Hello lads, this is Longinox here. Since the School arc is approaching for the 1st season of my Beyblade Burst: Stardust fanfic I've decided to make a character contest. I will pick the best OCs (minimum of 6, since of course it's a high school and there's bound to be other schools aside from what the main characters are in) and the reason it's on a separate page is to reduce the clutter on my fanfic thread. The format is as follows:
Name (of OC):
Gender:
Age:
Height:
Hair Color:
Eye Color:
Beyblades:
Appearance:
Personality:
Special Moves:
should i post it here or PM you?
(Feb. 01, 2021 5:07 AM)tenma Wrote: [ -> ]should i post it here or PM you?
The drawing or your OC for this? If it's for the OC then you could go post it here.
(Feb. 01, 2021 5:09 AM)Longinox Wrote: [ -> ] (Feb. 01, 2021 5:07 AM)tenma Wrote: [ -> ]should i post it here or PM you?
The drawing or your OC for this? If it's for the OC then you could go post it here.
ooh alright
Chazz Thunder
Male
13
6 foot perfect
Black hair
Red eyes
Bey:
Element Osiris 3A Mobius:
Element: Element has a click based ability. On it’s first click it will be shaped like rage, on the second click it reveals 4 rubber dragon claws on all sides of the beyblade, on the 3rd click it will show 4 dragon heads and create a full circle, on the 4th click it will burst
Osiris: features a red dragon
Appearance:
Chazz has a red jacket with a white shirt inside topped with black jeans and formal shoes.
Personality:
Chazz is introverted and quiet. He can also tell the future using tarot cards
Special moves:
1st dread: first click
2nd misery: second click
Final flight: 3rd click
Future dimension: The rubber dragon heads rapidly hit the opposing bey
Wrath of god: The last resort, Osiris uses everything it has to burst the opponent, but it’s at the cost of Osiris (it breaks the driver a little bit)
Name: Nira Yamazaki
Gender: Female
Age: 16
Height: 168,3 cm
Hair Color: Jet Black, short (with neon green and purple streaks at the back)
Eye Color: Pitch Black
Beyblades: Break Cassiopeia Hard Drift 9S
Appearance:
Nira has a shoulder-length jet black bangs, with neon green/purple streaks on the back part of her hair. She wears an oversized, short-sleeved pattern-less shirt. She wears knee-high shorts and a pair of sneakers with the same tones as her hair.
Personality:
Nira is mostly quiet and introverted. She is fond of J-Pop music and seafood. Nira can be hot-blooded at times, especially when trying to win a battle or buying a limited-edition snack.
Special Moves: Heavenly Shooting Star, Angelic Spectrum, Hard Destroy.
P.S: I never read stardust before so I don't really know what to make here. I just wanted to try attending a character contest
(Feb. 01, 2021 5:30 AM)tenma Wrote: [ -> ]Name: Nira Yamazaki
Gender: Female
Age: 16
Height: 168,3 cm
Hair Color: Jet Black, short (with neon green and purple streaks at the back)
Eye Color: Pitch Black
Beyblades: Break Cassiopeia Hard Drift 9S
Appearance:
Nira has a shoulder-length jet black bangs, with neon green/purple streaks on the back part of her hair. She wears an oversized, short-sleeved pattern-less shirt. She wears knee-high shorts and a pair of sneakers with the same tones as her hair.
Personality:
Nira is mostly quiet and introverted. She is fond of J-Pop music and seafood. Nira can be hot-blooded at times, especially when trying to win a battle or buying a limited-edition snack.
Special Moves: Heavenly Shooting Star, Angelic Spectrum, Hard Destroy.
P.S: I never read stardust before so I don't really know what to make here. I just wanted to try attending a character contest
Nice OC but how does Break Cassiopeia work and look like?
Like describe it in words or something I guess.
