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WARNING: There will be nothing explicit or too shocking in the story. I only recommend to not read if you are feeling really upset, Im not too sure

Yes. I am back to writing. 

This is just a collection of Beyblade Burst Sad/Angst Stories (mostly shorts and drabbles), somewhat of a spinoff to my horror stories collection. Each one features a different character.

(Excuse me for the wonky text. I originally intended to keep it the same font/size as my Horror Stories one, but was forced to change my method of transferring the text and thus the result is... odd. Haha /lh)


Chapter 0 

YOO THE QUEEN IS BACK


nice to see you writing again sab. I rly miss reading your stories ^w^)/
Welcome back Sands!
This looks pretty interesting, the prologue already has me hooked to read the whole thing. I wonder what these stories will contain..?
Getting Infinity Train vibes from this, all stories give off lore and all are a part of the same universe, yet all can stand by themselves. Very interesting, will be following this one
I've seen many people praising your previous works, and while I've not read a lot of them, I recently read the Horror Burst fics and LOVED them. This one is very interesting as well. Very excited for this series.
Well, the Queen of WBO Fan Fics is back I guess? The prolouge was already attracting to me enough, wondering how this short stories will carry on.
Chapter 1: Shu Kurenai

(May. 10, 2021  6:42 PM)XSabxManiacX Wrote: [ -> ]Chapter 1: Shu Kurenai

Me: *sees Shu Kurenai on the title*
Also me: I know where this is going...
Me as well, after finishing the chapter: HA! I KNEW IT!
Srsly though, this is even sadder than I thought it would be....and a bit relatable too.
Someone give this kid a hug please.
(May. 10, 2021  6:42 PM)XSabxManiacX Wrote: [ -> ]Chapter 1: Shu Kurenai


That was depressing and yet a very good insight into his mind. I just feel even more sorry for the poor guy now.
(May. 10, 2021  6:42 PM)XSabxManiacX Wrote: [ -> ]Chapter 1: Shu Kurenai


That makes me die on the inside. Feelings are potrayed very well.
ah yes, time to sob my eyes out once again and get my whole perspective on each character changed v.v)
Chapter 2: Rantaro Kiyama

(May. 11, 2021  6:05 AM)XSabxManiacX Wrote: [ -> ]Chapter 2: Rantaro Kiyama


Well, Rantaro has hidden depths it seems. That part about him hating the school and classrooms got me though. I was practically an outcast around 6 years back too, though it got better and now I miss school and classrooms so much as I've not been to school for over a year due to the pandemic (and it's my last year at school ;_; ). Also, this is probably stupid and obvious but are these chapters the pages pinned on the park board?
(May. 11, 2021  7:42 AM)i\m batman Wrote: [ -> ]
(May. 11, 2021  6:05 AM)XSabxManiacX Wrote: [ -> ]Chapter 2: Rantaro Kiyama


Well, Rantaro has hidden depths it seems. That part about him hating the school and classrooms got me though. I was practically an outcast around 6 years back too, though it got better and now I miss school and classrooms so much as I've not been to school for over a year due to the pandemic (and it's my last year at school ;_; ). Also, this is probably stupid and obvious but are these chapters the pages pinned on the park board?

Yes, theyre all pinned there!

It sounds like a pretty cheap excuse plot for the Bladers to do that around the same time but :”) I suppose thats up to your own interpretation of why theyre doing that (a friend group thing? a Blader challenge? inspired by one person to another? Perhaps Ill place hints why its happening in the first place but thats more fun being interpreted on its own /lh)
Rantaro Kiyama, never imagined this would happen for him.
Rantaro deserves more respect
(May. 11, 2021  6:05 AM)XSabxManiacX Wrote: [ -> ]Chapter 2: Rantaro Kiyama


