nova Drift!"
(Bellerus barrages ahead of Valkyrie, in the opposite direction of Xanthus, pushing Valkyrie backwards, which causes Xanthus's hits to be more accurate)

Valt: "Wow! I have to say, you two are better than I expected! Then again, you both are Shu's apprentices. Ill have to give it my all now!"

Xaviero: "Wait, that wasn't your full power?!"

Benjamin: "Xaviero, concentrate on the battle-"

Valt: *Roars* "Valkyrie!"
(Valkyrie's aura is released from the beyblade and same as its avatar, and it glows an extremely vibrant Blue, deflecting the brother's attacks and speeding away from them)

Benjamin/Xaviero: "What?!"

Valt: "This will finish it! Heroic Saber!"
(The three blades on the Layer glow a vibrant golden-red, and Valkyrie accelerates back towards the brothers)

Benjamin: (Thoughts) 'What do I do?!'

Bellerus: 'You know what to do.'

Benjamin: "Give it your all, Bellerus!"
(Bellerus's aura is released from the beyblade and same as its avatar, and it glows Golden like the last battle)

Benjamin: "Collide with all you've got, Xaviero!"

Xaviero: "You got it!" *Roars* "Xanthus!"
(Xanthus's aura is released from the beyblade and same as its avatar, and it glows green like the last battle)

(Xanthus and Bellerus meet together, and sparks fly inbetween them while they circle around each other. Before Valkyrie hits them, they fire apart, hitting the opposite stadium walls, and into the air)
Valt: "What?!" (Thoughts) "They hit each other to do a different move?!"

Benjamin/Xaviero: "Dual... Clockwise... Strike!"
(The two beyblades meet in midair, and fall, spinning like a saw-blade at Heroic Valkyire)

Benjamin/Xaviero: "GOOO!"
(Nova Bellerus and Superior Xanthus hit Valkyrie strongly, and the entire stadium erupts in a blinding light. When the dust clears, Bellerus and Xanthus are bursted, with Heroic Valkyrie slowly spinning, then bursts abruptly)

Xaviero: *panting* "Did- did we win?"

Free: "Interesting... but Valt won. With a score of 4 - 0, Valt Aoi is the winner."

Xaviero: "Aw man-"
(Benjamin pats Xaviero's back with a grin)

Benjamin: "Its okay! We tried our best, and completed a combo move!"

Xaviero: "Yep, we sure did!"
(Valt comes over to the brothers)

Valt: "I'm glad to see such a bond between brothers. You both have amazing potential to become amazing bladers, maybe even make it to the Legend status."

Xaviero: "Really?! Awesome..."

Valt: "Mhm! But before that, you need some training. So I wanted to ask you both, if you would like to temporally train here with the rest of BC Sol. Maybe you all could learn a few things here!"

Benjamin: "Train at BC Sol?! That sounds amazing!"

Valt: "Ill tell Shu that you all will be staying a while longer, while you make yourselves at home."
(Benjamin and Xaviero jump up in excitement)

Benjamin/Xaviero: "Yes!"

End of Episode 6

(Aug. 12, 2022  1:48 PM)Dragon Blader Z Wrote:

(Aug. 12, 2022  5:04 AM)WizardBlader Wrote: Sorry for posting so late! I hadn't finished the Chapter earlier today, so I had to work overtime to make sure I hit the deadline today.

This is definitely my longest Chapter ever, might be a bit boring??? If it is, please leave why, and what should be improved on later chapters.

Episode 6:

Spoiler (Click to View)

Episode 6: An old friend?! Valt Aoi Versus Benjamin and Xaviero Gaunt!


???: "Come on, show yourself! If you are that thief agai-"
(Alek quickly opens the door)

???: "Alek?! What're you doing in there talking? Are you okay?
Alek: "Yeah, I'm okay. I was just-"
(Ben gets up to look at the person speaking)

Ben: "Cahira!?"
(Cahira's eyes widen in surprise, as she blushes slightly)

Cahira: "Benjamin?! What in the world are you doing here?"
Alek: "They were sent by Shu Kurenai to get their beyblade's evolved. Do you know them?"
Cahira: "Them?"
(Xaviero pops into view)

Xaviero: "It is you! Cahira, its so good to see you again!"

Cahira: "Xaviero! You're here too?"

Xaviero: "Yep! We came yesterday to get Xanthus and Bellerus evolved!"

Cahira: "Oh. Alek, why didn't you tell everyone about this?"
(Alek flushes in embarrassment)

Alek: "Well, uh, you see-"

Ben: "It was pretty late when we came, and you guys were in training, so Alek didn't want us to intrude."