(Feb. 01, 2021 6:10 AM)Longinox Wrote: [ -> ] (Feb. 01, 2021 5:30 AM)tenma Wrote: [ -> ]Name: Nira Yamazaki
Gender: Female
Age: 16
Height: 168,3 cm
Hair Color: Jet Black, short (with neon green and purple streaks at the back)
Eye Color: Pitch Black
Beyblades: Break Cassiopeia Hard Drift 9S
Appearance:
Nira has a shoulder-length jet black bangs, with neon green/purple streaks on the back part of her hair. She wears an oversized, short-sleeved pattern-less shirt. She wears knee-high shorts and a pair of sneakers with the same tones as her hair.
Personality:
Nira is mostly quiet and introverted. She is fond of J-Pop music and seafood. Nira can be hot-blooded at times, especially when trying to win a battle or buying a limited-edition snack.
Special Moves: Heavenly Shooting Star, Angelic Spectrum, Hard Destroy.
P.S: I never read stardust before so I don't really know what to make here. I just wanted to try attending a character contest
Nice OC but how does Break Cassiopeia work and look like?
Like describe it in words or something I guess.
that's the problem. I don't really know how would it work/look like. I'm bad at designing beys and the like.
Any help?
(Feb. 01, 2021 6:15 AM)tenma Wrote: [ -> ] (Feb. 01, 2021 6:10 AM)Longinox Wrote: [ -> ]Nice OC but how does Break Cassiopeia work and look like?
Like describe it in words or something I guess.
that's the problem. I don't really know how would it work/look like. I'm bad at designing beys and the like.
Any help?
Bugger, spent all the ideas onto the other Beys for Season 3. Alright, here's how it may work I guess.
Break Cassiopeia is a dual-spinning Bey that could change spin direction when you flip its ring upside down, it features rubber and also the Ring is shaped similar to the Fang Fusion Wheel. So the right-spinning mode has the rubber covered in plastic, creating a Bound-Counter Mode where it can dish out damage while taking less, it also has a lower center of gravity as well since the plastic is lowered causing it to be stable. And in the left spin mode all the rubber is revealed, creating a Absorb Mode to reduce damage or nullify damage dealt to Cassiopeia or heck, even spin-steal (though that wouldn't be as strong as the best spin-stealers/zombie Beys since it's shaped somewhat circular.) at the cost of being less stable since the center of gravity is raised a little.
Basically it's Fusion Hades, I guess...? And note, it looks like a two three-puck clutch discs stacked on top of one another forming a six-pointed star and the ends are flat as well to reduce recoil.
(Feb. 01, 2021 6:26 AM)Longinox Wrote: [ -> ] (Feb. 01, 2021 6:15 AM)tenma Wrote: [ -> ]that's the problem. I don't really know how would it work/look like. I'm bad at designing beys and the like.
Any help?
Bugger, spent all the ideas onto the other Beys for Season 3. Alright, here's how it may work I guess.
Break Cassiopeia is a dual-spinning Bey that could change spin direction when you flip its ring upside down, it features rubber and also the Ring is shaped similar to the Fang Fusion Wheel. So the right-spinning mode has the rubber covered in plastic, creating a Bound-Counter Mode where it can dish out damage while taking less, it also has a lower center of gravity as well since the plastic is lowered causing it to be stable. And in the left spin mode all the rubber is revealed, creating a Absorb Mode to reduce damage or nullify damage dealt to Cassiopeia or heck, even spin-steal (though that wouldn't be as strong as the best spin-stealers/zombie Beys since it's shaped somewhat circular.) at the cost of being less stable since the center of gravity is raised a little.
Basically it's Fusion Hades, I guess...?
That's quite nice, even though I don't really understand some stuff! Thanks for the help!
(tbh i watched beyblade for the story and character developments, so I don't pay attention much to the beys, plus, I don't play beyblade a lot. Again, thanks
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(Feb. 01, 2021 6:31 AM)tenma Wrote: [ -> ] (Feb. 01, 2021 6:26 AM)Longinox Wrote: [ -> ]Bugger, spent all the ideas onto the other Beys for Season 3. Alright, here's how it may work I guess.