Ow, that part about classrooms being a bad environment hit home harder than it should. You really are doing a great job at making this as sad as humanly possible (and maybe even more).
*starts questioning if it was a good idea to get hooked to the story*
Man, I hope youre not hooked xd /hj /lh Otherwise, I would have a tough act to follow! Joking aside, glad you like this so far. Im still trying to figure out how the rest of the chapters will go. Ill see if I can get creative as to keep each one original and to reflect the characters — a small note, this means that I wont be making the entire collection first person. I find it a little repetitive myself and hopefully it makes things creative here and there
(May. 11, 2021  6:22 PM)XSabxManiacX Wrote: [ -> ]Man, I hope youre not hooked xd /hj /lh Otherwise, I would have a tough act to follow! Joking aside, glad you like this so far. Im still trying to figure out how the rest of the chapters will go. Ill see if I can get creative as to keep each one original and to reflect the characters — a small note, this means that I wont be making the entire collection first person. I find it a little repetitive myself and hopefully it makes things creative here and there
Maybe you could do Ken next or Daigo just a suggestion
(May. 11, 2021  6:22 PM)XSabxManiacX Wrote: [ -> ]Man, I hope youre not hooked xd /hj /lh Otherwise, I would have a tough act to follow! Joking aside, glad you like this so far. Im still trying to figure out how the rest of the chapters will go. Ill see if I can get creative as to keep each one original and to reflect the characters — a small note, this means that I wont be making the entire collection first person. I find it a little repetitive myself and hopefully it makes things creative here and there

I have a question. Do you like to write/read Epic Fantasy novels/books?
(May. 12, 2021  7:00 PM)Ryuga\s Son Wrote: [ -> ]
(May. 11, 2021  6:22 PM)XSabxManiacX Wrote: [ -> ]Man, I hope youre not hooked xd /hj /lh Otherwise, I would have a tough act to follow! Joking aside, glad you like this so far. Im still trying to figure out how the rest of the chapters will go. Ill see if I can get creative as to keep each one original and to reflect the characters — a small note, this means that I wont be making the entire collection first person. I find it a little repetitive myself and hopefully it makes things creative here and there

I have a question. Do you like to write/read Epic Fantasy novels/books?

I do! Though, personally, I find it quite hard to do some impressive worldbuilding and creating lore for epic fantasy content
(May. 12, 2021  7:04 PM)XSabxManiacX Wrote: [ -> ]
(May. 12, 2021  7:00 PM)Ryuga\s Son Wrote: [ -> ]I have a question. Do you like to write/read Epic Fantasy novels/books?

I do! Though, personally, I find it quite hard to do some impressive worldbuilding and creating lore for epic fantasy content

Well Yeah, it is quite hard. I'm trying it right now, but it indeed is very difficult. I got inspired by many Epic Fantasy Novels, so I made one myself. It takes a long time, (long time I mean years) but it's possible. Creating Magic Systems and World Building is the first steps to creating a Epic Fantasy Series. Some novels also have other power systems which are not magic. Do you know what is a soft magic system and a hard magic system?
(May. 12, 2021  7:07 PM)Ryuga\s Son Wrote: [ -> ]
(May. 12, 2021  7:04 PM)XSabxManiacX Wrote: [ -> ]I do! Though, personally, I find it quite hard to do some impressive worldbuilding and creating lore for epic fantasy content

Well Yeah, it is quite hard. I'm trying it right now, but it indeed is very difficult. I got inspired by many Epic Fantasy Novels, so I made one myself. It takes a long time, (long time I mean years) but it's possible. Creating Magic Systems and World Building is the first steps to creating a Epic Fantasy Series. Some novels also have other power systems which are not magic. Do you know what is a soft magic system and a hard magic system?

Yes I am familiar with the magic system stuff! Im a lot more used to soft magic since a lot of stuff Im familiar with were quite broken and loose (oh no! /lh). Feel free to PM me since Im not sure this conversation would fit my story thread
I can't wait for the next chapter
Chapter 3: Daigo Kurogami

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