Cahira: "Thats still not an excuse, he could have came to tell us after training. Let's go and tell everyone before they start thinking you ran away."
(They all start up the hallway towards the cafeteria, and Cahira slows down a bit to talk with Benjamin)

Cahira: "Its good to see you again, Ben."

Ben: "Same here! So, how has the rest of BC Sol been treating you?"

Cahira: "Quite good! I've been training really hard. Alek even evolved my Callisto to a MB System bey as a reward."

Ben: "Seriously? Thats awesome!"

Cahira: "Yeah, I know! Say, do you want to have a battle with me tomorrow?"

Ben: "That sounds great!"

Xaviero: "Me too, please?"

Cahira: "Of course! How about we make it a 2 on 1? Both of you against me."

Xaviero: "Hah! You sound pretty sure about yourself now. The old you would have never asked that kind of batt-"
(Xaviero is stopped from talking with a swift hit on the head by Cahira)

Cahira: "Seems like I still got it." (Grins)
(Xaviero rubs the place where she hit him)

Xaviero: "How do you keep hitting me in that area? Even Ben can't do tha-"
(They hear footsteps running their way)

???: "Hey! Cahira! Have you found Alek yet?"
Cahira: "Oh! That must be Magnus... Yeah! I found them!"
(Magnus turns the corner and sees the group)

Magnus: "Thank goodness- Wait. Who are those other two?"
(Cahira points at Ben and then Xaviero)

Cahira: "Oh! This is Ben. We go way back, when I was still at the Raging Bulls in New York, and this is his brother Xaviero, who is still the same as he was when I met him."
(Magnus's eyes narrow at Benjamin as Ben waves to Magnus)

Magnus: (murmurs) "You go way back, huh?"
Cahira: "We were on our way to the cafeteria to tell everyone about the news. Lets go, before everyone goes searching again."
(A couple of hours after Dinner, both of the brothers go into their temporarily assigned rooms)

(Xaviero hops onto his bed)
Xaviero: "Man! I can't wait to sleep on an actual bed at BC Sol. All we had yesterday were two uncomfortable chairs."

Ben: "Mhm, sleep well. Not like we still need to put away the clothes in our luggage away."

Xaviero: "Oh! Thats right..."
(Xaviero gets up quickly and assists Ben, before they both go to bed. The next day, they head to the cafeteria for breakfast)

Alek: "Hey guys! Come and sit over here, when you both have your food!"

Xaviero: "Okay!"
(Ben and Xaviero order their food from Ange, who greets them warmly)

Ange: "Hello you two! I hope you are both enjoying the stay!"

Xaviero: "We sure are!" (smiles)

Ben: "May we have that tasty-looking food Alek is having?"

Ange: "Of course!"
(Ange serves the brothers their food, and they go to sit at the table with Alek, Nigel, Cahira, and Magnus)
Cahira: "So, before our battle, I wanted to introduce you guys to Free and Valt."

(Xaviero looks around the cafeteria)
Xaviero: "But where are they? Speaking of which, I didn't see them anywhere yesterday at dinner."

Cahira: "Yeah, they take off to training early in the mornings, and only come back for training all of us, but I know exacly where they train. That's why I'm going to intoduce you
two to them at that time."
(Ben and Xaviero make huge smiles, and their eyes sparkle with excitement)

Xaviero: "Oh, yeah! I've always wanted to meet Valt and Free!"
Ben: "Me too!
(Ben and Xaviero begin to eat rapidly, and Ange sees this)

Ange: "Boys, chew your food!"
(Ben and Xaviero choke on their food and are given water to down the food)
Ben/Xaviero: "Sorry, Ange!"
All: (Laughs)

Location: Legendary Training Area at BC Sol

Alek: "Here we are, again!"
(Two figures are seen battling fiercely at the stadium where Alek and Nigel were seen by the brothers training)

Valt Aoi: "Keep up the hits, Valkyrie!"
Free de la Hoya: "Fafnir!"
(Fafnir and Valkyrie burst simultaniusly)

Free: "Another tie."

Valt: "Man, I really wanted to win that time. We keep doing so many ties."

Free: "Mhm."

Alek/Cahira: "Valt! Free!"
(Both Legends turn to face them)

Valt: "Oh hey Cahira! You too, Alek! Wait... don't tell me we missed training again?

Free: "No, the sun's not at the correct position for it to be that time yet."

Alek: "Yeah, Free's right. We came to introduce you both to two Raging Bulls trainees. They were personally sent by Shu Kurenai, to get their beyblades evolved by me."

Valt: "Shu, eh? Thats cool!"
(Ben and Xaviero introduce themselves)

Ben: "My name's Benjamin Gaunt."