Break Cassiopeia is a dual-spinning Bey that could change spin direction when you flip its ring upside down, it features rubber and also the Ring is shaped similar to the Fang Fusion Wheel. So the right-spinning mode has the rubber covered in plastic, creating a Bound-Counter Mode where it can dish out damage while taking less, it also has a lower center of gravity as well since the plastic is lowered causing it to be stable. And in the left spin mode all the rubber is revealed, creating a Absorb Mode to reduce damage or nullify damage dealt to Cassiopeia or heck, even spin-steal (though that wouldn't be as strong as the best spin-stealers/zombie Beys since it's shaped somewhat circular.) at the cost of being less stable since the center of gravity is raised a little.
Basically it's Fusion Hades, I guess...?
That's quite nice, even though I don't really understand some stuff! Thanks for the help!
(tbh i watched beyblade for the story and character developments, so I don't pay attention much to the beys, plus, I don't play beyblade a lot. Again, thanks )
Oh nvm screw the fact that the center of gravity is lower on the Counter Mode, the Absorb Mode will have a lower one but it may scrape a little kind of like Turn or Paradox though that is unlikely since Drift lets your Bey sit high up without having to be destabilized that much. And 9S has stamina wings (I'll be just renaming it to 5S since I'm still at 4S here in my fanfic) that gets pushed inside in high spin speeds to increase CWD/IWD.
Oooh, character contest. I'm in!
Name: Pink Azalea
Age: 14
Gender: Female
Height: 5'2 ft.
Hair color: Dark Pink
Eye color: Ice Blue
Beyblade: Tune Diva Score' 2B
Appearance: Pink has a pale complexion, shoulder-length dark pink hair that is slightly wavy and lighter in color at the ends (which she ties in a loose braid when practicing), and ice blue eyes. She wears a buttoned up off-white dress shirt under a short black jacket with golden trimmings, dark blue jeans, black boots, and a glossy, pink, fingerless glove on her left hand.
Personality Traits: Pink is pretty distant, calm and quiet around most people, never takes the initiative to get to know someone, and does not trust others easily, but is also polite to most people, and much friendlier and bubblier around her small circle of friends. She thinks of all situations as a problem that can be solved by three steps: Identification, organization, and action. She is also somewhat judgemental, self-righteous, single-minded and stubborn at times, and is typically annoyed when someone interferes with her work or tries to pry into her personal information without permission.
Backstory Bit (Optional): She has a 12-year-old brother named Rhodo who introduced her to Beyblade. The glove she wears now was a parting gift from him when she left town for middle school.
Special quirks (Also optional): Pink is ambidexter, yet she usually launches with her left hand. She also tends to twirl locks of her hairs around her fingers when deep in thought, and likes to make a list out of everything. She also has a special love for chibi art and any food/drink with chocolate in it, but would never admit that out loud.
Bey Details: Tune Diva Score' 2B: Left-Spin Balance-Type that consists of the following:
Sparking Chip - Diva: Diva is a Left-Spinning Sparking chip that looks like two intersecting musical notes with a fairy motif, with the metallic Chip Core being the point of intersection. The musical notes are a glittery teal color, with the core being a light golden shade.
Ring - Tune: Tune is a Left-Spinning Ring that is circular in shape, with four 'petals' attached to its bottom. They are usually bent upwards and secured by the chip, which helps in locking the Driver in place better, reserving Stamina due to CWD, while providing a competent defense by completely surrounding the entire layer. The ring's gimmick is that the petals are made of hard rubber with blade-like metallic edges. The ring itself is a light rose color with royal blue lines, while the petals are a glossy, darker pink, with the metal being the same golden color as the Chip Core.
Chassis - 2B: 2B or 2-Balance, is a double Chassis with two modes: A Defense Mode where the outer part is free-spinning to deflect attacks, and an Attack Mode where the outer part is locked to increase recoil. The chassis is a light teal color on the outside, and silver on the inside.
Driver - Score': Being a Dash Driver, Score' features a tighter spring lock and a red spring pad. It can switch between Attack and Defense setting (Attack is higher with a sharp plastic tip, while Defense is slightly lower with a POM ball tip) by twisting the tip (similar to Xtend and Dimension). When in Attack Mode, the Score' combination tends to move in a flower pattern, but can't hold it for too long and will instead move in a circular pattern upon contact with a wall. In Defense Mode, it moves towards the center and starts conserving stamina for counterattacks. The Driver is a royal blue color, and the tip is golden.