Xaviero: "My name is Xaviero Gaunt! I've always wanted to meet you two! May I have an autograp-"
(Xaviero is stopped abruptly with a smack on the head from Cahira)

Cahira: "Not right now, Xaviero!"

Valt: "Can we have a battle? I really want to see the potencial that you guys have!"

Cahira: "But I was going to have a battle first..."
(Free pats her shoulder)

Free: "There's always later, Cahira. Valt's been wanting a new opponent for a little while anyways, and you will be able to see the brothers strategy."

Cahira: "True. Well then, Ill just observe."
(The battle commences. Xaviero, Benjamin, and Valt make their way to the stadium)

Xaviero: "I wonder who should go first...?"
Valt: "Ill take you both on! Heroic Valkyrie and I will beat both of you!"
(Heroic Valkyrie glints in the light as Valt holds it out)

Xaviero: "Thats not going to happen with Xanthus and I! With team work, we can never go wrong, right Ben?"

Benjamin: "I guess...?"
(Xaviero pats Benjamin's back)

Xaviero: "Come on! There's nothing we can't win against if we work together, remember?"
(Benjamin smiles a bit, nodding)

Xaviero: "Then let's beat Valkyrie!"

Valt: "I like your spirit, Xaviero! Now I want to battle you two even more!"

Free: "Well then. Ill be the referee."

Free: "The First Round between Benjamin and Xaviero Gaunt, and Valt Aoi will now begin. The battle stops when one team wins 3 points. With the modes on Metal Mode, Ready, set!"

Valt/Benjamin/Xaviero: "3, 2, 1, Go, SHOOT!"

(Valt does a powerful Ultrametal Launch, and the brother's do semi-powerful Ultrametal Launches. Heroic Valkyrie speeds intensely around the stadium, rapidly catching up to Superior Xanthus, while Nova Bellerus holds the center)

Xaviero: "Whoa! Look at that speed!"
Benjamin: "Watch out!"
(Valkyrie smashes into Xanthus, uppering it into the stadium wall)

Xaviero: "So much power! Hang on, Xanthus!"
(Xanthus's aura is released from the beyblade and same as its avatar, and it begins to glow Green)

Valt/Free: (Thoughts) "A Flare?!"

Xaviero: "Superior Scimtar!"

Valt: "Im afraid I can't let you do that! Rush Shoot!"
(Valkyrie makes a swift flower pattern, violently uppercutting Bellerus and Xanthus high into the air)

Benjamin: "What?! I didn't even have a chance to do anything-"

Xaviero: *Gasps* "My attack was countered!
(Bellerus and Xanthus come hurtling down)

Xaviero: "We've got one more chance to get him!"

Benjamin: "Right!"

Benjamin/Xaviero: "Nova Crash!"/"Superior Smash!"
(Bellerus connects with the stadium slope, driving towards Valkyrie with intense speed. Xanthus's blades glow green, and hits the top of Valkyrie, when Bellerus reached it)

Valt: "Impressive strategy, but now its time for me to end this! Heroic Sword!"
(Heroic Valkyrie's three rubber blades glow an intense Golden Red, and powerfully slashes at the brother's beyblades, knocking them both out immediately)

Benjamin/Xaviero: *Gasps*

Free: "Not too surprising. Valt Aoi wins the First Round with a Knockout, earning himself two points. Point standings are 2 - 0."

Valt: "Yes!"
(Benjamin and Xaviero pick up their beys, and they begin the Second Round)

Benjamin: "Valt's really powerful with his MB Valkyrie Evolution. We need to make a better strategy than last time."

Xaviero: "Okay. Lets try to attack together like last time, but more organized!"

Free: "Second Round will be with the modes on Burst Mode. Ready, set!"
Valt/Benjamin/Xaviero: "3, 2, 1, Go, SHOOT!"

(Valt does a powerful Ultrametal Launch, and the brother's do semi-powerful Ultrametal Launches. Heroic Valkyrie speeds intensely around the stadium near the middle, Superior Xanthus swiftly circles closer to the stadium walls, while Nova Bellerus holds the center again)
Valt: "Trying out a new strategy? Let's see how it does!"

Xaviero: "We're going to win this time! Superior Scimtar, repeatedly!"
(Xanthus barrages Valkyrie, chipping at its stamina bye making a small flower pattern while following Valkyrie around the stadium)

Valt: "Keep spinning, Valkyrie!"
(Valkyrie starts to speed up;  which results in some of Xanthus's attacks are missing)

Benjamin: "Oh no you don't. Nova Drift!"
(Bellerus barrages ahead of Valkyrie, in the opposite direction of Xanthus, pushing Valkyrie backwards, which causes Xanthus's hits to be more accurate)

Valt: "Wow! I have to say, you two are better than I expected! Then again, you both are Shu's apprentices. Ill have to give it my all now!"