Special moves:
Tune Spin (Defense Mode): Using the rubber of the petals attached to the ring, Tune Diva can steal spin from a Right-Spinning Bey upon Layer-to-Layer contact. However, the speed boost is very minimal and only lasts for a few seconds, given that the rubber is not on the Ring itself.
Tune Vertical: When knocked into the air, Tune Diva rights itself and drops down, using the petals (whether closed or open) to spin vertically at a higher speed for a powerful one-hit pseudo-Slash attack, but at the risk of being knocked out if the attack fails.
Reflect Counter: When the layer is hit with enough force after the second click, the petals spring downwards for a Z Buster-like attack, after which the Driver grinds against the stadium and changes its trajectory, then goes for a fast four-hit attack with the metal of the now-spread petals.
Score Speeder (Attack Mode): Tune Diva grinds the Score' Driver against the stadium floor, before moving in a small circle to gain speed and charge with the metal edges of the ring's petals (that are already outstretched after using Reflect Counter).
(Feb. 01, 2021 7:59 AM)PinkRose Wrote: [ -> ]Oooh, character contest. I'm in!
Name: Pink Azalea
Age: 14
Gender: Female
Height: 5'2 ft.
Hair color: Dark Pink
Eye color: Ice Blue
Beyblade: Tune Diva Score' 2B
Appearance: Pink has a pale complexion, shoulder-length dark pink hair that is slightly wavy and lighter in color at the ends (which she ties in a loose braid when practicing), and ice blue eyes. She wears a buttoned up off-white dress shirt under a short black jacket with golden trimmings, dark blue jeans, black boots, and a glossy, pink, fingerless glove on her left hand.
Personality Traits: Pink is pretty distant, calm and quiet around most people, never takes the initiative to get to know someone, and does not trust others easily, but is also polite to most people, and much friendlier and bubblier around her small circle of friends. She thinks of all situations as a problem that can be solved by three steps: Identification, organization, and action. She is also somewhat judgemental, self-righteous, single-minded and stubborn at times, and is typically annoyed when someone interferes with her work or tries to pry into her personal information without permission.
Backstory Bit (Optional): She has a 12-year-old brother named Rhodo who introduced her to Beyblade. The glove she wears now was a parting gift from him when she left town for middle school.
Special quirks (Also optional): Pink is ambidexter, yet she usually launches with her left hand. She also tends to twirl locks of her hairs around her fingers when deep in thought, and likes to make a list out of everything. She also has a special love for chibi art and any food/drink with chocolate in it, but would never admit that out loud.
Bey Details: Tune Diva Score' 2B: Left-Spin Balance-Type that consists of the following:
Sparking Chip - Diva: Diva is a Left-Spinning Sparking chip that looks like two intersecting musical notes with a fairy motif, with the metallic Chip Core being the point of intersection. The musical notes are a glittery teal color, with the core being a light golden shade.
Ring - Tune: Tune is a Left-Spinning Ring that is circular in shape, with four 'petals' attached to its bottom. They are usually bent upwards and secured by the chip, which helps in locking the Driver in place better, reserving Stamina due to CWD, while providing a competent defense by completely surrounding the entire layer. The ring's gimmick is that the petals are made of hard rubber with blade-like metallic edges. The ring itself is a light rose color with royal blue lines, while the petals are a glossy, darker pink, with the metal being the same golden color as the Chip Core.
Chassis - 2B: 2B or 2-Balance, is a double Chassis with two modes: A Defense Mode where the outer part is free-spinning to deflect attacks, and an Attack Mode where the outer part is locked to increase recoil. The chassis is a light teal color on the outside, and silver on the inside.
Driver - Score': Being a Dash Driver, Score' features a tighter spring lock and a red spring pad. It can switch between Attack and Defense setting (Attack is higher with a sharp plastic tip, while Defense is slightly lower with a POM ball tip) by twisting the tip (similar to Xtend and Dimension). When in Attack Mode, the Score' combination tends to move in a flower pattern, but can't hold it for too long and will instead move in a circular pattern upon contact with a wall. In Defense Mode, it moves towards the center and starts conserving stamina for counterattacks. The Driver is a royal blue color, and the tip is golden.