Xaviero: "Wait, that wasn't your full power?!"

Benjamin: "Xaviero, concentrate on the battle-"

Valt: *Roars* "Valkyrie!"
(Valkyrie's aura is released from the beyblade and same as its avatar, and it glows an extremely vibrant Blue, deflecting the brother's attacks and speeding away from them)

Benjamin/Xaviero: "What?!"

Valt: "This will finish it! Heroic Saber!"
(The three blades on the Layer glow a vibrant golden-red, and Valkyrie accelerates back towards the brothers)

Benjamin: (Thoughts) 'What do I do?!'

Bellerus: 'You know what to do.'

Benjamin: "Give it your all, Bellerus!"
(Bellerus's aura is released from the beyblade and same as its avatar, and it glows Golden like the last battle)

Benjamin: "Collide with all you've got, Xaviero!"

Xaviero: "You got it!" *Roars* "Xanthus!"
(Xanthus's aura is released from the beyblade and same as its avatar, and it glows green like the last battle)

(Xanthus and Bellerus meet together, and sparks fly inbetween them while they circle around each other. Before Valkyrie hits them, they fire apart, hitting the opposite stadium walls, and into the air)
Valt: "What?!" (Thoughts) "They hit each other to do a different move?!"

Benjamin/Xaviero: "Dual... Clockwise... Strike!"
(The two beyblades meet in midair, and fall, spinning like a saw-blade at Heroic Valkyire)

Benjamin/Xaviero: "GOOO!"
(Nova Bellerus and Superior Xanthus hit Valkyrie strongly, and the entire stadium erupts in a blinding light. When the dust clears, Bellerus and Xanthus are bursted, with Heroic Valkyrie slowly spinning, then bursts abruptly)

Xaviero: *panting* "Did- did we win?"

Free: "Interesting... but Valt won. With a score of 4 - 0, Valt Aoi is the winner."

Xaviero: "Aw man-"
(Benjamin pats Xaviero's back with a grin)

Benjamin: "Its okay! We tried our best, and completed a combo move!"

Xaviero: "Yep, we sure did!"
(Valt comes over to the brothers)

Valt: "I'm glad to see such a bond between brothers. You both have amazing potential to become amazing bladers, maybe even make it to the Legend status."

Xaviero: "Really?! Awesome..."

Valt: "Mhm! But before that, you need some training. So I wanted to ask you both, if you would like to temporally train here with the rest of BC Sol. Maybe you all could learn a few things here!"

Benjamin: "Train at BC Sol?! That sounds amazing!"

Valt: "Ill tell Shu that you all will be staying a while longer, while you make yourselves at home."
(Benjamin and Xaviero jump up in excitement)

Benjamin/Xaviero: "Yes!"

End of Episode 6

I'm really interested in this, when are you releasing more of Beyblade: Metal Burst?

(Aug. 12, 2022  6:39 PM)WizardBlader Wrote:

(Aug. 12, 2022  1:48 PM)Dragon Blader Z Wrote: I'm really interested in this, when are you releasing more of Beyblade: Metal Burst?

I'm glad you're interested in this series! ^^

I try my best to release episodes once a week, on either a Thursday, or a Friday. Fridays are only when I haven't worked on the chapter how I wanted it to go, and I had to work extra.

(Aug. 14, 2022  4:47 PM)Dragon Blader Z Wrote: when are you releasing next episode, most likely Thursday and Friday

(Aug. 14, 2022  11:50 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote:

(Aug. 12, 2022  6:39 PM)WizardBlader Wrote: I'm glad you're interested in this series! ^^

I try my best to release episodes once a week, on either a Thursday, or a Friday. Fridays are only when I haven't worked on the chapter how I wanted it to go, and I had to work extra.

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Just don't sacrifice quality over it, that's a common mistake. Take your time when you need to and don't fear being late with chapters that much.

(Aug. 16, 2022  6:05 PM)WizardBlader Wrote: FYI, this episode will be very late, as I've been trying to concentrate on school the entire week (As my mother wished me to do so), instead of working of the 7th Episode.
Ill try to begin work on it when I'm able to, bit by bit.

Apologies,
-WizardBlader

(Aug. 16, 2022  10:22 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote:

(Aug. 16, 2022  6:05 PM)WizardBlader Wrote: FYI, this episode will be very late, as I've been trying to concentrate on school the entire week (As my mother wished me to do so), instead of working of the 7th Episode.
Ill try to begin work on it when I'm able to, bit by bit.

Apologies,
-WizardBlader

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School is more important, so no apologies needed. Take care of your life before everything else, else you won't be able to do the "everything else" good (if at all)