Special moves:
Tune Spin (Defense Mode): Using the rubber of the petals attached to the ring, Tune Diva can steal spin from a Right-Spinning Bey upon Layer-to-Layer contact. However, the speed boost is very minimal and only lasts for a few seconds, given that the rubber is not on the Ring itself.
Tune Vertical: When knocked into the air, Tune Diva rights itself and drops down, using the petals (whether closed or open) to spin vertically at a higher speed for a powerful one-hit pseudo-Slash attack, but at the risk of being knocked out if the attack fails.
Reflect Counter: When the layer is hit with enough force after the second click, the petals spring downwards for a Z Buster-like attack, after which the Driver grinds against the stadium and changes its trajectory, then goes for a fast four-hit attack with the metal of the now-spread petals.
Score Speeder (Attack Mode): Tune Diva grinds the Score' Driver against the stadium floor, before moving in a small circle to gain speed and charge with the metal edges of the ring's petals (that are already outstretched after using Reflect Counter).
So basically the Tune Ring is the 2D Chassis if it could be activated via clicks.
(Feb. 01, 2021 4:28 AM)Longinox Wrote: [ -> ]Hello lads, this is Longinox here. Since the School arc is approaching for the 1st season of my Beyblade Burst: Stardust fanfic I've decided to make a character contest. I will pick the best OCs (minimum of 6, since of course it's a high school and there's bound to be other schools aside from what the main characters are in) and the reason it's on a separate page is to reduce the clutter on my fanfic thread. The format is as follows:
Name (of OC):
Gender:
Age:
Height:
Hair Color:
Eye Color:
Beyblades:
Appearance:
Personality:
Special Moves:
Note: The contest lasts until Friday or so, and I'll reduce the number of winners to 5 since I'd probably think of them as rivals/allies for the 5 main characters. And also note I might change how your OC's Bey works and it's parts in the WN's canon.
(Feb. 01, 2021 1:25 PM)Longinox Wrote: [ -> ]So basically the Tune Ring is the 2D Chassis if it could be activated via clicks.
Pretty much, yeah, but it covers the entire Ring/Chip.
Note, if you can try to explain how your OC's Bey works please do.
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Name: Ryujiki
Gender: Male (descended from Dragon Blood. Has Dragon Blood in him)
Age: 14
Height: 6'3'
Hair Color: Trimmed with Green, but Red in middle
Eye Color: Greenish Black
Beyblade: Aether Draconic Wizard
Appearance: White ragged cloak, with Dragon wizard signa in the middle. Green Trousers.
Personality: Determined, Rude, and Cocky
Special Move: Aether Destruction Claw, Dragon Flight Storm, Aether Dissolution, and Flaming Dragon Wizardry
(Feb. 01, 2021 7:59 PM)Ryuga\s Son Wrote: [ -> ],
Name: Ryujiki
Gender: Male (descended from Dragon Blood. Has Dragon Blood in him)
Age: 14
Height: 6'3'
Hair Color: Trimmed with Green, but Red in middle
Eye Color: Greenish Black
Beyblade: Aether Draconic Wizard
Appearance: White ragged cloak, with Dragon wizard signa in the middle. Green Trousers.
Personality: Determined, Rude, and Cocky
Special Move: Aether Destruction Claw, Dragon Flight Storm, Aether Dissolution, and Flaming Dragon Wizardry
Interesting character, mind if I rename the Bey to Aether Reginn tho and make its own parts?
(Feb. 02, 2021 1:12 AM)Longinox Wrote: [ -> ] (Feb. 01, 2021 7:59 PM)Ryuga\s Son Wrote: [ -> ],
Name: Ryujiki
Gender: Male (descended from Dragon Blood. Has Dragon Blood in him)
Age: 14
Height: 6'3'
Hair Color: Trimmed with Green, but Red in middle
Eye Color: Greenish Black
Beyblade: Aether Draconic Wizard
Appearance: White ragged cloak, with Dragon wizard signa in the middle. Green Trousers.
Personality: Determined, Rude, and Cocky
Special Move: Aether Destruction Claw, Dragon Flight Storm, Aether Dissolution, and Flaming Dragon Wizardry
Interesting character, mind if I rename the Bey to Aether Reginn tho and make its own parts?
what if the new New Bey Name is Aether Velrog? And what will be the features and names of the parts?
is there a limit to characters I can make?
(Feb. 02, 2021 1:51 AM)Ryuga\s Son Wrote: [ -> ] (Feb. 02, 2021 1:12 AM)Longinox Wrote: [ -> ]Interesting character, mind if I rename the Bey to Aether Reginn tho and make its own parts?
what if the new New Bey Name is Aether Velrog? And what will be the features and names of the parts?
is there a limit to characters I can make?
Depends really, you decide on the features. If you can't then I can deal with it. And you can only submit one OC. And yeah you're free to use Aether Velrog, and note the system is only on Sparking really.
(Feb. 02, 2021 5:41 AM)Longinox Wrote: [ -> ] (Feb. 02, 2021 1:51 AM)Ryuga\s Son Wrote: [ -> ]what if the new New Bey Name is Aether Velrog? And what will be the features and names of the parts?
is there a limit to characters I can make?
Depends really, you decide on the features. If you can't then I can deal with it. And you can only submit one OC. And yeah you're free to use Aether Velrog, and note the system is only on Sparking really.
I would like to add and edit some things. Please read it all.
Name: Ryujiki
Gender: Male (descended from Dragon Blood. Has Dragon Blood in him)
Age: 14
Height: 6'3'
Hair Color: Trimmed with Green, but Red in middle
Eye Color: Greenish Black
Beyblade: Aether Velrog: Has Left Rotation
Appearance: White ragged cloak, with a sign in the middle, which shows a Green Vicious Dragon roaring. Green Trousers.
Personality: Determined, Cocky, Never Gives up, And is with the goal to become the Strongest Blader. He does not like people who disrespect beyblade as a sport.
Special Move: Aether Destruction Claw (Aether Velrog uses tremendous attack power in this attack. Aether Velrog rises and up smashes it's claw on top of the opponent, potentially crippling it), Dragon Flight Storm (Aether Velrog flies around the stadium at terrifying speed, making a tornado), Aether Dissolution (Aether Velrog has suction mode, which causes the opponent bey to come towards it. As it comes toward it, the Velrog spits out meteors, and if the meteors are dodged, it constricts the opponent bey (constricts means like squeeing someone in a hug to death lol) , and the last move, which collects the all of the bey's power, into one attack, called, "Power Annihilation". It collects all of it's power, and the Dragon releases it.
Name (of OC): Pixi Takana
Gender: Female
Age: 16
Height: 5'1
Hair Color: She has two toned hair: Left side is cyan and right side is lightish pink.
Eye Color: Left eye is cyan and right eye is lightish pink
Beyblades: Moon Pandora (is a balance type) (right spin bey)
Appearance: She wears a white sweater with a blue square in the middle.
Personality: Determined, Can get annoyed easily, Energetic
Special Moves: Moon Sword, Miracle Whip and Moon Dive
Resonance: A mixture of cyan and pink
(Feb. 02, 2021 3:25 PM)Pixi Wrote: [ -> ]Name (of OC): Pixi Takana
Gender: Female
Age: 16
Height: 5'1
Hair Color: She has two toned hair: Left side is cyan and right side is lightish pink.
Eye Color: Left eye is cyan and right eye is lightish pink
Beyblades: Moon Pandora (is a balance type) (right spin bey)
Appearance: She wears a white sweater with a blue square in the middle.
Personality: Determined, Can get annoyed easily, Energetic
Special Moves: Moon Sword, Miracle Whip and Moon Dive
Resonance: A mixture of cyan and pink
Dude, it's perfectly fine if someone submits the same OC in more than one fanfic. Not all of us have a thousand OCs to choose from, you know XD.
(Feb. 02, 2021 4:08 PM)PinkRose Wrote: [ -> ]Dude, it's perfectly fine if someone submits the same OC in more than one fanfic. Not all of us have a thousand OCs to choose from, you know XD.
ok sorry I thought it was different